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    posted a message on Big Sister Gulliver Minecraft Server {Whitelisted, Forge}
    Quote from SquidkidYT»

    My username is SquidkidYT, I'm none for encouraging people and have really long hair for a boy (Don't ask why)


    1. I like undertale

    2. my friend Victoria ships 24/7

    3. I like brocoli

    4. I have a Skype account

    5. Own the "Blockopedia"

    I really really want to get on to the server

    One of the main reasons I want to get on is because I HATE playing alone on modded/vanilla minecraft


    Hey, I"m KC and I'm gonna review what I, uh... think is supposed to be an application?
    So firstly, you might want to try actually reading the OP and what's required.
    I'll do my best to break down what's wrong here.

    You haven't labeled your questions. "I'm none for encouraging people" uh.... what? Are you saying you're bad at encouraging people?

    And long hair is great and all, but maybe you do wanna tell use why considering the miniature size of your application. Not sure why it'd be relevant here though, it'd more fit into question 4.

    SO, to sum up so far...
    You haven't answered questions 2 and 3. At all.

    and what seems to be question 4, but since it's not labeled it's hard to know.
    1. Okay I guess, not really unique. You'll wanna elaborate on this.
    2. I'm assuming you mean the fandom sense, but what does your friend Victoria have to do with interesting facts about YOU?
    3. Well, alright. Elaborate, again.
    4. How is this interesting or unique exactly?
    5. Congrats I suppose, but we don't really want minecraft facts in this section.

    Great that you really really want to get on the server, but you'll have to put in more effort than this.
    And... this should be in your question 2, not slapped onto the end.

    So, long story short, you're not accepted. How about actually applying this time?

    -KC
    Posted in: PC Servers
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    posted a message on Big Sister Gulliver Minecraft Server {Whitelisted, Forge}

    1) What is your Minecraft username (or "IGN")?
    IBeliveICanFLY


    2) Please explain why you would like to join the Server.
    To Play with People And Know about this server And how to help become builder and help us making random buildings or whatever

    3) Please explain how your talents, skills, experience, personality traits, and aspirations can help contribute positively to our server.
    Building,Expert at W.D.(World Edit) Good at finding glitches or bugs, good at commands and testing maps or whatever

    4) Please list five random facts about yourself that can help differentiate you from other player.
    Here is my own list of random facts to illustrate how you should list these:

    • I Hace A really stinky Breath
    • I Can Whistle like a Dove
    • I Have A Crazy Character
    • I own a Hamachi Gulliver Server
    • I Like Strong Flavors




    5) To ensure you understand your rights and responsibilities on our server, please read the Novice's Creed, and write down one right or responsibility that you enjoy the most.
    Right

    If held or kidnapped by a Giant player against your will, or attacked by a PvP­obsessed player, you
    have the right to protest the act or defend yourself if necessary.

    Responsabilty


    Please be mindful that the server's size changing theme is for platonic entertainment purposes, and
    that is is visited regularly by children and young adults with equal rights to enjoy the server.

    6) And finally, to confirm that you read the Big Sister Server Quick Guide please write down the name of the official server currency.

    Cheese (yummy)


    Hey, I’m KC and I’ll be reviewing your application today. To start off, I’m going to tell you your application looks way too short, but let’s go into more detail.

    It looks like you had some trouble with your formatting here, so you should look over your application after you post it next time.


    1.It doesn’t appear your username exists. You may want to look over and make sure there’s no spelling errors in there.


    2. I suppose it’s good that you’d like to join and interact with players, but… you can do that on other servers too. In fact, you can do that on almost any server. What’s specific to our server you like? Maybe you like the gulliver mod - but there’s other gulliver servers around that are easier to get into… What is it about ours you like? You also don’t meet the word limit. Remember - 60-90 words.


    3. Other than building, there is really no use for these skills. You won’t have access to any of these things. What do you have to offer that can help us? And once again, you need 60-90 words here.


    4. First of all, all of your facts are extremely short. Please make them all longer.

    - x.x You should consider brushing your teeth more… Either elaborate, or get rid of this fact please. It’s not very relevant.
    - That’s cool, but once again, elaborate on it.
    - What does this mean? Give me more detail.
    - Alright, but we prefer to keep minecraft facts out of this section.Replace this one.
    - This one is fine, but explain more.

    5. Hmm… You may want to explain your right. But it’s nice that you chose both a right and responsibility. Your second one is good.


    6. You got this one, at least.


    Verdict: You’re definitely not ready for whitelisting yet, but read over my review. Don’t forget to repost your new application. Try revising it before and after posting, this time.

    -KC

    Posted in: PC Servers
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    posted a message on Big Sister Gulliver Minecraft Server {Whitelisted, Forge}
    Quote from jankut1»

    Hopefully it isnt marked as spam again..

    1) What is your Minecraft username (or "IGN")?
    jankut


    2) Please explain why you would like to join the Server.
    I would like to join the server because recently, two friends of mine joined the server. I've become exhausted of the vanilla Minecraft experience, and want something more fun.



    3) Please explain how your talents, skills, experience, personality traits, and aspirations can help contribute positively to our server.
    I'd like to contribute the server with my extended knowledge of politics and the II World War, as well as teach others about Minecraft, and other useful things.
    I've had a ton of experience, from hosting my own Minecraft server, to co-owning one, to playing on many. I'm extremely good at juggling fruit and plastic swords, and wtih that, I think I can contribute to the server.

    4) Please list five random facts about yourself that can help differentiate you from other players.
    I'm an aspiring socialist. I'm looking to overthrow all of the other silly parties that don't know what they're talking about. Communism, in my opinion, is the most effective ideology there is.
    I am a supervisor of a very successful fast-food chain, and I'm enjoying my job, working alongside independantly with other fellow young adults.
    I am an avid anime watcher. My favorite anime is Cowboy Bebop, I've watched it 4 times from start to finish.
    I've been playing Minecraft for a few years now. I'm a good PvPer, and I used to have an interesting channel on Minecraft PVP with about 9,000 subscribers.
    I'm currently living with my parents, due to the housing market being very inflated at the moment, and I own two pet ferrets. My third one, Bebe, recently passed away due to a kidney problem.

    5) To ensure you understand your rights and responsibilities on our server, please read the Novice's Creed, and write down one right or responsibility that you enjoy the most.
    "Please read all the Rights and Responsibilities"

    6) And finally, to confirm that you read the Big Sister Server Quick Guide please write down the name of the official server currency.

    Cheese


    Hello there! I'm KC and I'll be reviewing your application.

    1. Got it.

    2. Well, those are both valid reasons, but... you only have 29 words here. What other reasons could you have for joining our servers? Why not join one with modpacks or mods that create worlds? There are many ways to change the Vanilla experience, so we need a little more than this. Even if it is because you prefer Gulliver - there are other Gulliver servers. So, what about our server do you like specifically?

    3. This answer makes the word limit! :) Sharing knowledge is something I can appreciate. Er.. not sure how fruit juggling and plastic swords relates to helping our server, maybe it belongs more in Question 4? Maybe add a little bit more on since once you get rid of that you're a bit short. Still, an improvement from Question 2.

    4.
    a. Okay.
    b. Interesting!
    c. Nice, we've got a few other anime fans here.
    d. We prefer to leave Minecraft facts out of this question, so replace this one please.
    e. That's unfortunate. I hope you're doing alright.

    5. >.> Well I suppose you're trying to be funny, and I concede you are technically right - but I'd appreciate it if you pick another one since there's no real reason you would enjoy this one the most. It doesn't tell us anything.

    6. Yup.

    Alright, so you're not too far off. Fix up Question 2, 3, and 4d, as well as Question 5, and you should be good to go.

    -KC
    Posted in: PC Servers
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    posted a message on Big Sister Gulliver Minecraft Server {Whitelisted, Forge}
    Quote from Sans4454»

    Sorry for being impatient but I've waited 24 hours and no reply once again sorry for being impatient


    >.> If you're so sorry, you just could have waited... Someone will get to you. We don't just forget.
    Posted in: PC Servers
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    posted a message on Big Sister Gulliver Minecraft Server {Whitelisted, Forge}

    Surprise, it's a whitelist server. How about you actually read the main post this time?

    Posted in: PC Servers
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    posted a message on Big Sister Gulliver Minecraft Server {Whitelisted, Forge}
    Quote from zvcx»

    Okay, first is the worst, second is the best.


    1) What is your Minecraft username (or "IGN")?

    zvcxfromaj


    2) Please explain why you would like to join the Server.

    I first found out about the gulliver mod when my brother showed me a mod showcase of it that was made by my favorite youtuber, TheDiamondMinecart. After a little while, I got very interested in the mod, and I played with it almost every day. I eventually found out about The Big Sister Server, and when I looked at the dynamic map, I fell in love with all the towns that people have worked together to make and I really want to be a part of that.


    3) Please explain how your talents, skills, experience, personality traits, and aspirations can help contribute positively to our server.

    I am not trying to brag, but I have to say I am really good at decorative design. I also love building, and I specialize in building underground and I love making tree houses. I am also really good with mods, and I almost never play vanilla minecraft unless I am playing on a minigame server, or if I am testing a new minecraft update. I am an honest, determined hard worker, but I think my best trait is that I am loyal to any server I join. I also LOVE minecraft role plays, and I am very serious about them, too.

    4) Please list five random facts about yourself that can help differentiate you from other players.


    • I am a huge anime fan. My favorites being Fairy Tail, One Piece, and Naruto.
    • If there is anything I like more than anime, it probably has to do with Marvel Comics. (My favorite super hero being Spider Man.)
    • I am a VERY serious gamer. I have made lots of friends playing RPG games, and because I don’t really have any friends that live near me, I play them a lot. I also get really bored when I am not at school, so that’s another reason I play online games. A few of the many games I play are School of Dragons, Fairy Tail Online, Animal Jam, Unlimited Ninja, and Minecraft (obviously).
    • Even though I suck at it, I love to draw. School makes me stressed, and drawing is a good way of calming me down. It relaxes me. I also don’t really have any friends that live near me, so drawing is a good way to relieve my boredom. I like to draw my favorite anime and Marvel characters.

    5) To ensure you understand your rights and responsibilities on our server, please read the Novice's Creed, and write down one right or responsibility that you enjoy the most.


    My favorite right is:


    • You have the right to take the contents of any chest predesignated as a Donation Bin, such as the Spawnington Villager Church donation bins at the global spawn point.

    6) And finally, to confirm that you read the Big Sister Server Quick Guide please write down the name of the official server currency.

    The name of the official server currency is CHEESE!!!!!



    Hi Zvcx,

    I'm KC and I'll be reviewing your second attempt so we can give Burger a break. :)

    QUESTION 2: This is still the same as your first app, which is good. Thank you for visiting Dynmap and checking out some of our towns, I hope you liked Astoria! *nudge nudge wink wink*

    QUESTION 3: Aww, you just added one extra line. But it's nice to know you're a loyal player, which means you might be sticking around for a bit (which always attracts others to play), so it's a great treat to bring with! I love RPs too, so the more the merrier!

    QUESTION 4:
    1, same as before, which is fine.
    2, same as before, which is fine.
    3, y u get bored outside of school? You might need to try out some more outdoor pastimes to unbore yourself. But anyway, that's a lot of online games to try out. :P
    4, Emerald warrior, heh. That looks like a neat little channel, thank you! \0/
    5, there we go, thats a nice other pastime to try out, drawing can be cool! We have an artist thread on the main forum you can join and post your work in!

    QUESTION 5: Heh, this is an old rule, but it checks out. I think Cia is going to revise this in the updated Creed (yes, it's in the works!) \^o^/

    QUESTION 6: And still correct!

    Yep, Burger was right to like this app, it's a really good job and you didn't have a whole lot to fix to make it a keeper! I like what I see and I say you're good for a whitelist! Congratulations and welcome!
    Posted in: PC Servers
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    posted a message on Big Sister Gulliver Minecraft Server {Whitelisted, Forge}

    Okey doke, see you again Saturday.


    After some conversation, Ciabatta and I have decided that you are no longer eligible for application. You've willingly destroyed parts of your application after review (including parts that were already fine), showing an inability to understand/follow instructions. This is reinforced by the fact that the gulliver mod was not installed. The way you speak to staff members is irrespectful and your attitude makes me wonder whether you actually want to be here, or not. But then again - it's one thing to BE here, it's another thing to be able to get along with us, which it doesn't look like you'll be able to do.

    You apparently have no great urge to put any legitimate effort into your application (this is DIFFERENT from just wanting something - you may actually want to be here, but not be willing to work for it).


    -KC
    Posted in: PC Servers
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    posted a message on [MC/Forge][1.6.4] Gulliver the Resizing Mod (v0.14.3 *Oct 21*): changing your perspective of Minecraft [OVER 900,000 downloads]

    Just an FYI- You're supposed to have Gulliver installed BEFORE you apply for the Big Sister server - not after. :U this doesn't exactly look good on you considering the position you're already in.


    http://files.minecraftforge.net/LegacyJavaFixer/legacyjavafixer-1.0.jar

    Drop this in your mod folder - that SHOULD work.

    Posted in: Minecraft Mods
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    posted a message on Big Sister Gulliver Minecraft Server {Whitelisted, Forge}
    Quote from tdmvillager»

    1. IGN: Hey my IGN is LightningVilager just tell you I know how to spell villager it's Minecraft only allows 16 letter's in a name :P


    2. Why you would Like to join the Big Sister Gulliver server!
    There is a lot of answer's to this question I'll list a few.
    Ever since I was born I was interested in size I loved Ant-Man(Has the ability to shrink to the size of an ant) The career I want when I'm older is quantum physicist(Studies subatomic particles thousands of size smaller than microscopic) :o
    and my favorite TV show or should I say anime Is Attack On Titan (Humans are against giant humans) ^_^

    I saw the video credit to whoever made it and it was amazing! lot's of work put into that!


    3. Personality and Trait's!!!
    Ok so this section is gonna be fun to read so hope you enjoy!!! :)
    My personality would be super unique and nerdy
    What I mean by nerdy is science is the best maths is second P.E is last :P
    Some of you may disagree and think I'm wild to hate P.E but I just like the normal scientific one's XD
    Now the rest of my trait's
    Funny I love-making people laugh it just make's me feel like I'm alive I'm enjoying life it make's me feel like we are all gifted with magic :wub:
    last but 100% definitely not least smart. Great at math's, science, geography and history(Especially Egyptology)


    4. 5 Facts about me!!!
    -a.Okay not a real one I love answering personality and fact's about me questions ^_^
    a. I'm in the scout's my job is to help people and do my duty and use my knowledge to help people in different situations.
    b. Ever since I was 2 year's of age I loved Egypt everything at that time was Egypt and still today, Halloween I want to be a mummy, Christmas Can I have a mummy kit please Santa?
    c. I'm in secondary school in Ireland 8th Grade in America.
    d. I know 3 language's French: Bonjour comment allez vous? Irish (Least spoken language in the world!!!) Dia daoibh conas atá sibh? English: Hey what's the crack? and I'm learning Spanish ^_^ Hola Que-tal?
    e. I'm allergic to dog's and can't go close to them as well as pollen and my own conjunctivitis!!! :lol:


    5. I read them all and I got some to list here without copying and pasting
    Keep the atmosphere on the server peaceful laid-back and fun of course !
    ^ Reason I think that fun is the most important one of all the point of this server is for fun and amusement for you and for all!


    6. The currency is Cheese!

    Accepted or not I hope you enjoyed learning about me and me telling you all about myself this may not look that good since I'm 14 and this is my first application ever!!! I just hope you enjoyed learning about me and how I am. :D Enjoy the rest of your day!


    -LightningVilager or just Lightning




    Hey, I'm KC and I'll be reviewing your application. Well, you said you'd reapply in a few months, and here we are. Welcome back, then!


    1. Okay.

    2. When you say a lot you mean "I have one answer but I'll repeat it multiple times in different ways", right? Because you've only got one reason here. Expand this - there's other Gulliver servers, or why not just play on Singleplayer? Why THIS server, a server with a whitelist that - after skimming over your application - I'm starting to think will be too difficult for you.


    3."Super unique"... in... what way... exactly...? Unless you explain more, this adds up to "I don't really know". "Nerdy"- Alright, I guess. Disliking P.E. isn't exactly unusual. Here's an okay answer - making people laugh can be good! Nice of you to tack on "I'm smart" on the end though. (/sarcasm)


    4. Here goes.

    a. Well, okay. Good enough.

    b. Good.

    c. Cool, I guess...? Care to elaborate?

    d. Good.

    e. You seem awfully excited about allergies, but alright. ;)


    5. Surprisingly, correct.


    6. Also surprisingly correct.


    Aaaand... Being 14 isn't an excuse- you're still held to the same standards anyone else would. I'm 14. Other staff are 14. There's been staff younger than 14. By the way- this isn't your first application- if you're trying to trick us, you might want to try harder. You've applied before - it seems to be the only thing you use your account for.


    So, things to fix.


    Question 2, since you have only one reason listed.

    Question 3, since it doesn't really give us much insight on YOU, and basically says "I'm smart and funny!".

    Question 4: Elaborate c.


    Quote from tdmvillager»

    And is it okay if I can record video's on this server I would like to do some role-play one's please :)



    Considering how far your application is from being accepted, I wouldn't worry about this yet. Honestly, it would really depend on the exact situation - if everyone is okay and consenting, then it's probably alright.

    -KC

    Posted in: PC Servers
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    posted a message on Big Sister Gulliver Minecraft Server {Whitelisted, Forge}
    Quote from moonwolf187»

    Hello my gamertag is moonwolf187


    2. I like the gulivermod a lot and i want to play it with others


    3. I like to game and im good with animals


    4, 1. i dont cuss at all

    2. i suck at pvp XD

    3.i like cats

    4,i have blue eyes XD

    5 finnally i like madden

    5 With good behavior, you have the right to onetime introductory bread and cheese

    I like cause i love cheese C:


    6. its cheese (YUMMY :DDDDDD)



    Moonwolf, I’m sorry to say but since you haven’t taken any of Hannah’s feedback into account, I don’t think it will be necessary to review your app since it’s pretty clear it is not going to get accepted at all. You’ll best be served looking for another Gulliver server that is easier to get into, we may be a little too hard for what you’re looking for.


    Good luck!

    Posted in: PC Servers
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    posted a message on Big Sister Gulliver Minecraft Server {Whitelisted, Forge}
    Quote from herocrafter1»

    (Take #2)
    Hello! I would like to join this server!

    1. My IGN is herocrafter1 and to answer your question, me and VoxelHero were just messing around and having some fun.

    2. I would like to join this server because I love to roleplay with other people and I watched the trailer for this server and it seemed very friendly and funny. Also, VoxelHero told me how to get the Gulliver mod so I wanted to play around with him on this server along with other people. (Also, when he leaves does not mean I will leave and I will get on even when he is not on :mellow: )

    3. I am very good at building houses and other buildings, I once even built a spawn point for an admin! I am pretty good with redstone and making piston doors. I also know how to make basic commands such as setblock, summoning, and tp. I also know a lot on how to position armor stands. Not to brag or anything but I think I am good at being fair to people.

    4. Some hobbies I have are:

    -I like drawing pictures. The pictures I draw are usually of characters from video games or I just make up stuff.

    -I like to write comics. I make comics about a character named Anthon that I made up and he goes on adventures in Mazakala.

    -I like to play video games. The video games I play are old styled, pixelated, and storytelling. I really only play kid friendly.

    -I like to make basic video games. I love to make basic video games on a website called Sploder. They (like my comics) are about Anthon and his adventures in Mazakala.

    -I like to build things in real life. I think getting outside and nailing some wood together to make something is fun. I once made my own lemonade stand!

    5. My favorite is "Please refrain from stealing from another player's property." because I don't like losing my stuff!

    6. The currency is Cheese


    Hello Herocrafter,


    Hannah was in the process of writing your final review, but had other business to attend to so I agreed to finish this for her. While I appreciate a cute ASCII art of Annoying Dog, the premise in which it was done was not very reassuring as you were essentially trying to coerce your way in here. The follow-up “citizen’s review” wasn’t very helpful either -- when someone writes one of these without checking with us first, it’s a sure sign that the person is desperate or trying to seek attention in some way. Both of these follow-up incidents have the potential to jeopardize your impression of us before we even get to your app review, but we’ll see if perhaps there is something in your application that can help salvage these mistakes.


    QUESTION 1:


    Well, I suppose that’s a sufficient answer. I don’t really know what to say about this - how this is fun, I’m not sure, but whatever you want.



    QUESTION 2:


    Thanks for reviewing the trailer -- although it is a bit light on detail, you seem to favour the humour and roleplay. Granted roleplay isn’t the main aspect of our server (unless you count playing around as a Minecraft avatar), but it does happen often enough to be fun for someone with an interest in RP. We certainly have LOTS of roleplaying sets. Also humour is pretty wild here too, although granted that’s after you pass this initial application process -- during the process itself, you have to be semi-serious (unless your style of humour is subtle enough to work).


    The other half of your reason is essentially because your friend is here; VoxelHero is rarely here anymore, but he’s been whitelisted for a while so there shouldn’t be any restrictions left on having you join as well. I do wish he had helped with your initial application as it’s partly the responsibility of our current players to inform their friends about the nuances of our application. In any case, it’s reassuring to know that you will act independently… we’ve had instances where a lot of effort is used to whitelist “friends”, and then they all decide to leave collectively, resulting in a huge waste of time and a clogged up whitelist.




    QUESTION 3:


    Err… How is this relevant, again? You’re not going to be using commands, not to mention setblock and summon aren’t even in 1.6.4. Armour stands don’t exist in 1.6 either. So, cutting this out, your answer adds up to: 46 words.


    To your credit, building is a fine skill to have, especially on our server (Many of us enjoy building, if not most), and being fair to people is fine too - but that’s still not a whole lot of content to your answer, not to mention how uninspired it sounds.



    QUESTION 4:


    a> Oh nice -- we have a few artists on our server. If you visited our main forum (not this one), you could check out our artist thread.

    b> Oh very nice! Granted this is sort of related to your first fact so it’s repeating a bit, but its nice to have some more comic artists.

    c> Well that describes almost all the players on the server, but it’s nice to see people appreciate a more vintage style.

    d> Hmmm, now this is pushing it since you’re basically repeating B and C above. But well, we don’t have that many game designers so it’s interesting at least.

    e> Oooh, now THAT is really cool fact! We like players who like to get their hands dirty with offline projects! Wish you could have listed more like this!



    QUESTION 5:

    Still correct.


    QUESTION 6:

    And correct.



    VERDICT:

    Well, had you not made any unnecessary posts after initial post, not only would we have gotten to this review faster, but you probably would have been whitelisted by now as well. This is not a great app and I’d be hard-pressed to call it a good app -- your question 2, question 3 and parts of question 4 are lacking. But overall it seems to cover enough bases to let you in here on pure technical merit, even if it’s not a very inspiring app.


    But we have to take into consideration all the spam posts after your application, and how that has made you look impatient, reckless and irresponsible. With that in mind, we’ll need you to do your best to produce a perfect application that takes all my feedback above, and adds a few more interesting facts in Question 4. If you can accomplish that… WITHOUT any unnecessary posts (that includes single posts to say “okay”!), then I think you’ll be able to join us.

    Posted in: PC Servers
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    posted a message on Big Sister Gulliver Minecraft Server {Whitelisted, Forge}
    Quote from herocrafter1»
    I'm can't review your request, but I can give you some tips. First off, YOUR ANSWERS ARE WAAAAAY TO SHORT, they said 60 to 90 words! So maybe add some new more info and stretch some sentences out! Also, it is kind of hard to tell apart answers, just space them out a little! They like it when you have about a sentence for each random fact so buff them up a bit. Everything else looks fine to me, but you still have lots of work to do.
    (or maybe you will just get super lucky...)

    While I don't have time to write a full review for either of you right now, Herocrafter, please refrain from doing them for us. You've already been borderline-spamming. Citizen reviews are something that happens, but are done by our trusted players, and considering you're not exactly on our best side right now, I would stop.
    Posted in: PC Servers
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    posted a message on Big Sister Gulliver Minecraft Server {Whitelisted, Forge}
    Quote from herocrafter1»

    Hello! I would like to join this server!
    1. My IGN is herocrafter1
    2. I would like to join this server because my friend VoxelHero who previously had the name Stick303 plays on this server and the trailer for this server and it seemed very friendly and funny. You seem like a nice person and so do the rest of the people on this server. Also, VoxelHero told me how to get the Gulliver mod so I wanted to play around with him on this server. I think I'm a good builder if I do say so myself!
    3. As I said before, I love to build! Also, two hobbies I had are drawing pictures and writing comics. The pictures I draw are usually of characters from video games or I just make up stuff. I make comics about a character named Anthon that I made up and he goes on adventures in Mazakala. I also make basic video games!
    4. Some random facts about me are:
    -I like to make comics
    -I consider myself a artist
    -I am very kind and fair
    -I love all animals
    -I respect others as I do to myself
    5. My favorite is "Please refrain from stealing from another player's property." because I don't like losing my stuff!
    6. The currency is Cheese


    Hello there Herocrafter, I'm KC and I'll be reviewing your application.

    Firstly, after checking your username, it seems you've changed it a couple times. I've noticed that your username USED to be VoxelHer0. Your friend VoxelHero-Is there any reason you chose the similar names like this?

    Alright - Second question. Your main reasons consist of: "My friend plays here, <insert personal compliment that has nothing to do with the server>, I like building." Reasonings of "My friend plays here" aren't exactly reassuring since it essentially means that if your friend leaves, you leave too. This clogs up our whitelist with inactive players. It's also not reassuring that VoxelHero/Stick303 disappeared for a long time, and only reappeared yesterday, meaning we don't really know this person that well.
    Aaand... Well, you mention the trailer too, which I left out above - sorry about that. At least you got this right.
    Next- "You seem like a nice person"... Um, who? And secondly, more importantly- why? How is this relevant to the server? If it's flattery, it's not helping your case. Aaand you like building. That's awesome, but this feels more like a Question 3 answer.
    All in all, this is a sub-par answer.

    Next question. Most of your question here seems more like Question 4 answers, and considering... Well, your Question 4 facts are mostly just repeats of Question 3 answers with LESS information in them (Why?)... Well, this answer is basically... "I like building."

    Question 4. Basically - move everything from your Question 3 except for I like building (No minecraft facts in Question 4). "I am very kind and fair" is a Question 3 answer. Same with "I respect others as I do myself". You put so much detail into Question 3 when everything in it should be in Question 4 (Including the details! We WANT long answers in Question 4! Just because they're formatted as a list doesn't mean they should be short!).

    Aaand 5. Alright, well at least you got this one right.

    I'd be scared if you failed Question 6.

    Alright- final point. This is... Um, no where close to getting in. It's gonna need a lot of work. First- Answer my question about the usernames. Fix Question 2, and basically reverse Question 3 and 4 (Not exactly. You know what I mean).

    Fix it up and REPOST your application, please.

    -KC

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    posted a message on Big Sister Gulliver Minecraft Server {Whitelisted, Forge}
    Quote from shadowwolf808»

    Minecraft Username: shadowwolf808


    Reason I Want to Join: I have been looking for a Gullivers Server recently, and this seems to be a big one to join. The community here seems pretty friendly and that's always something I, and most others, would like to be a part of. I like that there's a whitelist here so not just anyone can be entering willy-nilly. Lastly, I've had a look at the Dynmap. It was pretty confusing at first, but it's something new and awesome nonetheless.


    Talents, Skills, Exp, Traits, and Aspirations: I'm pretty good with redstone in case anyone needs help with contraptions. I tend to be crafty, and, with enough knowledge, I can make a good info broker / guide or helper to help any newcomers. I'm rather efficient and can work to nearly no ends when focussed on a task given so if anyone in the server might need help with building I could do that.


    Five Quirky / Random Facts:

    1) I enjoy real-time strategy games, like Command and Conquer.


    2) I play Alto and Tenor Sax and I dabble a bit on the piano. I also have composed music by ear.


    3) I tend to put Parmesan Cheese on my Popcorn. And yes, it's full-fat. :3


    4) I am working on becoming a geneticist when I get out there on my own.


    5) I'm a heavy reader. Like a few books a day, it's crazy. .-.


    Favorite Responsibility:

    5.Please refrain from asking players and Staff non­stop questions that can be construed as annoying.

    Currency: Cheese! : D


    Hey there again! I'll just go over the faults of your last application this time.

    2. Alright! This answer looks good now, and I’m glad you looked at our dynmap. It can be a bit confusing at first.

    3. You’ve replaced your geneticist part and put that in Question 4. Awesome! This answer is good now. Plus, building is always good - our server is very building-oriented.

    4.1) Cool! Real-time Strategy games were never my favourite, but to each their own ;)


    4.4) Okay, this came from Question 3, right? I noticed your old Question 4.4 disappeared, but the replacement in Question 3 was much better than your old one.


    4.5) Yikes, that really is a lot of reading! Oh well. Reading is fun! :)


    Verdict


    It’s not perfect by any means, but it’s a passing grade. So, on that note, welcome to the server! I’ll whitelist you ASAP.


    -KC
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    posted a message on Big Sister Gulliver Minecraft Server {Whitelisted, Forge}
    Quote from shadowwolf808»

    Minecraft Username: shadowwolf808


    Reason I Want to Join: I have been looking for a Gullivers Server recently, and this seems to be a big one to join. I used to use Gulliver's Mod very heavily and may have played on this server, if not a different one, quite often. For the most part I just really miss playing with Gulliver's Mod and others.


    Talents, Skills, Exp, Traits, and Aspirations: I'm pretty good with redstone. I tend to be crafty, and, with enough knowledge, I can make a good info broker / guide or helper. I'm rather efficient and can work to nearly no ends when focussed on a task given. Something I've always aspired to be is a Geneticist, though I'd have to leave my current country due to laws against most of my interests in it.


    Five Quirky / Random Facts:

    1) I enjoy preforming Parkour. Like Wall-Running both Horizontally and Vertically along with long jumps vaults and, rarely, wall jumping.


    2) I play Alto and Tenor Sax and a dabble a bit on the piano. I also have composed music by ear.


    3) I tend to put Parmesan Cheese on my Popcorn. This was a weird taste I acquired from my mom.


    4) I'm very friendly, but tend to be quiet, or paranoid until acquainted with the community. (More of a habit that I'm close to breaking.)


    5) I love cheese. Like I have a nearly endless stomach for cheese.


    Favorite Responsibility:

    5.Please refrain from asking players and Staff non­stop questions that can be construed as annoying.

    Currency: Cheese! : D


    Extra: I am very sorry if this application seems to be a bit small. I have a bad habit of being quick and kind of scrawly with information. (Kind of fitting for someone who wants to be a scientist. :3) I will gladly edit, or resubmit an application if this is inadequate.




    Hello Shadow! I’m KC and I’ll be reviewing your application today.


    1. Your username checks out fine.


    2. Well you’re just a *few* words short, so if you could add another sentence or so that’d be great. Also, while I understand the appeal of playing Gulliver in multiplayer (Many of its’ features are locked away until you have other players), is there any other reason you’d like to join us? Perhaps our community? The dynmap? There ARE other Gulliver servers out there (although you might need to dig a little) , so there has to be some reason you’d rather join us!


    3. This answer is a large improvement on the last one, for sure. However, can you tell me how this will be helpful on the server, specifically? This is in no means a bad answer - and these are all great things - so how would you apply them?


    4.

    1)“Preforming” is probably a typo, unless you mean you like to build parkour obstacles. XD Also, hopefully this is RL parkour, as we frown upon Minecraft facts in this section.

    2) That sounds like fun, we have lots of musician players here on the server. Artists and dancers as well! (Actually, I play the Alto Sax myself, as well as the piano!)


    3) Ah, Cia might approve, she loves putting extra fat on foods like that -- unless it’s low-fat parmesan cheese, which she hates (only full-fat will do)!


    4) Hmmm… I think this belongs in Question 3! Maybe you should make a swap with your geneticist fact?


    5) Hrmmm. :/ Well you already have one cheese fact in 4.3, so why do you need another one?!

    Cheese is great, but you really should try changing this up a bit. How about adding this to 4.3, then coming up with another food or drink you like (and why)?


    Good fact! We don’t see that one chosen very often.


    6. Correct!

    EXTRA

    O.o


    ….


    Okay, seriously, I don’t even know how to begin with this piece at the end.

    For one thing, have you ever even seen a scientific study?


    http://www.nejm.org/doi/full/10.1056/NEJMoa0708681#t=articleTop


    I don’t think scientists are known for being quick and scrawly, otherwise it would be a LOT easier to read all their mumbo jumbo! :P


    Secondly, you already knew before publishing this that your application was small. If you are training to be a scientist, you should be used to being observant and studying things carefully -- you could have easily taken the time to study other people’s applications, and see what worked and what doesn’t. Short apps and weird answers, especially weird additions at the end, tend not to get people whitelisted. :(


    You do get a chance to reapply again after you review my feedback and use it to repost a better application, but I really hope you’re sure you’re in the right place. We can be a very challenging server to be in! Think this carefully! ><


    Verdict

    Alright! You're not quite read to go yet. Read over my review, and be sure to repost your entire application with the new answers. Thanks!

    -KC

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