REVIEW:
Overall decent app, although there are some issues that I have with it overall. Your character bio is too short and simply doesnt provide nearly any information about his personality or life in general other than he was abandoned (which I find as an annoyingly common cliché) he has a sister and a dog, and he left after fuelbots raided his town. Oh, and his biotic arms. It explains nothing of his interests, hobbies, personality or even how he reacted to being abandoned. Also, I hate it when people say "PM me on the results of this application!" as I view this as a blunt "i'm not interested in this server enough to even check if i'm accepted or not." I won't be sending you a PM, if someone else does, thats their business, but you do have a bit to work on anyway.
PS: If you are going to edit this, just work on lengthening the bio. Oh, and if your character has a temper, please RP it every once-in-awhile as I feel that most people that "have a temper" never actually RP their temper.
Unfortunately DENIED
Cheers!
Hmm... I will start working on it!
And sure! I will change the stuff you hate...
MineCraft account name:
JaredIsaiah Country of Residence and Time Zone:
Philippines, GMT +8:00 Define roleplaying in your own words, do you have any past roleplaying experiences?
Roleplaying is when a group acts out a certain subject/topic/idea/theme for fun, whilst the audience is themselves! This can be
also used as practice for Theater Classes. That is all! What is your reason for applying to this server?
It seems like an awesome server to go on. And I hope my character (Luke Silvur) will be a nice one. Have you been banned before, if so why?
For destroying some ABANDONED buildings and harvesting the materials. The admin was like... 6 years old! What a weird server... -.- Do you agree with our rules?
Of course! **** YO ****, I GOT A MUSTACHE! Will you use the server's official texture pack?
I am currently using this texture pack... So... yeah!
In Character
Character name: (Last names aren't required)
Luke Silvur What is your character's race?
Human Your character's story so far?
It was the year 2429 when his parents got killed by some bandits (Maybe one of them survived? :o) He lived in a town called "Reddetiona". He had a so-called sister. And has a dog called "Rocky".
YEAR 2439: The town got invaded by Fuelbots. He wanted to escape the town and adventure. So Luke and his sister packed up and left for the unknown.
YEAR 2441: Luke finds a house for them to sleep for the night in a town with some Wolf corpses in some of the houses. They rest for the day. Luke finds an abandoned town that has some creatures. He loots the buildings. He finds a computer and stays on it for a day. He then wakes up. It was just a dream. He misses playing on his Dad's little computer... He then cries for a little bit then punches the wall. And kicks the tables around then his sister woke up and told him to go back to sleep but he doesn't want to.Then his sister pulls out a book about Drawing Basic Stuff. He then gets interested in drawing. So he got some pencils and some papers and he drew some good stuff. He then draws a person that just came into his mind. He then thinks "Why did I draw this man?". Then it becomes morning. They now set off into the North direction.
YEAR 2444: Luke's arms got radiated so they cut it. But... Luckily, the 3 months before they got radiated Luke was teaching his sister some robotics. So he got bionic arms! Then he remembers something!
~START~
Luke: Arrghh! I'm having a flashback! Ack!
-@FLASHBACK START@-
Mom: *panting* Bandits are coming! I was just getting some wheat until I heard a gunshot then I dropped the wheat and ran as fast as I can!
Dad: *surprised* Really?! Oh crud! We must get Luke somewhere safe!
*Dad carries Luke to an underground vault with a robot his Dad made that is called the "Babysitter v2.0" and then switches it on.*
Dad: *sobbing* Take care son! We might meet someday... *cough* ...Vixel! Take care of Luke!
Vixel (Babysitter v2.0): Sure, sir! Right away!
Luke: *crying* Dada? Mama? Where are you going? *sob* Don't leave me!
*Dad shuts the vault door and shouts through the door...*
Dad: *sad* Vixel! Open the vault when he reaches a good age!
*Luke starts crying out loud*
-@FLASHBACK END@-
Luke: I remember now... *sits down* My Mom and Dad put me in that vault to protect me... VIXEL!
She was the one who protected me... Took care of me... *sigh*...
-END-
NOW: The three have a temporary house. They are going seperate ways but will soon meet again in the next year. Rocky & Luke are in one path, while his sister on the other. His bionic arms wore out because of the hardest material ''Bedrock''. He thought he could break it, but he stopped because it wouldn't budge. Then... They took the paths... Luke & Rocky to the East, while the sister... West.
The rest is up to me. :3
Does or did your character have any companions or family?
His dog Rocky, and his sister.
How old is your character?
19
Describe what your character looks like, any distinctive physical features?
Yellowish-brown hair. Brown eyes. Worn out bionic arms.
How does your character act?
Like an average guy, but has some bad temper.
Character's occupation:
Engineer/Mechanic. Does your character have an education? (Read or write)
Yes!
Any special skills that your character has, nothing unbalanced:
Luke has bionic arms that can break through the hardest materials... BUT... It is worn out and can't break much.
Luke has a unique blood type that is immune to poison.
Luke has a power that makes apples come out it mouth. (strange... right?)
Does your character hate or fear anything? TOP 3 HATED STUFF: 1. Flowers 2. Show-Offy People 3. Gross/Disgusting Stuff
TOP 3 FEARS: 1. Really Dark Places 2. Ghosts 3. Surprises Describe an example of your character in great suffering and pain (RP):
~START~
Luke: *in pain* Arrgh... That bite was venomous! I need some medicine!
*Luke walks around the place to find a shack*
Luke: *thinking* Hmm... That seems like a shack that could have some medicine. *stinging in location of bite from Mutant*
*in great pain* Arrgghh! Better get in there quick!
*Luke goes into the shack and finds a First Aid kit. He then searches through it to find some medicine.*
Luke: I should apply this medicine gently, huh? Well... Here we go!
*Luke opens the medicine and gets a cotton ball and pours some medicine onto the bite.*
*Luke gulps nervously then counts... "1... 2... Err... 3!"*
Luke: It stings like a bee's needle going into my eyeball! Arrgh!
*Luke then rests in the bed in the shack.*
Luke: I don't feel mutated... So... The medicine actually worked... ~END~
Provide an image of your character's skin:
(PS: IT IS SHORT BECAUSE I SPENT AN HOUR MAKING IT BUT I ACCIDENTALLY PRESSED SOMETHING THAT MADE IT GO "BACK" A PAGE!)
(PPS: THIS IS A NEW EDITED APP! I ONLY ADDED SOME STUFF TO THE BIO OF MY CHARACTER BECAUSE THAT WAS THE PART YOU DISLIKED! )
REVIEW:
BABOOM We have a winner kids. Great app, nice sleek organization that I really don't see too much of, and a character that I actually know the background of legitimately. Although your "pain" part of the app isn't what it's really supposed to be (deep pain is usually emotional pain, and a bit longer than five lines) I can make an exception. Welcome to the team.
ACCEPTED
Cheers!
Great! Thanks for accepting, I'm glad you liked my app.
I misunderstood what was meant by the pain section, although now I've looked again it seems more obvious that it's supposed to be deeper than what I wrote.
Anyways, I'll see you guys in-game once the server is up. I'm definitely looking forwards to it.
....okay so I woke up this morning with blood everywhere. All over my bed, all over my face. As it turns out my nose was gushing out blood. And I had to clean it all up, while sticking tissues up my nose. Bet your morning wasn't as bad as mine.
....okay so I woke up this morning with blood everywhere. All over my bed, all over my face. As it turns out my nose was gushing out blood. And I had to clean it all up, while sticking tissues up my nose. Bet your morning wasn't as bad as mine.
Try waking up with a roach crawling in your mouth, son.
Dude I just hope it goes back up today, after all. IT'S A FRIDAY! And no server means mah Friday is ruined! Hehe.... See what I did there? I don't. . . .
MineCraft account name:
JaredIsaiah Country of Residence and Time Zone:
Philippines, GMT +8:00 Define roleplaying in your own words, do you have any past roleplaying experiences?
Roleplaying is when a group acts out a certain subject/topic/idea/theme for fun, whilst the audience is themselves! This can be
also used as practice for Theater Classes. That is all! What is your reason for applying to this server?
It seems like an awesome server to go on. And I hope my character (Luke Silvur) will be a nice one. Have you been banned before, if so why?
For destroying some ABANDONED buildings and harvesting the materials. The admin was like... 6 years old! What a weird server... -.- Do you agree with our rules?
Of course! **** YO ****, I GOT A MUSTACHE! Will you use the server's official texture pack?
I am currently using this texture pack... So... yeah!
In Character
Character name: (Last names aren't required)
Luke Silvur What is your character's race?
Human Your character's story so far?
It was the year 2429 when his parents got killed by some bandits (Maybe one of them survived? ) He lived in a town called "Reddetiona". He had a so-called sister. And has a dog called "Rocky".
YEAR 2439: The town got invaded by Fuelbots. He wanted to escape the town and adventure. So Luke and his sister packed up and left for the unknown.
YEAR 2441: Luke finds a house for them to sleep for the night in a town with some Wolf corpses in some of the houses. They rest for the day. Luke finds an abandoned town that has some creatures. He loots the buildings. He finds a computer and stays on it for a day. He then wakes up. It was just a dream. He misses playing on his Dad's little computer... He then cries for a little bit then punches the wall. And kicks the tables around then his sister woke up and told him to go back to sleep but he doesn't want to.Then his sister pulls out a book about Drawing Basic Stuff. He then gets interested in drawing. So he got some pencils and some papers and he drew some good stuff. He then draws a person that just came into his mind. He then thinks "Why did I draw this man?". Then it becomes morning. They now set off into the North direction.
YEAR 2444: Luke's arms got radiated so they cut it. But... Luckily, the 3 months before they got radiated Luke was teaching his sister some robotics. So he got bionic arms! Then he remembers something!
~START~
Luke: Arrghh! I'm having a flashback! Ack!
-@FLASHBACK START@-
Mom: *panting* Bandits are coming! I was just getting some wheat until I heard a gunshot then I dropped the wheat and ran as fast as I can!
Dad: *surprised* Really?! Oh crud! We must get Luke somewhere safe!
*Dad carries Luke to an underground vault with a robot his Dad made that is called the "Babysitter v2.0" and then switches it on.*
Dad: *sobbing* Take care son! We might meet someday... *cough* ...Vixel! Take care of Luke!
Vixel (Babysitter v2.0): Sure, sir! Right away!
Luke: *crying* Dada? Mama? Where are you going? *sob* Don't leave me!
*Dad shuts the vault door and shouts through the door...*
Dad: *sad* Vixel! Open the vault when he reaches a good age!
*Luke starts crying out loud*
-@FLASHBACK END@-
Luke: I remember now... *sits down* My Mom and Dad put me in that vault to protect me... VIXEL!
She was the one who protected me... Took care of me... *sigh*...
-END-
NOW: The three have a temporary house. They are going seperate ways but will soon meet again in the next year. Rocky & Luke are in one path, while his sister on the other. His bionic arms wore out because of the hardest material ''Bedrock''. He thought he could break it, but he stopped because it wouldn't budge. Then... They took the paths... Luke & Rocky to the East, while the sister... West.
The rest is up to me. :3
Does or did your character have any companions or family?
His dog Rocky, and his sister.
How old is your character?
19
Describe what your character looks like, any distinctive physical features?
Yellowish-brown hair. Brown eyes. Worn out bionic arms.
How does your character act?
Like an average guy, but has some bad temper.
Character's occupation:
Engineer/Mechanic. Does your character have an education? (Read or write)
Yes!
Any special skills that your character has, nothing unbalanced:
Luke has bionic arms that can break through the hardest materials... BUT... It is worn out and can't break much.
Luke has a unique blood type that is immune to poison.
Luke has a power that makes apples come out it mouth. (strange... right?)
Does your character hate or fear anything? TOP 3 HATED STUFF: 1. Flowers 2. Show-Offy People 3. Gross/Disgusting Stuff
TOP 3 FEARS: 1. Really Dark Places 2. Ghosts 3. Surprises Describe an example of your character in great suffering and pain (RP):
~START~
Luke: *in pain* Arrgh... That bite was venomous! I need some medicine!
*Luke walks around the place to find a shack*
Luke: *thinking* Hmm... That seems like a shack that could have some medicine. *stinging in location of bite from Mutant*
*in great pain* Arrgghh! Better get in there quick!
*Luke goes into the shack and finds a First Aid kit. He then searches through it to find some medicine.*
Luke: I should apply this medicine gently, huh? Well... Here we go!
*Luke opens the medicine and gets a cotton ball and pours some medicine onto the bite.*
*Luke gulps nervously then counts... "1... 2... Err... 3!"*
Luke: It stings like a bee's needle going into my eyeball! Arrgh!
*Luke then rests in the bed in the shack.*
Luke: I don't feel mutated... So... The medicine actually worked... ~END~
Provide an image of your character's skin:
(PS: IT IS SHORT BECAUSE I SPENT AN HOUR MAKING IT BUT I ACCIDENTALLY PRESSED SOMETHING THAT MADE IT GO "BACK" A PAGE!)
(PPS: THIS IS A NEW EDITED APP! I ONLY ADDED SOME STUFF TO THE BIO OF MY CHARACTER BECAUSE THAT WAS THE PART YOU DISLIKED! )
REVIEW:
SUCCESS Although I don't get what the apples thing means.
ACCEPTED ( my little pony is cool )
Cheers!
Rollback Post to RevisionRollBack
There was even going to be a party for you. A big party. That all your friends were invited too. I invited your best friend the companion cube. Of course, he couldn't come because you murdered him. All your other friends couldn't come either, because you don't have any other friends. Because of how unlikeable you are. It says so right here in your personal file: UNLIKEABLE, liked by no one, a bitter, unlikeable loner, who's passing shall not be mourned, SHALL NOT BE MOURNED. That's exactly what it says. Very formal. Very official. It also says you were adopted, so thats funny too.
Well in the down time I have found a interesting, "similar" game to MC, that is still in development and uses guns and military vehicles in multiplayer matches.
Im wanking?
I seriously got nothing 'cept this
Edit: to hell with it
.gif dump and picture dump to entertain you assholes till the server starts back up
People say Beauty is in the eye of the Beholder. So let's cut that eye open right now, gimme a knife.
I am now Im going to sleep, really tired. Cya all tomorrow
Hmm... I will start working on it!
And sure! I will change the stuff you hate...
@DerpingCreeper
MineCraft account name:
JaredIsaiah
Country of Residence and Time Zone:
Philippines, GMT +8:00
Define roleplaying in your own words, do you have any past roleplaying experiences?
Roleplaying is when a group acts out a certain subject/topic/idea/theme for fun, whilst the audience is themselves! This can be
also used as practice for Theater Classes. That is all!
What is your reason for applying to this server?
It seems like an awesome server to go on. And I hope my character (Luke Silvur) will be a nice one.
Have you been banned before, if so why?
For destroying some ABANDONED buildings and harvesting the materials. The admin was like... 6 years old! What a weird server... -.-
Do you agree with our rules?
Of course! **** YO ****, I GOT A MUSTACHE!
Will you use the server's official texture pack?
I am currently using this texture pack... So... yeah!
In Character
Character name: (Last names aren't required)
Luke Silvur
What is your character's race?
Your character's story so far?
Does your character have an education? (Read or write)
TOP 3 HATED STUFF:
1. Flowers
2. Show-Offy People
3. Gross/Disgusting Stuff
TOP 3 FEARS:
1. Really Dark Places
2. Ghosts
3. Surprises
Describe an example of your character in great suffering and pain (RP):
~START~
Luke: *in pain* Arrgh... That bite was venomous! I need some medicine!
*Luke walks around the place to find a shack*
Luke: *thinking* Hmm... That seems like a shack that could have some medicine. *stinging in location of bite from Mutant*
*in great pain* Arrgghh! Better get in there quick!
*Luke goes into the shack and finds a First Aid kit. He then searches through it to find some medicine.*
Luke: I should apply this medicine gently, huh? Well... Here we go!
*Luke opens the medicine and gets a cotton ball and pours some medicine onto the bite.*
*Luke gulps nervously then counts... "1... 2... Err... 3!"*
Luke: It stings like a bee's needle going into my eyeball! Arrgh!
*Luke then rests in the bed in the shack.*
Luke: I don't feel mutated... So... The medicine actually worked...
~END~
Provide an image of your character's skin:
@DerpingCreeper
Great! Thanks for accepting, I'm glad you liked my app.
I misunderstood what was meant by the pain section, although now I've looked again it seems more obvious that it's supposed to be deeper than what I wrote.
Anyways, I'll see you guys in-game once the server is up. I'm definitely looking forwards to it.
-Datashocker
Try waking up with a roach crawling in your mouth, son.
I knew someone was going to point that out sooner or later....
Im bored as FACK
Is the server still down?
People say Beauty is in the eye of the Beholder. So let's cut that eye open right now, gimme a knife.
Dude I just hope it goes back up today, after all. IT'S A FRIDAY! And no server means mah Friday is ruined! Hehe.... See what I did there? I don't. . . .
OH YEAH? Well.......Word to your mother. . . .
Bruddah playing it ._.
And we both agreed to move the xbox into another room so whoever plays wont spoil the game for the other.
**** JUST GOT TEAL
People say Beauty is in the eye of the Beholder. So let's cut that eye open right now, gimme a knife.
REVIEW:
SUCCESS Although I don't get what the apples thing means.
ACCEPTED ( my little pony is cool )
Cheers!
okay to your first one, i think ill go watch dat
to the second
HOW THE **** AM I NOT SURPRISED YOU'D POST THAT!?
And penguin, it really is. Oh and CUPCAKES >:3
People say Beauty is in the eye of the Beholder. So let's cut that eye open right now, gimme a knife.
Guncraft
Check it out or not I feel quite bored here in the office at this time. (Hurry up clock! Be 5:00 Already! )
(I see subliminal messages in recent posts and they worry me a bit)
Uh....you win....
Please..