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#1

FeatheryNinja

Posted 16 May 2012 - 08:29 PM

Hello guys and welcome to poetry page. As revision for upcoming English literature papers I have wrote some poems to try to help me understand poems by others. I'm no Poet Laureate so don't expect Spike Milligan, but I'd love to hear feedback from you guys!

Poem No. 1
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Through the darkness a flash of green.
Heart trembles, what was seen?
I gather minerals that went a miss,
Through the dusty air vibrates a hiss.
Now I realise it is a creeper,
His presence readying the Grim Reaper.
Cornered I draw back my aged bow,
But he is slicker than Neo.
Hiss, tick-tick boom,
Steve awakens to morn in his room.

A bit cheesy with the ending but who cares eh?
Stay tuned for more to come!
I just your average (British) Guy. I have a YouTube channel located at: youtube.com/FeatheryNinja
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Unilegger
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Posted 16 May 2012 - 08:55 PM

I didn't get it
I don't really care
Now go do something important
and have a teddy bear
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themagickid
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Posted 17 May 2012 - 03:15 PM

I like it.
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#4

FeatheryNinja

Posted 18 May 2012 - 10:09 PM

Thanks magickid, I'll try to gut up some more tomorrow!
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kr00k3d100
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Posted 19 May 2012 - 09:05 PM

This is pretty good, man!
Have a story to be read? Visit Minefic: Legacy. (The original shall be missed)
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#6

Epicguy15

Posted 19 May 2012 - 09:21 PM

Message me if you do post more!

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mackky
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Posted 20 May 2012 - 02:31 AM

some people might not know who Neo is though, maybe you could consider changing that?
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creeperfighter3
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Posted 20 May 2012 - 04:21 AM

Pretty cool bro!

I'm a texture pack artist. Not a very good one, but an artist just the same. Here's the pack I'm working on. http://www.minecraft.../#entry12746144


#9

FeatheryNinja

Posted 01 June 2012 - 11:52 AM

This is a poem I did at school when I was there and got an A for, its not Minecraft related and its a bit more deep than the first poem but any way, here it is...


Yellow Osmosis Likes Orangutans


YOLO is not original,

its over use, abysmal.

Why not enforce a ban,

on people orange with fake-tan,

a profanity barrier for just one phrase.

You can’t escape it’s menacing ways,

left, right and centre, YOLO for days.

Shall I digress?

We need to repress…

emotions.

Apparently you only live once,

to me mate, your a nonce.

I just your average (British) Guy. I have a YouTube channel located at: youtube.com/FeatheryNinja
I post Hardcore Adventures, Mod Spotlights and I have a Let's Play series, anyone is welcome to visit!

#10

Xarthador
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Posted 16 October 2012 - 10:01 PM

You've got a good way with words.
Mess with the best. Die like the rest.
MCPES <3