+Iron, Gold, & Diamond blocks, Gold, iron, and coal ores, mushrooms, mossy cobble, and bookshelves
Iron & gold have cracks, diamond has a bit of dirt on it.
I'm a bit uncertain on that^ though. Does it come across well without me having to explain it?
I've been working on leaves today; here's a comparison of fast vs fancy:
Can I get crit on them please? I'm not sure how much I like the fancy leaves--although this may be personal bias because I've never liked the look of fancy leaves in any pack (thus why I always play on fast).
Fancy leaves generally don't look so great on any pack, but here's a tip - try making it so your leaves tile well, but nothing touches the edges in the fancy tile. Like see the bits of leaf not connected to anything, around the corners? Try getting rid of those and see how you like it. Other than that, I really like your leaves.
As for the logs, I suggest making the insides lighter. Not happy go lucky lighter, but usually any tree you look at is at least a little lighter inside.
The ore blocks look to fit the theme of your pack. I didn't guess they were cracks at first, but I did think it was mess / wear-and-tear of some sort, which fits your theme.
Looking back, I notice you drew in bits of grass with your shrooms. I did this as well in my WIP pack before I came across my grassy shrooms in a stone cave, or worse, in the nether. :'P If that discrepancy doesn't bother you, though, leave it be.
Everything else looks just lovely. The sponge is super nice in my opinion. I wish they were in game! xD
Umm... don't take anything I say too personally. I don't really give crits that often, so I feel like I'm being mean. Your work is good, so feel good!
Love the color selection! I would personally take out the black-ish lines in the wooden planks though, they just seem out of place. Looking good so far!
Fancy leaves generally don't look so great on any pack, but here's a tip - try making it so your leaves tile well, but nothing touches the edges in the fancy tile. Like see the bits of leaf not connected to anything, around the corners? Try getting rid of those and see how you like it. Other than that, I really like your leaves.
As for the logs, I suggest making the insides lighter. Not happy go lucky lighter, but usually any tree you look at is at least a little lighter inside.
The ore blocks look to fit the theme of your pack. I didn't guess they were cracks at first, but I did think it was mess / wear-and-tear of some sort, which fits your theme.
Looking back, I notice you drew in bits of grass with your shrooms. I did this as well in my WIP pack before I came across my grassy shrooms in a stone cave, or worse, in the nether. :'P If that discrepancy doesn't bother you, though, leave it be.
Everything else looks just lovely. The sponge is super nice in my opinion. I wish they were in game! xD
Umm... don't take anything I say too personally. I don't really give crits that often, so I feel like I'm being mean. Your work is good, so feel good!
Thank you!
I didn't think about that detail regarding the mushrooms, silly me. I've fixed that bit. c:
I'll also fiddle with the leaves & inner logs a bit, as per your advice. <33
I didn't think about that detail regarding the mushrooms, silly me. I've fixed that bit. c:
I'll also fiddle with the leaves & inner logs a bit, as per your advice. <33
I'm glad to be of some help! :'D
Can't wait to see new stuff, too. ~
Not much added tonight, because damn when did 1 AM happen?
* Fiddled with leaves (may mess with these more in the morning)
- Removed grass on mushrooms
+ lightened inner wood
+ added crafting table, stone bricks, dead shrub
What you do with wool depends on what kind of wool you want to give your users. Some people use single blocks of the stuff, some people make entire floors with "carpet". Standing alone, your wool textures are great (I particularly like the orange and lime green) - but they wouldn't fare so well as "carpet". Leave them alone if you don't care. Actually, leave them alone if you do care - a little customization via a separately downloadable, alternate terrain.png wouldn't be bad.
Let me say I love the shiny ice! It looks so touchable ~ @o@ You did great on the cactus, too. Those usually go the way of fast leaves, but you made it nicer than average.
I can see the similarities Leostereo sees between this and ToonCraft (having used it) but I think yours is different enough. Quite different, actually. It's in the little things.
Seeing these WIP shots has kinda changed my mind... I think I'm eagerly awaiting the release of this pack. That reminds me, do you have a name yet? Or any inklings of a name. That'd be fun to hear.
Being compared to Tooncraft in any way is a huge compliment. It's such a beautiful pack.
I actually don't have a name yet!
The title of my work folder is Abbycraft but that seems so... well, stupid. My nickname + craft isn't the most interesting of naming formulas. As of right now I'm blank on what to call it. :Ta
I'm not really sure what's going on there. I've only touched the top row & first 3 blocks of terrain.png so far, though, so there's probably something that fixes it that I've not gotten to yet. Haven't dared touch any of the biome lighting whateverstuff. e .e;;;
I'll take a peek at yours in the morning when I'm less "ow headpain" and more "oh thinking is a thing i can do!" (:
its because when you play onf ast the grass sides are diferent
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+Iron, Gold, & Diamond blocks, Gold, iron, and coal ores, mushrooms, mossy cobble, and bookshelves
Iron & gold have cracks, diamond has a bit of dirt on it.
I'm a bit uncertain on that^ though. Does it come across well without me having to explain it?
Edit to add: Thank you, Zyromkiru. (:
Always open to critique and suggestions. (:
I've been working on leaves today; here's a comparison of fast vs fancy:
Can I get crit on them please? I'm not sure how much I like the fancy leaves--although this may be personal bias because I've never liked the look of fancy leaves in any pack (thus why I always play on fast).
Other additions since my last post:
Diamond & redstone ores
Furnace, dispenser, glass, sponge
Always open to critique and suggestions. (:
As for the logs, I suggest making the insides lighter. Not happy go lucky lighter, but usually any tree you look at is at least a little lighter inside.
The ore blocks look to fit the theme of your pack. I didn't guess they were cracks at first, but I did think it was mess / wear-and-tear of some sort, which fits your theme.
Looking back, I notice you drew in bits of grass with your shrooms. I did this as well in my WIP pack before I came across my grassy shrooms in a stone cave, or worse, in the nether. :'P If that discrepancy doesn't bother you, though, leave it be.
Everything else looks just lovely. The sponge is super nice in my opinion. I wish they were in game! xD
Umm... don't take anything I say too personally. I don't really give crits that often, so I feel like I'm being mean. Your work is good, so feel good!
I didn't think about that detail regarding the mushrooms, silly me. I've fixed that bit. c:
I'll also fiddle with the leaves & inner logs a bit, as per your advice. <33
Always open to critique and suggestions. (:
I'm glad to be of some help! :'D
Can't wait to see new stuff, too. ~
* Fiddled with leaves (may mess with these more in the morning)
- Removed grass on mushrooms
+ lightened inner wood
+ added crafting table, stone bricks, dead shrub
Always open to critique and suggestions. (:
Scrapped how it was before and just removed the darkest pixels from fast.
I like it much better this way.
Always open to critique and suggestions. (:
The log looks nice, and I really dig that stone brick!
...Is that blood on the crafting table? D8
Yes it is! (;
Always open to critique and suggestions. (:
+ clay, snow, snow-covered dirt, ice, white wool, pine sapling, cactus, bamboo
Always open to critique and suggestions. (:
Wool! =D
I see a few small things that need tweaking (mostly in the form of overly desaturated pixels here and there) but aside from that, crits? c:
Always open to critique and suggestions. (:
Let me say I love the shiny ice! It looks so touchable ~ @o@ You did great on the cactus, too. Those usually go the way of fast leaves, but you made it nicer than average.
I can see the similarities Leostereo sees between this and ToonCraft (having used it) but I think yours is different enough. Quite different, actually. It's in the little things.
Seeing these WIP shots has kinda changed my mind... I think I'm eagerly awaiting the release of this pack. That reminds me, do you have a name yet? Or any inklings of a name. That'd be fun to hear.
Being compared to Tooncraft in any way is a huge compliment. It's such a beautiful pack.
I actually don't have a name yet!
The title of my work folder is Abbycraft but that seems so... well, stupid. My nickname + craft isn't the most interesting of naming formulas. As of right now I'm blank on what to call it. :Ta
Always open to critique and suggestions. (:
its because when you play onf ast the grass sides are diferent
Gaming, history, science and technology enthusiast. Don't mind my cynicism.
Tooncraft is beautiful and really well made so to be compared to it is a moment of "wow you think it's that good?
T uT <3"
Always open to critique and suggestions. (:
+ Lapis ore, lapis block, sticky & normal pistons, netherrack, soul sand
Always open to critique and suggestions. (: