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Jul 28, 2012Posted in: Fan ArtQuote from meed96
Amazing storyline. I also agree with many of the things the people are saying here. I'm 11 myself, and only have started writing stories. I have one i'm doing now, but it's not out yet. The hardest part about writing, is all the boring (to me a least when i writing) details. When i write something, i want to get done, i don't want all the details. When i'm reading, the details are the best part. Your okay on the details here, but they could use a little improvement.
Also, another tip here, put three spaces in front of each paragraph. I know it sounds weird, but its the official rules (can't think of a different word than rules) of writing.
I'm looking forward to the next part, but i do find the fact that he becomes the leader of the army so fast when the king dies kind of strange. For two reasons.
1. There already would be a leader of the army.
2. If for some reason there wasn't, the king would have advisers and SOMEONE who oversees the army. I mean, when you sign up at age 16, who do you go to? The king? If the king did rule the army, he would at least have an aid, or second in command.
Just find it kind of strange thats all.
Overall, great job, i'm looking forward to the next part.
Thanks for commenting!
It's called indenting by the way. When you do indent a paragraph, it doesn't work. Just something with the Minecraft Forums that doesn't let you, kind of sucks.
Jul 26, 2012Posted in: DiscussionQuote from Sutinen
Probably, because every single 10-13 year old on a server asks if he can get creative, a stack of iron blocks and wants to be an admin. And you can't trust them, because they think they can just push you around on PvP servers when you clearly don't have anything else than a stone pick.
This is the reason I hate little kids. They're immature and probably some spoiled kids.
But, if some kid doesn't do that, I treat him the same way as everyone.
Every single one? Don't even say that. I am 13. I'm mature. I think before I act. I'm twice as mature as some 16 year olds I come across on minecraft. I use almost 100% perfect spelling and grammar. Don't believe me on that one? http://www.minecraft...-the-bison-war/ - Most people were surprised that came from a 13 year old kid. "And you can't trust them, because they think they can just push you around on PvP servers when you clearly don't have anything else than a stone pick." Isn't that PvP? I highly doubt that you would not kill someone on a PvP server with just a stone pick if you came across the opportunity. Of course, that decision depends on the type of server. For example, if it was a faction server, you might not want to kill him if he's a member of the strongest and largest faction on the server, but if it was an all out anarchy PvP server, then I can understand why someone would do that.
Jul 17, 2012lipeckiz posted a message on Highland Grove [Village RPG] [Jobs] [Currency] [Elemental Villages] You're Going to Want to See ThisHaven't had the time to get online, sorry! Hopefully tonight or tomorrow.Posted in: MCX360: Quick Sessions / Minigames
Jul 17, 2012Gamer Tag: Komodo ChipmunkPosted in: MCX360: Quick Sessions / Minigames
Do you accept to respect the rules and other players and moderators? I certainly do.
Do you understand that if you fail to follow the rules you will be automaticly kicked? Yes
Are you mature? (a person that respects others and won't cause problems) Yes
Jul 16, 2012lipeckiz posted a message on What type of server are people looking for? [MAKING A SERVER]Well, I want to know what kind of server people want. I'm making a server but I want it to be something that the community is in need of. Any ideas?Posted in: MCX360: Quick Sessions / Minigames
Jul 16, 2012lipeckiz posted a message on Highland Grove [Village RPG] [Jobs] [Currency] [Elemental Villages] You're Going to Want to See ThisPosted in: MCX360: Quick Sessions / MinigamesQuote from YMCMBjdubz
Gamertag: A Can O DrPeppr
Would you like to be the leader of a village?: Sure
Job: Lumberjack is preferred but will accept any job
Sorry, you cannot be the leader. There is already a leader.
Jul 16, 2012lipeckiz posted a message on Highland Grove [Village RPG] [Jobs] [Currency] [Elemental Villages] You're Going to Want to See ThisHighland Grove is a server based on the elements of Minecraft. There will be four different warring villages for each element. There will be a village located in the a village located in the Nether, a village located underwater, a village located underground, and a village located in the sky.Posted in: MCX360: Quick Sessions / Minigames
Each village will have people to do the jobs they need. The list of jobs are below.
Miner - Goes underground and gathers ores for his village.
Lumberjack - Gathers lumber for his village.
Farmer - Plants and harvests wheat, sugarcane, and cactus.
Hunter - Kills passive and hostile mobs and gathers their drops for the village.
The server will start when each village has a leader and another person.
Leader: Komodo Chipmunk
Leader: Elite JRFisher
1. No griefing
2. No duplicating
3. No pillars
Would you like to be the leader of a village?: (check first to see if all the villages have a leader)
Jul 9, 2012lipeckiz posted a message on The Darkness [Survival] [PvP] [Hard Mode] WARNING: Not everybody who applies will be accepted..Posted in: MCX360: Quick Sessions / Minigames
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