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#1

Popette
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Posted 07 January 2013 - 03:36 AM

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941, Elysium, The young shimmering capital of the lands, and home of technology. Far from the lands of dwarves, elves, and other magical races. It was built in 937, five years ago. It was created under the agreement to further technology. The founders designated three council members to oversee the prosperity of the city.
But now, we are in a peaceful time, without guns or cannons. Instead, we have locomotives and dirigibles.
Powered by a dwarven creation that gathers mana...it acts commonly as a fuel for such high-tech. But it came at a cost! Mages who relied on mana were weakened, and after a while, they've become rare.

Despite the burst of technology, it is fairly rare to see outside of the city. The land is still stuck in the 'dark' ages, which makes the floating city a popular place to move to. There has been also an increase of beasts and monsters, lately, causing many towns to flee to the 'safe haven'. While other retreat from the mobs, other go to the city in search of knowledge.

The Mages' guild, once full of wizards, is now about trying to restore magic to the people, while keeping Technology. There are few actual mages in the guild, as most mages by now have either lost their power or stay at home. It is also known for researching new technology and just scholars in general. They are highly respected.


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Common sense, people! Rules are subject to change.

1) No Meta gaming & Power gaming.
Meta gaming is the act of using info gotten out of character, in character. Power gaming can be a lot of things, like doing unrealistic attacks - or being over powered - or not letting the others have a chance!

2) Keep it PG 13!
This is a serious thing. Cybering or excessive gore is NOT allowed. A good rule of thumb is: Anything below the neck, and you should do a time skip. There will also be NO rape, it is a bannable offense.

3) When OOC, be respectful.
Use your mind for this one. This means no OOC-racism, or RAPE jokes. This includes listening to the staff.

4) Do not grief.
RP greifing in the wilds is fine, but this is usually limited to things such as door or windows. Stealing realistically in the wilds is allowed as well, this means a gem or two - not an entire anvil! In protected areas, stealing is not advised.

5) Death rules:
PVP is not allowed unless it is agreed for both parties. Also, you must have permission if you wish to kill someone's character off! Common sense, people!

6) Character rules:
Characters should not be imitations of someone from a series. No Batman. They are original characters for a reason!

Please take the lore into consideration! There are no demons, or aliens!

Also, ANY UN-APPROVED USE OF MAGIC, is a BANNABLE offense!


7) Land scarring:

Land scarring simply means that you ruin the land - such as ugly quarries.
Building in the wilds is allowed, but please consider some things!
Do not make 1 x 1 pillars, do not leave floating trees, please make REALISTIC buildings!
In addition, all mines should have supports! Thank you!


8) Hacks & Exploits:

NO!
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More races and lore will come in the future..

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Put some effort!

[color=#6699cc][size=5][b]--- OOC:[/b][/size]

[b]Username:[/b]
[b]Age:[/b]
[b]RP Experience:[/b] (( Don't be afraid if this is your first time! ))
[b]Anything else you want to note?:[/b]
[b]Skype?:[/b] (( This is optional, but it's for the future- if you wish to be in a skype chat. :3 ))

[size=5][b]--- In Character:[/b][/size]

[b]Name:[/b]
[b]Age:[/b]
[b]Race:[/b] (( If you are not a human or born near Elysium , please include why your character is there! ))
[b]Gender:[/b]
[b]Biography:[/b] (( This should be at least a paragraph or two long! I suggest you include their history, personality, skills, and such. Also note that you start out with NOTHING- ^^; Most people would live in the slums on Elyisum too.))
[b]Appearance:[/b] (( A description of your character, please! Pictures of your skin is optional. ))[/color]


Mages are rare in these lands, the few that stick around the Mana-Barren lands are usually in the Mages' guild. They say that it takes a human's lifetime to become a mage, which is why most of them are elves. While there are a few, special, gifted people - it's not common.

Most mages' carry around accessories used as a mana-storage. A good example is a staff.
(( YOU need to send in both applications if you wish to be a mage! There is going to be a limit of mages available, so put some effort into it, people! ))
[color=#6699cc][size=5][b]--- MAGE APPLICATION:[/b][/size]

[b]Username:[/b]
[b]Anything else you want to note?:[/b]

[b]--- In Character:[/b]
[b]Name:[/b]
[b]Age: [/b](( It takes about 60 years to acquire magic, and much more to even master it! ))
[b]Race:[/b]
[b]How did they learn magic?:[/b]
[b]What type of things will they do with magic?:[/b] (( Magic isn't limited to controlling the elements, it is just whatever you can think of, with some restraints. Magic is a very powerful thing, but it IS declining so be, creative and DON'T be OP!))[/color]



=/= Enchantment Guidelines
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Admins:  MosueMan & TheChaosKing2010 & Chellizard
Moderators: Aljoford & MightyJake

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○ Multiple Homes!!
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TheChaosKing2010
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Posted 07 January 2013 - 03:38 AM

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Download-

http://www.mediafire...o4m9en00v4f4dqa
Of course all credit goes to the original texture creators.

Tutorial-
1. Download one of these.
Optifine-great for fps boosts, AND fixes textures.
http://www.minecraft...-and-much-more/

McPatcher-fixes textures!
http://www.minecraft...5-02-300-beta4/

2. For Optifine, open up your minecraft.jar and place all those little files into it. Simple as that, one quick drag and drop.

For the patcher, download it, run it, and you should be set!

For more in depth tutorials, check their pages.

Our server's aesthetics rely heavily on our custom texture pack, which tries to mix that steampunk feel, with medieval fantasy undertones.

It is a 32x32 pack, so be sure to get Optifine, or use the patcher!

We heavily advise you use it, but if it bothers you and you'd prefer something else, we recommend that at least you change your "Endstone" texture to something more, pipe-like. Endstone is changed into a greyish metal so that we can have pipes without sacrificing a useful block. To see the difference between our pack, and the default textures, use the spoiler.

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Elysium-

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#3

Popette
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Posted 07 January 2013 - 03:55 AM

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E l y s i u m     Created under the idea of peace, technology at the time had not been fully introduced to the world.
The city would unify and strengthen the bond between races. Kings and other such leaders sent their representatives to help run and overseer the town's creation, creating the 'council' which now leads the city. With the introduction of the dwarven tech, the process was sped up. On 937, it was finished.

The city is known as being the home of technology, the fact that it floats because of engines is enough for the claim. Though, a little known fact is that more then 75% of the residents live in the dark area below the floating city, it is usually referred as the 'slums'. Housing on the island is expensive, and usually reserved for the upper-class and nobles. An average resident would live in the 'slums' while working on the island, as jobs are always available. Elysium has four major districts, the Market, the Housing Area, the Noble Area, and the Technology Area.

Elysium is the capital of the land, Sylverant, but it doesn't mean much, as the land has become barren and full of ruins of old towns. Nevertheless, the floating city is a sight for sore eyes for the land. In addition, with the Mage Guild, the city has nearly everything one would need.

It is now 5 years old.


The Current Council Members are : :

Ki Tanmar ( Human / )

Kanungenal Innoculus ( Dwarf / )

Katalina Haerelhel ( Elf / )



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T h a l e     A country town dedicated to farming. The town was formed shortly after Elysium's creation, by people who found it disappointing. Thale is just one of the many suppliers for the floating city. But unlike their floating neighbor, they don't have that much technology, only the train they use to make their deliveries.

Thale is currently ran by the elected Jarl, Ryzo.



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How to make a town: :


Making an official, mob - protected, town costs 3000 coins. BUT, for every citizen you have, it costs 100 coins less. Towns get their own guards as well.
Before everything though, you must have at least a town-hall already built.

After you have your money and your citizens vouching for your town, just grab an admin's attention and you'll be set!

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#4

HoneyDewper
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Posted 07 January 2013 - 04:06 PM

Hmm...Bumpity Bump. I may apply to the server. That is if I don't get banned upon the moment sending my Application in

#5

Pookapotamus

Posted 07 January 2013 - 09:30 PM

THIS SERVER LOOKS AWESOME :D

#6

FeignedMusician

Posted 07 January 2013 - 09:34 PM

--- OOC:

Username:FeignedMusician
Age:17
RP Experience: Years of Forum rp and a few months in RoK
Anything else you want to note?: I miss you guys. Posted Image


--- In Character:

Name:Zi'Asha
Age:22
Race: Human
Gender: Male
Biography: Zi'Asha had a pretty average history, not trauma filled like some people he knew. He would often go down into the town and play hide and seek
sometimes it was a game of tag, or monkey in the middle with a ball they had found. He came from a rather poor family who hardly had any money, so now he does
not enjoy to spend much money, he has a huge interest in old magic and myths. Zi is very loyal, intelligent, and quite nice, he would do anything for a friend
He is patient, so his skills include working with small pieces in tech, and he knows how to hold a blade.
Appearance http://www.minecraft...825/zi_-asha-2/

#7

doinouatall

Posted 07 January 2013 - 10:22 PM

Username: doinouatall
Age: 17
RP Experience: First time
Anything else you want to note?: Not particularly

--- In Character:

Name: Nashty
Age: 52
Race: Halfling
Gender: Male
Biography:)Nashty comes from a quiet settlement some distance away from Elysium, too quiet for his liking. After a few years too many Nashty sat back in his old chair and sat there thinking of his life so far and instantly he was scared, he was scared of how his days have all mangled into one memory how here in his home village everyday was the same. He was scared this would be the rest of his life. This is how he came to be in Elysium after making many friends and walking unimaginable distances he has decided it is time for a rest, and where better to rest then here.
Appearance: Even though he is a Halfling, Nashty is tall for his race standing at a mighty 3ft 3"! He has large blue eyes, with his long curly hair flowing over his eyes.


#8

PhD_Bagel
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Posted 07 January 2013 - 10:56 PM

Whitelist results:
FeignedMusician-Accepted!
Doinouatall-Accepted!
Pookapotamus-Denied. Post the official application please

#9

Pookapotamus

Posted 07 January 2013 - 11:06 PM

OOC:

Username: Su1cid4L
Age: 15
RP Experience:Yes
Anything else you want to note?: I love cookies

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--- In Character: Name: Lathron Erurainion
Age: 637
Race: Elf
Gender: Male
Biography: Lathron was born into an elvish community, which was rare. Now, you would think that his parents would pay attention to him a lot for the first year or so, but that was the complete opposite. Lathron had to learn how to get food and change his own diapers by the time he was only 89. His parents, were exactly, the.... caring type. They only cared about their work, which was enchanting items, and selling them in the black market. As most elves, Lathron wanted to learn about magic, so he asked his dad if he could learn how to enchant. His dad smacked him, and told him to never ask that question again. Lathron soon felt like he was a waste, because he wasn't learning magic like the other kids. Normally, elves would go to school and learn about archery and magic there, but Lathron's parents were greedy and used all the money they obtained for themselves. By the time Lathron was 173, he decided that he needed another way to learn magic.


One day, Lathron was wandering the streets when he saw a teacher walking home from school. He went up to him and asked him if he could teach him how to use magic, but the response was no. Day after day, Lathron kept asking until the teacher said yes. So, Lathron was told to meet the teacher at the Spire, which he did. However, he was met by a ball of magic, and he blacked out. So, began his journey, to learn about magic, and the odds and ends of it. Lathron ended up learning about how to enchant, which was his goal, but he didn't learn much until, the Teacher fell sick. With his last words, he told Lathron to go to Elysium.

Lathron, heeded the wise words and began to prepare for his journey. He packed every essential items that an elf would need. Books, Bow and Arrows, A Wooden Sword, and many herbs. As he was packing, he decided to bring along some money, but he didn't have any on him at the time, so he went to the Teacher's house to nab some spare coins. While there, he noticed two shadowy figures in the house when he opened the door. Slowly, he pulled out his bow and notched an arrow. He took aim at the person with long hair and fired.

A piercing scream was heard for miles as the arrow entered the neck of the victim. The taller figure turned around and shot a ball of fire at Lathron. Lathron dodged the fireball but his exit burst into flames. Lathron quickly notched another arrow, and put down the woman. The man stood up, and walked out of the shadows, and Lathron recognized him immediately, as his own father, who didn't care about him during his early years. This, combined with the fact that he was stealing from his mentor's house,   ed him off, and he pulled out his wooden sword and charged at his dad. His dad, frozen in his spot, accepted the sword and the sword plunged into his abdomen, and once Lathron pulled it out, he crumpled to the floor, dead.

After the incident, Lathron gathered his composure and began to look for more loose change to pay for travel expenses. He ended up finding around 45 gold, which was enough to get him to the docks, but not much further. So he had to create a plan, to get to Elysium. So, after weeks of preparing, Lathron began his way to Elysium, by first, renting a horse, which he gave back at the other store at the docks, which brought him to the docks, and left him with 12 Gold left. With that gold, Lathron bought a sailor outfit, and crept onto the boat, which was headed to Elysium.  

As he boarded the boat, he noticed that many high end elves were on, and that the crew was to be on their best behavior. During the boat ride, the captain did a head count and noticed that there was an extra crew member. Normally, he wouldn't mind, but since the rich elves were on, he had to make sure that nobody got on, to assassinate one of them. So, he told all of the crew to line up, and he asked each person their name. Once he got to Lathron, he asked him for his name, so Lathron obliged. The captain told him, that he had never heard of him, and then, told the crew to grab him and investigate him, to see if he was a murderer, or something of the sorts.

As Lathron was getting pulled into the investigation room, or the lower decks. He had a bloody lip and a black eye, from when he was apprehended. The captain soon came down to talk to Lathron asking him cliche questions such as "Who are you?" and "Why are you here?" and "Who do you want to kill?". Lathron answered the questions, but not extensively. He did tell them his name, but not why he was on the boat. Soon, the captain came to the conclusion, that Lathron wasn't a threat and that he was a freeloader, who came on the boat without paying. However, since he was working for most of the time, Lathron paid off the debt, and he was allowed to leave, once the boat landed in Elysium.

Lathron, a little scared after almost being killed, decided to ask some of the elves, how they were doing. Most answered him with a "I'm doing well" or "Ok". There was one elf, who had her head buried in a newspaper. As Lathron approached her, she took a stick and knocked him out cold. This alarmed everyone, and they called for help. As crew members were entering the room, she took a bow and arrow and quickly shot down crew member after crew member, as they entered. Once she ran out of arrows, she began to shoot balls of fire at the door, which caused major structural damage to the boat. Soon, it was the woman and the Captain. As the woman shot fireballs, the Captain shot arrows. The arrows and fire tended to collide which caused a fire arrow to fly at the woman. After a minute of dodging and weaving, the woman grew sluggish and started to slow down, and that is when the Captain took advantage, and took the battle to Close Quarters Combat. As the captain grew close, he swung his fist and practically, broke the woman in half.

After the battle, the boat was on fire, and there was no way to save it, so the Captain told everyone to bail, considering that they could see Elysium. As everyone was bailing, Lathron woke up, and discovered the mayhem that occurred. He, like the others, bailed and swam to shore. Everyone was safe, but all items were lost. Now Lathron begins a new journey in Elysium. He still doesn't know what the teacher meant by going to Elysium, but he was there, and he decided to look for a Mage's Guild first. Lathron now has to gain the trust of the locals, and learn about the land, but, after the boat incident, he has another goal. To find out who the woman on the boat was, and what she wanted.

Appearance: He is like any other elf, but he has green eyes, which is surprisingly uncommon. He is a normal height for an elf, standing at 5' 10". He has muscle on him, but is skinny like most of the other elves. His hands look humanly, h, instead of elfish, which is odd. His hair is a brownish colour and short. http://www.minecraft...73747/wood-elf/

MAGE APP
Name: Lathron Erurainion  
Age: 637
Race: Elf
How did they learn magic?: Well, Lathron was born into an enchanting family but that doesn't mean that he was taught how to use it. His parents often neglected him, and that lead to Lathron not.... learning magic as other elves usually did. His parents couldn't afford to send him to a proper school, since they made money, selling stolen goods that they enchanted, in the black market. Since his parents were never there for Lathron, he found an alternative way to learn magic. One day, he found a teacher walking home from a long day of work. Lathron went up to the man and asked him if he could help Lathron learn more about magic. Naturally, the teacher told Lathron to get away, so he did. The next day, Lathron did the same thing, with no avail. Day after day, Lathron kept asking the teacher to train him, all with the same answer; No.

One day, the teacher finally agreed to train Lathron. Lathron never knew if the teacher actually cared, or if he was annoyed by the constant nagging. So the teacher told him to meet at the Spire at Saturday at 3:00. So, Lathron met the teacher at the Spire, and as soon as Lathron came into view, the teacher blasted him with his strongest magic, and Lathron flew back, and blacked out immediately. When Lathron woke up, he was in the middle of a forest, and had no sense of his surroundings, or where he was. He looked around and found a note tucked in his pocket. "Experience, is the best way to learn". Lathron also found a compass in his other pocket. So days passed and Lathron actually began to live in the wild, and he learned how to create a spear to obtain food, and to protect him from monsters at night. Soon, Lathron became... one with nature, He became an expert at archery, and crafting spears. However, he was soon removed from his jungle, when the teacher interrupted him, saying that he had been watching Lathron the whole time, and that, now began his true magic training. The teacher introduced himself as Eleywn and told Lathron that he had a lot of training to do, if he wanted to come close, to being a Master Mage. Eleywn asked Lathron what he wanted to learn, and Lathron responded with one word. Enchanting. It was his dream to follow in his "parents" foot steps and become a great enchanter, like them. Eleywn nodded and ushered Lathron to his lab/mage room. Lathron looked around in awe at all the fancy potions and scrolls on the walls and in vials. However, one thing caught his eye. Something that he had seen plenty around his house. An enchanting table.

Eleywn noticed Lathron's sudden interest in the table, and asked him if he had seen one before. Lathron nodded, but his eyes were glazed on the enchanting table. He had only seen glimpses of the table when his mom and dad opened the door to enter, or leave the enchanting room at his house. Eleywn explained how an enchanting table worked, and how to use it. Lathron was overjoyed and couldn't wait to use it, however, his ime using it would be short. After a couple weeks of learning the basics of enchanting, Eleywn thought that Lathron could learn some more advanced tips, such as enchanting tools and armour, but Eleywn could only teach him the basics, before he became deadly ill.
Lathron asked Eleywn if he could do anything, but Eleywn shook his head and told Lathron that there was nothing that he could do. Eleywn, with his last breath told Lathron to do one thing. Go to Elysium.

Are they in the Mages' guild, and if not- will they join?:  Lathron will join in the future, if his heart desires.

What type of things will they do with magic?: Lathron isn't one to fight unless he feels like he, or one of his friends are in danger. Because of that, Lathron doesn't know much about the fighting and harming magic, but he knows more about passive magic, so he intends to use that in Elysium, for anyone who has the coin.

#10

aljoford

Posted 08 January 2013 - 12:27 AM

Pookapotamus: Denied. I understand you don't have all the time in the world, but please finish all fields before posting your app. Also, there is no Mage College. A guild, but I understood what you meant. Also, not many can enchant, something we should've (If we hadn't already) stated in the OP. Note that no-one has magic from the start, that's why we have a magic app and a Mage cap. Oh, and change your age. 666 isn't funny. If you want to be in that range, be 665 or less, or 667 or more. There also would be no 'magic schools' you could be trained by the guild, should you wish to apply for magic, but there are no schools outright.

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Also, as a side note, Since I have school, PhD and other staff that may be willing to whitelist will be taking care of such whilst I'm in school.

#11

Pookapotamus

Posted 08 January 2013 - 12:33 AM

1. What didn't I fill in?
2. I fixed the Age
3. I fixed the Bio

#12

aljoford

Posted 08 January 2013 - 12:58 AM

View PostPookapotamus, on 08 January 2013 - 12:33 AM, said:

1. What didn't I fill in?

I appreciate your fixing of the required fields, but you didn't fill in the Appearance.

Oh, and you need to change it to normal Elf. High Elf is considered a race, to the staff, so we ask you change it to normal.

#13

CravedOre
  • Location: Canada

Posted 08 January 2013 - 01:02 AM

--- OOC:

Username: Wretchedrom
Age: 14
RP Experience: I have owned a few roleplay servers as well as played as a user on about 2.
Anything else you want to note?: I am an excessively active player that is actually mature and good with roleplay.

--- In Character:

Name:
Hauthrin Entrauve
Age: 2893
Race:
Elf
Gender: Male
Biography:


*CLASH* The war rages on in the flat lands, heard by a young couple hiding within a cave on the sidelines of the battle unseen. The women, she had a natural beauty about her. Her face appeared to glow bright, but not from light, from pure skin tone. She had long pointed ears poking out of her silky blonde hair. Her eyes were piercing sky blue, complementing her thin, pink rose lips. Behind her sat a man, his arms holding her in a protective state. He had a sharp face, also a light skin tone but he kept a strong, confident, and stern expression on his face. His long, brown hair swept across his face, only showing slivers of his leaf green eyes. Both of them had a tint of concern in their faces, they were looking at was was bared within the woman's arms. A child, wrapped in cloth, lay within her arms. So content... sleeping. How, you may ask, can one sleep as a battle is roaring just outside? Well... I cannot answer this, only guess. Could it be love that had commanded this child to sleep? I do not know.

Steps could be heard approaching the cave... The man stood, grasping one of the two bows leaning against the cave walls. He retrieved an arrow from the quiver lying on his back and knocked it. Grunts could be heard coming closer and closer. Around the corner appeared five Orcs, ugly as imagined. The Orcs had stringy hair soaked with sweat from the battle. They had glossy green and red skin, with scrawny bodies. Their teeth, or what was left of their teeth, dripped with the blood of their many victims. The man shot a single arrow, it hit the cave wall and rebounded going directly through two of the five Orcs heads. As he knocked another the Orcs charged, the woman screaming, they attempted to restrain the man with force but he took the arrow by hand and put it through another's neck. One of the remaining Orcs pounced on the man, taking him to the ground. The Orc than retrieved one of the mans arrows and plunged it through his heart. The woman cried out in agony as her husband was dying. Both Orcs than pursued on the woman, she was strong willed though. Pure light started conducting off her body as she cradled the child, the Orcs became weary of approaching. You could hear the woman chanting in a different tongue as she glowed brighter and brighter. One of the Orcs became tired of this and struck the woman with his scythe, it immediately shattered and the pieces plunged into multiple parts of both the Orcs killing them. The light emitting from this small cave traveled to the battle field. It blinded most, everyone questioning what was happening.

In an instant the light stopped. One man stepped into the cave, all on the battle field had seized to watch. The man stepped out with only a child in his arms, the woman no where to be found. The child awoke, it stared into the mans deep brown eyes and the man seemed disturbed, he almost dropped the child. In the crowd an Orc called out "Killz dem!". In less than a second the entire crowd was pushing to reach their enemy. The battle returned to how it was, although this time the Orcs were fighting for a helpless child. The man, still holding the child in his arms, fled the scene without being followed. On his travels he seemed to know the world well as he looked to know where he was going. He arrived at an abandoned village, seemingly human. This was only for a short while, possibly a few days they stayed the night in one of the houses. The man then brought this child to his home city and raised him alone. This child had been named Hauthrin.

Hauthrin grew up just like any other child, other than his looks not maturing as fast as the others. Being and Elf was a strong point for Hauthrin since all the other kids were so fascinated by living among one, although the parents were not pleased. He had made many friends and got close to his step-family. When Hauthrin was twenty-six there was an attack on the city, he had to fight in this attack along side others from the city. Within minutes many were injured and some dead. The entire city was a battle zone. Hauthrin was fighting around the area of his home, as he peered into the window he spotted a large, bloodied up, Orc standing over top his step-father. Hauthrin barged in to find his father with a scythe plunged into his stomach. He shot an arrow directly through the Orcs neck. Rushing up to his father Hauthrin knelt at his side and pulled the scythe from his stomach. "Hau-hauthrin.... I am not going to make it." he spoke.

"Yes you are!" Hauthrin spoke with tears in his eyes.

"Hauthrin... when I first held you... I saw something in your eyes, a vision. You are special." That was the last sentence he ever spoke.One thousand years had past until Hauthrin discovered his potential. He encountered a Dwarven rune master that at first seemed a bit deranged. This Dwarf saw something in Hauthrin, a potential of good... and evil.  This Dwarf taught Hauthrin of what he could do... he discovered he possessed magic. The rest of Hauthrins life story has not yet been written, but is to come. He is traveling alone, still practicing his skills.



  Appearance: He is a tall Elf around 6' 7" and weighing 190lbs. He has long blonde hair that hangs down his upper back. He has ocean blue eyes and a emotionless face usually taken as wise by others. He wears white robes.
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Username: Wretchedrom
Anything else you want to note?:

Name: Hauthrin Entrauve[/color]
Age: 2893, as Elves are immortal.
Race: Elf
How did they learn magic?: Well how he has magic within his blood is because his mother had transferred it to him in the beginning of my back story.
Are they in the Mages' guild, and if not- will they join?: No, I am a rogue mage although will be well known by others.
What type of things will they do with magic?: I believe I am going to use it for quests and fairly general things, I am planning to be looked up to by others.


#14

Pookapotamus

Posted 08 January 2013 - 01:23 AM

1. The appearance is To Be Posted (TBP) Because I havent found a skin yet

#15

capn_swagger_chace

Posted 08 January 2013 - 01:23 AM

Username:Sphen727
Age:15
RP Experience: dont have any
Anything else you want to note?:

--- In Character:

Name:Chancho
Age:28
Race: human
Gender:male
Biography: a sky pirate who is a treasure hunter and a bountyhunter. he is an adventurer that likes to figure out things like puzzles and what not. hes a thief and an obscure man.
Appearance: a pirate


#16

aljoford

Posted 08 January 2013 - 01:30 AM

View PostPookapotamus, on 08 January 2013 - 01:23 AM, said:

1. The appearance is To Be Posted (TBP) Because I havent found a skin yet
It would be best if you were to find one, before posting, or give a description of what you think he'll look like.

#17

aljoford

Posted 08 January 2013 - 02:54 AM

Whitelist Update:

Sphen727: Denied. You need a paragraph, which is more than 3 sentences. Go for 7 or 8, and make them look good, with grammar and Capital Letters. And the appearance "A Pirate" doesn't work. Detail it, or give us a picture of your skin.

CravedOre: Accepted, though I don't believe that Elves are immortal on this server, so they could die of age, so if you could take that into consideration, that would be great! Your magic app seems a bit shaky, though. His mother COULD have given him magic but... it seems like he would still need to train, maybe it wouldn't take him as long as others, but it just seems OverPowered(OP) to give him magic right off the bat, like that. Also, and this is just me saying something, but don't expect everyone to know who you are right off the bat either, especially if you're a rogue mage. Aside from that, great app!

#18

Wretchedrom
  • Location: Falling Through an Endless Abyss
  • Minecraft: Wretchedrom

Posted 08 January 2013 - 03:47 AM

View Postaljoford, on 08 January 2013 - 02:54 AM, said:

Whitelist Update:

Sphen727: Denied. You need a paragraph, which is more than 3 sentences. Go for 7 or 8, and make them look good, with grammar and Capital Letters. And the appearance "A Pirate" doesn't work. Detail it, or give us a picture of your skin.

CravedOre: Accepted, though I don't believe that Elves are immortal on this server, so they could die of age, so if you could take that into consideration, that would be great! Your magic app seems a bit shaky, though. His mother COULD have given him magic but... it seems like he would still need to train, maybe it wouldn't take him as long as others, but it just seems OverPowered(OP) to give him magic right off the bat, like that. Also, and this is just me saying something, but don't expect everyone to know who you are right off the bat either, especially if you're a rogue mage. Aside from that, great app!

1. I stated in the end that he is now traveling training at his magic.

2. I realize I wont be recognized right away, Reputation needs to be earned.

3. I do not have the IP

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A man who dares to waste one hour of time has not discovered the value of life. - Charles Darwin


#19

PhD_Bagel
  • Location: Over the river and through the woods
  • Minecraft: PhD_Bagel

Posted 08 January 2013 - 04:04 AM

View PostWretchedrom, on 08 January 2013 - 03:47 AM, said:



1. I stated in the end that he is now traveling training at his magic.

2. I realize I wont be recognized right away, Reputation needs to be earned.

3. I do not have the IP

View PostWretchedrom, on 08 January 2013 - 03:47 AM, said:



1. I stated in the end that he is now traveling training at his magic.

2. I realize I wont be recognized right away, Reputation needs to be earned.

3. I do not have the IP
The server is not out yet

#20

Wretchedrom
  • Location: Falling Through an Endless Abyss
  • Minecraft: Wretchedrom

Posted 08 January 2013 - 04:07 AM

View PostPhD_Bagel, on 08 January 2013 - 04:04 AM, said:

The server is not out yet

haha ik. I talked with aljo on skype.

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A man who dares to waste one hour of time has not discovered the value of life. - Charles Darwin