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#1

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Posted 07 June 2011 - 10:42 PM

download link v 0.1

first stage
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Okay everybody! I'm sorry anout this map being an epic fail but to tell you the truth my 6-year old brother freaking made this! Personally I think this is a perfectly good map for a six year old, and by the way, I'm working on an absolutely GINORMOUSmap right now. if anyone could help it would be very much appreciated. BTW I'm twelve.

temple of moss
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later there will be a gallell mod that adds the gallell item

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Posted 22 July 2011 - 04:41 AM

This map is part of my "100th map rating" event.  Instead of rating a 100th map, I decided to try an experiment, "Map Rescue

Project".  I went to the forum and found 4 maps with ZERO replies and few views and thought I would play them and leave feedback.  

The feedback is not intended to criticize, but to help you fix your map or create more maps in the future.
I appreciate the time and

effort you put into this map.

Map: Quest for Gallell
Version: .1
By: gistop
URL: http://www.minecraft...t/topic/367620-
Type: [Adv]
Minecraft Ver: 1.7.3
Mode: Single player
Difficulty: Easy
Texture Pack: default
Mods: none

My Total Playtime: 5 minutes
My Final Score: n/a

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Map Total Rating (out of 20): 5


Follow this link ( http://www.minecraft...t/topic/260249- ) to see how your map compares to over 85 other maps that I've rated!  
Follow this link ( http://www.minecraft...t/topic/471572- ) for a checklist on testing for common issues in custom adventure

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Individual Ratings
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Creativity: 1
Detail: 1
Story: 1
Difficulty: 1
Progression: 1

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Playthrough Notes
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No rules or notes?
No gear, armor, food.
Random glass block in the ceiling of the first hallway.
Lava is setting the fence on fire.
Tiny jumping puzzle.
"tmeple" misspelling on sign
Decent jumping puzzle.
Boat puzzle is pretty useless.  Much faster to just swim.
And... the map just ENDS.

This is obviously not a completed map.


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Rating Definitions
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ALL RATINGS ARE SUBJECTIVE!

Creativity: Unique theme.  Utilizes Minecraft functions.  Use of rules. Clever creations
1 = below average
2 = average
3 = above average
4 = astounding!

Detail: Visual decor/detail. Consistency. Realism and/or appropriate to theme.
1 = below average
2 = average
3 = above average
4 = astounding!

Story: Overall effort and duration.  Engaging. Consistent. Character motivation.  Dialogue/Narration.
1 = below average
2 = average
3 = above average
4 = astounding!

Difficulty: Puzzles.  Mob/risk density and variety.  Lighting.  Hidden items/challenges.
0 = Impossibly hard, may not be able to see the whole adventure
1 = Too easy
2 = Difficult, can not blindly run through on Easy/Normal
3 = Challenging, on peaceful
4 = Challenging, on easy/normal but not impossible

Progression: Pacing of scenes. Pacing of score, gear, loot. Experience builds or arcs.
1 = below average; uneven or no progression
2 = average
3 = above average
4 = astounding!

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Posted 13 January 2012 - 04:11 AM

WE LOVE YOUR MAP!


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Posted 16 January 2012 - 05:35 PM

View PostNailhead, on 13 January 2012 - 04:11 AM, said:

WE LOVE YOUR MAP!


hahaha that's the funniest video I've ever seen!

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Posted 16 January 2012 - 07:26 PM

So yah. This map pretty much sucks. Good job.

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Posted 16 January 2012 - 07:29 PM

This map is short. Of Gallell.

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Posted 16 January 2012 - 07:43 PM

View Postkanokarob, on 16 January 2012 - 07:26 PM, said:

So yah. This map pretty much sucks. Good job.

Bit illiterate, aren't you? Version 0.1, Also known as a demo. An idea.

Why is everyone treating this as a finished project?

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Posted 16 January 2012 - 07:50 PM

View PostDarkfeather, on 16 January 2012 - 07:43 PM, said:

Bit illiterate, aren't you? Version 0.1, Also known as a demo. An idea.

Why is everyone treating this as a finished project?
Because most forumers apparently have the attention span of a squirrel and cannot read so much as an opening sentence before skipping to the bottom of a thread
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Posted 16 January 2012 - 08:39 PM

View PostpaperCuT, on 16 January 2012 - 07:50 PM, said:

Because most forumers apparently have the attention span of a squirrel and cannot read so much as an opening sentence before skipping to the bottom of a thread
It's funny because the squirrel is dead.
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Posted 16 January 2012 - 09:34 PM

Ahhhhhh the item of gallell!

The review said it took 5 minutes to complete while the shaft took about 13, guess they wanted to rub it in the guys face.... still after watching such a funny vid I may play the map....
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Posted 16 January 2012 - 09:44 PM

View PostDarkfeather, on 16 January 2012 - 07:43 PM, said:

Bit illiterate, aren't you? Version 0.1, Also known as a demo. An idea.

Why is everyone treating this as a finished project?
A: rsmalec said it was bad
B: I'm not illiterate, I used few words to describe a thread and map with few words.
C: I'm a Mining god, you are a newbie. I suggest not pissing me off.
D: What he DOES have done, is bad. He should have rules, more items, and, in fact, before releasing it even as a v0.1, should have but "more beef" so to speak, on it. Or even not released it till done.

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Posted 16 January 2012 - 10:24 PM

View Postkanokarob, on 16 January 2012 - 09:44 PM, said:

A: rsmalec said it was bad
B: I'm not illiterate, I used few words to describe a thread and map with few words.
C: I'm a Mining god, you are a newbie. I suggest not pissing me off.
D: What he DOES have done, is bad. He should have rules, more items, and, in fact, before releasing it even as a v0.1, should have but "more beef" so to speak, on it. Or even not released it till done.

A: Great. Rsmalec also acknowledged that it was a map in testing, barely started.
B: So you managed to talk, but you have a bit of trouble with that whole reading thing
C: Congrats. Gonna blast me with lightning?
D: I'd say that the Temple of Moss is actually fairly decent, for a v0.1 obstacle. Perhaps he wanted to showcase the basic idea, before finishing the map.

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Posted 16 January 2012 - 10:25 PM

It's the comment of gallell
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#14

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Posted 16 January 2012 - 10:29 PM

View PostManofox, on 16 January 2012 - 10:25 PM, said:

It's the comment of gallell

It's the quote of Gallell

#15

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Posted 16 January 2012 - 11:31 PM

View Postkanokarob, on 16 January 2012 - 07:26 PM, said:

So yah. This map pretty much sucks. Good job.
it the douche of gallel

#16

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Posted 17 January 2012 - 02:13 AM

View Postkanokarob, on 16 January 2012 - 09:44 PM, said:

C: I'm a Mining god, you are a newbie. I suggest not pissing me off.

So you spend all your time on a forum dedicated to a video game. Good job. That doesn't mean you're better than anyone else, and by that comment you show you're a heck of a lot more nearsighted. Don't go thinking you matter more to the world because you spend more time obsessing over a video game than others.

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Posted 17 January 2012 - 06:56 AM

View Posttootinyman, on 17 January 2012 - 02:13 AM, said:

So you spend all your time on a forum dedicated to a video game. Good job. That doesn't mean you're better than anyone else, and by that comment you show you're a heck of a lot more nearsighted. Don't go thinking you matter more to the world because you spend more time obsessing over a video game than others.
You speak the truth of Gallell!

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Posted 17 January 2012 - 01:53 PM

Seriously. Finish the map. do it for GALLELL!
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Posted 17 January 2012 - 03:56 PM

Because of The Shaft, this map has instant popularity

... of Gallell.
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Posted 17 January 2012 - 09:44 PM

View PostBlagob, on 16 January 2012 - 08:39 PM, said:

It's funny because the squirrel is dead.
the squirrel of Gallell which stole the princess Gallell away from the treetops? doth thou speak the truth of Gallell?

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