GUARD APPLICATION: 1) Username: piggypink8 How long have you been playing the server? (Minimum of 3 days) 5 or 6 days
[4) Have you read the Server, Prison, and Guard Rules? Yes. I agree with them totally, no issue's. 5) Any experience with the prison genre?Yes-no. I have attended other prison servers, but as i'm aware they didn't have guards.
[6) What is your time zone? EST 7) Why are you the best choice for guard?..I am responsible and when i'm given a task, I won't stop until I complete it. I have been recruited to many ranks on other high-populated servers, and i'm social and handy with a sword. I've got a talent with bow, also. I play minecraft and this server all the time and I would love to be a Trainee on it. I am understanding and trustworthy of anything you throw at me and ready to complete any request. I am a fast typer. I can type faster than any of my family members. I am patient for hit and run criminals...I love being and charge and I usually end up with that responsibility.
I am very handy with a sword (again), and I don't "rage" upon death. I will not attack the prisoner after he/she has killed me. I have spectated some guards and have noticed some are rather lazy... Example: I see someone hit a guard and run into a safe zone. Guard walks away without a word. I have also been killed by guards for no reason, or hit without being healed with a potion. I focus on not being like those guards and using a skilled guard technique. I don't sacrifice for a friend or team up with any prisoner(s). I believe I contain the talent to be a Trainee and devote my time to this server. I also will complain that not many guards are on in the morning, I'm a morning and afternoon person. I will be on whenever I get the chance. I can expect what prisoners will do when i'm not looking... fight with each other. I use f5 ALOT. I can see them without them seeing the whites of my eyes. (Revolutionary way Reference, lol) I joke around a bit when not given a task, but not when prisoners have gone crazy. 8) What is your current rank? Do you understand that we will require PROOF of your rank when/if you retire from guard? I am a C-prisoner ,I do understand this, I have screenshots just in case. I really hope you enjoy this-please reply soon. I have spent a majority of time working on this application and you hope you consider recruiting me to Trainee. I hope to speak with Wardens and Alpha-guards in the future. Thank-you for reading, -piggypink8 (P.S. I devoted a lot of time on this application, and I hope you appreciate that. Also, sorry for font changes ) Oh, and NoakiiI've been so tempted to scream at you "I APPLIED FOR GUARD, NOAKII!! ACCEPT IT!!" lol. Please reply soon!
He is not banned - /seen would tell you if he was. It looks like he pulled a dual - suddenly went inactive without any prior warning. If there had been a warning, he must have only told it to the other Wardens and not the whole server. If he gave no warning at all, he probably has been demoted by now. Although for the sake of having correct information, I would like Warden confirmation on whether or not he has been officially demoted.
He is banned. Mobains had Noakii/Viper ban him(for a reason I don't recall).
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"Come get it asshat" -GeneralLogan626
"How many tank turrets can you fit in your rectum" -LT_COUCH
Gorea it is builders choice who he unbans if the hacker has admitted it, it's his choice. If you wish too be unbanned you need too talk to noakii
Also just wanting too know how have you helped the server other than glitches
I had the idea for the pumpkin mine.
@max
Sorry just joking
@creed I don't use op apples guess I might have too
Jumbo, I said in my post that I know its not up to builder. And the things I have done for convicted are: Fixed about 5 - 6 glitch able areas (3 of which let you escape and 2 let you into guard). On the server I admin on I always recommend people to convicted, I know every one said that they tell people about the server but two of my friends who donated $40 dollars So I brought in an extra 80 bucks. And a non tangible thing that most people dont realize that Ive done is made glitching a more serious topic on convicted. Before I started this huge deal glitching into guard or where ever would be deal'd with like this *guard sees non guard in guard area* "Get out of guard, 5, 4, 3, 2, 1." Now you get banned or warned that a second offense will result in a ban.
Im and currently selling a sharpness 5 fire aspect 2 diamond sword. It is brand new and ready for action. If you would like to buy it /msg me in game. My username is FirstRepublic.
1) tonalcookie847
2) 15
3) I have been playing on this server for about a week now.
4) Yes
5) I have played on other nockoff prison servers
6) The time zone i live in is EST -5
7) You should pick me since I have never abused power given to me on other servers. Also I want to keep the peace.
8) I am in rank A
Glitch found: Pig triggers pressure plate.
If a player pops a saddle on a pig and rides it onto a pressure plate the door Will Open.
This means Players can Glitch into Guard areas and AlphaGuards ares (Cafe) and other areas where you should not go. To Fix this Glitch replace everything with buttons
Im and currently selling a sharpness 5 fire aspect 2 diamond sword. It is brand new and ready for action. If you would like to buy it /msg me in game. My username is FirstRepublic.
Save it for meeeeee plz. Ill be on in approx 1 hour to pick it up
It wouldn't even be helpful to server as bukkit does not allow the creation of new blocks...
weren't you banned tho?
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Yes but it was a false ban and so I got unbanned. The time I was banned I did not count as active guard time because even thought I was active on the forums whilst banned I was not guarding. Then one day I tried my daily try to log on and I was unbanned. It was quite amusing actually as I yelled "YESSSS" and my brother was quite confused. And my cat was ed because I got some of my ramen on it.
1)Username: TheOnlyGuardian 2)Your age: 16 3)How long have you been playing the server?(Minimum of 3 days) I have been playing this game for 8 days so far. 4)Have you read the Server,Prison,and Guard Rules? Yes, I have read the Server, Prison, and Guard rules and Noakii. I hope i typed it correctly 5)Any experience with the prison genre? I have played different prison games but not for minecraft, they were from a different computer game. If needed to know, the game is called Roblox. 6)What is your time zone? My time zone is Eastern, US 7)Why are you the best choice for guard? I am the best Choice for a guard position because not only am i a lot of fun to be around, but I do follow the rules. Also for someone who is still a bit new to minecraft, I'm quite a good shot with a bow. Though sometimes i might forget a rule, i will always remember it by the end of the night. That is why i believe I'm a good choice for a guard position. 8)What is your current rank?Do you understand that we will require PROOF of your rank when/if you retire from guard? My current rank is A, and yes i do understand that you will require proof of my rank.
Yes but it was a false ban and so I got unbanned. The time I was banned I did not count as active guard time because even thought I was active on the forums whilst banned I was not guarding. Then one day I tried my daily try to log on and I was unbanned. It was quite amusing actually as I yelled "YESSSS" and my brother was quite confused. And my cat was ed because I got some of my ramen on it.
1)Username:RDRP 2)Your age: 14 (Almost 15) 3)Howlong have you been playing the server?About a month (1-4 Hours a day, usually more on weekends) 4)Have you read the Server,Prison,andGuardRules? Yes, I have. Noakii 5)Any experience with the prison genre? I have played and been a guard on other prison servers such as Eurova, Sentenced, and City Prison. I have also spent a large amount of time on this prison server (one of the best ones out there in my opinion). 6)Whatis your time zone? Pacific Time Zone UTC-8 7)Why are you the best choice for guard? I will dish out the necessary jail time and punishments when players break the rules and I will never abuse my powers and privileges as a guard. I can act swiftly and quickly when it is the right time. I am good at PvP and will help when there are players rioting and breaking the rules. It is very difficult to find a fun server with a great community and enthusiasm. Helping that community and server would be a privilege and will bring me joy. I believe in fairness and keeping the game a clean and fun environment. I respect other guards and players and will always continue to follow the rules. I love being a guard on prison servers and I hope that I will be able to contribute to the wellness of this server as well. The rules will be my priority when guarding this server. Lately in the time that I have played on this server there has been a lack of guards online at late times in the nights. During these times there are usually players in full diamond armor attacking new players that have recently joined. Helping this problem along with others by strictly abiding by the rules will seriously improve the well being of the server along with allowing new players to feel safer. I can think and react quickly in most situations. I have been playing on this server for a while now and now that I have finally reached "Free", I feel that I have enough experience on this server to become a great guard.
The First main reason that I am the best choice for guard is that I am friendly. Now do not read this wrong and think that I will fee sorry for people and will cut them slack, because I will not. Holding grudges isn't my thing and I will never treat players unfairly based on knowing them or being friends with them. The rules apply to all and I will keep it that way through guarding the server.
The Second main reason that I am the best choice for guard is that I respect all players, especially those of higher ranks than me. I will continue to obey the Wardens, Alphaguards, and Guards to my full extent. I do not get mad at players and I do not insult players or swear at them. I believe that everyone should have a fair chance at survival and that everyone should be able to voice their opinion unless it does not coincide with the server and prison rules.
The third reason that I am the best choice for being picked as a guard for this server is that I have lots of guard experience. I play Minecraft alot and have found that prison servers are my thing. I have played on other prison servers such as Sentenced, Eurova, City Prison, and, of course, this server. On a couple of these servers I have been a guard. Although the experience from other prison servers won't necessarily carry on to this one, I have a lot of experience on this server. I have read many guard applications posted by newly joined C's. This makes me laugh because they have no experience what so ever with this specific server. I have played for a large amount of time and have reached level "Free". The knowledge of how the server runs and works will definitely help me as a guard rather than newly joined players posting guard applications.
The fourth and final reason that I will be a great guard is my dedication. I play Minecraft and go on this server about 1-4 hours a day and generally more on the weekends. Proof of my dedication to this server is not only the fact that I have donated a total of roughly $40 to the well being of the server, but I have worked extremely hard to get to the point where I am in this server (Items, Money, Friends, and my Rank). This dedication to the server will act as even more proof that not only will I be a fair, trustworthy guard, but also that I will abide by the server and prison rules, and continue to play on this amazing and intensely fun server for a very, very long time.
8)Whatis your current rank?Do you understand that we will require PROOF of your rank when/if you retire fromguard? My current rank is Free and I do understand that you will require proof of my rank.
Username: Annaschwander
2) Your age: 13
3) How long have you been playing the server? (Minimum of 3 days) I think about 12 days now?
4) Have you read the Server, Prison, and Guard Rules? All of them
5) Any experience with the prison genre? Not really
6) What is your time zone? Central, if I am thinking correctly.. (Michigan)
7) Why are you the best choice for guard? I really hate it when someone hits & kills a defensless player, and I can't do anything about it since I don't have good armor/weapons to kill them with... I hate it when people break the rules
8) What is your current rank? Do you understand that we will require PROOF of your rank when/if you retire from guard? Elite
I hope that you can accept my application, and even if you don't, I will still look for ways to help your server
Thank you so much for your time in reading my application
//Annaschwander
1)Username: 1Vl0N5T3R 2)Your age: 14 3)Howlong have you been playing the server?(Minimum of 3 days) 1 week I believe I don't know for sure time flies when your having fun =) 4)Have you read the Server,Prison,andGuardRules? Yes, Noakii 5)Any experience with the prison genre? Not really but, I enjoy it
6)Whatis your time zone? Central U.S
7)Why are you the best choice for guard? I think I would be a good choice for guard because I have owned my own server and I have been Op/Admin on multiple servers. I will apply the appropriate punishments if someone deserves it. I have played this server for only 5 or 6 days and yet I have played so much that I am an Elite already I am on the server a lot. I am very good at PvP and I can help out when groups are leading a prison break. I think I should be a guard because I hate seeing C-block players or any players for that matter being slain by Free/Op members and I would like to help put a stop to that. I will abide with the rules or you can revoke my guard status.
8)Whatis your current rank?Do you understand that we will require PROOF of your rank when/if you retire from guard? Currently I am Free Yes I do understand I have screenshots.
1) Username:yo0151
2) Your age:15
3) How long have you been playing the server? (Minimum of 3 days) a week and a half
4) Have you read the Server, Prison, and Guard Rules? yes every single one 2 times
5) Any experience with the prison genre? yes, i have been playing on prison servers for some time to understand what to do in them
6) What is your time zone? Eastern US
7) Why are you the best choice for guard? Im the best choice for a guard because I always follow the rules and I have plenty of experience in moderating servers.
8) What is your current rank? Do you understand that we will require PROOF of your rank when/if you retire from guard?
Current Rank - Elite, yes I understand that you will require proof and I have screenshots to prove my rank.
Noakii
1) Username: PrimedMissile
2) Your age:15
3) How long have you been playing the server? (Minimum of 3 days) 3 Months +
4) Have you read the Server, Prison, and Guard Rules? Yes, and then re-read
5) Any experience with the prison genre? Lots actually. I have played many different Prison RPG's
6) What is your time zone? (UTC) Dublin, Edinburgh, Lisbon, London
7) Why are you the best choice for guard? I think i'm the best choice for guard as I have many skills. For example I am good at PVP so I can break up fights and not lose against attackers with swords. I also have built up some anger from the amount of times people have hit someone and had swords out on the server. I wan't to stop this happening to others. I am also not light with punishments and not to strict. I will make a joke now and then to make other guards feel happy. So basically all I want to do is create a smooth going environment.
8) What is your current rank? Do you understand that we will require PROOF of your rank when/if you retire from guard? I am in rank C
I hope you liked my application, and thanks for taking your time to read it. I don't mind if i'm not picked. But I would always be happy to help.
//PrimedMissile
Ok here's my question did you take a break or is you time played continues if yes how are you still C
1) Username:Got_Pwnd
2) Your age:15
3) How long have you been playing the server? (Minimum of 3 days) 1-2 months
4) Have you read the Server, Prison, and Guard Rules? I have, yes
5) Any experience with the prison genre? well, I used to play cops and robbers as a kid, and did that on Halo Reach, I made the maps, and then followed the set rules(which changed by the game)
6) What is your time zone? Central(Us)
7) Why are you the best choice for guard? I've always been good at PVP, I've been a "saftey patrol student" at school, we enforce the rules for lazy teachers.(it was a rather fun job)
8) What is your current rank? Do you understand that we will require PROOF of your rank when/if you retire from guard? I am an A, and I do understand the consequences such as the ones mentioned above.
1) Username:Got_Pwnd
2) Your age:15
3) How long have you been playing the server? (Minimum of 3 days) 1-2 months
4) Have you read the Server, Prison, and Guard Rules? I have, yes
5) Any experience with the prison genre? well, I used to play cops and robbers as a kid, and did that on Halo Reach, I made the maps, and then followed the set rules(which changed by the game)
6) What is your time zone? Central(Us)
7) Why are you the best choice for guard? I've always been good at PVP, I've been a "saftey patrol student" at school, we enforce the rules for lazy teachers.(it was a rather fun job)
8) What is your current rank? Do you understand that we will require PROOF of your rank when/if you retire from guard? I am an A, and I do understand the consequences such as the ones mentioned above.
You are missing a key word. One word answers will be skipped make them sentences all of them. Also #7 should be min of 2 paragraphs and that still probably isn't good enough.
1) Username: piggypink8
How long have you been playing the server? (Minimum of 3 days) 5 or 6 days
[4) Have you read the Server, Prison, and Guard Rules? Yes. I agree with them totally, no issue's.
5) Any experience with the prison genre? Yes-no. I have attended other prison servers, but as i'm aware they didn't have guards.
[6) What is your time zone? EST
7) Why are you the best choice for guard?..I am responsible and when i'm given a task, I won't stop until I complete it. I have been recruited to many ranks on other high-populated servers, and i'm social and handy with a sword. I've got a talent with bow, also. I play minecraft and this server all the time and I would love to be a Trainee on it. I am understanding and trustworthy of anything you throw at me and ready to complete any request. I am a fast typer. I can type faster than any of my family members. I am patient for hit and run criminals...I love being and charge and I usually end up with that responsibility.
I am very handy with a sword (again), and I don't "rage" upon death. I will not attack the prisoner after he/she has killed me. I have spectated some guards and have noticed some are rather lazy... Example: I see someone hit a guard and run into a safe zone. Guard walks away without a word. I have also been killed by guards for no reason, or hit without being healed with a potion. I focus on not being like those guards and using a skilled guard technique. I don't sacrifice for a friend or team up with any prisoner(s). I believe I contain the talent to be a Trainee and devote my time to this server. I also will complain that not many guards are on in the morning, I'm a morning and afternoon person. I will be on whenever I get the chance. I can expect what prisoners will do when i'm not looking... fight with each other. I use f5 ALOT. I can see them without them seeing the whites of my eyes. (Revolutionary way Reference, lol) I joke around a bit when not given a task, but not when prisoners have gone crazy.
8) What is your current rank? Do you understand that we will require PROOF of your rank when/if you retire from guard? I am a C-prisoner ,I do understand this, I have screenshots just in case. I really hope you enjoy this-please reply soon. I have spent a majority of time working on this application and you hope you consider recruiting me to Trainee. I hope to speak with Wardens and Alpha-guards in the future. Thank-you for reading, -piggypink8 (P.S. I devoted a lot of time on this application, and I hope you appreciate that. Also, sorry for font changes ) Oh, and Noakii I've been so tempted to scream at you "I APPLIED FOR GUARD, NOAKII!! ACCEPT IT!!" lol. Please reply soon!
He is banned. Mobains had Noakii/Viper ban him(for a reason I don't recall).
"How many tank turrets can you fit in your rectum" -LT_COUCH
2) 15
3) I have been playing on this server for about a week now.
4) Yes
5) I have played on other nockoff prison servers
6) The time zone i live in is EST -5
7) You should pick me since I have never abused power given to me on other servers. Also I want to keep the peace.
8) I am in rank A
If a player pops a saddle on a pig and rides it onto a pressure plate the door Will Open.
This means Players can Glitch into Guard areas and AlphaGuards ares (Cafe) and other areas where you should not go. To Fix this Glitch replace everything with buttons
So I may or may not be an end me
It's ok, sorry for being so serious
Warden on Prison Island Minecraft Server.
Save it for meeeeee plz. Ill be on in approx 1 hour to pick it up
Yes but it was a false ban and so I got unbanned. The time I was banned I did not count as active guard time because even thought I was active on the forums whilst banned I was not guarding. Then one day I tried my daily try to log on and I was unbanned. It was quite amusing actually as I yelled "YESSSS" and my brother was quite confused. And my cat was ed because I got some of my ramen on it.
2)Your age: 16
3)How long have you been playing the server?(Minimum of 3 days) I have been playing this game for 8 days so far.
4)Have you read the Server,Prison,and Guard Rules? Yes, I have read the Server, Prison, and Guard rules and Noakii. I hope i typed it correctly
5)Any experience with the prison genre? I have played different prison games but not for minecraft, they were from a different computer game. If needed to know, the game is called Roblox.
6)What is your time zone? My time zone is Eastern, US
7)Why are you the best choice for guard? I am the best Choice for a guard position because not only am i a lot of fun to be around, but I do follow the rules. Also for someone who is still a bit new to minecraft, I'm quite a good shot with a bow. Though sometimes i might forget a rule, i will always remember it by the end of the night. That is why i believe I'm a good choice for a guard position.
8)What is your current rank?Do you understand that we will require PROOF of your rank when/if you retire from guard? My current rank is A, and yes i do understand that you will require proof of my rank.
Warden on Prison Island Minecraft Server.
2) Your age: 14 (Almost 15)
3) How long have you been playing the server? About a month (1-4 Hours a day, usually more on weekends)
4) Have you read the Server, Prison, and Guard Rules? Yes, I have. Noakii
5) Any experience with the prison genre? I have played and been a guard on other prison servers such as Eurova, Sentenced, and City Prison. I have also spent a large amount of time on this prison server (one of the best ones out there in my opinion).
6) What is your time zone? Pacific Time Zone UTC-8
7) Why are you the best choice for guard? I will dish out the necessary jail time and punishments when players break the rules and I will never abuse my powers and privileges as a guard. I can act swiftly and quickly when it is the right time. I am good at PvP and will help when there are players rioting and breaking the rules. It is very difficult to find a fun server with a great community and enthusiasm. Helping that community and server would be a privilege and will bring me joy. I believe in fairness and keeping the game a clean and fun environment. I respect other guards and players and will always continue to follow the rules. I love being a guard on prison servers and I hope that I will be able to contribute to the wellness of this server as well. The rules will be my priority when guarding this server. Lately in the time that I have played on this server there has been a lack of guards online at late times in the nights. During these times there are usually players in full diamond armor attacking new players that have recently joined. Helping this problem along with others by strictly abiding by the rules will seriously improve the well being of the server along with allowing new players to feel safer. I can think and react quickly in most situations. I have been playing on this server for a while now and now that I have finally reached "Free", I feel that I have enough experience on this server to become a great guard.
The First main reason that I am the best choice for guard is that I am friendly. Now do not read this wrong and think that I will fee sorry for people and will cut them slack, because I will not. Holding grudges isn't my thing and I will never treat players unfairly based on knowing them or being friends with them. The rules apply to all and I will keep it that way through guarding the server.
The Second main reason that I am the best choice for guard is that I respect all players, especially those of higher ranks than me. I will continue to obey the Wardens, Alphaguards, and Guards to my full extent. I do not get mad at players and I do not insult players or swear at them. I believe that everyone should have a fair chance at survival and that everyone should be able to voice their opinion unless it does not coincide with the server and prison rules.
The third reason that I am the best choice for being picked as a guard for this server is that I have lots of guard experience. I play Minecraft alot and have found that prison servers are my thing. I have played on other prison servers such as Sentenced, Eurova, City Prison, and, of course, this server. On a couple of these servers I have been a guard. Although the experience from other prison servers won't necessarily carry on to this one, I have a lot of experience on this server. I have read many guard applications posted by newly joined C's. This makes me laugh because they have no experience what so ever with this specific server. I have played for a large amount of time and have reached level "Free". The knowledge of how the server runs and works will definitely help me as a guard rather than newly joined players posting guard applications.
The fourth and final reason that I will be a great guard is my dedication. I play Minecraft and go on this server about 1-4 hours a day and generally more on the weekends. Proof of my dedication to this server is not only the fact that I have donated a total of roughly $40 to the well being of the server, but I have worked extremely hard to get to the point where I am in this server (Items, Money, Friends, and my Rank). This dedication to the server will act as even more proof that not only will I be a fair, trustworthy guard, but also that I will abide by the server and prison rules, and continue to play on this amazing and intensely fun server for a very, very long time.
8) What is your current rank? Do you understand that we will require PROOF of your rank when/if you retire fromguard? My current rank is Free and I do understand that you will require proof of my rank.
Thank you,
Reed L.
2) Your age: 13
3) How long have you been playing the server? (Minimum of 3 days) I think about 12 days now?
4) Have you read the Server, Prison, and Guard Rules? All of them
5) Any experience with the prison genre? Not really
6) What is your time zone? Central, if I am thinking correctly.. (Michigan)
7) Why are you the best choice for guard? I really hate it when someone hits & kills a defensless player, and I can't do anything about it since I don't have good armor/weapons to kill them with... I hate it when people break the rules
8) What is your current rank? Do you understand that we will require PROOF of your rank when/if you retire from guard? Elite
I hope that you can accept my application, and even if you don't, I will still look for ways to help your server
Thank you so much for your time in reading my application
//Annaschwander
2) Your age: 14
3) How long have you been playing the server? (Minimum of 3 days) 1 week I believe I don't know for sure time flies when your having fun =)
4) Have you read the Server, Prison, and Guard Rules? Yes, Noakii
5) Any experience with the prison genre? Not really but, I enjoy it
6) What is your time zone? Central U.S
7) Why are you the best choice for guard? I think I would be a good choice for guard because I have owned my own server and I have been Op/Admin on multiple servers. I will apply the appropriate punishments if someone deserves it. I have played this server for only 5 or 6 days and yet I have played so much that I am an Elite already I am on the server a lot. I am very good at PvP and I can help out when groups are leading a prison break. I think I should be a guard because I hate seeing C-block players or any players for that matter being slain by Free/Op members and I would like to help put a stop to that. I will abide with the rules or you can revoke my guard status.
8) What is your current rank? Do you understand that we will require PROOF of your rank when/if you retire from guard? Currently I am Free Yes I do understand I have screenshots.
2) Your age:15
3) How long have you been playing the server? (Minimum of 3 days) a week and a half
4) Have you read the Server, Prison, and Guard Rules? yes every single one 2 times
5) Any experience with the prison genre? yes, i have been playing on prison servers for some time to understand what to do in them
6) What is your time zone? Eastern US
7) Why are you the best choice for guard? Im the best choice for a guard because I always follow the rules and I have plenty of experience in moderating servers.
8) What is your current rank? Do you understand that we will require PROOF of your rank when/if you retire from guard?
Current Rank - Elite, yes I understand that you will require proof and I have screenshots to prove my rank.
Noakii
Warden on Prison Island Minecraft Server.
2) Your age:15
3) How long have you been playing the server? (Minimum of 3 days) 1-2 months
4) Have you read the Server, Prison, and Guard Rules? I have, yes
5) Any experience with the prison genre? well, I used to play cops and robbers as a kid, and did that on Halo Reach, I made the maps, and then followed the set rules(which changed by the game)
6) What is your time zone? Central(Us)
7) Why are you the best choice for guard? I've always been good at PVP, I've been a "saftey patrol student" at school, we enforce the rules for lazy teachers.(it was a rather fun job)
8) What is your current rank? Do you understand that we will require PROOF of your rank when/if you retire from guard? I am an A, and I do understand the consequences such as the ones mentioned above.
You are missing a key word. One word answers will be skipped make them sentences all of them. Also #7 should be min of 2 paragraphs and that still probably isn't good enough.
Warden on Prison Island Minecraft Server.