It's me, Bobwont! I'm restarting The story I hadpreviously made, called 'A New World'. Please comment with suggestions(:
Each chapter will be one day or night! Obviouslythe story is boring now but it will become better!
Thanks to my editor Spike2929, also known asBobcan or RedBladeDude.
Thanks,
Bobwont
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~A NEW WORLD~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Prologue.
I’m just an average guy. I have long black hairthat curls at the ears, black eyes, a regular nose, and an imperfect smile. Thename is Darren. I play videogames and I wear skinny jeans. I fool around withfriends and get B's in school. I am 13 turning 14 in 5 days. My life was prettyusual, up until a few hours ago.
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I was at home, watching some nature show onDiscovery Channel. Bored as usual, and no homework - at all. I sat on my redleather couch staring at the blue walls. I heard a noise coming from thetelevision and then suddenly, on TV, just as the rock they called cobblestone,was falling down to hit the camera, I blanked out. A few seconds later, I sawmyself, in third person, lying down in an all black room. Here I was thinkingabout myself. Then, everything turned white.
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Chapter 1
A New World
*Day 1*
Thinking about what happened in the past fewhours, I'm going to write about what happened each day or night. Just to keeprecords of what's happening. Well onward with the story,
I woke up, dizzy, and tired. I was fatigued forsome weird reason. I woke up with about a few trees, and some grass surroundingme. I was super confused and I didn't know what to do. All I had were my barehands and some clothes. I also had a satchel of some kind; or was it abackpack? Who knows, or cares? I got frustrated and hit the ground, hard.Suddenly the dirt popped up in block form. I knew this couldn’t really happenso I assumed I was in a video game. I decided to take some of the wood from thetrees. I could barely get some sticks using only my bare hands. That plan was afailure so I decided to get some dirt. After I destroyed about 50 cubes ofdirt, it started to become midday. Using the knowledge I had learned from othervideo games like Maplestory, Dofus or FortressCraft, I created a shelter thatwas about 3 by 3 by 3 blocks. That night, I blocked off the entrance usinganother block so that there was only a small hole for someone to barely crawlthrough. I made a small bed by molding dirt together and took a quick nap.
Chapter 2
A Start
*Day 1 Cont.*
I woke up in the morning to the noise of pigs andcows. I didn't know what time it was. I thought I was still dreaming until Iheard the chickens and sheep. I looked outside my lame, little house and sawthe sun setting and a few animals wandering aimlessly. I saw some more treesand thought I should see what I could do with it. I scratched at the treesagain but this time I got a log and no measly sticks. I went back inside my“house” and looked inside my satchel to put the log away and I saw a smallplank with 5 boxes carved into it. 4 of them were arranged in a 2x2 square andto the right of the square was an arrow leading to the last carved block. I putthe log of wood in one of the carved squares because they were the same size andin the box near the arrow appeared 4 wooden planks. I picked up the planks andthe log disappeared. I put 1 of the planks in each of the 4 carved boxes to see if I could trade 4 planks for 1 log but abrown, white, a little bit of blue object appeared. I picked it up as theplanks disappeared. I placed it in my house and in it happened to be a 3x3square instead of a 2x2. It looked like those boxes were meant to make thingsso I decided to call it a workbench. Itwas becoming night so I decided to go to sleep.
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Chapter 3
Death Number 1
*Night 1*
I woke up in the middle of the night to somecrazy noises. I looked outside and saw some LIVING SKELETONS with bows andarrows, I also saw some big green things walking around who I decided to callcreepers because they creeped me out. I decided to put all of my stuff down,including my backpack, to walk out there. Right when I got out the skeletons immediatelyspun around and the creepers started to walk to me. I just stood there, frozenwith fear. Then it all went wrong, the skeletons started to shoot arrows at mebut I luckily I had enough sense to dodge the first few, but one did manage tohit my left hand. I pulled the arrow out quickly and threw it at the nearestskeleton hitting him just hard enough to knock his arrow out of its hand. Idashed behind a tree a stood there looking at the gash in my left hand. Iquickly ripped some of my shirt off and covered the gash with my shirt. I wasfeeling better after some time and decided to look around the corner of thetree. I saw nothing, just the night sky and the bare image of my house. Iwalked slowly to the house trying not to disturb anything, and it was silent. Iwas about 10 paces away from my house when I heard a hissing sound. I quicklyspun around just in time to see a creeper exploding. The force of the explosionflung my body across the floor. I was fine until I hit the ground, then it allwent red. I was dead. As soon as my vision went red, I went into a third personperspective and I saw my body laying there in a huge crater created by theexplosion of the creeper. I watch for who knows how not knowing what wouldhappen next.
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Chapter 4
A New Home
*Day 2*
I was still staring at my body then suddenlyeverything turned white. I woke up, in same place as where I started. I lookedin the distance and saw a faint resemblance of my old house. The sun was barelyrising and I saw a skeleton and zombie on fire. I realized that skeletons andzombies burned in the sunlight, just like vampires. I also realized that Icouldn't die or at least I had more than one life. I ventured out to see whatwas left of my shabby house, which unfortunately, was the whole front of thehouse. I walked though the gaping hole that the creeper had left and saw a fewon my things on the ground. I picked them up and went off to find materials tobuild a new home. I looked in my satchel and all I had left were 9 blocks ofgrass and the workbench. I decided to start to grab some more wood, to make afire, as it was turning to late afternoon. I got some wood, 10 blocks to beexact and put them in my satchel. It was becoming late and I need to find shelter,fast! I quickly dropped the wood in my workbench and got 40 planks. I put twoplanks on top of each other and I saw 4 sticks. I decided to make 40 sticks. Inow had 40 sticks and 20 planks. I rushed to the nearest wall I saw and startedto dig the dirt away. I quickly ran into stone. It took forever to take out thestone by hand. So using quick thinking, I pulled out my workbench and put theplans in the shape of a pickaxe. It didn’t work. I used sticks as a handleinstead and it was a success. I took the pickaxe and carved my way through thewall about 20 blocks before my pickaxe disappeared. I looked in my satchel. Ihad 22 stone blocks, 20 planks, and 35 sticks. I needed a door... I thought tomyself. I quickly pulled out the workbench and arranged 6 planks all next toeach other in the shape of a door. Voila! A door! I grabbed it and placed it atthe entrance right as the sun was about to set. Soon I would have to hide. Istarted to realize that everything I need to make I could just make the shapeof it and I would get it. I thought of what to do next, and then I thought Ineed light! Wood makes light doesn't it? I ran outside, grabbed 10 blocks ofwood, and came back inside. I rubbed this small black stone I got from somegravel against the sticks and wood and boom, I had a small fire. I took twosticks, conjoined them together, and lit one end, creating a torch. I placed iton the wall to have some light. I blocked off the rest of the entrance withstone and decided to lie down. It was cold but I felt accomplish. I reviewedwhat I had done that day; I made fire, a torch, a door, sticks, a pickaxe, anew shelter and figured out how the monsters worked. A great day. Now I have torest.
Hey guys,
It's me, Bobwont! I'm restarting The story I hadpreviously made, called 'A New World'. Please comment with suggestions(:
Each chapter will be one day or night! Obviouslythe story is boring now but it will become better!
Thanks to my editor Spike2929, also known asBobcan or RedBladeDude.
Thanks,
Bobwont
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~A NEW WORLD~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Prologue.
I’m just an average guy. I have long black hairthat curls at the ears, black eyes, a regular nose, and an imperfect smile. Thename is Darren. I play videogames and I wear skinny jeans. I fool around withfriends and get B's in school. I am 13 turning 14 in 5 days. My life was prettyusual, up until a few hours ago.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
I was at home, watching some nature show onDiscovery Channel. Bored as usual, and no homework - at all. I sat on my redleather couch staring at the blue walls. I heard a noise coming from thetelevision and then suddenly, on TV, just as the rock they called cobblestone,was falling down to hit the camera, I blanked out. A few seconds later, I sawmyself, in third person, lying down in an all black room. Here I was thinkingabout myself. Then, everything turned white.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Chapter 1
A New World
*Day 1*
Thinking about what happened in the past fewhours, I'm going to write about what happened each day or night. Just to keeprecords of what's happening. Well onward with the story,
I woke up, dizzy, and tired. I was fatigued forsome weird reason. I woke up with about a few trees, and some grass surroundingme. I was super confused and I didn't know what to do. All I had were my barehands and some clothes. I also had a satchel of some kind; or was it abackpack? Who knows, or cares? I got frustrated and hit the ground, hard.Suddenly the dirt popped up in block form. I knew this couldn’t really happenso I assumed I was in a video game. I decided to take some of the wood from thetrees. I could barely get some sticks using only my bare hands. That plan was afailure so I decided to get some dirt. After I destroyed about 50 cubes ofdirt, it started to become midday. Using the knowledge I had learned from othervideo games like Maplestory, Dofus or FortressCraft, I created a shelter thatwas about 3 by 3 by 3 blocks. That night, I blocked off the entrance usinganother block so that there was only a small hole for someone to barely crawlthrough. I made a small bed by molding dirt together and took a quick nap.
Chapter 2
A Start
*Day 1 Cont.*
I woke up in the morning to the noise of pigs andcows. I didn't know what time it was. I thought I was still dreaming until Iheard the chickens and sheep. I looked outside my lame, little house and sawthe sun setting and a few animals wandering aimlessly. I saw some more treesand thought I should see what I could do with it. I scratched at the treesagain but this time I got a log and no measly sticks. I went back inside my“house” and looked inside my satchel to put the log away and I saw a smallplank with 5 boxes carved into it. 4 of them were arranged in a 2x2 square andto the right of the square was an arrow leading to the last carved block. I putthe log of wood in one of the carved squares because they were the same size andin the box near the arrow appeared 4 wooden planks. I picked up the planks andthe log disappeared. I put 1 of the planks in each of the 4 carved boxes to see if I could trade 4 planks for 1 log but abrown, white, a little bit of blue object appeared. I picked it up as theplanks disappeared. I placed it in my house and in it happened to be a 3x3square instead of a 2x2. It looked like those boxes were meant to make thingsso I decided to call it a workbench. Itwas becoming night so I decided to go to sleep.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Chapter 3
Death Number 1
*Night 1*
I woke up in the middle of the night to somecrazy noises. I looked outside and saw some LIVING SKELETONS with bows andarrows, I also saw some big green things walking around who I decided to callcreepers because they creeped me out. I decided to put all of my stuff down,including my backpack, to walk out there. Right when I got out the skeletons immediatelyspun around and the creepers started to walk to me. I just stood there, frozenwith fear. Then it all went wrong, the skeletons started to shoot arrows at mebut I luckily I had enough sense to dodge the first few, but one did manage tohit my left hand. I pulled the arrow out quickly and threw it at the nearestskeleton hitting him just hard enough to knock his arrow out of its hand. Idashed behind a tree a stood there looking at the gash in my left hand. Iquickly ripped some of my shirt off and covered the gash with my shirt. I wasfeeling better after some time and decided to look around the corner of thetree. I saw nothing, just the night sky and the bare image of my house. Iwalked slowly to the house trying not to disturb anything, and it was silent. Iwas about 10 paces away from my house when I heard a hissing sound. I quicklyspun around just in time to see a creeper exploding. The force of the explosionflung my body across the floor. I was fine until I hit the ground, then it allwent red. I was dead. As soon as my vision went red, I went into a third personperspective and I saw my body laying there in a huge crater created by theexplosion of the creeper. I watch for who knows how not knowing what wouldhappen next.
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Chapter 4
A New Home
*Day 2*
I was still staring at my body then suddenlyeverything turned white. I woke up, in same place as where I started. I lookedin the distance and saw a faint resemblance of my old house. The sun was barelyrising and I saw a skeleton and zombie on fire. I realized that skeletons andzombies burned in the sunlight, just like vampires. I also realized that Icouldn't die or at least I had more than one life. I ventured out to see whatwas left of my shabby house, which unfortunately, was the whole front of thehouse. I walked though the gaping hole that the creeper had left and saw a fewon my things on the ground. I picked them up and went off to find materials tobuild a new home. I looked in my satchel and all I had left were 9 blocks ofgrass and the workbench. I decided to start to grab some more wood, to make afire, as it was turning to late afternoon. I got some wood, 10 blocks to beexact and put them in my satchel. It was becoming late and I need to find shelter,fast! I quickly dropped the wood in my workbench and got 40 planks. I put twoplanks on top of each other and I saw 4 sticks. I decided to make 40 sticks. Inow had 40 sticks and 20 planks. I rushed to the nearest wall I saw and startedto dig the dirt away. I quickly ran into stone. It took forever to take out thestone by hand. So using quick thinking, I pulled out my workbench and put theplans in the shape of a pickaxe. It didn’t work. I used sticks as a handleinstead and it was a success. I took the pickaxe and carved my way through thewall about 20 blocks before my pickaxe disappeared. I looked in my satchel. Ihad 22 stone blocks, 20 planks, and 35 sticks. I needed a door... I thought tomyself. I quickly pulled out the workbench and arranged 6 planks all next toeach other in the shape of a door. Voila! A door! I grabbed it and placed it atthe entrance right as the sun was about to set. Soon I would have to hide. Istarted to realize that everything I need to make I could just make the shapeof it and I would get it. I thought of what to do next, and then I thought Ineed light! Wood makes light doesn't it? I ran outside, grabbed 10 blocks ofwood, and came back inside. I rubbed this small black stone I got from somegravel against the sticks and wood and boom, I had a small fire. I took twosticks, conjoined them together, and lit one end, creating a torch. I placed iton the wall to have some light. I blocked off the rest of the entrance withstone and decided to lie down. It was cold but I felt accomplish. I reviewedwhat I had done that day; I made fire, a torch, a door, sticks, a pickaxe, anew shelter and figured out how the monsters worked. A great day. Now I have torest.
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GOD DAMNIT, GOD DAMNIT, GOD DAMNIT!
YOU BROKE THE RULES!
YOU.. YOU BROKE THE RULES! YOU CANT DO THAT!
YOU BROKE THE GODDAMN RULES!