Does anyone have WattPad? If so, I'm hoping I can ask you to check out a book I have. My username is Lymason and people message me sometimes saying I'm a good writer but my content is hard to find. I have trouble creating tags because a person might search #prophecy or something general like that and end up finding one of my books that isn't even related the thing they are searching. So I'm open to suggestions regarding that. The Minecraft book I have made is called The Legend Of Lymason: A Minecraft Tale. It follows the life of a grey tabbish human (more cat than human) that has just spawned in a Minecraft world. Befriending many others, she saves the world of Minecraft from Herobrine and the Skeleton King. (Mostly the Skelly King) This is also a co-op book with a friend I have in real life and he made a book about the point of view of the character I based him off of. Two more chapters and it will be done. I spit out about a chapter or so a night so there's that. Thank you for taking your time reading this post. Whether you read my book or not, I always appreciate comments and would love to reply to every one of them. Ask me questions! I love engaging Author-to-Reader!!
The Meaning of Life, the Universe, and Everything.
Read a bit, and looks good so far. But I think you should describe surroundings more. For example; What did Laymason saw when he noticed the village of Lymingsdale? High towers climbing to the sky? Any distinctive landmark, like a church tower?
First Lymason is a girl. Second, I don't want to end up like JRR Tolkeen where I devote a whole page just to describe what the kitchen looks like. XD But I'll edit it anyway. Thanks for the suggestion.