this is the best shortstory i ever read
i hope it will end up as an real book because i really enjoy reading it again and again and again...
reading this story is one of the best things i can do if i wanna do something else as playing minecraft
just please keep up the good work and bring us chapter four(please)
Aww thank you, I promise that chapter 4 will be up by the end of the day, at least by 10:30am tomorrow.
Very nice story. You just need to slow it down because it didn't make much sense. Also. Make the chapters longer because then I can enjoy your story even more.
But all up Great story
P.S I used to make my story's very fast aswel, but then I decided to slow it down and add much more detail.
Thanks, I'm not trying to go with a horror type of story, but I could. The plotline is not very developed yet.
Also Chapter 2 now up
Still looking forward to it
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Thanks! I'll work on it... tommorow.
Meanwhile watch these dogs run http://omfgdogs.com/
EDIT: Chapter 3 now up
Aww
But all up Great story
P.S I used to make my story's very fast aswel, but then I decided to slow it down and add much more detail.