Denied
Okay, here we go:
1. Details, buddy. Add them to your backstory, a lot more.
2. There are one or two contradictions in various parts of this application, find them.
3. Please expand your RP example, right now all I see is him burying his parents and his eyes turning green.
Character name: (Last names aren't required) Morgan
Your character's story so far: Morgan was born in 2040, in a apocalyptic landscape. As soon as he could talk his parents started teaching him how to survive, however they neglected to teach him how to read and write. Marks survival skills served him well, when radiation levels rose in 2050, killing his parents, he was forced to survive on his own. Morgan was lucky. The radiation only turned his eyes green. He lived in the wild for 10 years, when a group of bandits captured him. they gave him a scar, but he escaped from them.
Does or did your character have any companions or family? He used to have a mom and dad.
How old is your character? 25
Describe what your character looks like, any distinctive physical features? He is average looking except for his green eyes, and a scar running down his face from a bandit encounter.
How does your character act? Although he is a veteran survivor, Morgan is unused to being with other people. Due to his encounter with the bandits, he is very suspicious of anyone he meets, though when someone helps him, he doesn't know how to respond.
Character's occupation: Hunter
Does your character have an education? (Read or write) No
Any special skills that your character has, nothing unbalanced: He can hunt and track, and is a skilled survivor. His tracking skills make it so he notices the smallest detail. It is hard to hide something from him.
Does your character hate or fear anything? No
Describe an example of your character in great suffering and pain (RP, and Long): B= bandit M= Morgan
Morgan is tracking a herd of Xigs, hoping to get some meat. However, when he crosses a clearing, he fails to notice a tripwire, and falls into a hidden pit. He wakes up bound to a chair in a small room. A bandit faces him. B: "So, what do we have here? A little lost kid, that's what i see." The bandit laughs. M: "You wont see anything once i get free." B: "If i were you i wouldn't be making threats." Angered, the bandit swipes his knife down across Morgans face, spilling blood. Morgan ignores it and spits at the bandit. The bandit starts to leave the room. B: "We'll break you soon enough." When the door closes, Mark takes out a hidden knife and cuts through the ropes tying him up. He opens the door and looks around. He sees a large underground cavern. He sneaks to the entrance, and fights a bandit guarding it. He takes a slash to the gut but ignores it, leaving and running as fast as he can. When he stops, he feels dizzy and blacks out due to blood loss.
Denied. That was an awful and predictable RP example.
His tracking skills make it so he notices the smallest detail. It is hard to hide something from him.
Why isn't this even mentioned in your RP example? It is like you create this hunter character, but he doesn't actually do any hunting. Also, you'd think that something like his parents dying would have more then just one sentence in your character's backround... It is something I've come to expect from you. I am removing you from the whitelist until you get accepted, because know matter how many times I've told you not to come until you've been accepted you keep doing it.
You have a Doctor Who skin, don't try to pretend like you where just denied because I don't want you on the server.
But it is! and fine I'll change the skin. But I want reasons this is wrong. Quinn told me you have no religion in your server, therefore an app like this should be perfect for it.
But it is! and fine I'll change the skin. But I want reasons this is wrong. Quinn told me you have no religion in your server, therefore an app like this should be perfect for it.
Is your religion based of a person that exisits in the real world?
Country of residence and time zone: I currently reside in the United States, within the Mountain Time Zone.
Define role playing in your own words, do you have any past role playing experiences?: I have role-played on many other servers before, and have had four years of acting experience. More notable servers I have been on are Fallout: Old World Blues, Notably Republic, and Crafthamer.
What is your reason for applying to this server?: I need a good role-playing server to be on with an extensive community and rich lore. I took one look at the page for this one and was immediately hooked.
Have you been banned before, if so why?: Nope, and I plan to keep that number at zero.
Do you agree with our rules, how about the lore?: I agree with the rules and lore.
Will you use the server's official texture pack?: I agree to use the server’s texture pack.
Define Powergaming in your own words, example: Powergaming is the unfair usage of a character by permitting him or her powers or abilities beyond his or her normal limitations. For example, if a character was particularly stupid, it would be powergaming to permit him to suddenly understand what his opponent would do next by advanced deduction.
Define Metagaming in your own words, example: Metagaiming would be the usage of out-of-context information to benefit a particular character or bestow an unfair, non-rpg advantage. For example, If I learned IRL that a band of raiders would be stealing my stuff in game, I could not prevent them unless my character could have learned about their appearance some other way.
In Character
Character name: (Last names aren't required) Jack “The Operator”
Your character's story so far:
Jack has had a poor life so far. Being born to a poor family, Jack has had to struggle for his daily bread since day one. His older brothers where very competitive, and Jack was the smallest in his family, so he was often bullied. He quickly learned how to hide and run from danger, rather than face it. He slowly became more nimble-fingered, and could pick pockets fairly well even in his youth. However, he did get caught, and was forced to become quick in wit as well, able to attract and loose attention quickly by saying the right things. Time passed, and Jack soon became known around his small shantytown as “The Operator” because of his street smarts and knowledge of local places of interest. But just as things started to get better, Jack’s world fell apart.
After the military misfired a napalm bomb into Jack’s small town, everything he knew and loved was destroyed. His family, home, and much of his flesh was burned leaving Jack both a mentally and physically scarred man. He was left to die in the burning crater of what was once his home, and after he had recovered from his trauma, he was forced to eat the remains of the people in his town, as all other food was burned far beyond eating. It was at this time that Jack swore revenge on those in power, after believing that it was them that had reduced him to this state.
Jack ran from his home as soon as he could, and scavenged for some form of protection to cover his raw skin from the elements. After discovering an abandoned museum, and taking the WW2 Gas Mask Suit, he aspired to strike fear into other’s hearts, and spur outcry against the people who had done this to him.
Does or did your character have any companions or family?: No, they have all died.
How old is your character?: Nearing in at about 30, but his exact age is unknown.
Describe what your character looks like, any distinctive physical features?: Jack always wears his WW2 Gas Mask uniform, never taking it off, unless to eat. He is afraid of his past and previous life, and hides behind a full body suit, not letting a bit of skin show to anyone.
How does your character act?: Jack is crazy! He spouts off random bits and pieces of conversation while alone, and is almost impossible to reason with. He is, however, quite charismatic, and even though he is quite insane, his thoughts and theories are quite interesting, and he knows how to communicate to people quite effectively.
Character's occupation: Currently and Anarchist-For-Hire, performing assassinations, arsons, kidnappings, burglaries, and anti-governmental schemes for the highest bidder.
Does your character have an education? (Read or write): Yes, Jack is quite intelligent on most matters, and can read and write very well, often making references to literature and poetry one second, and spattering nonsense the next.
Any special skills that your character has, nothing unbalanced: Jack can move quietly and silently quite easily, and knows how to speak and manipulate people effectively and quickly.
Does your character hate or fear anything?: Jack is fearful of those in power, and hates those who exercise their “superiority” upon others. Though this can sometimes lead to good things, more often than not, Jack takes it too far and spoils what could have been a good oucome.
Describe an example of your character in great suffering and pain (RP, and Long):
Jack is awake.
Or is he asleep.
Jack can’t tell. All he knows is the pain, and the fire, and the smell.
Jack moves an arm. A searing flash rushes to his brain, causing him to relax again.
It is some time before he comes too. Jack would have opened his eyes, but his eyelids have been seared to the point where he could not open them if he tried. He tries to move his arm. This time he succeeds, and manages to touch his face. The skin has given way to flesh beneath, and his face does not feel like his. Another flash racks his body, and he falls into darkness again.
Suddenly, after what seems like the longest time, his lungs give way to breath. His mouth slowly opens, and his body forces itself to turn over. His eyes finally open.
Jack wanted to close them again. But he had to keep them open. He had to see what had happened. He had to see what the “law” had done. He looked to his right. There, if the bomb had not gone off, would be his parents. Their remains consisted of nothing but charred flesh and eyeless faces. They seemed to cry out in anguish to Jack. Jack reached out to touch them.
Jack fell asleep again.
When Jack awoke, he was hungry.
Anything else to add?: Ima touch u bum bum silly dingus. Oh and, Would you kindly?
Country of residence and time zone: I currently reside in the United States, within the Mountain Time Zone.
Define role playing in your own words, do you have any past role playing experiences?: I have role-played on many other servers before, and have had four years of acting experience. More notable servers I have been on are Fallout: Old World Blues, Notably Republic, and Crafthamer.
What is your reason for applying to this server?: I need a good role-playing server to be on with an extensive community and rich lore. I took one look at the page for this one and was immediately hooked.
Have you been banned before, if so why?: Nope, and I plan to keep that number at zero.
Do you agree with our rules, how about the lore?: I agree with the rules and lore.
Will you use the server's official texture pack?: I agree to use the server’s texture pack.
Define Powergaming in your own words, example: Powergaming is the unfair usage of a character by permitting him or her powers or abilities beyond his or her normal limitations. For example, if a character was particularly stupid, it would be powergaming to permit him to suddenly understand what his opponent would do next by advanced deduction.
Define Metagaming in your own words, example: Metagaiming would be the usage of out-of-context information to benefit a particular character or bestow an unfair, non-rpg advantage. For example, If I learned IRL that a band of raiders would be stealing my stuff in game, I could not prevent them unless my character could have learned about their appearance some other way.
In Character
Character name: (Last names aren't required) Jack “The Operator”
Your character's story so far:
Jack has had a poor life so far. Being born to a poor family, Jack has had to struggle for his daily bread since day one. His older brothers where very competitive, and Jack was the smallest in his family, so he was often bullied. He quickly learned how to hide and run from danger, rather than face it. He slowly became more nimble-fingered, and could pick pockets fairly well even in his youth. However, he did get caught, and was forced to become quick in wit as well, able to attract and loose attention quickly by saying the right things. Time passed, and Jack soon became known around his small shantytown as “The Operator” because of his street smarts and knowledge of local places of interest. But just as things started to get better, Jack’s world fell apart.
After the military misfired a napalm bomb into Jack’s small town, everything he knew and loved was destroyed. His family, home, and much of his flesh was burned leaving Jack both a mentally and physically scarred man. He was left to die in the burning crater of what was once his home, and after he had recovered from his trauma, he was forced to eat the remains of the people in his town, as all other food was burned far beyond eating. It was at this time that Jack swore revenge on those in power, after believing that it was them that had reduced him to this state.
Jack ran from his home as soon as he could, and scavenged for some form of protection to cover his raw skin from the elements. After discovering an abandoned museum, and taking the WW2 Gas Mask Suit, he aspired to strike fear into other’s hearts, and spur outcry against the people who had done this to him.
Does or did your character have any companions or family?: No, they have all died.
How old is your character?: Nearing in at about 30, but his exact age is unknown.
Describe what your character looks like, any distinctive physical features?: Jack always wears his WW2 Gas Mask uniform, never taking it off, unless to eat. He is afraid of his past and previous life, and hides behind a full body suit, not letting a bit of skin show to anyone.
How does your character act?: Jack is crazy! He spouts off random bits and pieces of conversation while alone, and is almost impossible to reason with. He is, however, quite charismatic, and even though he is quite insane, his thoughts and theories are quite interesting, and he knows how to communicate to people quite effectively.
Character's occupation: Currently and Anarchist-For-Hire, performing assassinations, arsons, kidnappings, burglaries, and anti-governmental schemes for the highest bidder.
Does your character have an education? (Read or write): Yes, Jack is quite intelligent on most matters, and can read and write very well, often making references to literature and poetry one second, and spattering nonsense the next.
Any special skills that your character has, nothing unbalanced: Jack can move quietly and silently quite easily, and knows how to speak and manipulate people effectively and quickly.
Does your character hate or fear anything?: Jack is fearful of those in power, and hates those who exercise their “superiority” upon others. Though this can sometimes lead to good things, more often than not, Jack takes it too far and spoils what could have been a good oucome.
Describe an example of your character in great suffering and pain (RP, and Long):
Jack is awake.
Or is he asleep.
Jack can’t tell. All he knows is the pain, and the fire, and the smell.
Jack moves an arm. A searing flash rushes to his brain, causing him to relax again.
It is some time before he comes too. Jack would have opened his eyes, but his eyelids have been seared to the point where he could not open them if he tried. He tries to move his arm. This time he succeeds, and manages to touch his face. The skin has given way to flesh beneath, and his face does not feel like his. Another flash racks his body, and he falls into darkness again.
Suddenly, after what seems like the longest time, his lungs give way to breath. His mouth slowly opens, and his body forces itself to turn over. His eyes finally open.
Jack wanted to close them again. But he had to keep them open. He had to see what had happened. He had to see what the “law” had done. He looked to his right. There, if the bomb had not gone off, would be his parents. Their remains consisted of nothing but charred flesh and eyeless faces. They seemed to cry out in anguish to Jack. Jack reached out to touch them.
Jack fell asleep again.
When Jack awoke, he was hungry.
Anything else to add?: Ima touch u bum bum silly dingus. Oh and, Would you kindly?
I've been thinking lately and I think its time I give up my administrator position. Lately I just don't have the time to do the work here that I should be doing (Applications, activity in game, etc...) due to a girlfriend, a car, and school n` all that good stuff. I'll still be on the server but I think its best if someone else could take my position. *Cough* FLEE *cough*. He's done more then his fair share of work around here and personally deserves the position. Thats just my two cents on my activity lately.
I've been thinking lately and I think its time I give up my administrator position. Lately I just don't have the time to do the work here that I should be doing (Applications, activity in game, etc...) due to a girlfriend, a car, and school n` all that good stuff. I'll still be on the server but I think its best if someone else could take my position. *Cough* FLEE *cough*. He's done more then his fair share of work around here and personally deserves the position. Thats just my two cents on my activity lately.
I've been thinking lately and I think its time I give up my administrator position. Lately I just don't have the time to do the work here that I should be doing (Applications, activity in game, etc...) due to a girlfriend, a car, and school n` all that good stuff. I'll still be on the server but I think its best if someone else could take my position. *Cough* FLEE *cough*. He's done more then his fair share of work around here and personally deserves the position. Thats just my two cents on my activity lately.
Character name: Naked Man Your character's story so far: Born on the planet Nudoniton, Naked Man grew up as a normal child along side all of his naked friends. But one day things went horribly wrong, and not so super Naked Man fell into a radioactive pool, and became Super Naked Man! With the strength of 100 elephants and a nudity, on a scale from 1 to puppies, puppies... He was the greatest bare super hero to have ever lived and the people of Nudoniton were happy. But then, a horrible black hole ate the entire planet and everyone on it but fortunately, Naked Man escaped and flew all the way to Earth were he protected the citizens. And as long as he lives, no human shall be in danger for they are being watched over by NAKED MAN!!! THE GREATEST SUPER HERO EVER! How old is your character? 1,000 Naked Years. Describe what your character looks like, any distinctive physical features? BALD and completely NAKED! The most heroic gentle-naked-man ever! Character's occupation: NUDITY, and saving his people. Does your character have an education? He has a degree, in NUDITY! Any special skills that your character has, nothing unbalanced: Faster than a rampaging sloth, tougher than a tree, and NAKED. SO NAKED!!! Does your character hate or fear anything? Naked man fears nothing, but his weakness is under garments! Describe an example of your character in great suffering and pain (RP, and Long): *Naked man punches the evil tailor through a window* "Smash!," yells Naked Man. "Hehehehe!, you will never defeat me Naked Man, for I am wearing, boxer shorts on top of tighty-whiteys!" Shouted the Tailor. "NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! AArrrghh, oof!," Naked Man screamed in agony, "My only weakness!" *Then Mr. Tailor guy throws the weakned Naked Man off of a steep cliff face. The End. Anything else to add? NAKED NAKED NAKED NAKED NAKED NAKED NAKED NAKED!! SOOOOO NAKED!! Provide an image of your character's skin
Character name: Naked Man Your character's story so far: Born on the planet Nudoniton, Naked Man grew up as a normal child along side all of his naked friends. But one day things went horribly wrong, and not so super Naked Man fell into a radioactive pool, and became Super Naked Man! With the strength of 100 elephants and a nudity, on a scale from 1 to puppies, puppies... He was the greatest bare super hero to have ever lived and the people of Nudoniton were happy. But then, a horrible black hole ate the entire planet and everyone on it but fortunately, Naked Man escaped and flew all the way to Earth were he protected the citizens. And as long as he lives, no human shall be in danger for they are being watched over by NAKED MAN!!! THE GREATEST SUPER HERO EVER! How old is your character? 1,000 Naked Years. Describe what your character looks like, any distinctive physical features? BALD and completely NAKED! The most heroic gentle-naked-man ever! Character's occupation: NUDITY, and saving his people. Does your character have an education? He has a degree, in NUDITY! Any special skills that your character has, nothing unbalanced: Faster than a rampaging sloth, tougher than a tree, and NAKED. SO NAKED!!! Does your character hate or fear anything? Naked man fears nothing, but his weakness is under garments! Describe an example of your character in great suffering and pain (RP, and Long): *Naked man punches the evil tailor through a window* "Smash!," yells Naked Man. "Hehehehe!, you will never defeat me Naked Man, for I am wearing, boxer shorts on top of tighty-whiteys!" Shouted the Tailor. "NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! AArrrghh, oof!," Naked Man screamed in agony, "My only weakness!" *Then Mr. Tailor guy throws the weakned Naked Man off of a steep cliff face. The End. Anything else to add? NAKED NAKED NAKED NAKED NAKED NAKED NAKED NAKED!! SOOOOO NAKED!! Provide an image of your character's skin
I've been thinking lately and I think its time I give up my administrator position. Lately I just don't have the time to do the work here that I should be doing (Applications, activity in game, etc...) due to a girlfriend, a car, and school n` all that good stuff. I'll still be on the server but I think its best if someone else could take my position. *Cough* FLEE *cough*. He's done more then his fair share of work around here and personally deserves the position. Thats just my two cents on my activity lately.
Nope. Beluga is biased. I would like customer support, i.e. Quinn. XDAnd @Beluga, you know you want this a little on the inside :).
Denied
Okay, here we go:
1. Details, buddy. Add them to your backstory, a lot more.
2. There are one or two contradictions in various parts of this application, find them.
3. Please expand your RP example, right now all I see is him burying his parents and his eyes turning green.
Character name: (Last names aren't required) Morgan
Your character's story so far: Morgan was born in 2040, in a apocalyptic landscape. As soon as he could talk his parents started teaching him how to survive, however they neglected to teach him how to read and write. Marks survival skills served him well, when radiation levels rose in 2050, killing his parents, he was forced to survive on his own. Morgan was lucky. The radiation only turned his eyes green. He lived in the wild for 10 years, when a group of bandits captured him. they gave him a scar, but he escaped from them.
Does or did your character have any companions or family? He used to have a mom and dad.
How old is your character? 25
Describe what your character looks like, any distinctive physical features? He is average looking except for his green eyes, and a scar running down his face from a bandit encounter.
How does your character act? Although he is a veteran survivor, Morgan is unused to being with other people. Due to his encounter with the bandits, he is very suspicious of anyone he meets, though when someone helps him, he doesn't know how to respond.
Character's occupation: Hunter
Does your character have an education? (Read or write) No
Any special skills that your character has, nothing unbalanced: He can hunt and track, and is a skilled survivor. His tracking skills make it so he notices the smallest detail. It is hard to hide something from him.
Does your character hate or fear anything? No
Describe an example of your character in great suffering and pain (RP, and Long): B= bandit M= Morgan
Morgan is tracking a herd of Xigs, hoping to get some meat. However, when he crosses a clearing, he fails to notice a tripwire, and falls into a hidden pit. He wakes up bound to a chair in a small room. A bandit faces him. B: "So, what do we have here? A little lost kid, that's what i see." The bandit laughs. M: "You wont see anything once i get free." B: "If i were you i wouldn't be making threats." Angered, the bandit swipes his knife down across Morgans face, spilling blood. Morgan ignores it and spits at the bandit. The bandit starts to leave the room. B: "We'll break you soon enough." When the door closes, Mark takes out a hidden knife and cuts through the ropes tying him up. He opens the door and looks around. He sees a large underground cavern. He sneaks to the entrance, and fights a bandit guarding it. He takes a slash to the gut but ignores it, leaving and running as fast as he can. When he stops, he feels dizzy and blacks out due to blood loss.
Anything else to add? Would you kindly?
Provide an image of your character's skin:http://www.minecraft...fo/swampstalker
You have a Doctor Who skin, don't try to pretend like you where just denied because I don't want you on the server.
Denied. That was an awful and predictable RP example. Why isn't this even mentioned in your RP example? It is like you create this hunter character, but he doesn't actually do any hunting. Also, you'd think that something like his parents dying would have more then just one sentence in your character's backround... It is something I've come to expect from you. I am removing you from the whitelist until you get accepted, because know matter how many times I've told you not to come until you've been accepted you keep doing it.
But it is! and fine I'll change the skin. But I want reasons this is wrong. Quinn told me you have no religion in your server, therefore an app like this should be perfect for it.
Is your religion based of a person that exisits in the real world?
No tears, just listen.
Minecraft account name: Iron_Shock
Country of residence and time zone: I currently reside in the United States, within the Mountain Time Zone.
Define role playing in your own words, do you have any past role playing experiences?: I have role-played on many other servers before, and have had four years of acting experience. More notable servers I have been on are Fallout: Old World Blues, Notably Republic, and Crafthamer.
What is your reason for applying to this server?: I need a good role-playing server to be on with an extensive community and rich lore. I took one look at the page for this one and was immediately hooked.
Have you been banned before, if so why?: Nope, and I plan to keep that number at zero.
Do you agree with our rules, how about the lore?: I agree with the rules and lore.
Will you use the server's official texture pack?: I agree to use the server’s texture pack.
Define Powergaming in your own words, example: Powergaming is the unfair usage of a character by permitting him or her powers or abilities beyond his or her normal limitations. For example, if a character was particularly stupid, it would be powergaming to permit him to suddenly understand what his opponent would do next by advanced deduction.
Define Metagaming in your own words, example: Metagaiming would be the usage of out-of-context information to benefit a particular character or bestow an unfair, non-rpg advantage. For example, If I learned IRL that a band of raiders would be stealing my stuff in game, I could not prevent them unless my character could have learned about their appearance some other way.
In Character
Character name: (Last names aren't required) Jack “The Operator”
Your character's story so far:
Jack has had a poor life so far. Being born to a poor family, Jack has had to struggle for his daily bread since day one. His older brothers where very competitive, and Jack was the smallest in his family, so he was often bullied. He quickly learned how to hide and run from danger, rather than face it. He slowly became more nimble-fingered, and could pick pockets fairly well even in his youth. However, he did get caught, and was forced to become quick in wit as well, able to attract and loose attention quickly by saying the right things. Time passed, and Jack soon became known around his small shantytown as “The Operator” because of his street smarts and knowledge of local places of interest. But just as things started to get better, Jack’s world fell apart.
After the military misfired a napalm bomb into Jack’s small town, everything he knew and loved was destroyed. His family, home, and much of his flesh was burned leaving Jack both a mentally and physically scarred man. He was left to die in the burning crater of what was once his home, and after he had recovered from his trauma, he was forced to eat the remains of the people in his town, as all other food was burned far beyond eating. It was at this time that Jack swore revenge on those in power, after believing that it was them that had reduced him to this state.
Jack ran from his home as soon as he could, and scavenged for some form of protection to cover his raw skin from the elements. After discovering an abandoned museum, and taking the WW2 Gas Mask Suit, he aspired to strike fear into other’s hearts, and spur outcry against the people who had done this to him.
Does or did your character have any companions or family?: No, they have all died.
How old is your character?: Nearing in at about 30, but his exact age is unknown.
Describe what your character looks like, any distinctive physical features?: Jack always wears his WW2 Gas Mask uniform, never taking it off, unless to eat. He is afraid of his past and previous life, and hides behind a full body suit, not letting a bit of skin show to anyone.
How does your character act?: Jack is crazy! He spouts off random bits and pieces of conversation while alone, and is almost impossible to reason with. He is, however, quite charismatic, and even though he is quite insane, his thoughts and theories are quite interesting, and he knows how to communicate to people quite effectively.
Character's occupation: Currently and Anarchist-For-Hire, performing assassinations, arsons, kidnappings, burglaries, and anti-governmental schemes for the highest bidder.
Does your character have an education? (Read or write): Yes, Jack is quite intelligent on most matters, and can read and write very well, often making references to literature and poetry one second, and spattering nonsense the next.
Any special skills that your character has, nothing unbalanced: Jack can move quietly and silently quite easily, and knows how to speak and manipulate people effectively and quickly.
Does your character hate or fear anything?: Jack is fearful of those in power, and hates those who exercise their “superiority” upon others. Though this can sometimes lead to good things, more often than not, Jack takes it too far and spoils what could have been a good oucome.
Describe an example of your character in great suffering and pain (RP, and Long):
Jack is awake.
Or is he asleep.
Jack can’t tell. All he knows is the pain, and the fire, and the smell.
Jack moves an arm. A searing flash rushes to his brain, causing him to relax again.
It is some time before he comes too. Jack would have opened his eyes, but his eyelids have been seared to the point where he could not open them if he tried. He tries to move his arm. This time he succeeds, and manages to touch his face. The skin has given way to flesh beneath, and his face does not feel like his. Another flash racks his body, and he falls into darkness again.
Suddenly, after what seems like the longest time, his lungs give way to breath. His mouth slowly opens, and his body forces itself to turn over. His eyes finally open.
Jack wanted to close them again. But he had to keep them open. He had to see what had happened. He had to see what the “law” had done. He looked to his right. There, if the bomb had not gone off, would be his parents. Their remains consisted of nothing but charred flesh and eyeless faces. They seemed to cry out in anguish to Jack. Jack reached out to touch them.
Jack fell asleep again.
When Jack awoke, he was hungry.
Anything else to add?: Ima touch u bum bum silly dingus. Oh and, Would you kindly?
Provide an image of your character's skin:
I think you need a skin.
Oh snap. I completely forgot to add that.
Thanks for pointing that out.
Welcome, bud. Hope to see you on.
Good luck, buddy.
Your character's story so far:
Born on the planet Nudoniton, Naked Man grew up as a normal child along side all of his naked friends. But one day things went horribly wrong, and not so super Naked Man fell into a radioactive pool, and became Super Naked Man! With the strength of 100 elephants and a nudity, on a scale from 1 to puppies, puppies... He was the greatest bare super hero to have ever lived and the people of Nudoniton were happy. But then, a horrible black hole ate the entire planet and everyone on it but fortunately, Naked Man escaped and flew all the way to Earth were he protected the citizens. And as long as he lives, no human shall be in danger for they are being watched over by NAKED MAN!!! THE GREATEST SUPER HERO EVER!
How old is your character?
1,000 Naked Years.
Describe what your character looks like, any distinctive physical features?
BALD and completely NAKED!
The most heroic gentle-naked-man ever!
Character's occupation: NUDITY, and saving his people.
Does your character have an education? He has a degree, in NUDITY!
Any special skills that your character has, nothing unbalanced: Faster than a rampaging sloth, tougher than a tree, and NAKED. SO NAKED!!!
Does your character hate or fear anything? Naked man fears nothing, but his weakness is under garments!
Describe an example of your character in great suffering and pain (RP, and Long): *Naked man punches the evil tailor through a window* "Smash!," yells Naked Man. "Hehehehe!, you will never defeat me Naked Man, for I am wearing, boxer shorts on top of tighty-whiteys!" Shouted the Tailor. "NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! AArrrghh, oof!," Naked Man screamed in agony, "My only weakness!" *Then Mr. Tailor guy throws the weakned Naked Man off of a steep cliff face. The End.
Anything else to add? NAKED NAKED NAKED NAKED NAKED NAKED NAKED NAKED!! SOOOOO NAKED!!
Provide an image of your character's skin
10/10 would accept.
100/10 Accepted