finally both vids are out and am finally putting out my video+commentary of the crazy mineshaft I found. so if your bored and are a youtube junkie look it up! Broden Blancherd or xbox 360 eastereggs ^.^ i really need some critisim that is constructive!
finally both vids are out and am finally putting out my video+commentary of the crazy mineshaft I found. so if your bored and are a youtube junkie look it up! Broden Blancherd or xbox 360 eastereggs ^.^ i really need some critisim that is constructive!
I watched (most of) the first one, and I have a some points of criticism:
1) Be more prepared. You seem to just go off and get lost a few times, or faff about, or don't have the right equipment. This makes for uninteresting viewing. Make sure you know exactly where you're going - the section where you were looking for the spider spawn for example.
2) There was also some points where you had some background noise going on that was obviously distracting you (someone knocking on the door, etc). You're probably better off re-doing sections like that rather than leave the interruption in.
3) Lay off the swear words, it's a bit off-putting.
4) As you're trying to show off a number of easter eggs or highlights of the tutorial map, split these up into sections. I would suggest once you've shown off one location, fade to black, put up some text like "Easter Egg 2) Hidden Underground Room Below Bookcase" then fade up with you entering the area where the location is from somewhere away from it and guiding the player to it, even if it means covering the same ground again.
@22tma thanks for the tips. You deffinetly helped I try not to swear to much its just a habit that i have to kick and I was thinking about the eastereggs and splitting them up but I guess i was a bit impatient so im planning on trimming the rest of my vids and I have started from here on out to actually skip ahead of all the boring bits and im filming more at night so there is less distractions. Im also writing down little bullets so i am more prepared on what I want to say but at the same time those bullets dont last 15mins long nor does it seem like a really good idea to just shout out all of the things i want to say off the bat or it would be sort of a quiet video. but it was my first and more are to come and I Really do appreciate the criticism itll help me out with the rest of my vids. im also posting the links to the rest of my videos and thank god no ones complaining about my camera its top of the line as of now i am a little disappointed with the quality but i also dont have the money or a good enough computer to download software thatll take videos from my 360 thanks guys! heres the links.
Part 1 and two of the tutorial eastereggs.
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Mineshaft commentary parts 1-3
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I have also stumbled upon a few more dungeons on the map and I am planning on also shooting those and showing them. Eventually I will get to my nether video with me freaking out. And I am also planning on uploading more videos of Different seeds.
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I watched (most of) the first one, and I have a some points of criticism:
1) Be more prepared. You seem to just go off and get lost a few times, or faff about, or don't have the right equipment. This makes for uninteresting viewing. Make sure you know exactly where you're going - the section where you were looking for the spider spawn for example.
2) There was also some points where you had some background noise going on that was obviously distracting you (someone knocking on the door, etc). You're probably better off re-doing sections like that rather than leave the interruption in.
3) Lay off the swear words, it's a bit off-putting.
4) As you're trying to show off a number of easter eggs or highlights of the tutorial map, split these up into sections. I would suggest once you've shown off one location, fade to black, put up some text like "Easter Egg 2) Hidden Underground Room Below Bookcase" then fade up with you entering the area where the location is from somewhere away from it and guiding the player to it, even if it means covering the same ground again.
Hope that's constructive.
Part 1 and two of the tutorial eastereggs.
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-
Mineshaft commentary parts 1-3
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-
-
I have also stumbled upon a few more dungeons on the map and I am planning on also shooting those and showing them. Eventually I will get to my nether video with me freaking out. And I am also planning on uploading more videos of Different seeds.