IGN: TremendousFox Age: 19 Ever been banned, if so why? No Experience with Minecraft? Been playing since early beta. Experience with Minecraft Servers? Played numerous SMP servers as well as being a lead builder on a server. What race would you like to be (And a backup race)? Elf Extra info, want to tell me anything about you? I play minecraft frequently and am just trying to find a server that I can enjoy and meet fun people. Are you willing to change you skin to match your race(Not Mandatory)? Yes
~@~
IGN:K0ng091 Age:13 Ever been banned, if so why?No Experience with Minecraft?Yes, played very frequently in fact! Not the best with redstone though. Experience with Minecraft Servers?Yes, I play on Prison, SG, DayZ, and RPG style servers. What race would you like to be (And a backup race)? 1st)Elves->2nd)Humans Extra info, want to tell me anything about you? I like diplomatic solutions, but if force is required, I will bring that also. Are you willing to change you skin to match your race(Not Mandatory)? Yes, no too excited, but I can.
The Meaning of Life, the Universe, and Everything.
Join Date:
11/29/2011
Posts:
42
Member Details
IGN: arnybarny5 Age: 15 Ever been banned, if so why? no Experience with Minecraft? i have played minecraft since early alpha Experience with Minecraft Servers? i've mostly played faction server ( at least 10) What race would you like to be (And a backup race)? most like to be an orc, but i would go for a dwarf. Extra info, want to tell me anything about you? my friend sup3rbad is going to be applying too, and i would like for us to be in the same faction if possible. Are you willing to change you skin to match your race(Not Mandatory)? i am willing, but my name suits my skin pretty well.
IGN: TremendousFox Age: 19 Ever been banned, if so why? No Experience with Minecraft? Been playing since early beta. Experience with Minecraft Servers? Played numerous SMP servers as well as being a lead builder on a server. What race would you like to be (And a backup race)? Elf Extra info, want to tell me anything about you? I play minecraft frequently and am just trying to find a server that I can enjoy and meet fun people. Are you willing to change you skin to match your race(Not Mandatory)? Yes
I decided to post one tiny sneak peak of my story. Gimme feedback on it.
Chapter 1: Betrayal
It was a beautiful evening. The stars shone bright, everyone was asleep, and the gentle breeze swept in, symbolizing the peace of the night air. A guard by the name of Peyn however, was very tired. He had spent 3 hours on his nighttime shift, and he was ready to go back to his house and sleep. He was about to turn back, when he heard a silent whiz and a thunk. He felt hot blood coursing down his body, and the searing pain of an arrow. It was poisoned, and he became disoriented, and he fell off the castle walls. Shortly after, the alarm sounded. Every guard ran to the front gate, to confront the mysterious assassin, when a loud battle cry came from behind them. Foxes, the dread of Blothera, were now raiding the peaceful village of Stredat. A Berserker emerged from behind the line of guards, and smashed his battleaxe right into one guard's head. He quickly pulled out the axe to parried an oncoming attack. He seemed surrounded, but a true Fox never raids alone. Two arrows appeared in one guard's chestplate, and three more appeared in another guard's back. A tunnel opened up from underneath the city's well, and another berserker appeared. The city was caught by surprise, and what was once the city's finest guards were now prey to the Fox.
The Crusader named Dex appeared, shooting a hidden archer with his bow. He quickly grabbed another arrow out of his quiver and shot an incoming berserker. The all the townspeople had awoken to the chaos by now, and were screaming, pushing past each other to escape. An ender pearl landed on the ground, in the middle of the village, and a thief appeared where it landed. He made sure the guards didn't see him, and he sneaked into a house and proceeded to rob it of all goods. The brave crusader cut down every Fox he saw, and soon came face to face with a dark figure. He was The Dark Fox, a nameless man, known for killing almost everyone who lived to see him. He was an elite assassin, and was known to suddenly disappear, only to be found cutting down warriors from behind. Dex looked straight into his eyes, and swung his sword, only to find it parried by a knife. The Dark Fox laughed, and threw his knife at Dex, searing his shoulder. He then pulled out his own sword, and swung quickly, each met by a parry. Their fighting was interrupted by guards running in between them. Dex climbed to a watchtower, and grabbed his bow. He scanned the city for the leader of the Foxes, but couldn't see him. A loud noise, very close to him, caught his attention. It was an arrow that missed his head by an inch. He looked down in time to see the Dark Fox shoot another arrow. This one managed to cut his arm, and he shot back awkwardly. The crusader still fought, shooting more arrows at his opponent, and managed to hit him in a weak spot in his leggings. The Dark Fox, immediately fell, and Dex went down to unmask the man of secrets.
Dex pulled off the Dark Fox's helmet, and recognized him at once. It was Harry, the duke of the city. Dex, gasped, but Harry only smiled. "I play a good act don't I?" he said. Dex replied, "Your crimes will be paid for, Fox."
"Will they be?"
"As long as I live, I will make sure that you never see the sun again."
"Interesting"
Harry then snatched the Crusader's knife out of it's sheath, and stabbed Dex in the stomach. Dex fell to the side, and heard, "As long as you live? You won't." before he blacked out.
I decided to post one tiny sneak peak of my story. Gimme feedback on it.
Chapter 1: Betrayal
It was a beautiful evening. The stars shone bright, everyone was asleep, and the gentle breeze swept in, symbolizing the peace of the night air. A guard by the name of Peyn however, was very tired. He had spent 3 hours on his nighttime shift, and he was ready to go back to his house and sleep. He was about to turn back, when he heard a silent whiz and a thunk. He felt hot blood coursing down his body, and the searing pain of an arrow. It was poisoned, and he became disoriented, and he fell off the castle walls. Shortly after, the alarm sounded. Every guard ran to the front gate, to confront the mysterious assassin, when a loud battle cry came from behind them. Foxes, the dread of Blothera, were now raiding the peaceful village of Stredat. A Berserker emerged from behind the line of guards, and smashed his battleaxe right into one guard's head. He quickly pulled out the axe to parried an oncoming attack. He seemed surrounded, but a true Fox never raids alone. Two arrows appeared in one guard's chestplate, and three more appeared in another guard's back. A tunnel opened up from underneath the city's well, and another berserker appeared. The city was caught by surprise, and what was once the city's finest guards were now prey to the Fox.
The Crusader named Dex appeared, shooting a hidden archer with his bow. He quickly grabbed another arrow out of his quiver and shot an incoming berserker. The all the townspeople had awoken to the chaos by now, and were screaming, pushing past each other to escape. An ender pearl landed on the ground, in the middle of the village, and a thief appeared where it landed. He made sure the guards didn't see him, and he sneaked into a house and proceeded to rob it of all goods. The brave crusader cut down every Fox he saw, and soon came face to face with a dark figure. He was The Dark Fox, a nameless man, known for killing almost everyone who lived to see him. He was an elite assassin, and was known to suddenly disappear, only to be found cutting down warriors from behind. Dex looked straight into his eyes, and swung his sword, only to find it parried by a knife. The Dark Fox laughed, and threw his knife at Dex, searing his shoulder. He then pulled out his own sword, and swung quickly, each met by a parry. Their fighting was interrupted by guards running in between them. Dex climbed to a watchtower, and grabbed his bow. He scanned the city for the leader of the Foxes, but couldn't see him. A loud noise, very close to him, caught his attention. It was an arrow that missed his head by an inch. He looked down in time to see the Dark Fox shoot another arrow. This one managed to cut his arm, and he shot back awkwardly. The crusader still fought, shooting more arrows at his opponent, and managed to hit him in a weak spot in his leggings. The Dark Fox, immediately fell, and Dex went down to unmask the man of secrets.
Dex pulled off the Dark Fox's helmet, and recognized him at once. It was Harry, the duke of the city. Dex, gasped, but Harry only smiled. "I play a good act don't I?" he said. Dex replied, "Your crimes will be paid for, Fox."
"Will they be?"
"As long as I live, I will make sure that you never see the sun again."
"Interesting"
Harry then snatched the Crusader's knife out of it's sheath, and stabbed Dex in the stomach. Dex fell to the side, and heard, "As long as you live? You won't." before he blacked out.
I decided to post one tiny sneak peak of my story. Gimme feedback on it.
Chapter 1: Betrayal
It was a beautiful evening. The stars shone bright, everyone was asleep, and the gentle breeze swept in, symbolizing the peace of the night air. A guard by the name of Peyn however, was very tired. He had spent 3 hours on his nighttime shift, and he was ready to go back to his house and sleep. He was about to turn back, when he heard a silent whiz and a thunk. He felt hot blood coursing down his body, and the searing pain of an arrow. It was poisoned, and he became disoriented, and he fell off the castle walls. Shortly after, the alarm sounded. Every guard ran to the front gate, to confront the mysterious assassin, when a loud battle cry came from behind them. Foxes, the dread of Blothera, were now raiding the peaceful village of Stredat. A Berserker emerged from behind the line of guards, and smashed his battleaxe right into one guard's head. He quickly pulled out the axe to parried an oncoming attack. He seemed surrounded, but a true Fox never raids alone. Two arrows appeared in one guard's chestplate, and three more appeared in another guard's back. A tunnel opened up from underneath the city's well, and another berserker appeared. The city was caught by surprise, and what was once the city's finest guards were now prey to the Fox.
The Crusader named Dex appeared, shooting a hidden archer with his bow. He quickly grabbed another arrow out of his quiver and shot an incoming berserker. The all the townspeople had awoken to the chaos by now, and were screaming, pushing past each other to escape. An ender pearl landed on the ground, in the middle of the village, and a thief appeared where it landed. He made sure the guards didn't see him, and he sneaked into a house and proceeded to rob it of all goods. The brave crusader cut down every Fox he saw, and soon came face to face with a dark figure. He was The Dark Fox, a nameless man, known for killing almost everyone who lived to see him. He was an elite assassin, and was known to suddenly disappear, only to be found cutting down warriors from behind. Dex looked straight into his eyes, and swung his sword, only to find it parried by a knife. The Dark Fox laughed, and threw his knife at Dex, searing his shoulder. He then pulled out his own sword, and swung quickly, each met by a parry. Their fighting was interrupted by guards running in between them. Dex climbed to a watchtower, and grabbed his bow. He scanned the city for the leader of the Foxes, but couldn't see him. A loud noise, very close to him, caught his attention. It was an arrow that missed his head by an inch. He looked down in time to see the Dark Fox shoot another arrow. This one managed to cut his arm, and he shot back awkwardly. The crusader still fought, shooting more arrows at his opponent, and managed to hit him in a weak spot in his leggings. The Dark Fox, immediately fell, and Dex went down to unmask the man of secrets.
Dex pulled off the Dark Fox's helmet, and recognized him at once. It was Harry, the duke of the city. Dex, gasped, but Harry only smiled. "I play a good act don't I?" he said. Dex replied, "Your crimes will be paid for, Fox."
"Will they be?"
"As long as I live, I will make sure that you never see the sun again."
"Interesting"
Harry then snatched the Crusader's knife out of it's sheath, and stabbed Dex in the stomach. Dex fell to the side, and heard, "As long as you live? You won't." before he blacked out.
Nice. Far superior to my own, I might say. There were a few grammatical conundrums, but overall it was pretty good
Fixed(?).
asdf.. best youtube videos..
You should put your age, banned status, experience instead of just ~@~
IGN: TremendousFox
Age: 19
Ever been banned, if so why? No
Experience with Minecraft? Been playing since early beta.
Experience with Minecraft Servers? Played numerous SMP servers as well as being a lead builder on a server.
What race would you like to be (And a backup race)? Elf
Extra info, want to tell me anything about you? I play minecraft frequently and am just trying to find a server that I can enjoy and meet fun people.
Are you willing to change you skin to match your race(Not Mandatory)? Yes
~@~
IGN:K0ng091
Age:13
Ever been banned, if so why?No
Experience with Minecraft?Yes, played very frequently in fact! Not the best with redstone though.
Experience with Minecraft Servers?Yes, I play on Prison, SG, DayZ, and RPG style servers.
What race would you like to be (And a backup race)? 1st)Elves->2nd)Humans
Extra info, want to tell me anything about you? I like diplomatic solutions, but if force is required, I will bring that also.
Are you willing to change you skin to match your race(Not Mandatory)? Yes, no too excited, but I can.
Age: 15
Ever been banned, if so why? no
Experience with Minecraft? i have played minecraft since early alpha
Experience with Minecraft Servers? i've mostly played faction server ( at least 10)
What race would you like to be (And a backup race)? most like to be an orc, but i would go for a dwarf.
Extra info, want to tell me anything about you? my friend sup3rbad is going to be applying too, and i would like for us to be in the same faction if possible.
Are you willing to change you skin to match your race(Not Mandatory)? i am willing, but my name suits my skin pretty well.
'Sup? Oh, hullo, Fox!
We're waiting for 2 admins so all staff will be online for the launch.
how long were you waiting for the server to launch?
Ceci n'est pas une signature
it might have to launch tomorrow
go to first post and look at the members of the race you wanted or the backup if your name was there then yes
It was a beautiful evening. The stars shone bright, everyone was asleep, and the gentle breeze swept in, symbolizing the peace of the night air. A guard by the name of Peyn however, was very tired. He had spent 3 hours on his nighttime shift, and he was ready to go back to his house and sleep. He was about to turn back, when he heard a silent whiz and a thunk. He felt hot blood coursing down his body, and the searing pain of an arrow. It was poisoned, and he became disoriented, and he fell off the castle walls. Shortly after, the alarm sounded. Every guard ran to the front gate, to confront the mysterious assassin, when a loud battle cry came from behind them. Foxes, the dread of Blothera, were now raiding the peaceful village of Stredat. A Berserker emerged from behind the line of guards, and smashed his battleaxe right into one guard's head. He quickly pulled out the axe to parried an oncoming attack. He seemed surrounded, but a true Fox never raids alone. Two arrows appeared in one guard's chestplate, and three more appeared in another guard's back. A tunnel opened up from underneath the city's well, and another berserker appeared. The city was caught by surprise, and what was once the city's finest guards were now prey to the Fox.
The Crusader named Dex appeared, shooting a hidden archer with his bow. He quickly grabbed another arrow out of his quiver and shot an incoming berserker. The all the townspeople had awoken to the chaos by now, and were screaming, pushing past each other to escape. An ender pearl landed on the ground, in the middle of the village, and a thief appeared where it landed. He made sure the guards didn't see him, and he sneaked into a house and proceeded to rob it of all goods. The brave crusader cut down every Fox he saw, and soon came face to face with a dark figure. He was The Dark Fox, a nameless man, known for killing almost everyone who lived to see him. He was an elite assassin, and was known to suddenly disappear, only to be found cutting down warriors from behind. Dex looked straight into his eyes, and swung his sword, only to find it parried by a knife. The Dark Fox laughed, and threw his knife at Dex, searing his shoulder. He then pulled out his own sword, and swung quickly, each met by a parry. Their fighting was interrupted by guards running in between them. Dex climbed to a watchtower, and grabbed his bow. He scanned the city for the leader of the Foxes, but couldn't see him. A loud noise, very close to him, caught his attention. It was an arrow that missed his head by an inch. He looked down in time to see the Dark Fox shoot another arrow. This one managed to cut his arm, and he shot back awkwardly. The crusader still fought, shooting more arrows at his opponent, and managed to hit him in a weak spot in his leggings. The Dark Fox, immediately fell, and Dex went down to unmask the man of secrets.
Dex pulled off the Dark Fox's helmet, and recognized him at once. It was Harry, the duke of the city. Dex, gasped, but Harry only smiled. "I play a good act don't I?" he said. Dex replied, "Your crimes will be paid for, Fox."
"Will they be?"
"As long as I live, I will make sure that you never see the sun again."
"Interesting"
Harry then snatched the Crusader's knife out of it's sheath, and stabbed Dex in the stomach. Dex fell to the side, and heard, "As long as you live? You won't." before he blacked out.
It's a bit long but good I guess
Nice. Far superior to my own, I might say. There were a few grammatical conundrums, but overall it was pretty good