Why you?: I believe you should bring me on the team is because of the dedication I bring. I have way to much times on my hand, and a above average builder. Trust me, I will probably be on a lot building. I will be completely active. (( Part of the Fallout: Wild Wasteland build team. ))
Timezone: EST
How much time can you dedicate?: A lot. Like I said before, to much times on my hand.
Previous Pictures of builds: http://travisw3.imgur.com/all/ (( These arent that great, I just one recently. I have never really SS'd my builds. I really need to start though. I won't be of disappointment though. ))
Skype: Travis Whatton (( Palm Coast, FL one. ))
I'm going to be honest here Travis, you never came on wild wasteland during its build, like i only saw you on twice, and that was like 5 months between... Theres one other thing, the pictures aren't much. I'd like to see something more.
I'm going to disagree with you and say that no, it isn't.
First off, ghouls don't suck at unarmed combat. Ever fight a feral in the games? Yeah, they can rip you a new one. Okay, I will agree with you there. However, My particular character never got too great at it (I'm partially basing this off of SPECIAL, so there's a limit in order to keep a balanced character)
That bio is way too short, for starters.The ( ;p no relation) in respect to his father being named Walter White is compeltely unecessary and detracts from the bio."At the age of 4, in the year 2081, Sharen was enslaved and put to work as janitor for slavers"I'm going to go ahead and call BS on that one. There's no chance anybody is freely roaming about three years after the bombs dropped. And who on earth makes a four year old a janitor? It makes no sense. Thanks for the feedback.
"instilled the ability to be extremely self-sustinent" You mean self-sufficient I actually meant 'self-sustainable'.
Sharen had heard of a distant city, about a month's journey from California, Van Buren"There is no city called Van Buren. That's the codename for the game that was never relased. Read the lore again."There was a facility there which may have technology and information beyond his wildest dreams, and thus his journey began..."You're writing something in that may or may not end up on the map. What if there's no facilty? What then? Then I guess Sharen walked all that way for nothing.
"the lone wander trekked hundreds of miles and has now arrived at the fated city."Don't refer to yourself as the lone wanderer, because you aren't them." You mean 'him'. I was unaware that the "lone wanderer" was a proper noun specifically referring to anybody. As far as I know, it is a phrase containing an adjective describing a noun. So technically, he could be a 'lone wanderer' so long as he was wandering alone. Obviously, when used in context of fallout 3, it refers to the main character. However, this is the context of Sharen's bio. It was meant to be a fallout reference anyways... thought I would try to have a clever play on words but that is clearly not acceptable here.
"But will it contain what he desires?" This is your bio. Not a cliffhanger mystery story. So, it's denied. That's just me getting into the whole "role playing" part of "RPG"
Let me help you with your wording a little bit.con·gru·ent (knggr-nt, kn-gr-)adj.1. Corresponding; congruous.Makes no sense when you say your bio is "congruent with the canon" hy·poth·e·sisnoun \hī-ˈpä-thə-səs\: an idea or theory that is not proven but that leads to further study or discussion
I didn't hypothesize anything. That's not my "hypothesis", that's my statement and my judgement of your application.If you're going to try to use big words, please use them in the proper context. Thanks for the English lesson.
Okay, I will agree with you there. However, My particular character never got too great at it (I'm partially basing this off of SPECIAL, so there's a limit in order to keep a balanced character)
That's fine then.
I actually meant 'self-sustainable'.
That works too.
Then I guess Sharen walked all that way for nothing.
Guess so, there's no mention of some sort of super science facility.
You mean 'him'. I was unaware that the "lone wanderer" was a proper noun specifically referring to anybody. As far as I know, it is a phrase containing an adjective describing a noun. So technically, he could be a 'lone wanderer' so long as he was wandering alone. Obviously, when used in context of fallout 3, it refers to the main character. However, this is the context of Sharen's bio. It was meant to be a fallout reference anyways... thought I would try to have a clever play on words but that is clearly not acceptable here.
Pretty sure I meant 'them'.
That's just me getting into the whole "role playing" part of "RPG"
Which is fine... For everything that isn't the bio. Look at the bio as a dossier or report on the guy. Not a roleplay example (which you provided already)
as far as the facility I was referring to goes, although I might have jumped the gun on it containing crazy tech, this is what I read about it, "The Facility is filled with tech that none know of, because anyone who came close to the facility either got killed by the radiation or the huge amount of mutants outside it. Eventually the Brotherhood of Steel found out about the facility, and sent a chapter there. They established a base in Vault 27 that's nearby the facility.
basically, Sharen is assuming there is something interesting to be found here, as nobody knows what is in the dome. All sharen knows is that it is of interest to the brotherhood, and He is suited to explore it because he has high radiation resistance.
Thanks guys, It's obvious I have a lot to learn here. When the server gets closer to being finished I'll polish it all up
No, just save the app in a notepad, we're going to change the format later. So just leave the whitelist app for now. And repost your Builder app once you've finished what i told you to fix. And if you have any questions, just ask me in a pm.
The Meaning of Life, the Universe, and Everything.
Join Date:
7/21/2013
Posts:
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Minecraft:
CptStefanelli
Member Details
IGN:CptStefanelli Age:16 Why you?:Because of my dedication,detailism and honesty. I focus principally in Bunkers , Vaults , Sewers. In general , closed areas , that will have a good quantity of details and will have themselves fitting to reality... Fallout Reality. Timezone: UTC/GMT -3 hours (Summer , so its -2 hours) How much time can you dedicate?: 2~4 hours (It depends on the day)
IGN:CptStefanelli Age:16 Why you?:Because of my dedication,detailism and honesty. I focus principally in Bunkers , Vaults , Sewers. In general , closed areas , that will have a good quantity of details and will have themselves fitting to reality... Fallout Reality. Timezone: UTC/GMT -3 hours (Summer , so its -2 hours) How much time can you dedicate?: 2~4 hours (It depends on the day)
Why you?: Why me? Well, for starters, I think I can add some great lore locations. I will try my best to please you with my buildings, I have a great understanding of the Fallout feel and have created this feel with my buildings in the past. Even though I lack pictures (Due to me switching computers, all my work is gone) I was a builder on Wild Wasteland And Assassins Creep 2.5. In all seriousness, if you are looking for an expert, top-notch builder, I am not your choice. I would love to be apart of this server, so I hope you can take the time and consider my application. One more thing I should add is I work much better with the interior of buildings, decoration, furniture, etc, but I would be happy to build the exterior too.
Timezone: Est
How much time can you dedicate?: 1-3 Hours Week says,2-5 hours Weekends
Previous Pictures of builds: [Required and make sure that you upload them as images to your app, we don't want download links, and links to the images can be a pain to go through, not having images = auto deni unless we've seen your build before.] (Sorry no pictures, changed PC's, all my work is gone, if this is a problem, I would be happy to create a sample)
IGN: retardedmouse
AGE:18
WHY YOU: i got asked
TIMEZONE: Central european time zone
HOW MUCH TIME CAN YOU DEDICATE: Maybe one hour a day, maybe less PREVIOUS BUILDS: check reddit
SKYPE: retardedmouse
(Unless it's mine)
pretty much... lol
as far as the facility I was referring to goes, although I might have jumped the gun on it containing crazy tech, this is what I read about it, "The Facility is filled with tech that none know of, because anyone who came close to the facility either got killed by the radiation or the huge amount of mutants outside it. Eventually the Brotherhood of Steel found out about the facility, and sent a chapter there. They established a base in Vault 27 that's nearby the facility.
basically, Sharen is assuming there is something interesting to be found here, as nobody knows what is in the dome. All sharen knows is that it is of interest to the brotherhood, and He is suited to explore it because he has high radiation resistance.
Thanks guys, It's obvious I have a lot to learn here. When the server gets closer to being finished I'll polish it all up
No, just save the app in a notepad, we're going to change the format later. So just leave the whitelist app for now. And repost your Builder app once you've finished what i told you to fix. And if you have any questions, just ask me in a pm.
Here are some sneak peeks of it.
Age:16
Why you?:Because of my dedication,detailism and honesty. I focus principally in Bunkers , Vaults , Sewers. In general , closed areas , that will have a good quantity of details and will have themselves fitting to reality... Fallout Reality.
Timezone: UTC/GMT -3 hours (Summer , so its -2 hours)
How much time can you dedicate?: 2~4 hours (It depends on the day)
Previous Pictures of builds: Those were done in Survivor (In WW) and due to lack of material and it would not be RP nice to have a giant post-war bunker built I had to make it small. But anyway , I hope you notice details. And I'm sure I can do better in Creative. (New PC , no images from previous buildings as Coliseums and Aqueducts).
1-http://gyazo.com/397...9334b4e09dac130
2-http://gyazo.com/ad9...d2606a58ea83c99
3-http://gyazo.com/34d...8428b1f66a2d892
4-http://gyazo.com/54b...581c57216cabf9b
5-http://gyazo.com/884...a1799bc70452c46
Skype: eduardo.stefanelli (You'll see a dog picture on it)
I was able to dig a few up, here is just a hotel I made on Wild Wasteland, hope you like it.
Promotional Artwork Time!
So we will have to remake the map ? (Or what was done)
He built this.