My name is..Steve,Ill tell y'all my story.It started like this:It was a few days before christmas.I was on a boat heading towards the mainland for the holidays.It was around 12 PM so i decided i would sleep for the night.The captain said he would wake me up as we approach The Dock's near the mainland.I lay down in my bed and sleep..I awake to a "BOOM" The ship start's to shake.I fall off my bed and look out the window..
"The Ship is sinking!"
I hear the captain "Everyone! Wake up,Get on the life-boat's before its too late!"I attempt to open my door but it is jammed.I notice the water starts rising,Soon the room is flooded.I black out,
An unknown time later i awake on a beach..My vision is as blurry as hell.As i pull myself together,I see the ruin's of the ship in the distance
This is where my story Begins....
Chapter 2
I force myself to my feet,As i look around i hear animal's walking about in the bush's..I decide i might need to setup camp,Due to the fact that i might be here for awhile.I decide to swim over to the ruin's of the Ship with the little energy i have left.The Ship seemed to be half underwater,Part of it stuck on the Reef..I go inside the part that is not underwater and discover the Captain.
"S-Steve...I dont think im gonna make it..."
"Dont worry,Ill save you!"
"I see the light!,Steve..Take the supply's from the ship and try to find the mainland,Or one of the native village's around the area...Good luck,May Notch be with you.."He slowly stop's breathing and he closes his eye's.I stand up and loot the ship,Discovering bit's of wood and some food...
I swim back to the shore and decide to use the Wooden Axe i found to cut down some wood before night fall's,I had no idea what i was in for during the night...I sit on the sand and 'Craft' a Wooden Plank,I decide to use it to make a shack that i would spend the night in,As im doing that i notice the eye's of unknown Animal's staring at me in the bush's The begin's to set,All the animal's flee to their dens..As if they were hiding from something,I hide in my make-shift shack
And hope for the best..
Chapter 3
I make myself a door and put it in the doorway.I suddenly start hearing creature's growling in hunger in the distance..I even hear something on my roof walking slowly,As if it could see me through the wood.My shack was as dark as my mom's closet so i decide i would use the wooden pick i found in the ruin's to mine for some coal,my teacher said in school that there are vain's of coal around these part's.I start making a little stair-way down into the belly of the earth..As i go deeper i hear more creature's in cave's
Finally i strike coal! I mine it eagerly and combine it with some stick's and light it with some wood i have..I decide i would continue mining until this crappy wooden pick break's down into dust.Suddenly my pick hit's something harder then Coal.It's pink-ish
My teacher also said there is more then Coal around here,There are: Iron,Gold,Lapis lazuli,Redstone,Diamond.
Though this wooden pick could mine through Coal quite easy,It seemed to have trouble mining through Iron ore.So i decide to go back up to my shack and craft a Stone Pick with the stone i had collected so far.Just as i am about to go back down i look outside,And see alot of creature's roaming around.Looking for food,I decide to also make a sword to defend myself,Just as i make the sword my shack blow's up into piece's! I land on my face,Then look up to see a Green creature,It seemed to look sad..i thought it was freindly and tried to hug it!
Sadly when i did...BOOOOOOOM...I get knocked to the ground...Just as the sun rise's i notice some of the creature's start burning in the sunlight...I couldnt feel my arm...I thought i was doomed...
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ENGLISH IS NOT MY MAIN LANGUAGE,EXUSE THE GRAMMAR.IF YOU DONT LIKE IT DONT EVEN COMMENT ON IT...
Its good i like it but, im not saying this to be mean or anything its just to help but maybe make it as if steve is telling the story instead of it being in the present itself and maybe make the grammaire a bit better.But then again maybe it was the grammair was good it might have just been me well i was reading it cause i read fast and sometimes skim stuff :biggrin.gif:
I might do chapter 2 tommrow or soon I dont know...
EDIT:This story is gonna go to the end (The end credits i mean :tongue.gif:)
Ill take suggestion's what will happen next :happy.gif:
What'll happen next? Steve takes his frustration out on a tree by punching it and magically starts building a shelter. XD But seriously.... it's great. I remember trying to start a story like this.
"The Ship is sinking!"
I hear the captain "Everyone! Wake up,Get on the life-boat's before its too late!"I attempt to open my door but it is jammed.I notice the water starts rising,Soon the room is flooded.I black out,
An unknown time later i awake on a beach..My vision is as blurry as hell.As i pull myself together,I see the ruin's of the ship in the distance
This is where my story Begins....
Chapter 2
"S-Steve...I dont think im gonna make it..."
"Dont worry,Ill save you!"
"I see the light!,Steve..Take the supply's from the ship and try to find the mainland,Or one of the native village's around the area...Good luck,May Notch be with you.."He slowly stop's breathing and he closes his eye's.I stand up and loot the ship,Discovering bit's of wood and some food...
I swim back to the shore and decide to use the Wooden Axe i found to cut down some wood before night fall's,I had no idea what i was in for during the night...I sit on the sand and 'Craft' a Wooden Plank,I decide to use it to make a shack that i would spend the night in,As im doing that i notice the eye's of unknown Animal's staring at me in the bush's The begin's to set,All the animal's flee to their dens..As if they were hiding from something,I hide in my make-shift shack
And hope for the best..
Chapter 3
Finally i strike coal! I mine it eagerly and combine it with some stick's and light it with some wood i have..I decide i would continue mining until this crappy wooden pick break's down into dust.Suddenly my pick hit's something harder then Coal.It's pink-ish
My teacher also said there is more then Coal around here,There are: Iron,Gold,Lapis lazuli,Redstone,Diamond.
Though this wooden pick could mine through Coal quite easy,It seemed to have trouble mining through Iron ore.So i decide to go back up to my shack and craft a Stone Pick with the stone i had collected so far.Just as i am about to go back down i look outside,And see alot of creature's roaming around.Looking for food,I decide to also make a sword to defend myself,Just as i make the sword my shack blow's up into piece's! I land on my face,Then look up to see a Green creature,It seemed to look sad..i thought it was freindly and tried to hug it!
Sadly when i did...BOOOOOOOM...I get knocked to the ground...Just as the sun rise's i notice some of the creature's start burning in the sunlight...I couldnt feel my arm...I thought i was doomed...
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ENGLISH IS NOT MY MAIN LANGUAGE,EXUSE THE GRAMMAR.IF YOU DONT LIKE IT DONT EVEN COMMENT ON IT...
Should i continue? :biggrin.gif:
"Talking" dogs? lol??
Yeah you know one that can make witty quips here and there
I might do chapter 2 tommrow or soon I dont know...
EDIT:This story is gonna go to the end (The end credits i mean :tongue.gif:)
Ill take suggestion's what will happen next :happy.gif:
Ill start working on it right away! :smile.gif:
What'll happen next? Steve takes his frustration out on a tree by punching it and magically starts building a shelter. XD But seriously.... it's great. I remember trying to start a story like this.
Im gonna give you guy's a hint...He will get a partner eventually :smile.gif:
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