Game: The Purging of Valhalla
What you want tested: Standard play through
What do you want: Can you tell me what you think needs fixing or changing, where you got lost, what you enjoyed, bugs and spelling errors i've missed.
I hope you enjoy it if you play it! Your feedback is much appreciated!
Game: The Purging of Valhalla
What you want tested: Standard play through
What do you want: Can you tell me what you think needs fixing or changing, where you got lost, what you enjoyed, bugs and spelling errors i've missed.
I hope you enjoy it if you play it! Your feedback is much appreciated!
Um, because of the snow, and all of the stuff everywhere, it takes a while to find the thing you need :tongue.gif:. Also, i think some of the challenges are too hard. I enjoyed the story, but at the end its says "The Choice is yours" Um... it really isnt :/. You should have another note that says differently and what happens if you do "purge" Vahalla. Other than that, this map was really good! (I didnt like the texture pack though :tongue.gif:)
Um, because of the snow, and all of the stuff everywhere, it takes a while to find the thing you need :tongue.gif:. Also, i think some of the challenges are too hard. I enjoyed the story, but at the end its says "The Choice is yours" Um... it really isnt :/. You should have another note that says differently and what happens if you do "purge" Vahalla. Other than that, this map was really good! (I didnt like the texture pack though :tongue.gif:)
Which challenges in particular are hard? Ill dull them down a bit. Ill also try make the ending a bit more coherent.
Thank you for your review! It helped a lot!
I'd love you to play Crimson Asylum (banner in sig).
What I'd like to know:
-Does the "intro" work? (don't fly to cheat at the beginning, please!)
-Can you follow the main thread of the story and goal?
-Does the texture pack work?
-do I give you a reasonable amount of stuff to survive? (some of it is there for scenery. For example, there is ice in the freezer.)
-do the rules work? Are all of them necessary? Are there more needed?
-If you go to any of the "extra" areas (there are waypoints if you cannot find them), are they findable, do they fit the theme of the map? Are any of the puzzles (usually, just finding a "key") too hard? Does the "key" system make sense?
A recent player got "off map" because I accidentally left a gap, and some of the outside stuff has been used before and because I left torches around he was sure he was supposed to be there. If you find yourself in any mines, those are not part of the game, and tell me where you got out, please. Also, some of the roadsigns point to places you cannot go to right away.
Which challenges in particular are hard? Ill dull them down a bit. Ill also try make the ending a bit more coherent.
Thank you for your review! It helped a lot!
would you mind leaving a quick rating please? (Poll)
I'd love you to play Crimson Asylum (banner in sig).
What I'd like to know:
-Does the "intro" work? (don't fly to cheat at the beginning, please!)
-Can you follow the main thread of the story and goal?
-Does the texture pack work?
-do I give you a reasonable amount of stuff to survive? (some of it is there for scenery. For example, there is ice in the freezer.)
-do the rules work? Are all of them necessary? Are there more needed?
-If you go to any of the "extra" areas (there are waypoints if you cannot find them), are they findable, do they fit the theme of the map? Are any of the puzzles (usually, just finding a "key") too hard? Does the "key" system make sense?
A recent player got "off map" because I accidentally left a gap, and some of the outside stuff has been used before and because I left torches around he was sure he was supposed to be there. If you find yourself in any mines, those are not part of the game, and tell me where you got out, please. Also, some of the roadsigns point to places you cannot go to right away.
Could you make the Texture Pack mediafire as well please?
Game: Arctic Survival
What you want tested: Playthrough
What do you want: Critical review, tell me what I did wrong, what I did right. Tell me if it was too confusing, too straightforward, etc.
Link: http://dl.dropbox.com/u/30186426/Arctic Survival v0.1.zip
Hi man, didn't realise you post your feedback on this thread ^^ No they haven't played it yet :dry.gif:
I'm not sure which version of the map you played, if it was an older version, then yes it is a bit on the short side. Would it be possible for you to drop a comment on the thread so others can see what you thought?
But just to say thanks a lot for taking the time to review my map ^^
this is really good! But... WAY too much food! also, tons of other usless items...
its long, fun, and... interesting... :tongue.gif:.
Did you REALLY get back home though?
I dunno, did you? :tongue.gif:
A lot of that stuff was set dressing, really, the sort of stuff I think you'd fins in a library, or a cooler, or an operating theater...useful or not.
Let me know if you get lost -- so far, the biggest complaint I've received is that people lost track of where they're supposed to go. I tried to make that better with the last update.
Hey got another update for The Diamond Mine 2. I went on vacation and had family here for a wile so progress was slow but I think you will like the new features. I added a few new rooms, started the checkpoint system, and have made many little fixes to make the map run smoother. Its not a whole lot new but I didn't want to leave too much room between updates. Also I have allot of great ideals for rooms that I'm currently testing so look forward to that.
When you tested the map for the first time I didn't explain the rules good enough so I will do that now.
1. No breaking blocks except for ore blocks.
2. No placing any blocks.
3. Play on Normal difficulty.
4. Wool can be burned.
5. Spawners cannot be destroyed or stopped.
starting the survival box now... and... WOW! this looks like its gonna be good!
thanks alot :smile.gif: il sub to ya cant w8
Yes, see the thread.
Really good! I liked it a lot! I liked the hidden dungons... but... you give so much resources...
its too easy :tongue.gif:
Hide the resources (not coal)
ur download link isnt workin :/
What you want tested: Standard play through
What do you want: Can you tell me what you think needs fixing or changing, where you got lost, what you enjoyed, bugs and spelling errors i've missed.
I hope you enjoy it if you play it! Your feedback is much appreciated!
Um, because of the snow, and all of the stuff everywhere, it takes a while to find the thing you need :tongue.gif:. Also, i think some of the challenges are too hard. I enjoyed the story, but at the end its says "The Choice is yours" Um... it really isnt :/. You should have another note that says differently and what happens if you do "purge" Vahalla. Other than that, this map was really good! (I didnt like the texture pack though :tongue.gif:)
Which challenges in particular are hard? Ill dull them down a bit. Ill also try make the ending a bit more coherent.
Thank you for your review! It helped a lot!
What I'd like to know:
-Does the "intro" work? (don't fly to cheat at the beginning, please!)
-Can you follow the main thread of the story and goal?
-Does the texture pack work?
-do I give you a reasonable amount of stuff to survive? (some of it is there for scenery. For example, there is ice in the freezer.)
-do the rules work? Are all of them necessary? Are there more needed?
-If you go to any of the "extra" areas (there are waypoints if you cannot find them), are they findable, do they fit the theme of the map? Are any of the puzzles (usually, just finding a "key") too hard? Does the "key" system make sense?
A recent player got "off map" because I accidentally left a gap, and some of the outside stuff has been used before and because I left torches around he was sure he was supposed to be there. If you find yourself in any mines, those are not part of the game, and tell me where you got out, please. Also, some of the roadsigns point to places you cannot go to right away.
would you mind leaving a quick rating please? (Poll)
Thanks!
Could you make the Texture Pack mediafire as well please?
Done!
Sorry about that, I completely forgot I had two different files to upload.
What you want tested: Playthrough
What do you want: Critical review, tell me what I did wrong, what I did right. Tell me if it was too confusing, too straightforward, etc.
Link: http://dl.dropbox.com/u/30186426/Arctic Survival v0.1.zip
this is really good! But... WAY too much food! also, tons of other usless items...
its long, fun, and... interesting... :tongue.gif:.
Did you REALLY get back home though?
Do you mind dropping a rating? (Poll)
Thanks!
I dunno, did you? :tongue.gif:
A lot of that stuff was set dressing, really, the sort of stuff I think you'd fins in a library, or a cooler, or an operating theater...useful or not.
Let me know if you get lost -- so far, the biggest complaint I've received is that people lost track of where they're supposed to go. I tried to make that better with the last update.
When you tested the map for the first time I didn't explain the rules good enough so I will do that now.
1. No breaking blocks except for ore blocks.
2. No placing any blocks.
3. Play on Normal difficulty.
4. Wool can be burned.
5. Spawners cannot be destroyed or stopped.
Thank you for testing and have fun.
Link
http://www.mediafire.com/?2ns6bwcyxkqnlbv