Character Name: (First and last) Kog Quarrywarrior
Character Race: (See below) Dwarf
Character Description: An unusually small dwarf, approximately 4' tall, with red hair and a long beard to match. Has naturally tan-colored skin. Still fresh in his prime, yet decorated with scars. His clothing is of an orange taint, along with a gold headband.
Character Bio: An average, yet short, dwarf whom has a great taste for ale, and doesn't like those who can't keep up at drinking it.
Character History: Kog, being a dwarf and from a mining family, was to become a simple miner. He had trouble fitting in with the others of his race, so he ran away from his homeland in hopes to find a purpose, or even a friend. After a long time of running and surviving, the small dwarf stumbled across a cave. He could sense something strange about the cave, but felt compelled to go further in. After a few hours of hopeless searching, and getting lost, he came to a door. Hope glimmered in his eyes as he rushed through the door, only to find a table in front of him. Upon the table laid a marvelous stone. Being as tired as he was, he didn't think before grabbing the stone for himself. A voice boomed inside his head, "Your place is not here, mortal... Your destiny lies elsewhere!" And everything went black. When Kog had awoken, he was on a ship, which had just arrived to a town called Tenoth...
Character Class: Thief
Place of Birth: Cratisha
Prolly could add some more to the description/bio, but kinda, sorta really tired :tongue.gif: Hope that helps you get in :smile.gif:
The Meaning of Life, the Universe, and Everything.
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First Name: Desley
Basics
Minecraft User Name: Si7VdeR
How long have you been playing SMP?: 3 months I'm not sure.
Do you have RP Experience?: Yes about 5 years.
What is your birthday?: (ex. M/D/Y 6/1/2011)
Role Play
Character Name: Brandy
Character Race: Human
Character Description: Strong Warrior that has decided to live away from his clan.
Character Bio: Quiet, friendly, young, strong warrior, can't wait to go on adventures with friends.
Character History: He lived in a little village not very far away and he had to hunt that night but fell in love with the chiefs daughter and then got banished from his clan, he never accepted it and says he left volontairly.
Character Class: Warrior
Place of Birth: The Quiet village of Cratisha
I read rule 3: Cupcakes.
First Name:Collin
Basics
Minecraft User Name:(This is what we add to the whitelist) piffboy6
How long have you been playing SMP?:since December of 2010
Do you have RP Experience?:yes Siege craft and alot
What is your birthday?: (ex. M/D/Y 6/1/2011) 11/18/1996
Character Name: (First and last) Kog Quarrywarrior
Character Race: (See below) Dwarf
Character Description: An unusually small dwarf, approximately 4' tall, with redish hair and a long beard to match. Has naturally dark tan-colored skin. He is decorated with scars. His clothing is of an orange taint, along with a gold hairband.
Character Bio: An average dwarf that has a great taste for ale and hates those who don’t drink it because their lack of taste for alcohol.
Character History: Being the only child of a miner and a merchant was hard for Kog. So since he didn’t fell important because he parents were never paying any attention to him he ran away after running for a while he came across a small cave. There was something strange about this one cave. He walked in, after what had felt hours of searching he came across two torches. One on the right and one on the left they were right next to two tunnels. He rushed down the right tunnel not knowing where he is at until he came across a small iron door. He tried pushing and pulling the door but it wouldn’t budge. But shortly he found a little lever and he pulled it, after a few seconds the door slowly creeped open. Kog slowly walked in the room and stopped. There was a small little stone on a table. Quickly Kog ran to it and snatched off the table. Not knowing what it was he heard a deep voice, like a voice of a demon then he saw the man a small red skinned demon with horns two feet long. The red demon leaped at Kog and hit him on his head with a long stone object. Shortly Kog blacked out and several days later he woke up in a ship that was docked in the lands called Immortalus.
Basics
Minecraft User Name: Si7VdeR
How long have you been playing SMP?: 3 months I'm not sure.
Do you have RP Experience?: Yes about 5 years.
What is your birthday?: (ex. M/D/Y 6/1/2011) TOMORROW :smile.gif: , 06/22/2011 was born in 1994 if u mean date of birth.
Role Play
Character Name: Joey Brandy
Character Race: Human
Character Description: Strong Warrior that has decided to live away from his clan.
Character Bio: Age: 30, Name: Joey, was a strong warrior who got banished from his clan.
Character History: He lived in a little village not very far away and he had to hunt that night but fell in love with the chiefs daughter and then got banished from his clan, he never accepted it and says he left volontairly.
Character Class: Warrior
Place of Birth: Egypt. Well some kind of Dessert city far away.
I read rule 3: Cupcakes.
Bio is a description of your character's personality, you might need to flesh out your history and you need a birthplace. You can't be born in an IRL place! =) Choose one of the three birth places. ^^
Racial benefits removed due to people choosing Demon too much. Every race is now equal. To people who thought they would be able to TP into the nether on will: The plugin never worked anyways.
The Meaning of Life, the Universe, and Everything.
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Reposted it and editted dunno wich one I had to do so I did both.
First Name: Desley
Basics
Minecraft User Name: Si7VdeR
How long have you been playing SMP?: 3 months I'm not sure.
Do you have RP Experience?: Yes about 5 years.
What is your birthday?: (ex. M/D/Y 6/1/2011) TO
Role Play
Character Name: Brandy
Character Race: Human
Character Description: Strong Warrior that has decided to live away from his clan.
Character Bio: Quiet, friendly, young, strong warrior, can't wait to go on adventures with friends.
Character History: He lived in a little village not very far away and he had to hunt that night but fell in love with the chiefs daughter and then got banished from his clan, he never accepted it and says he left volontairly.
Character Class: Warrior
Place of Birth: The Quiet village of Cratisha
I read rule 3: Cupcakes.
First Name:Collin
Basics
Minecraft User Name:(This is what we add to the whitelist) piffboy6
How long have you been playing SMP?:since December of 2010
Do you have RP Experience?:yes Siege craft and alot
What is your birthday?: (ex. M/D/Y 6/1/2011) 11/18/1996
Character Name: (First and last) Kog Quarrywarrior
Character Race: (See below) Dwarf
Character Description: An unusually small dwarf, approximately 4' tall, with redish hair and a long beard to match. Has naturally dark tan-colored skin.He is decorated with scars. His clothing is of an orange taint, along with a gold hairband.
Character Bio: An average dwarf that has a great taste for ale and hates those who dont drink it because their lack of taste for achol.
Character History: Being the only child of a minner and a merchant was hard for Kog. So since he didnt fell important because he parents were never paying any atention to him. Sohe ran away after running for a while he came across a small cave. There was something strange about this one cave. So he walked in,after what had felt hours of searching he came across two torches. One on the right and one on the left they where right next to two tunnels. So he rushed down the right tunnel not knowing where he is at untill he came across a small iron door. He tried pushing and pulling the door but itwouldntbudge. But shortly he found a little lever and he pulled it, after a few seconds the door slowly creeped open. Kog slowly walked in the room and stoped. There was a small little stone on a table. Quickly Kog ran to it and snatched off the table. Not knowing what it was he heard a deep voice,like a voice of a demon then he saw the man a small redskined demon with horns 2write out numbers under 100. two, seventy-two etc. feet long. Then Kog blacked out not knowing what happened he woke up on a boat docked in a land called Immortalus!Why?
Character Class: Thief
Place of Birth: Cratisha
A.) Sorry, but I can't even understand your story's beginning because:
i. Too many "so"s
ii. Your second sentence makes absolutely no sense grammatically.
B.) You still have spelling errors. You are complaining about how long it takes us to white list? Maybe if you spent a little less time complaining, and a little more time putting effort into a fantastic application you'd already be on the server.
C.) Whining. You whine. A lot. People on the server actually ask me if I intend on white-listing you after all the whining. It doesn't improve your odds of getting on the server, it actually decreases them. Please stop whining.
D.)Among the varied misspelled words and improperly formatted sentences: apostrophes these are important. wouldnt (Red lines pop up, spelling errors are inexcusable when you have a spell check built into the forums.) is written as wouldn't would not. wouldn't
E.)The more you post, the harder we are on your application.
F.)Even if we whitelisted you, you'd have to keep the proper grammar up in order to remain whitelisted.
So please. Take a little more then five minutes next time to do this. You've been trying since we started and have yet to get in for a reason. It's not that we "hate" you or "just don't want to play with you" as you have whined about in the past. It's that your applications are consistently sub-par.
A.) Sorry, but I can't even understand your story's beginning because:
i. Too many "so"s
ii. Your second sentence makes absolutely no sense grammatically.
B.) You still have spelling errors. You are complaining about how long it takes us to white list? Maybe if you spent a little less time complaining, and a little more time putting effort into a fantastic application you'd already be on the server.
C.) Whining. You whine. A lot. People on the server actually ask me if I intend on white-listing you after all the whining. It doesn't improve your odds of getting on the server, it actually decreases them. Please stop whining.
D.)Among the varied misspelled words and improperly formatted sentences: apostrophes these are important. wouldnt (Red lines pop up, spelling errors are inexcusable when you have a spell check built into the forums.) is written as wouldn't would not. wouldn't
E.)The more you post, the harder we are on your application.
F.)Even if we whitelisted you, you'd have to keep the proper grammar up in order to remain whitelisted.
So please. Take a little more then five minutes next time to do this. You've been trying since we started and have yet to get in for a reason. It's not that we "hate" you or "just don't want to play with you" as you have whined about in the past. It's that your applications are consistently sub-par.
Key: Awkward sentences Misspelled words/other
dude i was not going to use this one good im still waiting on you guys to check my other one
First Name:Collin
Basics
Minecraft User Name:(This is what we add to the whitelist) piffboy6
How long have you been playing SMP?:since December of 2010
Do you have RP Experience?:yes Siege craft and alot
What is your birthday?: (ex. M/D/Y 6/1/2011) 11/18/1996
Character Name: (First and last) Kog Quarrywarrior
Character Race: (See below) Dwarf
Character Description: An unusually small dwarf, approximately 4' tall, with redish hair and a long beard to match. Has naturally dark tan-colored skin. He is decorated with scars. His clothing is of an orange taint, along with a gold hairband.
Character Bio: An average dwarf that has a great taste for ale and hates those who don’t drink it because their lack of taste for alcohol.
Character History: Being the only child of a miner and a merchant was hard for Kog. So since he didn’t fell important because he parents were never paying any attention to him he ran away after running for a while he came across a small cave. There was something strange about this one cave. He walked in, after what had felt hours of searching he came across two torches. One on the right and one on the left they were right next to two tunnels. He rushed down the right tunnel not knowing where he is at until he came across a small iron door. He tried pushing and pulling the door but it wouldn’t budge. But shortly he found a little lever and he pulled it, after a few seconds the door slowly creeped open. Kog slowly walked in the room and stopped. There was a small little stone on a table. Quickly Kog ran to it and snatched off the table. Not knowing what it was he heard a deep voice, like a voice of a demon then he saw the man a small red skinned demon with horns two feet long. The red demon leaped at Kog and hit him on his head with a long stone object. Shortly Kog blacked out and several days later he woke up in a ship that was docked in the lands called Immortalus.
The Meaning of Life, the Universe, and Everything.
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Quickscope your awesome at spamming the thread and you didn't read the first post and because you spammed I think 4 of us that were waiting for a reply are now forgotten so read back up pls -.-
First Name: Alex
Basics
Minecraft User Name: stlrs05
How long have you been playing SMP?: About 2 months
Do you have RP Experience?: I have a little
What is your birthday?: 2/19/1998
Role Play
Character Name: Crysthallyn Sanctumus
Character Race: Elf
Character Description: Age: 18; Height: 6,1; Weight: 211. Has bad vision due to an alchemy accident.
Character Bio: Loves to read books about magic and alchemy when he is not working.
Character History: Born in the elven city of Flutius Crysthallyn started his liking of magic when he was five. As the years passed be became a powerful mage, One day he was working in the alchemy lab at the edge of the city when he accidntly spilled a chemical and the whole lab blew up. He awoke laying down on some grass with blurred vision and he saw Flutius floating past him. Crysthallyn knew about the magical barrier surrounding the city and he wouldn't get in again. He started walking around trying to find help. He traveled for months when he saw a city in the distance and he went over the the city's port and started talking to people. When he talked to one person he said he was going to immortalis. He offered to bring Crysthallyn to immortis and he accepted the invintation.
i also have a feeling that nobody wants me on this server
because of those people that ask if your still going to whitelist me
see this:
So please. Take a little more then five minutes next time to do this. You've been trying since we started and have yet to get in for a reason. It's not that we "hate" you or "just don't want to play with you" as you have whined about in the past. It's that your applications are consistently sub-par.
And the reason I'm waiting to whitelist for so long is that I am going on vacation in a day or two so I'm waiting to get as many people in as possible.
No you didn't,
dude you just coppied all my stuff
He just helped making your app better.
still i could make it my self but thanks for trying
Basics
Minecraft User Name: Si7VdeR
How long have you been playing SMP?: 3 months I'm not sure.
Do you have RP Experience?: Yes about 5 years.
What is your birthday?: (ex. M/D/Y 6/1/2011)
Role Play
Character Name: Brandy
Character Race: Human
Character Description: Strong Warrior that has decided to live away from his clan.
Character Bio: Quiet, friendly, young, strong warrior, can't wait to go on adventures with friends.
Character History: He lived in a little village not very far away and he had to hunt that night but fell in love with the chiefs daughter and then got banished from his clan, he never accepted it and says he left volontairly.
Character Class: Warrior
Place of Birth: The Quiet village of Cratisha
I read rule 3: Cupcakes.
Basics
Minecraft User Name:(This is what we add to the whitelist) piffboy6
How long have you been playing SMP?:since December of 2010
Do you have RP Experience?:yes Siege craft and alot
What is your birthday?: (ex. M/D/Y 6/1/2011) 11/18/1996
Character Name: (First and last) Kog Quarrywarrior
Character Race: (See below) Dwarf
Character Description: An unusually small dwarf, approximately 4' tall, with redish hair and a long beard to match. Has naturally dark tan-colored skin. He is decorated with scars. His clothing is of an orange taint, along with a gold hairband.
Character Bio: An average dwarf that has a great taste for ale and hates those who don’t drink it because their lack of taste for alcohol.
Character History: Being the only child of a miner and a merchant was hard for Kog. So since he didn’t fell important because he parents were never paying any attention to him he ran away after running for a while he came across a small cave. There was something strange about this one cave. He walked in, after what had felt hours of searching he came across two torches. One on the right and one on the left they were right next to two tunnels. He rushed down the right tunnel not knowing where he is at until he came across a small iron door. He tried pushing and pulling the door but it wouldn’t budge. But shortly he found a little lever and he pulled it, after a few seconds the door slowly creeped open. Kog slowly walked in the room and stopped. There was a small little stone on a table. Quickly Kog ran to it and snatched off the table. Not knowing what it was he heard a deep voice, like a voice of a demon then he saw the man a small red skinned demon with horns two feet long. The red demon leaped at Kog and hit him on his head with a long stone object. Shortly Kog blacked out and several days later he woke up in a ship that was docked in the lands called Immortalus.
Character Class: Thief
Place of Birth: Cratisha
Bio is a description of your character's personality, you might need to flesh out your history and you need a birthplace. You can't be born in an IRL place! =) Choose one of the three birth places. ^^
First Name: Desley
Basics
Minecraft User Name: Si7VdeR
How long have you been playing SMP?: 3 months I'm not sure.
Do you have RP Experience?: Yes about 5 years.
What is your birthday?: (ex. M/D/Y 6/1/2011) TO
Role Play
Character Name: Brandy
Character Race: Human
Character Description: Strong Warrior that has decided to live away from his clan.
Character Bio: Quiet, friendly, young, strong warrior, can't wait to go on adventures with friends.
Character History: He lived in a little village not very far away and he had to hunt that night but fell in love with the chiefs daughter and then got banished from his clan, he never accepted it and says he left volontairly.
Character Class: Warrior
Place of Birth: The Quiet village of Cratisha
I read rule 3: Cupcakes.
A.) Sorry, but I can't even understand your story's beginning because:
i. Too many "so"s
ii. Your second sentence makes absolutely no sense grammatically.
B.) You still have spelling errors. You are complaining about how long it takes us to white list? Maybe if you spent a little less time complaining, and a little more time putting effort into a fantastic application you'd already be on the server.
C.) Whining. You whine. A lot. People on the server actually ask me if I intend on white-listing you after all the whining. It doesn't improve your odds of getting on the server, it actually decreases them. Please stop whining.
D.)Among the varied misspelled words and improperly formatted sentences: apostrophes these are important. wouldnt (Red lines pop up, spelling errors are inexcusable when you have a spell check built into the forums.) is written as wouldn't would not. wouldn't
E.)The more you post, the harder we are on your application.
F.)Even if we whitelisted you, you'd have to keep the proper grammar up in order to remain whitelisted.
So please. Take a little more then five minutes next time to do this. You've been trying since we started and have yet to get in for a reason. It's not that we "hate" you or "just don't want to play with you" as you have whined about in the past. It's that your applications are consistently sub-par.
Key:
Awkward sentences
Misspelled words/other
dude i was not going to use this one good im still waiting on you guys to check my other one
because of those people that ask if your still going to whitelist me
Basics
Minecraft User Name:(This is what we add to the whitelist) piffboy6
How long have you been playing SMP?:since December of 2010
Do you have RP Experience?:yes Siege craft and alot
What is your birthday?: (ex. M/D/Y 6/1/2011) 11/18/1996
Character Name: (First and last) Kog Quarrywarrior
Character Race: (See below) Dwarf
Character Description: An unusually small dwarf, approximately 4' tall, with redish hair and a long beard to match. Has naturally dark tan-colored skin. He is decorated with scars. His clothing is of an orange taint, along with a gold hairband.
Character Bio: An average dwarf that has a great taste for ale and hates those who don’t drink it because their lack of taste for alcohol.
Character History: Being the only child of a miner and a merchant was hard for Kog. So since he didn’t fell important because he parents were never paying any attention to him he ran away after running for a while he came across a small cave. There was something strange about this one cave. He walked in, after what had felt hours of searching he came across two torches. One on the right and one on the left they were right next to two tunnels. He rushed down the right tunnel not knowing where he is at until he came across a small iron door. He tried pushing and pulling the door but it wouldn’t budge. But shortly he found a little lever and he pulled it, after a few seconds the door slowly creeped open. Kog slowly walked in the room and stopped. There was a small little stone on a table. Quickly Kog ran to it and snatched off the table. Not knowing what it was he heard a deep voice, like a voice of a demon then he saw the man a small red skinned demon with horns two feet long. The red demon leaped at Kog and hit him on his head with a long stone object. Shortly Kog blacked out and several days later he woke up in a ship that was docked in the lands called Immortalus.
Character Class: Thief
Place of Birth: Cratisha
Basics
Minecraft User Name: stlrs05
How long have you been playing SMP?: About 2 months
Do you have RP Experience?: I have a little
What is your birthday?: 2/19/1998
Role Play
Character Name: Crysthallyn Sanctumus
Character Race: Elf
Character Description: Age: 18; Height: 6,1; Weight: 211. Has bad vision due to an alchemy accident.
Character Bio: Loves to read books about magic and alchemy when he is not working.
Character History: Born in the elven city of Flutius Crysthallyn started his liking of magic when he was five. As the years passed be became a powerful mage, One day he was working in the alchemy lab at the edge of the city when he accidntly spilled a chemical and the whole lab blew up. He awoke laying down on some grass with blurred vision and he saw Flutius floating past him. Crysthallyn knew about the magical barrier surrounding the city and he wouldn't get in again. He started walking around trying to find help. He traveled for months when he saw a city in the distance and he went over the the city's port and started talking to people. When he talked to one person he said he was going to immortalis. He offered to bring Crysthallyn to immortis and he accepted the invintation.
Character Class: Light Mage
Place of Birth: Flutius
I read rule 3: Cupcakes.
see this:
Nah, just trying to help :smile.gif: