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I may scrap Ghost of a Hero. Let's be honest, Unspoken Trials has lost the spark that The Survival Chronicles had. Why? I know exactly why. I tried to start it with the third story. Even if it is a prequel, never start with the third story. I basically took Unspoken Trials and started mashing together story fragments that I thought would fit. It's just like when I used to do puzzles. I would eat parts that I had thought were unnecessary, and be utterly screwed over when the future had come. I may scrap all of the work I have done on Ghost of a Hero. If anything, the first story of The Survival Chronicles should be called Ghost of a Hero, it fits much better anyways.
I am not finishing the first story as of yet
I am going to start the next story, and hopefully fix my mistakes
Just finished the next chapter. I'm sorry for the long delay, but I just started my Freshman year, so things are a bit... let's say, cramped. I don't have much time to do, well, anything really. I will try to write as much as possible, but keep in mind, it will no longer be daily, at least not for a while.
EDIT: Oh, and I also changed the name Ariadne to Lumios, because I failed to realize that Ariadne is in fact a GIRL'S NAME!
Yeah, I lost power for five days, but I'll continue the story tomorrow. For now, I believe a much-needed shower is due. Who knows, maybe I'll be done with chapter one soon. I am basing the chapters' leangths in pages from other books. Ender's Game has an average of eight pages per chapter, so I'll be going for that.