Expand on RP example, I know you and I know you can do a bit more.
Expand on sig traits(Also you basically have built in PA which is kinda OP). Out of curiosity what type of robot is this? I notice its a nexusmod link I'd like to look into it, mainly cause if we do robots its usually protectrons or eyebots, so I want to see what this is exactly. Please expand on RP example.
Hi, I am not whitelisted yet, do you think if you have the time could you whitelist me?
Well thats silly, I did but it musta been not in my post:
Just kind of illogical to stand around for two days to watch someone when it's clear a storm is going to hit, hard.
Just Clarifying my enclave picture looks boss right?
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My story? Tell you what, kid. My story's a lot like a Deathclaw's tongue. It's long, messy, and you don't want to get too personal with it. Understand?
I really like the layout of your application but you've got a few things to work on.
1. Your RP example lacks RP dialogue, it should tell us how you would react in the RP environment, like a scenario but you just gave us a summary of your actions. If it helps look at other peoples RP examples, just don't steal.
2. You back-story is interestingly done but lacks A LOT of needed detail. If your character is writing a book it would make sense for him to be a lot more detailed in what happens, for example give more detailed stories about the raiders you met, stuff that happened in the town and what not. Also I'm not particularly excited about the "I got bored" story but if you elaborate, it'll be just fine
My story? Tell you what, kid. My story's a lot like a Deathclaw's tongue. It's long, messy, and you don't want to get too personal with it. Understand?
thank's took 15 month's making it from scratch most of the textures are 256x256 and all armor's are 512x and weapons are 512 but it all look's perfect together
has built in mcpatcher so there is 9 type's of dirt textures and etc and no matter the order will all fit seamlessly.
My story? Tell you what, kid. My story's a lot like a Deathclaw's tongue. It's long, messy, and you don't want to get too personal with it. Understand?
thank's took 15 month's making it from scratch most of the textures are 256x256 and all armor's are 512x and weapons are 512 but it all look's perfect together
has built in mcpatcher so there is 9 type's of dirt textures and etc and no matter the order will all fit seamlessly.
im bored :L hmmm idk what to do now :L
prolly should go make 3d item's and block model's using mc's new feature's in 1.8 but that's going to take decade's even if i am a ghoul that's just depressing ;^;
My story? Tell you what, kid. My story's a lot like a Deathclaw's tongue. It's long, messy, and you don't want to get too personal with it. Understand?
I like how you changed the encounters to being just witnessed events but there are a few "plot holes" 1. If you only took clothing with you, how did you survive on the road and find food? Fix that up please, you could expand about what kind of jobs and what jobs you took on for food. Nice job fixing up the RP example
Things to work on:
1. your name
2. Being serious, or you wont be accepted
3. Fix your grammar
4. Your back story makes no sense, there are a lot of areas that just don't fit together no matter what you do
5. Your RP example needs to be an example of how you'd RP in game, not just a sentence or summary of your actions.
You can always look at other apps to see what they did right
Have you played any Fallout games? Which one(s): Fallout : New Vegas
Why do you want to play on this server?: Several RP servers I've been on are getting quite boring, the playerbase and RP is bad so I want to transfer to a new server, A couple of my friends that are on told me this is a fun server with good RP and good builds, I just want some fallout RP that I can enjoy
Did you read the rules?: Yes
Have you read the lore?: Yes
IC:
Name: Riley Stein
Age: 23
Gender: Male
Character's signifying traits and attributes:
-Cold Heart-ed
-No Morales
-Spends most time alone
-Enjoys working with wires
-Does things only for the betterment of his life
S.P.E.C.I.A.L.:(Just like in the game, you have 40 points to add to whoever categories you choose):
Strength-5
Perception-6
Endurance-6
Charisma-7
Intelligence-5
Agility-6
Luck-5
RP Scenario: (Use the scenario written below)Time:
3:18 P.M.Location: 27 miles South of Seattle.As you're walking north along a desolate highway to a few hundred meters ahead you can see 2 large black birds circling in the sky, to the east a few miles off large thunderheads can be seen. Hopeful to avoid the storm you begin to walk a bit more briskly scanning your area to find shelter from the rain. You observe a small light grey smoke plume coming from the median of the highway only a couple hundred meters away. Before approaching the scene you take a quick look in your bag (below is a list of your items). As you approach the scene you can see that it is a Emerald Trading Company Caravan that has been hit, the merchant lies dead near a slaughtered Brahman blood covers his clothing and a box of items is scattered near him. Of the two guards, one lies near a jersey barrier; empty shell casings from the cowboy repeater are scattered around the body. The other guard is struggling to pull himself upright using the one of the carts wheels, his leg has been blown off below the shin and is now nothing but a bloody mix of singed skin and asphalt.
Bag contents:1x 10mm Pistol, 7x 10mm Pistol rounds, 1x bottle of dirty water, 2x mentants, 1x salisbury steak, 1x Squirrel on a stick, 1x small radio (working), 1x stimpack, and 1x Half-used first aid kit (missing supplies)
What do you do?:
Riley looks over the scene taking stock of the situation before saying
"Dammed raiders, I should go check if there 's anybody still alive, or if there is anything left."
Riley walks over to the caravan picking up the cowboy repeater, reloading it before he checks if anybody is left, as he walks around he sees the wounded man and raises the repeater taking aim
The man looks up a scared look on his face
"Please no!, We were attacked by raiders, they left me alive but at the cost of my leg."
Riley looks down, and grimaces looking at the wound
"Come on, let's get you inside."
Riley carries the man inside then sets to tending the wounds
No talk goes on as the wounds are tended to
"So whats your name, and why are you even helping me?"
Riley looks up and says simply
"To many good men die every day, you can at least be one of the few to survive."
Riley finishes standing up in the small shack before going to the window looking out
"We're going to be here for a day or two, I'll look to see if anyone comes, you need to rest for now."
The man falls asleep and the hours pass-by
"Wake up, I gotta get to Seattle and I don't want to leave you sleeping, here take my pistol and the ammo, kill yourself if you want but I need the repeater and its ammo"
Riley walks away leaving the man alone in the small shack aside the road
Character biography (At LEAST 2 paragraphs):
Log. 1
"My name is Riley Stein My mother was french and my father was german/america. I'm about 6'5" with a fairly average build, I've got hazel eyes and brown hair. Whoever reads this I, if it doesn't get burned as fuel first, first off here in Around in the Seattle area its cold as hell I only brought my dad's leather jacket, and a old jumpsuit. Its freaking cold up here plus with the ghouls it makes it all the worse This entire thing started before I turned 23, I was born in California and my parents had a life there when I wanted to go to Seattle it was because I got sick of California. When I had gathered enough supplies I set out with my father's jumpsuit, his aviators jacket, some Nuka cola, and some brahmin meat. I hated the trip, raiders, ghouls, anything that you could imagine I SAW it I made SURE to NEVER come in contact with them, I stopped in most towns, doing jobs on the side and getting paid in brahmin meat, water, or bottle caps. but there was one in particular I enjoyed trading in it had alot of food and water and alot of good jobs to do with a reward of Engineering magazines which I still have today and have grown fond of ,the people were nice there and the pay for the jobs was good but I had to move on I needed a new life somewhere away from California. Anyways this is all I can remember for now, I'll update this Log if I ever feel like it or I won't, It depends on if I die or not."
Log. 2
"Well, I haven't died yet so I better write down in this is so I don't forget my old life, anyways since we last wrote here is what happened, I was still walking out in the wastes, low on ammo and food when but I still was on my way to Seattle, nothing could stop me but that was when my hopes raised. I saw a trading caravan over the horizon, I talked with the leader a man named Prodigal he said they'd be going to Seattle and they could do with an extra hand and since then I've been with them on my way up to Seattle, on the way I told Prodigal I'd still be in contact with them most of the time, but I'd need to explore the city, Prodigal said they'd be trying to settle down in Seattle and start a trading company, I nodded and we continued walking to Seattle, picking up more people along the way, during the night I'd settle down against the brahmin and read some of my magazines on Engineering I had picked up on in the trading town days ago, now I'm just a few days away from Seattle the caravans gotten here unharmed and that is a good thing, now hopefully I can scavenge some more ammo maybe a new gun or two and help the trading caravan establish itself for my benefit."
Hi, I am not whitelisted yet, do you think if you have the time could you whitelist me?
Edit: Done and done, whitelist updated.
Yup, got the pm. And like I said in the PM I really appreciate all the hard work that goes into this server
Well thats silly, I did but it musta been not in my post:
Just kind of illogical to stand around for two days to watch someone when it's clear a storm is going to hit, hard.
Repost the app please, it should say on OP but it doesn't sorry for inconvenience.
I really like the layout of your application but you've got a few things to work on.
1. Your RP example lacks RP dialogue, it should tell us how you would react in the RP environment, like a scenario but you just gave us a summary of your actions. If it helps look at other peoples RP examples, just don't steal.
2. You back-story is interestingly done but lacks A LOT of needed detail. If your character is writing a book it would make sense for him to be a lot more detailed in what happens, for example give more detailed stories about the raiders you met, stuff that happened in the town and what not. Also I'm not particularly excited about the "I got bored" story but if you elaborate, it'll be just fine
I like it, but whats it for? Am I missing something?
it's my own personal fallout texture pack
Ah, very well done.
has built in mcpatcher so there is 9 type's of dirt textures and etc and no matter the order will all fit seamlessly.
Well goddamn, impressive.
im bored :L hmmm idk what to do now :L
prolly should go make 3d item's and block model's using mc's new feature's in 1.8 but that's going to take decade's even if i am a ghoul that's just depressing ;^;
I like how you changed the encounters to being just witnessed events but there are a few "plot holes" 1. If you only took clothing with you, how did you survive on the road and find food? Fix that up please, you could expand about what kind of jobs and what jobs you took on for food. Nice job fixing up the RP example
Things to work on:
1. your name
2. Being serious, or you wont be accepted
3. Fix your grammar
4. Your back story makes no sense, there are a lot of areas that just don't fit together no matter what you do
5. Your RP example needs to be an example of how you'd RP in game, not just a sentence or summary of your actions.
You can always look at other apps to see what they did right
In Game Name: rileydec16
Age: 14
Gender: Male
Timezone: PST [pacific standard]
Have you played any Fallout games? Which one(s): Fallout : New Vegas
Why do you want to play on this server?: Several RP servers I've been on are getting quite boring, the playerbase and RP is bad so I want to transfer to a new server, A couple of my friends that are on told me this is a fun server with good RP and good builds, I just want some fallout RP that I can enjoy
Did you read the rules?: Yes
Have you read the lore?: Yes
IC:
Name: Riley Stein
Age: 23
Gender: Male
Character's signifying traits and attributes:
-Cold Heart-ed
-No Morales
-Spends most time alone
-Enjoys working with wires
-Does things only for the betterment of his life
S.P.E.C.I.A.L.:(Just like in the game, you have 40 points to add to whoever categories you choose):
Strength-5
Perception-6
Endurance-6
Charisma-7
Intelligence-5
Agility-6
Luck-5
RP Scenario: (Use the scenario written below)Time:
3:18 P.M.Location: 27 miles South of Seattle.As you're walking north along a desolate highway to a few hundred meters ahead you can see 2 large black birds circling in the sky, to the east a few miles off large thunderheads can be seen. Hopeful to avoid the storm you begin to walk a bit more briskly scanning your area to find shelter from the rain. You observe a small light grey smoke plume coming from the median of the highway only a couple hundred meters away. Before approaching the scene you take a quick look in your bag (below is a list of your items). As you approach the scene you can see that it is a Emerald Trading Company Caravan that has been hit, the merchant lies dead near a slaughtered Brahman blood covers his clothing and a box of items is scattered near him. Of the two guards, one lies near a jersey barrier; empty shell casings from the cowboy repeater are scattered around the body. The other guard is struggling to pull himself upright using the one of the carts wheels, his leg has been blown off below the shin and is now nothing but a bloody mix of singed skin and asphalt.
Bag contents: 1x 10mm Pistol, 7x 10mm Pistol rounds, 1x bottle of dirty water, 2x mentants, 1x salisbury steak, 1x Squirrel on a stick, 1x small radio (working), 1x stimpack, and 1x Half-used first aid kit (missing supplies)
What do you do?:
Riley looks over the scene taking stock of the situation before saying
"Dammed raiders, I should go check if there 's anybody still alive, or if there is anything left."
Riley walks over to the caravan picking up the cowboy repeater, reloading it before he checks if anybody is left, as he walks around he sees the wounded man and raises the repeater taking aim
The man looks up a scared look on his face
"Please no!, We were attacked by raiders, they left me alive but at the cost of my leg."
Riley looks down, and grimaces looking at the wound
"Come on, let's get you inside."
Riley carries the man inside then sets to tending the wounds
No talk goes on as the wounds are tended to
"So whats your name, and why are you even helping me?"
Riley looks up and says simply
"To many good men die every day, you can at least be one of the few to survive."
Riley finishes standing up in the small shack before going to the window looking out
"We're going to be here for a day or two, I'll look to see if anyone comes, you need to rest for now."
The man falls asleep and the hours pass-by
"Wake up, I gotta get to Seattle and I don't want to leave you sleeping, here take my pistol and the ammo, kill yourself if you want but I need the repeater and its ammo"
Riley walks away leaving the man alone in the small shack aside the road
Character biography (At LEAST 2 paragraphs):
Log. 1
"My name is Riley Stein My mother was french and my father was german/america. I'm about 6'5" with a fairly average build, I've got hazel eyes and brown hair. Whoever reads this I, if it doesn't get burned as fuel first, first off here in Around in the Seattle area its cold as hell I only brought my dad's leather jacket, and a old jumpsuit. Its freaking cold up here plus with the ghouls it makes it all the worse This entire thing started before I turned 23, I was born in California and my parents had a life there when I wanted to go to Seattle it was because I got sick of California. When I had gathered enough supplies I set out with my father's jumpsuit, his aviators jacket, some Nuka cola, and some brahmin meat. I hated the trip, raiders, ghouls, anything that you could imagine I SAW it I made SURE to NEVER come in contact with them, I stopped in most towns, doing jobs on the side and getting paid in brahmin meat, water, or bottle caps. but there was one in particular I enjoyed trading in it had alot of food and water and alot of good jobs to do with a reward of Engineering magazines which I still have today and have grown fond of ,the people were nice there and the pay for the jobs was good but I had to move on I needed a new life somewhere away from California. Anyways this is all I can remember for now, I'll update this Log if I ever feel like it or I won't, It depends on if I die or not."
Log. 2
"Well, I haven't died yet so I better write down in this is so I don't forget my old life, anyways since we last wrote here is what happened, I was still walking out in the wastes, low on ammo and food when but I still was on my way to Seattle, nothing could stop me but that was when my hopes raised. I saw a trading caravan over the horizon, I talked with the leader a man named Prodigal he said they'd be going to Seattle and they could do with an extra hand and since then I've been with them on my way up to Seattle, on the way I told Prodigal I'd still be in contact with them most of the time, but I'd need to explore the city, Prodigal said they'd be trying to settle down in Seattle and start a trading company, I nodded and we continued walking to Seattle, picking up more people along the way, during the night I'd settle down against the brahmin and read some of my magazines on Engineering I had picked up on in the trading town days ago, now I'm just a few days away from Seattle the caravans gotten here unharmed and that is a good thing, now hopefully I can scavenge some more ammo maybe a new gun or two and help the trading caravan establish itself for my benefit."