Hello, and welcome viewer to my tale. I have researched as much as I could, and have let my Imagination fill in the gaps. I will be explaining Minecraftian lore in this. Be warned, this is a literal wall of text, I'll try to change it in the future. Also, this is my opinion, not facts, please do not mistake it as such.
In the year 2000, a new planet was being prepared for colonization. We, the Earth, sent a crew of 50 men and women to colonize the strange cube planet. Unfortunately, all of the men and women were affected by the strange atmosphere in which they were forced to live. Not only did this planet have a Sun and Moon, the planet rotated around the sun extremely quickly, causing the sun to set much faster than what they were expecting. The landscape was blocky, and hostile. Strange cube-ish animals roamed far and wide. The gravity also was much stronger than the Earth's, so soon the colonists were much too weak. We did have communications with the colonists, though.
6 years passed, and the next generation of colonists found a new struggle to deal with. Darkness, as it seems, has developed a unique effect on an odd insect known as the Sulpher Bug. The insect grew and morphed into a tall, bipedal creature. This creature, known by the colonists as a Creeper because of it's habit of sneaking up on them, contained a sac of Sulpher and a nerval cord extending from it's brain to the sac. With a simple thought, an electric spark is sent to the sac, exploding the contents in a nasty blast. On the flip-side, however, the Creeper emits a hiss when preparing to explode. The Creeper also can stop the spark mid-travel if the victim is too far away for the blast to reach him/her. Also, the darkness revealed two monstrous creatures that resembled cube-ish humans. One was the most resembling a human, a carnivorous creature with green skin, but had muscles and bones. These creatures weren't particularly fast, and so in a flash they were named Zombies. The second humanoid creature looked similar to our human Skeletal system, but in fact the bone was a second skeletal system, almost like an armor, if you will. The "armor" also functioned as a skin to hide a thin, but dense amount of muscle and the real bones. The Skeleton, as it was appropriately called, had an advanced degree of intelligence and a strange "magic". We humans knew of magic, it was a lost art that was used during the Medieval ages. The Skeletons wielded Bows and could summon an infinite amount of arrows. Finally, the darkness morphed two kinds of arachnid, both being Spiders. One was a large black Spider that hunted in a similar fashion to our earth's Wolf Spiders, these were simply called Spiders. The second was a smaller blue-black spider that could create webs to ensnare prey. These spiders did not need webs, and could hunt down prey on its own. These were known as Cave Spiders, for they would only be found in caverns.
Finally, the colonists aborted the mission, but instead, 3 years passed, and NASA created their first artificial life-form. NASA then recruited 50 new men and women to recolonize the planet. How? By transferring the colonist's soul into the life-form. After all 50 men and women agreed, the colonists were then transferred into their new bodies. These new bodies were cube-ish to match the planet's style. Also, the bodies were 2x stronger than a normal human body. Finally, these bodies could use a form of magic which was called "Crafting". With this, The colonists could combine raw materials to get new materials much faster than the previous colonists could. In addition, the bodies could create a small pocket dimension in which they could store materials and tools. With all of these, the Colonists, led by Markus Persson and his brother, Steven Persson, set out to re-colonize the planet now known as Minecraft. The colonists spent several years on this planet, their bodies un-aging. Half of the colonists were sent to populate the surface led by Markus Persson, nicknamed "Notch" , while the other half was sent to create a laboratory underground, these were led by Steven Persson. This laboratory was named, "The Stronghold", and was used by the colonists to create new tools and weapons for the colonists. Whilst mining, Steven Persson discovered that an odd dust known as Redstone had special properties, and could be used for circuitry. Steven then made several items using this dust. In addition, the Colonists led by Steven created an odd ring, which can send knowledge of how to craft an item created by the Colonists to the Colonists above. When Steven found that monsters were becoming a nuisance in the Stronghold, Steven created an insect known as Silverfish to defend the Stronghold from the monsters. Unfortunately, In 2010, disaster struck. Steven returned form mining to the Stronghold to find it overrun with monsters and all of the Colonists working in it dead. Steven fought his way through the Stronghold and even through to find the Metallic ring he had created transformed into a slightly organic Portal. When Steven approached the Portal, he was attacked by a horde of Silverfish. Upon defeating the Silverfish, Steven looked at the Portal with disgust. He began to destroy the eye-like crystals that lined the Portal. Upon the destruction of all 12 Eyes, the portal began to close. However, a long head and neck of a Black Dragon rose from the slowly closing portal. the Dragon breathed a powerful roar, knocking Steven into the ground. The Dragon retracted its head back into the Portal as it finally closed, finishing with a powerful shock-wave that split Steven into two halves. One was his soul as a ghost, and the other was his soulless body with blank-white eyes.
At the same time, Steven's pregnant wife gave birth to a baby boy, as Steven's wife passes away from her illness, she names the baby, "Steve".........
So, what did you guys think? Comment below your answer!
You have shown minecraft in a whole new, scientific way. It introduces new ideas into the creation of the game, creating an impressive background for someone when they start a new world. If someone reads this, and than plays minecraft, they will think differently when finding a stronghold or crafting or simple things such as killing creepers.
I like it, it's good, but you've worked yourself into a hole here. You can't go any further, unless you follow steve, but you have blocked (forgive the pun :D) that way too. If you tried following steve, you can't use another planet, unless you make one, and having NASA in there just makes it seem like they can leave if in trouble. I suggest making this the preview for the story, and than tell it in fine, slow detail. Maybe even from a colonists view.
You have shown minecraft in a whole new, scientific way. It introduces new ideas into the creation of the game, creating an impressive background for someone when they start a new world. If someone reads this, and than plays minecraft, they will think differently when finding a stronghold or crafting or simple things such as killing creepers.
I like it, it's good, but you've worked yourself into a hole here. You can't go any further, unless you follow steve, but you have blocked (forgive the pun ) that way too. If you tried following steve, you can't use another planet, unless you make one, and having NASA in there just makes it seem like they can leave if in trouble. I suggest making this the preview for the story, and than tell it in fine, slow detail. Maybe even from a colonists view.
I thank you for your input, and I will take it into consideration. Keep in mind that this was simply a small surge of my Imagination striving me to type this. I probably will do journal entries for each of the colonists. By the way, what are your opinions of Steven Persson?
I thank you for your input, and I will take it into consideration. Keep in mind that this was simply a small surge of my Imagination striving me to type this. I probably will do journal entries for each of the colonists. By the way, what are your opinions of Steven Persson?
Well, I did read that Notch does have a brother, although it didn't say his name, i didn't do much research on the matter. Is it his real name?
My opinions? As in, what do i think of the character?
The storyline is interesting, and you really poured yourself into it.
It is an interesting way to show Herobrine, but what happens to the soul-half?
Well, I did read that Notch does have a brother, although it didn't say his name, i didn't do much research on the matter. Is it his real name?
My opinions? As in, what do i think of the character?
The storyline is interesting, and you really poured yourself into it.
It is an interesting way to show Herobrine, but what happens to the soul-half?
1. No, Notch's brother (If he had one) is not named Steven.
2. Thank you
3. The Soul-half is what allows Steve to resurrect himself. It also keeps Herobrine from killing Steve.
He did have one. But i like the idea of how Herobrine came into the world. There are many ideas, but this is one of the more detailed ones.
And, if he has a soul half then why doesn't he just resurrect right away?
This was really great. Honestly, it was very very interesting to read. My only suggestions would be that next time, if you're writing that the Minecraftia world is another planet discovered through science, you shouldn't add magic. I know that it's hard to explain some of the stuff that happens, but you were doing such a great job up until the skeletons. I know it took a lot of hard work, but the magic just seemed like a lazy excuse. And if you made a longer version for everybody, explaining in greater detail all the things about Minecraftia, that would be awesome, because this was, again, very interesting.
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So sing a lonely song/Of a deep blue dream/Seven horses seem to be on the mark/Yeah, don't you love her/Don't you love her as she's walkin' out the door.
This was really great. Honestly, it was very very interesting to read. My only suggestions would be that next time, if you're writing that the Minecraftia world is another planet discovered through science, you shouldn't add magic. I know that it's hard to explain some of the stuff that happens, but you were doing such a great job up until the skeletons. I know it took a lot of hard work, but the magic just seemed like a lazy excuse. And if you made a longer version for everybody, explaining in greater detail all the things about Minecraftia, that would be awesome, because this was, again, very interesting.
I understand it seems lazy of me to put in magic all of a sudden, but I felt that there is no other way to explain the arrow thing and still explain how crafting works so quickly. Maybe I am a bit too lazy, but still, I felt that we never have seen a good video game that combines magic and science.
To answer your question, Meed96:
To resurrect himself, Steven would have to fuse with Herobrine, which is impossible, because they were split permanently.
i LOVED the story. now something has to go into this story how herobrine became king of the nether. (well that what most people say) i cant wait for the next one. good job
i LOVED the story. now something has to go into this story how herobrine became king of the nether. (well that what most people say) i cant wait for the next one. good job
Thank you for your kind words. Herobrine is nothing more than a mindless husk. Herobrine cannot do those advanced tasks no matter what anyone else says. It is plausible for Herobrine to build a portal and go into the Nether, but he couldn't do much there...
EDIT:
Hmm, nevermind. Herobrine is Soulless, not mindless....... Maybe I'll exploit that someday......
In the year 2000, a new planet was being prepared for colonization. We, the Earth, sent a crew of 50 men and women to colonize the strange cube planet. Unfortunately, all of the men and women were affected by the strange atmosphere in which they were forced to live. Not only did this planet have a Sun and Moon, the planet rotated around the sun extremely quickly, causing the sun to set much faster than what they were expecting. The landscape was blocky, and hostile. Strange cube-ish animals roamed far and wide. The gravity also was much stronger than the Earth's, so soon the colonists were much too weak. We did have communications with the colonists, though.
6 years passed, and the next generation of colonists found a new struggle to deal with. Darkness, as it seems, has developed a unique effect on an odd insect known as the Sulpher Bug. The insect grew and morphed into a tall, bipedal creature. This creature, known by the colonists as a Creeper because of it's habit of sneaking up on them, contained a sac of Sulpher and a nerval cord extending from it's brain to the sac. With a simple thought, an electric spark is sent to the sac, exploding the contents in a nasty blast. On the flip-side, however, the Creeper emits a hiss when preparing to explode. The Creeper also can stop the spark mid-travel if the victim is too far away for the blast to reach him/her. Also, the darkness revealed two monstrous creatures that resembled cube-ish humans. One was the most resembling a human, a carnivorous creature with green skin, but had muscles and bones. These creatures weren't particularly fast, and so in a flash they were named Zombies. The second humanoid creature looked similar to our human Skeletal system, but in fact the bone was a second skeletal system, almost like an armor, if you will. The "armor" also functioned as a skin to hide a thin, but dense amount of muscle and the real bones. The Skeleton, as it was appropriately called, had an advanced degree of intelligence and a strange "magic". We humans knew of magic, it was a lost art that was used during the Medieval ages. The Skeletons wielded Bows and could summon an infinite amount of arrows. Finally, the darkness morphed two kinds of arachnid, both being Spiders. One was a large black Spider that hunted in a similar fashion to our earth's Wolf Spiders, these were simply called Spiders. The second was a smaller blue-black spider that could create webs to ensnare prey. These spiders did not need webs, and could hunt down prey on its own. These were known as Cave Spiders, for they would only be found in caverns.
Finally, the colonists aborted the mission, but instead, 3 years passed, and NASA created their first artificial life-form. NASA then recruited 50 new men and women to recolonize the planet. How? By transferring the colonist's soul into the life-form. After all 50 men and women agreed, the colonists were then transferred into their new bodies. These new bodies were cube-ish to match the planet's style. Also, the bodies were 2x stronger than a normal human body. Finally, these bodies could use a form of magic which was called "Crafting". With this, The colonists could combine raw materials to get new materials much faster than the previous colonists could. In addition, the bodies could create a small pocket dimension in which they could store materials and tools. With all of these, the Colonists, led by Markus Persson and his brother, Steven Persson, set out to re-colonize the planet now known as Minecraft. The colonists spent several years on this planet, their bodies un-aging. Half of the colonists were sent to populate the surface led by Markus Persson, nicknamed "Notch" , while the other half was sent to create a laboratory underground, these were led by Steven Persson. This laboratory was named, "The Stronghold", and was used by the colonists to create new tools and weapons for the colonists. Whilst mining, Steven Persson discovered that an odd dust known as Redstone had special properties, and could be used for circuitry. Steven then made several items using this dust. In addition, the Colonists led by Steven created an odd ring, which can send knowledge of how to craft an item created by the Colonists to the Colonists above. When Steven found that monsters were becoming a nuisance in the Stronghold, Steven created an insect known as Silverfish to defend the Stronghold from the monsters. Unfortunately, In 2010, disaster struck. Steven returned form mining to the Stronghold to find it overrun with monsters and all of the Colonists working in it dead. Steven fought his way through the Stronghold and even through to find the Metallic ring he had created transformed into a slightly organic Portal. When Steven approached the Portal, he was attacked by a horde of Silverfish. Upon defeating the Silverfish, Steven looked at the Portal with disgust. He began to destroy the eye-like crystals that lined the Portal. Upon the destruction of all 12 Eyes, the portal began to close. However, a long head and neck of a Black Dragon rose from the slowly closing portal. the Dragon breathed a powerful roar, knocking Steven into the ground. The Dragon retracted its head back into the Portal as it finally closed, finishing with a powerful shock-wave that split Steven into two halves. One was his soul as a ghost, and the other was his soulless body with blank-white eyes.
At the same time, Steven's pregnant wife gave birth to a baby boy, as Steven's wife passes away from her illness, she names the baby, "Steve".........
So, what did you guys think? Comment below your answer!
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I like it, it's good, but you've worked yourself into a hole here. You can't go any further, unless you follow steve, but you have blocked (forgive the pun :D) that way too. If you tried following steve, you can't use another planet, unless you make one, and having NASA in there just makes it seem like they can leave if in trouble. I suggest making this the preview for the story, and than tell it in fine, slow detail. Maybe even from a colonists view.
I thank you for your input, and I will take it into consideration. Keep in mind that this was simply a small surge of my Imagination striving me to type this. I probably will do journal entries for each of the colonists. By the way, what are your opinions of Steven Persson?
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Well, I did read that Notch does have a brother, although it didn't say his name, i didn't do much research on the matter. Is it his real name?
My opinions? As in, what do i think of the character?
The storyline is interesting, and you really poured yourself into it.
It is an interesting way to show Herobrine, but what happens to the soul-half?
1. No, Notch's brother (If he had one) is not named Steven.
2. Thank you
3. The Soul-half is what allows Steve to resurrect himself. It also keeps Herobrine from killing Steve.
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And, if he has a soul half then why doesn't he just resurrect right away?
So sing a lonely song/Of a deep blue dream/Seven horses seem to be on the mark/Yeah, don't you love her/Don't you love her as she's walkin' out the door.
I understand it seems lazy of me to put in magic all of a sudden, but I felt that there is no other way to explain the arrow thing and still explain how crafting works so quickly. Maybe I am a bit too lazy, but still, I felt that we never have seen a good video game that combines magic and science.
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Oh no, it's a link to an awesome flash game!
Thank you.
To answer your question, Meed96:
To resurrect himself, Steven would have to fuse with Herobrine, which is impossible, because they were split permanently.
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Thank you for your kind words.
Herobrine is nothing more than a mindless husk. Herobrine cannot do those advanced tasks no matter what anyone else says. It is plausible for Herobrine to build a portal and go into the Nether, but he couldn't do much there...EDIT:
Hmm, nevermind. Herobrine is Soulless, not mindless....... Maybe I'll exploit that someday......
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