Hey guys, before anything, let me introduce myself, I'm Darkmiles, a retired moderator from this awesome minecraft forum !
I haven't been active for quite a while, but this topic is my "come back".
Recently I've grown an interest in writing, and I decided to start writing short (or long?) stories, related to minecraft, they will often be thriller stories.
I will be regularly posting stories in this topic, and today I will be posting the first one
Please don't mind some grammar errors, I do my best but i'm not a native english speaker, tough browsing these forums definitely made me improve my enlgish :3
I will apreciate any constructive criticism
Best Regards, and you can find my first story down below, Hope you guys like it!
The Thing
It was a stormy and snowy night, my lonely village was quiet, as always. I was at my bedroom lying in bed.
The wind penetrated into the room by the open window at the top left corner, the floor outside was all white, because of the snow.
There was a lot of creaking since my house is all made of wood. I had a strange feeling, I wasn’t sure what it was.
I was feeling weird. The night was getting more and more eery. Suddenly I panicked, for no apparent reason, I could feel an evil presence in my room, the fear of the unknown was spreading itself all over my body.
I suddenly heard the door slamming brutally, than loud steps, something started punching my door, and finally the thing came in, it was horrible, it started staring at me with a deadly look, it was all black with horrendous tentacles, it did weird and disturbing sounds all the time. I was paralyzed, I couldn’t move a muscle, my skin was as white as the floor outside.
The creature did the loudest scream I ever heard in my life, than with a creepy noise she just vanished like sugar vanishes in coffee, or an ice cube in hot water. This event happened to me some minutes ago, I’m not sure what I should do, if someone ever reads this ple
Diary of John Astrez, found in his house next to his dead body, diary stops at a random point, like if something interrupted him.
Cause of death : Unknown, the most probable cause was an attack by an enderman.
I haven't been active for quite a while, but this topic is my "come back".
Recently I've grown an interest in writing, and I decided to start writing short (or long?) stories, related to minecraft, they will often be thriller stories.
I will be regularly posting stories in this topic, and today I will be posting the first one
Please don't mind some grammar errors, I do my best but i'm not a native english speaker, tough browsing these forums definitely made me improve my enlgish :3
I will apreciate any constructive criticism
Best Regards, and you can find my first story down below, Hope you guys like it!
The Thing
It was a stormy and snowy night, my lonely village was quiet, as always. I was at my bedroom lying in bed.
The wind penetrated into the room by the open window at the top left corner, the floor outside was all white, because of the snow.
There was a lot of creaking since my house is all made of wood. I had a strange feeling, I wasn’t sure what it was.
I was feeling weird. The night was getting more and more eery. Suddenly I panicked, for no apparent reason, I could feel an evil presence in my room, the fear of the unknown was spreading itself all over my body.
I suddenly heard the door slamming brutally, than loud steps, something started punching my door, and finally the thing came in, it was horrible, it started staring at me with a deadly look, it was all black with horrendous tentacles, it did weird and disturbing sounds all the time. I was paralyzed, I couldn’t move a muscle, my skin was as white as the floor outside.
The creature did the loudest scream I ever heard in my life, than with a creepy noise she just vanished like sugar vanishes in coffee, or an ice cube in hot water. This event happened to me some minutes ago, I’m not sure what I should do, if someone ever reads this ple
Diary of John Astrez, found in his house next to his dead body, diary stops at a random point, like if something interrupted him.
Cause of death : Unknown, the most probable cause was an attack by an enderman.
An expert is someone who takes a subject you understand and makes it sound confusing.
Venit, quessit, induravit.
Thanks for the advice ^^ Were you able to read the story?
An expert is someone who takes a subject you understand and makes it sound confusing.
Nope.
An expert is someone who takes a subject you understand and makes it sound confusing.