Well I wanted to write a mc story so here is the prolouge id love some feedback and if you like plz tell me annd I'll continue
Prolouge
There are legends of an ancient pick used long before the advancements of modern man. A pick so powerful it could instantly mine any ore and never breaks. Its origin is unknown but people say that the Minens created as a gift to the gods. But if it falls into the wrong hands it could cause catastrophe all over the minecraft world. The evil spirit named Herobrine has constantly tried to steal it but has been halted by the god that guards it this god is known as Notch. Notch is the creator of the entire Minecraft world,he has been known as the most powerful man in the Minecraft world, but he has gotten old and can no longer protect it. A new hero must rise if the Minecraft world is ever going to uphold its current balance of good and evil. This heroes name is Jake Casper.
someone explains what he'll do with it in the next chapter but i guess i could revise my story a little or i could just change the plot from a pick to some kind of artifact that does whatever the creator wants maybe I'll make a poll for that
Prolouge
There are legends of an ancient pick used long before the advancements of modern man. A pick so powerful it could instantly mine any ore and never breaks. Its origin is unknown but people say that the Minens created as a gift to the gods. But if it falls into the wrong hands it could cause catastrophe all over the minecraft world. The evil spirit named Herobrine has constantly tried to steal it but has been halted by the god that guards it this god is known as Notch. Notch is the creator of the entire Minecraft world,he has been known as the most powerful man in the Minecraft world, but he has gotten old and can no longer protect it. A new hero must rise if the Minecraft world is ever going to uphold its current balance of good and evil. This heroes name is Jake Casper.
holy rusted metal batman thats awesome
what did you use to make it?
"...Billions of lighthouses, stuck at the far end of the sky."