And a villager got hit by a lightening in the beginning and became a witch which was very amusing
I have some suggestions to improve it though
Name the villagers to give them more characters
You can keep pressing button for finished quest which just give the dialog but nothing else. Maybe remove the button?
I spend like 20 mins trying to find Mr. Otto... It was little tedious. Maybe give player a hint where he is?
You can cheese the fight with lava. Zombies will just fall into lava while you are at the other side of the broken bridge laughing at them. I don't know how to fix this though.
Dialog problems. You should thoroughly go through the game and fix the repeating dialog and typos(I've seen 2 typos but there could be more)
Anyway, great map!
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I like custom maps, creative research and technical survival.
And a villager got hit by a lightening in the beginning and became a witch which was very amusing
I have some suggestions to improve it though
Name the villagers to give them more characters - That's not hard to fix
You can keep pressing button for finished quest which just give the dialog but nothing else. Maybe remove the button? - Which quest?
I spend like 20 mins trying to find Mr. Otto... It was little tedious. Maybe give player a hint where he is? - Did you check the housing records?
You can cheese the fight with lava. Zombies will just fall into lava while you are at the other side of the broken bridge laughing at them. I don't know how to fix this though. - I think I might just leave that, there are a lot of zombies anyway
Dialog problems. You should thoroughly go through the game and fix the repeating dialog and typos(I've seen 2 typos but there could be more) - Those are probably easy to fix too, where are they?
Greetings. I'm in the middle of playing the map, but I thought you might be interested in my notes so far. I am hoping to finish this week and have a review by weekend. Didn't want to keep you waiting.
4:12 PM 2/8/2015
Book says I'm here to sell my wares. Where are my wares?
Slept in bed on deck of ship to clear rain.
I like the Guard/Pork Seller/Author. But... I thought I was a travelling merchant, not an adventurer...
The guy in the "Information" booth isn't very informative.
Going to ignore the other booths and look for the in - I'm not buying, I'm here to sell!
I see a distraught farmer. (I'm guessing buttons will appear on these later for quests? If so, why not have the signs appear too...)
Well... I gave the bored man all 3 books I had, but he doesn't seem to do anything (Oppressors, Rules, and Backstory).
Bought a large room. Cuz, why not? LoL. I think it's only 1 block bigger than the small room?
Why do I need to speak to the King?
Now what... do I need to go look for a way outside the walls (pork seller) or a book (bored guy)?
"Bamboo Tasting," LoL! Weird name for a novel!
Wait... how am I supposed to get vines... ?
Ah, ok - there's some prompting. That's good. Why do I want the fisherman's quest? I'm a merchant!
The frightened Woodsman's "death threat" made me chuckle. I gave him my Unbreaking X wooden sword. That may not have been a good idea.
Uh... so... I can buy unlimited stone swords for 10L each and make 20L by turning them in. Unlimited money...
I'm stealing 4 gold ingots from the farmer's chest. I'm curious if the map will detect that and call me a thief. I don't feel like it's really in character for me to steal.
** Uh... the map is set to Peaceful. (It's part of the map save now). You should turn it to Normal and then re-upload.
Luckily, the quest still worked even though I didn't kill anything.
Hans also sells apples? LoL.
Wow... so... I give him 1 (of 32) apples and I get all 32 xp. I just keep giving him apples one at a time and I now have 769L.
Bought a dead bush for later.
Ah - I like the redstone appearing on the road to the bandits. But again, you have these cool effects to turn on quests, but you forgot to turn them off afterwards so they can't be abused!
Well... most of the bandits ran off toward the villagers...
LoL. Burning the house is so kinda tech. Oh. Good, nevermind. You detected it.
I waited for the house to burn so I could pick up torches. Exposed command block :/
"A Sad Man sits on this bench." Nope! Zombies got him!
I put a dead bushes in his chest. Wait... what?! HE died?
Stealing ingots left and right.
Hooligans made me LAUGH!
Town build is ok, by the way. Mine is very bland.
Now, here again - I can give him ONE diamond and get the reward, then keep the other 9...
Wandering around without seeing where to go.
Aha. The King first?
Ah, the tailor has lapis for enchanting
I really don't know where I'm going now. Where is Thieve's guild?
Parkouring up in wizard tower... I think I'm not supposed to hit this button on top yet. I will hold and come back later.
Am I supposed to go back to the beginning?
Ohhh. I was. Gotcha.
I like disarming the tripwires in the Butcher's shop!
OH!!!! I was wondering what those random symbols were! Cool!
Oooh - decisions, decisions! I am going to tell the truth. I'm tempted to make a back up save, but I won't...
** I just got some weird chat spam. You may have a bug with the King's speech.
Hmm... what happens if I now click the Lie to Him button too? I won't...
I've slept in several different beds around town and it's always starting to rain again shortly after
Glad I have the ender pearls from the thieves to get up onto the mage tower quicker
I really like circling back through past areas (e.g. mine in farm district now)
Parkour in the mine is a tad confusing. And possibly a bit too challenging compared to prior parts of the map. A little unbalanced. But then again... ender pearls.
So... when am I selling MY wares?!?!
Oh wow. All the house numbers in this book. Cool.
many many many many zombies died to lava
Wait. What the? I was in the sewers with some animals, then all of a sudden in a jail?
spam wall of text
I would suggest making the "King" have some other name to differentiate them. I was almost confused.
Wait. I am confused. Where do I get the train tickets?
Barrier blocks that block a clear-looking passage are annoying.
Oh man. More quests. This is taking longer than I anticipated. The dialogue here is pretty thin.
carrot quest
sick guard
clogged fountain
Oh shoot. I was following the path up for the fountain and went out a door to the surface. Can't get back in? Have to go allllll the way around again.
I'm confused. What was I supposed to get and give this fountain guy? I only got clay...
Oh. I didn't realize I had to follow all the water.
seeds quest
apparently I'm missing 1 quest somewhere...
time for a break
6:28 PM 2/8/2015
Thanks for all of that feedback and here's some feedback on your feedback.
You never sell your wares, I guess you are just also an adventurer.
I'm not too concerned about all the money exploits, I could fix them but the money isn't really that necessary anyways, it doesn't matter much if you have hundreds of levels.
Once you press one button in the library the other gets disabled.
The parkour is horribly unbalanced but I think I'll just leave it.
There is a quest in the apartment complex directly across from the water supervisor's house.
Final notes. Didn't realize I was so close to the end
3:53 PM 2/13/2015
Forum reply said there is a quest in the apartment directly across from
water supervisor. Does that mean the tower with the iron door?
OH!! Wow. I found the secretary. Must have passed her 5 times.
Wow. Too bad the secretary herself didn't just ask. That was the
simplest quest so far.
Bandit Leader went down nice and quick. I like that you detected his
death. I thought for SURE I was going to have to open this 'Explosives
Storage' door.
Interesting way to end it! Your role is done, but the story goes on
4:10 PM 2/13/2015
As Glocktah as pointed out, the buttons seem to be missing for the King. Which really stinks, because I was thoroughly enjoying this map!
My critique up to the choice with the queen:
I honestly wasn't expecting this to be good. Most adventure maps I play are rather bland an boring. I love the awesomely detailed town and the buttons appearing so we wouldn't cheat on quests. The story behind this was rather interesting to, however I find it easy to forget what I'm doing. I almost completely forgotten why I needed to speak with the King when I finished the Thieves Guild tasks. I should suggest disabling Mob Drops because after exterminating Bandits, Hooligans, and Monsters from certain tasks, I felt like debating whether or not these items would be important or not in later quests.
However, there are some bugs and errors I've spotted throughout the map, that could be addressed. First of all, there is a spelling mistake in the Guard's book (which name I have forgotten) which I think was "bloody" spelled as "bloddy". One of the game breaking bugs is that the buttons don't seem to appear to either lying to the king or telling him the truth after finishing the Thieves Guild tasks. A minor bug is that money can be easily exploitable. The Han's Apples quest can result in 32 L's for 1 apple. Which can be used to buy 32 apples for 1 L, resulting in infinite apples and money.
The rest of this map will ever remain a mystery for me. If you do fix the King bug, most likely I'll have to restart on the map, which I just can't sit through all the quests again, as they take a while to do.
could you explain a little bit more what happened with the King, I just tested it and it was fine. Did you talk to the three people in the Thieves Guild? That's what places the buttons.
I like custom maps, creative research and technical survival.
And a villager got hit by a lightening in the beginning and became a witch which was very amusing
I have some suggestions to improve it though
Name the villagers to give them more characters
You can keep pressing button for finished quest which just give the dialog but nothing else. Maybe remove the button?
I spend like 20 mins trying to find Mr. Otto... It was little tedious. Maybe give player a hint where he is?
You can cheese the fight with lava. Zombies will just fall into lava while you are at the other side of the broken bridge laughing at them. I don't know how to fix this though.
Dialog problems. You should thoroughly go through the game and fix the repeating dialog and typos(I've seen 2 typos but there could be more)
I like custom maps, creative research and technical survival.
Thanks for the Feedback!
Book says I'm here to sell my wares. Where are my wares?
Slept in bed on deck of ship to clear rain.
I like the Guard/Pork Seller/Author. But... I thought I was a travelling merchant, not an adventurer...
The guy in the "Information" booth isn't very informative.
Going to ignore the other booths and look for the in - I'm not buying, I'm here to sell!
I see a distraught farmer. (I'm guessing buttons will appear on these later for quests? If so, why not have the signs appear too...)
Well... I gave the bored man all 3 books I had, but he doesn't seem to do anything (Oppressors, Rules, and Backstory).
Bought a large room. Cuz, why not? LoL. I think it's only 1 block bigger than the small room?
Why do I need to speak to the King?
Now what... do I need to go look for a way outside the walls (pork seller) or a book (bored guy)?
"Bamboo Tasting," LoL! Weird name for a novel!
Wait... how am I supposed to get vines... ?
Ah, ok - there's some prompting. That's good. Why do I want the fisherman's quest? I'm a merchant!
The frightened Woodsman's "death threat" made me chuckle. I gave him my Unbreaking X wooden sword. That may not have been a good idea.
Uh... so... I can buy unlimited stone swords for 10L each and make 20L by turning them in. Unlimited money...
I'm stealing 4 gold ingots from the farmer's chest. I'm curious if the map will detect that and call me a thief. I don't feel like it's really in character for me to steal.
** Uh... the map is set to Peaceful. (It's part of the map save now). You should turn it to Normal and then re-upload.
Luckily, the quest still worked even though I didn't kill anything.
Hans also sells apples? LoL.
Wow... so... I give him 1 (of 32) apples and I get all 32 xp. I just keep giving him apples one at a time and I now have 769L.
Bought a dead bush for later.
Ah - I like the redstone appearing on the road to the bandits. But again, you have these cool effects to turn on quests, but you forgot to turn them off afterwards so they can't be abused!
Well... most of the bandits ran off toward the villagers...
LoL. Burning the house is so kinda tech. Oh. Good, nevermind. You detected it.
I waited for the house to burn so I could pick up torches. Exposed command block :/
"A Sad Man sits on this bench." Nope! Zombies got him!
I put a dead bushes in his chest. Wait... what?! HE died?
Stealing ingots left and right.
Hooligans made me LAUGH!
Town build is ok, by the way. Mine is very bland.
Now, here again - I can give him ONE diamond and get the reward, then keep the other 9...
Wandering around without seeing where to go.
Aha. The King first?
Ah, the tailor has lapis for enchanting
I really don't know where I'm going now. Where is Thieve's guild?
Parkouring up in wizard tower... I think I'm not supposed to hit this button on top yet. I will hold and come back later.
Am I supposed to go back to the beginning?
Ohhh. I was. Gotcha.
I like disarming the tripwires in the Butcher's shop!
OH!!!! I was wondering what those random symbols were! Cool!
Oooh - decisions, decisions! I am going to tell the truth. I'm tempted to make a back up save, but I won't...
** I just got some weird chat spam. You may have a bug with the King's speech.
Hmm... what happens if I now click the Lie to Him button too? I won't...
I've slept in several different beds around town and it's always starting to rain again shortly after
Glad I have the ender pearls from the thieves to get up onto the mage tower quicker
I really like circling back through past areas (e.g. mine in farm district now)
Parkour in the mine is a tad confusing. And possibly a bit too challenging compared to prior parts of the map. A little unbalanced. But then again... ender pearls.
So... when am I selling MY wares?!?!
Oh wow. All the house numbers in this book. Cool.
many many many many zombies died to lava
Wait. What the? I was in the sewers with some animals, then all of a sudden in a jail?
spam wall of text
I would suggest making the "King" have some other name to differentiate them. I was almost confused.
Wait. I am confused. Where do I get the train tickets?
Barrier blocks that block a clear-looking passage are annoying.
Oh man. More quests. This is taking longer than I anticipated. The dialogue here is pretty thin.
carrot quest
sick guard
clogged fountain
Oh shoot. I was following the path up for the fountain and went out a door to the surface. Can't get back in? Have to go allllll the way around again.
I'm confused. What was I supposed to get and give this fountain guy? I only got clay...
Oh. I didn't realize I had to follow all the water.
seeds quest
apparently I'm missing 1 quest somewhere...
time for a break
6:28 PM 2/8/2015
You never sell your wares, I guess you are just also an adventurer.
I'm not too concerned about all the money exploits, I could fix them but the money isn't really that necessary anyways, it doesn't matter much if you have hundreds of levels.
Once you press one button in the library the other gets disabled.
The parkour is horribly unbalanced but I think I'll just leave it.
There is a quest in the apartment complex directly across from the water supervisor's house.
Minecraft Tales from the Nether
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DsKXcwxf7J8
any1
Where have the buttons gone?
And I really am enjoying this map.
Forum reply said there is a quest in the apartment directly across from
water supervisor. Does that mean the tower with the iron door?
OH!! Wow. I found the secretary. Must have passed her 5 times.
Wow. Too bad the secretary herself didn't just ask. That was the
simplest quest so far.
Bandit Leader went down nice and quick. I like that you detected his
death. I thought for SURE I was going to have to open this 'Explosives
Storage' door.
Interesting way to end it! Your role is done, but the story goes on
4:10 PM 2/13/2015
Will put up a review later this weekend.
My critique up to the choice with the queen:
I honestly wasn't expecting this to be good. Most adventure maps I play are rather bland an boring. I love the awesomely detailed town and the buttons appearing so we wouldn't cheat on quests. The story behind this was rather interesting to, however I find it easy to forget what I'm doing. I almost completely forgotten why I needed to speak with the King when I finished the Thieves Guild tasks. I should suggest disabling Mob Drops because after exterminating Bandits, Hooligans, and Monsters from certain tasks, I felt like debating whether or not these items would be important or not in later quests.
However, there are some bugs and errors I've spotted throughout the map, that could be addressed. First of all, there is a spelling mistake in the Guard's book (which name I have forgotten) which I think was "bloody" spelled as "bloddy". One of the game breaking bugs is that the buttons don't seem to appear to either lying to the king or telling him the truth after finishing the Thieves Guild tasks. A minor bug is that money can be easily exploitable. The Han's Apples quest can result in 32 L's for 1 apple. Which can be used to buy 32 apples for 1 L, resulting in infinite apples and money.
The rest of this map will ever remain a mystery for me. If you do fix the King bug, most likely I'll have to restart on the map, which I just can't sit through all the quests again, as they take a while to do.
8.5/10, gg, m8!