1. The whole pants and knowledge of his junk thing was not needed at all.
2. Spells are not possible, unless AJ personally said and will post on here that he said it was fine because i am not beliveing that you know him without evidence.
3. The describe your character in deep emotion/ pain is when you put in how a character reacts to something, how they deal with being injured, how they talk to another person, and how they deal with certain situations
4. All governments were dissolved only settlements and certain other residences are existant
5. World known is not possible as Communications are still horrid and theres no true way to contact someone across the world without relays.
6. Who are the Cronks?
7. Maybe you can expand more on who killed Keizaal and why other than saying one of his victim's child found him and murdered him, but i can understand if you wish to leave it out.
8. How can one be stealthy when their over 7ft tall, i can understand if hes not that heavybuilt, but since hes suppoesdly "The strongest being in the world" he'd be noisey when stepping due to muscle mass adding weight.
9. simply the backstory could do some work.
So in conclusion DENIED
just try to fix up those problems and we'll see if youll get whitelisted.
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People say Beauty is in the eye of the Beholder. So let's cut that eye open right now, gimme a knife.
Because I act the exact same way as the guy who commented?
As an example he could have said that in an entirely other way, and given some constructiv criticism instead of a short NEED.
Not intending to cause any drama, but I like it when people actually reads the entire application / post.
I also edited both posts right after his comment aswell, giving reason for my decision aswell also implying that I indeed know that I need to write a Story, but that I was hoping for a possibility to start out with a cleaner story, instead of adding a whole lot of drama as I see in every other application. (On all MC RP servers basically.
As for the picture, it was added as a joke, not an insult. Just my two cents.
Edit: Removed the Picture, due to the size of it in the aftermath.
Out of Character MineCraft account name: hardcoreelement Country of Residence and Time Zone: United States Eastern Define roleplaying in your own words, do you have any past roleplaying experiences? Roleplaying is when a person pretends to be a fictional character that is most likely created through the process of imagination. My past roleplaying experience...sometimes I rub myself in vaseline inside of my kitchen and pretend that I'm a slug. What is your reason for applying to this server? I know the guy that owns it. I'd say we're about a level above acquaintance. Sup Ay Jay Have you been banned before, if so why? I've been banned from Oklahoma for murdering 10 people with a used toothpick in the year of 2003, besides that not really. Do you agree with our rules? Hell yer Will you use the server's official texture pack?
I'm way ahead of you bro. I'm using it right now.
In Character Character name: (Last names aren't required) Boziik Dalmore What is your character's race?: Human Your character's story so far:
Boziik was born in a city that goes by the name of Hokoron. Boziik was dropped at birth because of the doctor's use of "Gloves of Butter" (Made in China). Of course, Boziik's mother Feyn was very displeased, along with Krah. Boziik's father. They both murdered the doctor with the ancient spell of the feared cronks. The spell was made by the feared Cronks themselves. The mother and father were a part of this cult, they were therefore master conjurers of the ancient spell. After realizing the crime they committed they picked up Boziik from the floor and fled from the scene before anyone could see the crime they had committed. Eventually investigators were able to depict and understand who the murderers were. Assassins and hired thugs were sent after the family so that they could be brought in to justice, tortured, murdered and then thrown in to a pit of cow manure.
Feyn and Krah were able to forge a cave in the side of the mountain that was near the town so that they could purchase required food to feed themselves and their just born son Boziik. After a few months of raising their son though, they realized something was very wrong. Boziik had a horrible mental disability. He had trouble with speech. Even after a few years, when Boziik was taught new words, he would always have trouble linking them together to make understandable English sentences. years passed, Boziik was 12. He was extremely powerful and strong. This was because of the hard labor that Boziik always performed at the end of the day, ending up in him being stronger than the average human being. Sadly, his intelligence always brought him down and made people keep distant from him. One day, a disease spread out through the whole city. Everyone in the city had acquired the disease. Inside the city, the disease was given a name that anyone outside of the city never understood. The horrible disease's name was STDs. Even to this day no one that didn't live in Hokoron understood what the name meant and how it was given. Boziik never obtained the disease though, it was believed that because of his forever alone status, the disease would never have been able to reach him. Sadly, the luck that Boziik had didn't last. One day Boziik came back home to the cave after a day of hard work to see that his parents were on the floor. They died through the disease. Horrified and shocked Boziik ran as far as he could from Hokoron hoping to never see it again with the thought of his parent's death.
After a week of traveling Boziik was being pursued by government officials from all over the world. Assassin's and thugs all wanted his head on top of their fireplace. The only reason that this has happened was because of an accidental murder that Boziik had committed. A worldwide famous prostitute. That was the one that suffered the death. This was a display for Boziik though that he was not able to control his huge amount of strength at all. Only few people knew that Boziik was innocent and that he only wanted to hug the prostitute and accidentally squished her too hard making her explode in an amazing explosion of bits, pieces and organs from the once standing prostitute. One day while traveling, a man came up to Boziik. He was holding a blade in his right hand. Boziik immediately realized and started backing up. Upon examining the man with the blade, he realized the man's name was Keizaal. Keizaal was paid to finally kill Boziik and to sel his skin as clothing. Before killing Boziik though, Keizaal understood that Boziik had a strange mental problem. He also figured out that he was not able to control his own strength. A conclusion was made by Keizaal that Boziik was innocent and had not meant to murder the famous prostitute. Keizaal took him in, trained Boziik and gave him appropriate clothing for the element of stealth and silence. An amazing trainer he was too. Boziik was eventually so skilled that he was close to being a master of murder. The only setback he had was his low intelligence. One day, Keizaal was assassinated by the son of one of the men that he had killed. Boziik now sets out to kill the man that had assassinated Keizaal while trying to make new friends to overcome his everlasting loneliness.
Does or did your character have any companions or family? All of them are dead. How old is your character? 27 Describe what your character looks like, any distinctive physical features? Boziik is extremely well built. He's 7 feet and a half. He is stronger than any other being in the world. His eyes and the rest of his upper face are never seen because of his hood. His robes cover all of his body. His clothing is all black except his dark red belt that keeps his pants from falling down and revealing his 10 inch "you know what" How does your character act? His low intelligence makes his speech a bit difficult and likes to pick fights with tiny things Character's occupation: Traveller Does your character have an education? (Read or write) Keizaal taught Boziik how to read, although he has trouble. Boziik never could write though. Too difficult. Any special skills that your character has, nothing unbalanced:Extremely strong, stealthy and good with difficult tasks. Does your character hate or fear anything? Spiders. He HATES spiders. Describe an example of your character in great suffering and pain (RP): Almost everyone he knew died. That's a horrible suffering ;~; Provide an image of your character's skin:
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Out of Character
MineCraft account name: coolboi360
Country of Residence and Time Zone: Michigan timezone in America
Define roleplaying in your own words, do you have any past roleplaying experiences? I've played on 3 other role play servers and played fallout 3 and new Vegas including Skyrim.
What is your reason for applying to this server? Post apocalyptic survival
Have you been banned before, if so why? Once, for stealing without knowing it was a WIP place.
Do you agree with our rules? Yes and **** yo ****, I got a mustache!
Will you use the server's official texture pack? Yup
In Character
Character name: (Last names aren't required)Morgan Stone
What is your character's race?: Human but has higher intelligence because of mental steroid
Your character's story so far: Born in Hot barren wasteland of New Mexico, Morgan was born to a trader and a prostitute mother. His mother, a Valoshan, dedicated her life to other men to get enough money for her son to join The New Mexican Militia. His father, a nation wide trader would only come home for holidays and would not stay long. Morgan learned English and mathematics from his mother but learned survival with his own curiosity. When Morgan turned 18 he went of to the New Mexican Militia, or also called Nueva Mexica Militaria. Instead of going to the front lines on the New Mexican war he stayed and trained to be an engineer. After years of training Morgan went off to (the spawn) to discover new things and help new wars and new lifes.
Does or did your character have any companions or family? Family yes!
How old is your character? around 25
Describe what your character looks like, any distinctive physical features? Long hair, Engineer # jacket, InfoWatch, and pants, he is 5'7, and very skinny.
How does your character act? He acts calm and a little shy. but his mind runs wild.
Character's occupation: Wanderer
Does your character have an education? (Read or write)character is a certified engineer and could be a pilot. Can read and write.
Any special skills that your character has, nothing unbalanced: Is very intelligent, Good with hands(fixing things), mining, hand to hand battles, speech is highly intelligent.
Does your character hate or fear anything? hates Wars, hates very complicated things to fix
Describe an example of your character in great suffering and pain (RP):* Face bruised and bleeding*
Morgan: Aghhhh....
Wanderer: how do you like that smart boy! hand over your items!
Mogan: * struggling to get up* scre....w y....ou!
Wanderer: *pulls out gun and shoots leg*
Morgan: *screaming* ahhhhh!!!
Wanderer: *calmly* take his stuff!
Morgan: Nooo....
Wanderer: *runs away with gang*
Morgan: *twisting and turning while face numbs up on the dirty ground*
Provide an image of your character's skin: long hair, Infowatchs, Boots, Engineer #on jacket.
MineCraft account name:
ximeeen
Country of Residence and Time Zone:
Norway, GMT +1
Define roleplaying in your own words, do you have any past roleplaying experiences?
I've RP'ed for many years, and I define roleplaying as acting. And living throu your character, it should never get too-over-the-edge heavy. As heavy RP only works for games intentionally made for heavy RP in my opinion.
What is your reason for applying to this server?
Used to play on a fallout server, it went to dust. So I'm looking for a new post-apocalyptic server.
Have you been banned before, if so why?
Been banned for stealin from un-protected chests on servers where people could easily protect chests.
Do you agree with our rules?
No, **** your shitty rules, I've got a mustache, and I dont need to obey any.
Will you use the server's official texture pack?
Love last days, and I will use the soundpack aswell.
In Character
Character name:
Kagen ''The Wrench''
What is your character's race?:
Human
Your character's story so far:
-Making a story without knowning key points or locations on a server is a tad bit hard, and I dis-like writing the ''fate'' for my character before I've even started, I'm also a big hater on all the ''my parents died / sacrificed bull'' so, I'll start out with a nice and easy backstory and then extend it later when I've actually made my story (in-game).
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Kagen had just arrived to Greyhope I finally after so many years saw a maybe bright future. He had been struggeling, and traveling throughout the world for the last 10 years, he had seen so much despair, poverty, and death.
Finally arriving at a city were life ''flourished'' gave him a lot of strenght. Now that he finally have arrived at this new part of the grand wasteland, he intends to continue his old endeavours. - To be continued -
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Does or did your character have any companions or family?
Kagen does have a dog, but no family.
How old is your character?
27
Describe what your character looks like, any distinctive physical features?
Kagen is a weathered scavenger, he's covered up in rags to protect his body from duststorms, he've also covered his head with bandana, and a leather cap. And on top of his head rests a pair of goggles.
How does your character act?
Kagen is a survivor, and he uses everything available to survive, he do not go as far as cannibalism. But stealing, and robbing. Even killing, if it is needed.
He's a unyielding person, and he havent got much remorse when it comes to killing, and stealing.
Character's occupation:
Scavenging the old world for goods, roaming and selling what he've gathered to larger settlements aswell as small farms, and other small encapments.
He also uses some time to build small posts around in the wasteland where he stores goods for time being.
Does your character have an education? (Read or write)
After many years of scavenging Kagen has learnt how to read after finding books during his adventures. He knows the basics of reading, but nothing more.
Any special skills that your character has, nothing unbalanced:
Re-construction / Gunsmith - After years scavenging through the wasteland, he've gained certain knowledge on how things work, and how they're built up.
Does your character hate or fear anything?
He despites alien races.
Describe an example of your character in great suffering and pain (RP):
Kagen stretched out his arm trying to reach for his last cigarette as he sees the Radiation Sweep coming, there is no shelter nearby, no caves, nothing.
All hope is lost, and he simply give into death as it comes. He moves to the nearby rubble, sits down and lights a cigarette.
After only a few moments, he starts feeling the searing heat and pain. After moments, all that is left of Kagen is a scorch mark on the spot he sat.
Forever engraved to the spot, as a memory of his demise.
Provide an image of your character's skin: http://www.planetmin...r-skin-contest/
First off, you have a poor out of character. It is minimal and does not have suffucient information. On the contrary, your in character was satisfactory, so ADMITTED. You need to provide an image of your skin to be accepted and whitelisted.
At Ruined World 2 we expect a decently sized biography. Your was minimal, and if the rest of the application wasn't as good as it was, you would be DENIED. However, the majority of your application was good, and I enjoyed it. So, ACCEPTED. You will be PMed the IP and whitelisted when I arrive home today.
Out of Character MineCraft account name: Zach_Is_Awesome
Country of Residence and Time Zone: USA, Central Standard Time
Define roleplaying in your own words, do you have any past roleplaying experiences? Roleplaying is the act of acting as another person, creature, or thing. I have been roleplaying on MC servers for a year or so now, and this is the server I am currently playing on.
What is your reason for applying to this server? I love RPing, and I miss the hell out of the original RW.
Have you been banned before, if so why? Yeah, once, but it was a trolling admin trollin' me.
Do you agree with our rules? Yep, I see no problem.
What is your opinion about our lore, does it need improvement? I like what you did with it. You were aiming for a post-apocalyptic fantasy lore, and you hit it on the head.
Will you use the server's official texture pack? Sure.
(( Ps, you guys should make the server Spout compatible. ))
In Character Character name: (Last names aren't required) Allen
Your character's story so far: Allen was born in 1978, raised a rich, Kentucky school boy. He was a natural leader, and was the 'Silver-Tongued Devil' in his town. If you wanted something, you came to him. His parents were very important people, as they controlled some of the US's Finances. Most viewed his parents as monsters during the war.
Allen grew up to be a high-ranked soldier, one with many medals filled with honor. He made a family with Hannah Jones; two children, a boy and a girl. He loved his family dearly, but still continued to slaughter people in the name of his country. Allen grew weary of his situation. He soon stopped believing in what he was fighting for. In 2017, he died small firefight with several Taliban combatants ( If that conflict is still going, if not, fill it in with something appropriate. ). His family never saw the corpse.
Little did Allen know that he was being resurrected 431 years later, by robots in an experiment called 'Project Allen'. The project was originally made by the US government to see if they could bring back dead soldiers to fight again. The project never left off, and Allen's dead body remained in Cyro. The robots found records of this project, and they thought they could make a dead human into a cyborg that could study and identify the weaknesses of the other humans above. The project was successful, but not in the way that they had hoped. Allen was too powerful, the rage in his veins at the time of death seeped though to the present, and he killed the robots before they could complete his spying protocol. Allen escaped from the underground Rob Co. facility, and into the new world, and what awaits it.
Does or did your character have any companions or family? No, Allen is completely alone, all of his family died hundreds of years ago.
How old is your character? My character is technically 470 years old, but he stopped aging at the time of death. He currently looks 37 because of the reconstructive work done to him.
Describe what your character looks like, any distinctive physical features? Allen is a muscular man, with fair hair and many scars across his body. He has one red eye from the cyborg part of him. His other eye is the blue from his birth.
How does your character act? Allen is sane, with no liking for violence(Ironically enough). He will not join into a fight unless it is necessary, but Allen can have his moments when he is angry.
Character's occupation: Allen is merely a wanderer, but he will stop in help in if anyone needs escort or protection.
Does your character have an education? (Read or write) Yes, Allen has a High School Diploma
Any special skills that your character has, nothing unbalanced: Allen is an extraordinary skill with handguns, he usually carries 2 Colt 45. on his person at all times.
Does your character hate or fear anything? Allen hates the robots, he wishes to kill them all, and will go out of his way to kill one or two of them.
Describe an example of your character in our world, be lengthy: Allen sits in his poorly made shack he calls home. He sighs. He picks up a photo of his old family, worn and tattered. A tear runs down his left check as he recollects them. He rubs the picture with his thumb. Crack. A noise is heard outside. Allen wips his head around. It's night. Mutants. He puts the picture away and draws his two pistols. He sits in a windowless corner of his shack, guns pointed twords the door. He doesn't make a sound. He doesn't sleep till morning. A normal night in the life of Allen.
Out of Character MineCraft account name: Zach_Is_Awesome
Country of Residence and Time Zone: USA, Central Standard Time
Define roleplaying in your own words, do you have any past roleplaying experiences? Roleplaying is the act of acting as another person, creature, or thing. I have been roleplaying on MC servers for a year or so now, and this is the server I am currently playing on.
What is your reason for applying to this server? I love RPing, and I miss the hell out of the original RW.
Have you been banned before, if so why? Yeah, once, but it was a trolling admin trollin' me.
Do you agree with our rules? Yep, I see no problem.
What is your opinion about our lore, does it need improvement? I like what you did with it. You were aiming for a post-apocalyptic fantasy lore, and you hit it on the head.
Will you use the server's official texture pack? Sure.
(( Ps, you guys should make the server Spout compatible. ))
In Character Character name: (Last names aren't required) Allen
Your character's story so far: Allen was born in 1978, raised a rich, Kentucky school boy. He was a natural leader, and was the 'Silver-Tongued Devil' in his town. If you wanted something, you came to him. His parents were very important people, as they controlled some of the US's Finances. Most viewed his parents as monsters during the war.
Allen grew up to be a high-ranked soldier, one with many medals filled with honor. He made a family with Hannah Jones; two children, a boy and a girl. He loved his family dearly, but still continued to slaughter people in the name of his country. Allen grew weary of his situation. He soon stopped believing in what he was fighting for. In 2017, he died small firefight with several Taliban combatants ( If that conflict is still going, if not, fill it in with something appropriate. ). His family never saw the corpse.
Little did Allen know that he was being resurrected 431 years later, by robots in an experiment called 'Project Allen'. The project was originally made by the US government to see if they could bring back dead soldiers to fight again. The project never left off, and Allen's dead body remained in Cyro. The robots found records of this project, and they thought they could make a dead human into a cyborg that could study and identify the weaknesses of the other humans above. The project was successful, but not in the way that they had hoped. Allen was too powerful, the rage in his veins at the time of death seeped though to the present, and he killed the robots before they could complete his spying protocol. Allen escaped from the underground Rob Co. facility, and into the new world, and what awaits it.
Does or did your character have any companions or family? No, Allen is completely alone, all of his family died hundreds of years ago.
How old is your character? My character is technically 470 years old, but he stopped aging at the time of death. He currently looks 37 because of the reconstructive work done to him.
Describe what your character looks like, any distinctive physical features? Allen is a muscular man, with fair hair and many scars across his body.
How does your character act? Allen is sane, with no liking for violence(Ironically enough). He will not join into a fight unless it is necessary, but Allen can have his moments when he is angry.
Character's occupation: Allen is merely a wanderer, but he will stop in help in if anyone needs escort or protection.
Does your character have an education? (Read or write) Yes, Allen has a High School Diploma
Any special skills that your character has, nothing unbalanced: Allen is an extraordinary skill with handguns, he usually carries 2 Colt 45. on his person at all times.
Does your character hate or fear anything? Allen hates the robots, he wishes to kill them all, and will go out of his way to kill one or two of them.
Describe an example of your character in our world, be lengthy: Allen sits in his poorly made shack he calls home. He sighs. He picks up a photo of his old family, worn and tattered. A tear runs down his left check as he recollects them. He rubs the picture with his thumb. Crack. A noise is heard outside. Allen wips his head around. It's night. Mutants. He puts the picture away and draws his two pistols. He sits in a windowless corner of his shack, guns pointed twords the door. He doesn't make a sound. He doesn't sleep till morning. A normal night in the life of Allen.
Provide an image of your character's skin: Will be edited in when I make the skin.
Out of Character MineCraft account name: Zach_Is_Awesome
Country of Residence and Time Zone: USA, Central Standard Time
Define roleplaying in your own words, do you have any past roleplaying experiences? Roleplaying is the act of acting as another person, creature, or thing. I have been roleplaying on MC servers for a year or so now, and this is the server I am currently playing on.
What is your reason for applying to this server? I love RPing, and I miss the hell out of the original RW.
Have you been banned before, if so why? Yeah, once, but it was a trolling admin trollin' me.
Do you agree with our rules? Yep, I see no problem.
What is your opinion about our lore, does it need improvement? I like what you did with it. You were aiming for a post-apocalyptic fantasy lore, and you hit it on the head.
Will you use the server's official texture pack? Sure.
(( Ps, you guys should make the server Spout compatible. ))
In Character Character name: (Last names aren't required) Allen
Your character's story so far: Allen was born in 1978, raised a rich, Kentucky school boy. He was a natural leader, and was the 'Silver-Tongued Devil' in his town. If you wanted something, you came to him. His parents were very important people, as they controlled some of the US's Finances. Most viewed his parents as monsters during the war.
Allen grew up to be a high-ranked soldier, one with many medals filled with honor. He made a family with Hannah Jones; two children, a boy and a girl. He loved his family dearly, but still continued to slaughter people in the name of his country. Allen grew weary of his situation. He soon stopped believing in what he was fighting for. In 2017, he died small firefight with several Taliban combatants ( If that conflict is still going, if not, fill it in with something appropriate. ). His family never saw the corpse.
Little did Allen know that he was being resurrected 431 years later, by robots in an experiment called 'Project Allen'. The project was originally made by the US government to see if they could bring back dead soldiers to fight again. The project never left off, and Allen's dead body remained in Cyro. The robots found records of this project, and they thought they could make a dead human into a cyborg that could study and identify the weaknesses of the other humans above. The project was successful, but not in the way that they had hoped. Allen was too powerful, the rage in his veins at the time of death seeped though to the present, and he killed the robots before they could complete his spying protocol. Allen escaped from the underground Rob Co. facility, and into the new world, and what awaits it.
Does or did your character have any companions or family? No, Allen is completely alone, all of his family died hundreds of years ago.
How old is your character? My character is technically 470 years old, but he stopped aging at the time of death. He currently looks 37 because of the reconstructive work done to him.
Describe what your character looks like, any distinctive physical features? Allen is a muscular man, with fair hair and many scars across his body. He has one red eye from the cyborg part of him. His other eye is the blue from his birth.
How does your character act? Allen is sane, with no liking for violence(Ironically enough). He will not join into a fight unless it is necessary, but Allen can have his moments when he is angry.
Character's occupation: Allen is merely a wanderer, but he will stop in help in if anyone needs escort or protection.
Does your character have an education? (Read or write) Yes, Allen has a High School Diploma
Any special skills that your character has, nothing unbalanced: Allen is an extraordinary skill with handguns, he usually carries 2 Colt 45. on his person at all times.
Does your character hate or fear anything? Allen hates the robots, he wishes to kill them all, and will go out of his way to kill one or two of them.
Describe an example of your character in our world, be lengthy: Allen sits in his poorly made shack he calls home. He sighs. He picks up a photo of his old family, worn and tattered. A tear runs down his left check as he recollects them. He rubs the picture with his thumb. Crack. A noise is heard outside. Allen wips his head around. It's night. Mutants. He puts the picture away and draws his two pistols. He sits in a windowless corner of his shack, guns pointed twords the door. He doesn't make a sound. He doesn't sleep till morning. A normal night in the life of Allen.
Country of Residence and Time Zone: USA Eastern Time
Define roleplaying in your own words, do you have any past roleplaying experiences? The use of a fictional character in a game to portray a alternate life or ego. Yeah. I've played some mainstream ones, like Fallout and TES. Never played a multiplayer one, but it sounds like a load of fun.
What is your reason for applying to this server? Play with friends. You guys talk about it so much and now I want to play. By the way, it's Dante. You made me want to try it out.
Have you been banned before, if so why? Nope. Hopefully won't be from this one.
Do you agree with our rules? Yep. 100%. **** yo ****, I’ve got a mustache.
Will you use the server's official texture pack? As of right now, no. Later I will.
In Character
Character name: (Last names aren't required) Creed Dorsey
What is your character's race?: Human
Your character's story so far: The year is 2430. Creed is born. His parents, Percival and Mara are proud to have a baby son. Creed grows up, learning mathematics and science. He is great at both. His father, Percival, is a warrior and hunter; His mother, a personal teacher for him. As he grew older, about 13, his father takes him hunting. Here he masters his archery. As tension grows between Greyhope and New Commensia, The Dorsey’s were caught in the middle. Many attacks were taking place between them, and the dorsey’s had an independent house, living in neither cities. In a raid in 2448, something happens. Creed hears screams in his house. They were bloodcurdling. Creed readied his bow and went through his house, clearing room by room. He thought, “Maybe a fuelbot crept through the door?”. As he walked to his parent’s room, he saw blood stains on the floor. These were drag marks. He walked into the room to see his father’s neck slit and his mother gone. There were boot marks on the floor and a note left behind. This was no ordinary raid. It was planned. The note read, “Percival lives with Mara. Do what you have to do to get her. Bring her back alive, or don’t come back at all.” Creed knew what must be done. This house was no longer safe. He went into the closet and armed himself with his father’s bow and sword. It was time for him to go out into this unforgiving world.
Does or did your character have any companions or family? Yes. His father Percival and his mother Mara.
How old is your character? 18.
Describe what your character looks like, any distinctive physical features? He is 5’9”.
He has brown hair and is thin. Very sly/stealthy.
How does your character act? He is timid and never leaves his bow. He trusts few and knows to make few connections. Creed knows great responsibility. As his father told him, "Once your blade is drawn, you must draw blood. Even if it is yours."
Character's occupation: Hunter/PMC.
Does your character have an education? (Read or write) Yes. Skilled mathematician(For archery and what not).
Any special skills that your character has, nothing unbalanced: Great archer and fighter.
Does your character hate or fear anything? The dark; can handle himself but tends to remember that night(What happened to parents).
Describe an example of your character in great suffering and pain (RP): My bow drawn, I hear the screams of agony. I slowly creep up the stairs, heading towards their room. The Sound of a slit throat, gurgling, and broken glass give me an adrenaline rush. I burst through the door, throwing my arrow through the window, scaving the intruder. He escaped. I knelt by my father’s body. “I could have come sooner.”
Provide an image of your character's skin: N/A as of right now. Having one custom made. Will be posted later.
Country of Residence and Time Zone: USA Eastern Time
Define roleplaying in your own words, do you have any past roleplaying experiences? The use of a fictional character in a game to portray a alternate life or ego.
What is your reason for applying to this server? Play with friends and roleplay.
Have you been banned before, if so why? Nope.
Do you agree with our rules? **** yo ****, I’ve got a mustache.
Will you use the server's official texture pack? As of right now, no. Later I will.
In Character
Character name: (Last names aren't required) Creed Dorsey
What is your character's race?: Human
Your character's story so far: The year is 2030. Creed is born. His parents, Percival and Mara are proud to have a baby son. Creed grows up, learning mathematics and science. He is great at both. His father, Percival, is a warrior and hunter; His mother, a personal teacher for him. As he grew older, about 13, his father takes him hunting. Here he masters his archery. As tension grows between Greyhope and New Commensia, The Dorsey’s were caught in the middle. Many attacks were taking place between them, and the dorsey’s had an independent house, living in neither cities. In a raid in 2448, something happens. Creed hears screams in his house. They were bloodcurdling. Creed readied his bow and went through his house, clearing room by room. He thought, “Maybe a fuelbot crept through the door?”. As he walked to his parent’s room, he saw blood stains on the floor. These were drag marks. He walked into the room to see his father’s neck slit and his mother gone. There were boot marks on the floor and a note left behind. This was no ordinary raid. It was planned. The note read, “Percival lives with Mara. Do what you have to do to get her. Bring her back alive, or don’t come back at all.” Creed knew what must be done. This house was no longer safe. He went into the closet and armed himself with his father’s bow and sword. It was time for him to go out into this unforgiving world.
Does or did your character have any companions or family? Yes. His father Percival and his mother Mara.
How old is your character? 18.
Describe what your character looks like, any distinctive physical features? He is 5’9”.
He has brown hair and is thin. Very sly/stealthy.
How does your character act? He is timid and never leaves his bow. He trusts few and knows to make few connections.
Character's occupation: Hunter/PMC.
Does your character have an education? (Read or write) Yes. Skilled mathematician(For archery and what not).
Any special skills that your character has, nothing unbalanced: Great archer and fighter.
Does your character hate or fear anything? The dark; can handle himself but tends to remember that night(What happened to parents).
Describe an example of your character in great suffering and pain (RP): My bow drawn, I hear the screams of agony. I slowly creep up the stairs, heading towards their room. The Sound of a slit throat, gurgling, and broken glass give me an adrenaline rush. I burst through the door, throwing my arrow through the window, scaving the intruder. He escaped. I knelt by my father’s body. “I could have come sooner.”
Provide an image of your character's skin: N/A as of right now. Having one custom made. Will be posted later.
I'm guessing you made a mistake regarding to first date (2030). Please alter that, expand on the OOC slightly, and show us the skin. You would then be accepted.
I'm guessing you made a mistake regarding to first date (2030). Please alter that, expand on the OOC slightly, and show us the skin. You would then be accepted.
Revised. Awaiting the skin from another member of the forum.
1. The whole pants and knowledge of his junk thing was not needed at all.
2. Spells are not possible, unless AJ personally said and will post on here that he said it was fine because i am not beliveing that you know him without evidence.
3. The describe your character in deep emotion/ pain is when you put in how a character reacts to something, how they deal with being injured, how they talk to another person, and how they deal with certain situations
4. All governments were dissolved only settlements and certain other residences are existant
5. World known is not possible as Communications are still horrid and theres no true way to contact someone across the world without relays.
6. Who are the Cronks?
7. Maybe you can expand more on who killed Keizaal and why other than saying one of his victim's child found him and murdered him, but i can understand if you wish to leave it out.
8. How can one be stealthy when their over 7ft tall, i can understand if hes not that heavybuilt, but since hes suppoesdly "The strongest being in the world" he'd be noisey when stepping due to muscle mass adding weight.
9. simply the backstory could do some work.
So in conclusion DENIED
just try to fix up those problems and we'll see if youll get whitelisted.
People say Beauty is in the eye of the Beholder. So let's cut that eye open right now, gimme a knife.
Because I act the exact same way as the guy who commented?
As an example he could have said that in an entirely other way, and given some constructiv criticism instead of a short NEED.
Not intending to cause any drama, but I like it when people actually reads the entire application / post.
I also edited both posts right after his comment aswell, giving reason for my decision aswell also implying that I indeed know that I need to write a Story, but that I was hoping for a possibility to start out with a cleaner story, instead of adding a whole lot of drama as I see in every other application. (On all MC RP servers basically.
As for the picture, it was added as a joke, not an insult.
Just my two cents.
Edit: Removed the Picture, due to the size of it in the aftermath.
Oh hell no! DENIED. DAN GTFO
Its hard to tell whether someone is simply trolling or joking when your reading their post.
I edited my reply as well.
And i am not trying to start anything. it was simply reactionary.
People say Beauty is in the eye of the Beholder. So let's cut that eye open right now, gimme a knife.
Good to hear that it's settled then, I'll re-post with a finished backstory then I suppose.
-Ximeeen
Alrighty then. ill just let the others handle the apps for now since ima get off this.
People say Beauty is in the eye of the Beholder. So let's cut that eye open right now, gimme a knife.
Out of Character
MineCraft account name: coolboi360
Country of Residence and Time Zone: Michigan timezone in America
Define roleplaying in your own words, do you have any past roleplaying experiences? I've played on 3 other role play servers and played fallout 3 and new Vegas including Skyrim.
What is your reason for applying to this server? Post apocalyptic survival
Have you been banned before, if so why? Once, for stealing without knowing it was a WIP place.
Do you agree with our rules? Yes and **** yo ****, I got a mustache!
Will you use the server's official texture pack? Yup
In Character
Character name: (Last names aren't required)Morgan Stone
What is your character's race?: Human but has higher intelligence because of mental steroid
Your character's story so far: Born in Hot barren wasteland of New Mexico, Morgan was born to a trader and a prostitute mother. His mother, a Valoshan, dedicated her life to other men to get enough money for her son to join The New Mexican Militia. His father, a nation wide trader would only come home for holidays and would not stay long. Morgan learned English and mathematics from his mother but learned survival with his own curiosity. When Morgan turned 18 he went of to the New Mexican Militia, or also called Nueva Mexica Militaria. Instead of going to the front lines on the New Mexican war he stayed and trained to be an engineer. After years of training Morgan went off to (the spawn) to discover new things and help new wars and new lifes.
Does or did your character have any companions or family? Family yes!
How old is your character? around 25
Describe what your character looks like, any distinctive physical features? Long hair, Engineer # jacket, InfoWatch, and pants, he is 5'7, and very skinny.
How does your character act? He acts calm and a little shy. but his mind runs wild.
Character's occupation: Wanderer
Does your character have an education? (Read or write)character is a certified engineer and could be a pilot. Can read and write.
Any special skills that your character has, nothing unbalanced: Is very intelligent, Good with hands(fixing things), mining, hand to hand battles, speech is highly intelligent.
Does your character hate or fear anything? hates Wars, hates very complicated things to fix
Describe an example of your character in great suffering and pain (RP):* Face bruised and bleeding*
Morgan: Aghhhh....
Wanderer: how do you like that smart boy! hand over your items!
Mogan: * struggling to get up* scre....w y....ou!
Wanderer: *pulls out gun and shoots leg*
Morgan: *screaming* ahhhhh!!!
Wanderer: *calmly* take his stuff!
Morgan: Nooo....
Wanderer: *runs away with gang*
Morgan: *twisting and turning while face numbs up on the dirty ground*
Provide an image of your character's skin: long hair, Infowatchs, Boots, Engineer #on jacket.
MineCraft account name:
ximeeen
Country of Residence and Time Zone:
Norway, GMT +1
Define roleplaying in your own words, do you have any past roleplaying experiences?
I've RP'ed for many years, and I define roleplaying as acting. And living throu your character, it should never get too-over-the-edge heavy. As heavy RP only works for games intentionally made for heavy RP in my opinion.
What is your reason for applying to this server?
Used to play on a fallout server, it went to dust. So I'm looking for a new post-apocalyptic server.
Have you been banned before, if so why?
Been banned for stealin from un-protected chests on servers where people could easily protect chests.
Do you agree with our rules?
No, **** your shitty rules, I've got a mustache, and I dont need to obey any.
Will you use the server's official texture pack?
Love last days, and I will use the soundpack aswell.
In Character
Character name:
Kagen ''The Wrench''
What is your character's race?:
Human
Your character's story so far:
-Making a story without knowning key points or locations on a server is a tad bit hard, and I dis-like writing the ''fate'' for my character before I've even started, I'm also a big hater on all the ''my parents died / sacrificed bull'' so, I'll start out with a nice and easy backstory and then extend it later when I've actually made my story (in-game).
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Kagen had just arrived to Greyhope I finally after so many years saw a maybe bright future. He had been struggeling, and traveling throughout the world for the last 10 years, he had seen so much despair, poverty, and death.
Finally arriving at a city were life ''flourished'' gave him a lot of strenght. Now that he finally have arrived at this new part of the grand wasteland, he intends to continue his old endeavours. - To be continued -
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Does or did your character have any companions or family?
Kagen does have a dog, but no family.
How old is your character?
27
Describe what your character looks like, any distinctive physical features?
Kagen is a weathered scavenger, he's covered up in rags to protect his body from duststorms, he've also covered his head with bandana, and a leather cap. And on top of his head rests a pair of goggles.
How does your character act?
Kagen is a survivor, and he uses everything available to survive, he do not go as far as cannibalism. But stealing, and robbing. Even killing, if it is needed.
He's a unyielding person, and he havent got much remorse when it comes to killing, and stealing.
Character's occupation:
Scavenging the old world for goods, roaming and selling what he've gathered to larger settlements aswell as small farms, and other small encapments.
He also uses some time to build small posts around in the wasteland where he stores goods for time being.
Does your character have an education? (Read or write)
After many years of scavenging Kagen has learnt how to read after finding books during his adventures. He knows the basics of reading, but nothing more.
Any special skills that your character has, nothing unbalanced:
Re-construction / Gunsmith - After years scavenging through the wasteland, he've gained certain knowledge on how things work, and how they're built up.
Does your character hate or fear anything?
He despites alien races.
Describe an example of your character in great suffering and pain (RP):
Kagen stretched out his arm trying to reach for his last cigarette as he sees the Radiation Sweep coming, there is no shelter nearby, no caves, nothing.
All hope is lost, and he simply give into death as it comes. He moves to the nearby rubble, sits down and lights a cigarette.
After only a few moments, he starts feeling the searing heat and pain. After moments, all that is left of Kagen is a scorch mark on the spot he sat.
Forever engraved to the spot, as a memory of his demise.
Provide an image of your character's skin:
http://www.planetmin...r-skin-contest/
First off, you have a poor out of character. It is minimal and does not have suffucient information. On the contrary, your in character was satisfactory, so ADMITTED. You need to provide an image of your skin to be accepted and whitelisted.
At Ruined World 2 we expect a decently sized biography. Your was minimal, and if the rest of the application wasn't as good as it was, you would be DENIED. However, the majority of your application was good, and I enjoyed it. So, ACCEPTED. You will be PMed the IP and whitelisted when I arrive home today.
MineCraft account name: Zach_Is_Awesome
Country of Residence and Time Zone: USA, Central Standard Time
Define roleplaying in your own words, do you have any past roleplaying experiences? Roleplaying is the act of acting as another person, creature, or thing. I have been roleplaying on MC servers for a year or so now, and this is the server I am currently playing on.
What is your reason for applying to this server? I love RPing, and I miss the hell out of the original RW.
Have you been banned before, if so why? Yeah, once, but it was a trolling admin trollin' me.
Do you agree with our rules? Yep, I see no problem.
What is your opinion about our lore, does it need improvement? I like what you did with it. You were aiming for a post-apocalyptic fantasy lore, and you hit it on the head.
Will you use the server's official texture pack? Sure.
(( Ps, you guys should make the server Spout compatible. ))
In Character
Character name: (Last names aren't required) Allen
Your character's story so far: Allen was born in 1978, raised a rich, Kentucky school boy. He was a natural leader, and was the 'Silver-Tongued Devil' in his town. If you wanted something, you came to him. His parents were very important people, as they controlled some of the US's Finances. Most viewed his parents as monsters during the war.
Allen grew up to be a high-ranked soldier, one with many medals filled with honor. He made a family with Hannah Jones; two children, a boy and a girl. He loved his family dearly, but still continued to slaughter people in the name of his country. Allen grew weary of his situation. He soon stopped believing in what he was fighting for. In 2017, he died small firefight with several Taliban combatants ( If that conflict is still going, if not, fill it in with something appropriate. ). His family never saw the corpse.
Little did Allen know that he was being resurrected 431 years later, by robots in an experiment called 'Project Allen'. The project was originally made by the US government to see if they could bring back dead soldiers to fight again. The project never left off, and Allen's dead body remained in Cyro. The robots found records of this project, and they thought they could make a dead human into a cyborg that could study and identify the weaknesses of the other humans above. The project was successful, but not in the way that they had hoped. Allen was too powerful, the rage in his veins at the time of death seeped though to the present, and he killed the robots before they could complete his spying protocol. Allen escaped from the underground Rob Co. facility, and into the new world, and what awaits it.
Does or did your character have any companions or family? No, Allen is completely alone, all of his family died hundreds of years ago.
How old is your character? My character is technically 470 years old, but he stopped aging at the time of death. He currently looks 37 because of the reconstructive work done to him.
Describe what your character looks like, any distinctive physical features? Allen is a muscular man, with fair hair and many scars across his body. He has one red eye from the cyborg part of him. His other eye is the blue from his birth.
How does your character act? Allen is sane, with no liking for violence(Ironically enough). He will not join into a fight unless it is necessary, but Allen can have his moments when he is angry.
Character's occupation: Allen is merely a wanderer, but he will stop in help in if anyone needs escort or protection.
Does your character have an education? (Read or write) Yes, Allen has a High School Diploma
Any special skills that your character has, nothing unbalanced: Allen is an extraordinary skill with handguns, he usually carries 2 Colt 45. on his person at all times.
Does your character hate or fear anything? Allen hates the robots, he wishes to kill them all, and will go out of his way to kill one or two of them.
Describe an example of your character in our world, be lengthy: Allen sits in his poorly made shack he calls home. He sighs. He picks up a photo of his old family, worn and tattered. A tear runs down his left check as he recollects them. He rubs the picture with his thumb. Crack. A noise is heard outside. Allen wips his head around. It's night. Mutants. He puts the picture away and draws his two pistols. He sits in a windowless corner of his shack, guns pointed twords the door. He doesn't make a sound. He doesn't sleep till morning. A normal night in the life of Allen.
Provide an image of your character's skin:
PS, **** YO ****! I've got a mustache!
Admitted. Waiting for the skin.
Edited.
Then accepted.
MineCraft account name: Dusty556
Country of Residence and Time Zone: USA Eastern Time
Define roleplaying in your own words, do you have any past roleplaying experiences? The use of a fictional character in a game to portray a alternate life or ego. Yeah. I've played some mainstream ones, like Fallout and TES. Never played a multiplayer one, but it sounds like a load of fun.
What is your reason for applying to this server? Play with friends. You guys talk about it so much and now I want to play. By the way, it's Dante. You made me want to try it out.
Have you been banned before, if so why? Nope. Hopefully won't be from this one.
Do you agree with our rules? Yep. 100%. **** yo ****, I’ve got a mustache.
Will you use the server's official texture pack? As of right now, no. Later I will.
In Character
Character name: (Last names aren't required) Creed Dorsey
What is your character's race?: Human
Your character's story so far: The year is 2430. Creed is born. His parents, Percival and Mara are proud to have a baby son. Creed grows up, learning mathematics and science. He is great at both. His father, Percival, is a warrior and hunter; His mother, a personal teacher for him. As he grew older, about 13, his father takes him hunting. Here he masters his archery. As tension grows between Greyhope and New Commensia, The Dorsey’s were caught in the middle. Many attacks were taking place between them, and the dorsey’s had an independent house, living in neither cities. In a raid in 2448, something happens. Creed hears screams in his house. They were bloodcurdling. Creed readied his bow and went through his house, clearing room by room. He thought, “Maybe a fuelbot crept through the door?”. As he walked to his parent’s room, he saw blood stains on the floor. These were drag marks. He walked into the room to see his father’s neck slit and his mother gone. There were boot marks on the floor and a note left behind. This was no ordinary raid. It was planned. The note read, “Percival lives with Mara. Do what you have to do to get her. Bring her back alive, or don’t come back at all.” Creed knew what must be done. This house was no longer safe. He went into the closet and armed himself with his father’s bow and sword. It was time for him to go out into this unforgiving world.
Does or did your character have any companions or family? Yes. His father Percival and his mother Mara.
How old is your character? 18.
Describe what your character looks like, any distinctive physical features? He is 5’9”.
He has brown hair and is thin. Very sly/stealthy.
How does your character act? He is timid and never leaves his bow. He trusts few and knows to make few connections. Creed knows great responsibility. As his father told him, "Once your blade is drawn, you must draw blood. Even if it is yours."
Character's occupation: Hunter/PMC.
Does your character have an education? (Read or write) Yes. Skilled mathematician(For archery and what not).
Any special skills that your character has, nothing unbalanced: Great archer and fighter.
Does your character hate or fear anything? The dark; can handle himself but tends to remember that night(What happened to parents).
Describe an example of your character in great suffering and pain (RP): My bow drawn, I hear the screams of agony. I slowly creep up the stairs, heading towards their room. The Sound of a slit throat, gurgling, and broken glass give me an adrenaline rush. I burst through the door, throwing my arrow through the window, scaving the intruder. He escaped. I knelt by my father’s body. “I could have come sooner.”
Provide an image of your character's skin: N/A as of right now. Having one custom made. Will be posted later.
I'm guessing you made a mistake regarding to first date (2030). Please alter that, expand on the OOC slightly, and show us the skin. You would then be accepted.
Revised. Awaiting the skin from another member of the forum.
Zach_is_Awesome
Ximeen
Dante?