Basics
Minecraft User Name: contortedstains
How long have you been playing SMP?: For about 6-5 months now
Do you have RP Experience?: Tones, I've been rping since grade 4, now I'm in grade 11, going into grade 12)
What is your birthday?: 9/2/1994
Role Play
Character Name: Annum Retonnia
Character Race: Demon (maybe half human?)
Character Description: Annum has short, curly, black hair, with a little bit of red in it. Gray eyes with red markings underneath. (much like tribal tattoos). He has tanned skin,that's a little closer to the red side on the lips of his limbs (fingers, toes, etc) he normally wears a purple coat with a black hood, and dark red jeans. (he's also my current MC skin)
Character Bio: A soft hearted Demon, who prefers not to fight. He took up archery, for he found it as one of the least violent forms of self-defense.
Character History: Ever since he was young, Annum Retonnia had watched his loved ones' lives slip away. From his demon blooded father, to his kind hearted, human mother. His grand parents told him of a disease that took many of his mother's siblings and ancestors, which cause him to worry. Now fearing the clutch of the reaper, Annum craves the immortal life, seeking to the city, that is fables to have sprouted from the fountain of life.
(I really got stumped n this is the best i can do atm. I think it sounds too world of warcrafty heheh)
Character Class: Archer
Place of Birth: Imperilus
edit: DURP i knew I'd forget this! I read rule 3: Cupcakes.
Ok, NOW I'm starting to lose my patience. I mean come on, I've seen what appears to be the whitelisters apparently stare at the screen for half an hour with a glazed expression on their faces. Um...A little more urgency here guys? Should we PM you the apps? Will that help you get through them?
Hello, My name is Kevin.
I'm a human being nice to meet you.
I'm sorry that I'm not a robot who can sit at my computer for twenty-four hours a day, I run out of coffee!
I'm also sorry for having a life and other things to do besides make sure every person who wants to join the server is instantly reviewed and white listed.
Their convenience is the number one concern after all!
I mean, I don't think the people who already play regularly on the server matter as much. Taking the entire server down for about fifteen minutes so I can add a few names to the white list isn't a big deal.
I think I should get right to work making sure everyone is satisfied!
I mean, screw re-doing the server rules to make sure things go smoothly. Why bother?
And those plugins that need configuring? Screw that, I MUST read through more applications!
Personal hobbies? Meh. Friends? Meh, who needs them when I have the onslaught of applicants!
So I'm going to go make some coffee, and when I come back I'll start going through the pages. I mean, a day or two is a long wait isn't it. I mean, the loyal players didn't wait three weeks or so for the server to open did they?
But I digress, I'm simply here to serve.
Sincerely,
Kevin -- Unappreciated Server Admin. Currently on day 134 of Admin work without break, pause, or reprieve.
My bad. I've been having a rough week. Sorry for being unreasonable. Really, forget I said anything. Although, since you seem to have a lot on your plate, it probably wouldn't hurt to get some whitelisters like some of the servers I've seen. That is, staff that didn't have important admin duties like yourself, who just, well... Reviewed applications and whitelisted. Of course, you've probably already thought of that.
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Sorry. I've been having a rough week. I apologize for being unreasonable. Really, forget I said anything. Although, some of the servers I've been in had specific whitelisters. That is, staff that didn't have important admin duties like yourself, who went through the applications and the like.
It's okay. I meant that entire thing as more of a joke, no worries.
We do have a team of people, and anyone who wants to can critique peoples applications. Sparkmistt and AzorThorm can whitelist too, and they don't run the server etc.
Do you have RP Experience?:
I have been trying to be a part of the minecraft roleplay for a while, but all my rp experience is out of game
What is your birthday?:
11/nov/1991
Role Play
Character Name:
Regilius Blackheart
Character Race:
Human
Character description: Tall well built human who wears a hood to hide the scar on his left eye, although not fully trained he tries to live his life by the ways of a battle monk and the morals his elusive master taught him.
Character Bio: A determined man who searches for his master while helping others along the way, his destiny is to be determined by those he meats on his path.
Character History: Exiled for his fathers crimes he set out on a journey to escape his fathers (an evil king's) legacy. Regilius finds himself lost and confused when he was rescued from a mysterious monk. This monk was named Felic, and he was... eccentric at best. His wild code and his strange morals captivated the fallen prince. Felic took Regilius under his wing and taught him the ways of a battle Monk. One day during his training they encountered a temple, Felic feared this place, and told Regilius never to go in there, but he disobeyed and entered the temple. Regilius found an ancient relic deep inside the temple. When he left the temple and revealed it to his master, Felic struck him down, leaveing a scar on his eye. Felic took the relic and disappeared. Now Regilius regrets going into the temple, and while trying to find his own path he searches for his old master, and the mysterious relic that haunts him. His only lead is a dwarf that knew his master, so he comes to the city to search for him.
Character class: Battle Monk
Place of Birth: A far Kingdom now destroyed by revolt, famine, and fear (if i cant do this let me know ill change it)
Basics
Minecraft User Name:(This is what we add to the whitelist) foofenscoops
How long have you been playing SMP?: 7 moneths
Do you have RP Experience?: yes some
What is your birthday?: (ex. M/D/Y 6/1/2011) 3/10/1990
Role Play
Character Name: (First and last) Simon Belford
Character Race: (See below)Human
Character Description:
I tanned broad shouldered human with an attitude, Loves to play rough and doesn't like loosing. Hot tempered and has a hatred towards elf's
Character Bio:
As a child Simon was not very fortunate. During the elf/human wars his parents were killed thus making him loath elf's. He has a sharp cunning and is very witty.
Character History:
Simon was a small child who was always picked on. as he grew he got stronger and his lust for blood grew stronger to. He lives in the wilderness with his clan of "wolves" he loves a good fight and will never back down to a challenge.
Character Class: (Described Below) thief
Place of Birth: (At this point you CANNOT be born in Immortalus, as only men have been there so far.) Can not remember
i read rule: 3 Cupcakes
* Fix the spelling and grammar (Elf's = Elves, to = too, you cannot HAVE cunning, etc)
* Why are you on the boat at all?
* You seem to have mixed bio, history and discription. Bio is for his personality, not history. THat's where you say that he's cunning and witty. History is for history alone. Don't tell us how your character is as a person here, just tell us what he has experienced in his life. Here it should be clear to the reader why your character is seeking Immortalus.
Description is ONLY for your character's appearance. How does he look?
Plastic what server ip are you using? the ip that i use to get into this server acts as if there is no server by that ip.
64.186.131.150
Server's up, just got off. Passing out now, hope you can get on.
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Basics
Minecraft User Name: opuri
How long have you been playing SMP?: around 5 months
Do you have RP Experience?: Yes
What is your birthday?: May/20/1993
Role Play
Character Name: Javok Olafsson
Character Race: Dwarf
Character Description: Tall amongst dwarves, has a long sturdy chestnut beard and is bald. Has no scars whatsoever on his body given his magic affinity. Usually dresses white&blue robes.
Character Bio: His studies have always moved him forward throughout his life. Studying the Arcane is his passion (he even boasts about a small house in the nether he constructed himself). Javok is an uncommon dwarf of sorts, he's not easy to anger and likes to think from an objective point of view. ((His personality will evolve when i start playing the character, i like to give them freedom to grow))
Character History: Born to a noble family in the underground dwarven fortress of kee-arduh, Javok and his sibling Jadúh could study the ways of the Arcane since they had the gift of Magic. Both brothers grew up together, living the life of luxry and pleasentry their homes offered them. Atleast until that one day when Jadúh was lost in the Nether, never to return.
Javok left his life behind when he set foot for the first time in his life on the surface. And aimlessly wandered the deserts of kee-jejé until he came across the boat that took him to Immortalus.
Character Class: Light Mage
Place of Birth: Kee-Arduh, noble upper (lapislazuli) ring.
Slight problems. One, your birthplace is supposed to be one of the three available listed in the first post.
Two, you missed a crucial part of the application that was listed twice in the rules.
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Basics Minecraft User Name:Yahyahkeekoot How long have you been playing SMP?: I have been RPing (and generally playing) on SMP since it first came out in Alpha Do you have RP Experience?: As can be supposed from above I have RPed since I was 7, meaning coming up 10 years now. Table-top games to story-telling at camps, I have involved myself with RolePlaying as much as possible. What is your birthday?: 02/06/95, February 6th, 1995
Role Play Character Name: Renon A'eneroth
Character Race: Demonic Humanoid. (I'm iffy on some of the server's rules on Magic, but I'm assuming there are some as the server includes demons)
Character Description: Renon is 6'4, dressed usually in a tight fitting cloak. He has piercing cyan eyes rimmed with gold, due to his Demonic Nature. His skin is very pale and his hair is pure white. He often has a band of purple wound tightly around his left hand. His right hand has to tatoos, one of which depicts a Coin with a skull on it, the other a small scale image of a Greatsword. His body is shaped like the average human's and could be easily mistaken for one.
Character Bio: Renon A'eneroth. Speaker for the Wastes. He has many names and many faces through-out the Nether but that one is the most well known. Renon had kept very little in his life since he was small. Spawned early, he was scrawny and pale, unlike other demons who, born strong, had mocked him his entire life. Day after day, he would devote himself to strengthening his finesse with a large wooden stick until he could beat any other (I read Rule 3: Cupcakes) Demon in his Village. His Overseer, at his coming of Age, gave him his first taste of Victory, as Renon was presented with a greatsword. 6 feet of pure steel, and Renon handled it with unbridled awe. Wielding it, he quickly decimated the proceeding tests of Strength, wit and speed. Leaving the Village in search of something more, he obtained knowledge of a portal to a strange new realm. A realm of people with different skin and hair colors, who would gladly help him train harder... He soon arrived in Immortalus after three days of hard searching. His life began anew, Renon A'eneroth was ready.
Character History: I'm not sure what the difference between a Biography and a history is, so check the above.
Character Class: Dark Mage/Warrior (For class choice it'll be Dark Mage, but I'd like to talk with an Admin or Mod about the second class.)
Place of Birth: Imperilus (Though Renon was actually born in Harkonen, there isn't a Nether starter village)
Yeah, he JUST arrived there, that's his summed up story up to the point I join the server... >.>
-EDIT- "Biography" is actually redundant as it is a written "History":
bi·og·ra·phy
[bahy-og-ruh-fee, bee-]
–noun, plural -phies.
1.
a written account of another person's life: the biography of Byron by Marchand.
2.
an account in biographical form of an organization, society, theater, animal, etc.
3.
such writings collectively.
Basics
Minecraft User Name: contortedstains
How long have you been playing SMP?: For about 6-5 months now
Do you have RP Experience?: Tones, I've been rping since grade 4, now I'm in grade 11, going into grade 12)
What is your birthday?: 9/2/1994
Role Play
Character Name: Annum Retonnia
Character Race: Demon (maybe half human?)
Character Description: Annum has short, curly, black hair, with a little bit of red in it. Gray eyes with red markings underneath. (much like tribal tattoos). He has tanned skin,that's a little closer to the red side on the lips of his limbs (fingers, toes, etc) he normally wears a purple coat with a black hood, and dark red jeans. (he's also my current MC skin)
Character Bio: A soft hearted Demon, who prefers not to fight. He took up archery, for he found it as one of the least violent forms of self-defense.
Character History: Ever since he was young, Annum Retonnia had watched his loved ones' lives slip away. From his demon blooded father, to his kind hearted, human mother. His grand parents told him of a disease that took many of his mother's siblings and ancestors, which cause him to worry. Now fearing the clutch of the reaper, Annum craves the immortal life, seeking to the city, that is fables to have sprouted from the fountain of life.
(I really got stumped n this is the best i can do atm. I think it sounds too world of warcrafty heheh)
Character Class: Archer
Place of Birth: Imperilus
edit: DURP i knew I'd forget this! I read rule 3: Cupcakes.
Hello, My name is Kevin.
I'm a human being nice to meet you.
I'm sorry that I'm not a robot who can sit at my computer for twenty-four hours a day, I run out of coffee!
I'm also sorry for having a life and other things to do besides make sure every person who wants to join the server is instantly reviewed and white listed.
Their convenience is the number one concern after all!
I mean, I don't think the people who already play regularly on the server matter as much. Taking the entire server down for about fifteen minutes so I can add a few names to the white list isn't a big deal.
I think I should get right to work making sure everyone is satisfied!
I mean, screw re-doing the server rules to make sure things go smoothly. Why bother?
And those plugins that need configuring? Screw that, I MUST read through more applications!
Personal hobbies? Meh. Friends? Meh, who needs them when I have the onslaught of applicants!
So I'm going to go make some coffee, and when I come back I'll start going through the pages. I mean, a day or two is a long wait isn't it. I mean, the loyal players didn't wait three weeks or so for the server to open did they?
But I digress, I'm simply here to serve.
Sincerely,
Kevin -- Unappreciated Server Admin. Currently on day 134 of Admin work without break, pause, or reprieve.
It's okay. I meant that entire thing as more of a joke, no worries.
We do have a team of people, and anyone who wants to can critique peoples applications. Sparkmistt and AzorThorm can whitelist too, and they don't run the server etc.
That is all.
(Didn't know that you had to shut down the server to white-list people. Bugger.)
Username: KingBlackheart
How long have you been playing SMP?:
since 1.3
Do you have RP Experience?:
I have been trying to be a part of the minecraft roleplay for a while, but all my rp experience is out of game
What is your birthday?:
11/nov/1991
Role Play
Character Name:
Regilius Blackheart
Character Race:
Human
Character description: Tall well built human who wears a hood to hide the scar on his left eye, although not fully trained he tries to live his life by the ways of a battle monk and the morals his elusive master taught him.
Character Bio: A determined man who searches for his master while helping others along the way, his destiny is to be determined by those he meats on his path.
Character History: Exiled for his fathers crimes he set out on a journey to escape his fathers (an evil king's) legacy. Regilius finds himself lost and confused when he was rescued from a mysterious monk. This monk was named Felic, and he was... eccentric at best. His wild code and his strange morals captivated the fallen prince. Felic took Regilius under his wing and taught him the ways of a battle Monk. One day during his training they encountered a temple, Felic feared this place, and told Regilius never to go in there, but he disobeyed and entered the temple. Regilius found an ancient relic deep inside the temple. When he left the temple and revealed it to his master, Felic struck him down, leaveing a scar on his eye. Felic took the relic and disappeared. Now Regilius regrets going into the temple, and while trying to find his own path he searches for his old master, and the mysterious relic that haunts him. His only lead is a dwarf that knew his master, so he comes to the city to search for him.
Character class: Battle Monk
Place of Birth: A far Kingdom now destroyed by revolt, famine, and fear (if i cant do this let me know ill change it)
I read rule 3 : Cupcakes
I... Was?
YAHOOOOOOO!
[EDIT] I found where it said I was whitelisted. AWESOME.
Oh. Everyone new, and some old, need to sign up at the website! And then post your character's bio on the forum. It would help loads. The website!
Is the server down?
* Fix the spelling and grammar (Elf's = Elves, to = too, you cannot HAVE cunning, etc)
* Why are you on the boat at all?
* You seem to have mixed bio, history and discription. Bio is for his personality, not history. THat's where you say that he's cunning and witty. History is for history alone. Don't tell us how your character is as a person here, just tell us what he has experienced in his life. Here it should be clear to the reader why your character is seeking Immortalus.
Description is ONLY for your character's appearance. How does he look?
64.186.131.150
Server's up, just got off. Passing out now, hope you can get on.
GAAAHHH why doesnt it work for me!!
What country is the server in? Im starting to think it doesn't work for Australia
Few questions:
Is the server running 1.6.6?
What texture pack is everyone using?
Are there any required mods?
Is the server running 1.6.6? yes
What texture pack is everyone using? texture doesnt matter
Are there any required mods? im not sure
Slight problems. One, your birthplace is supposed to be one of the three available listed in the first post.
Two, you missed a crucial part of the application that was listed twice in the rules.
Basics
Minecraft User Name:Yahyahkeekoot
How long have you been playing SMP?: I have been RPing (and generally playing) on SMP since it first came out in Alpha
Do you have RP Experience?: As can be supposed from above I have RPed since I was 7, meaning coming up 10 years now. Table-top games to story-telling at camps, I have involved myself with RolePlaying as much as possible.
What is your birthday?: 02/06/95, February 6th, 1995
Role Play
Character Name: Renon A'eneroth
Character Race: Demonic Humanoid. (I'm iffy on some of the server's rules on Magic, but I'm assuming there are some as the server includes demons)
Character Description: Renon is 6'4, dressed usually in a tight fitting cloak. He has piercing cyan eyes rimmed with gold, due to his Demonic Nature. His skin is very pale and his hair is pure white. He often has a band of purple wound tightly around his left hand. His right hand has to tatoos, one of which depicts a Coin with a skull on it, the other a small scale image of a Greatsword. His body is shaped like the average human's and could be easily mistaken for one.
Character Bio: Renon A'eneroth. Speaker for the Wastes. He has many names and many faces through-out the Nether but that one is the most well known. Renon had kept very little in his life since he was small. Spawned early, he was scrawny and pale, unlike other demons who, born strong, had mocked him his entire life. Day after day, he would devote himself to strengthening his finesse with a large wooden stick until he could beat any other
(I read Rule 3: Cupcakes) Demon in his Village. His Overseer, at his coming of Age, gave him his first taste of Victory, as Renon was presented with a greatsword. 6 feet of pure steel, and Renon handled it with unbridled awe. Wielding it, he quickly decimated the proceeding tests of Strength, wit and speed. Leaving the Village in search of something more, he obtained knowledge of a portal to a strange new realm. A realm of people with different skin and hair colors, who would gladly help him train harder... He soon arrived in Immortalus after three days of hard searching. His life began anew, Renon A'eneroth was ready.
Character History: I'm not sure what the difference between a Biography and a history is, so check the above.
Character Class: Dark Mage/Warrior (For class choice it'll be Dark Mage, but I'd like to talk with an Admin or Mod about the second class.)
Place of Birth: Imperilus (Though Renon was actually born in Harkonen, there isn't a Nether starter village)
Bio = personality and behavior
History = Yeah... History.
Also, you can't already HAVE been on Immortalus, you ARRIVE in Immortalus ingame. =)
-EDIT- "Biography" is actually redundant as it is a written "History":
bi·og·ra·phy
[bahy-og-ruh-fee, bee-]
–noun, plural -phies.
1.
a written account of another person's life: the biography of Byron by Marchand.
2.
an account in biographical form of an organization, society, theater, animal, etc.
3.
such writings collectively.