This was actually better than expected. Although, the English kind of ruined it from time to time. Didn't give me the impression of something scary, I was rather annoyed upon simple grammar mistakes and bad phrasings.
The sudden scream pop-ups were too frequent. Some music would be neat next time. And detailing isn't really that bad, so put some extra effort into detailing next time!
If you guys need help with details, redstone, music creation or ideas - let me know.
I give this map a fair 8 out of 10. It was well made, it had some scary moments actually, but the story was too short I guess. And the ending was quite disappointing.
hey how do you download this map my computer doesn't allow me to download it
and I have windows
Hum that's strange :/ Normaly, you just need to click on download, a popup will show to you, and you will choose the files where you want to put the map. After this, you need to unzip the folder and to put the folder's map into your save's folder. (forgive my bad english)