It will be denied. This has to be a joke. Look at other applications, your definitions are way off (last 3), no RP, no backstory, improper skin, completely wrong IC portion.
Hey Nintenzero, I'm not trying to be irritating or anything, but when I try to get on the server, it says I'm not whitelisted yet... if you just haven't gotten around to it yet that's fine, I just wanna know in case there's some sort of problem with my Minecraft or something...
First off, this will be denied. Please like I told you before, look at other applications. This is either a joke, or you're just plain ignorant...
It will be denied. This has to be a joke. Look at other applications, your definitions are way off (last 3), no RP, no backstory, improper skin, completely wrong IC portion.
Come on people, are you all that ignorant?
you have to be specific .-. i haven't been doing Rp'ing for a very long time, at least 2 years.. idfk what an IC is and i've never heard of metagaming and rp'ing is taking on the personality of a character that you created oh and if you know a shittin thing about Assassins Creed you'd know that is their oath. At the end of the second game before Ezio kills The Pope he is sworn into the guild and is told to repeat that.
No, he shouldn't be specific. doing so would be giving you the answers and thus making the whole process completely pointless, you need to be able to do it yourself. If you read the other (successful) applications you will see the blatant differences and will be able to see exactly where you went wrong.
If you don't understand something like "IC" then google it, you'll kick yourself afterwards.
The most frustrating part is that all the answers are here, right in front of you, over and over again in this thread because people have got it right over and over. If you really can't do it your self and you need to know where you are going wrong then engage your brain and read some other applications as has been repeated a million times.
Frankly, if you can't figure this stuff out then it reflects on what sort of person you will be on the server, and that sort of person is not wanted.
Well, nice answer.
I do know the Oath, but it isn't asking for the creed, it's asking What is Assassins Creed? Not What is the assassins creed? And honestly, all you have to do is look at previous applications that were accepted. Learn from them.
RP Example (Add Dialogue): Garrett, Prison Guard, Gate Keeper Garrett gets thrown into jail for multiple counts of theft. *Prison Guard throws Garrett in Prison cell forcefully* Prison Guard: "I hope you rot maggot!"
3 Hours later
Garrett: "I have to go to the bathroom!" Prison Guard: "There is a toilet in there! Use it!" Garrett: "But it's broken!" *Guard comes to check on toilet* *Once the guard unlocks the cell, Garrett delivers a solid punch to his face, knocking the guard unconscious* *Garrett makes a mad run out of his cell and for the gate* *When nearing the gate, the Gatekeeper Yells, "Stop running and put your hands where i can see them!" *Not stopping the Keeper yells, "I'm not going to ask you again! Put your hands where I can see them!" *Still not stopping the Keeper signals to close the gates*
*Garrett sprints toward the gate sliding under at the last possible second, barely missing the barrage of arrows being shot at him and dashes into the woods*
Backstory (1-2 LONG paragraphs): When I was young, i grew up with a Single mother in Venice. We were poor and lived in a small shack. I was an only child... or so i thought. My childhood was rough, and very grueling. Since I was the only man of the house I had to start work at a young age to be able to support us. I worked on many farms which is very hard work, but worth it. I made 2 florins a hour working the fields 12 hours a day. I did this until i was 22 and finally had enough money to support myself. Before i left for greater horizons, my mom told me a long kept secret that almost made me faint, I had a brother. She told me he had grew up in an orphanage and hasn't been there for many years. I made it my personal goal to find my brother.
5 years later, i was sitting in a bar in Monterggoni when I heard a rumor that there was a successful Templar Leader in Florence by the last name of Richards.
This was my next destination.
Other
What is Roleplay? Role-playing is when someone takes on the personality and traits of someone fictional or nonfictional to act out a role.
What is Metagaming? Metagaming is when you use information you find out of character that you apply to your character Ex: Someone hears that somebody is plotting to kill their character at a certain place so they avoid that place.
What is Powergaming? Powergaming is when you make yourself practically invincible and don't give others a chance to react.
Ex: Player walks up to another player throwing him down and killing him without giving him a chance to react.
What is Assassin's Creed? Assassin's Creed is a game when you take on the character of Desmond Miles. His ancestors Ezio and Altiar were assassins. Abstergo "recruits" Desmond to use a machine called the Animus. This allows him to access his ancestors memories and relive them as if they were his own. Soon Desmond will learn the real reason he's there. *
RP Example (Add Dialogue): Garrett, Prison Guard, Gate Keeper Garrett gets thrown into jail for multiple counts of theft. *Prison Guard throws Garrett in Prison cell forcefully* Prison Guard: "I hope you rot maggot!"
3 Hours later
Garrett: "I have to go to the bathroom!" Prison Guard: "There is a toilet in there! Use it!" Garrett: "But it's broken!" *Guard comes to check on toilet* *Once the guard unlocks the cell, Garrett delivers a solid punch to his face, knocking the guard unconscious* *Garrett makes a mad run out of his cell and for the gate* *When nearing the gate, the Gatekeeper Yells, "Stop running and put your hands where i can see them!" *Not stopping the Keeper yells, "I'm not going to ask you again! Put your hands where I can see them!" *Still not stopping the Keeper signals to close the gates*
*Garrett sprints toward the gate sliding under at the last possible second, barely missing the barrage of arrows being shot at him and dashes into the woods*
Backstory (1-2 LONG paragraphs): When I was young, i grew up with a Single mother in Venice. We were poor and lived in a small shack. I was an only child... or so i thought. My childhood was rough, and very grueling. Since I was the only man of the house I had to start work at a young age to be able to support us. I worked on many farms which is very hard work, but worth it. I made 2 florins a hour working the fields 12 hours a day. I did this until i was 22 and finally had enough money to support myself. Before i left for greater horizons, my mom told me a long kept secret that almost made me faint, I had a brother. She told me he had grew up in an orphanage and hasn't been there for many years. I made it my personal goal to find my brother.
5 years later, i was sitting in a bar in Monterggoni when I heard a rumor that there was a successful Templar Leader in Florence by the last name of Richards.
This was my next destination.
Other
What is Roleplay? Role-playing is when someone takes on the personality and traits of someone fictional or nonfictional to act out a role.
What is Metagaming? Metagaming is when you use information you find out of character that you apply to your character Ex: Someone hears that somebody is plotting to kill their character at a certain place so they avoid that place.
What is Powergaming? Powergaming is when you make yourself practically invincible and don't give others a chance to react.
Ex: Player walks up to another player throwing him down and killing him without giving him a chance to react.
What is Assassin's Creed? Assassin's Creed is a game when you take on the character of Desmond Miles. His ancestors Ezio and Altiar were assassins. Abstergo "recruits" Desmond to use a machine called the Animus. This allows him to access his ancestors memories and relive them as if they were his own. Soon Desmond will learn the real reason he's there. *
RP Example (Add Dialogue): Garrett, Prison Guard, Gate Keeper Garrett gets thrown into jail for multiple counts of theft. *Prison Guard throws Garrett in Prison cell forcefully* Prison Guard: "I hope you rot maggot!"
3 Hours later
Garrett: "I have to go to the bathroom!" Prison Guard: "There is a toilet in there! Use it!" Garrett: "But it's broken!" *Guard comes to check on toilet* *Once the guard unlocks the cell, Garrett delivers a solid punch to his face, knocking the guard unconscious* *Garrett makes a mad run out of his cell and for the gate* *When nearing the gate, the Gatekeeper Yells, "Stop running and put your hands where i can see them!" *Not stopping the Keeper yells, "I'm not going to ask you again! Put your hands where I can see them!" *Still not stopping the Keeper signals to close the gates*
*Garrett sprints toward the gate sliding under at the last possible second, barely missing the barrage of arrows being shot at him and dashes into the woods*
Backstory (1-2 LONG paragraphs): When I was young, i grew up with a Single mother in Venice. We were poor and lived in a small shack. I was an only child... or so i thought. My childhood was rough, and very grueling. Since I was the only man of the house I had to start work at a young age to be able to support us. I worked on many farms which is very hard work, but worth it. I made 2 florins a hour working the fields 12 hours a day. I did this until i was 22 and finally had enough money to support myself. Before i left for greater horizons, my mom told me a long kept secret that almost made me faint, I had a brother. She told me he had grew up in an orphanage and hasn't been there for many years. I made it my personal goal to find my brother.
5 years later, i was sitting in a bar in Monterggoni when I heard a rumor that there was a successful Templar Leader in Florence by the last name of Richards.
This was my next destination.
Other
Denied.
Roleplay example is too short.
Cannot know anything about te Templars in your backstory.
Cannot be brothers with craft for staff and technical reasons.
What is Roleplay? Role-playing is when someone takes on the personality and traits of someone fictional or nonfictional to act out a role.
What is Metagaming? Metagaming is when you use information you find out of character that you apply to your character Ex: Someone hears that somebody is plotting to kill their character at a certain place so they avoid that place.
What is Powergaming? Powergaming is when you make yourself practically invincible and don't give others a chance to react.
Ex: Player walks up to another player throwing him down and killing him without giving him a chance to react.
What is Assassin's Creed? Assassin's Creed is a game when you take on the character of Desmond Miles. His ancestors Ezio and Altiar were assassins. Abstergo "recruits" Desmond to use a machine called the Animus. This allows him to access his ancestors memories and relive them as if they were his own. Soon Desmond will learn the real reason he's there. *
Accidenly put the reply inside of the quote, just look for it.
The Meaning of Life, the Universe, and Everything.
Join Date:
1/13/2012
Posts:
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Minecraft:
dragno90
Member Details
Sorry i have not re-posted for a while I have been very busy with school anyways here it is. 70 billionth time's the charm right?
OOC
IGN: dragno90
Age:13
Role-Play Exp.: Great.
Why Us: Because the games were great and this server sounds fantastic.
Time You Can Dedicate: Between one hour to three on the weekend maybe more, and 1 to two hours on weekdays
Have you played Assassin's Creed? Yes
IC
Name: Jacques Alimarto
Gender: Male
Age: 17
Fears: Death.
Personality: Doesn't like to talk much, can never tell what he is thinking.
Skills: Stealthy, fast Nickname (Optional): Dragno
RP Example (Add Dialogue): I stood in the midst of a huge crowd eyeing my target. I walked towards the stand all the while eyeing the guards who were near by. I got to the stand and looked at the food he was selling. I was starving. I turned to the side and started walking away but not before grabbing an apple while the merchant was talking to a customer. I stuck it in my pocket thinking target acquired. " Guards! That man stole from me!" the merchant shouted. The guards started running at me. "Time to get out of here..." I said. I ran through the crowd shoving people out of my way to get away from the guards. I looked back for a second to see how close they were. They were tripping over the people who had fallen. I ran around the corner of a building and started climbing it. "There he is!" a guard shouted. I was nearly at the top of the building by now. His buddies looked to where he was pointing and saw me. I got to the top only to find an archer pointing an arrow at my head. "Really your going to kill me all because I stole an apple?" I said. I grabbed his bow and pointed it away from me just as he let the arrow loose. I then punched him in the face and threw him of the building. I continued running. "Lost sight of him sir" said a guard somewhere off in the distance. "Finally" I said as I jumped off the building into cart full of hay. I got out and continued running until i came to the edge of a cliff. "There you are scum." Said the captain of the guard. "Ugh not again..." I said "This time your not getting away." He said as he grabbed me and threw me of the cliff. I hit the ground with a loud thud and blacked out.
Skin (Link, picture, description) http://imageshack.us.../213/popww.png/ Black hair, blue eyes, tanned skin, with leather top (or whatever its called) black pants with red cloth ( I think) under belt.
Backstory (1-2 LONG paragraphs): I have no memory of who I am or what happened or anything. the only thing i remember is falling off a cliff then blacking out. I haven't the slightest clue of where I am either. Like I said I don't know my name except for a piece of paper I found in one of my pockets with the name Dragno written on it so I am just using that as my name until I remember what my real name. I have traveled to many towns and cities in hopes of discovering my true identity. So far nothing. I have lived off of stealing food from vendors while no one is looking. But then again, someone is looking. I don't know who or where but someone is watching me. I can feel it. Everywhere I go i have this feeling that someone is standing out of sight staring me down. There is one thing I know about them though. They have the answers to my questions. I will find them someday.
That is when I was sixteen. A year has gone by and yet I still have no memories back. I still have that feeling meaning they haven't stopped following me. At any rate I shall continue onward. I keep seeing this man everywhere i go i think he may be following me... Now i know I am being followed. I see this same man in every town and every city. An ordinary pheasant. But the same one everywhere i go. Same hair, eyes, face, clothes and shoes. Perhaps it is time to follow the follower. I followed him everywhere. Moving into crowds, sitting on benches whenever he looks behind him. Maybe I was wrong. He doesn't seem to be doing anything but I shall continue following him. He went into a building so I followed him but to my great disappointment he had vanished. I looked everywhere. but found no clue to where he might have gone. So I continued my journey to find my memories.
Other
What is Roleplay? Roleplay is where people create characters or become an already existing character and act things out. It takes years to master roleplaying but not that long to learn the basics.
What is Metagaming? Metagaming is using information your character does not know to your advantage or using outside information to change your gameplay, and watching walkthroughs on youtube then using that as a guide. Example: Guy reads another persons application then goes in-game and uses it to his advantage. Or: Bob watches youtube video on game then uses that knowledge to complete the game without doing any thinking for the puzzles (I only watch youtube videos on the game if I am stuck at a puzzle or part and I have tried everything to get past but nothing works.)
What is Powergaming? Powergaming is basically pretending your immortal and can't be hit or forcing another player to do something they don't want to. Example: Bob was shot at from five centimeters away but the bullet missed him by an inch. Or: Fred got stabbed a billion times in the chest but survived. Or: Joe stabbed Jay killing him instantly and thus giving jay no time to react.
What is Assassin's Creed? Assassin's Creed is a game series that follows a story line of a man named Desmond Miles who is the descendant of three assassin's Altair, Ezio and Conner. Desmond uses a device called the Animus to go into the lives of his ancestors to find these artifacts called The Pieces of Eden before Abstergo (otherwise known as the Templars) finds them and uses them to make the world in their vision. *
No, he shouldn't be specific. doing so would be giving you the answers and thus making the whole process completely pointless, you need to be able to do it yourself. If you read the other (successful) applications you will see the blatant differences and will be able to see exactly where you went wrong.
If you don't understand something like "IC" then google it, you'll kick yourself afterwards.
The most frustrating part is that all the answers are here, right in front of you, over and over again in this thread because people have got it right over and over. If you really can't do it your self and you need to know where you are going wrong then engage your brain and read some other applications as has been repeated a million times.
Frankly, if you can't figure this stuff out then it reflects on what sort of person you will be on the server, and that sort of person is not wanted.
RP Example (Add Dialogue): Garrett, Prison Guard, Gate Keeper Garrett gets thrown into jail for multiple counts of theft. *Prison Guard throws Garrett in Prison cell forcefully* Prison Guard: "I hope you rot maggot!"
3 Hours later
Garrett: "I have to go to the bathroom!" Prison Guard: "There is a toilet in there! Use it!" Garrett: "But it's broken!" *Guard comes to check on toilet* *Once the guard unlocks the cell, Garrett delivers a solid punch to his face, knocking the guard unconscious* *Garrett makes a mad run out of his cell and for the gate* *When nearing the gate, the Gatekeeper Yells, "Stop running and put your hands where i can see them!" *Not stopping the Keeper yells, "I'm not going to ask you again! Put your hands where I can see them!" *Still not stopping the Keeper signals to close the gates*
*Garrett sprints toward the gate sliding under at the last possible second, barely missing the barrage of arrows being shot at him and dashes into the woods*
Backstory (1-2 LONG paragraphs): When I was young, i grew up with a Single mother in Venice. We were poor and lived in a small shack. I was an only child... or so i thought. My childhood was rough, and very grueling. Since I was the only man of the house I had to start work at a young age to be able to support us. I worked on many farms which is very hard work, but worth it. I made 2 florins a hour working the fields 12 hours a day. I did this until i was 22 and finally had enough money to support myself. Before i left for greater horizons, my mom told me a long kept secret that almost made me faint, I had a brother. She told me he had grew up in an orphanage and hasn't been there for many years. I made it my personal goal to find my brother.
5 years later, i was sitting in a bar in Monterggoni when I heard a rumor that there was a successful Templar Leader in Florence by the last name of Richards.
This was my next destination.
Other
What is Roleplay? Role-playing is when someone takes on the personality and traits of someone fictional or nonfictional to act out a role.
What is Metagaming? Metagaming is when you use information you find out of character that you apply to your character Ex: Someone hears that somebody is plotting to kill their character at a certain place so they avoid that place.
What is Powergaming? Powergaming is when you make yourself practically invincible and don't give others a chance to react.
Ex: Player walks up to another player throwing him down and killing him without giving him a chance to react.
What is Assassin's Creed? Assassin's Creed is a game when you take on the character of Desmond Miles. His ancestors Ezio and Altiar were assassins. Abstergo "recruits" Desmond to use a machine called the Animus. This allows him to access his ancestors memories and relive them as if they were his own. Soon Desmond will learn the real reason he's there. *
Accepted. If someone could please whitelist this person, as I am currently with a friend. I will make a note to whitelist you.
Sorry i have not re-posted for a while I have been very busy with school anyways here it is. 70 billionth time's the charm right?
OOC
IGN: dragno90
Age:13
Role-Play Exp.: Great.
Why Us: Because the games were great and this server sounds fantastic.
Time You Can Dedicate: Between one hour to three on the weekend maybe more, and 1 to two hours on weekdays
Have you played Assassin's Creed? Yes
IC
Name: Jacques Alimarto
Gender: Male
Age: 17
Fears: Death.
Personality: Doesn't like to talk much, can never tell what he is thinking.
Skills: Stealthy, fast Nickname (Optional): Dragno
RP Example (Add Dialogue): I stood in the midst of a huge crowd eyeing my target. I walked towards the stand all the while eyeing the guards who were near by. I got to the stand and looked at the food he was selling. I was starving. I turned to the side and started walking away but not before grabbing an apple while the merchant was talking to a customer. I stuck it in my pocket thinking target acquired. " Guards! That man stole from me!" the merchant shouted. The guards started running at me. "Time to get out of here..." I said. I ran through the crowd shoving people out of my way to get away from the guards. I looked back for a second to see how close they were. They were tripping over the people who had fallen. I ran around the corner of a building and started climbing it. "There he is!" a guard shouted. I was nearly at the top of the building by now. His buddies looked to where he was pointing and saw me. I got to the top only to find an archer pointing an arrow at my head. "Really your going to kill me all because I stole an apple?" I said. I grabbed his bow and pointed it away from me just as he let the arrow loose. I then punched him in the face and threw him of the building. I continued running. "Lost sight of him sir" said a guard somewhere off in the distance. "Finally" I said as I jumped off the building into cart full of hay. I got out and continued running until i came to the edge of a cliff. "There you are scum." Said the captain of the guard. "Ugh not again..." I said "This time your not getting away." He said as he grabbed me and threw me of the cliff. I hit the ground with a loud thud and blacked out.
Skin (Link, picture, description) http://imageshack.us.../213/popww.png/ Black hair, blue eyes, tanned skin, with leather top (or whatever its called) black pants with red cloth ( I think) under belt.
Backstory (1-2 LONG paragraphs): I have no memory of who I am or what happened or anything. the only thing i remember is falling off a cliff then blacking out. I haven't the slightest clue of where I am either. Like I said I don't know my name except for a piece of paper I found in one of my pockets with the name Dragno written on it so I am just using that as my name until I remember what my real name. I have traveled to many towns and cities in hopes of discovering my true identity. So far nothing. I have lived off of stealing food from vendors while no one is looking. But then again, someone is looking. I don't know who or where but someone is watching me. I can feel it. Everywhere I go i have this feeling that someone is standing out of sight staring me down. There is one thing I know about them though. They have the answers to my questions. I will find them someday.
That is when I was sixteen. A year has gone by and yet I still have no memories back. I still have that feeling meaning they haven't stopped following me. At any rate I shall continue onward. I keep seeing this man everywhere i go i think he may be following me... Now i know I am being followed. I see this same man in every town and every city. An ordinary pheasant. But the same one everywhere i go. Same hair, eyes, face, clothes and shoes. Perhaps it is time to follow the follower. I followed him everywhere. Moving into crowds, sitting on benches whenever he looks behind him. Maybe I was wrong. He doesn't seem to be doing anything but I shall continue following him. He went into a building so I followed him but to my great disappointment he had vanished. I looked everywhere. but found no clue to where he might have gone. So I continued my journey to find my memories.
Other
What is Roleplay? Roleplay is where people create characters or become an already existing character and act things out. It takes years to master roleplaying but not that long to learn the basics.
What is Metagaming? Metagaming is using information your character does not know to your advantage or using outside information to change your gameplay, and watching walkthroughs on youtube then using that as a guide. Example: Guy reads another persons application then goes in-game and uses it to his advantage. Or: Bob watches youtube video on game then uses that knowledge to complete the game without doing any thinking for the puzzles (I only watch youtube videos on the game if I am stuck at a puzzle or part and I have tried everything to get past but nothing works.)
What is Powergaming? Powergaming is basically pretending your immortal and can't be hit or forcing another player to do something they don't want to. Example: Bob was shot at from five centimeters away but the bullet missed him by an inch. Or: Fred got stabbed a billion times in the chest but survived. Or: Joe stabbed Jay killing him instantly and thus giving jay no time to react.
What is Assassin's Creed? Assassin's Creed is a game series that follows a story line of a man named Desmond Miles who is the descendant of three assassin's Altair, Ezio and Conner. Desmond uses a device called the Animus to go into the lives of his ancestors to find these artifacts called The Pieces of Eden before Abstergo (otherwise known as the Templars) finds them and uses them to make the world in their vision. *
Hmm...please add another fear or so, and I find this acceptable.
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"If it's a fair fight, you planned it wrong" -Unknown
By the way, if anyone has been accepted, but is not currently whitelisted, please PM me with a LINK TO THE PAGE YOU WERE ACCEPTED ON as proof you were, indeed, acceptedd. If you do not have this link, you will not be whitelisted.
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"If it's a fair fight, you planned it wrong" -Unknown
ok omni here is my application with some changes:
IGN: kronky
Age: 15
Role-Play Exp.: I played Skyrim and many MTA:SA/SA:MP RP servers such as LS-RP and Pr-Rp
Why Us: Because the idea of roleplaying Assassin's creed on minecraft sounds really fun
Time You Can Dedicate: about 2 or more hours a day
Have you played Assassin's Creed? I watched my friend complete some AC2 missions, and i've completed AC Brotherhood
IC
Name: Fabio Toscano
Gender: Male
Age: 36
Fears: Big wild spiders ( Tarantula and such)
Personality: Determinated, social and a very little bit paranoid.
Skills: Climbing, Strategic and Patient.
Nickname (Optional): //
RP Example (Add Dialogue):
Fab: Tomatoes! Bananas! Cabbages! Just for 5f per kilogram!
*A well dressed lady approaches Fabio*
Fab: Hello madam! How can i help ya?
*The lady cracks up a smile and starts speaking*
Lady: Hello good sir, i was looking for some Cabbages.
Fab: Alright, how much of them?
*While speaking, Fabio has already put 4 Cabbages in a bag and shows them to her*
Lady: Uhmm..... Maybe, put one more please.
Fab: Alright that'll be 3.5f.
Lady: No way! 2f and it's a deal!
*Fabio picks up 2 tomatoes and puts them in the bag containing the cabbages.
Fab: I'll gift you some tomatoes okay?
Lady: ..This is the last time i buy from you!
*The lady hands fabio some coins and walks away with a small smile on her face*
Skin (Link, picture, description): http://www.minecraft...adventurer.html This is the best i could find, i can't find anything better, if you don't like it maybe you have some tips or some help for a better skin?
Backstory (1-2 LONG paragraphs):
Fabio was born in Rome,Italy, in their parent's own cottage.
His mother was a tailor, always working non-stop to earn some Florins and her name was Angela.
His father was a private blacksmith and his name was Fabrizio. When Fabio was born, her mother stopped working to take care of her child every single day and night.
One day, when Fabio was only 13, he came back home only to find his mother's dead corpse lying on the ground, soulless. Fabrizio's forge was a bit away from their home, they had no idea what happened and who killed her, it was risky, so they decided to move and live in his father's forge. His dad would daily craft him harmless wooden swords for Fabio and his friends to play together. But as soon as he grew up, the "playing together" became a real sword training. His father thought it would be good to teach him how to fight and defend himself, since those times were pretty hard. Fabio turned 23 and decided to meet his uncle Riccardo for the first time. Riccardo was a politician's guard, and he would privately train Fabio to fight each day behind his father's forge. Fabio turned 36, and his father was 62. He didn't want his son to live as a blacksmith, living just to pay taxes so before he said his last words, he hands Fabio a key to a chest.
Fabrizio died of natural causes. Fabio used the key to open a chest which was hidden under his dad's deathbed, which contained a shiny Golden sword and a brand new Leather cap, so he equips himself with some useful gear and tools, some bread and with some florins.
He then starts a journey which will hopefully bring him to a new, and lucky life.
Other
What is Roleplay? Playing a specific role in a game, like you would in real life.
What is Metagaming? Metagaming is the abuse of OOC informations in IC events like calling someone by seeing their nametag without meeting them before (where their nametag is the OOC information, and calling them without knowing their name is the IC event)
OR, let's say you are out of your town chopping down some trees, and (supposing there is a private msg function) someone PM's you (which is an OOC command, atleast on most of the servers where i played) that a thief is stealing from your house so you abuse of that OOC information to go back to your house and kill the thief.
What is Powergaming? Doing unrealistic or impossible actions or forcing people to do something unrealistic,
an example would be that you are found doing something illegal, and without the chance of replying/fighting back, the guard does /me ties up the criminal and jails him
What is Assassin's Creed? A game published by Ubisoft which consists of 5 games. One of the main character, Desmond Miles, is a descent of an ancient line of Assassins who is initially kidnapped by a corporation aware of his descendants which forces him to sit in a device called Animus which makes him experience ancient memories of the time when the Assassins were currently active. Then a 2 girls and a guy save him and they agree to work together so he uses a modified version of the Animus to experience again ancient memories to find the location of the Eden apples. The game is played as Desmond experiences and controls his ancestor (Ezio or Altair) and must keep synchronization between his memories and his ancient memories.
Oh almost forgot: *
Hmmm...two gripes, but after that this app is acceptable. First off, not 100% sure about your skin. There are a lot of "medieval" and "renaissance" skins out there for anyone to edit, so if you could find something more period-appropriate, that'd be great. However, if you're stuck on using that, I could think about it.
Second, your fears. Please add more relevant fears.
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"If it's a fair fight, you planned it wrong" -Unknown
Role-Play Exp.: I played Skyrim and many MTA:SA/SA:MP RP servers such as LS-RP and Pr-Rp
Why Us: Because the idea of roleplaying Assassin's creed on minecraft sounds really fun
Time You Can Dedicate: about 2 or more hours a day
Have you played Assassin's Creed? I watched my friend complete some AC2 missions, and i've completed AC Brotherhood
IC
Name: Fabio Toscano
Gender: Male
Age: 36
Fears: Fear of being betrayed (in general, by a friend etc.), Fear of death.
Personality: Determinated, social and a very little bit paranoid.
Skills: Climbing, Strategic and Patient.
Nickname (Optional): //
RP Example (Add Dialogue):
Fab: Tomatoes! Bananas! Cabbages! Just for 5f per kilogram!
*A well dressed lady approaches Fabio*
Fab: Hello madam! How can i help ya?
*The lady cracks up a smile and starts speaking*
Lady: Hello good sir, i was looking for some Cabbages.
Fab: Alright, how much of them?
*While speaking, Fabio has already put 4 Cabbages in a bag and shows them to her*
Lady: Uhmm..... Maybe, put one more please.
Fab: Alright that'll be 3.5f.
Lady: No way! 2f and it's a deal!
*Fabio picks up 2 tomatoes and puts them in the bag containing the cabbages.
Fab: I'll gift you some tomatoes okay?
Lady: ..This is the last time i buy from you!
*The lady hands fabio some coins and walks away with a small smile on her face*
Skin (Link, picture, description):
Backstory (1-2 LONG paragraphs):
Fabio was born in Rome,Italy, in their parent's own cottage.
His mother was a tailor, always working non-stop to earn some Florins and her name was Angela.
His father was a private blacksmith and his name was Fabrizio. When Fabio was born, her mother stopped working to take care of her child every single day and night.
One day, when Fabio was only 13, he came back home only to find his mother's dead corpse lying on the ground, soulless. Fabrizio's forge was a bit away from their home, they had no idea what happened and who killed her, it was risky, so they decided to move and live in his father's forge. His dad would daily craft him harmless wooden swords for Fabio and his friends to play together. But as soon as he grew up, the "playing together" became a real sword training. His father thought it would be good to teach him how to fight and defend himself, since those times were pretty hard. Fabio turned 23 and decided to meet his uncle Riccardo for the first time. Riccardo was a politician's guard, and he would privately train Fabio to fight each day behind his father's forge. Fabio turned 36, and his father was 62. He didn't want his son to live as a blacksmith, living just to pay taxes so before he said his last words, he hands Fabio a key to a chest.
Fabrizio died of natural causes. Fabio used the key to open a chest which was hidden under his dad's deathbed, which contained a shiny Golden sword and a brand new Leather cap, so he equips himself with some useful gear and tools, some bread and with some florins.
He then starts a journey which will hopefully bring him to a new, and lucky life.
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What is Roleplay? Playing a specific role in a game, like you would in real life.
What is Metagaming? Metagaming is the abuse of OOC informations in IC events like calling someone by seeing their nametag without meeting them before (where their nametag is the OOC information, and calling them without knowing their name is the IC event)
OR, let's say you are out of your town chopping down some trees, and (supposing there is a private msg function) someone PM's you (which is an OOC command, atleast on most of the servers where i played) that a thief is stealing from your house so you abuse of that OOC information to go back to your house and kill the thief.
What is Powergaming? Doing unrealistic or impossible actions or forcing people to do something unrealistic,
an example would be that you are found doing something illegal, and without the chance of replying/fighting back, the guard does /me ties up the criminal and jails him
What is Assassin's Creed? A game published by Ubisoft which consists of 5 games. One of the main character, Desmond Miles, is a descent of an ancient line of Assassins who is initially kidnapped by a corporation aware of his descendants which forces him to sit in a device called Animus which makes him experience ancient memories of the time when the Assassins were currently active. Then a 2 girls and a guy save him and they agree to work together so he uses a modified version of the Animus to experience again ancient memories to find the location of the Eden apples. The game is played as Desmond experiences and controls his ancestor (Ezio or Altair) and must keep synchronization between his memories and his ancient memories.*
All right, I believe this is acceptable. I will make a note to whitelist you when I can.
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"If it's a fair fight, you planned it wrong" -Unknown
I do know the Oath, but it isn't asking for the creed, it's asking What is Assassins Creed? Not What is the assassins creed? And honestly, all you have to do is look at previous applications that were accepted. Learn from them.
As a Marine it is not to do as others do. It's to do as you think should be done and what you KNOW is right, and FYI i googled what meta-gaming is and i summaried it in mine. Now I will repost and since i'm not sick af i'll do it "right"
As a Marine it is not to do as others do. It's to do as you think should be done and what you KNOW is right, and FYI i googled what meta-gaming is and i summaried it in mine. Now I will repost and since i'm not sick af i'll do it "right"
Learning from another application isn't the same as "doing what they do". You examine that application, see what works and didn't work, and make that knowledge your own. You don't copy them (that will also get you denied), you learn and improve yourself.
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"If it's a fair fight, you planned it wrong" -Unknown
Why Us: Apparantly you guys are very strict so that's another reason as well as the reason from my previous application.
Time You Can Dedicate: I can dedicate majority of weekends and at least 4 hours each day
Have you played Assassin's Creed? Yep.
IC
Name: Oshinana Fero
Gender: Male
Age: 17
Fears: Religious figures and the Templars.
Personality: Quiet. Kept to self unless angry.
Skills: Artist, great lute player, skilled acrobat.
Nickname (Optional): Roid
RP Example (Add Dialogue):
One day, Oshinana was walking amongst the commoners in the Bazaar of Istanbul when suddenly something struck him in the back of his head.
He turned to find that his little brother had thrown a ripe tomato at him.
"You little brat!" He exclaimed as he began to pursue the small boy.
The boy giggled and snorted as he began sprinting away from his bigger brother.
The chase led the young man and his little brother through the Bazaar into an area in which the Templars had taken over.
Both boys stopped running... "B-brother?" the little boy said, "What are they doing here?" he said with a sniffle.
Oshinana snatched the boys hand and walked in the opposite direction. "I don't know but from the looks of it.. They're killing more innocent people... We need to get out of here."
When he was only 6 years old, Oshinana Fero was orphaned along with his only brother. His parents and sister had gone to a Masquerade for the evening and would not be back untilthe next days afternoon. So as to make sure that Oshinana didn't get in trouble (Which he had a knack for doing) and the baby would be safer than with his brother, they left them with a close relative. His Uncle.Oshinanas' uncles' name was Olaf. Olaf was a scruffy man of about 43 or 44. While Oshinana and his baby brother had their fair share of shenanigans with his Uncle Olaf and his mom and pa and sis were dancing the night away,an evil plot was unfolding.
The next afternoon after a small stop by the Bazaar to fetch some groceries on the way home for Mother, the boys head home. Upon their arrival Oshinana immediately notices something isn't right.The small boy opens the door to find a Squadron of Templars standing over his mother and sisters defiled bodies and watching two more beating the living **** out of his father. The father looks towards the door after two strikes to the chin and lets out a chilling and raspy "Ruuuun..." before taking a final bloody blow to the temple. Oshinana immediately drops the groceries and grabs his baby brother and begins running.He runs until he gets to his uncles house which is a two hour walk away. After telling his Uncle everything his Uncle explains his father was not in good standings with the Templars and that he'd learn eventually but not today.11 years have passed and Oshinana has grown into a formidable man. He's a brilliant intellectual, an amazing artist and his acrobatic feats have yet to cease to amaze the masses. His uncle has passed away but he takes care of himself and his orphaned brother..as if he were his own child.
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What is Roleplay? Roleplaying is where you create a main character in a fictional story and assume the role of that character.
What is Metagaming? is any OOC action made by a player's character which makes use of knowledge that the character is not meant to be aware of
What is Powergaming? is where you give yourself an unfair advantage by giving your character some special ability or (i.e.) if you're battling someone and they do something like "nladgjrkg swings at full speed towards you" and you reply with "fuhe lunges forward and plunges his sword into your chest killing you immediately" Giving the other player no chance to react or counter or even reply really.
What is Assassin's Creed? A continuing series of 5 games and counting in which in each one you take control of an assassin or assassin to be and fight the Templars or escape from the templars etc etc and try to free the eastern hemisphere from their grasps. But in reality you are Desmond Miles, who is an descendent of all the people you play as throughout the gameshooked up to a machine called the Animus 2.0. (SPOILER WARNING!!!!!!!!)I haven't finished Revelations yet but I'm working on it and right now apparantly his brain has confused as to wether it is, Altair, Ezio, or Desmond. Although I'm not sure how this is going to fair in the next one considering you play as a indian during the American Revolution.
What does OOC stand for? Out Of Character
What does IC stand for? In Character.
Whelp hope I get accepted on this one. If there is anything that needs to be fixed this time just tell me the section and tell me what needs to be done to better it.
Now, if you'll excuse me. I'm going to get a whiskey and wait for a reply. ^-^
Why Us: Apparantly you guys are very strict so that's another reason as well as the reason from my previous application.
Time You Can Dedicate: I can dedicate majority of weekends and at least 4 hours each day
Have you played Assassin's Creed? Yep.
IC
Name: Oshinana Fero
Gender: Male
Age: 17
Fears: Religious figures and the Templars.
Personality: Quiet. Kept to self unless angry.
Skills: Artist, great lute player, skilled acrobat.
Nickname (Optional): Roid
RP Example (Add Dialogue):
One day, Oshinana was walking amongst the commoners in the Bazaar of Istanbul when suddenly something struck him in the back of his head.
He turned to find that his little brother had thrown a ripe tomato at him.
"You little brat!" He exclaimed as he began to pursue the small boy.
The boy giggled and snorted as he began sprinting away from his bigger brother.
The chase led the young man and his little brother through the Bazaar into an area in which the Templars had taken over.
Both boys stopped running... "B-brother?" the little boy said, "What are they doing here?" he said with a sniffle.
Oshinana snatched the boys hand and walked in the opposite direction. "I don't know but from the looks of it.. They're killing more innocent people... We need to get out of here."
When he was only 6 years old, Oshinana Fero was orphaned along with his only brother. His parents and sister had gone to a Masquerade for the evening and would not be back untilthe next days afternoon. So as to make sure that Oshinana didn't get in trouble (Which he had a knack for doing) and the baby would be safer than with his brother, they left them with a close relative. His Uncle.Oshinanas' uncles' name was Olaf. Olaf was a scruffy man of about 43 or 44. While Oshinana and his baby brother had their fair share of shenanigans with his Uncle Olaf and his mom and pa and sis were dancing the night away,an evil plot was unfolding.
The next afternoon after a small stop by the Bazaar to fetch some groceries on the way home for Mother, the boys head home. Upon their arrival Oshinana immediately notices something isn't right.The small boy opens the door to find a Squadron of Templars standing over his mother and sisters defiled bodies and watching two more beating the living **** out of his father. The father looks towards the door after two strikes to the chin and lets out a chilling and raspy "Ruuuun..." before taking a final bloody blow to the temple. Oshinana immediately drops the groceries and grabs his baby brother and begins running.He runs until he gets to his uncles house which is a two hour walk away. After telling his Uncle everything his Uncle explains his father was not in good standings with the Templars and that he'd learn eventually but not today.11 years have passed and Oshinana has grown into a formidable man. He's a brilliant intellectual, an amazing artist and his acrobatic feats have yet to cease to amaze the masses. His uncle has passed away but he takes care of himself and his orphaned brother..as if he were his own child.
Other
What is Roleplay? Roleplaying is where you create a main character in a fictional story and assume the role of that character.
What is Metagaming? is any OOC action made by a player's character which makes use of knowledge that the character is not meant to be aware of
What is Powergaming? is where you give yourself an unfair advantage by giving your character some special ability or (i.e.) if you're battling someone and they do something like "nladgjrkg swings at full speed towards you" and you reply with "fuhe lunges forward and plunges his sword into your chest killing you immediately" Giving the other player no chance to react or counter or even reply really.
What is Assassin's Creed? A continuing series of 5 games and counting in which in each one you take control of an assassin or assassin to be and fight the Templars or escape from the templars etc etc and try to free the eastern hemisphere from their grasps. But in reality you are Desmond Miles, who is an descendent of all the people you play as throughout the gameshooked up to a machine called the Animus 2.0. (SPOILER WARNING!!!!!!!!)I haven't finished Revelations yet but I'm working on it and right now apparantly his brain has confused as to wether it is, Altair, Ezio, or Desmond. Although I'm not sure how this is going to fair in the next one considering you play as a indian during the American Revolution.
What does OOC stand for? Out Of Character
What does IC stand for? In Character.
Whelp hope I get accepted on this one. If there is anything that needs to be fixed this time just tell me the section and tell me what needs to be done to better it.
Now, if you'll excuse me. I'm going to get a whiskey and wait for a reply. ^-^
Peace off btw theres your star ---->*
Cannot know of assassins or templars beforehand. Please revise accordingly.
Not 100% about your name, buuut I'm not an expert on first names. Especially names from Istanbul. Sooo if you could link me somewhere to prove that is an actual name, that'd be appreciated.
Other than that, I say that's a good application.
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"If it's a fair fight, you planned it wrong" -Unknown
Oshinana is a First and Middle name put together. It's one of my friends names Her name is Oshin Ana Galunk. She's swedish but yeah. Also I'm revising the application. I mispelled the last name on all accounts. It's Ferro. An italian family. (see here http://www.houseofnames.com/ferro-family-crest) and i'll add to the background that the parents had lived in italy but left to flee religious persecution from the Catholics.
First off, this will be denied. Please like I told you before, look at other applications. This is either a joke, or you're just plain ignorant...
It will be denied. This has to be a joke. Look at other applications, your definitions are way off (last 3), no RP, no backstory, improper skin, completely wrong IC portion.
Come on people, are you all that ignorant?
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you have to be specific .-. i haven't been doing Rp'ing for a very long time, at least 2 years.. idfk what an IC is and i've never heard of metagaming and rp'ing is taking on the personality of a character that you created oh and if you know a shittin thing about Assassins Creed you'd know that is their oath. At the end of the second game before Ezio kills The Pope he is sworn into the guild and is told to repeat that.
Well, nice answer.
I do know the Oath, but it isn't asking for the creed, it's asking What is Assassins Creed? Not What is the assassins creed? And honestly, all you have to do is look at previous applications that were accepted. Learn from them.
IGN: Luck3Charms
Age: 14
Role-PlayExp.: I don't really have any but I have watched my brother Craftmasters play the server a few times.
WhyUs: I chose this server because it has the most interesting looking Role-Playing out there.
TimeYouCanDedicate: I could dedicate about 10 or so hours a week.
Have you played Assassin's Creed? Yes, I have. I have played every Assassin's Creed game released so far.
IC
Name: Garrett Richards
Gender: Male
Age: 27
Fears: Death, Heights, Being Hung
Personality: Loyal, hard working, energetic individual who will go out of his way to make sure a job gets done.
Skills: Sword fighting, Escape artist, Designing buildings.
Nickname (Optional):
RP Example (Add Dialogue): Garrett, Prison Guard, Gate Keeper
Garrett gets thrown into jail for multiple counts of theft.
*Prison Guard throws Garrett in Prison cell forcefully*
Prison Guard: "I hope you rot maggot!"
3 Hours later
Garrett: "I have to go to the bathroom!"
Prison Guard: "There is a toilet in there! Use it!"
Garrett: "But it's broken!"
*Guard comes to check on toilet*
*Once the guard unlocks the cell, Garrett delivers a solid punch to his face, knocking the guard unconscious*
*Garrett makes a mad run out of his cell and for the gate*
*When nearing the gate, the Gatekeeper Yells, "Stop running and put your hands where i can see them!"
*Not stopping the Keeper yells, "I'm not going to ask you again! Put your hands where I can see them!"
*Still not stopping the Keeper signals to close the gates*
*Garrett sprints toward the gate sliding under at the last possible second, barely missing the barrage of arrows being shot at him and dashes into the woods*
Skin (Link, picture, description): http://www.minecraft.../skin_71174.png
Backstory (1-2 LONG paragraphs): When I was young, i grew up with a Single mother in Venice. We were poor and lived in a small shack. I was an only child... or so i thought. My childhood was rough, and very grueling. Since I was the only man of the house I had to start work at a young age to be able to support us. I worked on many farms which is very hard work, but worth it. I made 2 florins a hour working the fields 12 hours a day. I did this until i was 22 and finally had enough money to support myself. Before i left for greater horizons, my mom told me a long kept secret that almost made me faint, I had a brother. She told me he had grew up in an orphanage and hasn't been there for many years. I made it my personal goal to find my brother.
5 years later, i was sitting in a bar in Monterggoni when I heard a rumor that there was a successful Templar Leader in Florence by the last name of Richards.
This was my next destination.
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What is Roleplay? Role-playing is when someone takes on the personality and traits of someone fictional or nonfictional to act out a role.
What is Metagaming? Metagaming is when you use information you find out of character that you apply to your character
Ex: Someone hears that somebody is plotting to kill their character at a certain place so they avoid that place.
What is Powergaming? Powergaming is when you make yourself practically invincible and don't give others a chance to react.
Ex: Player walks up to another player throwing him down and killing him without giving him a chance to react.
What is Assassin's Creed? Assassin's Creed is a game when you take on the character of Desmond Miles. His ancestors Ezio and Altiar were assassins. Abstergo "recruits" Desmond to use a machine called the Animus. This allows him to access his ancestors memories and relive them as if they were his own. Soon Desmond will learn the real reason he's there.
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Craft, you cannot whitelist him or grade his application as he is your brother.
Remove him from the whitelist until another Whitelister gets to him.
( I will in a second )Accidenly put the reply inside of the quote, just look for it.
OOC
IGN: dragno90
Age:13
Role-Play Exp.: Great.
Why Us: Because the games were great and this server sounds fantastic.
Time You Can Dedicate: Between one hour to three on the weekend maybe more, and 1 to two hours on weekdays
Have you played Assassin's Creed? Yes
IC
Name: Jacques Alimarto
Gender: Male
Age: 17
Fears: Death.
Personality: Doesn't like to talk much, can never tell what he is thinking.
Skills: Stealthy, fast
Nickname (Optional): Dragno
RP Example (Add Dialogue): I stood in the midst of a huge crowd eyeing my target. I walked towards the stand all the while eyeing the guards who were near by. I got to the stand and looked at the food he was selling. I was starving. I turned to the side and started walking away but not before grabbing an apple while the merchant was talking to a customer. I stuck it in my pocket thinking target acquired. " Guards! That man stole from me!" the merchant shouted. The guards started running at me. "Time to get out of here..." I said. I ran through the crowd shoving people out of my way to get away from the guards. I looked back for a second to see how close they were. They were tripping over the people who had fallen. I ran around the corner of a building and started climbing it.
"There he is!" a guard shouted. I was nearly at the top of the building by now. His buddies looked to where he was pointing and saw me. I got to the top only to find an archer pointing an arrow at my head.
"Really your going to kill me all because I stole an apple?" I said. I grabbed his bow and pointed it away from me just as he let the arrow loose. I then punched him in the face and threw him of the building. I continued running.
"Lost sight of him sir" said a guard somewhere off in the distance.
"Finally" I said as I jumped off the building into cart full of hay. I got out and continued running until i came to the edge of a cliff.
"There you are scum." Said the captain of the guard.
"Ugh not again..." I said
"This time your not getting away." He said as he grabbed me and threw me of the cliff. I hit the ground with a loud thud and blacked out.
Skin (Link, picture, description) http://imageshack.us.../213/popww.png/ Black hair, blue eyes, tanned skin, with leather top (or whatever its called) black pants with red cloth ( I think) under belt.
Backstory (1-2 LONG paragraphs): I have no memory of who I am or what happened or anything. the only thing i remember is falling off a cliff then blacking out. I haven't the slightest clue of where I am either. Like I said I don't know my name except for a piece of paper I found in one of my pockets with the name Dragno written on it so I am just using that as my name until I remember what my real name. I have traveled to many towns and cities in hopes of discovering my true identity. So far nothing. I have lived off of stealing food from vendors while no one is looking. But then again, someone is looking. I don't know who or where but someone is watching me. I can feel it. Everywhere I go i have this feeling that someone is standing out of sight staring me down. There is one thing I know about them though. They have the answers to my questions. I will find them someday.
That is when I was sixteen. A year has gone by and yet I still have no memories back. I still have that feeling meaning they haven't stopped following me. At any rate I shall continue onward. I keep seeing this man everywhere i go i think he may be following me... Now i know I am being followed. I see this same man in every town and every city. An ordinary pheasant. But the same one everywhere i go. Same hair, eyes, face, clothes and shoes. Perhaps it is time to follow the follower. I followed him everywhere. Moving into crowds, sitting on benches whenever he looks behind him. Maybe I was wrong. He doesn't seem to be doing anything but I shall continue following him. He went into a building so I followed him but to my great disappointment he had vanished. I looked everywhere. but found no clue to where he might have gone. So I continued my journey to find my memories.
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What is Roleplay? Roleplay is where people create characters or become an already existing character and act things out. It takes years to master roleplaying but not that long to learn the basics.
What is Metagaming? Metagaming is using information your character does not know to your advantage or using outside information to change your gameplay, and watching walkthroughs on youtube then using that as a guide. Example: Guy reads another persons application then goes in-game and uses it to his advantage. Or: Bob watches youtube video on game then uses that knowledge to complete the game without doing any thinking for the puzzles (I only watch youtube videos on the game if I am stuck at a puzzle or part and I have tried everything to get past but nothing works.)
What is Powergaming? Powergaming is basically pretending your immortal and can't be hit or forcing another player to do something they don't want to.
Example: Bob was shot at from five centimeters away but the bullet missed him by an inch. Or: Fred got stabbed a billion times in the chest but survived. Or: Joe stabbed Jay killing him instantly and thus giving jay no time to react.
What is Assassin's Creed? Assassin's Creed is a game series that follows a story line of a man named Desmond Miles who is the descendant of three assassin's Altair, Ezio and Conner. Desmond uses a device called the Animus to go into the lives of his ancestors to find these artifacts called The Pieces of Eden before Abstergo (otherwise known as the Templars) finds them and uses them to make the world in their vision.
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This. So much this. I can't vote this up enough.
Accepted. If someone could please whitelist this person, as I am currently with a friend. I will make a note to whitelist you.
Hmm...please add another fear or so, and I find this acceptable.
"If it's a fair fight, you planned it wrong" -Unknown
"If it's a fair fight, you planned it wrong" -Unknown
Hmmm...two gripes, but after that this app is acceptable. First off, not 100% sure about your skin. There are a lot of "medieval" and "renaissance" skins out there for anyone to edit, so if you could find something more period-appropriate, that'd be great. However, if you're stuck on using that, I could think about it.
Second, your fears. Please add more relevant fears.
"If it's a fair fight, you planned it wrong" -Unknown
All right, I believe this is acceptable. I will make a note to whitelist you when I can.
"If it's a fair fight, you planned it wrong" -Unknown
As a Marine it is not to do as others do. It's to do as you think should be done and what you KNOW is right, and FYI i googled what meta-gaming is and i summaried it in mine. Now I will repost and since i'm not sick af i'll do it "right"
Learning from another application isn't the same as "doing what they do". You examine that application, see what works and didn't work, and make that knowledge your own. You don't copy them (that will also get you denied), you learn and improve yourself.
"If it's a fair fight, you planned it wrong" -Unknown
IGN: Aorlow
Age: 18
Role-Play Exp.: 8.5/10
Why Us: Apparantly you guys are very strict so that's another reason as well as the reason from my previous application.
Time You Can Dedicate: I can dedicate majority of weekends and at least 4 hours each day
Have you played Assassin's Creed? Yep.
IC
Name: Oshinana Fero
Gender: Male
Age: 17
Fears: Religious figures and the Templars.
Personality: Quiet. Kept to self unless angry.
Skills: Artist, great lute player, skilled acrobat.
Nickname (Optional): Roid
RP Example (Add Dialogue):
One day, Oshinana was walking amongst the commoners in the Bazaar of Istanbul when suddenly something struck him in the back of his head.
He turned to find that his little brother had thrown a ripe tomato at him.
"You little brat!" He exclaimed as he began to pursue the small boy.
The boy giggled and snorted as he began sprinting away from his bigger brother.
The chase led the young man and his little brother through the Bazaar into an area in which the Templars had taken over.
Both boys stopped running... "B-brother?" the little boy said, "What are they doing here?" he said with a sniffle.
Oshinana snatched the boys hand and walked in the opposite direction. "I don't know but from the looks of it.. They're killing more innocent people... We need to get out of here."
Skin (Link, picture, description): http://www.minecraft...2/city-dweller/
Backstory (1-2 LONG paragraphs):
When he was only 6 years old, Oshinana Fero was orphaned along with his only brother. His parents and sister had gone to a Masquerade for the evening and would not be back untilthe next days afternoon. So as to make sure that Oshinana didn't get in trouble (Which he had a knack for doing) and the baby would be safer than with his brother, they left them with a close relative. His Uncle.Oshinanas' uncles' name was Olaf. Olaf was a scruffy man of about 43 or 44. While Oshinana and his baby brother had their fair share of shenanigans with his Uncle Olaf and his mom and pa and sis were dancing the night away,an evil plot was unfolding.
The next afternoon after a small stop by the Bazaar to fetch some groceries on the way home for Mother, the boys head home. Upon their arrival Oshinana immediately notices something isn't right.The small boy opens the door to find a Squadron of Templars standing over his mother and sisters defiled bodies and watching two more beating the living **** out of his father. The father looks towards the door after two strikes to the chin and lets out a chilling and raspy "Ruuuun..." before taking a final bloody blow to the temple. Oshinana immediately drops the groceries and grabs his baby brother and begins running.He runs until he gets to his uncles house which is a two hour walk away. After telling his Uncle everything his Uncle explains his father was not in good standings with the Templars and that he'd learn eventually but not today.11 years have passed and Oshinana has grown into a formidable man. He's a brilliant intellectual, an amazing artist and his acrobatic feats have yet to cease to amaze the masses. His uncle has passed away but he takes care of himself and his orphaned brother..as if he were his own child.
Other
What is Roleplay? Roleplaying is where you create a main character in a fictional story and assume the role of that character.
What is Metagaming? is any OOC action made by a player's character which makes use of knowledge that the character is not meant to be aware of
What is Powergaming? is where you give yourself an unfair advantage by giving your character some special ability or (i.e.) if you're battling someone and they do something like "nladgjrkg swings at full speed towards you" and you reply with "fuhe lunges forward and plunges his sword into your chest killing you immediately" Giving the other player no chance to react or counter or even reply really.
What is Assassin's Creed? A continuing series of 5 games and counting in which in each one you take control of an assassin or assassin to be and fight the Templars or escape from the templars etc etc and try to free the eastern hemisphere from their grasps. But in reality you are Desmond Miles, who is an descendent of all the people you play as throughout the gameshooked up to a machine called the Animus 2.0. (SPOILER WARNING!!!!!!!!)I haven't finished Revelations yet but I'm working on it and right now apparantly his brain has confused as to wether it is, Altair, Ezio, or Desmond. Although I'm not sure how this is going to fair in the next one considering you play as a indian during the American Revolution.
What does OOC stand for? Out Of Character
What does IC stand for? In Character.
Whelp hope I get accepted on this one. If there is anything that needs to be fixed this time just tell me the section and tell me what needs to be done to better it.
Now, if you'll excuse me. I'm going to get a whiskey and wait for a reply. ^-^
Peace off btw theres your star ---->*
Cannot know of assassins or templars beforehand. Please revise accordingly.
Not 100% about your name, buuut I'm not an expert on first names. Especially names from Istanbul. Sooo if you could link me somewhere to prove that is an actual name, that'd be appreciated.
Other than that, I say that's a good application.
"If it's a fair fight, you planned it wrong" -Unknown
Should I just edit it or double-post?