So much better than what I did. Man, if you aren't accepted then I'll be shocked, cause that's the best I've seen after reading through all of this.
I think you would make it as a writer of the main storyline, the plot, and all that!
Builder
IGN:Cheddar7
Building strengths: Generic buildings
Weaknesses:Natural land formations
Screenshots:Listen, im not a fantastic builder but I kno how to follow a blueprint. I dont have any screenshots of anything impresive ive built because i havent built anything impersive. I can build roads or small towns but that is about it. Give me a chance and I can learn.
I'm new to the Minecraft Forums, but I'm guessing I'm supposed to convince you that I'm good at Minecraft.
I don't know if I'm a good story teller, or creative when it comes to writing dialogue. But I can build structures and such. Unfortuanatly; I do not have any screen shots of any. :sad.gif:
But I hope you consider me for your server! It sounds really fun and interesting!
I'm new to the Minecraft Forums, but I'm guessing I'm supposed to convince you that I'm good at Minecraft.
I don't know if I'm a good story teller, or creative when it comes to writing dialogue. But I can build structures and such. Unfortuanatly; I do not have any screen shots of any. :sad.gif:
But I hope you consider me for your server! It sounds really fun and interesting!
We will not accept people without screenshots or a good example of writing. If you can make a structure or a dialogue, we will consider it.
As for the writers that have applied, I am sorry that I did not get to your applications earlier, I was at school. I am reviewing them right now.
Builder:
IGN: kvltmvffins
Building Strengths and Weaknesses: I'd say I'm strongest at building towns made up of smaller buildings, though with enough work I can design anything to build it. I have screenshots but I decided to upload them in an album here so that they don't clog up the forums and what not.
WE NEED WRITERS WHO CAN PUT THEIR WORK IN QUEST FORMAT
we have main plot writers. please don't summit something unless it is in quest format. <--- head of writing here. (if we need more plot writers i will let you know)
Builder
Building strengths/weaknesses: Strengths: pixelart, castles, ancient buildings, recreation of existing structures. Also, I am quite good at terraforming with VoxelSniper if you need that.
Weaknesses: I cannot do large, complex structures without a good plan, i.e. I cannot think of a structure in my mind and recreate instantly
Screenshots:
These are some pics of a castle a made by hand without WorldEdit because I'm not sure if you have it on your server:
Here is one of the inside floors:
And here is some pixelart-ish stuff I did (though I doubt you have any need for pixelart on an rpg server it's just to show you what I can do:
Here is a statue of Notch with a crown fitting his achievements:
And here's the Mojang logo:
And here is a giant pig!
And here is a pyramid I made COMPLETELY by hand (with the help of the ever-so wonderful Kevmaster5000); it took a while:
And here is a ziggurat of Ur I am working on (it is not finished):
Here it is in the day:
And here it is at night:
I will upload some more screenshots of bigger buildings that I am working on now as soon as I am done.
Writer
IGN: Mob_Mauler
What type of things do you like to write? (Dialogue, short stories, long stories, etc) ialogue and Long Stories.
Writing example: (Doesn't have to be long, just don't make it really short. Make it detailed and original.) Here's an exerpt from a fan fic I wrote about the online game Transformice. It's called Mouse vs. Shaman. Here is an exerpt.
We started to fire off cannons. It worked for a while, but they were really starting to dodge them after a little bit. We came up with a method where we used our cannons together. We fired off our four cannons at the same time in a row, so the mice couldn’t dodge.
That method worked longer than our solo strategy, but it lost its effect after a while, too. Instead of dodging, they started to jump over them. It looked like nothing was working.
“Nothing’s working. How are we supposed win if they keep dodging all of our attacks?” Bethy said.
“They’re too fast.” Simple said. “There’s no way we can go faster on foot.”
Pompom and I looked at each other. We knew we had the same idea. We conjured a raised platform and put balls on the bottom for wheels. Then, we put a tall seat in the middle of the platform. Finally, we put a rune in the middle of the object, two board boxes on the back and covered it all in ghost-plank armoring.
“Introducing the Cannon Car.” We said simultaneously.
We all climbed on top of it. I sat on the high seat, Simple stood up front, and Pompom and Bethy stood facing the back.
Pompom and Bethy started to fill both of the board boxes with runes, giving us speed. Simple told them which way to turn and shot cannons out the front. I shot cannons out of the car, too, but more frequently. Every time we needed to turn Pompom or Bethy would fill their box with more runes, pushing that side of the car more, turning it.
We went out into the middle of the battle. I started to shoot Trolls and so did Simple. We drove up and down the battlefield. We were going so fast that the Trolls couldn’t keep up with us. They didn’t notice us until they were hit by a cannon.
We were taking out way more than we did with cannons or catapults. However, our advantage of speed lasted only for about an hour.
Trolls started to make barriers that would stop us. We acted fast, though. Pompom and Bethy were able to avoid the barriers and make sure we didn’t crash.
Then, later, mice started to run up to the car. We were able to cannon them away, but then there were more of them.
“Simple, there’s too many of them.” I told him. “What do we do?”
“Cocoa, get down and fight off the Trolls near me. Bethy, control both boxes. Pompom, protect Bethy.” He replied.
We did as we were told. I started to cannon off the mice near Simple, and Pompom was cannoning off the mice near Bethy. However, some of the mice managed to get on the car. We started to fight paw to paw combat.
We fought valiantly, but we were overwhelmed. There were too many of them. A board wall was summoned in front of us.
“Left!” Simple shouted. We didn’t turn. “Bethy, left!” he repeated. She still didn’t turn the car.
I noticed that Bethy was feeding more and more runes into the boxes. We were getting faster. We approached the wall.
WE NEED WRITERS WHO CAN PUT THEIR WORK IN QUEST FORMAT
we have main plot writers. please don't summit something unless it is in quest format. <--- head of writing here. (if we need more plot writers i will let you know)
Reading this post after posting my application I shall write several quest writings:
Name: Sinister Slaughters (Assassin quest)
Start: Del Withers
Description: Hey, over here. (A man is whispering to you from a valley.) Yeah you come over here. I have heard of ou and what you have been doing recently. You and your sneaky killing. I want you to kill some men that have taken something from me that is dear. They each have a special item that I need. I will pay you handsomely for killing them and giving me my items. I want you to kill Maxwell Getters, Harber Denson, Gelen Jens, and Fent Salburn. They should all be at their houses and they should have my item either on them or in their house. You are looking for an Ender Pearl, a diamond, some Redstone and 2 enchanted sticks. Bring them back to me and you will be rewarded.
Objective: Kill Maxwell Getters, Harber Denson, Gelen Jens and Fent Salburn quickly and quietly. Retrieve The diamond, Ender Pearl, redstone and 2 enchanted sticks from them or their houses.
Finish: Del Withers
Finish Description: Thank you for taking back what is rightfully mine! I shall be back with your money. (Walks away and assembles something with the items you retrieved for him.) Here. 30 coins. Oh you want more? Fine, here's a little dash of worker's fee. (You are struck by lightning. You die but you will get your items back from when you get to the point where you died.) Muwahahahaha!
Reward: 30 coins
Name: Gathering an Army
Start: Alden Dentoir
Description: Young hero come quick! A wizard gone mad has stricken our land with death and destruction! He is going to kill us all with his staff of pure Dark Magic! His name is Del Withers. I require you to go to him and kill him. However, you can't do it alone. Gather men to aid you in your battle! Now go before Del does anymore damage.
Objective: Persuade atleast 5 men to aid you in defeating Del Withers.
Finish:Alden Dentoir
Finish Description: Fine work my lad! You musn't go into battle unarmed or unprotected though! You need to gather supplies.
Reward: 50 coins
Name: Gathering Supplies
Start: Alden Dentoir
Description: Now that you have the men to aid you, you need the supplies to help aswell. Go to the nearby Blacksmith and smelt the iron in there to provide you with the necessary armor and swords. Be off! Del is approaching as we speak!
Objective: Protect the Blacksmith while your men smelt iron and craft armor, swords, and food for you all.
Finish: Alden Dentoir
Finish Description: Now you have everything you need to defeat Del and his evil staff!
Reward: Iron Armor, sword, 2 cooked porkchops and 50 coins.
Name: The Battle of Darkness
Start: Alden Dentoir
Description: Now that you have everything you need for you and your men go forth and destroy Del Withers!
Objective: Fight your way through the demon filled city to get to Del at Town Square. Fight him using everything you have!
Finish: Corpse of Del Withers
Finish Description: Now you hold the Staff of Pure Darkness.You have worked hard to destroy Del. You have conquered Darkness and your city is safe for now. The question now is: What will you do with the Staff? Will you take the staff and control the Darkness or throw it in the lava and reap you reward? You shall decide.
Good Reward: 200 coins
Bad Choice Reward: The Staff of Pure Darkness and the power to control Dark power.
What type of things do you like to write? (Dialogue, short stories, long stories, etc)
I like to write character and world backgrounds, and I also enjoy writing short stories.
Writing example (Doesn't have to be long, just don't make it really short. Make it detailed and original.) Background: Selenas, saviour of the Dark Elves
Little Selenas walked along the dirty grey cobblestone paths of New Avalas, futilely endeavouring to mask the deep and unmerciful melancholy that enveloped her swollen face like ivy to wall. The sickly yellow glimmer of the glowstone street lamps shone into her eyes shone upon the tears that trickled down her bruised cheeks, making the job that little bit tougher for the elf.
Anasinoth, her High Elven Master, inflicted swift back handed smack to the young girl before she ran away, and the pain he inflicted earlier that day was certainly made to last, as a sharp sting continued to cling to the right hand side of Selenas' face. She had finally escape, and did not plan on going back.
As she walked quietly down the path, she could hear the cries of many of her enthralled dark elven brothers and sisters. The unending prejudice of the High Ones against her kindhad filled Selenas with a great and unending anger long ago, that had burrowed it's way deep into her heart, never to be forgotten. Selenas only had one dream in life, to free her brethren from the twisted coils of the pompous High Ones, and killing a few would be an added bonus on the side.
As she finally made her way to the gates of New Avalas, she remained alert as to the presence of the Nightwatch, an order dedicated to keep the town safe from dangerous creatures of the night, namely the deadly black night spiders and the undead monstrosities that craved the taste of mortal flesh. But one other order that they had to follow, was to stop the Danra'Alos, the dark elven slaves of the New Avalonian citizens, and Selenas was one of them. She slowly approached the gate and, once close enough, swiftly took cover behind a sloppily made fencepost, which was just thick enough to block out any shadow that she may have caused. To direct the guards attention away from the gates, she threw a small stone at the signpost that laid right beside the first street. With their attention diverted, she silently slipped out of the town, and into the night.
Yet, this was not the last time that Selenas would be seen in New Avalas, and the next time she was ssen, bloodshed and mayhem came with her.
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EDIT: Need quest writers you say? I'll try my best!:
Quest: A Plea for Help Start: Cardinal Tirides Info: Greetings, friend of the Great Light! My servitors have reported a distress call from the patrons of the abbey at Havenshire. I'm sure it's nothing more than an adventurer of your calibre could handle. Please, my friend, the Deacon Matthias should be outside the Abbey at this time, be swift, hero! Finsh: Deacon Matthias Completion: You there, adventurer! We need your help!
Quest: Danger in the Abbey Start: Deacon Matthias Info: Ah, Tirides sent you, praise be to the Light! Dark cultists have infiltrated the Abbey, and we don't exactly know why! Please, we need your help, infiltrate the Abbey and slay any defilers you can find, lest they continue to spit in the presence of the Great Light! Also, if you can, find out why exactly they have targeted us, there must be a reason why... Objective: Kill 10 Invading Cultists Finsh: Frightened Monk Completion: The terrified monk sits up as he sees your face.
Quest: The Defiler Start: Frightened Monk Info: The-the-they're leader! He's d-d-down there, and he's... he's... extracting power, from uh... one of the b-b-booksin the library! P-p-please, stop him before he does s-s-something bad! Objective: Kill the Cultists' leader. Finish: Dean Matthias Completion: This had something to do with Tirides you say? Nonsense! Now, thank you for your aid, please, take this reward. Reward: 20 coins
Reading this post after posting my application I shall write several quest writings:
Name: Sinister Slaughters (Assassin quest)
Start: Del Withers
Description: Hey, over here. (A man is whispering to you from a valley.) Yeah you come over here. I have heard of ou and what you have been doing recently. You and your sneaky killing. I want you to kill some men that have taken something from me that is dear. They each have a special item that I need. I will pay you handsomely for killing them and giving me my items. I want you to kill Maxwell Getters, Harber Denson, Gelen Jens, and Fent Salburn. They should all be at their houses and they should have my item either on them or in their house. You are looking for an Ender Pearl, a diamond, some Redstone and 2 enchanted sticks. Bring them back to me and you will be rewarded.
Objective: Kill Maxwell Getters, Harber Denson, Gelen Jens and Fent Salburn quickly and quietly. Retrieve The diamond, Ender Pearl, redstone and 2 enchanted sticks from them or their houses.
Finish: Del Withers
Finish Description: Thank you for taking back what is rightfully mine! I shall be back with your money. (Walks away and assembles something with the items you retrieved for him.) Here. 30 coins. Oh you want more? Fine, here's a little dash of worker's fee. (You are struck by lightning. You die but you will get your items back from when you get to the point where you died.) Muwahahahaha!
Reward: 30 coins
Name: Gathering an Army
Start: Alden Dentoir
Description: Young hero come quick! A wizard gone mad has stricken our land with death and destruction! He is going to kill us all with his staff of pure Dark Magic! His name is Del Withers. I require you to go to him and kill him. However, you can't do it alone. Gather men to aid you in your battle! Now go before Del does anymore damage.
Objective: Persuade atleast 5 men to aid you in defeating Del Withers.
Finish:Alden Dentoir
Finish Description: Fine work my lad! You musn't go into battle unarmed or unprotected though! You need to gather supplies.
Reward: 50 coins
Name: Gathering Supplies
Start: Alden Dentoir
Description: Now that you have the men to aid you, you need the supplies to help aswell. Go to the nearby Blacksmith and smelt the iron in there to provide you with the necessary armor and swords. Be off! Del is approaching as we speak!
Objective: Protect the Blacksmith while your men smelt iron and craft armor, swords, and food for you all.
Finish: Alden Dentoir
Finish Description: Now you have everything you need to defeat Del and his evil staff!
Reward: Iron Armor, sword, 2 cooked porkchops and 50 coins.
Name: The Battle of Darkness
Start: Alden Dentoir
Description: Now that you have everything you need for you and your men go forth and destroy Del Withers!
Objective: Fight your way through the demon filled city to get to Del at Town Square. Fight him using everything you have!
Finish: Corpse of Del Withers
Finish Description: Now you hold the Staff of Pure Darkness.You have worked hard to destroy Del. You have conquered Darkness and your city is safe for now. The question now is: What will you do with the Staff? Will you take the staff and control the Darkness or throw it in the lava and reap you reward? You shall decide.
Good Reward: 200 coins
Bad Choice Reward: The Staff of Pure Darkness and the power to control Dark power.
sorry about no one replying to your post sooner, but we currently have no need for your type of building at the moment :/ if you can provide some sort of other style or different types of structures i would love t see them
I think you would make it as a writer of the main storyline, the plot, and all that!
IGN:Cheddar7
Building strengths: Generic buildings
Weaknesses:Natural land formations
Screenshots:Listen, im not a fantastic builder but I kno how to follow a blueprint. I dont have any screenshots of anything impresive ive built because i havent built anything impersive. I can build roads or small towns but that is about it. Give me a chance and I can learn.
I don't know if I'm a good story teller, or creative when it comes to writing dialogue. But I can build structures and such. Unfortuanatly; I do not have any screen shots of any. :sad.gif:
But I hope you consider me for your server! It sounds really fun and interesting!
We will not accept people without screenshots or a good example of writing. If you can make a structure or a dialogue, we will consider it.
As for the writers that have applied, I am sorry that I did not get to your applications earlier, I was at school. I am reviewing them right now.
Builder:
IGN: kvltmvffins
Building Strengths and Weaknesses: I'd say I'm strongest at building towns made up of smaller buildings, though with enough work I can design anything to build it. I have screenshots but I decided to upload them in an album here so that they don't clog up the forums and what not.
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we have main plot writers. please don't summit something unless it is in quest format. <--- head of writing here. (if we need more plot writers i will let you know)
Sig Made by Me <3
D: that sucks...
Building strengths/weaknesses: Strengths: pixelart, castles, ancient buildings, recreation of existing structures. Also, I am quite good at terraforming with VoxelSniper if you need that.
Weaknesses: I cannot do large, complex structures without a good plan, i.e. I cannot think of a structure in my mind and recreate instantly
Screenshots:
These are some pics of a castle a made by hand without WorldEdit because I'm not sure if you have it on your server:
Here is one of the inside floors:
Here is a statue of Notch with a crown fitting his achievements:
And here's the Mojang logo:
And here is a giant pig!
Here it is in the day:
And here it is at night:
IGN:
Building strengths/weaknesses:
Screenshots: (Required, or you don't get in)
Kevmaster5000
Strengths: buildings and things that others find boring. Weaknesses: designs like pictures of things
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IGN: Mob_Mauler
What type of things do you like to write? (Dialogue, short stories, long stories, etc) ialogue and Long Stories.
Writing example: (Doesn't have to be long, just don't make it really short. Make it detailed and original.) Here's an exerpt from a fan fic I wrote about the online game Transformice. It's called Mouse vs. Shaman. Here is an exerpt.
We started to fire off cannons. It worked for a while, but they were really starting to dodge them after a little bit. We came up with a method where we used our cannons together. We fired off our four cannons at the same time in a row, so the mice couldn’t dodge.
That method worked longer than our solo strategy, but it lost its effect after a while, too. Instead of dodging, they started to jump over them. It looked like nothing was working.
“Nothing’s working. How are we supposed win if they keep dodging all of our attacks?” Bethy said.
“They’re too fast.” Simple said. “There’s no way we can go faster on foot.”
Pompom and I looked at each other. We knew we had the same idea. We conjured a raised platform and put balls on the bottom for wheels. Then, we put a tall seat in the middle of the platform. Finally, we put a rune in the middle of the object, two board boxes on the back and covered it all in ghost-plank armoring.
“Introducing the Cannon Car.” We said simultaneously.
We all climbed on top of it. I sat on the high seat, Simple stood up front, and Pompom and Bethy stood facing the back.
Pompom and Bethy started to fill both of the board boxes with runes, giving us speed. Simple told them which way to turn and shot cannons out the front. I shot cannons out of the car, too, but more frequently. Every time we needed to turn Pompom or Bethy would fill their box with more runes, pushing that side of the car more, turning it.
We went out into the middle of the battle. I started to shoot Trolls and so did Simple. We drove up and down the battlefield. We were going so fast that the Trolls couldn’t keep up with us. They didn’t notice us until they were hit by a cannon.
We were taking out way more than we did with cannons or catapults. However, our advantage of speed lasted only for about an hour.
Trolls started to make barriers that would stop us. We acted fast, though. Pompom and Bethy were able to avoid the barriers and make sure we didn’t crash.
Then, later, mice started to run up to the car. We were able to cannon them away, but then there were more of them.
“Simple, there’s too many of them.” I told him. “What do we do?”
“Cocoa, get down and fight off the Trolls near me. Bethy, control both boxes. Pompom, protect Bethy.” He replied.
We did as we were told. I started to cannon off the mice near Simple, and Pompom was cannoning off the mice near Bethy. However, some of the mice managed to get on the car. We started to fight paw to paw combat.
We fought valiantly, but we were overwhelmed. There were too many of them. A board wall was summoned in front of us.
“Left!” Simple shouted. We didn’t turn. “Bethy, left!” he repeated. She still didn’t turn the car.
I noticed that Bethy was feeding more and more runes into the boxes. We were getting faster. We approached the wall.
“Jump!” Bethy commanded.
(Sorry about the spacing.)
Reading this post after posting my application I shall write several quest writings:
Name: Sinister Slaughters (Assassin quest)
Start: Del Withers
Description: Hey, over here. (A man is whispering to you from a valley.) Yeah you come over here. I have heard of ou and what you have been doing recently. You and your sneaky killing. I want you to kill some men that have taken something from me that is dear. They each have a special item that I need. I will pay you handsomely for killing them and giving me my items. I want you to kill Maxwell Getters, Harber Denson, Gelen Jens, and Fent Salburn. They should all be at their houses and they should have my item either on them or in their house. You are looking for an Ender Pearl, a diamond, some Redstone and 2 enchanted sticks. Bring them back to me and you will be rewarded.
Objective: Kill Maxwell Getters, Harber Denson, Gelen Jens and Fent Salburn quickly and quietly. Retrieve The diamond, Ender Pearl, redstone and 2 enchanted sticks from them or their houses.
Finish: Del Withers
Finish Description: Thank you for taking back what is rightfully mine! I shall be back with your money. (Walks away and assembles something with the items you retrieved for him.) Here. 30 coins. Oh you want more? Fine, here's a little dash of worker's fee. (You are struck by lightning. You die but you will get your items back from when you get to the point where you died.) Muwahahahaha!
Reward: 30 coins
Name: Gathering an Army
Start: Alden Dentoir
Description: Young hero come quick! A wizard gone mad has stricken our land with death and destruction! He is going to kill us all with his staff of pure Dark Magic! His name is Del Withers. I require you to go to him and kill him. However, you can't do it alone. Gather men to aid you in your battle! Now go before Del does anymore damage.
Objective: Persuade atleast 5 men to aid you in defeating Del Withers.
Finish:Alden Dentoir
Finish Description: Fine work my lad! You musn't go into battle unarmed or unprotected though! You need to gather supplies.
Reward: 50 coins
Name: Gathering Supplies
Start: Alden Dentoir
Description: Now that you have the men to aid you, you need the supplies to help aswell. Go to the nearby Blacksmith and smelt the iron in there to provide you with the necessary armor and swords. Be off! Del is approaching as we speak!
Objective: Protect the Blacksmith while your men smelt iron and craft armor, swords, and food for you all.
Finish: Alden Dentoir
Finish Description: Now you have everything you need to defeat Del and his evil staff!
Reward: Iron Armor, sword, 2 cooked porkchops and 50 coins.
Name: The Battle of Darkness
Start: Alden Dentoir
Description: Now that you have everything you need for you and your men go forth and destroy Del Withers!
Objective: Fight your way through the demon filled city to get to Del at Town Square. Fight him using everything you have!
Finish: Corpse of Del Withers
Finish Description: Now you hold the Staff of Pure Darkness.You have worked hard to destroy Del. You have conquered Darkness and your city is safe for now. The question now is: What will you do with the Staff? Will you take the staff and control the Darkness or throw it in the lava and reap you reward? You shall decide.
Good Reward: 200 coins
Bad Choice Reward: The Staff of Pure Darkness and the power to control Dark power.
Hope you like it.
pm sent
Sig Made by Me <3
pm sent
Sig Made by Me <3
sorry about no one replying to your post sooner, but we currently have no need for your type of building at the moment :/ if you can provide some sort of other style or different types of structures i would love t see them
Sig Made by Me <3
Sig Made by Me <3