I have made a story called Team Fortress 2: Controlling the points, and I wanted to share it with you, this is my first story I've made so it might not be good, but at least give me credit for trying heh. Anyway here it is.
The team was ready, the gates were about to open, the Demoman had stickies ready on the wall if the red team came in, and the Medic was overhealing the Heavy with Übercharge ready at 100%. The soldier had his Direct hit (Rocket launcher) aimed right at an enemy’s toes. The scout was ready to quickly run to the control point to capture it. The sniper was in the back ready to shoot at an un-suspecting spy. And our spy was disguised as their spy to confuse them. Engineer had sentries ready in the background to not be seen. The Pyro was ready to set every one of those Red team enemies. 10 seconds left, impatience on both teams. The blue gates were about to open! 5, 4, 3, 2, 1! Begin! And th en, an explosion. The blue team died.“How could this have happen?” Heavy asked, back at the main base room with supplies.
“I don’t know, our Demoman’s sticky bombs can’t hurt us,” said scout as he gathered himself some bullets.
“Yeah how could *hiccup could that of happen?” the drunken Demoman said.
“Possibly the Red Demoman’s sticky bombs gentlemen” the spy said dusting off his suit picking which disguise to use for when they go back into the battlefield.
“Yeah, I’ll go grab my Jarate!” said the sniper as he went into the bathroom with a bottle.
“Uh Jarate?” questioned the Medic who was now healing the engineer.
“It’s human urine in a bottle partner” said the engineer who was putting up a dispenser.
“What’s that?” asked the Medic who was looking in awe at the machine.
“You really need to learn how to defend yourself to be able to see more of the outside world,” said the engineer.
“Well don’t be so rude, just what is it?” asked the Medic.
“It’s a dispenser, when you get close to it, it gives you health and ammo, and metal for me to make more stuff, so you’re useless, sorta” the Engineer said with a chuckle.
“Well you are not getting an Übercharge, or at the most a healing, that’s for sure, use your little contraptions, at least I have Archimedes (the Medic’s pet bird) to keep me company!” Said the Medic displeased.
“Okay, so how did we explode?” said Scout.
Silence struck everyone but the Spy looked at each other if they had any ideas.
“Seriously none of you chuckleheads have any ideas? I’d might as well bonk you all! But I need you to defend me so, keep thinking” said the Scout.
“Hello? I am still here gentlemen! Remember me thought? The Red Team’s Demoman?”
“Oh yeah! Anyway let’s go back out th- ah ****!” said the Sniper in shock.
“What is it sniper man?” said the still drunken Demoman.
“We have 3 minutes left!” said the Sniper. Dead silence struck, not even the Red Team could be heard.
“AHHHHHH” screamed the Blu Team. The whole Blu team ran out! No Red Team was in sight!
“I’ll meet you losers at control point A!” said the Scout, going 2x as fast as the others.
“Mphmphpmhp!” said the Pyro with an incomprehensible speech because of the Pyro’s mask.
“Alert! The control point is being captured!” a voice said from the intercom.
“Hahah!” said Heavy who was being overhealed by the medic.
“Uh-oh, where is the sniper?” asked the Soldier.
“Right here!” said the Sniper holding a warm bottle of urine.
“I’ll vomit in front of you if you don’t put that away Sniper you disgusting Australian!”
“Hmph” said the Sniper.
“Look out” said the Medic looking at about 7 enemies.
Medic knew what to do, and this was the perfect time to use it.
“I am fully charged!” the Medic said to Heavy.
A moment went by and then Heavy came out from hiding and stood up to start shooting.
“Now Medic!” Shouted Heavy. The Medic flipped the switch and Übercharge on! Heavy was now pure solid Blue and invincible!
“AHAHAHAHAHA! I AM BULLETPROOF!” Heavy shouted while shooting everywhere killing every Red enemy in sight! After all the enemies were killed. The battlefield was empty, and then came Scout.
“… I’ll say it a died.” Scout admitted.
“We don’t have much time! Move!” The Engineer said. They all ran out and did not stop for a breath! Half went to B, the other went to A to capture them both, then they would meet up in the room that leads to the open field to the watchtower of control point C, where they would discuss what to do with the heavily well-guarded area with Sentries and all the enemies there ready to attack.
“Come on, come on! 5,4,3,2,1! Yes! We got A!” said the Scout.
“2,1! Yehaw! We got B!” yelled the Engineer with please. As the Demoman, Sniper, Engineer, Heavy, and Medic waited for the others, they started planning.
“I think we start shooting everywhere!” said the Heavy.
“What if I put up a Sentry? That would kill all of ‘em!” said the Engineer
“The Engineer would be credit to team!” Yelled Heavy.
“SHHH! Now Engineer, people from far distances could destroy it! How about,” The Medic was interrupted for the rest of the team was coming.
“I got it gentlemen!” said the spy anxiously waiting to tell his suggestion.
“I could turn invisible, use electro sapper to destroy every machine that engineer makes! Then I will back stab the defenders. Heavy and Medic you get Übercharge on and kill the ground defenders! Demoman, you uh, I’ll give you an easy job considering you are drunk, um… *ahem Demoman! You go put sticky bombs on walls where mean people can come through! When you see a bad man come trough, you set them off and replace them! Okey-dokey?”
“Yes miss blue robbery from the ocean of France!” said the Drunken Demoman.
“What?” asked the Sniper.
“Someone hasn’t ale yet” said the Soldier.
“Anyway, Engineer! You go build your Sentries, but! Put force fields on them! Pyro you stand near the other entrance and when you see someone come, start spraying fire! Scout, you get to the top to the control point as fast as you can, you stay there and capture, like you said, we will defend you! Sniper! Go into that home and Snipe through that window incase we haven’t got that person! And Soldier, defend with the others on the bridges! Got the plan gentlemen?”
“Yes!” said the whole team except the Spy.
“Now let’s go put this to action! I will go first!” said the Spy, as he went to every machine and destroyed them all. The Engineer then started building his Sentry and put a force field on it. The Sniper quickly made his way to the home, as a Red Soldier came near he grabbed with Jarate and threw it right at him!
“AHHH! IT STINGS!” The Soldier said, right before the Sniper headshoted him!
“Mongrel!” The Sniper said.
“I am fully charged!” Yelled the Medic.
“Go!” said Heavy as he turned solid blue and invincible and shot every thing it sight again! The soldier was on the bridges with a Red Sniper in another house. An arrow went threw the Soldiers right arm.
“AHHHHH!” Yelled the Soldier.
The Demoman shot a bomb directly onto the Red Sniper’s head.
“Ah ****” Said the Sniper
“BOMBS AWAY!” and the Demoman set off the sticky bomb.
“Aw, they’re gonna have to glue you back together! IN HELL! AHAHAHA!” And the Demoman drank from his bottle for a victory drink, and placed the bombs in their proper positions as the “Miss blue robber from the ocean of France” had said. The Scout had got up to the top finally, but a Pyro shot a fireball at him from just feet away from the entrance, and the Pyro ran out, and before he knew it, was on fire from the other Pyro! He fell to the ground burned to a crisp.
“Mphphmphmph!” said the Pyro.
Only seconds left! The scout was up there still! It was down to the final 5 seconds and then the Medic came up, and stabbed him.
“Medic! What the hell have you done?” Heavy said.
“I’m right here!” There was the Medic on the ground, healing him.
“This is not possible!” Heavy said. The Medic that killed Scout turned into cloud of dust and then became the Spy who was in disguise.
“And then came the Blu Spy holding out his knife just nearly touching the Red Spy’s mask, and when the Red Spy turned around he went into the knife.
“Spy is credit to team! Everyone is!” Yelled Heavy.
“10,9,8,7,6,5,4,3,2,1! Yes! We control everything! We did it! Oh yeah! They all came around Heavy to give high-fives.
“Oi, where is big-helmet man?” Demoman questioned.
“AHHH!” cried the Soldier. The Medic immediately ran to the Soldier as did the rest of the team.
“Uh-oh” the Medic said “This looks bad” Medic picked up his Medi-gun and healed his wound.
“Hey look! More arrows for me!” The Sniper said with please as he picked it up.
“You got blood on my suit!” said the Spy.
“Hahaha!” The whole team laughed for they control one point in the world, and their war is finally over, or so they thought it was for there always will be a people come to claim their control over it, or will the Blue Team go to control over parts of the world? That is another story.
THE END.
Team
Fortress
2:
Controlling
the
Points
By: Kenneth
I hope you liked it, if not tell me please why. Thank you, if I get good feedback, I might make a series! Anyway goodbye!
The team was ready, the gates were about to open, the Demoman had stickies ready on the wall if the red team came in, and the Medic was overhealing the Heavy with Übercharge ready at 100%. The soldier had his Direct hit (Rocket launcher) aimed right at an enemy’s toes. The scout was ready to quickly run to the control point to capture it. The sniper was in the back ready to shoot at an un-suspecting spy. And our spy was disguised as their spy to confuse them. Engineer had sentries ready in the background to not be seen. The Pyro was ready to set every one of those Red team enemies. 10 seconds left, impatience on both teams. The blue gates were about to open! 5, 4, 3, 2, 1! Begin! And th en, an explosion. The blue team died.“How could this have happen?” Heavy asked, back at the main base room with supplies.
“I don’t know, our Demoman’s sticky bombs can’t hurt us,” said scout as he gathered himself some bullets.
“Yeah how could *hiccup could that of happen?” the drunken Demoman said.
“Possibly the Red Demoman’s sticky bombs gentlemen” the spy said dusting off his suit picking which disguise to use for when they go back into the battlefield.
“Yeah, I’ll go grab my Jarate!” said the sniper as he went into the bathroom with a bottle.
“Uh Jarate?” questioned the Medic who was now healing the engineer.
“It’s human urine in a bottle partner” said the engineer who was putting up a dispenser.
“What’s that?” asked the Medic who was looking in awe at the machine.
“You really need to learn how to defend yourself to be able to see more of the outside world,” said the engineer.
“Well don’t be so rude, just what is it?” asked the Medic.
“It’s a dispenser, when you get close to it, it gives you health and ammo, and metal for me to make more stuff, so you’re useless, sorta” the Engineer said with a chuckle.
“Well you are not getting an Übercharge, or at the most a healing, that’s for sure, use your little contraptions, at least I have Archimedes (the Medic’s pet bird) to keep me company!” Said the Medic displeased.
“Okay, so how did we explode?” said Scout.
Silence struck everyone but the Spy looked at each other if they had any ideas.
“Seriously none of you chuckleheads have any ideas? I’d might as well bonk you all! But I need you to defend me so, keep thinking” said the Scout.
“Hello? I am still here gentlemen! Remember me thought? The Red Team’s Demoman?”
“Oh yeah! Anyway let’s go back out th- ah ****!” said the Sniper in shock.
“What is it sniper man?” said the still drunken Demoman.
“We have 3 minutes left!” said the Sniper. Dead silence struck, not even the Red Team could be heard.
“AHHHHHH” screamed the Blu Team. The whole Blu team ran out! No Red Team was in sight!
“I’ll meet you losers at control point A!” said the Scout, going 2x as fast as the others.
“Mphmphpmhp!” said the Pyro with an incomprehensible speech because of the Pyro’s mask.
“Alert! The control point is being captured!” a voice said from the intercom.
“Hahah!” said Heavy who was being overhealed by the medic.
“Uh-oh, where is the sniper?” asked the Soldier.
“Right here!” said the Sniper holding a warm bottle of urine.
“I’ll vomit in front of you if you don’t put that away Sniper you disgusting Australian!”
“Hmph” said the Sniper.
“Look out” said the Medic looking at about 7 enemies.
Medic knew what to do, and this was the perfect time to use it.
“I am fully charged!” the Medic said to Heavy.
A moment went by and then Heavy came out from hiding and stood up to start shooting.
“Now Medic!” Shouted Heavy. The Medic flipped the switch and Übercharge on! Heavy was now pure solid Blue and invincible!
“AHAHAHAHAHA! I AM BULLETPROOF!” Heavy shouted while shooting everywhere killing every Red enemy in sight! After all the enemies were killed. The battlefield was empty, and then came Scout.
“… I’ll say it a died.” Scout admitted.
“We don’t have much time! Move!” The Engineer said. They all ran out and did not stop for a breath! Half went to B, the other went to A to capture them both, then they would meet up in the room that leads to the open field to the watchtower of control point C, where they would discuss what to do with the heavily well-guarded area with Sentries and all the enemies there ready to attack.
“Come on, come on! 5,4,3,2,1! Yes! We got A!” said the Scout.
“2,1! Yehaw! We got B!” yelled the Engineer with please. As the Demoman, Sniper, Engineer, Heavy, and Medic waited for the others, they started planning.
“I think we start shooting everywhere!” said the Heavy.
“What if I put up a Sentry? That would kill all of ‘em!” said the Engineer
“The Engineer would be credit to team!” Yelled Heavy.
“SHHH! Now Engineer, people from far distances could destroy it! How about,” The Medic was interrupted for the rest of the team was coming.
“I got it gentlemen!” said the spy anxiously waiting to tell his suggestion.
“I could turn invisible, use electro sapper to destroy every machine that engineer makes! Then I will back stab the defenders. Heavy and Medic you get Übercharge on and kill the ground defenders! Demoman, you uh, I’ll give you an easy job considering you are drunk, um… *ahem Demoman! You go put sticky bombs on walls where mean people can come through! When you see a bad man come trough, you set them off and replace them! Okey-dokey?”
“Yes miss blue robbery from the ocean of France!” said the Drunken Demoman.
“What?” asked the Sniper.
“Someone hasn’t ale yet” said the Soldier.
“Anyway, Engineer! You go build your Sentries, but! Put force fields on them! Pyro you stand near the other entrance and when you see someone come, start spraying fire! Scout, you get to the top to the control point as fast as you can, you stay there and capture, like you said, we will defend you! Sniper! Go into that home and Snipe through that window incase we haven’t got that person! And Soldier, defend with the others on the bridges! Got the plan gentlemen?”
“Yes!” said the whole team except the Spy.
“Now let’s go put this to action! I will go first!” said the Spy, as he went to every machine and destroyed them all. The Engineer then started building his Sentry and put a force field on it. The Sniper quickly made his way to the home, as a Red Soldier came near he grabbed with Jarate and threw it right at him!
“AHHH! IT STINGS!” The Soldier said, right before the Sniper headshoted him!
“Mongrel!” The Sniper said.
“I am fully charged!” Yelled the Medic.
“Go!” said Heavy as he turned solid blue and invincible and shot every thing it sight again! The soldier was on the bridges with a Red Sniper in another house. An arrow went threw the Soldiers right arm.
“AHHHHH!” Yelled the Soldier.
The Demoman shot a bomb directly onto the Red Sniper’s head.
“Ah ****” Said the Sniper
“BOMBS AWAY!” and the Demoman set off the sticky bomb.
“Aw, they’re gonna have to glue you back together! IN HELL! AHAHAHA!” And the Demoman drank from his bottle for a victory drink, and placed the bombs in their proper positions as the “Miss blue robber from the ocean of France” had said. The Scout had got up to the top finally, but a Pyro shot a fireball at him from just feet away from the entrance, and the Pyro ran out, and before he knew it, was on fire from the other Pyro! He fell to the ground burned to a crisp.
“Mphphmphmph!” said the Pyro.
Only seconds left! The scout was up there still! It was down to the final 5 seconds and then the Medic came up, and stabbed him.
“Medic! What the hell have you done?” Heavy said.
“I’m right here!” There was the Medic on the ground, healing him.
“This is not possible!” Heavy said. The Medic that killed Scout turned into cloud of dust and then became the Spy who was in disguise.
“And then came the Blu Spy holding out his knife just nearly touching the Red Spy’s mask, and when the Red Spy turned around he went into the knife.
“Spy is credit to team! Everyone is!” Yelled Heavy.
“10,9,8,7,6,5,4,3,2,1! Yes! We control everything! We did it! Oh yeah! They all came around Heavy to give high-fives.
“Oi, where is big-helmet man?” Demoman questioned.
“AHHH!” cried the Soldier. The Medic immediately ran to the Soldier as did the rest of the team.
“Uh-oh” the Medic said “This looks bad” Medic picked up his Medi-gun and healed his wound.
“Hey look! More arrows for me!” The Sniper said with please as he picked it up.
“You got blood on my suit!” said the Spy.
“Hahaha!” The whole team laughed for they control one point in the world, and their war is finally over, or so they thought it was for there always will be a people come to claim their control over it, or will the Blue Team go to control over parts of the world? That is another story.
THE END.
Team
Fortress
2:
Controlling
the
Points
By: Kenneth
I hope you liked it, if not tell me please why. Thank you, if I get good feedback, I might make a series! Anyway goodbye!
nah, and i said that because they're controlling the points