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[Kinkaz]

About:

As you had probabily guessed from the title and in the backstory if you read it, this RP is about civilizations on the universe. In here, you can control civilizations from all eras. From the most simple way of goverment, to great civilizations that rule entire galaxies.

To possibilite the creation of a more fictional but realistic background, this will be set in 2.000.000.000 A.D, meaning that the Earth is a barren desert. This is to possibilite the creation of fictional superclusters.

If you like it, you can go far, far away from the main spot where all the roleplayers are, to forge your own story and not being in touch with many others.

The time speed is about 5 earth years per page.

And since so many reading this won't read that this is off topic, let me tell you something:

THIS IS NOT A SERVER, IT WILL NEVER BE A SERVER!

About the eras:

Pre-fire intelligence: I am not reffering to stuff like animals. I am reffering to Australopithecus technology to Homo Habilis technology. So dont post stuff like a horde of rabbits unless the rabbits are intelligent.

Early prehistoric: This refers to the technologies that are between Homo Erectus and the Sapiens species.

Tribal: These are the civilizations between the Sapiens appearance technology and farming technology or otherwise sedentarism.

Neolithic: These refer to the civilizations that just discovered farming. This goes all the way to writing.

Ancient: These are all the technologies that span from the writing tech to the medieval technology.

Medieval: All nations that have tech between 476 and 1492 go here.

Renassiance: All nations that have tech between 1492 to the industrial revolution go here.

Industrial:  All nations that have tech between the industrial revolution and 1914 go here.

Modern: All nations that have tech between 1914 to 1990 go here.

Contemporanean: All nations that have tech between 1990 to the first flying car go here.

Futuristic: All nations that have tech between the first flying car and the first interestellar colonization ship go here.

Interestellar: All nations that have tech between the first colonization ship to a wormhole that can go from a point of a galaxy to a very distant one go here.

Galactic: All nations that have tech between a wormhole that can go from a point of a galaxy to a very distant one and beyond go here.

If you dont know which technology goes in which era, search here: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Main_Page

Hall of fame:

This is the hall of fame. Here, the most intresting and succesful civilizations will be posted. The list will be updated every 25 pages which perhaps will be made with a period of locking of the RP. If its locked, read my last post.

Pre-fire intelligence:

Early prehistoric:

Tribal:

Neolithic

Ancient:

Medieval

Renassiance:

Industrial:

Modern (WWI, WWII and posterior to WWII):

Contemporarian (After 1990):

Futuristic:

Interesellar:

Galactic:

Tips for getting into the Hall of Fame:

-Make the history of your Civilization different from the Earth History (for example, discovering a new continent in the Modern era and WWI happening on the ancient ages)
-Achieve great relationships with the other nations, by for example making a global alliance, or destroy them all early on, for example, conquering the world at the later industrial era or early modern and coming up with a good way to controling their territories.
-Being a really strong nation.
-Making use of absolutely no stereotypes, for example, the story of the knight defeating a dragon and rescuing a wonderful princess.

Rules:

• THIS IS THE MOST IMPORTANT RULE IN THE WHOLE RP: This RP is for everyone to play, not for an exclusive minority that the only thing that they like is conquering the universe. Or, better explaining, people that just are hyper-expansionist and pick the galactic era just to conquer everything they see is not allowed. I am not against people conquering uninhabited planets, but what frustrates me is the people that conquer everyones nations, and, because the other nations are retrograde, they finish them off very quickly.
  
• No metagaming. No one is able to know everything that is going on in the universe, even if you start in a era that you are very advanced.
  
• No insta-killing. Let others have a chance against you.
  
• No Battlefield Earth wannabes. Even if you have ruins nearby with plenty of good technologies and you have a large empire dominating you, you cant just grab airplanes and killing off your conquerors unless the other player agrees with it previously. Besides, Battlefield Earth is considered one of the worst movies ever.
  
• If you never said it, it never occured and you cant just come out and say it did otherwise. Forgot that you produced a large spaceship fleet? Then, it wasnt finished yet. Forgot to tell that your army air-bombs the enemy capital? Then, the capital isnt being bombed. Remember, your guys can't shove things from the ass
  
• Be realistic. Yes, I know you can start off in the era where you can control entire galaxies, but I dont want random planet-big solar dissasemblers. An exception would be the Galactic or Middle interestellar civilizations that don't have any ideas left that could be realistic. However, they are limited to Sci-fi, so NO MAGIC
  
• These are the following weapons that are forbidden except when using against your own nations: Nukes, planet-destroying bombs.
  
• Post the stats of your nation if you are invading other nation that isnt yours.
  
• You are allowed to create multiple nations. The few things to keep in mind are that you can only create 6 nations and that you cant use them to greatly benefit your most powerful nation (example, as soon as your weaker nations meet your strongest one, the weaker nations either give all their stack of resources or turn into slaves or the stronger nation gives the weaker nation technology so they kick off the other players.)
  
• Do not post just to keep your stuff upgrading. Do something while making posts about upgrading.
  
• Minimum length of a part of the app that isn't the name or the limit isn't specified, 2 lines and so in the posts in the RP.
  
• An unrealistic ending to your nation that you made up will only earn you a ban, so don't GTFO just randomly.
  
• I don't want everyone to focus on one thing, for example, technological advances. No, I am not asking to not make technology, or not make any culture or anything you were planning to focus on. I just want to avoid everyone focusing on one sole thing to have more variety of nations instead of just becoming something like: "ZOMG I MUST HURRY UP OMG OMG I MUST POST QUICKLY SO I CAN RESEARCH GUNDPOWDER!!!" That's what killed the first version of Nesondia. People were becoming bored of everyone being focused on technology research, and so they left. I will not allow the same occuring here.
  
• Pop culture refferences are allowed. But they must be light and thrown very rarely. For example, you may say: "All your base are belong to us" when you are doing an epic invasion, but not on every invasion. That means stuff like: "Mushroom Kingdom" "Oblivion Empire" or "(insert name from where Zim comes here") is not allowed.
  
• Minimum accuaracy of grammar is a must. I can allow small errors here and there, but please don't make it an habit. Also, remember that stuff like text with no caps, Text With Excessive Usage Of Caps, TeXtS wItH jUmPy CaPs or TEXT WITH ALL CAPS is annoying, specially for a large post, so please write like a normal person. not lik u ar writing 4 an sms

This is just a small list. If you want to get full explanation of the rules, click the spoiler below. It's work in progress, but if you want to see it, go ahead:

Spoiler:

• Remember, there are people who want to relax and play as tribal people. I'm giving a space to do it, so please don't get greedy and start killing other people. That is annoying, and ruins the whole RP.
  
  
• Self explanatory. However, spies can be an exception depending their objectives, but if they are caught, then you can't have knowledge of the people you are spying on. Also, don't auto-spy on everyone and be aware that, specially in the pre-internet times, it's hard to get the informing around.
  
  
• Here's a big flaw that I see on some RPers. Sometimes they decide the result of a conflict. This is not just on strategy RPs, but also on many inexpert RPs. When the circunstances are right, for example, a millon men surrounding a 100 men army that is poorly armed, then they can insta-kill, but in the case of these 100 men being a lot better armed than the millon men, the millon can win but with several loses, and this time, instakilling is invalid. Also, even if insta-killing is valid, I don't reccomend it because it drains a lot of explanation.
  
• If you didn't saw the movie, you are lucky. I won't spoil it here, but if you want to ruin yourself the movie, here's a link to massive spoilering

Applications:

Galactic Cluster application:

[B]Name:[/B]
[B]Caracteristics:[/B]
[B]Supercluster:[/B]

Name: Do I really have to explain this?
Caracteristics: How are the galaxies like?
Supercluster: The supercluster you are in. You can make up yours or use an alerady existing one.

Galaxy application:

[B]Name:[/B]
[B]Caracteristics:[/B]
[B]Picture (optional):[/B]
[B]Cluster:[/B]

Name: If you dont know this one, Ill kill you.
Caracteristics: What is the galaxy like? (example, full of black holes with a few stars remaining)
Picture: You can make a picture of what the galaxy looks like.
Cluster: You can use a realistic cluster or any made up cluster.

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What's behind this line can be made with one liners. Other than that, nope.

Solar system application:

[B]Name:[/B]
[B]Caracteristics:[/B]
[B]Map (optional):[/B]
[B]Story:[/B]
[B]Galaxy[/B]

Name: Are you mental or something to not know this one?
Caracteristics: What are the planets like?
Map: What does the solar system look like? If you dont put a map, in-depth the caracteristics.
Story: The story of the solar system. At least in here put the formation of the system. This is purely optional since many people don't understand my interpretation.
Galaxy: You can use an existing galaxy.

Planet application:

[B]Name:[/B]
[B]Caracteristics:[/B]
[B]Map (optional):[/B]
[B]Story:[/B]
[B]Solar system:[/B]

Name: WTF. Learn about it.
Caracteristics: What is the planet like? 5 sentences minimum
Map: In-depth the caracteristics if you dont have a map or you dont want to make one.
Story: Minimum put the formation of the planet.
Solar system: You can use an existing solar system, and unless its an actual planet, explain how in the universe it got there in the first place.

Race Application:

[b]Name:[/b]
[b]Caracteristics:[/b]

Name: So, you never went to a school before?
Caracteristics: What is your race capable of and how it looks like? 4 lines as minimum. This started as one entire part, but I did not pay much attention to the recent apps (hell, I once let away someone with one linering the abilities), so I decided to merge both.

Civilization application:

[B]Name:[/B]
[B]Description:[/B]
[B]Religion:[/B]
[B]Backstory:[/B]
[b]Race:[/b]
[B]Actual era:[/B]

Name: ...
Description: Describe your civilization. 4 lines as minimum.
Religion: If you are near the Earth, you may use an Earth religion like Hinduism or Zoroastrianism. But otherwise, make up another one. The posting of a Pantenon of gods isnt obligatory but encouraged.
Backstory: If you are chosing a civilization that is on the Neolithic to lower, it isnt necessary, but otherwise, tell the story of your nation. The requirements are the same as the description.
Race: The race of your nation. At least tell the majoritary race.
Actual era: The era your nation is going through from the many eras in the era section.

Corporation/Activist NGO application:

[B]Name:[/B]
[B]Headquatquers:[/B]
[B]Backstory:[/B]
[B]Description[/B]

Name: I alerady said you a thousand times I won't explain.
Headquatquers: Where is your corporation located?
Backstory: How was your corporatrion founded?
Description: How many people work there? What is the objective of your corp?

Since there are some people that won't fill certain parts or make it incomplete, I put my app here as an example of an app:

Spoiler:

Name: Nekaham
Caracteristics: The solar system is composed of very few bodies. First, there is the main star. It is orange and therefore, it causes smaller luminosity than normal. Then, there is Evu, a mars-sized planet. It is really close to the sun, so the sunny part is composed of liquid rock, and the other side has almost the temperature of the Earth. The day lasts 60 hours, and the year 67 earth days. It has a moon, but the moon when it goes behind the planet, it reaches below zero temperatures, and when it's closer to the sun than the planet, there is no part of the moon that isn't liquid. Then, there is a planet suitable for life named Nevuhid, a planet slightly hotter than the Earth. It has 2 moons but far from eachother to avoid a colission between each. It's orbit is of 247 days because to have life, it needs to be closer. Then, there is an asteroid belt that divides the inner system from the outer system. On the outer system, there is a red dwarf. The dwarf is very cold and barely brings away any luminosity so the temperature is barely affected on places far from the star. Because of the red dwarf existance, the main star's asteroid belt is perturbated by it's gravity, attracting it to the dwarf. It contains a hot Jupiter (http://en.wikipedia....iki/Hot_jupiter) because it's size-like to Jupiter and very close to it's star. It's orbit is 55 earth days long, and it's rotation is 6 hours long. The red dwarf also has an asteroid belt, with perturbations on it also.
Map (optional):
Story: The system was formed during the star boom, which allowed the galaxy to be the biggest eplitical galaxy. The nebula concentrated in 2 spots because of a recent supernova. However, the central spot had more dust, which allowed it to be the focus of the system and form the main star. Originally, a few more planets were forming, but the perturbances of the other star made the planets to break apart and turn them into asteroid belts surrounding each star. Another formed planet, which survived, hit Nivehdanim on it's early years (see below for it's results). Nivehdanim enjoyed fast life growth.
Galaxy: Baby Boom galaxy (http://en.wikipedia....aby_Boom_Galaxy)

Name: Nivehdanim
Caracteristics: The planet is very suitable for life, and it's slightly hotter than the planet Earth. The axis is sideways, like Uranus, so on the place where the equator lies in most planets, the North and south pole lie on them. Because of this, the Northren pole is very hot and the southren pole very cold. This makes large competitions between species, and most species are adapted to fight, even against their own species. An intermediate of temperature is formed where in a normal planet the northren and southren poles should be located, which is suitable for life except on the east and west, where cold reigns. Most of the nations are independent cities, and half of the nations with more than one city are empires looking for land to settle.
Map (optional):

Story: When the planet was forming, a large meteorite hit the planet with 3/4 of the size of the planet. It nearly destroyed the planet. It formed 2 moons around it and was able to turn the axis sideways.With 2 moons, the planet could never restore it's old axis, although it could put it's axis diagonally. This made life to arrive slower, but with a minor magnetic shield, the mutations were quicker, making evolution faster with a higher level of radiation. The first civilizations were Graffyinns, and these advanced pretty quickly. The global warning impact was lesser, because the species of the planet were more tolerant to changes in the atmosphere and temperature. When the Graffyinns colonized the exterior their solar system, a nuclear war took place, killing almost every Graffyinn. Those who survived, were either in powerful anti-bomb shelters or in caves. When the nuclear waste dissapeared and the planet was rehabitable, the shelters were very degradated. Out of the 10 billon grayffinns that lived when the nuclear war started, 125.442 survived the nuclear assault when the last nuclear mushroom was dissolved, and only 5.312 survived when the nuclear shelters broke apart and the planet was rehabitable. They re-populated the planet very quickly and so did the sheltered species. This took almost one hundred thousand years. 35% of the species dissapeared on the nuclear holocaust. However, the shelters broke apart, and now, only ruins remain of the once proud civilization. But most of them are underground. However, on the shelter days, there were a lot of rumors that the settlements broke apart and formed their own nations, since they didn't join the nuclear holocaust
Solar system: Nekaham

Name: Graffyinn
Abilities: These races can fly because of their Griffin resemblance (see below). They evolved arms and legs, so they are biped, but since they are heavier, they can't stand perfectly in an erect position, and when they stand for long time they start to shake, so most of their people walk on 4 legs. Some don't even have hands, making the tool-working impossible. They are heavier than the griffins,  but they didn't lost the ability to fly. However, they can't fly as well as a griffin. They can fly almost 7 meters. The strength is concentrated mostly on their wings, so when they are very hungry, they can fly up to 10 meters and just before starvation, they can fly 14 meters. However, flying at these heights starving is suicidal. If they mix with a normal Griffin, they are able to have hybrids called Grafyins, but the Grafyins are unable to use tools. Their hand resemblance to a claw make them better at grabbing big stuff than small stuff.
Description: These races are griffin-like. They are a mix between a lion and an eagle. However, they are somewhat different from a normal griffin. They have 6 limbs. 2 legs, 2 arms and 2 wings. Due to the quick evolution at the beggining of the species, they didn't lost most of their hair in comparison of what they would be like if the evolution was slower. Because of this, they are able to survive better in the cold enviroments. Their colouring is, on the body, orange. On their wings, they are coloured white and on there, they are feathered, something that allows them to fly.

Name: Mesadi Republic
Description: The republic is placed over a crater that is draining most water of the enviroment. A desert surrounds them, and they are planning to expand beyond the desert in order to get better shelter because there are barely any houses, and they are made out of animal bones. They are staying on the crater because the water that falls helps agriculture, bringing a lot of humidity to the land.  The plants that grow there are Anahis, which is the equivalent of wheat, Ahind, which is somewhat like an orange, but less nutritive and Komi, which is bitter than Maize. Their culture is nearly non-existant, except for their houses and their gods.
Religion: Anahiadism. They worship 5 great gods and about 20 minor gods. However, the great gods are the following:
Anahadia: Mother of all gods and creator of the universe
Menej: Spouse of Anahadia. Created most content of the universe
Nevah: God of all evil. At first, he was a guard of the main gods, but then he was corrupted by greed, escaped and made his own guards. He is told that at the end of the times, he will fight every god that isn't at his side.
Nuuvahad: Creator of life. He is the overseer of the planets because he created life and the gods don't want the life to ultimately betray and join Nevah, and he is the one that has to revise the gates of Hell, where Nevah lives.
Mused: Creator of water and fire. He is the one that gives the punishment to the people when they turn to Nevah and betray the other gods. He makes the natural disasters and was the one that brought down the gates that allowed people to live.

The people that don't worship any of these are Animists, but the last one is illegal.

Backstory: At first, they started as nomads that came from the north. After walking around the desert, they found a large depression caused by a meteorite thousands of years ago. They saw how the water was coming from the higher zones, how rivers formed on the crater and the big central lake. They thought the water was holy because they drank from the rivers and, unlike the ocean water, it was delicious. They decided to settle in that area. However, the food was lacky except by a few plants, so they decided to spread them, and they started an agricultural area. Then, they saw how shelter was poor, so now they are planning to conquer the area beyond the desert.
Race: Graffyinns
Actual era: Neolithic

I know some parts were unrealistic. For example, the main star having a huge part of the belt attracted to the red star when the belt is facing at it, while the red star has a lot less mass and the red star having his belt attracted to it but less than the main star, considering that the red star has a lot less mass.

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Yeah, I know there are so many apps over here. Its because it doesnt just take in a galaxy or two. It takes in the whole universe.

[funkybub]

Reserve me

[Kinkaz]

funkybub, on 11 June 2012 - 07:43 PM, said:

Reserve me

((Of course I'll reserve you!))

[Phoden]

Hey kinkaz can your Species be inter dimensional and come in the dimensions where everyone is or all are in same dimension?

[Kinkaz]

Phoden, on 11 June 2012 - 07:48 PM, said:

Hey kinkaz can your Species be inter dimensional and come in the dimensions where everyone is or all are in same dimension?

((Everyone is in the same dimension.))

[Phoden]

Ah oke, I'll just change my planet to become the wanted place to live.

I think I will rp in this. Just igve me time to prepare.

[krazaz]

((reserve me for when I have a legitimate way to type it))

[Kinkaz]

krazaz, on 11 June 2012 - 08:28 PM, said:

((reserve me for when I have a legitimate way to type it))

((Ok.

Also, in order to possibilite the existance of more superclusters, this is set in 2.000.000.000 A.D, meaning that the Earth is a barren desert due to the sun's increasing temperature.))

[krazaz]

((unofficial mini application to reserve some specifics ))
Name: Meox
Appearance: bipedal liger people
Civilization: Advanced tribal
mini bio: Tribal race attacked by an Intergalactic race known as the Wolfix (will not be participating) in an unlikely circumstance the Meox won the battle and stole the technology,

((a real app will be made later when i have time))

[Solawind]

((Reserve me a place, Im going to be doing a bit of drawing so my app may take a while but it should be worth it.
Also correct me if im wrong, but we can start in any era we choose? just want to be sure because i dont want to draw farmers and find out that its not that evolved yet...))

[Solawind]

Planet

Spoiler:

Name: Marrooon
Caracteristics:

Planet Marrooon is a desolate and barren planet, the population being very small and the planets surface barely livable. Marrooon is approximately 90% water though none of which is reccomended to be ingested by living creatures and a rough mineral rich soil makes up of what is the little land that inhabits the planets surface. The entire planet is encased in a thick, noxios, purple gas that is the creatures living there's equivalent of human's oxygen. The Flora that exists on planet Marrooon is all of a dense reddish colour in nature;

The fruit that grows on these extreme-surviving plants is a delicacy to the local inhabitants and is highly reguarded for being one of the only sources of liquid that is consumable. These tree-like plants have soft and fluffy leave-equivalents which are commonly harvested for bedding. Another reddish plant that is cultivated is Whheat (Double H on purpose.);

This plant is the most commonly farmed plant on the planet and is the base ingredient for most consumables created by the Raahhk.
There is Few other creatures surviving in the wastelandish plains of Marrooon, the most notable is the Kueraak;

These sheep-like creatures are docile in nature and are commonly kept in herds. they are used for their soft wool, though their skin is made of a rock-like substance so they are rarely used as livestock.
Map: The planet consists of dusty, mineral-enriched soils that are great for harvesting, though the climate is always warm and windy. <For map refer to planet above for now, soon i will make a map once i decide on some civilisations.>
Story: The planet is of a simmilar size to earth, it has only existed for a billion years, being quite a young planet. Marroon is and has always been desolate, the creatures living on its dusty terrain whom have adapted to it's harsh conditions are in their Neolithic stage. The planets evoloution has rapidly increased up until this point, though the creatures show little further development as their lifestyle suits them for their planet perfectly.
Solar system: <Don't have any in mind yet, it'd be nice if someone else made a solar system and i could tag along, ill give it a bit, if all else fails ill make my own.>

Race

Spoiler:

Name: Raahhk
Abilities: The Raahhk are a Neolithic race, their main skills include weaving linen, cultivating animals and crops along with surviving the harsh conditions their planet shoves in their faces every day. The Raahhk are small Lynx-like creatures standing at a height of around 50cm, carrying tools carefully crafted out of the dark reddish wood of the local treees and wearing their Dust-protecting garments these fluffy creatures are ready for just about anything previosly encountered on their planet.
Description:

The Raahhk have two fingers along with an apossable thumb on each hand, they have two extra Arms situated under the first two, though these are slightly shorter and do not retain the strength the main two have <sort of like left hands for right handed people...>. Their bodies are covered in a thick orangeish fur that blends well with the reddish-brown dust that covers the planets landmass and they have four sharp peircing eyes that seem blank, they usually cover the most of their eyes as they only really need one to see. They have double layered eyelids, the underlayer being a clear lid they use to block out dust.
The Raahhk have flat teeth like that of a human, though their canines are elongated and are strong enough to break the rock-like shell of the fruit found growing on the bottom of the treees.

((Let me know if i missed anything... and sorry for the drawing quiality, im not the best at using technology to draw.))

[krazaz]

REAL APP GO!

Spoiler:

Cluster

Spoiler:

Name: Gorgon Cluster
Characteristics: several strings of galaxies from one point(believed to be an unimaginably large blackhole)
Supercluster: Virgo Supercluster (same as the Local cluster (of the milkyway))

Galaxy

Spoiler:

Name: Kronus galaxy
Characteristics: known for a large amount of nebulae
Picture (optional):((credit to nasa, actual galaxy shown: NGC 300))
Cluster: Gorgon Supercluster

Solar System

Spoiler:

Name: Festas System
Characteristics: 7 planets: 4 terrestrial (two in goldilocks zone (signified by *)); Jomba, Croy*, Sing*, and Waatar(names interchangeable with whomever wants part of the system), 3 gas giants; Gaar, Strem, and Shen
Map (optional): standard layout, terrestrials near star, gas giants behind the terrestrials
Story: terrestrial planets contain a large amount of the rare compound:Krashnium stable highly explosive rock, kinetic energy causes reaction (causing a fist sized stone of such to act like a grenade).
Galaxy Kronos Galaxy

Planets

Spoiler:

Name: Croy (Festas II)
Characteristics: of the planets in the Festas System, this planet holds the highest quantity of  Krashnium, but contains little other minerals, the planet has an oxygen atmosphere and has G2 gravity. The planet is primarily continent mostly plains, the planet is only 40% water, climate is mostly arid.
Map (optional): large triangular continent known as Ura, many lakes and rivers run throughout it, an ocean is on the otherside, containing small islands.
Story: formed from the largest collection of Krashnium in the system, as other compounds collected on it a world came to be, high reactions of the Krashnium formed a similar situation to the mass meteorical bombardment of earth, life formed on this planet.
Solar system: The Festas System

Name: Sing (Festas III)
Characteristics: of the planets in the Festas System, this planet holds the  second highest quantity of Krashnium, and it contains high Iron strains, the planet has an oxygen atmosphere and has G1 gravity. The planet is 37% continent and mountainous, the planet is only 63% water, climate is mostly cold.
Map (optional): three continents: Java in the southeastern hemisphere, Korla in the equatorial area in the western hemisphere and Muute in the north, they are mostly mountains covered in snow.
Story: formed from the second largest collection of Krashnium in the system, as other compounds collected on it a world came to be, the Krashnium was covered by Iron and soil which is why the planet was not targeted by the Wolfix when they came because the Krashnium was all underground. Life was unable to form on the surface but the oceans did form life however, this makes it able to be settled because there was a food source.
Solar system: The Festas System

Race

Spoiler:

Name: Meox
Abilities: Because of thier natural feline figure and instincts they are good at stalking, hunting and Running at great speeds, they are fast learners as it did not take them long to figure out how the wolfix's technology worked. With thier bodies being those of big cats they are very intimidating especially with thier saber teeth and loud roars. Since they live on a planet with highly explosive minerals they learned to use this as a resource to make weapons with for hunting.
Description: bipedal, 7'2" average height, tan fur with brown stripes (tabby pattern) and lion mane on males in the Mohawk area. All teeth are canine two saber teeth dominate the face.

(he has pants on btw)

Civilization

Spoiler:

Name: Me'ron Sepa
Description: after defeating the wolfix the Me'ron (meaning Meox-ron [ron was the tribe name] kingdom)tribe conquered the other tribes and they all became one tribe. The government is very new and is ruled by Chat Gato I. The capital is in the center of Ura. Dictatorship
Religion: Animistic: everything has a soul
Backstory: The Meox started as a simple dominant carnivore of the planet and so evolved into the bipedal beings before you, the Me'ron tribe was well known for their power and many of the other Meox tribes avoided war with them. Because of the high amount of Krashnium near the location of the Me'ron tribe, the Wolfix people gladly attacked them. However they were unaware of the Me'ron's prepossessed knowledge of Krashnium and were defeated after a massive barrage of krashnium toward thier mothership. When the mothership crashlanded hear the Me'ron tribe they quickly scoured it and killed the Wolfix inside, even with the Wolfix's superior weaponry. After such major experiments started with the crashed technology to learn how it works. And through the wolfix's visual instructions they quickly learned how the technolgy worked and thus went to conquer the other tribes. Now as a whole the Me'ron Sepa  Seek to learn more about the galaxy and the larger picture of things. The first thing they did was colonize the planet Sing next to them, but unfortunately the tribe Me'trek Sepa formed there and there is now civil war
Race:Meox
Actual era:Tribal

Name: Me'trek Sepa
Description: A tribe from Croy that when established upon Sing rebelled and became their own faction, and are at civil war with Me'ron Sepa, Ruled By Qui Jan I. The capital is on Java. Monarchy-Rebellion
Religion: Animistic: everything has a soul
Backstory: The Me'trek were once a simple tribe on the eastern edge of Ura that mostly worked with fishing, they were the first to see the Wolfix enter the planet (its not re-entry if this is its first entrance) and simply thought it was a meteor shower, later they found The Me'ron tribe attacking and collecting the tribes to be part of a super tribe. when the Me'ron Sepa finally left for space they headed toward Sing and sent Me'trek there, which found this the opportune time to rebel.
Race:Meox
Actual era:Tribal

Ship

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((I basically dont know what you want me to write for the description, it pretty much seems to be a version of history, unless you mean "Type" of government))

[kimi]

Making the normal app(s), and then a second minor faction, as a rebellion against the first

Reserve me!

[kimi]

Just curious, can you have several organizations? Cause wouldn't a rebellion be an organization (unofficially)

[Kinkaz]

Solawind, on 12 June 2012 - 04:12 AM, said:

Also correct me if im wrong, but we can start in any era we choose? just want to be sure because i dont want to draw farmers and find out that its not that evolved yet...))

((Start in any era of your choice))

kimi, on 12 June 2012 - 01:10 PM, said:

Just curious, can you have several organizations? Cause wouldn't a rebellion be an organization (unofficially)

((You can have several organizations. Also, what does the last sentence mean?))

Solawind, on 12 June 2012 - 06:24 AM, said:

Planet

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Name: Marrooon
Caracteristics:

Planet Marrooon is a desolate and barren planet, the population being very small and the planets surface barely livable. Marrooon is approximately 90% water though none of which is reccomended to be ingested by living creatures and a rough mineral rich soil makes up of what is the little land that inhabits the planets surface. The entire planet is encased in a thick, noxios, purple gas that is the creatures living there's equivalent of human's oxygen. The Flora that exists on planet Marrooon is all of a dense reddish colour in nature;

The fruit that grows on these extreme-surviving plants is a delicacy to the local inhabitants and is highly reguarded for being one of the only sources of liquid that is consumable. These tree-like plants have soft and fluffy leave-equivalents which are commonly harvested for bedding. Another reddish plant that is cultivated is Whheat (Double H on purpose.);

This plant is the most commonly farmed plant on the planet and is the base ingredient for most consumables created by the Raahhk.
There is Few other creatures surviving in the wastelandish plains of Marrooon, the most notable is the Kueraak;

These sheep-like creatures are docile in nature and are commonly kept in herds. they are used for their soft wool, though their skin is made of a rock-like substance so they are rarely used as livestock.
Map: The planet consists of dusty, mineral-enriched soils that are great for harvesting, though the climate is always warm and windy. <For map refer to planet above for now, soon i will make a map once i decide on some civilisations.>
Story: The planet is of a simmilar size to earth, it has only existed for a billion years, being quite a young planet. Marroon is and has always been desolate, the creatures living on its dusty terrain whom have adapted to it's harsh conditions are in their Neolithic stage. The planets evoloution has rapidly increased up until this point, though the creatures show little further development as their lifestyle suits them for their planet perfectly.
Solar system: <Don't have any in mind yet, it'd be nice if someone else made a solar system and i could tag along, ill give it a bit, if all else fails ill make my own.>

Race

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Name: Raahhk
Abilities: The Raahhk are a Neolithic race, their main skills include weaving linen, cultivating animals and crops along with surviving the harsh conditions their planet shoves in their faces every day. The Raahhk are small Lynx-like creatures standing at a height of around 50cm, carrying tools carefully crafted out of the dark reddish wood of the local treees and wearing their Dust-protecting garments these fluffy creatures are ready for just about anything previosly encountered on their planet.
Description:

The Raahhk have two fingers along with an apossable thumb on each hand, they have two extra Arms situated under the first two, though these are slightly shorter and do not retain the strength the main two have <sort of like left hands for right handed people...>. Their bodies are covered in a thick orangeish fur that blends well with the reddish-brown dust that covers the planets landmass and they have four sharp peircing eyes that seem blank, they usually cover the most of their eyes as they only really need one to see. They have double layered eyelids, the underlayer being a clear lid they use to block out dust.
The Raahhk have flat teeth like that of a human, though their canines are elongated and are strong enough to break the rock-like shell of the fruit found growing on the bottom of the treees.

((Let me know if i missed anything... and sorry for the drawing quiality, im not the best at using technology to draw.))

((Accepted))

[Phoden]

(Not Ready yet)


Galaxy application:

Name: Tandelore
Caracteristics: Misses an actual galactic core causing it to be more of a collection of solar systeems in a close proximity to them. This causes it to be more a loose formation. But the stars are of an averege age.
Picture (optional):
Cluster:A random collection of stars.



Solar system application:

Name:Tar'Don
Caracteristics: Tar'don has a sun with a diameter of 1.992×11⁶ km. It has 3 planets and one gas giant.
of the three planets 2 support life . The one that doesn't is a barren planet closests to the sun. It's called T'mar the second planet is Luzien and the third is Cyiadon. The Gas gian is called  Red eye for its many red spots in its gass surface.
Map (optional):
Story:( I think I actualy mentioned that also on story)
Galaxy: Tandelore


Planet application:

Name:Cyiadon
Caracteristics:Cyiadon was a planet just like earth. But it got polluted like hell by its former inhabitants. Its oceans have become an molecule composition of 20 % water , 60% liquid nuclear garabge. and 20% acid.

The Atmpshere itself has become 80% CO2 and  toxic.  The planet is on places either completly barren pruple sand or ourple ish mutant plants.
Map (optional):
Story: The planet was first setteled by the Tardonians from wich the planet got its name. They were an succesfull civlization yet they where not very green and so forth. After industralization it took them 300 years to completly ruin their planet for their lifeform. Yet there technology was so advanced they were able to survive in domed cities and began space exploration. Yet they didin't saw their polluted planet as something bad but good. New lifeforms and mutations came to be on the planet. They began using these new mutant lifeforms to go with there civlization almost completly biological. Breeding organic space ships , lazers , plasma , grown troops. All went perfect untill (See race sheet)

Solar system:Tar'don

Race Application:

Name:
Abilities:
Description:

Name: So, you never went to a school before?
Abilities: What is your race capable of? 7 lines as minimum
Description: How does it look like? One pic and definition of certain parts are required. And the parts must be defined with one sentence at least. If not, 7 lines as minimum

Civilization application:

Name:
Description:
Religion:
Backstory:
Race:
Actual era:

Name: ...
Description: Describe your civilization. 7 lines as minimum.
Religion: If you are near the Earth, you may use an Earth religion like Hinduism. But otherwise, make up another one. The posting of a Pantenon of gods isnt obligatory but encouraged.
Backstory: If you are chosing a civilization that is on the Neolithic to lower, it isnt necessary, but otherwise, tell the story of your nation. The requirements are the same as the description.
Race: The race of your nation. At least tell the majoritary race.
Actual era: The era your nation is going through from the many eras in the era section.

[krazaz]

((finished with my app check it out now))

[Kinkaz]

krazaz, on 12 June 2012 - 07:20 AM, said:

REAL APP GO!

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Cluster

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Name: Gorgon Cluster
Characteristics: several strings of galaxies from one point(believed to be an unimaginably large blackhole)
Supercluster: Virgo Supercluster (same as the Local cluster (of the milkyway))

Galaxy

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Name: Kronus galaxy
Characteristics: known for a large amount of nebulae
Picture (optional):((credit to nasa, actual galaxy shown: NGC 300))
Cluster: Gorgon Supercluster

Solar System

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Name: Sunga System
Characteristics: 7 planets: 4 terrestrial (two in goldilocks zone (signified by *)); Jomba, Croy*, Sing*, and Waatar(names interchangeable with whomever wants part of the system), 3 gas giants; Gaar, Strem, and Shen
Map (optional): standard layout, terrestrials near star, gas giants behind the terrestrials
Story: terrestrial planets contain a large amount of the rare compound:Krashnium stable highly explosive rock, kinetic energy causes reaction (causing a fist sized stone of such to act like a grenade).
Galaxy Kronos Galaxy

Planet

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Name: Croy (Sunga II)
Characteristics: of the planets in the Sunga System, this planet holds the highest quantity of  Krashnium, but contains little other minerals, the planet has an oxygen atmosphere and has G2 gravity. The planet is primarily continent mostly plains, the planet is only 40% water, climate is mostly arid.
Map (optional): large triangular continent known as Ura, many lakes and rivers run throughout it, an ocean is on the otherside, containing small islands.
Story: formed from the largest collection of Krashnium in the system, as other compounds collected on it a world came to be, high reactions of the Krashnium formed a similar situation to the mass meteorical bombardment of earth, life formed on this planet.
Solar system: The Sunga System

Race

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Name: Meox
Abilities: Because of thier natural feline figure and instincts they are good at stalking, hunting and Running at great speeds, they are fast learners as it did not take them long to figure out how the wolfix's technology worked. With thier bodies being those of big cats they are very intimidating especially with thier saber teeth and loud roars. Since they live on a planet with highly explosive minerals they learned to use this as a resource to make weapons with for hunting.
Description: bipedal, 7'2" average height, tan fur with brown stripes (tabby pattern) and lion mane on males in the Mohawk area. All teeth are canine two saber teeth dominate the face. (( picture will be added later))

Civilization
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Name: Me'ron Sepa
Description: after defeating the wolfix the Me'ron tribe conquered the other tribes and they all became one tribe. The government is very new and is ruled by Chat Gato I. The capital is in the center of Ura.
Religion: Animistic: everything has a soul
Backstory: The Meox started as a simple dominant carnivore of the planet and so evolved into the bipedal beings before you, the Me'ron tribe was well known for their power and many of the other Meox tribes avoided war with them. Because of the high amount of Krashnium near the location of the Me'ron tribe, the Wolfix people gladly attacked them. However they were unaware of the Me'ron's prepossessed knowledge of Krashnium and were defeated after a massive barrage of krashnium toward thier mothership. When the mothership crashlanded hear the Me'ron tribe they quickly scoured it and killed the Wolfix inside, even with the Wolfix's superior weaponry. After such major experiments started with the crashed technology to learn how it works. And through the wolfix's visual instructions they quickly learned how the technolgy worked and thus went to conquer the other tribes. Now as a whole the Me'ron Sepa (meaning Meox-ron [ron was the tribe name] kingdom) Seek to learn more about the galaxy and the larger picture of things.
Race:Meox
Actual era:Tribal

((You left a few parts without the minimum requisites for acceptance, for example, the description of both the nation and your race app as a whole. Soon, I will fill out my app in order to help people who can't fill the app))

[krazaz]

((sorry but i cant make sense of what you said, what do you mean "as a whole"?))

[krazaz]

((After looking through my old notes I found my old history, i will be editing MAJORLY and a picture will come soon))

((sorry for double post, and i added the picture, i also have a ship picture, and im working on an armored meox picture next.I dont know where to put the ship picture so im putting it as an extra))