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Deepship 13 - "Technical Difficulties"


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#1

Sacheverell

Posted 28 December 2012 - 12:46 AM

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The second episode of DS13 is out now!  Follow the escapades of a narcissistic captain, his dim-witted alien crewmate, and murderous shipboard computer as they tolerate each other's company long enough to discover the greatest treasure in the galaxy.  Enjoy!

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Posted 28 December 2012 - 01:07 AM

First Post. Anyway, finally another one of these came out. I thought the other one was pretty funny.

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Posted 28 December 2012 - 01:37 AM

What is this series about?

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Posted 28 December 2012 - 03:18 AM

View PostShoe_Shine, on 28 December 2012 - 01:37 AM, said:

What is this series about?

Why not watch it?
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Posted 28 December 2012 - 07:37 AM

This post is kinda late, isn't it?
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Posted 28 December 2012 - 12:19 PM

Oh, deepship, I wondered where it dissapeared.
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#7

qwertycreator

Posted 28 December 2012 - 01:57 PM

All of you guys are changing to this infinity spoiler signature! Can you stop plz?

PS: Very good series Sacherevell! Continue with the good work! Looking forward to episode 3!
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UnitedSquadron

Posted 28 December 2012 - 08:10 PM

I remember this from a couple of months. Took a little bit, but at least it didn't take as long as the ssswariorcats on Youtube. I waited a couple of years for that! Still, both are good shows.
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Posted 28 December 2012 - 10:03 PM

That ship's captain is really annoying. I much prefer Xenoface. :D
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Posted 29 December 2012 - 01:08 AM

that was so funny!!!! MAKE MORE MAKE MORE!!!!!!!

#11

BigGrayGolem

Posted 30 December 2012 - 04:05 AM

This has potential, the comedic timing is right, and the scripts aren't bad, but you desperately need better voice actors. Add that and you might have a pro-quality hit on your hands.
Oh, glob, you're choking my joke hole.

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Posted 30 December 2012 - 05:20 AM

View PostBigGrayGolem, on 30 December 2012 - 04:05 AM, said:

This has potential, the comedic timing is right, and the scripts aren't bad, but you desperately need better voice actors. Add that and you might have a pro-quality hit on your hands.
The voicing isn't so bad; not everything has to be a "hit". I'm not of the mind to suggest too much, because the author might loose his joy of creating and working on this show/project. And that would be sad, ... because I'm really starting to like watching some of the Minecraft-based machinima out there....

But, I do tend to daydream; watching the show got me to thinking on some "what if" scenarios that the author could try out, if they would work for the show:
  • The computer malfunctions, and gains a "split personality" which is completely nice, and is at war with itself (the darker half against the other), because the 'nice' side reveals its darker side has a secret. (And it would be even funnier if, in the end, the "secret" turns out to be a binary joke, or something less interesting to humans...)
  • The "Space King" may not want to see the captain directly, but he may send an emissary or envoy to "check up" on the captain's progress, or something. (The captain needs an arch-nemesis; not necessarily evil, just someone to be at odds.)
  • The captain lands on a planet that has utopian society (maybe with tons of lava to trade?); they find his narcissism "disagreeable", and so try to use some tech to "improve" his disposition. But, they've calculated their tech based on their own physiology....
  • The alien companion gets emotional, or wants a companion of its (her?) own. Or, changes in some way that comes with consequences; the fun comes in the choices that have to be made, whether to change back or not (yeah, some plot device).
  • So, ... the engines use lava. Will many of the episodes involve (either on-screen or off-screen) going to planets to collect it, or can the captain also trade for it? If trading is possible, what does the captain have for assets, to trade? What is the economy like in this universe?
  • A "spatial phenomenon" is actually a time-vortex or something that lets the captain, or everyone on the ship, see themselves, with some embarassing instances.
  • The ship and its internals are one location that is going to be in the show. How much of the interior will we see? Will one part be "off limits to organics" or otherwise inaccessible?
I could probably daydream more; but for now I'm on my way back to YouTube.
If I did this right, it should be a link to my shared Dropbox folder for my Minecraft modding attempts: https://db.tt/V5ODApS2
Not much appears there just yet; stay tuned for more details (you can always message me if you think something's missing).

#13

BigGrayGolem

Posted 30 December 2012 - 01:17 PM

View PostDiggingStraightDown, on 30 December 2012 - 05:20 AM, said:

The voicing isn't so bad; not everything has to be a "hit". I'm not of the mind to suggest too much, because the author might loose his joy of creating and working on this show/project. And that would be sad, ... because I'm really starting to like watching some of the Minecraft-based machinima out there....

But, I do tend to daydream; watching the show got me to thinking on some "what if" scenarios that the author could try out, if they would work for the show:
  • The computer malfunctions, and gains a "split personality" which is completely nice, and is at war with itself (the darker half against the other), because the 'nice' side reveals its darker side has a secret. (And it would be even funnier if, in the end, the "secret" turns out to be a binary joke, or something less interesting to humans...)
  • The "Space King" may not want to see the captain directly, but he may send an emissary or envoy to "check up" on the captain's progress, or something. (The captain needs an arch-nemesis; not necessarily evil, just someone to be at odds.)
  • The captain lands on a planet that has utopian society (maybe with tons of lava to trade?); they find his narcissism "disagreeable", and so try to use some tech to "improve" his disposition. But, they've calculated their tech based on their own physiology....
  • The alien companion gets emotional, or wants a companion of its (her?) own. Or, changes in some way that comes with consequences; the fun comes in the choices that have to be made, whether to change back or not (yeah, some plot device).
  • So, ... the engines use lava. Will many of the episodes involve (either on-screen or off-screen) going to planets to collect it, or can the captain also trade for it? If trading is possible, what does the captain have for assets, to trade? What is the economy like in this universe?
  • A "spatial phenomenon" is actually a time-vortex or something that lets the captain, or everyone on the ship, see themselves, with some embarassing instances.
  • The ship and its internals are one location that is going to be in the show. How much of the interior will we see? Will one part be "off limits to organics" or otherwise inaccessible?
I could probably daydream more; but for now I'm on my way back to YouTube.

So you don't think he should improve the voices because it might hinder his joy, but you have 500 other lengthy ideas on what he should do.

Got it.
Oh, glob, you're choking my joke hole.

#14

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Posted 30 December 2012 - 03:05 PM

View PostBigGrayGolem, on 30 December 2012 - 01:17 PM, said:

So you don't think he should improve the voices because it might hinder his joy, but you have 500 other lengthy ideas on what he should do.

Got it.
Now you're just being obnoxious.

I specifically said it was all daydreaming, of "what if" scenarios.
If I did this right, it should be a link to my shared Dropbox folder for my Minecraft modding attempts: https://db.tt/V5ODApS2
Not much appears there just yet; stay tuned for more details (you can always message me if you think something's missing).

#15

BigGrayGolem

Posted 30 December 2012 - 04:48 PM

View PostDiggingStraightDown, on 30 December 2012 - 03:05 PM, said:


I specifically said it was all daydreaming, of "what if" scenarios.

My only point is that your suggestions are no more or less important than anyone else's.
Oh, glob, you're choking my joke hole.

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Posted 01 January 2013 - 03:23 AM

I got hooked to this show now!!
Please come check out my channel. I'm new to YouTube and do Minecraft and other games. My channel name is Temido2222. Views and subs would be appreciated!

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Posted 02 January 2013 - 11:14 PM

View Postqwertycreator, on 28 December 2012 - 01:57 PM, said:

All of you guys are changing to this infinity spoiler signature! Can you stop plz?

PS: Very good series Sacherevell! Continue with the good work! Looking forward to episode 3!

Actually, his signature is not infinite! You can actually open up all the spoilers, and a message will appear. But I agree with you that his 'spoiled' message does not have a lot of added value. After opening up the spoilers, this appears:
"OPEN ALL OF THE SPOILERS!!!"
I agree with you that he should stop using this type of spoilers, but it is not an infinite one.
By the way, I am referring to the 'Strottinglemon' signature.