1. no glow, without it you lose a lot of what makes a gunshot a gunshot
2. no smoke, while you are firing with your hand it would look better with smoke
3. no enviorment effect, the surronding area wasn't affected at all
4. the first gunshot seemed to be longer than 1 frame, and to move with your hand, this shouldnt happen
5. the noise wasn't the best
6. probably not what you were working on, but color correction is a MUST!
I do not claim to be amazing at video editing, i am okay at editing for my age i suppose but i am certainly no freddiew, but i have been doing it long enough to know when something is wrong... overall practice makes perfect, it took me about a year to get a semi decent gunshot down right, keep trying and you will get it!
EDIT: don't mean to be harsh, but i know when i first started, i craved criticism to find out what i did wrong, hope this helps you
1. no glow, without it you lose a lot of what makes a gunshot a gunshot
2. no smoke, while you are firing with your hand it would look better with smoke
3. no enviorment effect, the surronding area wasn't affected at all
4. the first gunshot seemed to be longer than 1 frame, and to move with your hand, this shouldnt happen
5. the noise wasn't the best
6. probably not what you were working on, but color correction is a MUST!
I do not claim to be amazing at video editing, i am okay at editing for my age i suppose but i am certainly no freddiew, but i have been doing it long enough to know when something is wrong... overall practice makes perfect, it took me about a year to get a semi decent gunshot down right, keep trying and you will get it!
yep i know I am a total newbie right now the glowing part its kinda hard to do cuz sometimes you mess everything up I am still workin on all of thos stuff and thanks for the feedback
yep i know I am a total newbie right now the glowing part its kinda hard to do cuz sometimes you mess everything up I am still workin on all of thos stuff and thanks for the feedback
just keep messing around with it, you'll get it soon enough! :biggrin.gif:
Here is the video:
1. no glow, without it you lose a lot of what makes a gunshot a gunshot
2. no smoke, while you are firing with your hand it would look better with smoke
3. no enviorment effect, the surronding area wasn't affected at all
4. the first gunshot seemed to be longer than 1 frame, and to move with your hand, this shouldnt happen
5. the noise wasn't the best
6. probably not what you were working on, but color correction is a MUST!
I do not claim to be amazing at video editing, i am okay at editing for my age i suppose but i am certainly no freddiew, but i have been doing it long enough to know when something is wrong... overall practice makes perfect, it took me about a year to get a semi decent gunshot down right, keep trying and you will get it!
EDIT: don't mean to be harsh, but i know when i first started, i craved criticism to find out what i did wrong, hope this helps you
yep i know I am a total newbie right now the glowing part its kinda hard to do cuz sometimes you mess everything up I am still workin on all of thos stuff and thanks for the feedback
just keep messing around with it, you'll get it soon enough! :biggrin.gif: