Apologizes in advance for any typos. Also this is a WIP I will be putting the chapters up as I make them. Also this story still needs a title so if anyone had any ideas for a title, Or tips for the story in general or constructive feedback I would love to hear them.
Who am I? : I am a young man who enjoys playing games and studying and I have a ton of other hobbies that would take to long to list.
Dear mighty mods & amazing admins I understand long chapters need to be inside a spoiler but I'm hoping its ok than I leave my prologue outside of a spoiler. If you would like I can put the prologue in a spoiler.
Prologue
There was a land full of resources and treasures untouched by the people of Minecraftia, this realm was called Tirentar. Once the people of Minecraftia found out about this rich and prosperous land they sent a airship with some of the heroes of Minecraftia to Tirentar. They wanted to know if Tirentar was habitable. Slowly but surely Tirentar became a peaceful trading kingdom. It turns out Tirentar was over triple the size of Minecraftia and many of it is still not explored to this day. It has been three centuries since Tirentar was first discovered and it has many different cities and many different people. Slowly the magic that many used in the last centuries was lost and it was replaced with steam power, and the gods that once were loved by all and now lost in the shadows. Now our story begins with a young elven boy who lives in the village of Foxsoul.
Chapter 1: (WIP)
Chapter 1 is still a WIP
“Can this boy truly be the one we are searching for? Maybe, but it is too soon to decide I need to observe him. I wonder if I should give him a test, possibly one of the-” The voice fades away slowly as the boy wakes up.
As the boy wakes up he stretches and yawns loudly afterwards he puts on his faded purple tunic. This is one of his favorite pieces of clothing to wear during the winter. The boy heads downstairs and as he is fixing himself some breakfast someone knocks on his door. The Boy turns off the furnace and heads to the door to open it.
“Hey Martyn it’s me Lucy open the door!” says Lucy she can be impatient at times.
Thanks for taking the time of you day to read what I have so far and have a wonderful day ^^
I like the prologue. It gives background information of Tirentar and the plot, but I think you should put the setting of Martyn's home into Chapter 1 so that we can know about where he lives and what it is like.
Please continue writing more about Tirentar, and with your best skills to make an accomplished feeling.
Apologizes in advance for any typos. Also this is a WIP I will be putting the chapters up as I make them. Also this story still needs a title so if anyone had any ideas for a title, Or tips for the story in general or constructive feedback I would love to hear them.
Who am I? : I am a young man who enjoys playing games and studying and I have a ton of other hobbies that would take to long to list.
Dear mighty mods & amazing admins I understand long chapters need to be inside a spoiler but I'm hoping its ok than I leave my prologue outside of a spoiler. If you would like I can put the prologue in a spoiler.
There was a land full of resources and treasures untouched by the people of Minecraftia, this realm was called Tirentar. Once the people of Minecraftia found out about this rich and prosperous land they sent a airship with some of the heroes of Minecraftia to Tirentar. They wanted to know if Tirentar was habitable. Slowly but surely Tirentar became a peaceful trading kingdom. It turns out Tirentar was over triple the size of Minecraftia and many of it is still not explored to this day. It has been three centuries since Tirentar was first discovered and it has many different cities and many different people. Slowly the magic that many used in the last centuries was lost and it was replaced with steam power, and the gods that once were loved by all and now lost in the shadows. Now our story begins with a young elven boy who lives in the village of Foxsoul.
Chapter 1: (WIP)
Chapter 1 is still a WIP
“Can this boy truly be the one we are searching for? Maybe, but it is too soon to decide I need to observe him. I wonder if I should give him a test, possibly one of the-” The voice fades away slowly as the boy wakes up.
As the boy wakes up he stretches and yawns loudly afterwards he puts on his faded purple tunic. This is one of his favorite pieces of clothing to wear during the winter. The boy heads downstairs and as he is fixing himself some breakfast someone knocks on his door. The Boy turns off the furnace and heads to the door to open it.
“Hey Martyn it’s me Lucy open the door!” says Lucy she can be impatient at times.
Thanks for taking the time of you day to read what I have so far and have a wonderful day ^^
I like the prologue. It gives background information of Tirentar and the plot, but I think you should put the setting of Martyn's home into Chapter 1 so that we can know about where he lives and what it is like.
Please continue writing more about Tirentar, and with your best skills to make an accomplished feeling.