BigDogDude- A few issues with your application. The backstory was not very will put together. I suggest revising it and adding a little more depth to it. Secondly, Dragonair as a starter? Uh... thats a big no no. If I rejected a dratini starter why would I accept dragonair? This needs to be changed, pronto. I would also like a little more length on the IC responses please. Feel free to read some other apps to get a better idea on what you need! Fix those things and repost your app please, thanks!
I am sorry if my app isnt good I will write it if I have to.OOC INFORMATION
IGN:Short_Guy_LaUgH
Age:15
Gender:Male
Roleplay Experience:I have a great amount of experience, but always willing to learn more.
Pokemon/Pixelmon Experience: Im a little on the okay side. I use to watch a lot of it when I was younger don’t know a whole lot, but again I am willing to learn!
IN GAME INFORMATION
Character Name: Rasiki
Gender: Male
Age: 18
Backstory: Rasiki,he isn’t much of a pokemon person. Although he wasn’t much of a pokemon person he had a bulbasaur, He enjoys the grass and bug type although they are bit weaker than the others he always thought they were unique in their own way. Now that was a different story. He was born in the Kanto in Lavender Town. Before the chaos he was in a team of Pokemon trainers, the team was no regular team they didn’t try to get the strongest Pokemon they wanted the most unique. He enjoyed this. Even though he wasn’t completely fond of Pokemon. He still enjoyed this. Rasiki, story is still discovered from here.When he arrived in Pallet Town he was afraid.. He was as weak as anyone could be, when he was at his lowest with no glow in his eyes. Someone found him, helped him.
(I will understand if I need to rewrite it. The lore just doesn’t give enough for me to work with :/)
Character Responses: (fill these out in character. These are to test your RP abilities. This is not the biggest decision maker, but can drastically help your application if you are good.)
You are running as fast as you can to get to the pokemon center, your sick meowth pants heavily in your arms. You know if you do not make it soon the poor thing may not make it. At that moment, you hear a shriek. Turning to your right you see a small girl, overshadowed by a menacing Arbok. You have no pokemon that are fit for battle, but if you don't do something, the child will almost certainly be lunch. You give a worried glance downat your meowth, and then back at the scene unfolding before you.... you have a choice to make, and you have to make it now.: “I put the meowth down knowing he or any of my pokemon can battle and I also wave my hands In a fast motion and I bring out my backpack and pull out some berrys” Come Arbok! *He yells* *Throws the berry off to the side as I run to get the child*
You grunt with frustration as you return your beaten and bruised beedrill to its pokeball. How in the world your opponents sandslash is that powerful, you have no idea. You only have two pokemon remaining. Your starter, who is only in it's second form, and your pidgeotto, who has already had a hard day of battles. Who do you go with now?
I choose you bulbasaur! *Knowing ground is weak to grass* I use all grass attacks to defeat sandslash.
The trade being offered to you is more than generous. Not only is what they're offering shiny, but it is the perfect type you need to fill your party out. But... is it really worth your starter? After all you have been through, the countless adventures you have shared, will you forfeit all of that for the perfect team combination? You step up to trade machine, sweaty palms, now is the moment of truth...
*Stares at the Man* I will not give my starter away, That shiny is not worth the time and memories I had with my starter. I am sorry.
EXTRA CREDIT:
Define Metagaming: Knowing something your character does not.
Its not hard to install first (on windows go to start and type in %appdata% then dowload pixelmon the forge it says to custom npcs and then get 7-zip or winrar.(Make sure no other mods are installed) go to bin and right click minecraft then click open with winrar or 7-zip find Meta-Inf and right click then click delete files. Then double click minecraft forge high light all the files and drag them into minecraft. Then go back into your .minecraft folde double click the pixelmon .zip and high light the files and drag them into your .minecraft foulder in there then add the custom npc .zip into the mods folder the exit out and start up minecraft and done!
Roleplay Experience: I started off with small RP server, I mean those really small ones with "Towny" way back when. As I gained experience for RP I joined more complex servers like Iriliath.
Pokemon/Pixelmon Experience: I am Kinda experienced in Pokemon just not extremely in knowledge of it.
IN GAME INFORMATION
Character Name: Rasiki
Gender: Male
Age: 18
Backstory: Rasiki is a young man and caring for his pokemon, he was also born in the Kanto Region. When Rasiki was little he use to watch the grass and bug type pokemon in their natural habitat and was always interested in the grass and bug type although they were weaker than most pokemon, they were special to him. Just the way they lived interested him, and how they used their surroundings to hide for predators. He lived a special life, Rasiki lived alone life living in the forest when his parents were killed maybe thats why he likes the grass and bug type pokemon. He is very shy but caring, if he sees that you are in need he will help as best as you can. Rasiki loved any pokemon but he mostly loved the ones he bonds with before he catches them, take his starter pokemon for instance bulbasaur, Rasiki did not just simple choose him they boned together before he was a trainer he also fought for Rasiki they best he could. The day of the massive chaos he became an official trainer. Proud of this he ran start to the grass and bug type pokemon he lived with and jumped with joy so did they. The next day the pokemon did not act the same. They hid they were afraid of something and Rasiki did not know what was wrong. Not knowing the pokemon showed him to the ocean and showed him that he need to get out fast. With his only pokemon bulbasuar he sailed. Big waves bashed his small boat and it broke into piece he was feared that he wouldn’t live. Waking up he noticed he was in a small town, coughing up water he quickly searchers for his pokemon ball and relieved he finds it. And old man walks up to him and asked what has happened to you? (And the rest is for Rp. :P)
Character Responses: (fill these out in character. These are to test your RP abilities. This is not the biggest decision maker, but can drastically help your application if you are good.)
You are running as fast as you can to get to the pokemon center, you’re sick meowth pants heavily in your arms. You know if you do not make it soon the poor thing may not make it. At that moment, you hear a shriek. Turning to your right you see a small girl, overshadowed by a menacing Arbok. You have no pokemon that are fit for battle, but if you don't do something, the child will almost certainly be lunch. You give a worried glance downat your meowth, and then back at the scene unfolding before you.... you have a choice to make, and you have to make it now: As they Arbok looks down at the young child, Rasiki look down towards the meowth in his hand and places it slowly behind it. *Shouts at the Arbok* As the Arbok stares at Rasiki *he throws a stick at it* The Arbok runs toward Rasiki. *Shouts to the Child* Please take these pokemon to the pokemon center *Putting down his pokeballs and runs*
You grunt with frustration as you return your beaten and bruised beedrill to its pokeball. How in the world your opponents sandslash is that powerful, you have no idea. You only have two pokemon remaining. Your starter, who is only in it's second form, and your pidgeotto, who has already had a hard day of battles. Who do you go with now?.*Thinking of is grass type knowledge* bulbasaur I choose you! (Grass beats Ground :P)
The trade being offered to you is more than generous. Not only is what they're offering shiny, but it is the perfect type you need to fill your party out. But... is it really worth your starter? After all you have been through, the countless adventures you have shared, will you forfeit all of that for the perfect team combination? You step up to trade machine, sweaty palms, now is the moment of truth...
*Stares at the Man* I will not give my starter away, That shiny is not worth the time and memories I have had with my starter. I am sorry.
EXTRA CREDIT:
Define Metagaming: Your character knowing something that they have not figured out in character.
Define Powergaming: Making yourself overpowered like say “I have the most powerful Pokemon!”
(Sorry for the delay everybody. Was reviewing these earlier and then had a PC crash.)
ACCEPTED:
SwampFace12 - Loved your last IC response! Welcome to the server!
Lavatron65- Accepted, though I will say you need a small edit at the end... The Professor has not been seen in years, and nobody knows why (its in a piece of lore about to be released). You of course could not have known this, so it is perfectly excused. Welcome!
Short_Guy_LaUgH- I was reviewing earlier and had a PC crash. You obviously updated your backstory in that time, which is good, because before that it was deferred. Thanks for clearing that up though, welcome to the server!
spartanempoleo- Not a bad app for a beginner at RP. Welcome to the server and be sure to ask if you have any questions!
hampeey- Accepted, with a few conditions. Eevee is a choice as a starter, so I would recommend eevee as opposed to Vaporeon (evolving it wont be hard) and secondly, I am not sure what I am doing with the teams yet, but you are more than welcome to play as Team Aqua for now. Welcome to the server! DEFERRED:
BigDogDude- Your backstory makes no sense. Please revise and make sure it fits (i.e. The darkness is presently here, its not seven whole years after the fact.
Roleplay Experience: Erm, I played a few. But not in MC
Pokemon/Pixelmon Experience: I'd say average.
IN GAME INFORMATION
Character Name: Fionna
Gender: Guurrl
Age: 15
Backstory (please keep it in Kanto/Johto, and be sure your backstory concludes with your character arriving at Pallet Town. Also in no circumstances are you to include characters from the Anime and or Manga in your backstory. Also note that you get one starter pokemon when you join the server, so if you decide to give yourself a party of 6 OP pokemon in your backstory you probably won't be accepted.):
Fionna, a young, promising but naive pokemon trainer from Pallet Town chose Squirtle as her starter. Although she waned a Charmander, she quickly changed her mind about that when she got Squirtle as a starter. (Gary took Charmander D:<) Her current rival is called 'Gary Oak' and she hates him with EVERY fiber of her body. When she meets Jessie, she was convinced that Team Rocket 'liberates' pokemon from abusive trainers and welp, got her in trouble when she defended Team Rocket. Later on, she learned the truth from Gary and is now fighting against them in anger for tricking her. She is a calm but sometimes CAHRAZY! Whenever she KNOWS she's in trouble, she tries to run away but usually fails with fainted pokemon. And that happens WAY too much!
Character Responses: (fill these out in character. These are to test your RP abilities. This is not the biggest decision maker, but can drastically help your application if you are good.)
You are running as fast as you can to get to the pokemon center, your sick meowth pants heavily in your arms. You know if you do not make it soon the poor thing may not make it. At that moment, you hear a shriek. Turning to your right you see a small girl, overshadowed by a menacing Arbok. You have no pokemon that are fit for battle, but if you don't do something, the child will almost certainly be lunch. You give a worried glance down at your meowth, and then back at the scene unfolding before you.... you have a choice to make, and you have to make it now.
Give Meowth the Full Heal that I always have for emergencies. You send out Meowth to distract the Arbok and I shout to the girl to get out. After that, I call back Meowth to his/her pokeball and ran the heck outta there. I always buy some full heal or at least 5x of different remedies.
You grunt with frustration as you return your beaten and bruised beedrill to its pokeball. How in the world did your opponent's sandslash get that powerful, you have no idea. You only have two pokemon remaining. Your starter, who is only in it's second form, and your pidgeotto, who has already had a hard day of battles. Who do you go with now?
Go! Warturtle! Use Withdraw!
(Sandslash uses sand attack.)
Use Bubble!
(The attack missed!)
~HAHA! Your Warturtle is NO match for MY Sandslash!~
USE BUBBLE AGAIN AND MAKE IT COUNT!
(Sandslash is hit! It's super effective!)
~*grunt!* Sandslash, USE SAND TOMB!~
Use Bubble hard on!
(Sandslash was hit! It's super effective! Sandslash's speed goes down...)
Sandslash fainted...
*VICTORY MUSIC!*
The trade being offered to you is more than generous. Not only is what they're offering shiny, but it is the perfect type you need to fill your party out. But... is it really worth your starter? After all you have been through, the countless adventures you have shared, will you forfeit all of that for the perfect team combination? You step up to trade machine, sweaty palms, now is the moment of truth...
"... Wait a minute... Can I have a moment with my squirtle?"
"sure..."
I send out squirtle and say, "Hey squirtle, let's ditch this stupid guy!
ihtimx- Your app had a lot of spunk, but it needs a little bit of work. Please re read the guidelines carefully. Firstly, you can not use any characters of the anime or manga in your backstory which you did. Secondly, the server is based off the manga, not the anime, so Gary Oak does not even exist. Please revise your backstory and repost!
Well hurry up you two! The Server is now open.
IGN:Short_Guy_LaUgH
Age:15
Gender:Male
Roleplay Experience:I have a great amount of experience, but always willing to learn more.
Pokemon/Pixelmon Experience: Im a little on the okay side. I use to watch a lot of it when I was younger don’t know a whole lot, but again I am willing to learn!
IN GAME INFORMATION
Character Name: Rasiki
Gender: Male
Age: 18
Backstory: Rasiki,he isn’t much of a pokemon person. Although he wasn’t much of a pokemon person he had a bulbasaur, He enjoys the grass and bug type although they are bit weaker than the others he always thought they were unique in their own way. Now that was a different story. He was born in the Kanto in Lavender Town. Before the chaos he was in a team of Pokemon trainers, the team was no regular team they didn’t try to get the strongest Pokemon they wanted the most unique. He enjoyed this. Even though he wasn’t completely fond of Pokemon. He still enjoyed this. Rasiki, story is still discovered from here.When he arrived in Pallet Town he was afraid.. He was as weak as anyone could be, when he was at his lowest with no glow in his eyes. Someone found him, helped him.
(I will understand if I need to rewrite it. The lore just doesn’t give enough for me to work with :/)
Character Responses: (fill these out in character. These are to test your RP abilities. This is not the biggest decision maker, but can drastically help your application if you are good.)
You are running as fast as you can to get to the pokemon center, your sick meowth pants heavily in your arms. You know if you do not make it soon the poor thing may not make it. At that moment, you hear a shriek. Turning to your right you see a small girl, overshadowed by a menacing Arbok. You have no pokemon that are fit for battle, but if you don't do something, the child will almost certainly be lunch. You give a worried glance downat your meowth, and then back at the scene unfolding before you.... you have a choice to make, and you have to make it now.: “I put the meowth down knowing he or any of my pokemon can battle and I also wave my hands In a fast motion and I bring out my backpack and pull out some berrys” Come Arbok! *He yells* *Throws the berry off to the side as I run to get the child*
You grunt with frustration as you return your beaten and bruised beedrill to its pokeball. How in the world your opponents sandslash is that powerful, you have no idea. You only have two pokemon remaining. Your starter, who is only in it's second form, and your pidgeotto, who has already had a hard day of battles. Who do you go with now?
I choose you bulbasaur! *Knowing ground is weak to grass* I use all grass attacks to defeat sandslash.
The trade being offered to you is more than generous. Not only is what they're offering shiny, but it is the perfect type you need to fill your party out. But... is it really worth your starter? After all you have been through, the countless adventures you have shared, will you forfeit all of that for the perfect team combination? You step up to trade machine, sweaty palms, now is the moment of truth...
*Stares at the Man* I will not give my starter away, That shiny is not worth the time and memories I had with my starter. I am sorry.
EXTRA CREDIT:
Define Metagaming: Knowing something your character does not.
Define Powergaming: Making yourself op.
.sorry it is terrible I was tried at the time
Aaarghhh D::
*Dies*
IGN:Short_Guy_LaUgH
Age:15
Gender:Male
Roleplay Experience: I started off with small RP server, I mean those really small ones with "Towny" way back when. As I gained experience for RP I joined more complex servers like Iriliath.
Pokemon/Pixelmon Experience: I am Kinda experienced in Pokemon just not extremely in knowledge of it.
IN GAME INFORMATION
Character Name: Rasiki
Gender: Male
Age: 18
Backstory: Rasiki is a young man and caring for his pokemon, he was also born in the Kanto Region. When Rasiki was little he use to watch the grass and bug type pokemon in their natural habitat and was always interested in the grass and bug type although they were weaker than most pokemon, they were special to him. Just the way they lived interested him, and how they used their surroundings to hide for predators. He lived a special life, Rasiki lived alone life living in the forest when his parents were killed maybe thats why he likes the grass and bug type pokemon. He is very shy but caring, if he sees that you are in need he will help as best as you can. Rasiki loved any pokemon but he mostly loved the ones he bonds with before he catches them, take his starter pokemon for instance bulbasaur, Rasiki did not just simple choose him they boned together before he was a trainer he also fought for Rasiki they best he could. The day of the massive chaos he became an official trainer. Proud of this he ran start to the grass and bug type pokemon he lived with and jumped with joy so did they. The next day the pokemon did not act the same. They hid they were afraid of something and Rasiki did not know what was wrong. Not knowing the pokemon showed him to the ocean and showed him that he need to get out fast. With his only pokemon bulbasuar he sailed. Big waves bashed his small boat and it broke into piece he was feared that he wouldn’t live. Waking up he noticed he was in a small town, coughing up water he quickly searchers for his pokemon ball and relieved he finds it. And old man walks up to him and asked what has happened to you? (And the rest is for Rp. :P)
Character Responses: (fill these out in character. These are to test your RP abilities. This is not the biggest decision maker, but can drastically help your application if you are good.)
You are running as fast as you can to get to the pokemon center, you’re sick meowth pants heavily in your arms. You know if you do not make it soon the poor thing may not make it. At that moment, you hear a shriek. Turning to your right you see a small girl, overshadowed by a menacing Arbok. You have no pokemon that are fit for battle, but if you don't do something, the child will almost certainly be lunch. You give a worried glance downat your meowth, and then back at the scene unfolding before you.... you have a choice to make, and you have to make it now: As they Arbok looks down at the young child, Rasiki look down towards the meowth in his hand and places it slowly behind it. *Shouts at the Arbok* As the Arbok stares at Rasiki *he throws a stick at it* The Arbok runs toward Rasiki. *Shouts to the Child* Please take these pokemon to the pokemon center *Putting down his pokeballs and runs*
You grunt with frustration as you return your beaten and bruised beedrill to its pokeball. How in the world your opponents sandslash is that powerful, you have no idea. You only have two pokemon remaining. Your starter, who is only in it's second form, and your pidgeotto, who has already had a hard day of battles. Who do you go with now?.*Thinking of is grass type knowledge* bulbasaur I choose you! (Grass beats Ground :P)
The trade being offered to you is more than generous. Not only is what they're offering shiny, but it is the perfect type you need to fill your party out. But... is it really worth your starter? After all you have been through, the countless adventures you have shared, will you forfeit all of that for the perfect team combination? You step up to trade machine, sweaty palms, now is the moment of truth...
*Stares at the Man* I will not give my starter away, That shiny is not worth the time and memories I have had with my starter. I am sorry.
EXTRA CREDIT:
Define Metagaming: Your character knowing something that they have not figured out in character.
Define Powergaming: Making yourself overpowered like say “I have the most powerful Pokemon!”
ACCEPTED:
SwampFace12 - Loved your last IC response! Welcome to the server!
Lavatron65- Accepted, though I will say you need a small edit at the end... The Professor has not been seen in years, and nobody knows why (its in a piece of lore about to be released). You of course could not have known this, so it is perfectly excused. Welcome!
Short_Guy_LaUgH- I was reviewing earlier and had a PC crash. You obviously updated your backstory in that time, which is good, because before that it was deferred. Thanks for clearing that up though, welcome to the server!
spartanempoleo- Not a bad app for a beginner at RP. Welcome to the server and be sure to ask if you have any questions!
hampeey- Accepted, with a few conditions. Eevee is a choice as a starter, so I would recommend eevee as opposed to Vaporeon (evolving it wont be hard) and secondly, I am not sure what I am doing with the teams yet, but you are more than welcome to play as Team Aqua for now. Welcome to the server!
DEFERRED:
BigDogDude- Your backstory makes no sense. Please revise and make sure it fits (i.e. The darkness is presently here, its not seven whole years after the fact.
Says Im missing a bunch of pixelmon Items.
Try deleting everything (Including the pixelmon.config) and redownload 2.0.2
IGN: ihtimx
Age: 12
Gender: Female!
Roleplay Experience: Erm, I played a few. But not in MC
Pokemon/Pixelmon Experience: I'd say average.
IN GAME INFORMATION
Character Name: Fionna
Gender: Guurrl
Age: 15
Backstory (please keep it in Kanto/Johto, and be sure your backstory concludes with your character arriving at Pallet Town. Also in no circumstances are you to include characters from the Anime and or Manga in your backstory. Also note that you get one starter pokemon when you join the server, so if you decide to give yourself a party of 6 OP pokemon in your backstory you probably won't be accepted.):
Fionna, a young, promising but naive pokemon trainer from Pallet Town chose Squirtle as her starter. Although she waned a Charmander, she quickly changed her mind about that when she got Squirtle as a starter. (Gary took Charmander D:<) Her current rival is called 'Gary Oak' and she hates him with EVERY fiber of her body. When she meets Jessie, she was convinced that Team Rocket 'liberates' pokemon from abusive trainers and welp, got her in trouble when she defended Team Rocket. Later on, she learned the truth from Gary and is now fighting against them in anger for tricking her. She is a calm but sometimes CAHRAZY! Whenever she KNOWS she's in trouble, she tries to run away but usually fails with fainted pokemon. And that happens WAY too much!
Character Responses: (fill these out in character. These are to test your RP abilities. This is not the biggest decision maker, but can drastically help your application if you are good.)
You are running as fast as you can to get to the pokemon center, your sick meowth pants heavily in your arms. You know if you do not make it soon the poor thing may not make it. At that moment, you hear a shriek. Turning to your right you see a small girl, overshadowed by a menacing Arbok. You have no pokemon that are fit for battle, but if you don't do something, the child will almost certainly be lunch. You give a worried glance down at your meowth, and then back at the scene unfolding before you.... you have a choice to make, and you have to make it now.
Give Meowth the Full Heal that I always have for emergencies. You send out Meowth to distract the Arbok and I shout to the girl to get out. After that, I call back Meowth to his/her pokeball and ran the heck outta there. I always buy some full heal or at least 5x of different remedies.
You grunt with frustration as you return your beaten and bruised beedrill to its pokeball. How in the world did your opponent's sandslash get that powerful, you have no idea. You only have two pokemon remaining. Your starter, who is only in it's second form, and your pidgeotto, who has already had a hard day of battles. Who do you go with now?
Go! Warturtle! Use Withdraw!
(Sandslash uses sand attack.)
Use Bubble!
(The attack missed!)
~HAHA! Your Warturtle is NO match for MY Sandslash!~
USE BUBBLE AGAIN AND MAKE IT COUNT!
(Sandslash is hit! It's super effective!)
~*grunt!* Sandslash, USE SAND TOMB!~
Use Bubble hard on!
(Sandslash was hit! It's super effective! Sandslash's speed goes down...)
Sandslash fainted...
*VICTORY MUSIC!*
The trade being offered to you is more than generous. Not only is what they're offering shiny, but it is the perfect type you need to fill your party out. But... is it really worth your starter? After all you have been through, the countless adventures you have shared, will you forfeit all of that for the perfect team combination? You step up to trade machine, sweaty palms, now is the moment of truth...
"... Wait a minute... Can I have a moment with my squirtle?"
"sure..."
I send out squirtle and say, "Hey squirtle, let's ditch this stupid guy!
And we live HAPPILY EVER AFTER!
Homestuck will truly be the end of me.
Edit - wait not cool I can't get on then
ihtimx- Your app had a lot of spunk, but it needs a little bit of work. Please re read the guidelines carefully. Firstly, you can not use any characters of the anime or manga in your backstory which you did. Secondly, the server is based off the manga, not the anime, so Gary Oak does not even exist. Please revise your backstory and repost!