Role-Play Exp.: I have played and is still playing the Starcraft version of Rp for 2 years.
Why Us: This server was on the top 10 server's list and i would like to try it out.
Time You Can Dedicate:1-4 hours evening EST time per day.
Have you played Assassin's Creed? Yes I have played the first Assassin's Creed.
IC
Name: Joe Turner
Gender:Male
Age:20
Fears: Zombies and Assassins
Personality: Friendly, Thick Headed, Happy (for a guard)
Skills: Fighting, Mining
Nickname (Optional): Lieutenant Caesar
RP Example (Add Dialogue): (Reporting to your superiors) Sir, We have taken few casualties. We also captured an assassin. What shall we do with him?
Skin (Link, picture, description): My skin is a Knight, similar to a Christian Templar.
Backstory (1-2 LONG paragraphs): My father was a fellow guardsmen who died protecting the city. I have taken his footsteps to becoming a guard. My mother was killed when I became a High Ranking Officer of the guard force at the age of 29. I have been trying to get revenge on the assassins when they killed my mother and father.
At my mother's funeral the Commander of the guard force gave me my father's last will. The will was to protect the citizens of Jerusalem. After the funeral I promised to protect the citizens with my life. Sadly my heart hardened due to the death of my mother and father.
Other
What is Roleplay? Role-playing refers to the changing of one's behaviour to assume a role, either unconsciously to fill a social role, or consciously to act out an adopted role. While the Oxford English Dictionary offers a definition of role-playing as "the changing of one's behaviour to fulfill a social role" stated by wikipedia.
What is Metagaming?n role-playing games, metagaming can be defined as any out of character action made by a player's character which makes use of knowledge that the character is not meant to be aware of. (Metagaming while taking part in relatively competitive games, or those with a more serious tone, is typically not well received, because a character played by a metagamer does not act in a way that reflects the character's in-game experiences and back-story.) Stated by wikipedia
What is Powergaming?Powergaming (or power gaming) is a style of interacting with games or game-like systems with the aim of maximising progress towards a specific goal, to the exclusion of other considerations such as (in video games, boardgames, and roleplaying games) storytelling, atmosphere and camaraderie. Due to its focus on the letter of the rules over the spirit of the rules, it is often seen as unsporting, un-fun, or unsociable. This behaviour is most often found in games with a wide range of game features, lengthy campaigns or prize tournaments such as role-playing, massively multiplayer or collectible games. stated by wikipedia
What is Assassin's Creed? Assassin's creed is where you play as desmond who goes back in time in the footsteps of his ancestors to find out the ancient artifacts.
Denied.
Your definitions were obviously copied from another site, which is unacceptable. Your fears are unrealistic, Zombies and Assassin's? First off, you may not know anything of the Assassin's or Templars IC. This is 15th century Europe, meaning no Zombies here. Your skin cannot be of a Knight or Gaurd, this would be implying you starting out at a specific class which is not accepted. We would much prefer a picture of your skin. Your backstory is also quite cliche, may want to fix that. Remember to fix these issues in a re-posted application, not editing the original post.
IGN:captian_jack88
Age: 13
Role-play exp: I have played on about 9 differnt role play servers for minecraft and i have stayed on about 3 of those
why us: I have been looking for a good role play server that had assassin's creed in it so this seems to fit what im looking for
Time you can dedicate: on the week day i can dedicate about 3-4 hours and on weekends about 5-6 hours
Have you played assassin's creed: yes but i am new to the game im on the 5th memory of the first on but i know most of the backround to all the games
IC
Name:Thoven loyalar
gender:male
Age:20
Fears:Men who attacked his family,defeat
personality:quite,keeps to him self,observat
skills:can hide in plain stight, skilled in the art of death,master with a blade
nickname:the hunter
RP example:(to himself)"Darn it, lost him again i get so close then a big crowed comes and blocks my view but i will find him and get the answers i need."
Skin:My skin is a white hooded robe that covers his face, he wears black shirt and red vest gray pants and black boots
Back story:Thoven grew up like an other child playing going to school and learning what he was going to be in the world.But one night he was outside when his family killed.His father,mother, and some servents all killed by a group of 10 men.His father fought hard but it was overwellmed. Thoven ran for his life. when he made it to a city two miles away he bagan to live on his own.He had no other skills exapt for how to wield a blabe so he worked as a mercenary for about a year when he was sent to the city he had lived in now being 15 went straight there because he needed the coin. thats when he saw a man one of the 10 that attcked his home he then comforted the man.The man called over 3 others That then attacked Thoven he fought well only one was alive thoven then asked him why he had attacked the man did not answer. but Thoven left him alive not needing to kill him.
Other
What is role-play:Roleplay is when people act as a person they have come up and then act as that person in a game.
What is metagaming:Metagaming is where a player uses information that they cant get in game (but have IRL) and uses it to make the character advantance faster.
What is powergaming:Powergaming is make a charater over powered and can be used to make that character advance as fast as possiable
What is AC:assassin's creed is a game where you are a guy named desmound who is captered by abstergo inc. also know as the templars they want desmond because his anstors now the location of the apple of edan so he is forced in to a machince called the animus which alows you to view the memorys of your ansestors in real time desomounds ansestors are altiar,ezio,and connor each of these has had contact with the apple and they are all assassin's enemys of the templar their battle has been going on for millions of years. *
Denied. Check your grammar, we try to have players with near perfect grammar and punctuation. 13? You may be a little too young for this server. Backstory is also cliche, you should make it more unique. Your skin sounds like it resembles an Assassin, may want to change that. Remember to repost your application and not edit the original post.
Denied.
Your definitions were obviously copied from another site, which is unacceptable. Your fears are unrealistic, Zombies and Assassin's? First off, you may not know anything of the Assassin's or Templars IC. This is 15th century Europe, meaning no Zombies here. Your skin cannot be of a Knight or Gaurd, this would be implying you starting out at a specific class which is not accepted. We would much prefer a picture of your skin. Your backstory is also quite cliche, may want to fix that. Remember to fix these issues in a re-posted application, not editing the original post.
Denied. Check your grammar, we try to have players with near perfect grammar and punctuation. 13? You may be a little too young for this server. Backstory is also cliche, you should make it more unique. Your skin sounds like it resembles an Assassin, may want to change that. Remember to repost your application and not edit the original post.
You skipped over my app.... it is the one before the first one you reviewed...
Role-Play Exp.: 8/10 I've played on many Role-Play servers before.
Why Us:It's not the first time I've looked at this server and finally said to myself what the hell I'll apply.
Time You Can Dedicate:It depends if I like the server. If I like it then 2-3 hrs. a day. If not then about an hour or so.
Have you played Assassin's Creed?:All of the games. Brotherhood was my favorite.
IC
Name:Lorenzo
Gender:Male
Age:22
Fears:His fears are the plague and poverty.
Personality:Lorenzo is generally nice and kind. If you are good to him, he is good to you.
Skills:Blacksmith work. Free-running. Negotiating
Nickname (Optional):none
RP Example (Add Dialogue):
Guy: Woah! That price is way too high for this piece of junk. Lorenzo: My prices are my prices but I am open to negotiation. Guy:Knock off 30 florins and you have yourself a customer. Lorenzo: 30 Florins! Gahh! You have to be kidding me way too much how about 10. Guy:No way! 30. Lorenzo:20 or the price stays 200. Guy:25! Or I will take my business else where! Lorenzo:20! or 15. Take your pick. Either 20 off or 15 florins. Guy:15 Florins final price! I'll take it. Lorenzo:Okay that'll be 185 florins. Guy:What! Lorenzo:You shook on 15 florins off! I will call a guard over here. Guy:Fine! take my money! Guy:*walks away* Lorenzo:haha easy money.
Skin (Link, picture, description):
Backstory (1-2 LONG paragraphs):
Lorenzo was born and raised in Florence. His father was an architect who would put food on the table every night. When Lorenzo was a kid all he dreamed about was being a king. He would walk talk and act like he was too. His childhood was filled with him and his friends playing tricks on the other citizens of Florence. When Lorenzo turned 12 he started to hang around the Blacksmith shop. Lorenzo took a liking to this. He asked the owner if he could take up an apprenticeship and the owner turned him down. The owner said not until your older. Lorenzo was pretty put down by this. One day he saw this man running across roof tops and jumping between buildings and was astonished by this. Lorenzo wanted to learn this phenomenon called "free-running". Lorenzo told all of his friends about this man he saw and they all took a liking to it. Before you knew it they were all trying to get onto rooftops and do acrobats off of them. Lorenzo was the first of his friends to successfully climb onto a roof top. The days were long and they were young, but before you know it Lorenzo was 17 and a new chapter of his life awaited him.
Lorenzo was always able to talk fast and be sly about it. Every time he would go and buy something he would always talk down the price. It just seemed as though it was second nature to him. Besides this both his friends and himself have almost mastered free-running. They were now able to jump between roofs and swing on things like monkeys. As the years went by Lorenzo kept seeing more and more of these men free-running. One day Lorenzo was coming home and a messenger came for him to tell him that his father had an accident. Lorenzo then rushed home to find his father in bed with a fractured bones. Its a miracle that he survived such a fall. The doctor told Lorenzo that his father was on some scaffolding that fell down and collapse on him. Lorenzo is 21 when this happens and his father is now jobless. He now has o find a job to help his father stay alive and pay for the medicine. A year goes by and Lorenzo had went back to the Blacksmith who turned him down when he was 12. The blacksmith decided to teach Lorenzo how to smith and Lorenzo started his apprenticeship. Another year rolled by and Lorenzo was 22 and just finishing up his apprenticeship. This is where our role-play starts.
Other
What is Roleplay?:Role-playing is taking a step outside of your own life to live a life of another person or character.
What is Metagaming?:Using OOC knowledge for IC purposes
What is Powergaming?:Overpowering another player without giving them a chance to react.
What is Assassin's Creed?: An amazing game series where you play as an assassin trying to restore peace from the Templar order.
******* <--------- a bunch of them
But since the guy above me ever so insists. I'll bump it and feel like a d.ick for doing it
In general, there were 3 apps starting with mine then going down. The fact that it was missed is just stupid because it was right there.
But since the guy above me ever so insists. I'll bump it and feel like a d.ick for doing it
The "Guy above you" Is a whitelister, hence why he said "We". Getting snippy will get you nowhere. I'll let Nintenzero do your app. He's more strict; it'll be fun.
The "Guy above you" Is a whitelister, hence why he said "We". Getting snippy will get you nowhere. I'll let Nintenzero do your app. He's more strict; it'll be fun.
I didn't mean to come off as "snippy" but if the person who quoted me is a whitelister why didn't he go back a page and review it. I mean The one whitelister reviewed the 2 apps below me and there was already accepted app above me. its not that hard to miss.
And one last thing. Why don't you just review me instead of waiting. That's stupid. My app is terrible it's not even 1/4 of what I normally write but I considered I'd dumb it down because more than half the apps written are trolls anyway and there's only a handful of legitimate ones.
I didn't mean to come off as "snippy" but if the person who quoted me is a whitelister why didn't he go back a page and review it. I mean The one whitelister reviewed the 2 apps below me and there was already accepted app above me. its not that hard to miss.
And one last thing. Why don't you just review me instead of waiting. That's stupid. My app is terrible it's not even 1/4 of what I normally write but I considered I'd dumb it down because more than half the apps written are trolls anyway and there's only a handful of legitimate ones.
If you're not going to try then we don't want you anyway. If you think your app is terrible, make it better before it's reviewed. Arguing with staff in general is also not a good idea if you're looking to get accepted. The solution to the "Troll" issue you mentioned, as well as many others, is a WIP plan, but there is a plan.
And I don't have time to do an official review right now. Just a post or two.
The "Guy above you" Is a whitelister, hence why he said "We". Getting snippy will get you nowhere. I'll let Nintenzero do your app. He's more strict; it'll be fun.
Ahhh yes, Chauck never lies...
As for your application Mr. Poopsac, I would have to deny you... Your definitions were bland and I need to make sure you know what your talking about, maybe an Example would help. Also, your backstory was simple, I liked it. However you may want to go back and check your grammar. Your RP example was completely broken in a way, you may want to redo it.
As for your application Mr. Poopsac, I would have to deny you... Your definitions were bland and I need to make sure you know what your talking about, maybe an Example would help. Also, your backstory was simple, I liked it. However you may want to go back and check your grammar. Your RP example was completely broken in a way, you may want to redo it.
Yes. I agree. After I posted the app, I read i and didn't like it. I would like to write a completely different one because the one I had just is plain terrible. Look for it in about an hour and then all of you guys can see my sheer potential. I wasn't thinking on topic when I wrote this app therefore it came out bad.
If you're not going to try then we don't want you anyway. If you think your app is terrible, make it better before it's reviewed. Arguing with staff in general is also not a good idea if you're looking to get accepted. The solution to the "Troll" issue you mentioned, as well as many others, is a WIP plan, but there is a plan.
And I don't have time to do an official review right now. Just a post or two.
I am not trying to argue with the staff and i'm sorry I came off to be an a.ss.
WHY US: I love Assassin’s Creed and Minecraft. I have looked through this forum post multiple times and finally decided its’ time to write an application.
Personality: Leonardo’s personality is one that is courageous. He is not afraid to do what he thinks is right or what other people think is wrong. He will help a person in need and is mostly helpful.
Skills: His skills are complex. His first skill is blacksmithing. He gained this from an apprenticeship he took on when he was 26. A second is swordplay. Leonardo was an excellent swordsman. He trained 4 hours a day when was 18 all the way up to 24. A third skill of his may be stealth. He learned this as a child when his mother owned a brothel. A lesser skill of his is free-running. Leonardo could never get the hang of it. However, he can climb buildings sufficiently though.
RP Example:
Leonardo: *walks into the crowd of people*
*walks up to market stand nonchalantly*
*as he walks by he steals a piece of bread*
Shop Owner: Hey! Come back here!
Leonardo: *ignores and keeps walking*
Shop Owner: Guards! Guards! Come quick! That man stole bread from me!
Leonardo: *quickens his pace as the guards confront him*
*starts to run*
Guard: Hey! Stop Running Thief!
*starts to chase after Leonardo*
*runs onto a rooftop*
*follows Leonardo’s tracks*
*jumps off small building and runs into alley ways*
*Chases him into alley way*
*runs into a crowd of people*
*tosses a bag of money down drawing the people to frenzy*
*runs away safely*
*loses Leonardo after trying to get through the frantic people*
Leonardo: *talking to peasant boy* Here you go kid.
Peasant: t-t-thank you mister. You are very kind.
Leonardo: It was my pleasure.
*slips back into crowd unnoticed*
Skin:
Backstory:
Childhood
Leonardo Angiolini da Venezia, a name soon to be flowing through the streets of Firenze, Italia. As a child, Leonardo grew up in Venezia, Italia. The City of Water some may call it. Leonardo was born to Lorenzo and Catalina Angiolini. Lorenzo was an architect and Catalina owned a brothel. They met when Lorenzo walked into her brothel looking for a “good time”. When they first locked eyes it’s like they knew that they were meant for each other. Soon after that day they got married and then 9 months later their son was born.
Leonardo Angiolini da Venezia, had his mother’s eyes and his father’s creativity. As a child Leonardo spent most of his time with Catalina, his mother, inside of the brothel house. It was here he learned one of his greatest skills. He learned how to be stealthy and hide in a crowd. Catalina used to teach him every day, this little known art of stealth. Leonardo took a liking to these daily “lessons”. He couldn’t get any “real world” practice in because there was no reason for him to be stealthy. Along with these teachings his mother gave him he also went to school to learn how to read and write. By the time he was 14, his mother stopped giving him the lessons in stealth and let him “do his own thing” for a while. Leonardo played and hung out with friends. Leonardo and his friends always used to climb houses and what little trees there were. Some of his friends expanded and learned how to jump from building to building. Leonardo however was not able to do this. The only thing Leonardo could do was climb buildings. Before you know it Leonardo was reaching adulthood and his childhood was coming to an end.
Adulthood
Leonardo Angiolini da Venezia, now reaching the age of 18 is learning new skills and gaining new interests. A new interest Leonardo discovered is when he saw a man fighting off guards with a sword and took them all out one by one. Leonardo sought this to be entertaining as the guards that were defeated had been committing unlawful acts. It is ironic, Leonardo always thought because the guards that were protecting them were breaking the rules they are trying to enforce. As this man fought off the guards, Leonardo wanted to talk to him, but as he started to walk over the man ran away from the scene and vanished. Leonardo looked for a place or someone who can teach him how to wield a sword but he found no one. Leonardo decided, if he can’t find anyone to teach him he would teach himself. That day he went to a blacksmith and purchased a Venetian Falchion. Leonardo then started off with the basics working from sheathing and drawing his sword to basic swinging. It took him a month to master butchering a bale of hay. At this rate, Leonardo thought that he would never learn. Leonardo however, had an idea. This idea included a way of learning the basics techniques of a sword from a professional. He was going to join the guard. Leonardo actually didn’t join the guard he just signed up and went through basic training. Which in his mind was brilliant. This basic training taught him well. Leonardo was 20 by the time he got out of training and even still wasn’t nearly good as he wanted to be.
Leonardo, a man who was in desperate need of training sought out to his father for answers. Lorenzo was extremely helpful in his cause telling Leonardo that his Uncle was involved in some things when he was young and new all the tricks and techniques. Leonardo’s Uncle lived on the other side of Venezia. Leonardo was willing to do all that it took for him to learn. So he moved in with his Uncle and was willing to train for however long it took him to master the sword. A day after he moved in with his Uncle they started his training. Leonardo trained for years on end until he mastered the art of the sword. They trained for 8 hours a day every day until Leonardo learned every trick and technique his Uncle new.
It has been 6 years since Leonardo has moved in with his Uncle and he is ready to leave and find a career for the rest of his life. Leonardo had seen the skill before. He had liked it too. This job he wanted was to own a blacksmith shop and sell his makings. In order to do this Leonardo had to go through apprenticeship through a mastery “program”. He went to the nearest blacksmith and asked for apprenticeship. The owner said he would teach him. Leonardo, now learning how to smelt and craft armor and weapons had taken extreme liking to this newly gained skill of his. Nothing really important happened in Leonardo’s life at the time of his apprenticeship. It has been 4 years of learning the trade of being a blacksmith, and Leonardo is ready to move on to the next chapter of his life.
Leonardo Angiolini da Venezia, a name soon to be recognized as the hero of the peasants. Leonardo is now 30 years old and looking to open up a shop. He has heard of excitement and job opportunities from travelers coming in from Florence. Leonardo decides that it is best if he move there. Fast forward 2 years and Leonardo is living by himself in need of a job. He is barely getting by and has to steal for meals. It is occurring in his head that it was a bad idea to go to Florence, but something keeps telling him to stay. Leonardo has gained many friends in Florence, most of them peasants. He realizes there are people living worse off than him and wants to do something about it. Leonardo learns that the guards are supposed to be helping but are corrupt. He learns that they are evil. He decided that if the guards, the protectors of the city, won’t help then he will. Leonardo starts going into the guard ran markets and steals food for the people in need of it. He is seen as the peasant’s hero and keeps doing this.
Epilogue
[ooc]
The time has now come where Leonardo has to decide to either keep stealing for the people and continue on the path to becoming an Assassin or have a legitimate job as a blacksmith and live a normal life. Only we can decide in this epic adventure.
What is Role-Play?: Role-play is a way of taking a step out of normal life and taking on the role of either a fictional or non-fictional character. You can do this through games or acting. “Acting” sums up role-play very well actually.
What is Meta-Gaming?: Meta gaming is a big no no. It is where you use knowledge gained OOC to use it in IC. EX: If we are skype chatting and you say you are going to RP kill me at this time and this place, and then I go to that place at that time.
What is Power-Gaming?: Power gaming is a big no no. It is where you over power someone In game without giving them a chance to react. EX: *Leonardo sneaks up behind Catalina and stabs her* Then I presume to go on and kill here without her able to do anything.
What is Assassin’s Creed?: Assassin’s creed is an open-world game series where play as Desmond Miles, a modern-day assassin who lives the life of his ancestors through a thing called the Animus in order to find the pieces of eden.
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P.S. This application is a hell of a lot better than my first one. I took 2 and a half hours doing this.
NO NO NO NO NO! You OBVIOUSLY did not read the rules, or you would know you can't be an Assassin. Your two and a half hours have been wasted by including that "Epilogue" at the end. Sure, you write okay, but instead of lying by putting that magic asterisk at the end, why not ACTUALLY read the rules. I'm no whitelister, but I am really tired of apps like this..... they get you all excited for a new member and then BOOM! Assassins and Templars are off running around in our character's life
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"Early to bed and early to rise, makes a man stupid and blind in the eyes."
WHY US: I love Assassin’s Creed and Minecraft. I have looked through this forum post multiple times and finally decided its’ time to write an application.
Personality: Leonardo’s personality is one that is courageous. He is not afraid to do what he thinks is right or what other people think is wrong. He will help a person in need and is mostly helpful.
Skills: His skills are complex. His first skill is blacksmithing. He gained this from an apprenticeship he took on when he was 26. A second is swordplay. Leonardo was an excellent swordsman. He trained 4 hours a day when was 18 all the way up to 24. A third skill of his may be stealth. He learned this as a child when his mother owned a brothel. A lesser skill of his is free-running. Leonardo could never get the hang of it. However, he can climb buildings sufficiently though.
RP Example:
Leonardo: *walks into the crowd of people*
*walks up to market stand nonchalantly*
*as he walks by he steals a piece of bread*
Shop Owner: Hey! Come back here!
Leonardo: *ignores and keeps walking*
Shop Owner: Guards! Guards! Come quick! That man stole bread from me!
Leonardo: *quickens his pace as the guards confront him*
*starts to run*
Guard: Hey! Stop Running Thief!
*starts to chase after Leonardo*
*runs onto a rooftop*
*follows Leonardo’s tracks*
*jumps off small building and runs into alley ways*
*Chases him into alley way*
*runs into a crowd of people*
*tosses a bag of money down drawing the people to frenzy*
*runs away safely*
*loses Leonardo after trying to get through the frantic people*
Leonardo: *talking to peasant boy* Here you go kid.
Peasant: t-t-thank you mister. You are very kind.
Leonardo: It was my pleasure.
*slips back into crowd unnoticed*
Skin:
Backstory:
Childhood
Leonardo Angiolini da Venezia, a name soon to be flowing through the streets of Firenze, Italia. As a child, Leonardo grew up in Venezia, Italia. The City of Water some may call it. Leonardo was born to Lorenzo and Catalina Angiolini. Lorenzo was an architect and Catalina owned a brothel. They met when Lorenzo walked into her brothel looking for a “good time”. When they first locked eyes it’s like they knew that they were meant for each other. Soon after that day they got married and then 9 months later their son was born.
Leonardo Angiolini da Venezia, had his mother’s eyes and his father’s creativity. As a child Leonardo spent most of his time with Catalina, his mother, inside of the brothel house. It was here he learned one of his greatest skills. He learned how to be stealthy and hide in a crowd. Catalina used to teach him every day, this little known art of stealth. Leonardo took a liking to these daily “lessons”. He couldn’t get any “real world” practice in because there was no reason for him to be stealthy. Along with these teachings his mother gave him he also went to school to learn how to read and write. By the time he was 14, his mother stopped giving him the lessons in stealth and let him “do his own thing” for a while. Leonardo played and hung out with friends. Leonardo and his friends always used to climb houses and what little trees there were. Some of his friends expanded and learned how to jump from building to building. Leonardo however was not able to do this. The only thing Leonardo could do was climb buildings. Before you know it Leonardo was reaching adulthood and his childhood was coming to an end.
Adulthood
Leonardo Angiolini da Venezia, now reaching the age of 18 is learning new skills and gaining new interests. A new interest Leonardo discovered is when he saw a man fighting off guards with a sword and took them all out one by one. Leonardo sought this to be entertaining as the guards that were defeated had been committing unlawful acts. It is ironic, Leonardo always thought because the guards that were protecting them were breaking the rules they are trying to enforce. As this man fought off the guards, Leonardo wanted to talk to him, but as he started to walk over the man ran away from the scene and vanished. Leonardo looked for a place or someone who can teach him how to wield a sword but he found no one. Leonardo decided, if he can’t find anyone to teach him he would teach himself. That day he went to a blacksmith and purchased a Venetian Falchion. Leonardo then started off with the basics working from sheathing and drawing his sword to basic swinging. It took him a month to master butchering a bale of hay. At this rate, Leonardo thought that he would never learn. Leonardo however, had an idea. This idea included a way of learning the basics techniques of a sword from a professional. He was going to join the guard. Leonardo actually didn’t join the guard he just signed up and went through basic training. Which in his mind was brilliant. This basic training taught him well. Leonardo was 20 by the time he got out of training and even still wasn’t nearly good as he wanted to be.
Leonardo, a man who was in desperate need of training sought out to his father for answers. Lorenzo was extremely helpful in his cause telling Leonardo that his Uncle was involved in some things when he was young and new all the tricks and techniques. Leonardo’s Uncle lived on the other side of Venezia. Leonardo was willing to do all that it took for him to learn. So he moved in with his Uncle and was willing to train for however long it took him to master the sword. A day after he moved in with his Uncle they started his training. Leonardo trained for years on end until he mastered the art of the sword. They trained for 8 hours a day every day until Leonardo learned every trick and technique his Uncle new.
It has been 6 years since Leonardo has moved in with his Uncle and he is ready to leave and find a career for the rest of his life. Leonardo had seen the skill before. He had liked it too. This job he wanted was to own a blacksmith shop and sell his makings. In order to do this Leonardo had to go through apprenticeship through a mastery “program”. He went to the nearest blacksmith and asked for apprenticeship. The owner said he would teach him. Leonardo, now learning how to smelt and craft armor and weapons had taken extreme liking to this newly gained skill of his. Nothing really important happened in Leonardo’s life at the time of his apprenticeship. It has been 4 years of learning the trade of being a blacksmith, and Leonardo is ready to move on to the next chapter of his life.
Leonardo Angiolini da Venezia, a name soon to be recognized as the hero of the peasants. Leonardo is now 30 years old and looking to open up a shop. He has heard of excitement and job opportunities from travelers coming in from Florence. Leonardo decides that it is best if he move there. Fast forward 2 years and Leonardo is living by himself in need of a job. He is barely getting by and has to steal for meals. It is occurring in his head that it was a bad idea to go to Florence, but something keeps telling him to stay. Leonardo has gained many friends in Florence, most of them peasants. He realizes there are people living worse off than him and wants to do something about it. Leonardo learns that the guards are supposed to be helping but are corrupt. He learns that they are evil. He decided that if the guards, the protectors of the city, won’t help then he will. Leonardo starts going into the guard ran markets and steals food for the people in need of it. He is seen as the peasant’s hero and keeps doing this.
Epilogue
[ooc]
The time has now come where Leonardo has to decide to either keep stealing for the people and continue on the path to becoming an Assassin or have a legitimate job as a blacksmith and live a normal life. Only we can decide in this epic adventure.
What is Role-Play?: Role-play is a way of taking a step out of normal life and taking on the role of either a fictional or non-fictional character. You can do this through games or acting. “Acting” sums up role-play very well actually.
What is Meta-Gaming?: Meta gaming is a big no no. It is where you use knowledge gained OOC to use it in IC. EX: If we are skype chatting and you say you are going to RP kill me at this time and this place, and then I go to that place at that time.
What is Power-Gaming?: Power gaming is a big no no. It is where you over power someone In game without giving them a chance to react. EX: *Leonardo sneaks up behind Catalina and stabs her* Then I presume to go on and kill here without her able to do anything.
What is Assassin’s Creed?: Assassin’s creed is an open-world game series where play as Desmond Miles, a modern-day assassin who lives the life of his ancestors through a thing called the Animus in order to find the pieces of eden.
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P.S. This application is a hell of a lot better than my first one. I took 2 and a half hours doing this.
Mr.Poopsac, you have indeed made a better app. However there's one large issue. YOU CANNOT KNOW ANYTHING OF THE ASSASSINS OR TEMPLARS, NOR CAN YOU START AS AN ASSASSIN OR TEMPLAR. YOU CANNOT EVEN SEE ANY HOODED PEOPLE, OR CHRISTIAN KNIGHTS, WHATEVER THE HECK YOU WANT TO CALL THEM, THEY CANNOT BE IN YOUR BACKSTORY.
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Sorry. Kuloko rubbed off on me there. I have told people like you this so many ing times it's unreal. Why not try again with a better backstory hm?
This man he saw was not an assassin nor templar but a normal man fighting guards. And the Epilogue is OOC for myself to decide what I want to do. Not once did I say Leonardo knew about an assassin or templar so for you to even think that is just a waste of time.
Now I am not editing my application nor replying again because I feel like I have gotten nothing but treated like s.hit ever since I posted my first app.
Way to make a first impression on a possible new player but now I will never open this forum up again.
This man he saw was not an assassin nor templar but a normal man fighting guards. And the Epilogue is OOC for myself to decide what I want to do. Not once did I say Leonardo knew about an assassin or templar so for you to even think that is just a waste of time.
Now I am not editing my application nor replying again because I feel like I have gotten nothing but treated like s.hit ever since I posted my first app.
Way to make a first impression on a possible new player but now I will never open this forum up again.
Good luck to you sir.
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"The only place I wanna go; that's forward. Going back is a waste."
"Go back there, it's the only place people like you belong." "Just don't come back."
This man he saw was not an assassin nor templar but a normal man fighting guards. And the Epilogue is OOC for myself to decide what I want to do. Not once did I say Leonardo knew about an assassin or templar so for you to even think that is just a waste of time.
Now I am not editing my application nor replying again because I feel like I have gotten nothing but treated like s.hit ever since I posted my first app.
Way to make a first impression on a possible new player but now I will never open this forum up again.
You applied because you needed us. We didn't need you.
This man he saw was not an assassin nor templar but a normal man fighting guards. And the Epilogue is OOC for myself to decide what I want to do. Not once did I say Leonardo knew about an assassin or templar so for you to even think that is just a waste of time.
Now I am not editing my application nor replying again because I feel like I have gotten nothing but treated like s.hit ever since I posted my first app.
Way to make a first impression on a possible new player but now I will never open this forum up again.
Might I say good day, sir. We do not want you, as a new player.
Role-Play Exp.: I was a member of Lord of the Craft, a very strict roleplay server, for about 1 1/2 years before it crashed and became unplayable. I have been Role playing since I was 13 years old and am an avid Paragraph role player.
Why Us: I am looking for a RP server that has skills to help me shape my character, as a Rp server without skills is loose and gives people the ability to do things their character normally wouldn't be able to do.
Time You Can Dedicate: I am readily able to commit Three to Four hours a day to this server, IF the Role play draws me in to stay.
Have you played Assassin's Creed? I have not played any of the games in this series, but I know that that doesn't matter if I'm only going to be a Citizen/worker. I do not plan on being anything very big into changing the course of history. So I think I really don't need to know much about the Video Game, so much as to the 15th century, which I do know about.
IC
Name: Ivar Sunarrow
Gender: Male
Age: 23
Fears: Drowning, Heights, Losing the ones he loves (aka friends)
Personality: Ivar is a very calm and passive person. Not at all smart, his brawn helps him get things done. Usually the last to be in a fight, he is usually the one trying to stop it. He is a very simple person, but he is filled with good intentions.
Skills: As I previously noted, he is very strong. He is especially good at manual labor such as Farm work, Lumbering, and Mining. If the job needs someone willing to share the elbow grease, you can bet that Ivar can pull you through.
Nickname (Optional): Big-E (pronounced E as in his name is pronouned EE-var
RP Example (Add Dialogue): Coming home from a day of work at the Saw Mill, Ivar was about to turn onto the road that led to his little shack on the hill, when he heard a distant scream. Now, Ivar knew that he should be heading to his house, but his conscience wouldn't allow him. Dropping his work load, being his tools and money, onto the road, he dashed for the source of the scream. His long legs, as he was taller than most people, propelled him down the road, getting him closer and closer to the sound. Upon turning a final corner, he came upon two muggers picking on an elderly lady. Now, being simple, Ivar only knew one thing, this lady was in trouble. Taking a deep breath, he let out a shout-like bark that would even make a Pit Bull stop and think about charging.
"Hey!"
His voice carried quite clearly to the ears of all three and, turning to face him, all were equally terrified to see him. Ivar walked into the Alley, easily blocking the way out with his massively muscular bulk, his eyes trained on the Bandits. Giving them a good stare down, the two robbers seemed about to wet themselves before giving the Elderly lady enough room to escape.
"Come, Lady. Ivar get you away."
Turning sideways, letting the still shaking lady past, he turned after her and followed. He could hear the two muggers whispering behind him, hearing them plot to kill him later, but he didn't mind. He had saved this poor old lady from such a fate and that was all he wanted to be happy.
Skin (Link, picture, description): https://sphotos-a.xx...778154431_n.jpg Ivar is a very tall and muscular man, having worked all his life. He has tanned skin and is never seen wearing fancy clothes, as he isn't very rich at all.
Backstory (1-2 LONG paragraphs): Ivar StoneArrow was just a boy in an orphanage, his parents having died in a terrible fire. He was a normal boy, but he was tall, much taller than all of the kids his age. A business man saw this, one day, and adopted the child. The man worked on a farm and used Ivar for Labor. Now, Ivar had never gotten any schooling and only learned from experience, so he thought the man was a good father figure. This work made Ivar bigger and strong, with a healthy appetite to boot. But when Ivar became an adult at the age of 18, having worked 12 years on his Adopted Fathers farm, his "father" died in an accident with their bull.
With no one to take care of him, Ivar worked the farm on his own, until officials realized what had happened. They told Ivar that he couldn't run the farm, as it really wasn't his, and that he would have to move. So Ivar, homeless, found an abandoned shack and took to doing odd jobs in the nearby Town. A man of the earth, Ivar wasn't greedy or even jealous of anyone for their wealthy life style. He was only ever happy to help others, as that is how he was brought up.
Other
What is Roleplay? Roleplaying is the ability to create a character and give that character life through your own fingers. To Roleplay is to take on the mind of a completely different person and live their life as you would live it.
What is Metagaming? Metagaming is the action of taking information that you know In Real Life and applying it to an Rp situation. Like calling the person you are talking to by their name when your character is only meeting them for the first time. So, basically, taking ooc information and applying it Rp'ly.
What is Powergaming? Powergaming is when you do things that your character normally can't do. Or, if in a fight, Powergaming is when you are able to dodge, deflect, and attack anything or anybody without weakness, like a god, which isn't correct Roleplay at all. ((and no, I did not Google any of these answers, I already know them))
What is Assassin's Creed? A Video game, that is all I know. I have never played this game, but I know that it doesn't take correct knowledge to roleplay as a citizen/worker in an everyday life instance.
Oh, and here's the Asterisk that I was suppose to post after reading the rules. -->*<--
Role-Play Exp.: I was a member of Lord of the Craft, a very strict roleplay server, for about 1 1/2 years before it crashed and became unplayable. I have been Role playing since I was 13 years old and am an avid Paragraph role player.
Why Us: I am looking for a RP server that has skills to help me shape my character, as a Rp server without skills is loose and gives people the ability to do things their character normally wouldn't be able to do.
Time You Can Dedicate: I am readily able to commit Three to Four hours a day to this server, IF the Role play draws me in to stay.
Have you played Assassin's Creed? I have not played any of the games in this series, but I know that that doesn't matter if I'm only going to be a Citizen/worker. I do not plan on being anything very big into changing the course of history. So I think I really don't need to know much about the Video Game, so much as to the 15th century, which I do know about.
IC
Name: Ivar Sunarrow
Gender: Male
Age: 23
Fears: Drowning, Heights, Losing the ones he loves (aka friends)
Personality: Ivar is a very calm and passive person. Not at all smart, his brawn helps him get things done. Usually the last to be in a fight, he is usually the one trying to stop it. He is a very simple person, but he is filled with good intentions.
Skills: As I previously noted, he is very strong. He is especially good at manual labor such as Farm work, Lumbering, and Mining. If the job needs someone willing to share the elbow grease, you can bet that Ivar can pull you through.
Nickname (Optional): Big-E (pronounced E as in his name is pronouned EE-var
RP Example (Add Dialogue): Coming home from a day of work at the Saw Mill, Ivar was about to turn onto the road that led to his little shack on the hill, when he heard a distant scream. Now, Ivar knew that he should be heading to his house, but his conscience wouldn't allow him. Dropping his work load, being his tools and money, onto the road, he dashed for the source of the scream. His long legs, as he was taller than most people, propelled him down the road, getting him closer and closer to the sound. Upon turning a final corner, he came upon two muggers picking on an elderly lady. Now, being simple, Ivar only knew one thing, this lady was in trouble. Taking a deep breath, he let out a shout-like bark that would even make a Pit Bull stop and think about charging.
"Hey!"
His voice carried quite clearly to the ears of all three and, turning to face him, all were equally terrified to see him. Ivar walked into the Alley, easily blocking the way out with his massively muscular bulk, his eyes trained on the Bandits. Giving them a good stare down, the two robbers seemed about to wet themselves before giving the Elderly lady enough room to escape.
"Come, Lady. Ivar get you away."
Turning sideways, letting the still shaking lady past, he turned after her and followed. He could hear the two muggers whispering behind him, hearing them plot to kill him later, but he didn't mind. He had saved this poor old lady from such a fate and that was all he wanted to be happy.
Skin (Link, picture, description): https://sphotos-a.xx...778154431_n.jpg Ivar is a very tall and muscular man, having worked all his life. He has tanned skin and is never seen wearing fancy clothes, as he isn't very rich at all.
Backstory (1-2 LONG paragraphs): Ivar StoneArrow was just a boy in an orphanage, his parents having died in a terrible fire. He was a normal boy, but he was tall, much taller than all of the kids his age. A business man saw this, one day, and adopted the child. The man worked on a farm and used Ivar for Labor. Now, Ivar had never gotten any schooling and only learned from experience, so he thought the man was a good father figure. This work made Ivar bigger and strong, with a healthy appetite to boot. But when Ivar became an adult at the age of 18, having worked 12 years on his Adopted Fathers farm, his "father" died in an accident with their bull.
With no one to take care of him, Ivar worked the farm on his own, until officials realized what had happened. They told Ivar that he couldn't run the farm, as it really wasn't his, and that he would have to move. So Ivar, homeless, found an abandoned shack and took to doing odd jobs in the nearby Town. A man of the earth, Ivar wasn't greedy or even jealous of anyone for their wealthy life style. He was only ever happy to help others, as that is how he was brought up.
Other
What is Roleplay? Roleplaying is the ability to create a character and give that character life through your own fingers. To Roleplay is to take on the mind of a completely different person and live their life as you would live it.
What is Metagaming? Metagaming is the action of taking information that you know In Real Life and applying it to an Rp situation. Like calling the person you are talking to by their name when your character is only meeting them for the first time. So, basically, taking ooc information and applying it Rp'ly.
What is Powergaming? Powergaming is when you do things that your character normally can't do. Or, if in a fight, Powergaming is when you are able to dodge, deflect, and attack anything or anybody without weakness, like a god, which isn't correct Roleplay at all. ((and no, I did not Google any of these answers, I already know them))
What is Assassin's Creed? A Video game, that is all I know. I have never played this game, but I know that it doesn't take correct knowledge to roleplay as a citizen/worker in an everyday life instance.
Oh, and here's the Asterisk that I was suppose to post after reading the rules. -->*<--
I love this app. Only things are, make the RP example more like you're actually RPing with someone, and your last name should seem more like a real last name.
Eh, sorry, but no. I was only going to make one application for this rp server. And upon seeing that it only has 30 player cap, I doubt it would be very lively at any time. And how is Sunarrow not a real last name? I have seen far weirder last names than that. And the way that I Roleplayed with the example, That could have easily been 4 people (including me) roleplaying. I don't appreciate how I have to go by "your" rules and do "your" way to rp. Everyone Role plays differently and you should accept that and be more lenient in those departments.
Denied.
Your definitions were obviously copied from another site, which is unacceptable. Your fears are unrealistic, Zombies and Assassin's? First off, you may not know anything of the Assassin's or Templars IC. This is 15th century Europe, meaning no Zombies here. Your skin cannot be of a Knight or Gaurd, this would be implying you starting out at a specific class which is not accepted. We would much prefer a picture of your skin. Your backstory is also quite cliche, may want to fix that. Remember to fix these issues in a re-posted application, not editing the original post.
Denied. Check your grammar, we try to have players with near perfect grammar and punctuation. 13? You may be a little too young for this server. Backstory is also cliche, you should make it more unique. Your skin sounds like it resembles an Assassin, may want to change that. Remember to repost your application and not edit the original post.
"The only place I wanna go; that's forward. Going back is a waste."
"Go back there, it's the only place people like you belong."
"Just don't come back."
You skipped over my app.... it is the one before the first one you reviewed...
In general, there were 3 apps starting with mine then going down. The fact that it was missed is just stupid because it was right there.
But since the guy above me ever so insists. I'll bump it and feel like a d.ick for doing it
The "Guy above you" Is a whitelister, hence why he said "We". Getting snippy will get you nowhere. I'll let Nintenzero do your app. He's more strict; it'll be fun.
I didn't mean to come off as "snippy" but if the person who quoted me is a whitelister why didn't he go back a page and review it. I mean The one whitelister reviewed the 2 apps below me and there was already accepted app above me. its not that hard to miss.
And one last thing. Why don't you just review me instead of waiting. That's stupid. My app is terrible it's not even 1/4 of what I normally write but I considered I'd dumb it down because more than half the apps written are trolls anyway and there's only a handful of legitimate ones.
If you're not going to try then we don't want you anyway. If you think your app is terrible, make it better before it's reviewed. Arguing with staff in general is also not a good idea if you're looking to get accepted. The solution to the "Troll" issue you mentioned, as well as many others, is a WIP plan, but there is a plan.
And I don't have time to do an official review right now. Just a post or two.
Ahhh yes, Chauck never lies...
As for your application Mr. Poopsac, I would have to deny you... Your definitions were bland and I need to make sure you know what your talking about, maybe an Example would help. Also, your backstory was simple, I liked it. However you may want to go back and check your grammar. Your RP example was completely broken in a way, you may want to redo it.
"The only place I wanna go; that's forward. Going back is a waste."
"Go back there, it's the only place people like you belong."
"Just don't come back."
Yes. I agree. After I posted the app, I read i and didn't like it. I would like to write a completely different one because the one I had just is plain terrible. Look for it in about an hour and then all of you guys can see my sheer potential. I wasn't thinking on topic when I wrote this app therefore it came out bad.
I am not trying to argue with the staff and i'm sorry I came off to be an a.ss.
IGN: vdeangelis22
AGE: 16
RP EXPERIENCE: 8/10
WHY US: I love Assassin’s Creed and Minecraft. I have looked through this forum post multiple times and finally decided its’ time to write an application.
DEDICATION TIME: 3-4 hours daily.
HAVE YOU PLAYED AC?: I have beaten all of them.
Name: Leonardo Angiolini da Venezia
Gender: Male
Age: 34
Fears: Fears of Plague, Corruption, and Death.
Personality: Leonardo’s personality is one that is courageous. He is not afraid to do what he thinks is right or what other people think is wrong. He will help a person in need and is mostly helpful.
Skills: His skills are complex. His first skill is blacksmithing. He gained this from an apprenticeship he took on when he was 26. A second is swordplay. Leonardo was an excellent swordsman. He trained 4 hours a day when was 18 all the way up to 24. A third skill of his may be stealth. He learned this as a child when his mother owned a brothel. A lesser skill of his is free-running. Leonardo could never get the hang of it. However, he can climb buildings sufficiently though.
RP Example:
Leonardo: *walks into the crowd of people*
*walks up to market stand nonchalantly*
*as he walks by he steals a piece of bread*
Shop Owner: Hey! Come back here!
Leonardo: *ignores and keeps walking*
Shop Owner: Guards! Guards! Come quick! That man stole bread from me!
Leonardo: *quickens his pace as the guards confront him*
*starts to run*
Guard: Hey! Stop Running Thief!
*starts to chase after Leonardo*
*runs onto a rooftop*
*follows Leonardo’s tracks*
*jumps off small building and runs into alley ways*
*Chases him into alley way*
*runs into a crowd of people*
*tosses a bag of money down drawing the people to frenzy*
*runs away safely*
*loses Leonardo after trying to get through the frantic people*
Leonardo: *talking to peasant boy* Here you go kid.
Peasant: t-t-thank you mister. You are very kind.
Leonardo: It was my pleasure.
*slips back into crowd unnoticed*
Skin:
Backstory:
Leonardo Angiolini da Venezia, a name soon to be flowing through the streets of Firenze, Italia. As a child, Leonardo grew up in Venezia, Italia. The City of Water some may call it. Leonardo was born to Lorenzo and Catalina Angiolini. Lorenzo was an architect and Catalina owned a brothel. They met when Lorenzo walked into her brothel looking for a “good time”. When they first locked eyes it’s like they knew that they were meant for each other. Soon after that day they got married and then 9 months later their son was born.
Leonardo Angiolini da Venezia, had his mother’s eyes and his father’s creativity. As a child Leonardo spent most of his time with Catalina, his mother, inside of the brothel house. It was here he learned one of his greatest skills. He learned how to be stealthy and hide in a crowd. Catalina used to teach him every day, this little known art of stealth. Leonardo took a liking to these daily “lessons”. He couldn’t get any “real world” practice in because there was no reason for him to be stealthy. Along with these teachings his mother gave him he also went to school to learn how to read and write. By the time he was 14, his mother stopped giving him the lessons in stealth and let him “do his own thing” for a while. Leonardo played and hung out with friends. Leonardo and his friends always used to climb houses and what little trees there were. Some of his friends expanded and learned how to jump from building to building. Leonardo however was not able to do this. The only thing Leonardo could do was climb buildings. Before you know it Leonardo was reaching adulthood and his childhood was coming to an end.
Leonardo Angiolini da Venezia, now reaching the age of 18 is learning new skills and gaining new interests. A new interest Leonardo discovered is when he saw a man fighting off guards with a sword and took them all out one by one. Leonardo sought this to be entertaining as the guards that were defeated had been committing unlawful acts. It is ironic, Leonardo always thought because the guards that were protecting them were breaking the rules they are trying to enforce. As this man fought off the guards, Leonardo wanted to talk to him, but as he started to walk over the man ran away from the scene and vanished. Leonardo looked for a place or someone who can teach him how to wield a sword but he found no one. Leonardo decided, if he can’t find anyone to teach him he would teach himself. That day he went to a blacksmith and purchased a Venetian Falchion. Leonardo then started off with the basics working from sheathing and drawing his sword to basic swinging. It took him a month to master butchering a bale of hay. At this rate, Leonardo thought that he would never learn. Leonardo however, had an idea. This idea included a way of learning the basics techniques of a sword from a professional. He was going to join the guard. Leonardo actually didn’t join the guard he just signed up and went through basic training. Which in his mind was brilliant. This basic training taught him well. Leonardo was 20 by the time he got out of training and even still wasn’t nearly good as he wanted to be.
Leonardo, a man who was in desperate need of training sought out to his father for answers. Lorenzo was extremely helpful in his cause telling Leonardo that his Uncle was involved in some things when he was young and new all the tricks and techniques. Leonardo’s Uncle lived on the other side of Venezia. Leonardo was willing to do all that it took for him to learn. So he moved in with his Uncle and was willing to train for however long it took him to master the sword. A day after he moved in with his Uncle they started his training. Leonardo trained for years on end until he mastered the art of the sword. They trained for 8 hours a day every day until Leonardo learned every trick and technique his Uncle new.
It has been 6 years since Leonardo has moved in with his Uncle and he is ready to leave and find a career for the rest of his life. Leonardo had seen the skill before. He had liked it too. This job he wanted was to own a blacksmith shop and sell his makings. In order to do this Leonardo had to go through apprenticeship through a mastery “program”. He went to the nearest blacksmith and asked for apprenticeship. The owner said he would teach him. Leonardo, now learning how to smelt and craft armor and weapons had taken extreme liking to this newly gained skill of his. Nothing really important happened in Leonardo’s life at the time of his apprenticeship. It has been 4 years of learning the trade of being a blacksmith, and Leonardo is ready to move on to the next chapter of his life.
Leonardo Angiolini da Venezia, a name soon to be recognized as the hero of the peasants. Leonardo is now 30 years old and looking to open up a shop. He has heard of excitement and job opportunities from travelers coming in from Florence. Leonardo decides that it is best if he move there. Fast forward 2 years and Leonardo is living by himself in need of a job. He is barely getting by and has to steal for meals. It is occurring in his head that it was a bad idea to go to Florence, but something keeps telling him to stay. Leonardo has gained many friends in Florence, most of them peasants. He realizes there are people living worse off than him and wants to do something about it. Leonardo learns that the guards are supposed to be helping but are corrupt. He learns that they are evil. He decided that if the guards, the protectors of the city, won’t help then he will. Leonardo starts going into the guard ran markets and steals food for the people in need of it. He is seen as the peasant’s hero and keeps doing this.
The time has now come where Leonardo has to decide to either keep stealing for the people and continue on the path to becoming an Assassin or have a legitimate job as a blacksmith and live a normal life. Only we can decide in this epic adventure.
What is Role-Play?: Role-play is a way of taking a step out of normal life and taking on the role of either a fictional or non-fictional character. You can do this through games or acting. “Acting” sums up role-play very well actually.
What is Meta-Gaming?: Meta gaming is a big no no. It is where you use knowledge gained OOC to use it in IC. EX: If we are skype chatting and you say you are going to RP kill me at this time and this place, and then I go to that place at that time.
What is Power-Gaming?: Power gaming is a big no no. It is where you over power someone In game without giving them a chance to react. EX: *Leonardo sneaks up behind Catalina and stabs her* Then I presume to go on and kill here without her able to do anything.
What is Assassin’s Creed?: Assassin’s creed is an open-world game series where play as Desmond Miles, a modern-day assassin who lives the life of his ancestors through a thing called the Animus in order to find the pieces of eden.
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P.S. This application is a hell of a lot better than my first one. I took 2 and a half hours doing this.
Mr.Poopsac, you have indeed made a better app. However there's one large issue. YOU CANNOT KNOW ANYTHING OF THE ASSASSINS OR TEMPLARS, NOR CAN YOU START AS AN ASSASSIN OR TEMPLAR. YOU CANNOT EVEN SEE ANY HOODED PEOPLE, OR CHRISTIAN KNIGHTS, WHATEVER THE HECK YOU WANT TO CALL THEM, THEY CANNOT BE IN YOUR BACKSTORY.
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Sorry. Kuloko rubbed off on me there. I have told people like you this so many ing times it's unreal. Why not try again with a better backstory hm?
"The only place I wanna go; that's forward. Going back is a waste."
"Go back there, it's the only place people like you belong."
"Just don't come back."
Now I am not editing my application nor replying again because I feel like I have gotten nothing but treated like s.hit ever since I posted my first app.
Way to make a first impression on a possible new player but now I will never open this forum up again.
Good luck to you sir.
"The only place I wanna go; that's forward. Going back is a waste."
"Go back there, it's the only place people like you belong."
"Just don't come back."
You applied because you needed us. We didn't need you.
I couldn't of said it any better.
"The only place I wanna go; that's forward. Going back is a waste."
"Go back there, it's the only place people like you belong."
"Just don't come back."
IGN: GreenKoopaBros
Age: 23
Role-Play Exp.: I was a member of Lord of the Craft, a very strict roleplay server, for about 1 1/2 years before it crashed and became unplayable. I have been Role playing since I was 13 years old and am an avid Paragraph role player.
Why Us: I am looking for a RP server that has skills to help me shape my character, as a Rp server without skills is loose and gives people the ability to do things their character normally wouldn't be able to do.
Time You Can Dedicate: I am readily able to commit Three to Four hours a day to this server, IF the Role play draws me in to stay.
Have you played Assassin's Creed? I have not played any of the games in this series, but I know that that doesn't matter if I'm only going to be a Citizen/worker. I do not plan on being anything very big into changing the course of history. So I think I really don't need to know much about the Video Game, so much as to the 15th century, which I do know about.
IC
Name: Ivar Sunarrow
Gender: Male
Age: 23
Fears: Drowning, Heights, Losing the ones he loves (aka friends)
Personality: Ivar is a very calm and passive person. Not at all smart, his brawn helps him get things done. Usually the last to be in a fight, he is usually the one trying to stop it. He is a very simple person, but he is filled with good intentions.
Skills: As I previously noted, he is very strong. He is especially good at manual labor such as Farm work, Lumbering, and Mining. If the job needs someone willing to share the elbow grease, you can bet that Ivar can pull you through.
Nickname (Optional): Big-E (pronounced E as in his name is pronouned EE-var
RP Example (Add Dialogue): Coming home from a day of work at the Saw Mill, Ivar was about to turn onto the road that led to his little shack on the hill, when he heard a distant scream. Now, Ivar knew that he should be heading to his house, but his conscience wouldn't allow him. Dropping his work load, being his tools and money, onto the road, he dashed for the source of the scream. His long legs, as he was taller than most people, propelled him down the road, getting him closer and closer to the sound. Upon turning a final corner, he came upon two muggers picking on an elderly lady. Now, being simple, Ivar only knew one thing, this lady was in trouble. Taking a deep breath, he let out a shout-like bark that would even make a Pit Bull stop and think about charging.
"Hey!"
His voice carried quite clearly to the ears of all three and, turning to face him, all were equally terrified to see him. Ivar walked into the Alley, easily blocking the way out with his massively muscular bulk, his eyes trained on the Bandits. Giving them a good stare down, the two robbers seemed about to wet themselves before giving the Elderly lady enough room to escape.
"Come, Lady. Ivar get you away."
Turning sideways, letting the still shaking lady past, he turned after her and followed. He could hear the two muggers whispering behind him, hearing them plot to kill him later, but he didn't mind. He had saved this poor old lady from such a fate and that was all he wanted to be happy.
Skin (Link, picture, description): https://sphotos-a.xx...778154431_n.jpg Ivar is a very tall and muscular man, having worked all his life. He has tanned skin and is never seen wearing fancy clothes, as he isn't very rich at all.
Backstory (1-2 LONG paragraphs): Ivar StoneArrow was just a boy in an orphanage, his parents having died in a terrible fire. He was a normal boy, but he was tall, much taller than all of the kids his age. A business man saw this, one day, and adopted the child. The man worked on a farm and used Ivar for Labor. Now, Ivar had never gotten any schooling and only learned from experience, so he thought the man was a good father figure. This work made Ivar bigger and strong, with a healthy appetite to boot. But when Ivar became an adult at the age of 18, having worked 12 years on his Adopted Fathers farm, his "father" died in an accident with their bull.
With no one to take care of him, Ivar worked the farm on his own, until officials realized what had happened. They told Ivar that he couldn't run the farm, as it really wasn't his, and that he would have to move. So Ivar, homeless, found an abandoned shack and took to doing odd jobs in the nearby Town. A man of the earth, Ivar wasn't greedy or even jealous of anyone for their wealthy life style. He was only ever happy to help others, as that is how he was brought up.
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What is Roleplay? Roleplaying is the ability to create a character and give that character life through your own fingers. To Roleplay is to take on the mind of a completely different person and live their life as you would live it.
What is Metagaming? Metagaming is the action of taking information that you know In Real Life and applying it to an Rp situation. Like calling the person you are talking to by their name when your character is only meeting them for the first time. So, basically, taking ooc information and applying it Rp'ly.
What is Powergaming? Powergaming is when you do things that your character normally can't do. Or, if in a fight, Powergaming is when you are able to dodge, deflect, and attack anything or anybody without weakness, like a god, which isn't correct Roleplay at all. ((and no, I did not Google any of these answers, I already know them))
What is Assassin's Creed? A Video game, that is all I know. I have never played this game, but I know that it doesn't take correct knowledge to roleplay as a citizen/worker in an everyday life instance.
Oh, and here's the Asterisk that I was suppose to post after reading the rules. -->*<--