The Meaning of Life, the Universe, and Everything.
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i've outlasted my days.
The moon is getting closer every day.
I am driven by insanity.
My final hours..
My only love, has gone away.
The giant's call is heard everywhere.
No one is here to save us now.
Those eyes are gleaming at me.
Here I am.
Knife in hand.
My final hours.
Bloodied by my hatred.
Fire consumes the land..
...
And.. Im happy.
As fire consumes me, I am happy to die.
All is calm.
*Bing bong!*
*Bing bong!*
*Bing...Boioioing...*
*Suddenly, a faint tune is heard..*
*...gnoioioionB*
*!gnob gniB*
*!gnob gniB*
.mlac si llA
.eid ot yppah ma I ,em semusnoc erif sA
...
..Dnal eht semusnoc erif....
God bless ye soul.
"Hark! Dost thou hear with thine ears what I hear with mine? Interloper! No quarter shall be shown hither, fiend! Anon! Show thyself, churl! Have at thee! *fires, misses, gets shot at* Fie upon thee! What-ho, the laser on mine rocket launcher be not a mere target, but a guidance system! Where art thou? Come hither, that I may smite thee! *shoots the Apache down* Thou shalt not be missed."
The Meaning of Life, the Universe, and Everything.
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It wasn't really supposed to rime.And thanks for all of your guy's oppinions. I really am greatful!
I haven't been posting lately, so please do forgive me for that.
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God bless ye soul.
"Hark! Dost thou hear with thine ears what I hear with mine? Interloper! No quarter shall be shown hither, fiend! Anon! Show thyself, churl! Have at thee! *fires, misses, gets shot at* Fie upon thee! What-ho, the laser on mine rocket launcher be not a mere target, but a guidance system! Where art thou? Come hither, that I may smite thee! *shoots the Apache down* Thou shalt not be missed."
The Meaning of Life, the Universe, and Everything.
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Wow.
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God bless ye soul.
"Hark! Dost thou hear with thine ears what I hear with mine? Interloper! No quarter shall be shown hither, fiend! Anon! Show thyself, churl! Have at thee! *fires, misses, gets shot at* Fie upon thee! What-ho, the laser on mine rocket launcher be not a mere target, but a guidance system! Where art thou? Come hither, that I may smite thee! *shoots the Apache down* Thou shalt not be missed."
I like it, but it's a bit short. I thought it would've been cool if you repeated "My final hours..." in random places and got rid of the "..." at the end of every single other line, but it'd have to be longer to do the first part.
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I would tell you about how awesome I am down here, but I have a feeling you probably already know that. <- Please. ._.
God bless ye soul.
"Hark! Dost thou hear with thine ears what I hear with mine? Interloper! No quarter shall be shown hither, fiend! Anon! Show thyself, churl! Have at thee! *fires, misses, gets shot at* Fie upon thee! What-ho, the laser on mine rocket launcher be not a mere target, but a guidance system! Where art thou? Come hither, that I may smite thee! *shoots the Apache down* Thou shalt not be missed."
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God bless ye soul.
"Hark! Dost thou hear with thine ears what I hear with mine? Interloper! No quarter shall be shown hither, fiend! Anon! Show thyself, churl! Have at thee! *fires, misses, gets shot at* Fie upon thee! What-ho, the laser on mine rocket launcher be not a mere target, but a guidance system! Where art thou? Come hither, that I may smite thee! *shoots the Apache down* Thou shalt not be missed."
The moon is getting closer every day.
I am driven by insanity.
My final hours..
My only love, has gone away.
The giant's call is heard everywhere.
No one is here to save us now.
Those eyes are gleaming at me.
Here I am.
Knife in hand.
My final hours.
Bloodied by my hatred.
Fire consumes the land..
...
And.. Im happy.
As fire consumes me, I am happy to die.
All is calm.
*Bing bong!*
*Bing bong!*
*Bing...Boioioing...*
*Suddenly, a faint tune is heard..*
*...gnoioioionB*
*!gnob gniB*
*!gnob gniB*
.mlac si llA
.eid ot yppah ma I ,em semusnoc erif sA
...
..Dnal eht semusnoc erif....
Dawn of the First Day.
72 hours remain..
"Hark! Dost thou hear with thine ears what I hear with mine? Interloper! No quarter shall be shown hither, fiend! Anon! Show thyself, churl! Have at thee! *fires, misses, gets shot at* Fie upon thee! What-ho, the laser on mine rocket launcher be not a mere target, but a guidance system! Where art thou? Come hither, that I may smite thee! *shoots the Apache down* Thou shalt not be missed."
I haven't been posting lately, so please do forgive me for that.
"Hark! Dost thou hear with thine ears what I hear with mine? Interloper! No quarter shall be shown hither, fiend! Anon! Show thyself, churl! Have at thee! *fires, misses, gets shot at* Fie upon thee! What-ho, the laser on mine rocket launcher be not a mere target, but a guidance system! Where art thou? Come hither, that I may smite thee! *shoots the Apache down* Thou shalt not be missed."
- Bruce Wayne
"Hark! Dost thou hear with thine ears what I hear with mine? Interloper! No quarter shall be shown hither, fiend! Anon! Show thyself, churl! Have at thee! *fires, misses, gets shot at* Fie upon thee! What-ho, the laser on mine rocket launcher be not a mere target, but a guidance system! Where art thou? Come hither, that I may smite thee! *shoots the Apache down* Thou shalt not be missed."
Some containing doctor who references! Hurray!
"Hark! Dost thou hear with thine ears what I hear with mine? Interloper! No quarter shall be shown hither, fiend! Anon! Show thyself, churl! Have at thee! *fires, misses, gets shot at* Fie upon thee! What-ho, the laser on mine rocket launcher be not a mere target, but a guidance system! Where art thou? Come hither, that I may smite thee! *shoots the Apache down* Thou shalt not be missed."
"Hark! Dost thou hear with thine ears what I hear with mine? Interloper! No quarter shall be shown hither, fiend! Anon! Show thyself, churl! Have at thee! *fires, misses, gets shot at* Fie upon thee! What-ho, the laser on mine rocket launcher be not a mere target, but a guidance system! Where art thou? Come hither, that I may smite thee! *shoots the Apache down* Thou shalt not be missed."