Have you played any Fallout games? Which one(s): Fallout 3 and Fallout New Vegas
Why do you want to play on this server?: I've known twizzler for a while and this server looks like it's going to be amazing.
What lies in the shadow of the statue?: He who will save us all.
Have you read the lore?: Yes. It asks to list the lore in your words so:
Fallout Reclamation takes place in 2284 in Colorado wastes. Dog City got overran by feral dogs and the people of dog city had to hide up in high buildings because of the dogs, the raiders, and the Legion. North east has the radiated ruins of Boulder, which is completely filled with a deadly new plague, and is not safe to travel through without a very strong hazmat suit.
Character's skills: Good with guns, sneaky, and melee weapons
Weaknesses: He has bad eye-site and can't see far because of an accident that happened when he was younger.
Karma: neutral
Character's appearance: Long white hair, wearing a red beret and has red eyes. He is tan and wears a Black coat with a white and wrap that goes around his body from his left shoulder down to his right hip and around his waist he's also wearing gray jeans.
Worn cloths/accessories: I said it in the appearance.
Gear/weapons: no
Spawn Location: A small snowy town in the mountains, untouched by the bombs and people, but left to weather
RP example (At least 2 paragraphs):
*Chris and Cid are walking around a town in Salt Lake city*
Chris: Cid.
Cid: Yeah?
Chris: You see that guy in that corner that looks like he's trippin' bad?
Cid: Yeah, so?
Chris: And you see that guy in a black coat going over to 'em?
Cid: Yeah..?
Chris: He's gonna try to sell drugs to him. We're low on caps...so.. when he sells it to the addict, want to go mug him?
Cid: No, Chris! What the hell is wrong with you?
Chris: Alright Cid. We'll find another way of getting food then.
Cid: What if I wasn't here? You would have mugged him for the caps, wouldn't you?
Chris: Yeah, shuttup.. let's go find some food, ok?
*Chris and Cid go into the deserts and find some food*
Character back-story (At least 3 paragraphs with no assuming faction roles):
Chris and Cid are brothers, born in Salt Lake City, and born on the same days too. Cid died at only 18, and he was the one keeping Chris in check for a while. Chris would have been a rebel, if it wasn't for his brother. Chris learned because of Cid, Chris would have probably been dead if it wasn't for Cid, Cid was the best thing for Chris, and he would do anything to have Cid back. Chris still dreads the day Cid died.. Cid died, with Chris. They were traveling to Colorado, to meet some old friends from when they were younger, and a rad scorpion came up and stabbed Cid in the leg, leaving a gashing hole. Chris didn't notice that, and he went on ahead of Cid, didn't even notice he wasn't following him. Once he noticed, he ran back to where the scorpion was, saw that Cid was still alive, lying on the ground crying holding his stomach. Chris panicked didn't have anything for the poison. Chris picked up Cid, and ran as fast as he could with Cid on his back, he ran to the closest city he could find, it was about 3 miles away. When they were about 10 minutes away from the city, he stopped hearing his brother cry, but didn't stop running. He refused to stop, by the time they got to city, it was too late.. Cid was gone.. Chris was looking around and found a wastelander and asked what city they were in, and he told Chris, "Son, you're in Denver."
Now, you may be wondering why they were such close brothers, and what happened to Chris that made his eyes red and his hair white. Well, it all starts from when he was younger. Cid was born about an hour before Chris, and Cid as a kid always bragged about being the older brother, and Chris didn't care that much. Cid was more of the goody-goody, nerdier brother, while Chris has always been more of the better at sports, stronger, but not as smart as his other brother, type of kid. Chris was a kid who liked to cause a lot of mischief but Cid always helped him and told him what was the right thing to do in the situation, so they were the perfect team. They got so close because, well, they had no other thing to do. They were at such a young age when their parents died. They were about 10 at the time their mother died, but their father died when they were only 8. Their mother was sick for a few months and that's when they became very close. They went out and always hunted the food together. Cid would make traps while Chris would just go out and hunt the bigger animals. But being together and catching their food together was something they liked doing. But one day, Chris got lost in the wastelands and was hearing a very strange sound. Like somebody, or something vomiting. He went around to check it out, and got ambushed by a group of 8 giant evolved centaurs and was knocked out by a pit full of radiated water slowly sending radiation into Chris' body. Cid realized that Chris was gone and ran looking for him, and found him with the centaur's around him. Cid killed them, all of them. He went to wake up Chris and something changed.. He had white hair, and glowing red eyes. He seemed stronger, but his perception seemed a lot lower.
There was other activities they participated in together while hunting they would go look for cannabis and on the way home smoke a few joints which really helped with their bonding. At first it was just for fun, but then their mother died because of her sickness. Then it became an anti-depressant, and they also started wrestling and fighting with each other. Chris was teaching Cid how to fight and be stronger while Cid tried teaching Chris to be smarter, and use more logic when he fights. Eventually they got bored with that and started hunting more and more as they got older. They met some people when they were younger and found a note from when they met saying visit whenever with an address. So they chose to go that way, and the tragic event of Cid's death happened. After that, Chris chose to go wonder the wastelands, eventually found a new snowy city, expecting it to be filled with people because it looked like no bombs hit it, but when he got there there was nobody in sight.
OOC- Remember the rules! In game name: ThatWalrusGuy Age: 14 Gender: male Country or time-zone: West Canada Have you played any Fallout games? Which one(s): Fallout 3 (all but mothership zeta and into the pitt...) Some of Fallout New Vegas Why do you want to play on this server?: I love Fallout and Minecraft and want to combine the two in an amazing Role-Playing-Minecraft experience. I tried for Fallout :Echoes of War, but it seems as though the creator has abandoned the project. I saw an ad for this and decided to join. What lies in the shadow of the statue?: He who will save us all Have you read the lore?: I read the Lore and the timeline. I'll read the history of the factions when I have the time.
IC- The more detail, the better! Name: Ray Manuel Pierce Nickname (optional): Ray Motto (optional): No one has the right to take the life of another. Age: 21 years old Gender: male Personality: Is as nice as a Canadian. He likes to make people laugh, usually by horrible pun, and will help anyone out when given the chance. He sometimes goes into an all-serious mode, in which he will not try to be funny or be nice and will just do what he thinks is best for others. He loves to sweet-talk the ladies, but usually never gets any action. So sad... Character's SPECIAL (max total: 40): Strength-4 Perception-3 Endurance-5 Charisma-10 Intelligence-10 Agility-5 Luck-3
Character's skills: Speech, Barter, Medicine Weaknesses: Killing others, sharp objects, and pretty women. Karma: Good Character's appearance: He is a Human Caucasian Semi-long black hair slicked back (like the blast back hairstyle in Fallout 3) His hair is black and greasy. He has a thin black beard with no mustache, (like Tomska's). His eyes are small and green. He is around 5"7' and 140 pounds. Worn cloths/accessories: He wears a tan suit outfitted with elbow, knee and shoulder pads for roughing it out in the wastes. He wears black fingerless gloves and black boots. Underneath, he has a grimy white button shirt with a red tie. He has a white pocket square in his suit for decoration. Gear/weapons: In his single-strap grey backpack, he carries simple weapons as h e doesn't believe in fighting. He does carry around his late mother's lucky revolver in remembrance of her. Spawn Location: Just outside of Denver RP example (At least 2 paragraphs): I don't know what to do here as I've never been on an RP server, but I'll try...
Ray orders a drink at the local bar, when Raiders attack the town. The Raiders command that all women come with them and that the men hand over the caps, guns, and "ciggs." Ray exits the saloon and into the street.
Raider: "Get inside, buddy! I don't want to mess up that pretty-boy face of yours!" His friends laugh as they continue with their "work"
Ray "Yeah, well..." Reaches into his pack. "I don't want to... ugh... to... um... I got nothing. Just stop this, please."
Raider: "Oh, tough guy, huh? Well I won't stand for this!" Aims his weapon at Ray. Ray pulls out his Mother's Lucky Revolver and quickly injures the Raider with a shot to the leg. The other Raiders ready themselves for battle, but Ray quickly attacks them, but doesn't kill them. One last Raider, who was hiding behind his brahmin, takes aim at Ray. Ray, who is out of ammo, runs up to him, taking a shot to the leg, and chops off his arm with his rusty knife
Ray: "I have... Disarmed you." The Raider didn't hear his pun due to his cries of pain. After stripping them of anything dangerous, Ray quickly preforms first-aid on them. Leaving caps for a doctor on the Raider's bodies, he quickly leaves town before anyone can thank him.
Character back-story (At least 3 paragraphs with no assuming faction roles):Ray Pierce was born on February 3rd, 2263 AD to a Raider Camp's "Pleasure Woman" somewhere in the Wastes of Utah. The Raiders attempted to kill Ray as an infant, but his mother convinced the Raiders to allow him to live. He grew up as a Raider toy until his mother's death in 2270 when Ray was 7 years old. He ran away from the camp that night with 10 bottlecaps, his mother's lucky revolver, a knife and the clothes on he wore and never looked back.
He stumbled into a small settlement in the West Colorado about a month later. There, he was taken care of and adopted by a man named Tim Otkins. Tim took Ray back to his own camp where there were dozens of other orphans who needed guidance. Tim taught Ray the basics of combat, but Ray already promised himself that he would not kill unless absolutely necessary.
In 2275, Tim was killed by Raiders while out for supplies, leaving the orphans to fend for themselves. This fueled Ray's hatred of killing and ran away yet again. This time, he would never be taken in again. He went from town to town, hoping to find refuge, but was always kicked out due to his lack of money. In 22 82, Ray heard about the Denver, the Dog City. He liked the sound of living in the sky and set out on a journey. In 2284, he has made it to the Mile-High City. This is where the server begins... Will you allow his story to continue?
Character's appearance: Long white hair, wearing a red beret and has red eyes. He is tan and wears a Black coat with a white and wrap that goes around his body from his left shoulder down to his right hip and around his waist he's also wearing gray jeans.
body. Cid realized that Chris was gone and ran looking for him, and found him with the centaur's around him. Cid killed them, all of them. He went to wake up Chris and something changed.. He had white hair, and glowing red eyes. He seemed stronger, but his perception seemed a lot lower.
1. Radiation would not give you white hair or red eyes, It would also make him weaker because he'd have radiation sickness. I can understand reddish eyes if he was ghoulified, and his eyes used to be brown, the hair would fall out, not change color. And that would take atleast a week's exposure to radiation. Leading to two:
2. It'd really help your app if you just dropped the weird appearance with the red eyes and white hair.
3. I'd like the RP example to be a little bit longer, maybe with some conflict.
RP example (At least 2 paragraphs): I don't know what to do here as I've never been on an RP server, but I'll try...
Ray "Yeah, well..." Reaches into his pack. "I don't want to... ugh... to... um... I got nothing. Just stop this, please."
Raider: "Oh, tough guy, huh? Well I won't stand for this!" Aims his weapon at Ray. Ray pulls out his Mother's Lucky Revolver and quickly injures the Raider with a shot to the leg. The other Raiders ready themselves for battle, but Ray quickly attacks them, but doesn't kill them. One last Raider, who was hiding behind his brahmin, takes aim at Ray. Ray, who is out of ammo, runs up to him, taking a shot to the leg, and chops off his arm with his rusty knife
I'd like it if the RP example was less far-fetched, but it's nothing holding the app back I suppose.
Accepted
I'd like it if the RP example was less far-fetched, but it's nothing holding the app back I suppose.
Accepted
Thank you SOO much. As I said, I haven't played on an RP server,so I don't know what to put in there. Again, thank you so much! I can't wait to play on the server.
Ok there's a couple things that need fixing upon my first read. Your rp example is way too short and so is your backstory. You might want to refer to older accepted apps to see how to make an RP example. Also your backstory doesnt say much about your character except that he is an orphan with a gasmask who snipes. You also claim your character is lacking intelligence but yet you have 6 in intel in your SPECIALs. Also you say your character is neutral leaning to good but if I refer to the little you say about your character he seems really interested into helping others and sounds more of a good Karma then Neutral. Basically just fix those little things and develop your backstory.
Character back-story (At least 3 paragraphs with no assuming faction roles):
Your backstory should still be expanded more, it's hard to follow and should have more needed information, less irrelevant information. There also isn't a recently collapsed tower in our Denver map, because there's no reason it would survive bombing and collapse now randomly.
Until your app (mainly your backstory) is improved, you are still denied.
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In game name:cdood
Age:13
Gender:male
Country or time-zone:usa west coast
Have you played any Fallout games? Which one(s):fallout 3 new vegas
Why do you want to play on this server?: Because i want to play my favorite game fallout in minecraft
What lies in the shadow of the statue?:He who lies in the shadows
Have you read the lore?:yes year 2284 in colorado denver aka dog city
IC- The more detail, the better!
Name:Craig
Nickname (optional):Craig The Nightkin
Motto (optional):Stop Staring
Age:Unknown
Gender:male
Personality:Hates people staring Hates humans also
Character's SPECIAL (max total: 40):
Strength-10
Perception-3
Endurance-10
Charisma-3
Intelligence-3
Agility-8
Luck-3
Character's skills:Can turn invisible and is radiation proof
Weaknesses: Having some stare at him
Karma:neutral
Character's appearance:7 foot 8 he is a nightkin
Worn cloths/accessories:leather armor
Gear/weapons:sledge hammer
Spawn Location:snowy mountains untouched from the bombs
RP example (At least 2 paragraphs):Craig was just was in his cave eating some Big horners when he heard a knock on his door
Craig yells who is it
Ncr yells Ncr
Craig yells go away
Ncr yells you must leave this land it belongs to the Ncr
Craig yells go away or die
Ncr says we have the right to kill you now that you have threatened us
Craig says get of my land
Ncr i will kick the door down
Ncr kicks the door down
Craig comes up with his sledge hammer hits the Ncr in the head
Two more ncr come in with guns and start shooting craig kills one of them with his gun and throws a knife in the other ones head and Craig goes out to side to look for more and there are 4 that start chasing him and shooting and craig shoots one of them then they chase him to the sewer and he yells stop staring at me then there are a ton of ghouls nightkin and super mutant s in the sewer and the ghouls kill the ncr and
a super mutant says hi i am marcus
Craig says stop staring
Then marcus looks away and says you may stay here as long as you like we have plenty of room
Craig says thank you but do you have and stealth boys
Marcus says yes follow me
Craig says ok
Marcus and Craig enter a room filled up with stealth boys
Craig takes some and activates one and says i am Craig The Nightkin Thank you Marcus The super mutant .
Character back-story (At least 3 paragraphs with no assuming faction roles)
Craig was born in Portland oregon when he was only 5 his parents where murdered when he was 9 he ran away from the orphanage Craig made a living as a hit man he started that job when he was only 35 he had done some smaller jobs before that The he had been sent to jail 4 times for assault and caught with weed he met his to be wife when he was 39 they were married 2 years he quit his job as a hit man later we got in the war with china and later his wife was giving birth to there daughter betty and then the bombs dropped two days after her birth. they got in Two a vault barley his daughter was born in the vault.
Craig was turned in two a super mutant after some scientist came in to the vault then they did experiments that turned them in to super mutants that killed the scientists he became addicted to stealth boys and was turned in to a NightKin later in his life Craig made the nightkin gang with some other nightkin but craig was betrayed by them and he killed them all. Then Craig Found a cave in some snowy mountains he turned that in two his home he lived the for around 50 years not being bothered by anyone craig hunted big horners until the ncr came and drove him out in two the wasteland. were he had to hide in the sewers during the day because the raiders would most likely kill or stare at him if they saw him so he had you his stealth boys.
Then Craig found a small village of super mutants and Nightkin that never had and humans bothering them except for the wanders the had gotten lost because most people are scared or getting killed by them but then Caesars legion came and demanded that they give this land to them or they would kill them all but the night kin fled using there stealth boys to escape and leaving the super mutants to die Craig fled to a small Snowy mountain village untouched from the bombs were they accepted him but craig did not trust them he made sure if any of them came near where he lived he would kill them because he thought that they would seen him and tell other humans and they would stare and he would have to kill them.
Alright let's start with the basics. Alot of stuff needs to be fixed and I will try to give you indications on what and why. First is the weaknesses, bullets are pretty obvious and you should find something more related to your character. Because otherwise you could add fire,lasers and death. For your Karma It'd important to review your character before putting Very Evil only because it sounds fun to you. Nightkins are really complex super mutants that suffer alot from their addictions to Stealthboys. I highly doubt they would ever deal with raiders and become bounty hunters for them. You have to remember that their addiction makes them extremely paranoid and or schizophrenic. Also in Gear/Weapons we are asking IRP what is your gear and weapons so Diamond sword isnt a valid option. You have to tell us what your character carries in rp. There are no diamond swords in Fallout.
For your RP example, I highly recommend you go see previous accepted apps to look at their RP examples just to get a better idea of the task we ask from you. We want to see how you would interact once on the server so try to simulate a conversation as if it was between you and another player. Confrontations are sometimes the easiest path for a good rp example.
For your backstory; first thing that bugs me is how he became a hitman at 16. Im pretty sure it would take alot more experience in such a criminal career to become a hitman. Also there is no reason to why he would choose this path. Now we move to the biggest problem in your backstory, you don't explain how he became a super mutant. So I'd direct you to http://fallout.wikia...ki/Super_mutant to get some more infos about the Super Muties lore to thicken your backstory. This brings me to the last part, it is highly unlikely for a Nigthkin to work with humans. The thing you have to understand about nightkins is that they are not like normal super mutants. It is harder for them to be able to have a clear mind and control of their thoughts.
A nightkin character is interesting but I'd say it's for experienced roleplayers. So I suggest you 2 things; 1) You make another character 2) You remake your Nightkin app with alot of detail.
I only say that because like I said, Nightkins are hard to play and to be accepted as one it would require a high quality app with alot of detail to prove to us you have the necessary RP skills. So the choice is yours and until you either fix this app or make a new one you are
I don't know about anyone else, but I would like to see an updated list of the people who have been whitelisted.
Well for one, no one but builders and staff have been whitelisted yet, and I'm pretty sure the list is up to date, possibly missing maybe just 1 or 2 people. But if you mean people that are accepted, why would you even want that? It's not exactly something we keep or would post on the main topic......
Although we do however have plans for including the "character sheets" of each accepted member on the OP at some point, though I'm not sure if that will be in the next update or not
Look, before we go any further, I'm just gonna have to tell you a couple things.
First, don't edit your app, repost it.
Second, I'm sorry, but I'm not going to do a full review of an app when the code is so screwed up, so please make sure that it isn't like that next time.
Lastly, I'm just going to have to tell you that you can't be a Nightkin. We are not going to allow you to be that character. Before we proceed any further, you're just going to need to create a completely new character that isn't a Nightkin or Super Mutant or anything like that. I'm sorry but until then,
wait why am i not allowed to make a night kin or super mutant
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In game name:cdood
Age:13
Gender:male
Country or time-zone:usa west coast
Have you played any Fallout games? Which one(s):fallout 3 new vegas
Why do you want to play on this server?: Because i want to play my favorite game fallout in minecraft
What lies in the shadow of the statue?:He who lies in the shadows
Have you read the lore?:yes year 2284 in colorado denver aka dog city
IC- The more detail, the better!
Name:Craig
Nickname (optional):Craig The Nightkin
Motto (optional):Stop Staring
Age:Unknown
Gender:male
Personality:Hates people staring Hates humans also
Character's SPECIAL (max total: 40):
Strength-10
Perception-3
Endurance-10
Charisma-3
Intelligence-3
Agility-8
Luck-3
Character's skills:Can turn invisible and is radiation proof
Weaknesses: Having some stare at him
Karma:neutral
Character's appearance:7 foot 8 he is a nightkin
Worn cloths/accessories:leather armor
Gear/weapons:sledge hammer
Spawn Location:snowy mountains untouched from the bombs
RP example (At least 2 paragraphs):Craig was just was in his cave eating some Big horners when he heard a knock on his door
Craig yells who is it
Ncr yells Ncr
Craig yells go away
Ncr yells you must leave this land it belongs to the Ncr
Craig yells go away or die
Ncr says we have the right to kill you now that you have threatened us
Craig says get of my land
Ncr i will kick the door down
Ncr kicks the door down
Craig comes up with his sledge hammer hits the Ncr in the head
Two more ncr come in with guns and start shooting craig kills one of them with his gun and throws a knife in the other ones head and Craig goes out to side to look for more and there are 4 that start chasing him and shooting and craig shoots one of them then they chase him to the sewer and he yells stop staring at me then there are a ton of ghouls nightkin and super mutant s in the sewer and the ghouls kill the ncr and
a super mutant says hi i am marcus
Craig says stop staring
Then marcus looks away and says you may stay here as long as you like we have plenty of room
Craig says thank you but do you have and stealth boys
Marcus says yes follow me
Craig says ok
Marcus and Craig enter a room filled up with stealth boys
Craig takes some and activates one and says i am Craig The Nightkin Thank you Marcus The super mutant .
Character back-story (At least 3 paragraphs with no assuming faction roles)
Craig was born in Portland oregon when he was only 5 his parents where murdered when he was 9 he ran away from the orphanage Craig made a living as a hit man he started that job when he was only 35 he had done some smaller jobs before that The he had been sent to jail 4 times for assault and caught with weed he met his to be wife when he was 39 they were married 2 years he quit his job as a hit man later we got in the war with china and later his wife was giving birth to there daughter betty and then the bombs dropped two days after her birth. they got in Two a vault barley his daughter was born in the vault.
Craig was turned in two a super mutant after some scientist came in to the vault then they did experiments that turned them in to super mutants that killed the scientists he became addicted to stealth boys and was turned in to a NightKin later in his life Craig made the nightkin gang with some other nightkin but craig was betrayed by them and he killed them all. Then Craig Found a cave in some snowy mountains he turned that in two his home he lived the for around 50 years not being bothered by anyone craig hunted big horners until the ncr came and drove him out in two the wasteland. were he had to hide in the sewers during the day because the raiders would most likely kill or stare at him if they saw him so he had you his stealth boys.
Then Craig found a small village of super mutants and Nightkin that never had and humans bothering them except for the wanders the had gotten lost because most people are scared or getting killed by them but then Caesars legion came and demanded that they give this land to them or they would kill them all but the night kin fled using there stealth boys to escape and leaving the super mutants to die Craig fled to a small Snowy mountain village untouched from the bombs were they accepted him but craig did not trust them he made sure if any of them came near where he lived he would kill them because he thought that they would seen him and tell other humans and they would stare and he would have to kill them.here i will make a human but if i can i will be a nightkin
OOC- Remember the rules!
In game name:cdood
Age:13
Gender:male
Country or time-zone:west coast us
Have you played any Fallout games? Which one(s):3 and new vegas
Why do you want to play on this server?: so i can play fallout in minecraft
What lies in the shadow of the statue?: He who will save us
Have you read the lore?:Yes The year 2284 Colorado denver aka dog city
IC- The more detail, the better!
Name:Frank
Nickname (optional):Frank
Motto (optional):The more caps the better
Age:26
Gender:male
Personality:will stab you in the back for caps and all he cares about is caps
Character's SPECIAL (max total: 40):
Strength-6
Perception-9
Endurance-6
Charisma-2
Intelligence-4
Agility-6
Luck-6
Character's skills:Has a perfect shot
Weaknesses: Being with out caps
Karma:evil
Character's appearance:Hes in a tuxedo and has brown hair
Worn cloths/accessories:leather armor
Gear/weapons:his trusty pistol
Spawn Location:snowy mountains untouched from the bombs
RP example (At least 2 paragraphs):
Frank heres a nock on his door
Raider let me in or else
Frank no
Raider I will get the rest of my raiders
Frank Ok do that i am a pro bounty hunter
Raider Sure you
Frank yeah i am
Raider ok then see you later
Raider leaves comes back 2 hours later with 5 more raiders They kick down the door
frank turns off all the lights puts a silencer on his gun
Raider where do you think he is
Raider i don't know
Frank Throws a rock in too another room
Raider i will go see what that was
Raider The rest of you go check the other rooms i will wait here
Frank shoots the First Raider
Two more come They say what happened frank shoots them
The last three come in and start shooting at him frank shoots one of them one of them runs out of his house and the last on shoots him self and the one that ran frank takes his sniper rifle and shoots him in the head.
Character back-story (At least 3 paragraphs with no assuming faction roles):Frank was born in the year 2258 in vault 87 his parents were killed by raiders when he was only 6 he was raised by him uncle his uncle was kill when he was 19 Frank started to do jobs as a bounty hunter and soon after that he got bigger and bigger jobs until he was whipping out entire raider gangs and destroying ncr and Caesars legion camps until was just killing for fun but then Craig to the new vegas to get a fresh start but when he got there mr house the man he had heard of so many times was dead a courier had killed him but that did not really affect frank but once frank had done all he could do there he decided to move again colorado and stay in some places near dog city but not go there untill he did all he could do there
Frank got a job to kill a gain leader named george the killer Frank had to get a source to find him he went to one of the local bars Frank walked up to man who he heard knows every thing you need to know Frank asked him about george he said you can find him at one of the nuka cola factory and when Frank walked in it was dark and there were some converter belts with guns on them so frank new this was the place frank decided to check the ceo office and just as he expected there was george he said hello what do you need frank said i have to kill you george says ok and three men come out one with a shovel two of them grab him by the arms and the one with the shovel hits him on the head and knocks him out and frank wakes up in a jail sell with two super mutants and a night kin frank and the super mutants and the night kin stay there for 4 years until franks 26 birth day where he could not stand it any more and said we have to break out and go to dog city The mutants say fine and for 3 months they did a hole out of the jail and on the night they decided to escape the night kin got shot in the head and one of the super mutants got shot in the leg but they made it to dog city in just one week the super mutant that got shot did not make it The mutant and Frank split up.
Frank decided to find some work as a bounty hunter so he whent looking for people that wanted a separate gang destroyed again Frank had to get a source were they might be this time this gang hides in the sewers but it was gang of ghouls so frank had to find a entrance to the sewers so frank whent to some people that he knows from vegas that moved here and they were telling him to check in south west side of town most of sewer entrances are there so frank check and he found one near half destroyed pub he went in he heard some ghouls but there were just two ferrel ones he needed to find a normal on and integrate it so frank killed them and keeped on looking he found 1 normal on and he gripped it by the throat and asked it were is the main ghoul headquarters the ghoul said keep going up tis tunnel and make a left the frank took his pistol and shot it and he kept on walking and then he took a right and there were i say at least 10 feral and 11 normal so frank threw a grenade killed almost all of the feral but the normal ones tackled him and knocked him out put him in a sack and dragged him up to the snowy village untouched from the bombs.
wait why am i not allowed to make a night kin or super mutant
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Look, mate, i'm going to be nice. You CAN'T be a nightkin or super mutant. They are too overpowered for RP, and unless we KNOW you can Rp VERY well, and KNOW you well, we won't let you be one. And even then, you'd have to have an absolutely AMAZING app for it, which...frankly....yours isn't the best.
And, for your second app with the normal human: Your special is messed up. A perfect shot would have a perception of 8-10, not 2. Character description-wise: What a character LOOKS like are like his facial features, hair/eye color, etc. Clothing is where the Tux would go. And really, your character shouldn't be too overpowered, like yours is. Your character is wayyyy too overpowered. Use punctuation more in your Backstory. WAYYY more. And, please, fix that RP example. Put it more like this
Raider: I will get the rest of my Raiders!
Frank: Okay, do that, I am a professional Bounty Hunter.
And so on and so on.
Punctuation is a HUGE thing in an application for an RP server like this. If you can use punctuation and grammar well, it can take you a long way.
Have you played Fallout games: Yes Fallout 3 and New Vegas.
Why do you want to play on this server: To play fallout in minecraft and finally being able to join factions.
What lies in the shadow of the statue: He who saves us.
Have you read the lore: Yes Denver 2284 NCR trying to take over after loss of New Vegas.
IC-
Name: John Bohannon.
Nickname optional: none
Motto: " The wastes are cold and heartless".
Age:20
Gender: male
Personality: Will help a person in need but if betrayed will kill you.
Chacater's Special (maximum 40):
Strength: -8
Perception:- 6
Endurance- 7
Intelligence- 9
Agility- 6
Luck- 3
Characters skill: marksman great tracker and expert bounty hunter.
Weakness: betrayal.
Karma: good
Characater appearance: Dark Brown hair and Desert Ranger armor his fathers.
Worn clothes/accessories: Desert Ranger armor.
Gear/weapons: his marksman carbine, bedroll, and backpack.
spawn location: outskirts of Denver under a billboard.
RP example ( at least 2 paragraphs)
Knock
Dealer whos there
John: Its me
Dealer do u have the chems
John: Yes I went through alot of trouble.
John: Almost got killed by a group of Fiends or whats left of them.
John: Y are these chems so important.
Dealer: Its a more potent form of jet lasts twice as longer.
Dealer: Now you have to die (pulls gun)
John: turns around bam the dealer is shot dead.
John: I told you not to cross me Johns said while staring at the dealers corpse.
John then collects his payment and the Chems and walks off for more adventures ahead.
Character backstory: Born in 2264 in the state of Nevada. To a Desert Ranger and a beautiful mother as the first born child John would take hunting trips with his father to better his skill and provide for his mother and 3 younger sisters. He remembers at the age of 10 when the NCR first came to the Mojave that day he saw hundreds of soldiers moving in from the border that day. A few years later his father took him to the New Vegas strip ate the age of 13 what he saw was not a untouched desert oasis but a place of greed and suffering. When the time came the boy joined the ranks of the NCR just like his father before him due to being absorbed into the NCR Rangers after the Unification Treaty. The boy became a man during his training with the NCR he became a good soldier who couldnt wait to protect his home from the likes of Caesars legion and other raiders. He was first deployed to Camp Golf but was then shortly redeployed to the Hoover Dam awaiting for the Legions attack his first taste of war.
The night befor the battle he prayed but the sound of across the river made his spine tingle the sound of battle durms and marching it left him in awe. Once the battle had begun most of his squad was eiter dead or wounded but he just stayed in his position in total shock unitl a legionary charged he shot pow pow the first man he had ever killed. Standing his ground he fired shot shot after shot legionary after legionary dead then it became silent the legion withdrew. It was a victory but a short one the courier's securitron army rolled on by and the courier demanded the NCR leave the mojave wich they did. Grief strickened over the loss of life over nothng he went home to his family. By then his father had retired and his family started a farm which let them get by. In 2282 trajedy struck his familys farm was wraided by legion scouting parties still fighting for control of the mojave. His father was bedridden from injuries that would heal over time but were very painful. Deciding to provide for his he returned to the Strip to get work he rose up in the ranks of the casino buissness. Finally after making a name for himself he was approached by the courier the master of the strip who asked him to track down and kill the leaders of the once great legion. The courier then spoke his family would be cared for and protected if he completed the task. John was then given the list of men he was shocked to see his old friends name on their with whom he grew up with but he accepted. So his journey to Colorado begins. When he took his first steps in the legion hotspot formely known as Denver he was appalled by the horror of it all. Calming himself and readied himself for his first task killing his former friend turned legionary. As he went through silently taking out each legionary he saw unit he reached his targets tent. Slowly he opended the door calmly was his target his former friend John the said "Why did you join the legion over all they have done".
His friend smirked and then said "For wat the NCR has done coming into the mojave taxing us and imposing their will upon us the legion come to bring order by peace". John: " What do you mean by peace killing the innocent you have changed alot Mark". Mark: " My name is no longer Mark its Lucius decanus and your death". The two former friends draw their weapons pow they both fire and hit each others guns. Reacting quickly John tackles Lucius and starts hitting Lucius puch after punch. Then Lucius stabs John and says " Im the one who raided your home and destroyed it." John sadly says slowly "why?" Lucius: "Because you helped the NCR let them walk all over us and I see your wearing your fathers ranger armor how disgusting" POW! A shot rings out Lucius is hit and he slowly says with a tear Im sorry. John then gets up takes his targets helmet as proof and just stares at the monster his former friend has become. He sends the proof and caps and supplies are given to his family. After reading a lette from home he thought to himself "Welcome To Dog City".
How come everytime you guys are involved with a Fallout RP server, something some how goes wrong, and a new owner has to be brought in?
I think you're confusing us with a different server. I have been the owner of all 3 servers "we" have ever been involved with, the "Lost Days" servers. Starting with Lost Days, which lasted about 6 months, then I made Twizzler Lord my co-owner for Lost Days 2, which lasted around 2 weeks until we decided to start completely fresh with Reclamation. I was the owner with him as my co-owner for Reclamation from when it started last December, until a couple weeks ago when I decided to take a step back and make Twizz full owner of Reclamation. So what you said kinda doesn't apply to us at all
In game name: alexheiker
Age: 15, 16 in December.
Gender: Male
Country or time-zone: USA, Eastern
Have you played any Fallout games? Which one(s): Fallout 3 and Fallout New Vegas
Why do you want to play on this server?: I've known twizzler for a while and this server looks like it's going to be amazing.
What lies in the shadow of the statue?: He who will save us all.
Have you read the lore?: Yes. It asks to list the lore in your words so:
Fallout Reclamation takes place in 2284 in Colorado wastes. Dog City got overran by feral dogs and the people of dog city had to hide up in high buildings because of the dogs, the raiders, and the Legion. North east has the radiated ruins of Boulder, which is completely filled with a deadly new plague, and is not safe to travel through without a very strong hazmat suit.
IC- The more detail, the better!
Name:Chris Coffin
Nickname (optional):
Motto (optional):
Age: 21
Gender: Male
Personality: Honest, and has a short-temper.
Character's SPECIAL (max total: 40):
Strength- 8
Perception- 3
Endurance- 5
Charisma- 5
Intelligence- 5
Agility- 6
Luck- 8
Character's skills: Good with guns, sneaky, and melee weapons
Weaknesses: He has bad eye-site and can't see far because of an accident that happened when he was younger.
Karma: neutral
Character's appearance: Long white hair, wearing a red beret and has red eyes. He is tan and wears a Black coat with a white and wrap that goes around his body from his left shoulder down to his right hip and around his waist he's also wearing gray jeans.
Worn cloths/accessories: I said it in the appearance.
Gear/weapons: no
Spawn Location: A small snowy town in the mountains, untouched by the bombs and people, but left to weather
RP example (At least 2 paragraphs):
*Chris and Cid are walking around a town in Salt Lake city*
Chris: Cid.
Cid: Yeah?
Chris: You see that guy in that corner that looks like he's trippin' bad?
Cid: Yeah, so?
Chris: And you see that guy in a black coat going over to 'em?
Cid: Yeah..?
Chris: He's gonna try to sell drugs to him. We're low on caps...so.. when he sells it to the addict, want to go mug him?
Cid: No, Chris! What the hell is wrong with you?
Chris: Alright Cid. We'll find another way of getting food then.
Cid: What if I wasn't here? You would have mugged him for the caps, wouldn't you?
Chris: Yeah, shuttup.. let's go find some food, ok?
*Chris and Cid go into the deserts and find some food*
Character back-story (At least 3 paragraphs with no assuming faction roles):
Chris and Cid are brothers, born in Salt Lake City, and born on the same days too. Cid died at only 18, and he was the one keeping Chris in check for a while. Chris would have been a rebel, if it wasn't for his brother. Chris learned because of Cid, Chris would have probably been dead if it wasn't for Cid, Cid was the best thing for Chris, and he would do anything to have Cid back. Chris still dreads the day Cid died.. Cid died, with Chris. They were traveling to Colorado, to meet some old friends from when they were younger, and a rad scorpion came up and stabbed Cid in the leg, leaving a gashing hole. Chris didn't notice that, and he went on ahead of Cid, didn't even notice he wasn't following him. Once he noticed, he ran back to where the scorpion was, saw that Cid was still alive, lying on the ground crying holding his stomach. Chris panicked didn't have anything for the poison. Chris picked up Cid, and ran as fast as he could with Cid on his back, he ran to the closest city he could find, it was about 3 miles away. When they were about 10 minutes away from the city, he stopped hearing his brother cry, but didn't stop running. He refused to stop, by the time they got to city, it was too late.. Cid was gone.. Chris was looking around and found a wastelander and asked what city they were in, and he told Chris, "Son, you're in Denver."
Now, you may be wondering why they were such close brothers, and what happened to Chris that made his eyes red and his hair white. Well, it all starts from when he was younger. Cid was born about an hour before Chris, and Cid as a kid always bragged about being the older brother, and Chris didn't care that much. Cid was more of the goody-goody, nerdier brother, while Chris has always been more of the better at sports, stronger, but not as smart as his other brother, type of kid. Chris was a kid who liked to cause a lot of mischief but Cid always helped him and told him what was the right thing to do in the situation, so they were the perfect team. They got so close because, well, they had no other thing to do. They were at such a young age when their parents died. They were about 10 at the time their mother died, but their father died when they were only 8. Their mother was sick for a few months and that's when they became very close. They went out and always hunted the food together. Cid would make traps while Chris would just go out and hunt the bigger animals. But being together and catching their food together was something they liked doing. But one day, Chris got lost in the wastelands and was hearing a very strange sound. Like somebody, or something vomiting. He went around to check it out, and got ambushed by a group of 8 giant evolved centaurs and was knocked out by a pit full of radiated water slowly sending radiation into Chris' body. Cid realized that Chris was gone and ran looking for him, and found him with the centaur's around him. Cid killed them, all of them. He went to wake up Chris and something changed.. He had white hair, and glowing red eyes. He seemed stronger, but his perception seemed a lot lower.
There was other activities they participated in together while hunting they would go look for cannabis and on the way home smoke a few joints which really helped with their bonding. At first it was just for fun, but then their mother died because of her sickness. Then it became an anti-depressant, and they also started wrestling and fighting with each other. Chris was teaching Cid how to fight and be stronger while Cid tried teaching Chris to be smarter, and use more logic when he fights. Eventually they got bored with that and started hunting more and more as they got older. They met some people when they were younger and found a note from when they met saying visit whenever with an address. So they chose to go that way, and the tragic event of Cid's death happened. After that, Chris chose to go wonder the wastelands, eventually found a new snowy city, expecting it to be filled with people because it looked like no bombs hit it, but when he got there there was nobody in sight.
Hopefully this is better ending.
In game name: ThatWalrusGuy
Age: 14
Gender: male
Country or time-zone: West Canada
Have you played any Fallout games? Which one(s): Fallout 3 (all but mothership zeta and into the pitt...) Some of Fallout New Vegas
Why do you want to play on this server?: I love Fallout and Minecraft and want to combine the two in an amazing Role-Playing-Minecraft experience. I tried for Fallout :Echoes of War, but it seems as though the creator has abandoned the project. I saw an ad for this and decided to join.
What lies in the shadow of the statue?: He who will save us all
Have you read the lore?: I read the Lore and the timeline. I'll read the history of the factions when I have the time.
IC- The more detail, the better!
Name: Ray Manuel Pierce
Nickname (optional): Ray
Motto (optional): No one has the right to take the life of another.
Age: 21 years old
Gender: male
Personality: Is as nice as a Canadian. He likes to make people laugh, usually by horrible pun, and will help anyone out when given the chance. He sometimes goes into an all-serious mode, in which he will not try to be funny or be nice and will just do what he thinks is best for others. He loves to sweet-talk the ladies, but usually never gets any action. So sad...
Character's SPECIAL (max total: 40):
Strength-4
Perception-3
Endurance-5
Charisma-10
Intelligence-10
Agility-5
Luck-3
Character's skills: Speech, Barter, Medicine
Weaknesses: Killing others, sharp objects, and pretty women.
Karma: Good
Character's appearance: He is a Human Caucasian Semi-long black hair slicked back (like the blast back hairstyle in Fallout 3) His hair is black and greasy. He has a thin black beard with no mustache, (like Tomska's). His eyes are small and green. He is around 5"7' and 140 pounds.
Worn cloths/accessories: He wears a tan suit outfitted with elbow, knee and shoulder pads for roughing it out in the wastes. He wears black fingerless gloves and black boots. Underneath, he has a grimy white button shirt with a red tie. He has a white pocket square in his suit for decoration.
Gear/weapons: In his single-strap grey backpack, he carries simple weapons as h e doesn't believe in fighting. He does carry around his late mother's lucky revolver in remembrance of her.
Spawn Location: Just outside of Denver
RP example (At least 2 paragraphs): I don't know what to do here as I've never been on an RP server, but I'll try...
In 2275, Tim was killed by Raiders while out for supplies, leaving the orphans to fend for themselves. This fueled Ray's hatred of killing and ran away yet again. This time, he would never be taken in again. He went from town to town, hoping to find refuge, but was always kicked out due to his lack of money. In 22 82, Ray heard about the Denver, the Dog City. He liked the sound of living in the sky and set out on a journey. In 2284, he has made it to the Mile-High City. This is where the server begins... Will you allow his story to continue?
1. Radiation would not give you white hair or red eyes, It would also make him weaker because he'd have radiation sickness. I can understand reddish eyes if he was ghoulified, and his eyes used to be brown, the hair would fall out, not change color. And that would take atleast a week's exposure to radiation. Leading to two:
2. It'd really help your app if you just dropped the weird appearance with the red eyes and white hair.
3. I'd like the RP example to be a little bit longer, maybe with some conflict.
Denied
I'd like it if the RP example was less far-fetched, but it's nothing holding the app back I suppose.
Accepted
Ok there's a couple things that need fixing upon my first read. Your rp example is way too short and so is your backstory. You might want to refer to older accepted apps to see how to make an RP example. Also your backstory doesnt say much about your character except that he is an orphan with a gasmask who snipes. You also claim your character is lacking intelligence but yet you have 6 in intel in your SPECIALs. Also you say your character is neutral leaning to good but if I refer to the little you say about your character he seems really interested into helping others and sounds more of a good Karma then Neutral. Basically just fix those little things and develop your backstory.
Until these things are fixed you are
Your backstory should still be expanded more, it's hard to follow and should have more needed information, less irrelevant information. There also isn't a recently collapsed tower in our Denver map, because there's no reason it would survive bombing and collapse now randomly.
Until your app (mainly your backstory) is improved, you are still denied.
In game name:cdood
Age:13
Gender:male
Country or time-zone:usa west coast
Have you played any Fallout games? Which one(s):fallout 3 new vegas
Why do you want to play on this server?: Because i want to play my favorite game fallout in minecraft
What lies in the shadow of the statue?:He who lies in the shadows
Have you read the lore?:yes year 2284 in colorado denver aka dog city
IC- The more detail, the better!
Name:Craig
Nickname (optional):Craig The Nightkin
Motto (optional):Stop Staring
Age:Unknown
Gender:male
Personality:Hates people staring Hates humans also
Character's SPECIAL (max total: 40):
Strength-10
Perception-3
Endurance-10
Charisma-3
Intelligence-3
Agility-8
Luck-3
Character's skills:Can turn invisible and is radiation proof
Weaknesses: Having some stare at him
Karma:neutral
Character's appearance:7 foot 8 he is a nightkin
Worn cloths/accessories:leather armor
Gear/weapons:sledge hammer
Craig was turned in two a super mutant after some scientist came in to the vault then they did experiments that turned them in to super mutants that killed the scientists he became addicted to stealth boys and was turned in to a NightKin later in his life Craig made the nightkin gang with some other nightkin but craig was betrayed by them and he killed them all. Then Craig Found a cave in some snowy mountains he turned that in two his home he lived the for around 50 years not being bothered by anyone craig hunted big horners until the ncr came and drove him out in two the wasteland. were he had to hide in the sewers during the day because the raiders would most likely kill or stare at him if they saw him so he had you his stealth boys.
Then Craig found a small village of super mutants and Nightkin that never had and humans bothering them except for the wanders the had gotten lost because most people are scared or getting killed by them but then Caesars legion came and demanded that they give this land to them or they would kill them all but the night kin fled using there stealth boys to escape and leaving the super mutants to die Craig fled to a small Snowy mountain village untouched from the bombs were they accepted him but craig did not trust them he made sure if any of them came near where he lived he would kill them because he thought that they would seen him and tell other humans and they would stare and he would have to kill them.
Alright let's start with the basics. Alot of stuff needs to be fixed and I will try to give you indications on what and why. First is the weaknesses, bullets are pretty obvious and you should find something more related to your character. Because otherwise you could add fire,lasers and death. For your Karma It'd important to review your character before putting Very Evil only because it sounds fun to you. Nightkins are really complex super mutants that suffer alot from their addictions to Stealthboys. I highly doubt they would ever deal with raiders and become bounty hunters for them. You have to remember that their addiction makes them extremely paranoid and or schizophrenic. Also in Gear/Weapons we are asking IRP what is your gear and weapons so Diamond sword isnt a valid option. You have to tell us what your character carries in rp. There are no diamond swords in Fallout.
For your RP example, I highly recommend you go see previous accepted apps to look at their RP examples just to get a better idea of the task we ask from you. We want to see how you would interact once on the server so try to simulate a conversation as if it was between you and another player. Confrontations are sometimes the easiest path for a good rp example.
For your backstory; first thing that bugs me is how he became a hitman at 16. Im pretty sure it would take alot more experience in such a criminal career to become a hitman. Also there is no reason to why he would choose this path. Now we move to the biggest problem in your backstory, you don't explain how he became a super mutant. So I'd direct you to http://fallout.wikia...ki/Super_mutant to get some more infos about the Super Muties lore to thicken your backstory. This brings me to the last part, it is highly unlikely for a Nigthkin to work with humans. The thing you have to understand about nightkins is that they are not like normal super mutants. It is harder for them to be able to have a clear mind and control of their thoughts.
A nightkin character is interesting but I'd say it's for experienced roleplayers. So I suggest you 2 things; 1) You make another character 2) You remake your Nightkin app with alot of detail.
I only say that because like I said, Nightkins are hard to play and to be accepted as one it would require a high quality app with alot of detail to prove to us you have the necessary RP skills. So the choice is yours and until you either fix this app or make a new one you are
There will be an update on the OP somewhere around this week so we could look into and make a quick list of all the whitelisted people so far.
Well for one, no one but builders and staff have been whitelisted yet, and I'm pretty sure the list is up to date, possibly missing maybe just 1 or 2 people. But if you mean people that are accepted, why would you even want that? It's not exactly something we keep or would post on the main topic......
Although we do however have plans for including the "character sheets" of each accepted member on the OP at some point, though I'm not sure if that will be in the next update or not
Look, before we go any further, I'm just gonna have to tell you a couple things.
First, don't edit your app, repost it.
Second, I'm sorry, but I'm not going to do a full review of an app when the code is so screwed up, so please make sure that it isn't like that next time.
Lastly, I'm just going to have to tell you that you can't be a Nightkin. We are not going to allow you to be that character. Before we proceed any further, you're just going to need to create a completely new character that isn't a Nightkin or Super Mutant or anything like that. I'm sorry but until then,
In game name:cdood
Age:13
Gender:male
Country or time-zone:usa west coast
Have you played any Fallout games? Which one(s):fallout 3 new vegas
Why do you want to play on this server?: Because i want to play my favorite game fallout in minecraft
What lies in the shadow of the statue?:He who lies in the shadows
Have you read the lore?:yes year 2284 in colorado denver aka dog city
IC- The more detail, the better!
Name:Craig
Nickname (optional):Craig The Nightkin
Motto (optional):Stop Staring
Age:Unknown
Gender:male
Personality:Hates people staring Hates humans also
Character's SPECIAL (max total: 40):
Strength-10
Perception-3
Endurance-10
Charisma-3
Intelligence-3
Agility-8
Luck-3
Character's skills:Can turn invisible and is radiation proof
Weaknesses: Having some stare at him
Karma:neutral
Character's appearance:7 foot 8 he is a nightkin
Worn cloths/accessories:leather armor
Gear/weapons:sledge hammer
Craig was turned in two a super mutant after some scientist came in to the vault then they did experiments that turned them in to super mutants that killed the scientists he became addicted to stealth boys and was turned in to a NightKin later in his life Craig made the nightkin gang with some other nightkin but craig was betrayed by them and he killed them all. Then Craig Found a cave in some snowy mountains he turned that in two his home he lived the for around 50 years not being bothered by anyone craig hunted big horners until the ncr came and drove him out in two the wasteland. were he had to hide in the sewers during the day because the raiders would most likely kill or stare at him if they saw him so he had you his stealth boys.
Then Craig found a small village of super mutants and Nightkin that never had and humans bothering them except for the wanders the had gotten lost because most people are scared or getting killed by them but then Caesars legion came and demanded that they give this land to them or they would kill them all but the night kin fled using there stealth boys to escape and leaving the super mutants to die Craig fled to a small Snowy mountain village untouched from the bombs were they accepted him but craig did not trust them he made sure if any of them came near where he lived he would kill them because he thought that they would seen him and tell other humans and they would stare and he would have to kill them.here i will make a human but if i can i will be a nightkin
In game name:cdood
Age:13
Gender:male
Country or time-zone:west coast us
Have you played any Fallout games? Which one(s):3 and new vegas
Why do you want to play on this server?: so i can play fallout in minecraft
What lies in the shadow of the statue?: He who will save us
Have you read the lore?:Yes The year 2284 Colorado denver aka dog city
IC- The more detail, the better!
Name:Frank
Nickname (optional):Frank
Motto (optional):The more caps the better
Age:26
Gender:male
Personality:will stab you in the back for caps and all he cares about is caps
Character's SPECIAL (max total: 40):
Strength-6
Perception-9
Endurance-6
Charisma-2
Intelligence-4
Agility-6
Luck-6
Character's skills:Has a perfect shot
Weaknesses: Being with out caps
Karma:evil
Character's appearance:Hes in a tuxedo and has brown hair
Worn cloths/accessories:leather armor
Gear/weapons:his trusty pistol
Spawn Location:snowy mountains untouched from the bombs
Character back-story (At least 3 paragraphs with no assuming faction roles):Frank was born in the year 2258 in vault 87 his parents were killed by raiders when he was only 6 he was raised by him uncle his uncle was kill when he was 19 Frank started to do jobs as a bounty hunter and soon after that he got bigger and bigger jobs until he was whipping out entire raider gangs and destroying ncr and Caesars legion camps until was just killing for fun but then Craig to the new vegas to get a fresh start but when he got there mr house the man he had heard of so many times was dead a courier had killed him but that did not really affect frank but once frank had done all he could do there he decided to move again colorado and stay in some places near dog city but not go there untill he did all he could do there
Look, mate, i'm going to be nice. You CAN'T be a nightkin or super mutant. They are too overpowered for RP, and unless we KNOW you can Rp VERY well, and KNOW you well, we won't let you be one. And even then, you'd have to have an absolutely AMAZING app for it, which...frankly....yours isn't the best.
And, for your second app with the normal human: Your special is messed up. A perfect shot would have a perception of 8-10, not 2. Character description-wise: What a character LOOKS like are like his facial features, hair/eye color, etc. Clothing is where the Tux would go. And really, your character shouldn't be too overpowered, like yours is. Your character is wayyyy too overpowered. Use punctuation more in your Backstory. WAYYY more. And, please, fix that RP example. Put it more like this
Raider: I will get the rest of my Raiders!
Frank: Okay, do that, I am a professional Bounty Hunter.
And so on and so on.
Punctuation is a HUGE thing in an application for an RP server like this. If you can use punctuation and grammar well, it can take you a long way.
I think you're confusing us with a different server. I have been the owner of all 3 servers "we" have ever been involved with, the "Lost Days" servers. Starting with Lost Days, which lasted about 6 months, then I made Twizzler Lord my co-owner for Lost Days 2, which lasted around 2 weeks until we decided to start completely fresh with Reclamation. I was the owner with him as my co-owner for Reclamation from when it started last December, until a couple weeks ago when I decided to take a step back and make Twizz full owner of Reclamation. So what you said kinda doesn't apply to us at all