No, it will not be the same cause one it will have a new lore, so no Ruined World 3. Those who played this server are the experienced and have gained the knowledge of what made the server go down and as us as the driving force with everyone's support. We will do our best to perfect the Role playing survival server experience.
Any other questions?
How will we know when the server's up? :3 I assume you'll post it here, on this thread, to let us players of RW2 know?
I HAVE CONTACTED PRISCO, to no avail. He has not responded to texts or skype, so i assume he dead. If he isn't and can get ME the map i will gladly host the server and actually admin it with events and so on. Hopefully he's not dead, but as of now i assume he's dead.
Honestly, I'd rather have the other guys, the devs, whoever the are, I'm pretty sure Kronaak is one, make the new server. Read up, JoeShmoy was talking about them. He already gave bits of info on it. The lore was getting old and only a few people actually RPed and were active. I think a fresh start is best.
I'm good with plugins and permissions and such. I stopped counting how many servers I've ran at 11. If you need any help plugins or permissions or anything relating, I'm your guy.
...you want to go to the "real" Ruined World 2 that has like 4 applications...
Hmmm... well, guess not really than. I assumed since it had been here at least as long as this it would have at least as many active players :/ SO, server is shutting down than?
So....what happened in the two days I didn't play...? From what I can tell, Saper made a bull **** story about the server getting hacked because he didn't wanna tell us the server's getting shut down? If it is getting shut down, can someone link me to the other Ruined World server, cause I'd like to continue playing in some way If you don't know who I am, It's Hawke.
MineCraft account name:RedDead445 Country of Residence and Time Zone:USA, Eastern Stand Time Define roleplaying in your own words, do you have any past roleplaying experiences? Role playing is acting out the role of another character. I've played on my brothers RP server, and some prison RP servers. Ex: Raider: I'll enjoy this greatly. Zane: As will I. I kill scum like you for play. Raider: Ooh, I'm not any regular scum! *Raider charges, sword blazing* *Zane ducks under the blade and attempts to reach back and stab the raider* Raider: AGH...Bu...t.....how... *The raider falls to the ground, bleeding and grunting softly.* What is your reason for applying to this server? I would like to play with my brother, as well as play a Post Apocalyptic server. Have you been banned before, if so why?No. Do you agree with our rules? Yes. Will you use the server's official texture pack?Yes.
In Character Character name: (Last names aren't required)Zane What is your character's race?: Human Your character's story so far:Zane is a Hunter. He hunted for for family when he was younger, on the road. They were traveling merchants, and he received training from his father. His father was an avid hunter himself, and was balanced with a sword. He hunted meat and killed the old fuel bots, securo drones and the raiders for supplies. Him and his brother, Hawke, left there family, after they turned 18. They are twins, and as such turned 18 at the same time. There father tried to stop them, but as they came of age, decided to leave. They didn't like the boring life style of a traveling merchant, and preferred a life with more risks. Him and his family often stopped in towns, and avoided fights. After Zane had his first fight, he realized his talent, and ever since loves to fight. He lives with his brother, who is a trader and farmer. He now lives in the town of Zeridia, which is owned by his brother. He hunts and gathers meat and other supplies for him and his brother. H He is travels the land, making allies where available, and scavenging when can. He also hunts meat for him and his brother, and selling whatever is left. Does or did your character have any companions or family? A brother, named Hawke. Hawke is a traveling merchant and farmer, living in the woods. (Hawke is an actual player in game, and really is my brother. His IGN is IEclipseII) How old is your character? 19 Describe what your character looks like, any distinctive physical features? Zane is very tall and broad shouldered. How does your character act? Zane is good at surviving off the land, from his years of hunting for his family.. He makes friends and allies wherever possible. He stands tall and proud, and show loyalty to whoever is friendly to him. Character's occupation: Hunter Does your character have an education? (Read or write) Zane learned to read and write from his Mother, who kept tabs on the stocks from their trading. Any special skills that your character has, nothing unbalanced: Zane relies on brute strength to win his fights, and nothing more. He is a natural born warrior, and is steady with a sword. Does your character hate or fear anything:?: Zane fears being alone at night. In his hunting days, he lost his friend, and was injured himself. Ever since that night, walking alone at night, enemies everywhere he has been scared to be out alone at night, fearful one of the creatures or raiders will kill him. Describe an example of your character in great suffering and pain (RP): Zane lie there, on the ground. A gash in his stomach. That power cell sword hit him good. He grunted with every forward motion. He screamed in agony, as the raider shot him. He was hit between the shoulder blades, and the bullet went through his body, through the gash. His already agonizing painful stomach wound burning and searing with pain. As he lay there, the raider walked up, and stuck the knife in the gash. Zane blacked out from pain, and remembers nothing more. Provide an image of your character's skin:
The reason that I know you haven't properly read the lore is that if you read the timeline you would understand that the war happened hundreds of years prior to the current date in the server. That being said, the United States ceased to exist around 2055, which makes it impossible for your character to be specifically ex-military and ex-special ops.
For these reasons: a) your story needs to be redone completely, your occupation needs to be edited, c) he wouldn't have learned to read and write in the military because there is/was no military, d) no military means he didn't learn survival skills in the military, and e) The problem with the fear is that your entire squad was killed in the military, again to reiterate something rather repetitive in this comment, there was/is no military.
Characters that address the and utilize the lore of the server or those that are accepted.
On a side note, I don't understand what your character is wearing in your skin that you posted, so some explanation on that as well would be useful.
Alright... so, if you read the top of that post, you read "This is for my brother"
I didn't type this app for him, but did give him permission to use my account... I watched him read the lore, whether he didn't pay attention or ignored it, I'll tell him to fix the app... sorry for the trouble.
1) Your "story so far" makes no relevant sense. I hate when people do this. Read the server's lore and you may understand why, I am not going spoon-feed you an answer to make this better. The only thing I will say on top of what I already have, this needs to be at least 2-3 paragraphs in length, go in detail about events in his childhood, growing up in the wastes, etc.
2) Not an occupation, again read lore.
3) Where he learned to read and write, change it, lore issue again.
4) Skills, where did he learn to wield a sword and survive off the land?
5) Change your fear and hate, lore issue YET AGAIN
Guess what your biggest issue is? Yes, lore. From this application it seems to me that you didn't even read the lore for the server, as most parts of your character conflict with that. Read it over, make the changes, and then re-post an application.
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1) I'll fix my story so far, but let it be known I have read the lore.
2)Occupation: Ex military, I used to be a military soldier. I have no other "job" or specialization other then that. I'm not a hunter, farmer, trader etc...
3)You can learn thing in the Military, for ex: Reading and writing.
4)He learned to wield a sword and survive off the land in the Military....
5)Why do I have to change my fear? Where in lore does it say ANYTHING about being afraid of the dark?
MineCraft account name:RedDead445 Country of Residence and Time Zone:USA, Eastern Stand Time Define roleplaying in your own words, do you have any past roleplaying experiences? Role playing is acting out the role of another character. I've played on my brothers RP server, and some prison RP servers. What is your reason for applying to this server? I would like to play with my brother, as well as play a Post Apocalyptic server. Have you been banned before, if so why?No. Do you agree with our rules? Yes. Will you use the server's official texture pack?Yes.
In Character Character name: (Last names aren't required)Zane What is your character's race?: Human Your character's story so far:Zane is an Ex Soldier for the U.S Military Spec. Ops. He is a broad shouldered, tall man. He is travels the land, making allies where available, and scavenging when can. Does or did your character have any companions or family? A brother, named Hawke. He is a traveling merchant and farmer, living in the woods. (Hawke is an actual player in game, and really is my brother. His IGN is IEclipseII) How old is your character? 19 Describe what your character looks like, any distinctive physical features? Zane is very tall and broad shouldered. How does your character act? Zane is good at surviving off the land. He makes friends and allies wherever possible. He stands tall and proud, and show loyalty to whoever is friendly to him. Character's occupation:Ex Military Does your character have an education? (Read or write) Zane learned to read and write in the military. Any special skills that your character has, nothing unbalanced: Zane relies on brute strength to win his fights, and nothing more. He is a natural born warrior, and is steady with a sword. Does your character hate or fear anything?Zane fears being alone at night. In the war, he lost all his men, and was injured himself. Ever since that night, walking alone at night, enemies everywhere he has been scared to be out alone at night. Describe an example of your character in great suffering and pain (RP): Zane lie there, on the ground. A gash in his stomach. That power cell sword hit him good. He grunted with every forward motion. He screamed in agony, as the soldier shot him. He was hit between the shoulder blades, and the bullet went through his body, through the gash. His already agonizing painful stomach wound burning and searing with pain. As he lay there, the opposing soldier walked up, and stuck the knife in the gash. Zane blacked out from pain, and remembers nothing more. Provide an image of your character's skin: **** yo ****, I got a mustache
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Not a bad app at all, but I have a very large concern with your character's skills. You say he's a good marksman and that he's agile and can dodge "most any attack." Sorry man, but that's too OP. You can't be agile enough to dodge every single attack. That would make any RP fight extremely dissatisfying for the opposing player. I'm not saying he can't be agile, he just can't dodge "most any attack." It's just not fair. Also, i've said this a billion times... TOO MANY MARKSMAN. Not everyone can be a skilled sniper. If you would change this before joining the server i'm sure we'd be grateful. Hell, just about everyone needs a botanist/farmer. Just a suggestion.
Regardless ACCEPTED
Cheers!
Guess I could change my app a bit. I could say my Father preferred to gather/hunt our own foods, and as such, I have a diverse knowledge of plants.
Out of Character MineCraft account name: IEclipseII Country of Residence and Time Zone: USA, Eastern Standard Time Define roleplaying in your own words, do you have any past roleplaying experiences? I define role playing as acting in the role of a made person, and acting as if you actually are that person. I've played two other Post Apocalyptic RP servers, have ran one and played one prison RP server. What is your reason for applying to this server? I used to play a server such as this, and being that it has closed, would like to play another. Have you been banned before, if so why? No. Do you agree with our rules? Yes. Will you use the server's official texture pack? Of course.
In Character Character name: (Last names aren't required) Hawke What is your character's race?: Human Your character's story so far: Born to a family with a small fortune, he was given free will since young age. His parents were traveling traders, and sold rare, scavenged material at high price. They paid enough attention to Hawke, but being traveling alone, gave him freedom to run about as long as he was in sight of his parents, and near no potential danger. His father was well trained with a sword, and an accurate marksmen with a bow and gun. His mother dealed with trading, and his father set up secure encampments and protected the family from raiders and mutants. Hawke is very persuasive, learning tricks from his mother, who being a trader, was persuasive herself. Hawke prefers agility over brute strength, and tries to avoid a fight when in one, but if forced to fight, will. Hawke still travels the road with his parents, never staying in one place for to long. Does or did your character have any companions or family? A mother and father. How old is your character? 19 Describe what your character looks like, any distinctive physical features? Hawke is skinny, though toned from his years of climbing cliffs for fun, and doing other impressive acrobatic feats. Hawke is of average height, 6' 1", and weighs in at 140 lbs. Hawke has a scar under his left eye, from when at the age of 7, tried to pick up a sword that was too heavy, and yanking it up and cutting his face with the blade. How does your character act? Hawke is persuasive, and prefers to stray from fighting. During fights, Hawke prefers to dodge attacks and flee or persuade the attacker in hopes of not fighting. He is extremely loyal, and will treat anyone with respect and trust, as long as they treat him the same way. He stands tall and proud, and is friendly to all. Character's occupation: Traveling tader Does your character have an education? (Read or write) Hawke was taught to read and write by his father, who taught himself with the little knowledge that he had from his father. His mother taught him basic adding and subtracting that she learnt to deal with the profits and losses in her business. Any special skills that your character has, nothing unbalanced: Hawke is very agile, and can dodge most any attack. Hawke is also very accurate with a bow or gun, and knows how to use a sword, though not quite as well as his primary choice in weaponry. Does your character hate or fear anything? Hawke fears Demons. He knows that if eye contact is made, they can teleport around him. He has a hard time hitting them with a bow or gun, be it that they teleport away. He also has trouble dodging attacks of theirs, since they can teleport behind him, and attack. Describe an example of your character in great suffering and pain (RP): It was the dead of night. By the position of the moon, Hawke guessed to be around 2 AM. He crept into his fathers tent, and shook him gently. "Father, May I borrow your bow? I wish to hunt some Xig and surprise mother for her birthday with the meat." "It is 2 AM Hawke. The are raiders out, not to mention all the mutants and other creatures in this damned world." "But father, please. Mother loves the meat! And it is her 50th birthday. It is not something that should be thrown off so easily." "...Go Hawke. You may take my bow and 3 arrows. You can hunt as long as you will, but once you run out of arrows. I want you back here". Hawke left and went out to hunt for Xig meat. Hawke loves to be out at night, and as such adjusts to the dark quickly. Once he was past the canvas wall that Hawke and his Father set up around the camp, he adjusts almost immediately to the dark. He scanned the area, and when looking spotted a glimpse of purple in the night. He knew he was spotted. "Oh fu-" with that Hawke was tossed back and flew 5 feet. The Demon was on him. Shaking eerily, it looked down at him. Hawke drew his bow, and notched and arrow. He drew back and let the arrow fly, but with that the demon disappeared. He lay there, shaking. Demons were his greatest fear, and he knew he didn't have long before it was on him again. Hawke stood, and looked around, hastily drawing an arrow. In his haste, the arrow, aiming near his feet, fell from the bow. The string was not so far drew, but the arrow pierced his foot slightly, the leather boot stopping it. Hawke could not walk, and he feared he was going to die. He lay on his stomach. Scrawling in the sand a goodbye note to his mother and father. He then realized, that in his shock, he had forgotten he was only 20 feet from his camp. He went to shout, but saw the demon again, 5 feet away. Hawke froze with fear, knowing these were his last seconds. The demon moved towards Hawke, and as he lay there, looking in the demons eyes, a sword pierced through the demons back. He realized the blade was of his fathers sword, the one they found at a military base. It was a expensive one. One that used one of those rare power cells. His father peered around the Demon, and Hawke fainted, still shaking with fear. His father carried Hawke back to the camp. Provide an image of your character's skin:**** yo ****, I got a mustache
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How will we know when the server's up? :3 I assume you'll post it here, on this thread, to let us players of RW2 know?
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Honestly, I'd rather have the other guys, the devs, whoever the are, I'm pretty sure Kronaak is one, make the new server. Read up, JoeShmoy was talking about them. He already gave bits of info on it. The lore was getting old and only a few people actually RPed and were active. I think a fresh start is best.
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Hmmm... well, guess not really than. I assumed since it had been here at least as long as this it would have at least as many active players :/ SO, server is shutting down than?
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Country of Residence and Time Zone:USA, Eastern Stand Time
Define roleplaying in your own words, do you have any past roleplaying experiences? Role playing is acting out the role of another character. I've played on my brothers RP server, and some prison RP servers. Ex: Raider: I'll enjoy this greatly. Zane: As will I. I kill scum like you for play. Raider: Ooh, I'm not any regular scum! *Raider charges, sword blazing* *Zane ducks under the blade and attempts to reach back and stab the raider* Raider: AGH...Bu...t.....how... *The raider falls to the ground, bleeding and grunting softly.*
What is your reason for applying to this server? I would like to play with my brother, as well as play a Post Apocalyptic server.
Have you been banned before, if so why?No.
Do you agree with our rules? Yes.
Will you use the server's official texture pack?Yes.
In Character
Character name: (Last names aren't required)Zane
What is your character's race?: Human
Your character's story so far:Zane is a Hunter. He hunted for for family when he was younger, on the road. They were traveling merchants, and he received training from his father. His father was an avid hunter himself, and was balanced with a sword. He hunted meat and killed the old fuel bots, securo drones and the raiders for supplies. Him and his brother, Hawke, left there family, after they turned 18. They are twins, and as such turned 18 at the same time. There father tried to stop them, but as they came of age, decided to leave. They didn't like the boring life style of a traveling merchant, and preferred a life with more risks. Him and his family often stopped in towns, and avoided fights. After Zane had his first fight, he realized his talent, and ever since loves to fight. He lives with his brother, who is a trader and farmer. He now lives in the town of Zeridia, which is owned by his brother. He hunts and gathers meat and other supplies for him and his brother. H
He is travels the land, making allies where available, and scavenging when can. He also hunts meat for him and his brother, and selling whatever is left.
Does or did your character have any companions or family? A brother, named Hawke. Hawke is a traveling merchant and farmer, living in the woods. (Hawke is an actual player in game, and really is my brother. His IGN is IEclipseII)
How old is your character? 19
Describe what your character looks like, any distinctive physical features? Zane is very tall and broad shouldered.
How does your character act? Zane is good at surviving off the land, from his years of hunting for his family.. He makes friends and allies wherever possible. He stands tall and proud, and show loyalty to whoever is friendly to him.
Character's occupation: Hunter
Does your character have an education? (Read or write) Zane learned to read and write from his Mother, who kept tabs on the stocks from their trading.
Any special skills that your character has, nothing unbalanced: Zane relies on brute strength to win his fights, and nothing more. He is a natural born warrior, and is steady with a sword.
Does your character hate or fear anything:?: Zane fears being alone at night. In his hunting days, he lost his friend, and was injured himself. Ever since that night, walking alone at night, enemies everywhere he has been scared to be out alone at night, fearful one of the creatures or raiders will kill him.
Describe an example of your character in great suffering and pain (RP): Zane lie there, on the ground. A gash in his stomach. That power cell sword hit him good. He grunted with every forward motion. He screamed in agony, as the raider shot him. He was hit between the shoulder blades, and the bullet went through his body, through the gash. His already agonizing painful stomach wound burning and searing with pain. As he lay there, the raider walked up, and stuck the knife in the gash. Zane blacked out from pain, and remembers nothing more.
Provide an image of your character's skin:
**** YO ****, I GOT A MUSTACHE
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Alright... so, if you read the top of that post, you read "This is for my brother"
I didn't type this app for him, but did give him permission to use my account... I watched him read the lore, whether he didn't pay attention or ignored it, I'll tell him to fix the app... sorry for the trouble.
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1) I'll fix my story so far, but let it be known I have read the lore.
2)Occupation: Ex military, I used to be a military soldier. I have no other "job" or specialization other then that. I'm not a hunter, farmer, trader etc...
3)You can learn thing in the Military, for ex: Reading and writing.
4)He learned to wield a sword and survive off the land in the Military....
5)Why do I have to change my fear? Where in lore does it say ANYTHING about being afraid of the dark?
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MineCraft account name:RedDead445
Country of Residence and Time Zone:USA, Eastern Stand Time
Define roleplaying in your own words, do you have any past roleplaying experiences? Role playing is acting out the role of another character. I've played on my brothers RP server, and some prison RP servers.
What is your reason for applying to this server? I would like to play with my brother, as well as play a Post Apocalyptic server.
Have you been banned before, if so why?No.
Do you agree with our rules? Yes.
Will you use the server's official texture pack?Yes.
In Character
Character name: (Last names aren't required)Zane
What is your character's race?: Human
Your character's story so far:Zane is an Ex Soldier for the U.S Military Spec. Ops. He is a broad shouldered, tall man. He is travels the land, making allies where available, and scavenging when can.
Does or did your character have any companions or family? A brother, named Hawke. He is a traveling merchant and farmer, living in the woods. (Hawke is an actual player in game, and really is my brother. His IGN is IEclipseII)
How old is your character? 19
Describe what your character looks like, any distinctive physical features? Zane is very tall and broad shouldered.
How does your character act? Zane is good at surviving off the land. He makes friends and allies wherever possible. He stands tall and proud, and show loyalty to whoever is friendly to him.
Character's occupation:Ex Military
Does your character have an education? (Read or write) Zane learned to read and write in the military.
Any special skills that your character has, nothing unbalanced: Zane relies on brute strength to win his fights, and nothing more. He is a natural born warrior, and is steady with a sword.
Does your character hate or fear anything?Zane fears being alone at night. In the war, he lost all his men, and was injured himself. Ever since that night, walking alone at night, enemies everywhere he has been scared to be out alone at night.
Describe an example of your character in great suffering and pain (RP): Zane lie there, on the ground. A gash in his stomach. That power cell sword hit him good. He grunted with every forward motion. He screamed in agony, as the soldier shot him. He was hit between the shoulder blades, and the bullet went through his body, through the gash. His already agonizing painful stomach wound burning and searing with pain. As he lay there, the opposing soldier walked up, and stuck the knife in the gash. Zane blacked out from pain, and remembers nothing more.
Provide an image of your character's skin:
**** yo ****, I got a mustache
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Guess I could change my app a bit. I could say my Father preferred to gather/hunt our own foods, and as such, I have a diverse knowledge of plants.
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Out of Character
MineCraft account name: IEclipseII
Country of Residence and Time Zone: USA, Eastern Standard Time
Define roleplaying in your own words, do you have any past roleplaying experiences? I define role playing as acting in the role of a made person, and acting as if you actually are that person. I've played two other Post Apocalyptic RP servers, have ran one and played one prison RP server.
What is your reason for applying to this server? I used to play a server such as this, and being that it has closed, would like to play another.
Have you been banned before, if so why? No.
Do you agree with our rules? Yes.
Will you use the server's official texture pack? Of course.
In Character
Character name: (Last names aren't required) Hawke
What is your character's race?: Human
Your character's story so far: Born to a family with a small fortune, he was given free will since young age. His parents were traveling traders, and sold rare, scavenged material at high price. They paid enough attention to Hawke, but being traveling alone, gave him freedom to run about as long as he was in sight of his parents, and near no potential danger. His father was well trained with a sword, and an accurate marksmen with a bow and gun. His mother dealed with trading, and his father set up secure encampments and protected the family from raiders and mutants. Hawke is very persuasive, learning tricks from his mother, who being a trader, was persuasive herself. Hawke prefers agility over brute strength, and tries to avoid a fight when in one, but if forced to fight, will. Hawke still travels the road with his parents, never staying in one place for to long.
Does or did your character have any companions or family? A mother and father.
How old is your character? 19
Describe what your character looks like, any distinctive physical features? Hawke is skinny, though toned from his years of climbing cliffs for fun, and doing other impressive acrobatic feats. Hawke is of average height, 6' 1", and weighs in at 140 lbs. Hawke has a scar under his left eye, from when at the age of 7, tried to pick up a sword that was too heavy, and yanking it up and cutting his face with the blade.
How does your character act? Hawke is persuasive, and prefers to stray from fighting. During fights, Hawke prefers to dodge attacks and flee or persuade the attacker in hopes of not fighting. He is extremely loyal, and will treat anyone with respect and trust, as long as they treat him the same way. He stands tall and proud, and is friendly to all.
Character's occupation: Traveling tader
Does your character have an education? (Read or write) Hawke was taught to read and write by his father, who taught himself with the little knowledge that he had from his father. His mother taught him basic adding and subtracting that she learnt to deal with the profits and losses in her business.
Any special skills that your character has, nothing unbalanced: Hawke is very agile, and can dodge most any attack. Hawke is also very accurate with a bow or gun, and knows how to use a sword, though not quite as well as his primary choice in weaponry.
Does your character hate or fear anything? Hawke fears Demons. He knows that if eye contact is made, they can teleport around him. He has a hard time hitting them with a bow or gun, be it that they teleport away. He also has trouble dodging attacks of theirs, since they can teleport behind him, and attack.
Describe an example of your character in great suffering and pain (RP): It was the dead of night. By the position of the moon, Hawke guessed to be around 2 AM. He crept into his fathers tent, and shook him gently. "Father, May I borrow your bow? I wish to hunt some Xig and surprise mother for her birthday with the meat." "It is 2 AM Hawke. The are raiders out, not to mention all the mutants and other creatures in this damned world." "But father, please. Mother loves the meat! And it is her 50th birthday. It is not something that should be thrown off so easily." "...Go Hawke. You may take my bow and 3 arrows. You can hunt as long as you will, but once you run out of arrows. I want you back here". Hawke left and went out to hunt for Xig meat. Hawke loves to be out at night, and as such adjusts to the dark quickly. Once he was past the canvas wall that Hawke and his Father set up around the camp, he adjusts almost immediately to the dark. He scanned the area, and when looking spotted a glimpse of purple in the night. He knew he was spotted. "Oh fu-" with that Hawke was tossed back and flew 5 feet. The Demon was on him. Shaking eerily, it looked down at him. Hawke drew his bow, and notched and arrow. He drew back and let the arrow fly, but with that the demon disappeared. He lay there, shaking. Demons were his greatest fear, and he knew he didn't have long before it was on him again. Hawke stood, and looked around, hastily drawing an arrow. In his haste, the arrow, aiming near his feet, fell from the bow. The string was not so far drew, but the arrow pierced his foot slightly, the leather boot stopping it. Hawke could not walk, and he feared he was going to die. He lay on his stomach. Scrawling in the sand a goodbye note to his mother and father. He then realized, that in his shock, he had forgotten he was only 20 feet from his camp. He went to shout, but saw the demon again, 5 feet away. Hawke froze with fear, knowing these were his last seconds. The demon moved towards Hawke, and as he lay there, looking in the demons eyes, a sword pierced through the demons back. He realized the blade was of his fathers sword, the one they found at a military base. It was a expensive one. One that used one of those rare power cells. His father peered around the Demon, and Hawke fainted, still shaking with fear. His father carried Hawke back to the camp.
Provide an image of your character's skin: **** yo ****, I got a mustache