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#1

Ninja_Crow
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Posted 19 October 2011 - 05:23 AM

The Hive

About:

The Hive is an Adventure map about a boy that wakes up in a basement only to find that a spiders have killed off the whole village. He now wants to avenge his friends and family and seeks out to destroy the hive.

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Notes

The full version of the map will be coming out on Saturday (Oct.22) and so I hope you all like it! Also this is my first adventure map I have ever done before so I plan on continuing to make different maps and as I get better I might revisit this map so that everything will just be a tad bit better :)


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http://www.mediafire...dj28d1ofc1cp8a2


What are you still reading this for? You should be playing it by now!
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Posted 19 October 2011 - 05:26 AM

Nice dude

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Posted 19 October 2011 - 05:28 AM

THIS IS SOOO GOOD!! so telling ym friends about thisss :D!!
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Posted 19 October 2011 - 05:31 AM

View PostCalebJamesTVGames, on 19 October 2011 - 05:28 AM, said:

THIS IS SOOO GOOD!! so telling ym friends about thisss :D!!

Thanks your the best :)

(Unless someone else is the best, then they probably are the best)
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Posted 19 October 2011 - 06:01 AM

I just started the map... noticed a big probem... no direcon on wherr to go!! U need to work on that :)
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Posted 19 October 2011 - 06:07 AM

Have barely started yet but in the instructions and from what I have seen in the 1st note, you have a lot of grammar and spelling errors. From what I have read in the comments though it looks good.

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Posted 19 October 2011 - 06:08 AM

View Postkingjohn11, on 19 October 2011 - 06:01 AM, said:

I just started the map... noticed a big probem... no direcon on wherr to go!! U need to work on that :)

thanks I will work on it right now (also at the beginning just go to the cobblestone fort on top of the hill)
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Posted 19 October 2011 - 06:10 AM

View PostXJ4, on 19 October 2011 - 06:07 AM, said:

Have barely started yet but in the instructions and from what I have seen in the 1st note, you have a lot of grammar and spelling errors. From what I have read in the comments though it looks good.

sorry about the grammar and spelling errors, I am really tired and currently sick :( so I wasn't exactly thinking about that while making the map, so I am editing the notes right now
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Posted 19 October 2011 - 06:22 AM

I just finished editing and revising the notes over so most of the spelling and grammar errors are cleared up.
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Posted 19 October 2011 - 06:25 AM

Just finished playing through this on SMP.  We never ended up going anywhere need bookshelves, so we never ended up reading the two information notes on the towns.  Aside from the couple of spelling and grammar errors, the last sign is mislabeled.  It's labeled as Note 11, but it's actually Note 12.

Also...
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There are two ReadMe text files btw, one in the main folder and one in Records.

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Posted 19 October 2011 - 06:33 AM

View Postobsidianpanther, on 19 October 2011 - 06:25 AM, said:

Just finished playing through this on SMP.  We never ended up going anywhere need bookshelves, so we never ended up reading the two information notes on the towns.  Aside from the couple of spelling and grammar errors, the last sign is mislabeled.  It's labeled as Note 11, but it's actually Note 12.

Also...
Spoiler:

There are two ReadMe text files btw, one in the main folder and one in Records.

ok thanks, i know the ending kinda sucks but i just needed a temporary ending, trust me when I say the ending will be a lot better for the finished product, this was was mostly to see if people liked my idea and if I should continue making this map.
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Posted 19 October 2011 - 09:19 AM

No prob :)  A better ending would be awesome.  One other thing I forgot to mention, it was ridiculously hard to see inside the hives, I don't know if it was the size or the fact they're made of obsidian, but the only way I could find my way was to switch to a see-through texture pack so I could use the sun to see where I was going.  I know you said to pick up torches, but no amount of torches would help that.  Maybe some of it should be made from glowstone??

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Posted 19 October 2011 - 01:15 PM

Light up the hives

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Posted 19 October 2011 - 09:01 PM

View Postobsidianpanther, on 19 October 2011 - 09:19 AM, said:

No prob :)  A better ending would be awesome.  One other thing I forgot to mention, it was ridiculously hard to see inside the hives, I don't know if it was the size or the fact they're made of obsidian, but the only way I could find my way was to switch to a see-through texture pack so I could use the sun to see where I was going.  I know you said to pick up torches, but no amount of torches would help that.  Maybe some of it should be made from glowstone??

ok I will stick some glowstone into the hives so there is more light. But it still will be somewhat dark because bee hives are pitch black in real life so i still want to keep that element.
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Posted 19 October 2011 - 09:15 PM

The Hives are now lit up a little bit more, also keep the help coming, this map needs to be beast when it is fully released :)
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Posted 19 October 2011 - 09:54 PM

Alright so whn ever you can... pua link for the updated version of the map :) Thx!
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Posted 19 October 2011 - 09:58 PM

View Postkingjohn11, on 19 October 2011 - 09:54 PM, said:

Alright so whn ever you can... pua link for the updated version of the map :) Thx!

I suspect the official release for the map will be around the 22nd
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Posted 19 October 2011 - 10:02 PM

View PostNinja_Crow, on 19 October 2011 - 09:58 PM, said:

I suspect the official release for the map will be around the 22nd

Alright... but can u y sooner? And you need to put more derection! I got to note 3.. then got to note 5... where was note 4?!?!? Plz.. u rly rly need to work on the direction thingy. :)
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Posted 19 October 2011 - 10:07 PM

View Postkingjohn11, on 19 October 2011 - 10:02 PM, said:

Alright... but can u y sooner? And you need to put more derection! I got to note 3.. then got to note 5... where was note 4?!?!? Plz.. u rly rly need to work on the direction thingy. :)

ok ok, i have updated the notes so that they are better and tell you what you clearly have to do. I would release it sooner but I have a math test I need to study for. On friday I am going over my friends house who also plays minecraft so he can help me with the map. Anyways I will try to get it out as soon as I can  :)
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Posted 19 October 2011 - 11:15 PM

View PostNinja_Crow, on 19 October 2011 - 10:07 PM, said:

ok ok, i have updated the notes so that they are better and tell you what you clearly have to do. I would release it sooner but I have a math test I need to study for. On friday I am going over my friends house who also plays minecraft so he can help me with the map. Anyways I will try to get it out as soon as I can  :)
ahem... my house

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