EDIT: And I accept the terms and conditions
OOC -
IGN: Quenn1599
Gender: Male
Age: 19
Have you read the rules: Yes
Have you read the lore:Yes
RP Expierence: I have done roleplay on other servers
Fallout Expierence: I occasionally play Fallout 3 on my Xbox
Define Meta Gaming: Metagaming is using out-of-game information to affect one's in-game decisions.
Define Power Gaming: Power gaming is a play-style that focuses on maximizing progress towards a certain goal, this play-style usually ruins the storyline and atmosphere of the game
IC -
Name: Haez
Gender: Male
Age: 19
Race: Human
Appearance: Unkept medium-long black hair, 5'7", pale skin, lightweight, Haez wears an improvised armor set consisting of old scavenged military hazmat equipment with pieces of cloth and scrap metal attached for extra armor, this armor has kept Haez nearly untouched from radiation, he also wears a small Geiger counter strapped to the armor
Signifying Traits: Haez is very cautious when meeting unknown people, but he is very social and friendly to people he knows. Haez has a very nervous personality and fidgets commonly.
Signifying Skills: What Haez doesn't have in strength, he makes up in intelligence. He is very adept in mechanics and computer programming.
S.P.E.C.I.A.L.'s:
(40 points to distribute, maxes out on 10)
Strength- 3
Perception- 7
Endurance- 4
Charisma- 9
Intelligence- 10
Agility- 4
Luck- 3
RP example: *Haez's Journal, Page 27*
'They haunt my dreams... those... monsters. I always knew radiation did things to living things... but I didn't know how horrible it had become. During my lone venture throughout the wasteland I have seen things no being should ever witness... The memories are so painful I sometimes have to use double doses of sleeping meds just to get a few hours of rest. I saw a raider today, I knew it by the way he looked: ragged blood-stained battle armor and sharp weaponry. I knew this man had done bad things in the world... so I put him out of his misery... he didn't see it coming until the rifle gunshot echoed throughout the wilderness. I have regretted that encounter ever since... the guilt of killing... I have made some bad decisions in my lifetime... and when my life comes to an end, I got what I've deserved...'
Biography: Haez's mother and father were travelling merchants. Haez's father taught him math, science, trading, and other pre-nuclearwar subjects from textbooks he had acquired at the local markets. Haez's mother would always bring him mechanical parts from the markets to keep him occupied, and soon he started making caps from the markets as a mechanic. When Haez turned 19, his father and mother gave him a working Geiger counter, the same one he uses today. About 3 weeks later, the merchant caravan was attacked by roaming raiders. Haez saw both his parents and his friends on the caravan die that night. When one of the raiders had come after him, he used his father's old hunting rifle to dispatch the attacker. After taking the raider's armor and the one thing closest to him (the Geiger counter), he fled into the wilderness, searching desperately for a home, for safety, and for people.
OOC -
IGN: CorBOOM
Gender:Male
Age: 14
Have you read the rules: yes I have
Have you read the lore: yes
RP Experience: I have played many roleplay servers on Garry's mod (another PC game) and minecraft
Fallout Experience: I have played and enjoyed fallout 2 3 and nv and have also played fallout nv rp on Garry's mod (another PC game)
Define Meta Gaming: Using external sources of information to help with the gamin experience.
Define Power Gaming: Playing a game with the aim to maximize the progress to a specific goal.
IC -
Name: THEadore or TEddy
Gender:Male
Age:19
Race:Human
Appearence:5"6 with scraggly long dishwater blond hair and a beatnik beard, and a scar over the right eye bright blue left eye and significantly sharp teeth.
Signifying Traits: Scar over right eye and sharp teeth.
Signifying Skills: Extremely bad eyesight and depth perseption but significantly good hearing.
S.P.E.C.I.A.L.'s:
Strength-10
Perception-3
Endurance-1
Charisma-7
Intelligence-5
Agility-4
Luck-10
RP: TEddy walks beside a broken radio tower that has been rusted and shot at over the years after the bombs dropped, when he turns around in a sudden jerk of movement and focuses his vision on a big irradiated roach crawling around about half of a mile behind him, his eyes close in relief. " I guess I'm a bit jiterish" he mutters to himself. A few minutes later TEddy jerks his body around and pulls out a small 9mm pistol, as a 357 round comes flying by his shoulder he pulls the trigger of his gun and hits a raider in the temple. "Gah! You little bastards thought you could sneek up on me!" He says in a gunfight with raiders." !" He screams in pain as he gets shot in the left shoulder. After out of ammo, TEddy reaches into his bag an pulls out a lunchbox rigged with explosives and throws it at the raiders and the gunfight is over.
Biography: TEddy was born in vault 68 being the only child of the one female resident. Ther was no real docter in the vault so it was a struggle for an infant of a mother who is constantly the center of attention, he didn't eat well, he didn't get enough exercise, he was constantly getting sick. With these struggles his mother still loved him and raised him very well. By the time TEddy was 14 his mother was already 49 and was sick with breast cancer, there was no one to take care of TEddy because the other 999 or so occupants of the vault were male and did not want to claim him as there own, three years later his mother died. when TEddy was 18 the vault sirens went off and raiders came and killed most of the residents of the vault, but TEddy and his half built securitron (that his "Uncle" Pete helped him rebuild until Pete tragically died when TEddy was 10) escaped but as they were the raiser leader kicked down the securitron and grabbed TEddy by the shirt and held a knife up to his cheek, TEddy kicked the raider and fell from his grasp getting a scar across his right eye. After TEddy fled the vault he escaped into the wasteland and joined a group of settlers in Utah until fiends got the settlement and he started traveling all throughout the American wasteland.
In case anyone wants to see, here is the map that was made. This is 12,000 Blocks x 7,800 Blocks and is all made in world painter. A lot of time was put into it so i would appreciate feedback from people on my work!
In case anyone wants to see, here is the map that was made. This is 12,000 Blocks x 7,800 Blocks and is all made in world painter. A lot of time was put into it so i would appreciate feedback from people on my work!
OOC -
IGN:Scorch191
Gender:Male
Age:13
Have you read the rules: Yes and I shall follow them
Have you read the lore: Yes also I would like to be in the Enclave
RP Experience: sorry but I have none I felt like trying this because I love fallout, and I wanted to try something new
Fallout Experience: beat Fallout 3 twice both times siding with brotherhood, played extensively on fallout new vegas on the ncr's side. waiting for Fallout 4
Define Meta Gaming: Calling some one by there persons name though your person has never met them
Define Power Gaming: doing something impossible in character like tying some one up with a rope that you make out of thin air
IC -
Name: Alex, nick name scorch (sorry for that I'm not the most original)
Gender: male
Age:20
Race:Human
Appearance:5"8 pale complexion,( always in weapons maintenance) scar from side of jaw to right ear, wears glasses, black hair in the unsettler haircut, no beard, thin mustache,
Signifying Traits: scar from side of jaw to right ear
Signifying Skills: can disassemble and reassemble a Gatling Laser 30 seconds
S.P.E.C.I.A.L.'s:
(40 points to distribute, maxes out on 10)
Strength-6
Perception-8
Endurance-6
Charisma-5
Intelligence-7
Agility-5
Luck-3
RP: Alex picks up a Mesmatron from his reloading bench tosses it hand to hand then picks up the note his friend wrote that was siting on the table, it reads "ok so I found this out side raven rock after that cursed lone wanderer came by, and I wanted to see what you do with it since I know you hate slavers, ill be at the range for us to talk, ill be testing a remodeled gause rifle your friend Deck" Alex looks at the machine then chucks the Mesmatron across his room, it smashes into pieces, which he curses at it saying "you slavers always did make the crummiest technology, it cant even take hitting the wall." he then walks out sealing his door as he heads to the range.
Biography: Alex also known as Scorch thanks to a mishap with a flamer exploding joined the enclave when president Eden became president, he was a master gunsmith in megaton until he saw one of the enclave patrols getting attacked by a yaugui they were struggling so Alex pulled out one of his custom laser rifle and shot the head off the yaugui killing it instantly. he went over inspected the body then said to the men, if they lost the yaugui would attack megaton. the men asked if he wanted to join the enclave so he said sure. 3 years after that he got in trouble because he got in a fight between him and a second gun maker about who's weapons were the best he won after he accidentally shot a mechanic in the arm. afterwards Alex supplied the weapons to take over the purifier the first time also to capture the G.E.C.K and defend the purifier. later he was testing a flamer that an amature had fixed it exploded after 3 shots killing one officer.
Prepare your orifice of choice. I am working, right now, as I type this, with my left hand, on an application for this server. You heard me right ladies and gents, THIS. VERY. SERVER.
Watch this space...
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My friends call me Triple... but you can call me Jane, for all I care.
Alright mister Quenn, I do like your biography, but the RP example could be a bit longer. It IS hard to write these things because when actually playing, you will be the one controlling you, not the other person.
But, you did not pass, you have some more chances, try making some changes to the RP example and make it longer.
OOC - IGN: TheHawk1187 Gender: Male Age: 16 Have you read the rules: Yes Have you read the lore: Yes RP Expierence: I RP on a few Minecraft servers and understand the mechanics of Role playing Fallout Expierence: Been playing fallout for close to 5 years I have played every Fallout except The Xbox Fallout Brotherhood of Steel. Define Meta Gaming: Using outside info in an RP environment. Define Power Gaming: Acting like you have power you don't actually have. Example I am in the Brotherhood of Steel and Im a Knight. It would be a power gaming if I told the Elder to get me my rifle etc.
IC - Name: Gavin Gender: Male Age: 32 Race: Human Caucasian Appearance: Tall, Black Hair, Right side of body is scarred horribly. Signifying Traits: Good Leader, Deals with problems head on, and avoids being the center of attention. Signifying Skills: Very good with Energy Weapons and is decent with computers. S.P.E.C.I.A.L.'s: (40 points to distribute, maxes out on 10) Strength-9 Perception- 5 Endurance- 5 Charisma- 3 Intelligence- 8 Agility- 6 Luck- 4
RP example: ((I'm not the best at doing RP solo like this I'm better with more than one person)) Raider: *Stabbing a wastelander* Gavin: Hmm friend of yours? Raider: You better get your ass out of here! Gavin: I wish I could leave but your a wanted man my friend. Raider: Of course I am! Who sent you NCR or some wife I made a widow? Gavin: No I just don't like son's of es like you. *Smiles* Raider: Could say the same about you too. *Charges at Gavin* Gavin: *Takes out his sword and slashes the raiders head off* *Raiders body hits the ground*
*Gavin walks away*
Biography: Gavin was born into the Chicago BoS. He was forced to leave as a Paladin die to a murder that was framed on him. He traveled the wasteland looking for a place he could call home. He got alot of his food and caps being a mercenary usually killing scum and raiders. He was nicknamed Death Hawk when he killed a NCR Captain by jumping off a building onto him and killing him with his knife. A few years later he would start The Death Hawk Mercenary 's. He is rarely seen by anyone usually keeping to his quarters in a unknown location or finishing a hit.
OOC - IGN: TheHawk1187 Gender: Male Age: 16 Have you read the rules: Yes Have you read the lore: Yes RP Expierence: I RP on a few Minecraft servers and understand the mechanics of Role playing Fallout Expierence: Been playing fallout for close to 5 years I have played every Fallout except The Xbox Fallout Brotherhood of Steel. Define Meta Gaming: Using outside info in an RP environment. Define Power Gaming: Acting like you have power you don't actually have. Example I am in the Brotherhood of Steel and Im a Knight. It would be a power gaming if I told the Elder to get me my rifle etc.
IC - Name: Gavin Gender: Male Age: 32 Race: Human Caucasian Appearance: Tall, Black Hair, Right side of body is scarred horribly. Signifying Traits: Good Leader, Deals with problems head on, and avoids being the center of attention. Signifying Skills: Very good with Energy Weapons and is decent with computers. S.P.E.C.I.A.L.'s: (40 points to distribute, maxes out on 10) Strength-9 Perception- 5 Endurance- 5 Charisma- 3 Intelligence- 8 Agility- 6 Luck- 4
RP example: ((I'm not the best at doing RP solo like this I'm better with more than one person)) Raider: *Stabbing a wastelander* Gavin: Hmm friend of yours? Raider: You better get your ass out of here! Gavin: I wish I could leave but your a wanted man my friend. Raider: Of course I am! Who sent you NCR or someones wife I made a widow? Gavin: No I just don't like son's of es like you. *Smiles* Raider: Could say the same about you too. *Charges at Gavin* Gavin: *Takes out his sword and slashes the raiders head off* *Raiders body hits the ground* *Gavin walks away*
Biography: Gavin was born into the Chicago BoS. He was forced to leave as a Paladin do to a murder that was framed on him. He traveled the wasteland looking for a place he could call home. He got alot of his food and caps being amercenary usually killing scum and raiders. He was nicknamed Death Hawk when he killed a NCR Captain by jumping off a building onto him and killing him with his knife. A few years later he would start The Death Hawk Mercenary 's. He is rarely seen by anyone usually keeping to his quarters in a unknown location or finishing a hit.
Alright mister Quenn, I do like your biography, but the RP example could be a bit longer. It IS hard to write these things because when actually playing, you will be the one controlling you, not the other person.
But, you did not pass, you have some more chances, try making some changes to the RP example and make it longer.
I edited the RP example... Hope you guys like it
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"Throughout our actions today, we are shaping the reactions of tomorrow."
EDIT: And I accept the terms and conditions
OOC -
IGN: Quenn1599
Gender: Male
Age: 19
Have you read the rules: Yes
Have you read the lore:Yes
RP Expierence: I have done roleplay on other servers
Fallout Expierence: I occasionally play Fallout 3 on my Xbox
Define Meta Gaming: Metagaming is using out-of-game information to affect one's in-game decisions.
Define Power Gaming: Power gaming is a play-style that focuses on maximizing progress towards a certain goal, this play-style usually ruins the storyline and atmosphere of the game
IC -
Name: Haez
Gender: Male
Age: 19
Race: Human
Appearance: Unkept medium-long black hair, 5'7", pale skin, lightweight, Haez wears an improvised armor set consisting of old scavenged military hazmat equipment with pieces of cloth and scrap metal attached for extra armor, this armor has kept Haez nearly untouched from radiation, he also wears a small Geiger counter strapped to the armor
Signifying Traits: Haez is very cautious when meeting unknown people, but he is very social and friendly to people he knows. Haez has a very nervous personality and fidgets commonly.
Signifying Skills: What Haez doesn't have in strength, he makes up in intelligence. He is very adept in mechanics and computer programming.
S.P.E.C.I.A.L.'s:
(40 points to distribute, maxes out on 10)
Strength- 3
Perception- 7
Endurance- 4
Charisma- 9
Intelligence- 10
Agility- 4
Luck- 3
RP example: *Haez's Journal, Page 27*
'They haunt my dreams... those... monsters. I always knew radiation did things to living things... but I didn't know how horrible it had become. During my lone venture throughout the wasteland I have seen things no being should ever witness... The memories are so painful I sometimes have to use double doses of sleeping meds just to get a few hours of rest. I saw a raider today, I knew it by the way he looked: ragged blood-stained battle armor and sharp weaponry. I knew this man had done bad things in the world... so I put him out of his misery... he didn't see it coming until the rifle gunshot echoed throughout the wilderness. I have regretted that encounter ever since... the guilt of killing... I have made some bad decisions in my lifetime... and when my life comes to an end, I got what I've deserved...'
Biography: Haez's mother and father were travelling merchants. Haez's father taught him math, science, trading, and other pre-nuclearwar subjects from textbooks he had acquired at the local markets. Haez's mother would always bring him mechanical parts from the markets to keep him occupied, and soon he started making caps from the markets as a mechanic. When Haez turned 19, his father and mother gave him a working Geiger counter, the same one he uses today. About 3 weeks later, the merchant caravan was attacked by roaming raiders. Haez saw both his parents and his friends on the caravan die that night. When one of the raiders had come after him, he used his father's old hunting rifle to dispatch the attacker. After taking the raider's armor and the one thing closest to him (the Geiger counter), he fled into the wilderness, searching desperately for a home, for safety, and for people.
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"Throughout our actions today, we are shaping the reactions of tomorrow."
Your biography does an attempt at explaining the cause of her split personalities, but the grammar does no justice. I would say you think it through and work on the biography to add more detail, like a book!
However, it is common that you have little to know idea of how to expand a biography, seeing as you could've written the most important information in a smaller one. Because of this, I will accept your application. You'll have time to think it through and elaborate when the server is released
From experience, I tell you, RP examples are the hardest thing to do. Everyone gets their own definition out of RP example, and in most cases it is just fine. Yours may not explain a role-play session, but it does describe how your character reacted to a situation in role-play.
OOC -
IGN: Quenn1599
Gender: Male
Age: 19
Have you read the rules: Yes
Have you read the lore:Yes
RP Expierence: I have done roleplay on other servers
Fallout Expierence: I occasionally play Fallout 3 on my Xbox
Define Meta Gaming: Metagaming is using out-of-game information to affect one's in-game decisions.
Define Power Gaming: Power gaming is a play-style that focuses on maximizing progress towards a certain goal, this play-style usually ruins the storyline and atmosphere of the game
IC -
Name: Haez
Gender: Male
Age: 19
Race: Human
Appearance: Unkept medium-long black hair, 5'7", pale skin, lightweight, Haez wears an improvised armor set consisting of old scavenged military hazmat equipment with pieces of cloth and scrap metal attached for extra armor, this armor has kept Haez nearly untouched from radiation, he also wears a small Geiger counter strapped to the armor
Signifying Traits: Haez is very cautious when meeting unknown people, but he is very social and friendly to people he knows. Haez has a very nervous personality and fidgets commonly.
Signifying Skills: What Haez doesn't have in strength, he makes up in intelligence. He is very adept in mechanics and computer programming.
S.P.E.C.I.A.L.'s:
(40 points to distribute, maxes out on 10)
Strength- 3
Perception- 7
Endurance- 4
Charisma- 9
Intelligence- 10
Agility- 4
Luck- 3
RP example: *Haez's Journal, Page 27*
'They haunt my dreams... those... monsters. I always knew radiation did things to living things... but I didn't know how horrible it had become. During my lone venture throughout the wasteland I have seen things no being should ever witness... The memories are so painful I sometimes have to use double doses of sleeping meds just to get a few hours of rest. I saw a raider today, I knew it by the way he looked: ragged blood-stained battle armor and sharp weaponry. I knew this man had done bad things in the world... so I put him out of his misery... he didn't see it coming until the rifle gunshot echoed throughout the wilderness. I have regretted that encounter ever since... the guilt of killing... I have made some bad decisions in my lifetime... and when my life comes to an end, I got what I've deserved...'
Biography: Haez's mother and father were travelling merchants. Haez's father taught him math, science, trading, and other pre-nuclearwar subjects from textbooks he had acquired at the local markets. Haez's mother would always bring him mechanical parts from the markets to keep him occupied, and soon he started making caps from the markets as a mechanic. When Haez turned 19, his father and mother gave him a working Geiger counter, the same one he uses today. About 3 weeks later, the merchant caravan was attacked by roaming raiders. Haez saw both his parents and his friends on the caravan die that night. When one of the raiders had come after him, he used his father's old hunting rifle to dispatch the attacker. After taking the raider's armor and the one thing closest to him (the Geiger counter), he fled into the wilderness, searching desperately for a home, for safety, and for people.
IGN: CorBOOM
Gender:Male
Age: 14
Have you read the rules: yes I have
Have you read the lore: yes
RP Experience: I have played many roleplay servers on Garry's mod (another PC game) and minecraft
Fallout Experience: I have played and enjoyed fallout 2 3 and nv and have also played fallout nv rp on Garry's mod (another PC game)
Define Meta Gaming: Using external sources of information to help with the gamin experience.
Define Power Gaming: Playing a game with the aim to maximize the progress to a specific goal.
IC -
Name: THEadore or TEddy
Gender:Male
Age:19
Race:Human
Appearence:5"6 with scraggly long dishwater blond hair and a beatnik beard, and a scar over the right eye bright blue left eye and significantly sharp teeth.
Signifying Traits: Scar over right eye and sharp teeth.
Signifying Skills: Extremely bad eyesight and depth perseption but significantly good hearing.
S.P.E.C.I.A.L.'s:
Strength-10
Perception-3
Endurance-1
Charisma-7
Intelligence-5
Agility-4
Luck-10
RP: TEddy walks beside a broken radio tower that has been rusted and shot at over the years after the bombs dropped, when he turns around in a sudden jerk of movement and focuses his vision on a big irradiated roach crawling around about half of a mile behind him, his eyes close in relief. " I guess I'm a bit jiterish" he mutters to himself. A few minutes later TEddy jerks his body around and pulls out a small 9mm pistol, as a 357 round comes flying by his shoulder he pulls the trigger of his gun and hits a raider in the temple. "Gah! You little bastards thought you could sneek up on me!" He says in a gunfight with raiders." !" He screams in pain as he gets shot in the left shoulder. After out of ammo, TEddy reaches into his bag an pulls out a lunchbox rigged with explosives and throws it at the raiders and the gunfight is over.
Biography: TEddy was born in vault 68 being the only child of the one female resident. Ther was no real docter in the vault so it was a struggle for an infant of a mother who is constantly the center of attention, he didn't eat well, he didn't get enough exercise, he was constantly getting sick. With these struggles his mother still loved him and raised him very well. By the time TEddy was 14 his mother was already 49 and was sick with breast cancer, there was no one to take care of TEddy because the other 999 or so occupants of the vault were male and did not want to claim him as there own, three years later his mother died. when TEddy was 18 the vault sirens went off and raiders came and killed most of the residents of the vault, but TEddy and his half built securitron (that his "Uncle" Pete helped him rebuild until Pete tragically died when TEddy was 10) escaped but as they were the raiser leader kicked down the securitron and grabbed TEddy by the shirt and held a knife up to his cheek, TEddy kicked the raider and fell from his grasp getting a scar across his right eye. After TEddy fled the vault he escaped into the wasteland and joined a group of settlers in Utah until fiends got the settlement and he started traveling all throughout the American wasteland.
Like Echidna said, apply to help us build on it!
http://imgur.com/FZkFIJD
Punch a friggin tree.
Looks awesome
IGN:Scorch191
Gender:Male
Age:13
Have you read the rules: Yes and I shall follow them
Have you read the lore: Yes also I would like to be in the Enclave
RP Experience: sorry but I have none I felt like trying this because I love fallout, and I wanted to try something new
Fallout Experience: beat Fallout 3 twice both times siding with brotherhood, played extensively on fallout new vegas on the ncr's side. waiting for Fallout 4
Define Meta Gaming: Calling some one by there persons name though your person has never met them
Define Power Gaming: doing something impossible in character like tying some one up with a rope that you make out of thin air
IC -
Name: Alex, nick name scorch (sorry for that I'm not the most original)
Gender: male
Age:20
Race:Human
Appearance:5"8 pale complexion,( always in weapons maintenance) scar from side of jaw to right ear, wears glasses, black hair in the unsettler haircut, no beard, thin mustache,
Signifying Traits: scar from side of jaw to right ear
Signifying Skills: can disassemble and reassemble a Gatling Laser 30 seconds
S.P.E.C.I.A.L.'s:
(40 points to distribute, maxes out on 10)
Strength-6
Perception-8
Endurance-6
Charisma-5
Intelligence-7
Agility-5
Luck-3
RP: Alex picks up a Mesmatron from his reloading bench tosses it hand to hand then picks up the note his friend wrote that was siting on the table, it reads "ok so I found this out side raven rock after that cursed lone wanderer came by, and I wanted to see what you do with it since I know you hate slavers, ill be at the range for us to talk, ill be testing a remodeled gause rifle your friend Deck" Alex looks at the machine then chucks the Mesmatron across his room, it smashes into pieces, which he curses at it saying "you slavers always did make the crummiest technology, it cant even take hitting the wall." he then walks out sealing his door as he heads to the range.
Biography: Alex also known as Scorch thanks to a mishap with a flamer exploding joined the enclave when president Eden became president, he was a master gunsmith in megaton until he saw one of the enclave patrols getting attacked by a yaugui they were struggling so Alex pulled out one of his custom laser rifle and shot the head off the yaugui killing it instantly. he went over inspected the body then said to the men, if they lost the yaugui would attack megaton. the men asked if he wanted to join the enclave so he said sure. 3 years after that he got in trouble because he got in a fight between him and a second gun maker about who's weapons were the best he won after he accidentally shot a mechanic in the arm. afterwards Alex supplied the weapons to take over the purifier the first time also to capture the G.E.C.K and defend the purifier. later he was testing a flamer that an amature had fixed it exploded after 3 shots killing one officer.
... Drowning with real life issues... ugh.
Watch this space...
My friends call me Triple... but you can call me Jane, for all I care.
Be patient, it takes awhile to read these.
Soooooome oooooone didn't read the ruuuuuuuuuuuules...
Come on man, it's not that hard!
Alright mister Quenn, I do like your biography, but the RP example could be a bit longer. It IS hard to write these things because when actually playing, you will be the one controlling you, not the other person.
But, you did not pass, you have some more chances, try making some changes to the RP example and make it longer.
You didn't read the rules. Read them again.
IGN: TheHawk1187
Gender: Male
Age: 16
Have you read the rules: Yes
Have you read the lore: Yes
RP Expierence: I RP on a few Minecraft servers and understand the mechanics of Role playing
Fallout Expierence: Been playing fallout for close to 5 years I have played every Fallout except The Xbox Fallout Brotherhood of Steel.
Define Meta Gaming: Using outside info in an RP environment.
Define Power Gaming: Acting like you have power you don't actually have. Example I am in the Brotherhood of Steel and Im a Knight. It would be a power gaming if I told the Elder to get me my rifle etc.
IC -
Name: Gavin
Gender: Male
Age: 32
Race: Human Caucasian
Appearance: Tall, Black Hair, Right side of body is scarred horribly.
Signifying Traits: Good Leader, Deals with problems head on, and avoids being the center of attention.
Signifying Skills: Very good with Energy Weapons and is decent with computers.
S.P.E.C.I.A.L.'s:
(40 points to distribute, maxes out on 10)
Strength-9
Perception- 5
Endurance- 5
Charisma- 3
Intelligence- 8
Agility- 6
Luck- 4
RP example: ((I'm not the best at doing RP solo like this I'm better with more than one person))
Raider: *Stabbing a wastelander*
Gavin: Hmm friend of yours?
Raider: You better get your ass out of here!
Gavin: I wish I could leave but your a wanted man my friend.
Raider: Of course I am! Who sent you NCR or some wife I made a widow?
Gavin: No I just don't like son's of es like you. *Smiles*
Raider: Could say the same about you too. *Charges at Gavin*
Gavin: *Takes out his sword and slashes the raiders head off*
*Raiders body hits the ground*
*Gavin walks away*
Biography: Gavin was born into the Chicago BoS. He was forced to leave as a Paladin die to a murder that was framed on him. He traveled the wasteland looking for a place he could call home. He got alot of his food and caps being a mercenary usually killing scum and raiders. He was nicknamed Death Hawk when he killed a NCR Captain by jumping off a building onto him and killing him with his knife. A few years later he would start The Death Hawk Mercenary 's. He is rarely seen by anyone usually keeping to his quarters in a unknown location or finishing a hit.
I couldn't read most of your app. Ish too shmall!
IGN: TheHawk1187
Gender: Male
Age: 16
Have you read the rules: Yes
Have you read the lore: Yes
RP Expierence: I RP on a few Minecraft servers and understand the mechanics of Role playing
Fallout Expierence: Been playing fallout for close to 5 years I have played every Fallout except The Xbox Fallout Brotherhood of Steel.
Define Meta Gaming: Using outside info in an RP environment.
Define Power Gaming: Acting like you have power you don't actually have. Example I am in the Brotherhood of Steel and Im a Knight. It would be a power gaming if I told the Elder to get me my rifle etc.
IC -
Name: Gavin
Gender: Male
Age: 32
Race: Human Caucasian
Appearance: Tall, Black Hair, Right side of body is scarred horribly.
Signifying Traits: Good Leader, Deals with problems head on, and avoids being the center of attention.
Signifying Skills: Very good with Energy Weapons and is decent with computers.
S.P.E.C.I.A.L.'s:
(40 points to distribute, maxes out on 10)
Strength-9
Perception- 5
Endurance- 5
Charisma- 3
Intelligence- 8
Agility- 6
Luck- 4
RP example: ((I'm not the best at doing RP solo like this I'm better with more than one person))
Raider: *Stabbing a wastelander*
Gavin: Hmm friend of yours?
Raider: You better get your ass out of here!
Gavin: I wish I could leave but your a wanted man my friend.
Raider: Of course I am! Who sent you NCR or someones wife I made a widow?
Gavin: No I just don't like son's of es like you. *Smiles*
Raider: Could say the same about you too. *Charges at Gavin*
Gavin: *Takes out his sword and slashes the raiders head off*
*Raiders body hits the ground*
*Gavin walks away*
Biography: Gavin was born into the Chicago BoS. He was forced to leave as a Paladin do to a murder that was framed on him. He traveled the wasteland looking for a place he could call home. He got alot of his food and caps being a mercenary usually killing scum and raiders. He was nicknamed Death Hawk when he killed a NCR Captain by jumping off a building onto him and killing him with his knife. A few years later he would start The Death Hawk Mercenary 's. He is rarely seen by anyone usually keeping to his quarters in a unknown location or finishing a hit.
I edited the RP example... Hope you guys like it
You must repost the app.
Anytime you have a 50-50 chance of getting something right, there's a 90% probability you'll get it wrong.
OOC -
IGN: Quenn1599
Gender: Male
Age: 19
Have you read the rules: Yes
Have you read the lore:Yes
RP Expierence: I have done roleplay on other servers
Fallout Expierence: I occasionally play Fallout 3 on my Xbox
Define Meta Gaming: Metagaming is using out-of-game information to affect one's in-game decisions.
Define Power Gaming: Power gaming is a play-style that focuses on maximizing progress towards a certain goal, this play-style usually ruins the storyline and atmosphere of the game
IC -
Name: Haez
Gender: Male
Age: 19
Race: Human
Appearance: Unkept medium-long black hair, 5'7", pale skin, lightweight, Haez wears an improvised armor set consisting of old scavenged military hazmat equipment with pieces of cloth and scrap metal attached for extra armor, this armor has kept Haez nearly untouched from radiation, he also wears a small Geiger counter strapped to the armor
Signifying Traits: Haez is very cautious when meeting unknown people, but he is very social and friendly to people he knows. Haez has a very nervous personality and fidgets commonly.
Signifying Skills: What Haez doesn't have in strength, he makes up in intelligence. He is very adept in mechanics and computer programming.
S.P.E.C.I.A.L.'s:
(40 points to distribute, maxes out on 10)
Strength- 3
Perception- 7
Endurance- 4
Charisma- 9
Intelligence- 10
Agility- 4
Luck- 3
RP example: *Haez's Journal, Page 27*
'They haunt my dreams... those... monsters. I always knew radiation did things to living things... but I didn't know how horrible it had become. During my lone venture throughout the wasteland I have seen things no being should ever witness... The memories are so painful I sometimes have to use double doses of sleeping meds just to get a few hours of rest. I saw a raider today, I knew it by the way he looked: ragged blood-stained battle armor and sharp weaponry. I knew this man had done bad things in the world... so I put him out of his misery... he didn't see it coming until the rifle gunshot echoed throughout the wilderness. I have regretted that encounter ever since... the guilt of killing... I have made some bad decisions in my lifetime... and when my life comes to an end, I got what I've deserved...'
Biography: Haez's mother and father were travelling merchants. Haez's father taught him math, science, trading, and other pre-nuclearwar subjects from textbooks he had acquired at the local markets. Haez's mother would always bring him mechanical parts from the markets to keep him occupied, and soon he started making caps from the markets as a mechanic. When Haez turned 19, his father and mother gave him a working Geiger counter, the same one he uses today. About 3 weeks later, the merchant caravan was attacked by roaming raiders. Haez saw both his parents and his friends on the caravan die that night. When one of the raiders had come after him, he used his father's old hunting rifle to dispatch the attacker. After taking the raider's armor and the one thing closest to him (the Geiger counter), he fled into the wilderness, searching desperately for a home, for safety, and for people.
Your biography does an attempt at explaining the cause of her split personalities, but the grammar does no justice. I would say you think it through and work on the biography to add more detail, like a book!
However, it is common that you have little to know idea of how to expand a biography, seeing as you could've written the most important information in a smaller one. Because of this, I will accept your application. You'll have time to think it through and elaborate when the server is released
ACCEPTED.
From experience, I tell you, RP examples are the hardest thing to do. Everyone gets their own definition out of RP example, and in most cases it is just fine. Yours may not explain a role-play session, but it does describe how your character reacted to a situation in role-play.
ACCEPTED.