But here are my complete thoughts, as one sentence isn't very good feedback:
First pic - Interesting exterior, but I'd need a look at the inside for a good verdict. Also, it would look much better if built in a jungle. Try using MC-EDIT for that.
Second pic - It has a good colour scheme and I really like the doorway, but personally I'm not a fan of flat roofs.
Third pic - This is one of my favourite. I like how everything is built, and the swamp has a great atmosphere. With a few hidden redstone torches, I bet this would look very eerie at night. Another thing to mention, the terrain is great. The mixture of those blocks on the grass really improves the overall look of the build.
Fourth pic - This one looks great, once again I'd like to see some interior pics. The dark wood and the white blocks look really well together. A tip for improvement is to increase the size of the white areas, as the the large beams really downsize them. I wouldn't worry about that, though. Fixing it would involve rebuilding the entire structure. Just take it as a tip for the future.
Fifth pic - The island has a great tropical look. The only improvements would be to increase the size of the mountain. It looks quite miniature compared to the large island. If that's what you intended, then ignore what I said. My final suggestion is to remove the chairs and umbrellas. They look extremely out of place in a seemingly uninhabited island.
You certainly show potential and have some solid ideas. The builds are good, but do have room for improvement. I'm sure with a bit more practice you will be able to stand with the best of them. Keep on building and improving, mate.
You certainly show potential and have some solid ideas. The builds are good, but do have room for improvement. I'm sure with a bit more practice you will be able to stand with the best of them. Keep on building and improving, mate.
Pretty nice, you've certainly got potential. This reminds me of my early builds quite a bit, You have a basic understanding of depth and contrast, and know how to make things that require randomness (Trees, Caves, ect.) which is something I've always struggled with. If you focus on detailing a bit more you could be an extremely good builder. I recommend watching Jamziboy or Madnes64 if your struggling.
Pretty nice, you've certainly got potential. This reminds me of my early builds quite a bit, You have a basic understanding of depth and contrast, and know how to make things that require randomness (Trees, Caves, ect.) which is something I've always struggled with. If you focus on detailing a bit more you could be an extremely good builder. I recommend watching Jamziboy or Madnes64 if your struggling.
Thanks!! This is some awesome feedback! If you don't mind I would love for you to check out one of my more recent posts and tell me what you think! Link
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But here are my complete thoughts, as one sentence isn't very good feedback:
First pic - Interesting exterior, but I'd need a look at the inside for a good verdict. Also, it would look much better if built in a jungle. Try using MC-EDIT for that.
Second pic - It has a good colour scheme and I really like the doorway, but personally I'm not a fan of flat roofs.
Third pic - This is one of my favourite. I like how everything is built, and the swamp has a great atmosphere. With a few hidden redstone torches, I bet this would look very eerie at night. Another thing to mention, the terrain is great. The mixture of those blocks on the grass really improves the overall look of the build.
Fourth pic - This one looks great, once again I'd like to see some interior pics. The dark wood and the white blocks look really well together. A tip for improvement is to increase the size of the white areas, as the the large beams really downsize them. I wouldn't worry about that, though. Fixing it would involve rebuilding the entire structure. Just take it as a tip for the future.
Fifth pic - The island has a great tropical look. The only improvements would be to increase the size of the mountain. It looks quite miniature compared to the large island. If that's what you intended, then ignore what I said. My final suggestion is to remove the chairs and umbrellas. They look extremely out of place in a seemingly uninhabited island.
You certainly show potential and have some solid ideas. The builds are good, but do have room for improvement. I'm sure with a bit more practice you will be able to stand with the best of them. Keep on building and improving, mate.
Thanks!! This is some awesome feedback! If you don't mind I would love for you to check out one of my more recent posts and tell me what you think! Link