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Quote from mattme11

Hi guys im quiting the server for good i joined this server over 15 months ago and ive had alot of fun over but the server is more boring for me now, all my old friends have left and only little bit of them still play. im going to give my small top flor to firstrepublic and my big one is going to go to N/A. i miss you guys but have fun without me

Good bye mattme. You have been a really good friend to me and you will be greatly missed. Stop bye every once in a while please? See ya and good luck.

IGN:Thaylin
Current rank on the server D
Reason you were banned:Autofish
Warden/Alpha that issued your ban:(N/A if you don't know)Idk
Approximate time of ban: (Include time zone)9:43 April 18th 2013
Why you deserve to be unbanned:Because im a friendly helpful player who will not break the rules ever again.
Any additional information:Just hope you guys understand that i wasnt trying to ruin the server for others and that i wont use nodus again.I have deleted it from my computer.

1) Username:origamime
2) Your age:10
3) How long have you been playing the server?12 days by now.
4) Have you read the Server, Prison, and Guard Rules?yeah
5) Any experience with the prison genre?yup
6) What is your time zone?Mountain time.
7) Why are you the best choice for guard?I think i am the best choice for gaurd because know that the gaurds on the comments are getting harsh so this will be MORE than 3 paragraphs,mabye even 5.so first,how i do at school.i am strait A's and im VERY popular(noakii) i am also very athletic at soccer,football,kickball,Tetherball. i can also type very,very fast.



now i also am very nice to gaurds,random people and other random people.so also expect me to be very trusfull.Oh yeah and im very nice,and gaurds (and all the other ranks)and there epic :3.Now people on this server like cape_panda and blocks_of_wisdom are very nice to me.So even if people hate me,i dont care at all.so even if you dont like me,you can atleast like the app(most gaurds hate my app though D:<)


so i hope you like these sentences.oh and i will use teamwork
8) Do you understand that nagging Wardens in-game to read your app will result in immediate decline?yes
9) What is your current prison rank? Do you understand that we will require a screenshot of this when/if you retire from guard?c and i have one.

Quote from origamime

1) Username:origamime
2) Your age:10
3) How long have you been playing the server?12 days by now.
4) Have you read the Server, Prison, and Guard Rules?yeah
5) Any experience with the prison genre?yup
6) What is your time zone?Mountain time.
7) Why are you the best choice for guard?I think i am the best choice for gaurd because know that the gaurds on the comments are getting harsh so this will be MORE than 3 paragraphs,mabye even 5.so first,how i do at school.i am strait A's and im VERY popular(noakii) i am also very athletic at soccer,football,kickball,Tetherball. i can also type very,very fast.



now i also am very nice to gaurds,random people and other random people.so also expect me to be very trusfull.Oh yeah and im very nice,and gaurds (and all the other ranks)and there epic :3.Now people on this server like cape_panda and blocks_of_wisdom are very nice to me.So even if people hate me,i dont care at all.so even if you dont like me,you can atleast like the app(most gaurds hate my app though D:<)


so i hope you like these sentences.oh and i will use teamwork
8) Do you understand that nagging Wardens in-game to read your app will result in immediate decline?yes
9) What is your current prison rank? Do you understand that we will require a screenshot of this when/if you retire from guard?c and i have one.

We dislike your app because your grammar is horrible. Also telling us you're popular in school is great and all but not really revelant to minecraft.

Nega your app is very well written but still needs more content Try to make it at least three long-ish paragraphs. Good luck.

And origamime, I will tell you this time and this is the last: Fix. Your. Grammar. And. Spelling. Run it through a parent or an older sibling so that they can proofread it or something, just don't post a guard app that has "there" instead of "they're" and "i" instead of "I". Try not to use emoticons in your app, it will look less professional. And stop reposting. Only repost every 3 days or 10 pages.

Quote from alexisiop

Nega your app is very well written but still needs more content Try to make it at least three long-ish paragraphs. Good luck.

And origamime, I will tell you this time and this is the last: Fix. Your. Grammar. And. Spelling. Run it through a parent or an older sibling so that they can proofread it or something, just don't post a guard app that has "there" instead of "they're" and "i" instead of "I". Try not to use emoticons in your app, it will look less professional. And stop reposting. Only repost every 3 days or 10 pages.

Do you know someone who can review my ban appel?

Quote from Yoshi

At least you were honest. Good luck on your unban appeal

thanks brah

Quote from WaffleLoverzx

Alexisiop, can I just say I think your like... the best guard? o-o
Okay, maybe you and BenjaminSaunders are tied for the best

Why does everyone love you alex??

1) Username: BETA_NetWork

2) Your age:12

3) How long have you been playing the server? (Minimum of 3 days)4-5 days

4) Have you read the Server, Prison, and Guard Rules? Yes

5) Any experience with the prison genre? Many times

6) What is your time zone? Pacific standard (California)

7) Why are you the best choice for guard? (1-2 paragraphs) Im not the BEST chioce but i think i would do a decent job if gotten the chance. I really just play on this server to have fun and to ejnoy the servers run. ALso im on 3-4 hours perdy monday-friday. Also i dont have any reason or thoughts about messing witht the server and breaking the rules.

8) Do you understand that nagging Wardens in-game to read your app will result in immediate decline? Yes i undertsand

9) What is your current prison rank? Do you understand that we will require a screenshot of this when/if you retire from guard? I do understand that as well
P.S: I Have also been a warden (which on that server is like a admin) for 1 month until the hackers got to it and the owner had to shut it down ;(

Something that's been on my mind for a while now that I need to let out: I'm sorry about how much I haven't been on the server these past few weeks.

Quote from mattme11

Hi guys im quiting the server for good i joined this server over 15 months ago and ive had alot of fun over but the server is more boring for me now, all my old friends have left and only little bit of them still play. im going to give my small top flor to firstrepublic and my big one is going to go to N/A. i miss you guys but have fun without me

Bye matt. It was fun playing with you, though I haven't seen you for like half a year
Maybe you'll come back like me? I hope you made the right decision

Quote from WaffleLoverzx

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WaffleLoverz NEW & IMPROVED Guard Application!
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So here is an app you probably have not seen before!
10, 9, 8, 7, 6, 5, 4, 3, 2, 1... HIT IT!

Guard Application

Tune: Viva La Vida

I used to be a C block prisoner

No one would listen if I said a word

Now I am an A block prisoner

People run when they see me coming

I used to be 13 years old

Now I am 14 years old

I have played for a while

2-3 weeks to be exact.

One minute it was 10:00

But now its 12:00

Because my time zone is GMT - 5:00

Central Daylight Zone

I hear Jumbo singing

Your app is terrible

I hear Noakii's guards running

to catch that bad, bad criminal.

And for some reason I can't explain

I want to rank up to Free

Never an honest word

in some peoples ban apps.

It was the wicked and wild Jumbo

Who gave me good advice

On how to reply

Make a better app he said, that was when I was a noob

Pvper's wait for me to come out

I go and kill, cause i'm a good pvper.

I love to help people

And save them from certain evil's.

I hear Jumbo singing

Your app is terrible

I hear Noakii's guards running

To catch that bad, bad criminal.

And for some reason I can't explain

I have played on other prison servers

And read the rules

about a hundred times

I hear Jumbo singing

Your app is terrible

I hear Noakii's guards running

To catch that bad, bad criminal

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Thank you so much for reading!

Recommendations highly appreciated!

Constructive Criticism as well

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WaffleLoverz Alternate Guard Application

1) Your Age: I am fourteen (14) years of age.

2) How Long Have You Been Playing The Server: I play at least 2-3 hours every day, for about 2-3 weeks I have played like this.

3) Have You Read The Prison, Server, and Guard Rules: Yes I have read all the rules at least 100 times... I read them when I am bored. (o-o)

4) Do You Have Any Experience With the Prison Genre?: I have played on other prison servers, but none as good as Convicted!

5) What Is Your Time Zone?: My time zone is GMT - 5:00, Central Daylight Time.

6) Why Are You the Best Choice For Guard?: Hi! As you may or may not know my IGN is WaffleLoverz! I know you guards and wardens see alot of apps in one day. I completely understand. I hope my app has caught your eye though! I have a lot of reasons why I should be a guard. Let's get started, shall we?

I am a honest player, I play with no hacks/mods (excluding Optifine). I play the game "clean". I like helping out on servers, I have a little bit of experience as well. I was an admin on a recently shut-down server, and I am currently a helper foe another server. I think I have pretty good PvP skills as well! I don't just want to be one of those players who you vaguely recall. I want to be remembered on this server. Another reason: I would not abuse my privileges. Abusing privileges is not worth it, because you could loose them like that. *snaps* I would not show favouritism. Showing favouritism is just showing how easily swayed you are. I follow all rules. I am not a rule-breaker, nor have I ever been. I like helping people out, even with small things. I am kind to people, well, when I get angry enough i'm not. Sorry! We all lose our tempers at one point. Other than that, I am very kind, I like cooperating with others, and I love making friends on here! I stick up for myself and others, and I am as stubborn as a donkey. Nothing a prisoner would say would change my mind. I am also a very decent typist. I can type very fast, useful for the 5, 4, 3, 2, 1 countdown right? Those are all my reasons, and I hope they were good ones!

7) Do You Realize Nagging Wardens In Game Will Result In An Immediate Decline? I fully understand, being admin once reminds me of this question. I will, not say a word about it to the wardens, as I realize they are terribly busy at times.

8) What Is Your Current Prison Rank? Do You Realize You Will Need a Screenshot As Proof When/If You Retire From Guard?: I fully understand! I already have a ton of accidental screenshots. As for my prison rank, I am an A-block prisoner.

YOU FOR READING!

Please recommend this if you thought it was good!

-WaffleLoverz

Click dat' spoiler!

Oh and btw you are still a noob.
Try to post not just a fail poem that makes it LOOK like its longer.
My suggestion is to expand on acctual reasons, not just bibber blabber mumbo jumbo stuff that repeats the same things.
Use this new knowledge to your advantage,
---Tom the Guard

IGN: barryballbag
Current rank on the server: B
Reason you were banned: X-ray
Warden/Alpha that issued your ban: (N/A if you don't know) N/A
Approximate time of ban: (Include time zone) 2:50 PM
Why you deserve to be unbanned: Because i have learned what xraying has done to me, it takes all the fun out of the game and me xraying will make a bad evouroment to our fellow minecrafters and prisoners. I shall never xray or hack again if you would in any way accept this ban apeal.
Any additional information: it was part of the mine to get the diamond looting 3 pick on 19/04/2013

Quote from WaffleLoverzx

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WaffleLoverz NEW & IMPROVED Guard Application!
----------------------------------------------------
So here is an app you probably have not seen before!
10, 9, 8, 7, 6, 5, 4, 3, 2, 1... HIT IT!

Guard Application

Tune: Viva La Vida

I used to be a C block prisoner

No one would listen if I said a word

Now I am an A block prisoner

People run when they see me coming

I used to be 13 years old

Now I am 14 years old

I have played for a while

2-3 weeks to be exact.

One minute it was 10:00

But now its 12:00

Because my time zone is GMT - 5:00

Central Daylight Zone

I hear Jumbo singing

Your app is terrible

I hear Noakii's guards running

to catch that bad, bad criminal.

And for some reason I can't explain

I want to rank up to Free

Never an honest word

in some peoples ban apps.

It was the wicked and wild Jumbo

Who gave me good advice

On how to reply

Make a better app he said, that was when I was a noob

Pvper's wait for me to come out

I go and kill, cause i'm a good pvper.

I love to help people

And save them from certain evil's.

I hear Jumbo singing

Your app is terrible

I hear Noakii's guards running

To catch that bad, bad criminal.

And for some reason I can't explain

I have played on other prison servers

And read the rules

about a hundred times

I hear Jumbo singing

Your app is terrible

I hear Noakii's guards running

To catch that bad, bad criminal

--------------------------------------------------

Thank you so much for reading!

Recommendations highly appreciated!

Constructive Criticism as well

---------------------------------------------------

WaffleLoverz Alternate Guard Application

1) Your Age: I am fourteen (14) years of age.

2) How Long Have You Been Playing The Server: I play at least 2-3 hours every day, for about 2-3 weeks I have played like this.

3) Have You Read The Prison, Server, and Guard Rules: Yes I have read all the rules at least 100 times... I read them when I am bored. (o-o)

4) Do You Have Any Experience With the Prison Genre?: I have played on other prison servers, but none as good as Convicted!

5) What Is Your Time Zone?: My time zone is GMT - 5:00, Central Daylight Time.

6) Why Are You the Best Choice For Guard?: Hi! As you may or may not know my IGN is WaffleLoverz! I know you guards and wardens see alot of apps in one day. I completely understand. I hope my app has caught your eye though! I have a lot of reasons why I should be a guard. Let's get started, shall we?

I am a honest player, I play with no hacks/mods (excluding Optifine). I play the game "clean". I like helping out on servers, I have a little bit of experience as well. I was an admin on a recently shut-down server, and I am currently a helper foe another server. I think I have pretty good PvP skills as well! I don't just want to be one of those players who you vaguely recall. I want to be remembered on this server. Another reason: I would not abuse my privileges. Abusing privileges is not worth it, because you could loose them like that. *snaps* I would not show favouritism. Showing favouritism is just showing how easily swayed you are. I follow all rules. I am not a rule-breaker, nor have I ever been. I like helping people out, even with small things. I am kind to people, well, when I get angry enough i'm not. Sorry! We all lose our tempers at one point. Other than that, I am very kind, I like cooperating with others, and I love making friends on here! I stick up for myself and others, and I am as stubborn as a donkey. Nothing a prisoner would say would change my mind. I am also a very decent typist. I can type very fast, useful for the 5, 4, 3, 2, 1 countdown right? Those are all my reasons, and I hope they were good ones!

7) Do You Realize Nagging Wardens In Game Will Result In An Immediate Decline? I fully understand, being admin once reminds me of this question. I will, not say a word about it to the wardens, as I realize they are terribly busy at times.

8) What Is Your Current Prison Rank? Do You Realize You Will Need a Screenshot As Proof When/If You Retire From Guard?: I fully understand! I already have a ton of accidental screenshots. As for my prison rank, I am an A-block prisoner.

YOU FOR READING!

Please recommend this if you thought it was good!

-WaffleLoverz

Click dat' spoiler!

this gave me a good laugh.
Now that is the most creative app i've seen.

Username:
2) Your age: 19
3) How long have you been playing the server? (Minimum of 3 days) I have been on for a good 4 months now
4) Have you read the Server, Prison, and Guard Rules? Yes And I Will Obey Every Single rule Listed
5) Any experience with the prison genre?
6) What is your time zone? Canada
7) Why are you the best choice for guard? (1-2 paragraphs)Because All Ove the Free Ranks Are Killing Guards With There Fire aspec swords and i want to put an end to that.
8) Do you understand that nagging Wardens in-game to read your app will result in immediate decline? Yes I Will Be Paitent And Wait Until This Has Been Looked Over
9) What is your current prison rank? Do you understand that we will require a screenshot of this when/if you retire from guard? I Am Rank C

My UserName Is Louispotter5