Hello guys and welcome to poetry page. As revision for upcoming English literature papers I have wrote some poems to try to help me understand poems by others. I'm no Poet Laureate so don't expect Spike Milligan, but I'd love to hear feedback from you guys!
Poem No. 1
Through the darkness a flash of green.
Heart trembles, what was seen?
I gather minerals that went a miss,
Through the dusty air vibrates a hiss.
Now I realise it is a creeper,
His presence readying the Grim Reaper.
Cornered I draw back my aged bow,
But he is slicker than Neo.
Hiss, tick-tick boom,
Steve awakens to morn in his room.
A bit cheesy with the ending but who cares eh?
Stay tuned for more to come!
This is a poem I did at school when I was there and got an A for, its not Minecraft related and its a bit more deep than the first poem but any way, here it is...
Yellow Osmosis Likes Orangutans
YOLO is not original,
its over use, abysmal.
Why not enforce a ban,
on people orange with fake-tan,
a profanity barrier for just one phrase.
You can’t escape it’s menacing ways,
left, right and centre, YOLO for days.
Shall I digress?
We need to repress…
Apparently you only live once,
to me mate, your a nonce.
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