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#1

  • Minecraft: Matmaevo

Posted 08 September 2011 - 08:09 PM

Memoirs of the Endermen

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Welcome to Memoirs of the Endermen, my first short story. Please take a read, it is my first remember so don't expect anything amazing. Thanks Posted Image
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Prelude

When I look around this world, I begin to feel as if I am the oldest thing alive here. I have lived for centuries, and when I see these young, happy animals - who turn away when I approach them - I feel alone. The truth is, contrary to the popular belief, I haven't always looked this way. I haven't always been this dark, angry beast. Once, many years ago, I was in fact, a human being. I had a wonderful life, with an impressive house and astounding sculptures. But, I mistakenly left everything like that behind, along with my happiness.

This is my story, the story of how the I became an Enderman, and how the our fear of us is totally irrational. So please, settle down while I recite my tale. I have a feeling you are going to enjoy it.


CHAPTER 1
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CHAPTER 2
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CHAPTER 3
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CHAPTER 4
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CHAPTER 5
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CHAPTER 6
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CHAPTER 7
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CHAPTER 8
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CHAPTER 9
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CHAPTER 10
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CHAPTER 11 - NEW
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Check out this guy's story, STEVE?. Click here!

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Thanks for reading my first fan fiction, please leave a short comment below, I appreciate it greatly!
Thanks
TehMachuu

(Oh, and if you spot any grammar/spelling mistakes, be sure to leave it in the comment section!)

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#2

  • Minecraft: Matmaevo

Posted 08 September 2011 - 08:09 PM

Prelude & Chapter 1 are out!

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#3

Posted 08 September 2011 - 08:16 PM

MAKE MOAR! I BEG OF U!!!!

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#4

  • Minecraft: Matmaevo

Posted 08 September 2011 - 08:17 PM

View Postwannabelennon254, on 08 September 2011 - 08:16 PM, said:

MAKE MOAR! I BEG OF U!!!!

:D

Thanks for the positive feedback. I do plan to finish it, I just need a lot of motivation to write this much :)

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#5

  • Minecraft: Sneak4000

Posted 08 September 2011 - 08:21 PM

I'm excited to read the part where, you know, he turns into an Enderman...
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    artel

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Posted 08 September 2011 - 08:22 PM

sooo... you wrote a story about your personal experience with minecraft?
jkjkjkjkjkjkjk pretty good
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    sixpix

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Posted 08 September 2011 - 08:23 PM

I like it, please do more :)

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#8

  • Minecraft: Matmaevo

Posted 08 September 2011 - 08:37 PM

View PostSneak.QQ, on 08 September 2011 - 08:21 PM, said:

I'm excited to read the part where, you know, he turns into an Enderman...

Haha! Don't worry, he doesn't stay human for too long. The point of the story is that he was once a human, so I'm detailing his life before he turned into an Enderman.


View Postartel, on 08 September 2011 - 08:22 PM, said:

sooo... you wrote a story about your personal experience with minecraft?jkjkjkjkjkjkjk pretty good

Nope, this is just a fan fiction. This story is about an Enderman's life.


View Postsixpix, on 08 September 2011 - 08:23 PM, said:

I like it, please do more :)

Thanks. I will try as soon as possible, but I do have a few personal things I need to do which are fairly important :)

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    artel

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Posted 09 September 2011 - 02:18 AM

View PostTehMachuu, on 08 September 2011 - 08:37 PM, said:

Haha! Don't worry, he doesn't stay human for too long. The point of the story is that he was once a human, so I'm detailing his life before he turned into an Enderman.




Nope, this is just a fan fiction. This story is about an Enderman's life.




Thanks. I will try as soon as possible, but I do have a few personal things I need to do which are fairly important :)
nice job doing the 3 replys in one post XD didnt know you could do that
and i was just joking lol i wanna read the next chapter
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#10

  • Minecraft: Matmaevo

Posted 09 September 2011 - 03:03 PM

View Postartel, on 09 September 2011 - 02:18 AM, said:

nice job doing the 3 replys in one post XD didnt know you could do that
and i was just joking lol i wanna read the next chapter

XD I know, it was the first time I had ever multiquoted, and as for the next chapter, expect its release soon :)

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#11

  • Minecraft: Matmaevo

Posted 09 September 2011 - 08:05 PM

Chapter 2 is out!

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#12

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  • Minecraft: hackmaster521

Posted 10 September 2011 - 01:57 AM

this... is... AWESOME

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  • Minecraft: pikachu777

Posted 10 September 2011 - 02:13 AM

Wow, great writing!

I hope you find the time to make some more, as it was fantastic!
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#14

  • Minecraft: Matmaevo

Posted 10 September 2011 - 09:23 AM

Thanks for all of your positive feedback! I will probably be able to post a chapter today, but I doubt I will have time tomorrow. It will be a busy day :)

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#15

  • Minecraft: Matmaevo

Posted 10 September 2011 - 09:03 PM

Chapter 3 is out!

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Posted 10 September 2011 - 10:49 PM

:D I love chapter 3!

You're an awesome writer!
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#17

  • Minecraft: technoguy33

Posted 11 September 2011 - 01:23 AM

That is wonderful writing. I think you can gather a large fan-base with these pieces. Keep it up!
--technoguy33

#18

  • Minecraft: Matmaevo

Posted 11 September 2011 - 10:34 AM

View Postpikachu777, on 10 September 2011 - 10:49 PM, said:

:D I love chapter 3!You're an awesome writer!

Thanks man, it's nice to know I have some sort of fan :)

View Posttechnoguy33, on 11 September 2011 - 01:23 AM, said:

That is wonderful writing. I think you can gather a large fan-base with these pieces. Keep it up!

Thanks, when I began writing I thought I was quite amateur. I doubt I'll get a large fan-base though :)

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  • Minecraft: darkozzyman

Posted 11 September 2011 - 12:45 PM

Dang... that was like reading a good book: I couldnt take my eyes away!
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#20

  • Minecraft: Matmaevo

Posted 11 September 2011 - 12:53 PM

View Postdarkozzyman, on 11 September 2011 - 12:45 PM, said:

Dang... that was like reading a good book: I couldnt take my eyes away!

Thanks a lot man, appreciate it :)

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