Assuming the demons are looking in the nether for the portals and destroying those ones, then wouldn't players in the normal world just need to reignite the portal in their home to get it working again? Even if they popped up in my home and dismantled that portal instead (which would count as griefing me thinks) I could always just get more obsidian.
Ah, we can always just say they felt it was invading their realm or [insert corporate lies here]. Seriously, the demons (plus me) could just start a war with anyone who comes into the nether. Really, there are many ways around this, most of them including money.
Yes, they would destroy the portal in your house, and, would you go get obsidian after your portal has been destoyed n times? Or pay a relatively cheaper price that the demon merchants are selling at. Face it, nothing can beat a corporate cover up (apart from the media, but god help us if this server develops one).
Kubari
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PlasticSmoothie
Exelbirth
Kaldurenik
ZAKK9090
Corey40108
Nelluc20
Willie900
Fetish
Superior_Tomato
Zeroquest
dragon5366
allecwillis00
Angoron (Come up with a better last name please)
PerrinB
Makeyejr
Sharkgrin
kevin4460
Maldrix
Gregonn
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Basics
Minecraft User Name: Deicidal
How long have you been playing SMP?: For a few months now. I love it.
Do you have RP Experience?: Years upon years, and before that I have always been a good storywriter.
What is your birthday?: Sorry, I don't give this out.
Role Play
Character Name: John Fellows
Character Race: Man
Character Description: He is an old man. In his hermitage, he lost track of time, but he has a long, white beard and hair, and a set of grey robes and a hat. Once white robes to mark a white wizard, their color too was lost in time. Though old, he still has a strong heart and will, and is very friendly due to having not seen people for a long time.
Character Bio: What's the difference between a bio and history? I'll just put a strength/weakness chart here.
Strengths:
-He is a very adapt and wise Light Wizard.
-His wisdom has brought him much knowledge, as with his research in immortality.
Weaknesses:
-He's old. He can't handle a sword as well as he used to, and he can't handle a bow. He also usually holds on to a wizard's staff, but he can use levitation magic to free his bounds to the earth still. To add, his life is slowly running out of time. Just a hint of illness, and it could be his last day.
Character History: John Fellows was born into the magical caste. His father was a dark mage, his mother a light mage. A strange couple, but it worked out. From there he learned both sides of things, and has learned to see life that way. However, he has chosen the path of the Light Mage, and as soon as he became a full-fledged Light Magician, he vanished. Imperilus thought he was dead, even included him in the obituary. But no body was found.
But he didn't need to be found. In the wilderness, he became a hermit, and planned to built a temple in the great forests. The Elves are the only ones who knew his existence, and took him as a wise being of great power. As he lived a hermit, he slowly aged, and knew his time was up.
Or was it?
This began his last journey. A last adventure. A last hope to find immortality.
John looked through elven knowledge for many ways of immortality. There were myths of things from a Fountain of Youth to a Philospher's Stone. After judging through all things, he found that a Philosopher's Stone would be near impossible to make through common legit magic, but a Fountain-- That could be doable. So he set off once more. He returned to Imperilus, found a last bit of information that saved him: A place called Immortalus. And so he set off to find it.
Character Class: Light Mage
Ah, we can always just say they felt it was invading their realm or [insert corporate lies here]. Seriously, the demons (plus me) could just start a war with anyone who comes into the nether. Really, there are many ways around this, most of them including money.
Yes, they would destroy the portal in your house, and, would you go get obsidian after your portal has been destoyed n times? Or pay a relatively cheaper price that the demon merchants are selling at. Face it, nothing can beat a corporate cover up (apart from the media, but god help us if this server develops one).
I'm not accepted to the server so I'm not to sure how it works... But the demons could just take their obsidian and fill the other peoples portal rooms with the obsidian... Cruel, but it works...
Name: Caleb
Username: Undeniabletruth
How long have you played SMP: A little over 5 months?
RP experience: I used to be in a RP server for 2 months, the server stopped running
Birthday: 3/15/1996
Character name: Ceizus Rolian
Race: Demon
Description: A buff looking man in to conceal himself, no one knowing what he really looks like. Always wielding a bow on his back and a sword on his side.
Bio: Roaming the world for a place to settle down, but always being hunted by someone or something.
History: One born in Cratisha, minutes before the great fire that burn the city to ruins he has since seen himself as a man of free will, but also mystery.
Class: Dark Mage
Birth Place: Cratisha
I feel like an idiot, I had to re-read through the rules and I happened to miss the important part...
I read rule 3: Cupcakes.
I'm not accepted to the server so I'm not to sure how it works... But the demons could just take their obsidian and fill the other peoples portal rooms with the obsidian... Cruel, but it works...
I like your thinking . . .
The only problem with that is they could carve out a portal shape and ignite it. So, really, the next best thing is to fill their room with lava, seeing as thats not in particular demand in the nether. Even better, you could cover the portal in the nether, so that they come into the nether and walk straight into the lava ;D
All things considered, I think you could make a fine apprentice (and no-one is actually on the server yet apart from azor, spark and kev (I think))
The only problem with that is they could carve out a portal shape and ignite it. So, really, the next best thing is to fill their room with lava, seeing as thats not in particular demand in the nether. Even better, you could cover the portal in the nether, so that they come into the nether and walk straight into the lava ;D
All things considered, I think you could make a fine apprentice (and no-one is actually on the server yet apart from azor, spark and kev (I think))
I see a problem with that too, don't portals re-appear randomly? So that'd mean you have to look for it. You could cover theirs in lava and protect your lava you placed with something? Or do what you said and find it by going through their portal. Many ways you can stop them. And I really hope I get accepted, I just had to update my application.
Basics
Minecraft User Name: xRoad
How long have you been playing SMP?: 3 Months
Do you have RP Experience?: I've RP'd for about 2 years (not Minecraft)
What is your birthday?: 08-19-1996
Role Play
Character Name: Seribus Braserk
Character Race: Elf
Character Description: Tall,loud,long hair and sharp ears (Runs in the family)
Character Bio: Adventurous but likes to have company while on adventures, likes to be backup his freinds when they get in battle.
Character History: Left alone at birth and raised by his aunt and uncle, Seribus learned to fight with a bow when he was 14 against wolves,skeletons,and zombies. On the inside he also needed to know the truth about his parents,were they murdered or they just left him at birth because they had nothing to offer him. After Gradek, Seribus' cousin, left for Immortalus, Seribus soon felt the need for adventure and the truth about his parents, he decided to gather supplies so that when he arrived his adventure would be that much easier. Now he waits on the ship to get to the glorious land of Immortalus where the real adventure will begin.
Basics
Minecraft User Name:plasticman33
How long have you been playing SMP?:since about beta 1.3
Do you have RP Experience?:my only rp exp was from seigecraft which got me into it
What is your birthday?: 03/11/98
Role Play
Character Name: Samuel Brenen
Character Race: human
Character Description: A human of the age of twenty two, he wears deer skin clothing at all times. Nobody sees his hair because his clothing covers him from head to toe, but he keeps it neatly trimmed, along with any facial hsir that he grows.
Character Bio: A young man who loves to hunt in the woods with his friends, he usually wears deer skin clothing so that he is able to sneak up on wild animals easier.
Character History: Sam was born on his fathers cattle ranch in cratisha,his mother died of the flu when Sam was just four months old. He was taught by his father how to be a cattle farmer; how to milk the cows, give them food and water, and how to slaughter them from when he was seven years to thirteen years. Then, on his fourteenth birthday, he said to his father, "father, i don't want to be a cattle farmer. I don't want to milk the cows, feed the cows, and slaughter the cows. I want to be a hunter. I want to chase wild deer through the woods, and track rabbits through the bushes." then his father said to him "well, sam, my boy, i cant tell you what you want and don't want, but i can tell you that i know nothing of weilding a bow, or chasing deer, but i think i know some one who might." and so Sam's father took him to his good friend jeremy, who used to be a master of the bow, before he retired from a wound to his leg after falling off a small cliff. Sam's father said to Jeremy, "my friend, my son wants to be a hunter, but I know nothing of the bow. Will you teach him?" and Jeremy said, "of course! Have you forgotten after all these years that you saved me from that pack of wolves?" and so Samuel was apprenticed to Jeremy for many years, training with the bow untill he could hit the bullseye nine times out of ten at a hundred yards. His master then told him, "Sam, i think you have trained long enough, it is time for you to have your own bow." and so the now bowman Samuel Brenen was given his very own yew longbow, which he used for many years hunting for the town before he heard of the city of immortalus, and vowed to find his way there however possible...
Character Class: archer
Place of Birth: Cratisha
I read rule 3: cupcakes.
What is wrong with my app?!?! i cant figure out what is wrong with it! Please help anybody who sees an error!
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First Name: Hunter
Minecraft User Name:NukeCakes
How long have you been playing SMP?: since i first got minecraft
Do you have RP Experience?:yes
What is your birthday?: 2/25/1995
Character Name: Michael Rhodeson
Character Race: Human
Character Description: Young in his mid twenties has a scar on his face
Character Bio: A man with a hard life. Needing to survive, he joined a harsh militia and they soon betrayed him
Character History: Lived with his father until he died and joined a group of thieves and learned how to fight then joined a military who soon betrayed him. When he heard his hometown has been burned and pillaged he is searching for the person who has done it.
Basics
Minecraft User Name:plasticman33
How long have you been playing SMP?:since about beta 1.3
Do you have RP Experience?:my only rp exp was from seigecraft which got me into it
What is your birthday?: 03/11/98
Role Play
Character Name: Samuel Brenen
Character Race: human
Character Description: A human of the age of twenty two, he wears deer skin clothing at all times. Nobody sees his hair because his clothing covers him from head to toe, but he keeps it neatly trimmed, along with any facial hsir that he grows.
Character Bio: A young man who loves to hunt in the woods with his friends, he usually wears deer skin clothing so that he is able to sneak up on wild animals easier.
Character History: Sam was born on his fathers cattle ranch in cratisha,his mother died of the flu when Sam was just four months old. He was taught by his father how to be a cattle farmer; how to milk the cows, give them food and water, and how to slaughter them from when he was seven years to thirteen years. Then, on his fourteenth birthday, he said to his father, "father, i don't want to be a cattle farmer. I don't want to milk the cows, feed the cows, and slaughter the cows. I want to be a hunter. I want to chase wild deer through the woods, and track rabbits through the bushes." then his father said to him "well, sam, my boy, i cant tell you what you want and don't want, but i can tell you that i know nothing of weilding a bow, or chasing deer, but i think i know some one who might." and so Sam's father took him to his good friend jeremy, who used to be a master of the bow, before he retired from a wound to his leg after falling off a small cliff. Sam's father said to Jeremy, "my friend, my son wants to be a hunter, but I know nothing of the bow. Will you teach him?" and Jeremy said, "of course! Have you forgotten after all these years that you saved me from that pack of wolves?" and so Samuel was apprenticed to Jeremy for many years, training with the bow untill he could hit the bullseye nine times out of ten at a hundred yards. His master then told him, "Sam, i think you have trained long enough, it is time for you to have your own bow." and so the now bowman Samuel Brenen was given his very own yew longbow, which he used for many years hunting for the town before he heard of the city of immortalus, and vowed to find his way there however possible...
Character Class: archer
Place of Birth: Cratisha
I read rule 3: cupcakes.
What is wrong with my app?!?! i cant figure out what is wrong with it! Please help anybody who sees an error!
Aighty let's have a looksee...
The concept of the story is acceptable (origin-wise and whatnot).
You're not "too powerful" I think...
I'd say its probably that you've got "kickass archer status" rather than just having "basic archery skills." The admins said that everyone has to be on an even level of more or less nothing at the start of the server, save for racial bonuses and class skills and whatnot.
Other than that... maybe grammar/punctuation stuff?
None of your quotes start with capital letters. Some sentences seem a bit longer than they could/should be as well. For example:
He was taught by his father how to be a cattle farmer; how to milk the cows, give them food and water, and how to slaughter them from when he was seven years to thirteen years.
This could probably written instead like this:
"Taught by his father from ages seven to thirteen to be a cattle farmer Samuel learned to milk cows, to feed the cows, and to slaughter the cows for market."
Sam's father said to Jeremy, "my friend, my son wants to be a hunter, but I know nothing of the bow. Will you teach him?" and Jeremy said, "of course! Have you forgotten after all these years that you saved me from that pack of wolves?" and so Samuel was apprenticed to Jeremy for many years, training with the bow untill he could hit the bullseye nine times out of ten at a hundred yards.
Separate sentences amidst a quotation do not break up the sentence they were contained in. Therefore the above can be read as just one continuous sentence.
Here's my suggested alternative:
"Approaching Jeremy, Samuel's father spoke, "My good friend; my son wishes to know the ways of the hunter, but I lack skills in the ways of the bow. I ask you, would you teach him what you know?" Smirking, Jeremy replied "But of course my friend! After all these years, after what you've done for me, how could I not? I still haven't forgotten about the time you rescued me from that wolf pack, haha!" In the years that followed Samuel was pushed to his limits, training day after day under the guidance of Jeremy. Samuel trained and trained until he was able to hit a target nine out of ten times at no less than one hundred yards."
My suggested alternative has broken up that long sentence you had. This may also be the part, particularly the last sentence, the mods/admins were having an issue with.
Remember, if it doesn't sound good when you read it aloud then it isn't good on paper (or in this case computer). Just read it aloud. Remember that commas, periods, etc. are there to end things and give those pauses between statements you would hear in conversation as well as to add emphasis.
I hope this has provided some guidance :smile.gif:
Just a quick question, since my application mentioned my character heard many myths through out the years (Some examples are the myths of golden apples that could heal all wounds, portals that could send you to the nether, and so on), can he talk about some of these myths in the game?
Basics
Minecraft User Name: Thecaprisuns
How long have you been playing SMP?: About a year now
Do you have RP Experience?: Lots
What is your birthday?: 10/15/92
Role Play
Character Name: Vanille Lattelle
Character Race: Demon
Character Description: Demon expelled from the nether who now roams the land looking for a purpose.
Character Bio: Vanille was a highly respected demon in the nether before she was expelled and had her otherworldly powers stripped from her.
Character History: Vanille was a highly respected demon in the nether.She controlled entire armies and brought empires down with ease. But one day she had violated a sacred demon rule and ate of the fruit of the over world.She was stripped of her powers and sent to Imperilus to begin her search for redemption and to again be immortal.
Character Class: Dark Mage
Place of Birth: Imperilus/Nether
I read rule 3: cupcakes
(I hope its not too short im writing this in a hurry :laugh.gif: )
so we can only learn the skills that we have on the class posts right? like archers can only know repair unarmed and bow?
Well for example I'm going to be a dark mage, and here's what it says dark mages can do:
Dark Mage
Spells:
Fireball: Cause a flame to erupt at your target.
Arrow: Launch an arrow of dark magic at your target
Magic Force: Push enemies backwards.
Class Ability: Inferno - Creates a large blaze.
I said in my app that I was "taught in the ways of the dark mage" to be a bit unspecific, but I could've elaborated some.
I could've said I learned how to use a bit of fire magic, a bit of shadow magic, and arcane magic (Just assuming that Magic Force would fall into the 'Arcane' category since it it isn't of a specific element).
I could not, however, say that I mastered the art of wielding fireballs, shadowbolts, and other offensive techniques.
That's the key issue there; do you have an absolute mastery or a high proficiency with this or that skill when coming to Immortalus? You shouldn't is the answer. You know some of this, and some of that, but as far as your class goes you're just a newbie fresh off the boat who requires much refinement.
Just a quick question, since my application mentioned my character heard many myths through out the years (Some examples are the myths of golden apples that could heal all wounds, portals that could send you to the nether, and so on), can he talk about some of these myths in the game?
I don't see why not. Your character read lots of stories, and this is partially what is driving your character to these lands. Your character has the knowledge of special, mythical items of legend. I suppose if you don't elaborate into raw specifics then its okay. Remember: legends only speak of the broad story and not the finer details, meaning that your character shouldn't know exactly, step by step, how to construct a nether portal. Rather he should know of a story retelling of the existence of such portals, and where they may lead. (Maybe the story was wrong? Maybe you heard these portals could take you to the Aether? Maybe they exaggerated the harshness of the nether?)
Basics
Minecraft User Name: Thecaprisuns
How long have you been playing SMP?: About a year now
Do you have RP Experience?: Lots
What is your birthday?: 10/15/92
Role Play
Character Name: Vanille Lattelle
Character Race: Demon
Character Description: Demon expelled from the nether who now roams the land looking for a purpose.
Character Bio: Vanille was a highly respected demon in the nether before she was expelled and had her otherworldly powers stripped from her.
Character History: Vanille was a highly respected demon in the nether.She controlled entire armies and brought empires down with ease. But one day she had violated a sacred demon rule and ate of the fruit of the over world.She was stripped of her powers and sent to Imperilus to begin her search for redemption and to again be immortal.
Character Class: Dark Mage
Place of Birth: Imperilus/Nether
I read rule 3: cupcakes
(I hope its not too short im writing this in a hurry :laugh.gif: )
I could see the mods being a bit iffy of the high degree of control over armies, and the prestige stuff, but I think others here have already had more elaborate stuff along the same lines who have been accepted. You should be fine overall.
Can't wait! Hope I made it. [:
Ah, we can always just say they felt it was invading their realm or [insert corporate lies here]. Seriously, the demons (plus me) could just start a war with anyone who comes into the nether. Really, there are many ways around this, most of them including money.
Yes, they would destroy the portal in your house, and, would you go get obsidian after your portal has been destoyed n times? Or pay a relatively cheaper price that the demon merchants are selling at. Face it, nothing can beat a corporate cover up (apart from the media, but god help us if this server develops one).
Kubari
SparkMistt
PlasticSmoothie
Exelbirth
Kaldurenik
ZAKK9090
Corey40108
Nelluc20
Willie900
Fetish
Superior_Tomato
Zeroquest
dragon5366
allecwillis00
Angoron (Come up with a better last name please)
PerrinB
Makeyejr
Sharkgrin
kevin4460
Maldrix
Gregonn
If your Minecraft Username is not on this list, you have not been accepted. Please review the front page (Small lore included) and accepted applications. You're probably not accepted because your Character is either weakly described or too overpowered or does not fit lore.
Basics
Minecraft User Name: Deicidal
How long have you been playing SMP?: For a few months now. I love it.
Do you have RP Experience?: Years upon years, and before that I have always been a good storywriter.
What is your birthday?: Sorry, I don't give this out.
Role Play
Character Name: John Fellows
Character Race: Man
Character Description: He is an old man. In his hermitage, he lost track of time, but he has a long, white beard and hair, and a set of grey robes and a hat. Once white robes to mark a white wizard, their color too was lost in time. Though old, he still has a strong heart and will, and is very friendly due to having not seen people for a long time.
Character Bio: What's the difference between a bio and history? I'll just put a strength/weakness chart here.
Strengths:
-He is a very adapt and wise Light Wizard.
-His wisdom has brought him much knowledge, as with his research in immortality.
Weaknesses:
-He's old. He can't handle a sword as well as he used to, and he can't handle a bow. He also usually holds on to a wizard's staff, but he can use levitation magic to free his bounds to the earth still. To add, his life is slowly running out of time. Just a hint of illness, and it could be his last day.
Character History: John Fellows was born into the magical caste. His father was a dark mage, his mother a light mage. A strange couple, but it worked out. From there he learned both sides of things, and has learned to see life that way. However, he has chosen the path of the Light Mage, and as soon as he became a full-fledged Light Magician, he vanished. Imperilus thought he was dead, even included him in the obituary. But no body was found.
But he didn't need to be found. In the wilderness, he became a hermit, and planned to built a temple in the great forests. The Elves are the only ones who knew his existence, and took him as a wise being of great power. As he lived a hermit, he slowly aged, and knew his time was up.
Or was it?
This began his last journey. A last adventure. A last hope to find immortality.
John looked through elven knowledge for many ways of immortality. There were myths of things from a Fountain of Youth to a Philospher's Stone. After judging through all things, he found that a Philosopher's Stone would be near impossible to make through common legit magic, but a Fountain-- That could be doable. So he set off once more. He returned to Imperilus, found a last bit of information that saved him: A place called Immortalus. And so he set off to find it.
Character Class: Light Mage
Place of Birth: Imperilus
I read rule 3: Cupcakes.
I'm not accepted to the server so I'm not to sure how it works... But the demons could just take their obsidian and fill the other peoples portal rooms with the obsidian... Cruel, but it works...
I feel like an idiot, I had to re-read through the rules and I happened to miss the important part...
I read rule 3: Cupcakes.
I like your thinking . . .
The only problem with that is they could carve out a portal shape and ignite it. So, really, the next best thing is to fill their room with lava, seeing as thats not in particular demand in the nether. Even better, you could cover the portal in the nether, so that they come into the nether and walk straight into the lava ;D
All things considered, I think you could make a fine apprentice (and no-one is actually on the server yet apart from azor, spark and kev (I think))
I see a problem with that too, don't portals re-appear randomly? So that'd mean you have to look for it. You could cover theirs in lava and protect your lava you placed with something? Or do what you said and find it by going through their portal. Many ways you can stop them. And I really hope I get accepted, I just had to update my application.
Basics
Minecraft User Name: xRoad
How long have you been playing SMP?: 3 Months
Do you have RP Experience?: I've RP'd for about 2 years (not Minecraft)
What is your birthday?: 08-19-1996
Role Play
Character Name: Seribus Braserk
Character Race: Elf
Character Description: Tall,loud,long hair and sharp ears (Runs in the family)
Character Bio: Adventurous but likes to have company while on adventures, likes to be backup his freinds when they get in battle.
Character History: Left alone at birth and raised by his aunt and uncle, Seribus learned to fight with a bow when he was 14 against wolves,skeletons,and zombies. On the inside he also needed to know the truth about his parents,were they murdered or they just left him at birth because they had nothing to offer him. After Gradek, Seribus' cousin, left for Immortalus, Seribus soon felt the need for adventure and the truth about his parents, he decided to gather supplies so that when he arrived his adventure would be that much easier. Now he waits on the ship to get to the glorious land of Immortalus where the real adventure will begin.
Character Class: Archer
Place of Birth: Flutius
I read rule 3: Cupcakes
What is wrong with my app?!?! i cant figure out what is wrong with it! Please help anybody who sees an error!
Read through the rules.
Maybe your character is to powerful...
Minecraft User Name:NukeCakes
How long have you been playing SMP?: since i first got minecraft
Do you have RP Experience?:yes
What is your birthday?: 2/25/1995
Character Name: Michael Rhodeson
Character Race: Human
Character Description: Young in his mid twenties has a scar on his face
Character Bio: A man with a hard life. Needing to survive, he joined a harsh militia and they soon betrayed him
Character History: Lived with his father until he died and joined a group of thieves and learned how to fight then joined a military who soon betrayed him. When he heard his hometown has been burned and pillaged he is searching for the person who has done it.
Character Class: Warrior
Place of Birth: Cratisha
Aighty let's have a looksee...
The concept of the story is acceptable (origin-wise and whatnot).
You're not "too powerful" I think...
I'd say its probably that you've got "kickass archer status" rather than just having "basic archery skills." The admins said that everyone has to be on an even level of more or less nothing at the start of the server, save for racial bonuses and class skills and whatnot.
Other than that... maybe grammar/punctuation stuff?
None of your quotes start with capital letters. Some sentences seem a bit longer than they could/should be as well. For example:
This could probably written instead like this:
"Taught by his father from ages seven to thirteen to be a cattle farmer Samuel learned to milk cows, to feed the cows, and to slaughter the cows for market."
Separate sentences amidst a quotation do not break up the sentence they were contained in. Therefore the above can be read as just one continuous sentence.
Here's my suggested alternative:
"Approaching Jeremy, Samuel's father spoke, "My good friend; my son wishes to know the ways of the hunter, but I lack skills in the ways of the bow. I ask you, would you teach him what you know?" Smirking, Jeremy replied "But of course my friend! After all these years, after what you've done for me, how could I not? I still haven't forgotten about the time you rescued me from that wolf pack, haha!" In the years that followed Samuel was pushed to his limits, training day after day under the guidance of Jeremy. Samuel trained and trained until he was able to hit a target nine out of ten times at no less than one hundred yards."
My suggested alternative has broken up that long sentence you had. This may also be the part, particularly the last sentence, the mods/admins were having an issue with.
Remember, if it doesn't sound good when you read it aloud then it isn't good on paper (or in this case computer). Just read it aloud. Remember that commas, periods, etc. are there to end things and give those pauses between statements you would hear in conversation as well as to add emphasis.
I hope this has provided some guidance :smile.gif:
Basics
Minecraft User Name: Thecaprisuns
How long have you been playing SMP?: About a year now
Do you have RP Experience?: Lots
What is your birthday?: 10/15/92
Role Play
Character Name: Vanille Lattelle
Character Race: Demon
Character Description: Demon expelled from the nether who now roams the land looking for a purpose.
Character Bio: Vanille was a highly respected demon in the nether before she was expelled and had her otherworldly powers stripped from her.
Character History: Vanille was a highly respected demon in the nether.She controlled entire armies and brought empires down with ease. But one day she had violated a sacred demon rule and ate of the fruit of the over world.She was stripped of her powers and sent to Imperilus to begin her search for redemption and to again be immortal.
Character Class: Dark Mage
Place of Birth: Imperilus/Nether
I read rule 3: cupcakes
(I hope its not too short im writing this in a hurry :laugh.gif: )
Well for example I'm going to be a dark mage, and here's what it says dark mages can do:
I said in my app that I was "taught in the ways of the dark mage" to be a bit unspecific, but I could've elaborated some.
I could've said I learned how to use a bit of fire magic, a bit of shadow magic, and arcane magic (Just assuming that Magic Force would fall into the 'Arcane' category since it it isn't of a specific element).
I could not, however, say that I mastered the art of wielding fireballs, shadowbolts, and other offensive techniques.
That's the key issue there; do you have an absolute mastery or a high proficiency with this or that skill when coming to Immortalus? You shouldn't is the answer. You know some of this, and some of that, but as far as your class goes you're just a newbie fresh off the boat who requires much refinement.
I don't see why not. Your character read lots of stories, and this is partially what is driving your character to these lands. Your character has the knowledge of special, mythical items of legend. I suppose if you don't elaborate into raw specifics then its okay. Remember: legends only speak of the broad story and not the finer details, meaning that your character shouldn't know exactly, step by step, how to construct a nether portal. Rather he should know of a story retelling of the existence of such portals, and where they may lead. (Maybe the story was wrong? Maybe you heard these portals could take you to the Aether? Maybe they exaggerated the harshness of the nether?)
I could see the mods being a bit iffy of the high degree of control over armies, and the prestige stuff, but I think others here have already had more elaborate stuff along the same lines who have been accepted. You should be fine overall.