I've said this before, but I'll say it again. If you make a Guard app and in your recommendations section you put a name of a person who is a Guard or especially Trainee it means nothing. Literally nothing at all, doing this would be the same: "Recommendations: Squirrel from my backyard, random guy from another server, some seagull I saw on vacation, a hobo I gave a penny to."
Please only put AlphaGuard's in your Recommended Section.
I've said this before, but I'll say it again. If you make a Guard app and in your recommendations section you put a name of a person who is a Guard or especially Trainee it means nothing. Literally nothing at all, doing this would be the same: "Recommendations: Squirrel from my backyard, random guy from another server, some seagull I saw on vacation, a hobo I gave a penny to."
Please only put AlphaGuard's in your Recommended Section.
~The more you know
Trainees sure but Guards should be fine. And no it's not like saying a Squirrel gave you a rec.
roses are red, violets are blue, i hope my application, is good enough for you.
my name is greatawesomefool, my age is 14, i hope you read this, because i want to work for you.
my rank on the server, is prisoner B, being a guard, would be very lovely.
ive played on the server, for quite a while, i think around 2 weeks, and im doing that with style.
ive played some prison games, they are not the same, compared to this, all of them are lame.
my time zones pacific, i live in BC, not getting promoted, would sting like a bee.
the reason you should promote me, id be a good trainee, im responsible, trustworthy, and im good at pvp. i dont steal, thats very wrong, i prefer making people happy, by making fair deals. i understand nagging would get me declined, i would not even consider that,because most naggers are not very kind.
i hope you read this, i wish you good luck, not being a guard, can sometimes suck.
(couldnt find a rhyming word with noahkii, i hope that doesnt ruin the poem :3 )
1) Username:ThePhantomHD 2) Your age:13 3) How long have you been playing the server? About 4 Months 4) Have you read the Server, Prison, and Guard Rules? I have read all the rules several times 5) Any experience with the prison genre? Lots 6) What is your time zone? Pacific 7) Why are you the best choice for guard? First off I am experienced with prison servers. Secondly I am also a guard in Dcpvp Server which gives me experience in being a guard. I am fair with other players and I won't over use my power with other players (if I become a guard). Plus I have a fast computer which won't lag and won't get me killed easily. And finally I am thinking about creating my own Youtube channel which will make the server more popular. 8) Do you understand that nagging Wardens in-game to read your app will result in immediate decline? I do understand 9) What is your current prison rank? Do you understand that we will require a screenshot of this when/if you retire from guard? I am Free-Rank and i do understand -ThePhantomHD
roses are red, violets are blue, i hope my application, is good enough for you.
my name is greatawesomefool, my age is 14, i hope you read this, because i want to work for you.
my rank on the server, is prisoner B, being a guard, would be very lovely.
ive played on the server, for quite a while, i think around 2 weeks, and im doing that with style.
ive played some prison games, they are not the same, compared to this, all of them are lame.
my time zones pacific, i live in BC, not getting promoted, would sting like a bee.
the reason you should promote me, id be a good trainee, im responsible, trustworthy, and im good at pvp. i dont steal, thats very wrong, i prefer making people happy, by making fair deals. i understand nagging would get me declined, i would not even consider that,because most naggers are not very kind.
i hope you read this, i wish you good luck, not being a guard, can sometimes suck.
(couldnt find a rhyming word with noahkii, i hope that doesnt ruin the poem :3 )
Good poem but you should stick to the guard format
Kay_Nife's application for Guard! 1) Username: Kay_Nife2) Your age: 13 1/23) How long have you been playing the server? (Minimum of 3 days) I'd say 3 months.4) Have you read the Server, Prison, and Guard Rules? I read it over 7 times, here's proof NOAKII5) Any experience with the prison genre? I've learned all of it over the time I've been on this sever.6) What is your time zone? Eastearn, sirs.7) Why are you the best choice for guard? (1-2 paragraphs) I am the best, for guard because I understand all of the genre, and I am very skilled at pvp, I know I mess with guards and trollfist but I don't do that anymore, I am a very good student in traning. I love working with and helping with severs, I have been a very good man, in this sever and would like to accutalty get involved with mini and or large raids/riots. I am there, to support any admin or Alpha Guard or any high rank, on the commander. I know that we should all respect eachother, but I like to help others, but I will NOT give people any items even, my best friends. I know how to use my tools correctly, not abusivley. I love this sever, and most people enjoy spending time with me, I have alot of friends on this sever, but I know when someone is conning me out of jail/D block. I know how to control a riot, to calm it down and or destroy it.8) Do you understand that nagging Wardens in-game to read your app will result in immediate decline? I know it annoys the crap out of them, so I will not even ask.9) What is your current prison rank? Do you understand that we will require a screenshot of this when/if you retire from guard? A I have a screenie ready, when you need it.
Dude. Stop. Reposting. Your app. You repost it 1 or 2 times every page. It says every 3 days or 10 pages. Seriously.
And I did not mean don't capitalize. I mean "i" instead of "I" and "im a gaurd" instead of "I'm a guard". Also, don't use swear words in your app, even if they are censored. And putting an emoticon in your app is not a really good idea. "If you don't like this, you're a [NotchEmote]!" So now you are "insulting" the readers who don't like your app? Also, ".. and either kill or jail" We know. This is in the rules, and all guards do it, no need to say that you will do what your job is mainly about. You won't protect players who don't follow rules? Even if they are a "diamnd armor killer" you still need to protect them if they are being attacked. And to be honest, a "diamnd armor killer" can kill a trainee in just a few swings of a sword, while even 3 alphas at once take a while to kill ONE of them.
Sorry if this sounds like I'm being a bit too harsh on you, but I believe in constructive criticism so you can make your app better ^^
only reason i keep reposting is cause your 'basiclly' declining.
I've said this before, but I'll say it again. If you make a Guard app and in your recommendations section you put a name of a person who is a Guard or especially Trainee it means nothing. Literally nothing at all, doing this would be the same: "Recommendations: Squirrel from my backyard, random guy from another server, some seagull I saw on vacation, a hobo I gave a penny to."
Please only put AlphaGuard's in your Recommended Section.
~The more you know
You mean those recommendations I got from my backyard squirrel, my friend from that other server, the talking seagull I met on a vacation in Hawaii, and that kind hobo that I gave a penny to mean absoultely nothing?
Oh dear...
(No but seriously pretty much the only meaningful recommendations come from Alphas and Wardens. If someone receives a lot of recommendations from Guards & Trainees, then we may be influenced to accept them, but not always.)
1.origamime
2.10
3.8 days.
4.read the rules
5.yes i have experience
6.mountain time zone (phoenix,AZ,USA)
7.I think I am the best choice because I follow all the rules and I am very loyal. I am also smart and at my school i am very noakii. <---lol and i am taking AIMS and today we had a little game and i got ALL the points for my team.even though i got declined for math AEP i didnt on reading,the teacher didnt wont me there i suposse cause she hated my brother o.o.and i will protcect all (yes ALL) only if they follow rules.also im very athletic i am epic at soccer and sports like football,futball(soccer)basketball,and Tether Ball.i also like people to call me origs.i even did a wax mueseum about notch!priceepic is my brother.i am also very popular at school.(thats what noakii is/means.)i think thats enough to say on 7.
8.i do
9i have the screenshot ready.
1.origamime
2.10
3.8 days.
4.read the rules
5.yes i have experience
6.mountain time zone (phoenix,AZ,USA)
7.I think I am the best choice because I follow all the rules and I am very loyal. I am also smart and at my school i am very noakii. <---lol and i am taking AIMS and today we had a little game and i got ALL the points for my team.even though i got declined for math AEP i didnt on reading,the teacher didnt wont me there i suposse cause she hated my brother o.o.and i will protcect all (yes ALL) only if they follow rules.also im very athletic i am epic at soccer and sports like football,futball(soccer)basketball,and Tether Ball.i also like people to call me origs.i even did a wax mueseum about notch!priceepic is my brother.i am also very popular at school.(thats what noakii is/means.)i think thats enough to say on 7.
8.i do
9i have the screenshot ready.
I have a feeling that your app content is a bit short and irrelevant in question 7.
1. ButterKing5000 2. 12 3. I have been playing for about 6 months. 4. I have read and understand all the rules. 5. I have a little experience in the prison genre. 6. My time zone is mountain time zone. 7. I think I am the best choice because I follow all the rules and I am very loyal. I am also smart and I am in the GT program or gifted and talented at my school. I love to play Minecraft and the Convicted Prison server is my favorite server in the world. I am also skilled in controlling my Minecraft character so I will not die easily. I also do not want to become a guard just to get revenge on people because that is just wrong and I don't really have any enemies. 8. I understand that this application will be denied if I ask a warden to read this. 9. My current rank is free. I understand that you need a screenshot when/if I retire from guard. (You are Awesome Noakii)
Use the correct guard app format and you should improve 7
Thanks,
Tom the guard
Ha the guard apps at the beginning of the forums post are so simple and were accepted really easily now its like so complicated. But that's the way I like it so theirs less of a chance of a bad guard.
I've said this before, but I'll say it again. If you make a Guard app and in your recommendations section you put a name of a person who is a Guard or especially Trainee it means nothing. Literally nothing at all, doing this would be the same: "Recommendations: Squirrel from my backyard, random guy from another server, some seagull I saw on vacation, a hobo I gave a penny to."
Please only put AlphaGuard's in your Recommended Section.
~The more you know
I disagree, it may not help you get an a achievement but i think its a way of telling them i like your guard app.
Also i like it how you compair guards too, hobos, random people and talking animals.
I've said this before, but I'll say it again. If you make a Guard app and in your recommendations section you put a name of a person who is a Guard or especially Trainee it means nothing. Literally nothing at all, doing this would be the same: "Recommendations: Squirrel from my backyard, random guy from another server, some seagull I saw on vacation, a hobo I gave a penny to."
Please only put AlphaGuard's in your Recommended Section.
~The more you know
Usually if guards are all over an app it probably means that person is a well known and respected veteran who will probably get accepted anyways. That being said, I don't think it matters too much.
1) Username: Robocreeps
2) Your age: 15
3) How long have you been playing the server? (Minimum of 3 days) 1 Month
4) Have you read the Server, Prison, and Guard Rules? Yes i have read the rules correctly
5) Any experience with the prison genre? Yes i have played another server named Killion Detention Center
6) What is your time zone? 5:00 pm- 8:00pm EST
7) Why are you the best choice for guard? (1-2 paragraphs) i am the best choice because i am helpful in the prison and i will help people gain money and timeouts the ones who have any contra-ban items if their in a non-Pvp zone. I will kill if their out of pvp and protect other players if they pvp each other
8) Do you understand that nagging Wardens in-game to read your app will result in immediate decline? Yes i will not do that. Wardens are left alone for their hard work of keeping up the server
9) What is your current prison rank? Do you understand that we will require a screenshot of this when/if you retire from guard? Yes my current prison rank is a B. I understand that i will send a screenshot of my prison rank if i retire from a guard.
1)Username: Jimyoface 2)Your age: 11, almost 12 (Pleasedont judge me by my age). 3)Howlong have you been playing the server?(Minimum of 3 days)A week i think. 4)Have you read the Server,Prison,andGuardRules? Yes! 5)Any experience with the prison genre? Yes! 6)Whatis your time zone? Eastern US & Canada 7)Why are you the best choice for guard?(1-2 paragraphs)I believe i am the best choice for a gaurd because i am mature, responsible, and very "Grown-up" for my age. I will Jail people responsibly, will punish when punishment is needed, and ban ONLY when banning is needed. I am good at pvp (those pesky killers wont get me :D), and will overall help to make this community better. 8)Do you understand that nagging Wardensin-game to read your app will result in immediate decline? Yes because it is ANNOYING (i owned a server once) 9)Whatis your current prison rank?Do you understand that we will require a screenshot of thiswhen/if you retire from guard? I am Rank C, yes i do understand that i will require a screenshot if i retire.
1)Username: Jimyoface 2)Your age: 11, almost 12 (Pleasedont judge me by my age). 3)Howlong have you been playing the server?(Minimum of 3 days)A week i think. 4)Have you read the Server,Prison,andGuardRules? Yes! 5)Any experience with the prison genre? Yes! 6)Whatis your time zone? Eastern US & Canada 7)Why are you the best choice for guard?(1-2 paragraphs)I believe i am the best choice for a gaurd because i am mature, responsible, and very "Grown-up" for my age. I will Jail people responsibly, will punish when punishment is needed, and ban ONLY when banning is needed. I am good at pvp (those pesky killers wont get me ), and will overall help to make this community better. 8)Do you understand that nagging Wardensin-game to read your app will result in immediate decline? Yes because it is ANNOYING (i owned a server once) 9)Whatis your current prison rank?Do you understand that we will require a screenshot of thiswhen/if you retire from guard? I am Rank C, yes i do understand that i will require a screenshot if i retire.
When I saw the please don't judge me by my age, I smiled because I put that in my app too
Extend on Number 7 and reread the rules, you are missing something.
1) Username:WCCDMVZ
2) Your age:15
3) How long have you been playing the server? 3-4 days
4) Have you read the Server, Prison, and Guard Rules? yes and I will follow them
5) Any experience with the prison genre? yes I have been on a couple of other prison servers but none as good as this one
6) What is your time zone? AZ time
7) Why are you the best choice for guard? (1-2 paragraphs) I have been a guard on a couple of other servers and I know how to act properly as a guard and as a prisoner. I have been sent to a lower sector in a lot of servers but not for bad reasons just role-play.
8) Do you understand that nagging Wardens in-game to read your app will result in immediate decline? yes I will not be nagging wardens or anyone.
9) What is your current prison rank? Do you understand that we will require a screenshot of this when/if you retire from guard?my current prison rank is C and I do under stand you will need a snapshot
Please only put AlphaGuard's in your Recommended Section.
~The more you know
Trainees sure but Guards should be fine. And no it's not like saying a Squirrel gave you a rec.
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my name is greatawesomefool, my age is 14, i hope you read this, because i want to work for you.
my rank on the server, is prisoner B, being a guard, would be very lovely.
ive played on the server, for quite a while, i think around 2 weeks, and im doing that with style.
ive played some prison games, they are not the same, compared to this, all of them are lame.
my time zones pacific, i live in BC, not getting promoted, would sting like a bee.
the reason you should promote me, id be a good trainee, im responsible, trustworthy, and im good at pvp. i dont steal, thats very wrong, i prefer making people happy, by making fair deals. i understand nagging would get me declined, i would not even consider that,because most naggers are not very kind.
i hope you read this, i wish you good luck, not being a guard, can sometimes suck.
2) Your age:13
3) How long have you been playing the server? About 4 Months
4) Have you read the Server, Prison, and Guard Rules? I have read all the rules several times
5) Any experience with the prison genre? Lots
6) What is your time zone? Pacific
7) Why are you the best choice for guard? First off I am experienced with prison servers. Secondly I am also a guard in Dcpvp Server which gives me experience in being a guard. I am fair with other players and I won't over use my power with other players (if I become a guard). Plus I have a fast computer which won't lag and won't get me killed easily. And finally I am thinking about creating my own Youtube channel which will make the server more popular.
8) Do you understand that nagging Wardens in-game to read your app will result in immediate decline? I do understand
9) What is your current prison rank? Do you understand that we will require a screenshot of this when/if you retire from guard? I am Free-Rank and i do understand -ThePhantomHD
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Curse PremiumGood poem but you should stick to the guard format
You mean those recommendations I got from my backyard squirrel, my friend from that other server, the talking seagull I met on a vacation in Hawaii, and that kind hobo that I gave a penny to mean absoultely nothing?
Oh dear...
(No but seriously pretty much the only meaningful recommendations come from Alphas and Wardens. If someone receives a lot of recommendations from Guards & Trainees, then we may be influenced to accept them, but not always.)
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2.10
3.8 days.
4.read the rules
5.yes i have experience
6.mountain time zone (phoenix,AZ,USA)
7.I think I am the best choice because I follow all the rules and I am very loyal. I am also smart and at my school i am very noakii. <---lol and i am taking AIMS and today we had a little game and i got ALL the points for my team.even though i got declined for math AEP i didnt on reading,the teacher didnt wont me there i suposse cause she hated my brother o.o.and i will protcect all (yes ALL) only if they follow rules.also im very athletic i am epic at soccer and sports like football,futball(soccer)basketball,and Tether Ball.i also like people to call me origs.i even did a wax mueseum about notch!priceepic is my brother.i am also very popular at school.(thats what noakii is/means.)i think thats enough to say on 7.
8.i do
9i have the screenshot ready.
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Curse PremiumI have a feeling that your app content is a bit short and irrelevant in question 7.
Use the correct guard app format and you should improve 7
Thanks,
Tom the guard
I disagree, it may not help you get an a achievement but i think its a way of telling them i like your guard app.
Also i like it how you compair guards too, hobos, random people and talking animals.
So I may or may not be an end me
Usually if guards are all over an app it probably means that person is a well known and respected veteran who will probably get accepted anyways. That being said, I don't think it matters too much.
2) Your age: 15
3) How long have you been playing the server? (Minimum of 3 days) 1 Month
4) Have you read the Server, Prison, and Guard Rules? Yes i have read the rules correctly
5) Any experience with the prison genre? Yes i have played another server named Killion Detention Center
6) What is your time zone? 5:00 pm- 8:00pm EST
7) Why are you the best choice for guard? (1-2 paragraphs) i am the best choice because i am helpful in the prison and i will help people gain money and timeouts the ones who have any contra-ban items if their in a non-Pvp zone. I will kill if their out of pvp and protect other players if they pvp each other
8) Do you understand that nagging Wardens in-game to read your app will result in immediate decline? Yes i will not do that. Wardens are left alone for their hard work of keeping up the server
9) What is your current prison rank? Do you understand that we will require a screenshot of this when/if you retire from guard? Yes my current prison rank is a B. I understand that i will send a screenshot of my prison rank if i retire from a guard.
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Curse PremiumThere are a lot of competition with guard apps. You need to be the best of the best to get in
2) Your age: 11, almost 12 (Pleasedont judge me by my age).
3) How long have you been playing the server? (Minimum of 3 days)A week i think.
4) Have you read the Server, Prison, and Guard Rules? Yes!
5) Any experience with the prison genre? Yes!
6) What is your time zone? Eastern US & Canada
7) Why are you the best choice for guard? (1-2 paragraphs)I believe i am the best choice for a gaurd because i am mature, responsible, and very "Grown-up" for my age. I will Jail people responsibly, will punish when punishment is needed, and ban ONLY when banning is needed. I am good at pvp (those pesky killers wont get me :D), and will overall help to make this community better.
8) Do you understand that nagging Wardens in-game to read your app will result in immediate decline? Yes because it is ANNOYING (i owned a server once)
9) What is your current prison rank? Do you understand that we will require a screenshot of this when/if you retire from guard? I am Rank C, yes i do understand that i will require a screenshot if i retire.
When I saw the please don't judge me by my age, I smiled because I put that in my app too
Extend on Number 7 and reread the rules, you are missing something.
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Curse PremiumToo short