So I have finally finished my city, for now. Yes yes, it looks great! I just finished my space station, downtown, and my newest and largest creation ever: my monorail station.
I took a great screen shot of the city right here:
Boy! Isn't that beautiful?
I also took a video and uploaded it to youtube. It is a tour of the whole city via monorail system.
Have fun!
~pocketMAD
Postscript:
Please use constructive criticism. Also known as the sandwich method.
Complement.
Improvement.
Complement.
Postpostscript:
I am out of ideas for the Iron City. If you have any ideas for me to build, please tell me! Please!
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To summarize the summary: anyone who is capable of getting themselves made President should on no account be allowed to do the job.”
― Douglas Adams' The Restaurant at the End of the Universe
To summarize the summary: anyone who is capable of getting themselves made President should on no account be allowed to do the job.”
― Douglas Adams' The Restaurant at the End of the Universe
Space Station is beautiful it inspires me to build something like it.
The first 3 minutes of the video was a minecart chase and was kinda pointless... you should have re-took that scene
Other than that your city looks good.
Space Station is beautiful it inspires me to build something like it.
The first 3 minutes of the video was a minecart chase and was kinda pointless... you should have re-took that scene
Other than that your city looks good.
Yeah about that: it was a first. I will be making a new video soon.
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To summarize the summary: anyone who is capable of getting themselves made President should on no account be allowed to do the job.”
― Douglas Adams' The Restaurant at the End of the Universe
Actually, I feel it has the opposite effect because the city is actually good.
But then again, I'm crazy. So maybe I'm wrong about the horn-tooting.
Thanks.
Once again, I need ideas for my city.
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To summarize the summary: anyone who is capable of getting themselves made President should on no account be allowed to do the job.”
― Douglas Adams' The Restaurant at the End of the Universe
good city but i think you need to make some buildings with diamond blocks
Eh heh heh. Check the space station.
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To summarize the summary: anyone who is capable of getting themselves made President should on no account be allowed to do the job.”
― Douglas Adams' The Restaurant at the End of the Universe
To summarize the summary: anyone who is capable of getting themselves made President should on no account be allowed to do the job.”
― Douglas Adams' The Restaurant at the End of the Universe
What you showed me was the iron shells of multiple structures and ~7 minutes of minecarting. You should REALLY get some better footage. Don't go somewhere, hop out of the minecart, look up for a moment, and hop back in the minecart. I don't care if it's a simple hut by the water, give the viewer an actual tour. Plus, it looks a lot better on you if you don't have cluttered tracks when making a video.
Anyways, city criticism time. It is a start, I'll give you that. You have multiple structures that look decent and a monorail system that doesn't suck. But really, your city is too plain and bare. 1) You use mostly iron blocks. Add some change in there. Nobody wants to look at a collection of iron walls. Try making patterns with iron blocks on your buildings: Iron City gives the impression that most, if not all, buildings should have iron in them. 2) You need more buildings. As far as I could tell, your downtown was a little more than a pair of buildings by the edge of town (at least that's where the minecart dropped you off). Build some more. As a suggestion, go back downtown and add some more structures: office buildings, stores or anything alike. Expand with a few dozen buildings downtown, then go back to the other places and continue building there.
What you showed me was the iron shells of multiple structures and ~7 minutes of minecarting. You should REALLY get some better footage. Don't go somewhere, hop out of the minecart, look up for a moment, and hop back in the minecart. I don't care if it's a simple hut by the water, give the viewer an actual tour. Plus, it looks a lot better on you if you don't have cluttered tracks when making a video.
Anyways, city criticism time. It is a start, I'll give you that. You have multiple structures that look decent and a monorail system that doesn't suck. But really, your city is too plain and bare. 1) You use mostly iron blocks. Add some change in there. Nobody wants to look at a collection of iron walls. Try making patterns with iron blocks on your buildings: Iron City gives the impression that most, if not all, buildings should have iron in them. 2) You need more buildings. As far as I could tell, your downtown was a little more than a pair of buildings by the edge of town (at least that's where the minecart dropped you off). Build some more. As a suggestion, go back downtown and add some more structures: office buildings, stores or anything alike. Expand with a few dozen buildings downtown, then go back to the other places and continue building there.
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Thank you! I literally will do the exact thing you told me to do. (plus a dam)
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So I have finally finished my city, for now. Yes yes, it looks great! I just finished my space station, downtown, and my newest and largest creation ever: my monorail station.
I took a great screen shot of the city right here:
Boy! Isn't that beautiful?
I also took a video and uploaded it to youtube. It is a tour of the whole city via monorail system.
Have fun!
~pocketMAD
Postscript:
Please use constructive criticism. Also known as the sandwich method.
Complement.
Improvement.
Complement.
Postpostscript:
I am out of ideas for the Iron City. If you have any ideas for me to build, please tell me! Please!
Message me creative ideas to add to my underground base!
The first 3 minutes of the video was a minecart chase and was kinda pointless... you should have re-took that scene
Other than that your city looks good.
Let your anger be as a monkey in a piñata... hiding amongst the candy... hoping the kids don't break through with the stick!
We are what we eat and we are who we meet. These are not mutually exclusive.
What are you talking about? I never once "tooted my horn."
Yeah about that: it was a first. I will be making a new video soon.
Thanks.
Once again, I need ideas for my city.
Eh heh heh. Check the space station.
Anyways, city criticism time. It is a start, I'll give you that. You have multiple structures that look decent and a monorail system that doesn't suck. But really, your city is too plain and bare. 1) You use mostly iron blocks. Add some change in there. Nobody wants to look at a collection of iron walls. Try making patterns with iron blocks on your buildings: Iron City gives the impression that most, if not all, buildings should have iron in them. 2) You need more buildings. As far as I could tell, your downtown was a little more than a pair of buildings by the edge of town (at least that's where the minecart dropped you off). Build some more. As a suggestion, go back downtown and add some more structures: office buildings, stores or anything alike. Expand with a few dozen buildings downtown, then go back to the other places and continue building there.
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Thank you! I literally will do the exact thing you told me to do. (plus a dam)