Do you have a Skype? If so, what is your Skype Name?: Yes, Name: Joeyharrigan
Have you read all of the rules, agree to abide by them, and by the decisions of our staff?: Yes, I do agrees to all Terms & Conditions
What is the definition of “Powergaming”?: Power Gaming is when someone forces an action upon another character such as: *Sally Decapitates Danny’s Head* or making the player’s characters do things that their character cannot do such as shoot lasers from their eyes.
What is the definition of “Metagaming”?: Using Information given Out Of Character to use In Character.
What is the definition of “Roleplay”?: The definition of roleplaying is the player, or the roleplayer, acts out a character, based on the time setting, the setting, background, the genre, etc.
Who can use flymod, X-ray and other such clientsided mods?: Nobody
When are you allowed to cause the death of another character?: When both characters agree
upon one characters death, or when someone just wants to kill their character off.
When are you allowed to speak out of character?: When using (())’s, whispering, or in global/ooc chat.
Have you read the primary server lore of our server and agree to roleplay in accordance with it?: Yes.
Who is allowed to use magic?: People who have gone through the process necessary to learn magic.
Who are the Fallen?: The fallen are a race separated from the rest of humanity during the ascension of the islands
When and how did our current government come to be?: 169 A.R, the Linyera Monarchy were defeated and the Chancellor took control.
Who are the Order of Aradin?: They group of knights who protect the chancellor from anything that might be a threat to him such as the creatures of the bloodmoon forest.
What are the Net and Essence?:
The Net is a barrier that has been there since the raising. It catches someone who may fall from an island and transports them back to the closest island.
Essence is an energy that you get by: killing monsters, mining ores, cooking food, It also prevents you from losing your stuff in the net.
What previous roleplay experience have you had, if any?: I have no experience with roleplaying servers
Character Information
Name: Julius Everose
Character Age: 19
Class: Laborer
Citizen of the Chancellery or a member of the Medori?: Citizen
Physical description: Julius is a normal sized who 6’1” and 140 lbs. He has Charcoal colored hair and Aqua blue eyes. He has pale white skin color and he has many scars on his body from childhood experiences. Julius wears a green undershirt and blue jeans. He also wears a grey jacket the majority of the time
Screen capture of your skin: Currently working on Skin
Biography:
Julius everose was born into a strong and powerful family, who always wished he was the only child they would have. His father wanted him to be a warrior, but Julius wanted to become an Alchemist instead, for he had met a traveling one. Julius took much interest in the Alchemist, asking him millions of questions. They lived in a small farm in the woods, and Julius would always worked on the farm. Julius’ father worked in the capital. Julius’ mother left when he was a mere six year old, for his dad was a drunk. His father drank because when he was Julius’ age, his parents were trapped in a massive fire, and he could have helped, but he simply ran away in fear. His father would always be disappointed and yell at Julius for wanting to take the path of an Alchemist. One day, Julius’ father came home wasted, and instead of saying many slurs at Julius, his father picked him up and through him across the room. As he did so, his father screamed at him about how much he wanted Julius dead. Julius then scurried to his room before his dad could beat him more. He locked the door and cried to himself, thinking of his mother and remembered how nice and sweet she was to him. Julius also remembered the fear in his mother’s eyes as she was being beat by his father .
Julius then found an old backpack and packed it with materials he would be needing. Things such as money, clothes and a few snacks. At midnight Julius had snuck out the window so that his father would not know he was leaving. He was headed off to go to capital city so that he accomplish his dream of becoming an alchemist. Julius stowed away upon an airship near the forest he lived in. As he was on the ship, he hoped that his father would not come to the Capital and find him there. Upon arriving at the Capital, he heard about an Academy that would be opening soon. In a rush, Julius farmed and sold the food in the market in order to afford the classes in the Academy. As Julius spent his time on the Capital Island, he found out that his father did not actual work at the Capital. His father worked on an island, which was named ‘Mining Island’. His father only came to the capital for drinks. Only once did he see his father at the Capital, and all he did was hide in fear. After seeing him for the first time, Julius’ father never came back. He, later, found out that he had been killed by the monsters on Mining Island. Julius was not sad, nor happy. He had mixed feelings. Julius did not care for the incident, and merely went on with his life.
What is your character’s main goal? (Motivation): To go to the academy and become an alchemist.
Strengths: Julius is a very strong and hard working man because of his time working on a farm. He has a good body structure so he can handle physical based tests. Unlike his father, Julius learned to read and write so he can handle basic
Weaknesses: Julius is very shy and not the most social person. Julius can’t see that well so you will sometimes see him squinting. He doesn’t like to fight because of his childhood trauma and will only fight if provoked. He also has trust issues because he always feels like a disappointment. If someone says something hurtful to him his temper can make the best of him.
Does your character have any connections to currently-existing characters or characters yet to be accepted? If so, which?: No I am not linked to anyone
In-Character-Responses
Walking down the streets of the Capitol, you encounter a pair of heavily armed and armoured men harassing a young girl.
Julius walks down the street and sees the men harassing the girl.“Hey, what are doing to hey?” Julius asks. The men turn around with a very angered look. “Scram! I don’t need people like you getting into my business!” One of men yells. Julius then thinks to himself without a minute to spare. He rams one of them with immense strength The men advert their attention away from the girl to Julius.“Get him, Show him what you gots!” The man says. “Go quick they can’t get you now.” Julius says to the girl . The girl runs with immense speed to get away. As the girl is running away, Julius sees her turn her head and she sees the girl say a muffled “Thank you.” Julius see a tears fall from a the girls cheek. No matter how many times Julius had been beaten it was well worth it and he had done the right thing.
A man approaches you with a proposition - Go to Bloodstone and retrieve something for him and you will be well rewarded.
Julius responds to the man “This is not my problem and I want no part in this.” The man says to Julius “Maybe we can talk this over with a couple of drinks? ” Julius then his hand on the table with much anger. Julius then yell “I don’t drink and if I see your face around here again I will make sure you will never see the light of day!” The man then backs away for a second and then comes back to Julius to make another proposition. Julius see the man trying to come up to Julius again and he pushes him to the ground and walks out of the Pub causally. Julius then thinks to himself if he is turning out to be like his father. He then starts to sob slowly and he swears to himself that he will never turn out to be like his father. He goes back to the Pub to apologize to the man he had pushed down.The man accepts his apology and asks Julius if he would take up his offer. Julius accepts the offer and they discuss the offer even more.
You pass an old man lying on the side of the street, begging for food
Julius sees the man sitting on the street with a sign that say “Starving anything would help.” Julius then remembers that he had some produce that didn’t sell so he gives him all he has. The man asks “Thank you, but what will you eat?” Julius then replies to the man “I will be fine I can’t see a man like you starve to death when there are many opportunities that are there just for you.” The man the grins and starts eat the food like a savage beast. Julius then says to man “I have proposition, I’ll give you half of what i earn everyday if you can find yourself a job and an apartment by the end of this month. Julius and the man shake hands to close the deal.
One month later Julius see the old man selling books at a stand in the market. Julius then walks up to the the stand and say to old man “I see my money went to a good use.” The man turns to Julius and hugs him as if he was his own flesh and blood. The man says joyfully says “Good to see you it has been so long” Julius then smiles and replies “I told you would have potential, So what do you do now.” The man says “Well eversense you gave me the money to start again i have been situated in writing my life story of all the adventures I have been through.” Julius keeps talking to man until it is dusk. The man give him a sack with a note attached. When Julius gets home he opens it and it is full of money. Julius then read the note and the note says “Julius thank you for everything you did for me this is what i owe you for starting up my life again signed Your Friend.
In a tavern, a slightly inebriated fellow insults your mother.
The man insults Julius “Aren’t you a piece of rubbish i wonder what hag would have a piece of garbage like you as a son.” Julius endures the insult but the man will not stop and many insults Julius turns to man. Julius notices that the man is heavily intoxicated and thinks he should mess with him. Julius tries to slip by the man to get away but as Julius is about to get close the man throw a devastating punch and Julius falls to the floor. Julius gets up and punches the man in the gut with all the strength he has left and the man pukes and stumbles to get back up. Julius then notices that the whole tavern is watching him can and Julius gets so embarrassed that he storms out of the Tavern as fast as he can and The man friends come out after him. Julius is cornered in a dark alley and the men soon surround him. The men start throwing bottle at Julius and then Julius is thrown to the ground
You take a liking to a beautiful necklace a passing woman wears.
Julius looks at the womens’ necklace and thinks to himself of the women he could give that to. But then the thought of them rejecting him and saying stuff only his father would say rush through his head. The lady looks at Julius with confusion and says “What’s wrong Sir” Julius then snaps out of his day nightmare and replies with reassurance “Nothing i’m fine, just fine.” Julius storms off after hving this encounter and cries to himself in a dark alley way where no one can see him.
Do you have any questions about the server or our lore?No
First off, I'd like to say that your app had some very nice writing and quality to it. I also really liked the perspective you used to write your ICRs. There were a few problems however.
Now, your character's strengths and weaknesses. Your weaknesses.. Are really just things that could hurt anyone. They're really not specific at all. I'd go as far as to say that this character really doesn't have any (asides from the drinking one). What I'd like to see is a physical weakness.. A bum arm or leg, a blind eye, etc., Or you can just make your character light on his feet, but not very strong. Or strong, but not very graceful. Or neither, perhaps your character just prefers to stay at a distance, picking enemies off with his bow, meaning he has no 'up-close' combat ability. Anything like that will work, just gimp your character.
The other problem was in the OOC section. Let me just clear this up. You are allowed to cause the death of another player when they agree to it, or when they are in an inescapable situation where death is the only option.
Hope to see these problem get cleared up, and eventually see you server side. Good luck!
@Mrice881
Sorry about that, you posted your app right as I posted Xtronify's response. I'll grade that now.
Mrice881- There were a few problems in your app, understandable for a first timer. Let's go over them.
First off, Jeans. I'm afraid they don't exist. The setting of the server is steampunk/medieval, and so, jeans won't fly.
Secondly, your strengths/weaknesses. I'm afraid you've made your character a bit OP. You've made him quite strong, and it shows in your ICRs. However, he really doesn't have any physical weaknesses. Give him a bum leg, a blind eye, etc. Or make him strong, but slow on his feet, or vice versa.
The bio and ICRs could be better, but this is your first time, so I'll be lenient. Hope to see these things cleared up. Good luck!
@Zymph Thanks. It looks like the journalism class I took the previous school year actually did pay off.
Out of Character Information
IGN: Xtronify
Real-Life Age: 17
Do you have a Skype? If so, what is your Skype Name?: Yes I do, however it contains my real name. I would prefer to keep this to myself for now.
Have you read all of the rules, agree to abide by them, and by the decisions of our staff?: Of course. I don't want to get banned on my first day on the server.
What is the definition of “Powergaming”?: This is the aspect of making your character as overpowered as possible. this can range from a variety of elements like instant regeneration and pulling a 105mm Howitzer out of your back pocket.
What is the definition of “Metagaming”?: Metagaming (commonly known as meta) is the usage of "out of character" information "in character." An example would be player A killing player B for being a vampire when in character, player A had no idea player B was of the vampire blood.
What is the definition of “Roleplay”?: Roleplay is... Amazing. Roleplay is the creation of a character that can be based off a person or who a person wants to be. Roleplay is the usage of that character in a story-line server, forum, or event in which the person acts out the character.
Who can use flymod, X-ray and other such clientsided mods?: In lieu of this seemingly obvious question, my response would to be laugh and say "no" after laughing.
When are you allowed to cause the death of another character?: Only when you have a reason to/ a victory in a fight/ fighting in a war/ if the other player agrees.
When are you allowed to speak out of character?: In most servers I have played in, once in a while. This can be used to ask a staff member a question, ask another player a question, or plan an rp with another player.
Have you read the primary server lore of our server and agree to roleplay in accordance with it?: Of course. It wouldn't really make since for me to run around the server with a pip-boy looking for bottle-caps while shooting mutants with a plasma rifle. (I love Fallout.)
Who is allowed to use magic?: Magic based classes that include Mages and Priests.
Who are the Fallen?: Medori. A peaceful people that usually keep away from conflict. They constantly use storytelling to express and expand their culture.
When and how did our current government come to be?: Around 169 A.R. After the Warden rebellion that wiped out a good majority of the Linyera family.
Who are the Order of Aradin?: An army of knights sworn to protect and crush any type of attack.
What are the Net and Essence?: The Net is a clever rp excuse for re-spawning after falling off the island. Essence is the same thing, however it applies to experience.
What previous roleplay experience have you had, if any?:
If you have played on other RP servers, please say which and why you left: Assassins Creep, way to crowded. Era of the Vanguard, owner and his little brother put WAY too much stress on me that soon became one of the reasons why I was sent into therapy. Roleplay Revolution, powergamers.... FellsGlow, current server that I am Head-Admin for (it has not opened yet.)
Character Information
Name: Daniel McCarthy
Age: 25
Class: Ranger
Citizen of the Chancellory or a member of the Medori?: Citizen of the Chancellory.
Physical description: Daniel is of average build to someone who has been in the wild for most of his life. He has long, brown hair that us usually keeps tied up with a piece of string. He is often seen wearing a grey, hooded cloak with a brown hunters outfit underneath. A leather quiver is slung across his back that he usually keeps filled.
Screen capture of your skin: http://imgur.com/86PyiB6 I don't know why, I just find that uploading it to imgur a lot more easier than actually uploading it to here.
Biography: Daniel was a quiet boy in his childhood. Hell, the only one he would really ever talk to was a seemingly close friend of his. To this day, unfortunately, he cannot remember her name. The two grew up in one of the land's many great forests. The two entered training at a somewhat young age. Daniel quickly learned that he was a natural with the bow. He trained relentlessly, despite his skill, pushing himself to the limit in both body and mind. Eventually, he succeeded.
A few years later, Daniel and his friend set off into the world to find adventure, and a job of a sort. They traveled across the land, encountering bandits, wolves, occasional drunken soldiers and strange sightings neither of them really understood. The two noticed change in each other as well. Daniel found himself becoming to grow more comfortable around his friend and eventually grew more open with her. Their trust for each other was (in their eyes) unmatched by anyone else. In fact, it was almost like they were siblings.
Months later, they found themselves in a tavern in some small town in the middle of nowhere. The two were going over a map, trying to figure out where they were. A crash rose from behind them and Daniel turned to see an abnormally large man rise from a table behind them. The man was obviously drunk; the smell of ale grew with each breath. He locked his eyes on the two wanderers and walked up to them. He demanded a payment for their being there, since it was supposed to be a guard-only tavern. The two tried to reason with the man, but only drew the attention of a group of guards nearby. The guards listened to the drunk and made a wild grab for the two. The next couple of hours remain a blur to Daniel. All he could remember is escaping into an alleyway, without his friend. He searched for her for months, but to no avail. He slowly gathered his things and set out to the next city, praying that they might be reunited again.
What is your character’s main goal?: Survive? Just get by with an existence of some kind. (That was a lot less dark in my head...)
Strengths: Long distance shooting and working alone in particular. "What can I say, I prefer to keep to myself."
Weaknesses: "Give me a bow and I'll hit anything. Give me a sword and I'll be dead faster than you can say 'that was fast.'" His right eye sustained a wound after he got in a knife fight with a wolf. He also has an unnatural attraction to getting drunk with what little friends he has. Most happenings he regrets after waking up with the the massive hangover he acquires.
Does your character have any connections to currently-existing characters or characters yet to be accepted? If so, which?: Since this is my first application, I would have to say no.
In-Character-Responses
Walking down the streets of the Capitol, you encounter a pair of heavily armed and armored men harassing a young girl. Daniel takes notice of the scene and recognizes the girl as a close friend of his. He approaches the two guards asking them why they are harassing the girl. "Now that's where it gets slightly tricky, mate. If I could solve the situation in a diplomatic way like my family taught me to, I would have probably lost a few coins. If they refused? Well lets just say I wouldn't be sitting here in prison with a few a few broken ribs and a black eye after beating the living crap out of them if the diplomatic way worked out."
A man approaches you with a proposition - Go to Bloodstone and retrieve something for him, and you will be well rewarded. Daniel would stare at him for a few moments, trying to see if he is serious or not about the proposition. Then he would instantly start laughing uncontrollably, kindly give the man the finger and ask the next insane sap that he comes across.
You pass an old man lying on the side of the street, begging for food. "I am a helper, mate." Daniel said as he takes aim at a wild buck. "But I offer them to earn their reward by giving me directions to various places in the town. Such as where the tavern is, or where the market is, or where the- Oh dammit the buck got away."
In a tavern, a slightly inebriated fellow insults your mother. Daniel glances at the man with a cold stare. Then grabs the bottle in-front of him and smashes it over the man's head, giving him the finger and walking out of the tavern after paying for the drink and bottle.
You take a liking to a beautiful necklace a passing woman wears. Daniel takes a liking to it, as stated above. However he would usually forget anything about it a few moments later. "Necklace? What necklace? Am I drunk again?"
Do you have any questions about the server or our lore? None at this time.
Xtronify- Thanks for fixing those few things up. Welcome to TAC! Here's the link to our enjin forum http://aneria.enjin.com/ , Stay updated on news concerning the server and just hang out. I look forward to meeting your character IC.
I'm so sorry, man. I went through the process of accepting you.. Then forgot to add you to the Whitelist on the server. Heh. Sorry, should be good now. Look forward to seeing you online!
@Zymph thanks for the feedback you gave me I change the things you wanted me to and if you want to change something to make this app perfect just say so.
Out of Character Information
IGN: Slime_Warrior_
Real-Life Age: 13
Do you have a Skype? If so, what is your Skype Name?: Yes, Name: Joeyharrigan
Have you read all of the rules, agree to abide by them, and by the decisions of our staff?: Yes, I do agrees to all Terms & Conditions
What is the definition of “Powergaming”?: Power Gaming is when someone forces an action upon another character such as: *Sally Decapitates Danny’s Head* or making the player’s characters do things that their character cannot do such as shoot lasers from their eyes.
What is the definition of “Metagaming”?: Using Information given Out Of Character to use In Character.
What is the definition of “Roleplay”?: The definition of roleplaying is the player, or the roleplayer, acts out a character, based on the time setting, the setting, background, the genre, etc.
Who can use flymod, X-ray and other such clientsided mods?: Nobody
When are you allowed to cause the death of another character?: When both characters agree
upon one characters death, or when someone just wants to kill their character off.
When are you allowed to speak out of character?: When using (())’s, whispering, or in global/ooc chat.
Have you read the primary server lore of our server and agree to roleplay in accordance with it?: Yes.
Who is allowed to use magic?: People who have gone through the process necessary to learn magic.
Who are the Fallen?: The fallen are a race separated from the rest of humanity during the ascension of the islands
When and how did our current government come to be?: 169 A.R, the Linyera Monarchy were defeated and the Chancellor took control.
Who are the Order of Aradin?: They group of knights who protect the chancellor from anything that might be a threat to him such as the creatures of the bloodmoon forest.
What are the Net and Essence?:
The Net is a barrier that has been there since the raising. It catches someone who may fall from an island and transports them back to the closest island.
Essence is an energy that you get by: killing monsters, mining ores, cooking food, It also prevents you from losing your stuff in the net.
What previous roleplay experience have you had, if any?: I have no experience with roleplaying servers
Character Information
Name: Julius Everose
Character Age: 19
Class: Laborer
Citizen of the Chancellery or a member of the Medori?: Citizen
Physical description: Julius is a normal sized who 6’1” and 140 lbs. He has Charcoal colored hair and Aqua blue eyes. He has pale white skin color and he has many scars on his body from childhood experiences. Julius wears a green undershirt and blue dyed cotton pants. He also wears a grey jacket the majority of the time
Screen capture of your skin: Currently working on Skin
Biography:
Julius Everose was born into a strong and powerful family, who always wished he was the only child they would have. His father wanted him to be a warrior, but Julius wanted to become an Alchemist instead, for he had met a traveling one. Julius took much interest in the Alchemist, asking him millions of questions. They lived in a small farm in the woods, and Julius would always worked on the farm. Julius’ father worked in the capital. Julius’ mother left when he was a mere six year old, for his dad was a drunk. His father drank because when he was Julius’ age, his parents were trapped in a massive fire, and he could have helped, but he simply ran away in fear. His father would always be disappointed and yell at Julius for wanting to take the path of an Alchemist. One day, Julius’ father came home wasted, and instead of saying many slurs at Julius, his father picked him up and through him across the room. As he did so, his father screamed at him about how much he wanted Julius dead. Julius then scurried to his room before his dad could beat him more. He locked the door and cried to himself, thinking of his mother and remembered how nice and sweet she was to him. Julius also remembered the fear in his mother’s eyes as she was being beat by his father .
Julius then found an old backpack and packed it with materials he would be needing. Things such as money, clothes and a few snacks. At midnight Julius had snuck out the window so that his father would not know he was leaving. He was headed off to go to capital city so that he accomplish his dream of becoming an alchemist. Julius stowed away upon an airship near the forest he lived in. As he was on the ship, he hoped that his father would not come to the Capital and find him there. Upon arriving at the Capital, he heard about an Academy that would be opening soon. In a rush, Julius farmed and sold the food in the market in order to afford the classes in the Academy. As Julius spent his time on the Capital Island, he found out that his father did not actual work at the Capital. His father worked on an island, which was named ‘Mining Island’. His father only came to the capital for drinks. Only once did he see his father at the Capital, and all he did was hide in fear. After seeing him for the first time, Julius’ father never came back. He, later, found out that he had been killed by the monsters on Mining Island. Julius was not sad, nor happy. He had mixed feelings. Julius did not care for the incident, and merely went on with his life.
What is your character’s main goal? (Motivation): To go to the academy and become an alchemist.
Strengths: Julius is a very strong and hard working man because of his time working on a farm. He has as okay body structure and can do some physical tasks. Unlike his father, Julius learned to read and write so he can handle basic.
Weaknesses: Julius is very shy , so not the most social person and will stray away from most conversation with people. Julius doesn’t have good eyesight but he cannot afford glasses and most thing are blurry to him. He also has trust issues because he always feels like a disappointment. If someone says something hurtful to him he will breakdown in a deep depression. He also has arthritis so sometimes he can’t even pick up a pen and quill.
Does your character have any connections to currently-existing characters or characters yet to be accepted? If so, which?: No I am not linked to anyone
In-Character-Responses
Walking down the streets of the Capitol, you encounter a pair of heavily armed and armored men harassing a young girl.
Julius walks down the street and sees the men harassing the girl.“Hey, what are doing to hey?” Julius asks. The men turn around with a very angered look. “Scram! I don’t need people like you getting into my business!” One of men yells. Julius then thinks to himself without a minute to spare. He rams one of them with immense strength The men advert their attention away from the girl to Julius. "Get him, Show him what you gots!” The man says. “Go quick they can’t get you now.” Julius says to the girl . The girl runs with immense speed to get away. As the girl is running away, Julius sees her turn her head and she sees the girl say a muffled “Thank you.” Julius see a tears fall from a the girls cheek. No matter how many times Julius had been beaten it was well worth it and he had done the right thing.
A man approaches you with a proposition - Go to Bloodstone and retrieve something for him and you will be well rewarded.
Julius responds to the man “This is not my problem and I want no part in this.” The man says to Julius “Maybe we can talk this over with a couple of drinks? ” Julius then his hand on the table with much anger. Julius then yell “I don’t drink and if I see your face around here again I will make sure you will never see the light of day!” The man then backs away for a second and then comes back to Julius to make another proposition. Julius see the man trying to come up to Julius again and he pushes him to the ground and walks out of the Pub causally. Julius then thinks to himself if he is turning out to be like his father. He then starts to sob slowly and he swears to himself that he will never turn out to be like his father. He goes back to the Pub to apologize to the man he had pushed down. The man accepts his apology and asks Julius if he would take up his offer. Julius accepts the offer and they discuss the offer even more.
You pass an old man lying on the side of the street, begging for food
Julius sees the man sitting on the street with a sign that say “Starving anything would help.” Julius then remembers that he had some produce that didn’t sell so he gives him all he has. The man asks “Thank you, but what will you eat?” Julius then replies to the man “I will be fine I can’t see a man like you starve to death when there are many opportunities that are there just for you.” The man the grins and starts eat the food like a savage beast. Julius then says to man “I have proposition, I’ll give you half of what I earn everyday if you can find yourself a job and an apartment by the end of this month. Julius and the man shake hands to close the deal.
One month later Julius see the old man selling books at a stand in the market. Julius then walks up to the stand and say to old man “I see my money went to a good use.” The man turns to Julius and hugs him as if he was his own flesh and blood. The man says joyfully says “Good to see you it has been so long” Julius then smiles and replies “I told you would have potential, So what do you do now.” The man says “Well ever sense you gave me the money to start again i have been situated in writing my life story of all the adventures I have been through.” Julius keeps talking to man until it is dusk. The man give him a sack with a note attached. When Julius gets home he opens it and it is full of money. Julius then read the note and the note says “Julius thank you for everything you did for me this is what I owe you for starting up my life again signed Your Friend.
In a tavern, a slightly inebriated fellow insults your mother.
The man insults Julius “Aren’t you a piece of rubbish I wonder what hag would have a piece of garbage like you as a son.” Julius endures the insult but the man will not stop and many insults Julius turns to man. Julius notices that the man is heavily intoxicated and thinks he should mess with him. Julius tries to slip by the man to get away but as Julius is about to get close the man throw a devastating punch and Julius falls to the floor. Julius gets up and punches the man in the gut with all the strength he has left and the man pukes and stumbles to get back up. Julius then notices that the whole tavern is watching him can and Julius gets so embarrassed that he storms out of the Tavern as fast as he can and The man friends come out after him. Julius is cornered in a dark alley and the men soon surround him. The men start throwing bottle at Julius and then Julius is thrown to the ground
You take a liking to a beautiful necklace a passing woman wears.
Julius looks at the women's’ necklace and thinks to himself of the women he could give that to. But then the thought of them rejecting him and saying stuff only his father would say rush through his head. The lady looks at Julius with confusion and says “What’s wrong Sir” Julius then snaps out of his day nightmare and replies with reassurance “Nothing I'm fine, just fine.” Julius storms off after having this encounter and cries to himself in a dark alley way where no one can see him.
Do you have any questions about the server or our lore?No
Mrice881- Thanks for cleaning those few things up. Your eyesight weakness is good enough, so you can scrap the arthritis one, as it wouldn't really make much sense for someone so young to have that disease. Here's the link to our enjin forum and I hope to see you server side! http://aneria.enjin.com/
Rejected:
lorddavid- I'm sorry, but you didn't make the cut. There were many reasons. Mainly spelling and grammar, a poor bio, a few wrong answers in your OOC section, and some really bad ICRs. It was a good attempt, and I don't mean to offend you. Please do not post another application or message myself or any other staff members about being rejected. I and the rest of the Whitelisting team wish you luck in finding another server.
Do you have a Skype? If so, what is your Skype Name? (This is by no means required and holds no weight on your acceptance. We just use Skype a lot): DoctorProfessorEsquireChairthingOfEternityStrongLikeBull Polaris XII (No it isn't a lie, that is really my Skype name).
Have you read all of the rules, agree to abide by them, and by the decisions of our staff?: Yes
What is the definition of “Powergaming”?: Doing actions no other player has a chance to react to because they are incredibly powerful. (i.e Billy uses King Leonidas as an arrow shield, and then dashes forward, and chops off the heads of all of the archers that fired arrows at him.)
What is the definition of “Metagaming”?: Using out-of-character information for a character.
What is the definition of “Roleplay”?: To take on the role of a character you have created to live in the environment of the game.
Who can use flymod, X-ray and other such clientsided mods?: No one living human being.
When are you allowed to cause the death of another character?: When it is okay with the admins, the character owner, and every one human being who is to be affected.
When are you allowed to speak out of character?: When you place double brackets around the words, or in out-of0charcer chat. i.e. ((Lolol Mullraugh is Stupd! Hecriesevertim!))
Have you read the primary server lore of our server and agree to roleplay in accordance with it?: Yes.
Who is allowed to use magic?: Anyone with a secondary degree is magery.
Who are the Fallen?: People who lived on a separate island for many years, with no contact with the outside world.
When and how did our current government come to be?: 196 A.R. after the fall of the previous government in 197 A.R. at the Plains of Raun.
Who are the Order of Aradin?: An order brought about in 37 A.R. to protect the people.
What are the Net and Essence?: Essence is the sort of energy that people get from surmounting obstacles. The Net is the barrier that prevents people from falling to their death, and holds up the island.
What previous roleplay experience have you had, if any?: No real experience.
If you have played on other RP servers, please say which and why you left:
Character Information
Name: Patricia Fist (Likes to be called Patsy)
Age: 22 Y/O
Class: Bladeswoman
Citizen of the Chancellory or a member of the Medori?: Chancellory
Physical description: Patsy Fist is 5' 7" tall, rather small framed, and has shoulder length blonde hair, and soft blue eyes.
Screen capture of your skin: Mullraugh is currently making me one.
Biography (Minimum 400 words. Cannot include loved ones being killed, kidnapped, tortured, or the like, unless you can do it in a non-cliche manner.):
Patricia Fist was raised by bandits, always being taught to follow the family's trade. Her parents raised her to use a sword against guards and travelers alike. However, having seen the things her parents did to innocent people made her question the purpose of violence, and she vowed never to harm a person or animal in her life. During her mid teens, the band of bandits raising her wanted to see how well they had trained her. They had her rob a small caravan, or they would kill her. Nervously, she approached the caravan master, made puppy-dog eyes, and politely asked for all his gold. Based on the state of her ratty clothes, and the sadness in her eyes, he assumed she was a beggar, and he gave her half of his gold from his caravan. The bandits, unfortunately for them, were not watching, so they did not see the display, and when Patricia returned with the gold, the bandits thought that she had killed them all, and taken all their gold, and were most impressed with her. The bandits continued to train her to become a ruthless killing machine with machetes and axes alike. Of course, she never killed a living thing, and instead secretly befriended a little bunny she named Angel. She had found Angel one day in the forest while he was sick, and cared for him until he was better. When she tried to return Angle to the forest, he would not leave, and stayed with Patricia, quickly becoming her bestest fwiend. He often liked to explore the bandit's camp, which was dangerous, because the bandits quite preferred rabbit meat, and might eat him. However, as much as she tried, Patricia found it hard to hide Angel from the bandits, and when they found out about it, the bandits killed, skinned, and ate Angel. They even force fed some of Angel to Patricia. Infuriated, Patsy gathered all of her inner strength, raised her axe to her mother, breathed deep, and smashed the axe with all her strength into her mother's cutting board for vegetables, chopping into two pieces. She then informed her parents that she was leaving. After that, for many years, Patsy wandered the islands, doing odd jobs, and politely robbing people (Also known as begging). Sometimes she would spread her message of quiet pacifism, hoping to make the people of the land more peaceful. Eventually, she moved on to the Capital hoping for a quiet, non-violent life. Patsy quickly became much too scared to leave her home, learning how much violence there is in the Capital, between guards arresting people, and random fights in the streets.
What is your character’s main goal? (Motivation): Make everyone in the Capital pacifist.
Strengths (Both physical and personality): Patsy Fist is strong physically, and is very friendly.
Weaknesses (Both physical and personality. Not knowing how to do something that is outside of your class is not a weakness. IE not knowing how to use bows and magic, if you are a swordsman.): Patsy wholeheartedly refuses to harm any living thing, essentially negating any purpose of being armed, besides blocking attacks.
Does your character have any connections to currently-existing characters or characters yet to be accepted? If so, which? (See “Character Linking Aid”. Please post a link to the topic.): No connections.
In-Character-Responses (ICRs. For each scenario, write at least a paragraph describing entirely in-character how your character would respond to the situation.Your ICRs will be used to see how well you can RP. Please post them as if in IC chat. An example can be found after this form.)
Walking down the streets of the Capitol, you encounter a pair of heavily armed and armoured men harassing a young girl.
Patricia slowly approaches the armed men, quietly threatening to get the guards. When the armed men turn to threaten Patsy, she squeals and runs away shouting "I was just kidding!". Later, she informs one of the guards that something happened.
A man approaches you with a proposition - Go to Bloodstone and retrieve something for him, and you will be well rewarded.
Patricia asks the man if there is a way to go to Bloodstone with no violence. When she is informed that it is impossible, she politely states that she will not go under any circumstances.
You pass an old man lying on the side of the street, begging for food.
Patsy Fist gives him all of her food that she currently has. Not feeling she has done enough, she asks if anything else can be done for the man, and before he says anything, she goes and gets him a fishing rod, so he can feed himself in the future.
In a tavern, a slightly inebriated fellow insults your mother.
Patsy Fist, remembering her bunny, slowly stands up, turns around, and hugs the man with a huge grin, agreeing how her mother was a terrible creature. Patsy would buy the man another drink, feeling he deserves it for being so intelligent.
You take a liking to a beautiful necklace a passing woman wears.
Patsy Fist compliments the woman on her necklace, and states that she thinks it looks good on her.
Do you have any questions about the server or our lore?
The Meaning of Life, the Universe, and Everything.
Join Date:
8/18/2011
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WholeGrainWheat
Member Details
Deferred-
Doomfall - It's an alright start, but there are a few things you could improve upon. First, the way that Patsy reacts to the situations she's in don't seem very realistic; I mean, if she was raised around violence and nothing but,I don't think she'd see anything wrong with it. Also, while being so unwilling to hurt anything that she just won't is a good weakness, you could probably add another one or two mental weaknesses. Lastly, the ICRs could use a lot more detail and length. Thank you, and good luck in trying again.
Do you have a Skype? If so, what is your Skype Name? (This is by no means required and holds no weight on your acceptance. We just use Skype a lot): DoctorProfessorEsquireChairthingOfEternityStrongLikeBull Polaris XII (No it isn't a lie, that is really my Skype name). Have you read all of the rules, agree to abide by them, and by the decisions of our staff?: Yes
What is the definition of “Powergaming”?: Doing actions no other player has a chance to react to because they are incredibly powerful. (i.e Billy uses King Leonidas as an arrow shield, and then dashes forward, and chops off the heads of all of the archers that fired arrows at him.)
What is the definition of “Metagaming”?: Using out-of-character information for a character.
What is the definition of “Roleplay”?: To take on the role of a character you have created to live in the environment of the game.
Who can use flymod, X-ray and other such clientsided mods?: No one living human being.
When are you allowed to cause the death of another character?: When it is okay with the admins, the character owner, and every one human being who is to be affected.
When are you allowed to speak out of character?: When you place double brackets around the words, or in out-of-character chat. i.e. ((Lolol Mullraugh is Stupd! Hecriesevertim!))
Have you read the primary server lore of our server and agree to roleplay in accordance with it?: Yes.
Who is allowed to use magic?: Anyone with a secondary degree is magery.
Who are the Fallen?: People who lived on a separate island for many years, with no contact with the outside world.
When and how did our current government come to be?: 196 A.R. after the fall of the previous government in 197 A.R. at the Plains of Raun.
Who are the Order of Aradin?: An order brought about in 37 A.R. to protect the people.
What are the Net and Essence?: Essence is the sort of energy that people get from surmounting obstacles. The Net is the barrier that prevents people from falling to their death, and holds up the island.
What previous roleplay experience have you had, if any?: No real experience.
If you have played on other RP servers, please say which and why you left:
Character Information
Name: Patricia Fist (Likes to be called Patsy)
Age: 22 Y/O
Class: Bladeswoman
Citizen of the Chancellory or a member of the Medori?: Chancellory
Physical description: Patsy Fist is 5' 7" tall, rather small framed, and has shoulder length blonde hair, and soft blue eyes.
Screen capture of your skin: Mullraugh is currently making me one.
Biography (Minimum 400 words. Cannot include loved ones being killed, kidnapped, tortured, or the like, unless you can do it in a non-cliche manner.):
Patricia Fist was raised by bandits, always being taught to follow the family's trade. Her parents raised her to use a sword against guards and travelers alike. However, having seen the things her parents did to innocent people, how they robbed and threatened them so ruthlessly, made her question the purpose of violence, and she vowed never to harm a person or animal in her life. During her mid teens, the band of bandits raising her wanted to see how well they had trained her. They had her rob a small caravan, or they would abandon her. Nervously, she approached the caravan master, made puppy-dog eyes, and politely asked for all his gold. Based on the state of her ratty clothes, and the sadness in her eyes, he assumed she was a beggar, and he gave her half of his gold from his caravan. The bandits, unfortunately for them, were not watching, so they did not see the display, and when Patricia returned with the gold, the bandits thought that she had killed them all, and taken all their gold, and were most impressed with her. The bandits continued to train her to become a true master with machetes and axes alike. Of course, she never killed a living thing, and instead secretly befriended a little bunny she named Angel. She had found Angel one day in the forest while he was sick, and cared for him until he was better. When she tried to return Angle to the forest, he would not leave, and stayed with Patricia, quickly becoming her bestest fwiend. He often liked to explore the bandit's camp, which was dangerous, because the bandits quite preferred rabbit meat, and might eat him. However, as much as she tried, Patricia found it hard to hide Angel from the bandits, and when they found out about it, the bandits killed, skinned, and ate Angel. They even force fed some of Angel to Patricia. Infuriated, Patsy gathered all of her inner strength, raised her axe to her mother, breathed deep, and smashed the axe with all her strength into her mother's cutting board for vegetables, chopping into two pieces. She then informed her parents that she was leaving. After that, for many years, Patsy wandered the islands, doing odd jobs, and politely robbing people (Also known as begging). Sometimes she would spread her message of quiet pacifism, hoping to make the people of the land more peaceful. Eventually, she moved on to the Capital hoping for a quiet, non-violent life. Patsy quickly became much too scared to leave her home, learning how much violence there is in the Capital, between guards arresting people, and random fights in the streets.
What is your character’s main goal? (Motivation): Make everyone in the Capital pacifist.
Strengths (Both physical and personality): Patsy Fist is strong, physically, and is very friendly.
Weaknesses (Both physical and personality. Not knowing how to do something that is outside of your class is not a weakness. IE not knowing how to use bows and magic, if you are a swordsman.): Patsy, being a pacifist, wholeheartedly refuses to harm any living thing, essentially negating any purpose of being armed, besides blocking attacks. She is incredibly shy, and has a lot of fears, most of which irrational, such as ghosts, and broken glass. Having no real education outside of theft, Patsy isn't very intelligent.
Does your character have any connections to currently-existing characters or characters yet to be accepted? If so, which? (See “Character Linking Aid”. Please post a link to the topic.): No connections.
In-Character-Responses (ICRs. For each scenario, write at least a paragraph describing entirely in-character how your character would respond to the situation.Your ICRs will be used to see how well you can RP. Please post them as if in IC chat. An example can be found after this form.)
Walking down the streets of the Capitol, you encounter a pair of heavily armed and armoured men harassing a young girl.
Patsy draws her sword, slowly approaching the armed men and telling them they better leave the young lady alone, or they'll be in a lot of trouble. The armed men turn to her, and she stops, saying slightly quieter, "you better leave her alone, or I'll... I'll call the guard." The armed men draw their weapons, and approach her slowly, grinning darkly, clearly intending to intimidate Patricia. Patricia backs up slowly, still threatening to call the guards, her hands shaking rapidly. The pace of the armed men increases and Patrica replaces her sword in its sheath and runs out of the alley as fast as she can, intent on finding the nearest guard. As soon as she finds one, she hurriedly informs the guard what had just happened, and desperately pleads that the guard come with her to the alley.
A man approaches you with a proposition - Go to Bloodstone and retrieve something for him, and you will be well rewarded.
Patricia asks the man if there is a way to go to Bloodstone with no violence. She is informed that it is not possible, and that the risk there would be great. Patricia, not desiring danger, or to risk harming anything, denies the offer, hoping the man to end it there. The man, clearly desperate for the item from Bloodstone, presses on. He offer Patricia many more rewards than before, going so far as to offer all of the gold he has. Patricia , still not interested, tries to refer him to a mercenary that might be able to help, or perhaps the item he needs can be found in the market.
You pass an old man lying on the side of the street, begging for food.
Patricia, feeling incredibly sorry for the poor man, gives him much of the food in her pack. Feeling she hasn't done enough, she goes to the market, buys a fishing rod, and gives it to the old man. Unfortunately, the old man tells Patsy he doesn't know how to fish, which leads her to find a person willing to teach the old man what he needs to know to fish, as she too has no idea how to fish. Finding the person willing to teach the old man, Patricia pays him and leaves them to it, hoping that the old man may live a better life later on.
In a tavern, a slightly inebriated fellow insults your mother.
Patsy Fist, remembering the experiences her parents forced her into, stands up slowly, turns to the man, and thanks him. She tells the man that her parents were horrible, evil people, and that they deserve as many insults as can be given. She then tells the man to help her come up with insults, laughing alongside the man. The rest of the evening is spent that way; Patricia and the inebriated man laughing and insulting Patricia's parents with incredibly mean things to say. However, later at her home, Patricia feels a little bad for her actions, that she should have been saying those things about all the bandits.
You take a liking to a beautiful necklace a passing woman wears.
Patrica, remembering her training, becomes greatly tempted to steal the necklace, thinking of how pretty she would look with it. She begins to follow the woman, formulating a plan to use her puppy-dog eyes to obtain them. As does so, however, she thinks about what she was about to do, how that wold make her no better than the bandits she escaped from, and hated. The woman stops as Patricia is thinking, and Patricia blunders straight into her. Apologising, Patricia compliments the lady on her necklace and moves on, feeling bad.
Do you have any questions about the server or our lore?
Why is Mullraugh so mean?
Other notes: Thanks for the second chance, here's hoping I don't disappoint.
Do you have a Skype? If so, what is your Skype Name? (This is by no means required and holds no weight on your acceptance. We just use Skype a lot):No
Have you read all of the rules, agree to abide by them, and by the decisions of our staff?: Yes
What is the definition of “Powergaming”?:When you enforce your Rp on another role-player. ex (*Kills Bob*, but Bob did not want to die)
What is the definition of “Metagaming”?: Metagaming is using OOC Information IC-ly.
What is the definition of “Roleplay”?: Playing The Role of a Character in a created world.
Who can use flymod, X-ray and other such clientsided mods?: No one.
When are you allowed to cause the death of another character?: Only when they agree to it, or if you've put them in an extreme condition where it only makes sense for them to die.
When are you allowed to speak out of character?: Never,unless using brackets or the OOC chat.
Have you read the primary server lore of our server and agree to roleplay in accordance with it?:Yes
Who is allowed to use magic?: Mages, Priests and Paladins (only the beginner spells of the priests.)
Who are the Fallen?:The Medori who are a peaceful people who live in seclusion. They are not human but posses an uncanny strength for magic.
When and how did our current government come to be?: After the fall of the Linyera Monarchy in 167 A.R
Who are the Order of Aradin?: A group that had sworn to defend the capitol. Once known for ridding the land of monsters, but have now been reduced to a shadow of their former self.
What are the Net and Essence? Net- The barrier that saves people from falling for eternity. It teleports the person who fell to the nearest island.
Essence- (XP) is what saves your items from the net.
What previous role-play experience have you had, if any?: I've been role-playing since the start of minecraft. I've role-played on about 8+ minecraft rp servers, as well as server on other games like Garry's Mod and Grand Theft Auto. One of the more notable servers that I've role-played on is "lord of the craft". The rest you may or may not have heard of.
If you have played on other RP servers, please say which and why you left. -Lord of The Craft - I wasn't enjoying myself. It turned into a game of realestate tycoon. -Lord of The Rings - Closed -Lord of the Rings (Revamped) -Closed -Lands of Navia -Closed
-Road to ages -Closed
-Star wars Galaxies -Closed
-When Darkness Falls -Closed
-Terrarenatus -Closed
-Frequency- Closed -etc( I can't remember them all)
Character Information
Name: Stringer Bell
Age:23
Class: Laborer
Citizen of the Chancellory or a member of the Medori?: Citizen of Chancellory
Physical description: Stringer stands at 5' 11". He has dark skin and white hair. He keeps his face clean shaven. His body is of a an average build. He often wears a straw hat covering his eyes along with very common clothing.
Screen capture of your skin: Biography (Minimum 400 words. Cannot include loved ones being killed, kidnapped, tortured, or the like, unless you can do it in a non-cliche manner.):
Growing up in a family of 10 people to support wasn't hard, but demanded of Stringer at a young age. By the age of 7 he could work an entire farm by himself. By the age of 9 it was mining and wood cutting. And finally by the age of 12 He had learned all the necessary work skills to run a household. Stringer was a grown man at the age of 12, and so he often acted as such until he got home. Every night he came home to a loving mother and a meal. Then he would head to his room where he would be ambushed by his drunk of a stepfather. Robert was abusive and would beat Stringers tired body on almost an everyday basis. This went on until the age of 14 where he finally decided to leave his home and try his luck on the streets of Chancellory. He spent most of his time rummaging through trash cans, begging for coin, and taking up the many small jobs that were offered to him. The winters were brutal and from the ages of 14 to 16 many took pity on him and let him inside their homes. This continued until the age of 18. The locals were no longer generous as they felt Stringer was a grown man now, and that him being lazy was the cause of his homelessness. Eventually he fell ill that winter. He continued to work and gradually became worse. One day on his way back from a small job he collapsed. As his vision faded to black he saw people passing him, laughing at him and staring at him from the inside of their homes like a dying dog in the street. He blacked out. He came to from time to time. He began to notice that each time he came back he was able to make out the person dragging him. By the fifth time he realized that it was the homeless man that he shared a little wooden shelter with along with another homeless person who lived on the corner a couple streets down. When he came to he was inside of a strange shop. He started to recognize it as he laid there in bed. It was a shop of a local alchemist that he had delivered to. The alchemist entered the room and asked “How are you feeling”. Stringer responded saying” How much?” .The alchemist grinned and said “No worries, I’ll make it back by tomorrow”. He then left Stringer to his thoughts. By the next day the bed was empty. Stringer Bell was on the streets the next day, planning on how he would take the merchant world by storm.
What is your character’s main goal? (Motivation): My character's motivation is both selfish and selfless. He wants to become one of the most powerful merchants that holds great power in the capitol, but he wants to help and be loved by the people who can't help themselves. He doesn't believe in helping other businessmen or women, and when he does its usually for self gain.He hopes to also one day attend the academy and become an Alchemist.
Strengths (Both physical and personality):Physically Bell is well built with good stamina. If his goal was to join and climb the ranks of the royal army,it wouldn't be a difficult task for him. He also has a sharp mind often thinking his next business move out like the next move on a chess board. Personality wise, Bell is ambitious, kind hearted and has a good sense of humor.
Weaknesses (Both physical and personality. Not knowing how to do something that is outside of your class is not a weakness. IE not knowing how to use bows and magic, if you are a swordsman.): Physically Bells weakness would be his strength. He is agile but in terms of lifting extremely heavy things he falls short.Personality wise his weakness would be his pride. Sometimes his pride gets him into a lot of trouble, and the only thing that can stop his arrogance is loss of his money.
Does your character have any connections to currently-existing characters or characters yet to be accepted? If so, which? (See “Character Linking Aid”. Please post a link to the topic.):No
In-Character-Responses (ICRs. For each scenario, write at least a paragraph describing entirely in-character how your character would respond to the situation.Your ICRs will be used to see how well you can RP. Please post them as if in IC chat. An example can be found after this form.)
Walking down the streets of the Capitol, you encounter a pair of heavily armed and armored men harassing a young girl.
(Stringer): *Slips the majority of his coin into his boot.* (Stringer): *Walks carefully but confidently up to the group of men* Gentlemen I'm sure we could find something more productive to do with our time, yes? *Cracks a fake grin*
(Armed man): Why don't you mind your own business, before this becomes your problem!
(Stringer): Alright, Alright. You look like a kind and compromising gentlemen. How about a trade?
(Armed man) A trade you say? What ya trade'n
(Stringer): *Pulls out a sack of coins and jingles it* This nice sum of coins for the girl. Hows about a trade yes?
(Armed man)*Looks to his partner and nods in agreement* Fine toss em here.
(Stringer) Ah, Ah. The young lady first.
(Armed man) *Pushes the young lady towards Stringer* Now pay up.
(Stringer)*tosses the small sack of coins*
(Armed man) *inspects the sack of coins* Lovely. You have a nice day Mr. Hero *Evil grin*
(Stringer) *Whispers under breath* Mud swallowing... Dirt spawned...
(Woman) Ah... Thanks...
(Stringer) *Grins* It was nothing, Ill make that back by tomorrow.*Hands her two coins from his boot* Have a nice day!
A man approaches you with a proposition - Go to Bloodstone and retrieve something for him, and you will be well rewarded.
(Stringer): May I see the reward?
(Man): What For?
(Stringer): Doing a job before seeing the pay is bad business. No, doing the job before receiving pay is bad business, but I'm feeling generous today.Lets see it!
(Man): *Shows him the sack of Essence charged Emeralds*
(Stringer): *Grins* Bloodstone huh? Meet me at the tavern in an hour and we'll discuss details. *pats him on the shoulder then walks away*
You pass an old man lying on the side of the street, begging for food.
(Stringer): *Sees the man is freezing and asks him to wait there*
*Comes back with a blanket, a bowl of tavern soup and some coins to hold the man up for the night*
(Old Man): Thank you good sir! How could I ever repay you?
(Stringer): No need old man,ill make that back by tomorrow *Grins*
In a tavern, a slightly inebriated fellow insults your mother.
(Stringer)*Feels very insulted and begins to form a devilish grin while scratching his chin *points to the man next to him* 10 Coins and a free drink if you beat the whisky out of him. Sound fair? No. A free drink to anyone who gets at least ten punches in! (Fellow) *Starts to feel scared with all the men closing in on him* (Stringer)*Laughs and takes a sip of his mug*
You take a liking to a beautiful necklace a passing woman wears.
(Stringer) Excuse me miss but is that a pure emerald necklace. (Woman) *Smiles*Yes. (Stringer) How much? (Woman) *giggles* It was from my mother. I couldn't possibly sell it. (Stringer) * Gives a devilish grin* How much?
Do you have any questions about the server or our lore?
Are their actual characters from the order of Aradin to talk too? (Im looking to do business with everyone...for the right price. Unless their order has fallen so far that they no longer have funds. But I guess that is for me to find out in character.)
@Zymph hey I know you accepted me but I couldn't get into the server It said I wasn't whitelisted
My IGN is Slime_Warrior_
I'm sorry, so, so sorrry! I knew I forget something. Heh. I apologize for the inconvenience. Completely my fault. I took a break from Whitelisting and now I'm a little scatterbrained. Should be fixed now.
To answer your question, I believe there are still members of the Order of Aradin, but the Actual organization has been disbanded by the Chancellery. As to why, I'll allow you to find out IC. Anyway, I look forward to seeing you server side!
I had a problem on server I typed something and It showed my named as Slime_Warrior_. How do I get it to show it as Julius I don't want to get in trouble
I don't want to get in trouble so I got right out of the server after that happened
Other notes:No
Xtronify-
First off, I'd like to say that your app had some very nice writing and quality to it. I also really liked the perspective you used to write your ICRs. There were a few problems however.
Now, your character's strengths and weaknesses. Your weaknesses.. Are really just things that could hurt anyone. They're really not specific at all. I'd go as far as to say that this character really doesn't have any (asides from the drinking one). What I'd like to see is a physical weakness.. A bum arm or leg, a blind eye, etc., Or you can just make your character light on his feet, but not very strong. Or strong, but not very graceful. Or neither, perhaps your character just prefers to stay at a distance, picking enemies off with his bow, meaning he has no 'up-close' combat ability. Anything like that will work, just gimp your character.
The other problem was in the OOC section. Let me just clear this up. You are allowed to cause the death of another player when they agree to it, or when they are in an inescapable situation where death is the only option.
Hope to see these problem get cleared up, and eventually see you server side. Good luck!
@Mrice881
Sorry about that, you posted your app right as I posted Xtronify's response. I'll grade that now.
Mrice881- There were a few problems in your app, understandable for a first timer. Let's go over them.
First off, Jeans. I'm afraid they don't exist. The setting of the server is steampunk/medieval, and so, jeans won't fly.
Secondly, your strengths/weaknesses. I'm afraid you've made your character a bit OP. You've made him quite strong, and it shows in your ICRs. However, he really doesn't have any physical weaknesses. Give him a bum leg, a blind eye, etc. Or make him strong, but slow on his feet, or vice versa.
The bio and ICRs could be better, but this is your first time, so I'll be lenient. Hope to see these things cleared up. Good luck!
Out of Character Information
IGN: Xtronify
Real-Life Age: 17
Do you have a Skype? If so, what is your Skype Name?: Yes I do, however it contains my real name. I would prefer to keep this to myself for now.
Have you read all of the rules, agree to abide by them, and by the decisions of our staff?: Of course. I don't want to get banned on my first day on the server.
What is the definition of “Powergaming”?: This is the aspect of making your character as overpowered as possible. this can range from a variety of elements like instant regeneration and pulling a 105mm Howitzer out of your back pocket.
What is the definition of “Metagaming”?: Metagaming (commonly known as meta) is the usage of "out of character" information "in character." An example would be player A killing player B for being a vampire when in character, player A had no idea player B was of the vampire blood.
What is the definition of “Roleplay”?: Roleplay is... Amazing. Roleplay is the creation of a character that can be based off a person or who a person wants to be. Roleplay is the usage of that character in a story-line server, forum, or event in which the person acts out the character.
Who can use flymod, X-ray and other such clientsided mods?: In lieu of this seemingly obvious question, my response would to be laugh and say "no" after laughing.
When are you allowed to cause the death of another character?: Only when you have a reason to/ a victory in a fight/ fighting in a war/ if the other player agrees.
When are you allowed to speak out of character?: In most servers I have played in, once in a while. This can be used to ask a staff member a question, ask another player a question, or plan an rp with another player.
Have you read the primary server lore of our server and agree to roleplay in accordance with it?: Of course. It wouldn't really make since for me to run around the server with a pip-boy looking for bottle-caps while shooting mutants with a plasma rifle. (I love Fallout.)
Who is allowed to use magic?: Magic based classes that include Mages and Priests.
Who are the Fallen?: Medori. A peaceful people that usually keep away from conflict. They constantly use storytelling to express and expand their culture.
When and how did our current government come to be?: Around 169 A.R. After the Warden rebellion that wiped out a good majority of the Linyera family.
Who are the Order of Aradin?: An army of knights sworn to protect and crush any type of attack.
What are the Net and Essence?: The Net is a clever rp excuse for re-spawning after falling off the island. Essence is the same thing, however it applies to experience.
What previous roleplay experience have you had, if any?:
If you have played on other RP servers, please say which and why you left: Assassins Creep, way to crowded. Era of the Vanguard, owner and his little brother put WAY too much stress on me that soon became one of the reasons why I was sent into therapy. Roleplay Revolution, powergamers.... FellsGlow, current server that I am Head-Admin for (it has not opened yet.)
Character Information
Name: Daniel McCarthy
Age: 25
Class: Ranger
Citizen of the Chancellory or a member of the Medori?: Citizen of the Chancellory.
Physical description: Daniel is of average build to someone who has been in the wild for most of his life. He has long, brown hair that us usually keeps tied up with a piece of string. He is often seen wearing a grey, hooded cloak with a brown hunters outfit underneath. A leather quiver is slung across his back that he usually keeps filled.
Screen capture of your skin: http://imgur.com/86PyiB6 I don't know why, I just find that uploading it to imgur a lot more easier than actually uploading it to here.
Biography: Daniel was a quiet boy in his childhood. Hell, the only one he would really ever talk to was a seemingly close friend of his. To this day, unfortunately, he cannot remember her name. The two grew up in one of the land's many great forests. The two entered training at a somewhat young age. Daniel quickly learned that he was a natural with the bow. He trained relentlessly, despite his skill, pushing himself to the limit in both body and mind. Eventually, he succeeded.
A few years later, Daniel and his friend set off into the world to find adventure, and a job of a sort. They traveled across the land, encountering bandits, wolves, occasional drunken soldiers and strange sightings neither of them really understood. The two noticed change in each other as well. Daniel found himself becoming to grow more comfortable around his friend and eventually grew more open with her. Their trust for each other was (in their eyes) unmatched by anyone else. In fact, it was almost like they were siblings.
Months later, they found themselves in a tavern in some small town in the middle of nowhere. The two were going over a map, trying to figure out where they were. A crash rose from behind them and Daniel turned to see an abnormally large man rise from a table behind them. The man was obviously drunk; the smell of ale grew with each breath. He locked his eyes on the two wanderers and walked up to them. He demanded a payment for their being there, since it was supposed to be a guard-only tavern. The two tried to reason with the man, but only drew the attention of a group of guards nearby. The guards listened to the drunk and made a wild grab for the two. The next couple of hours remain a blur to Daniel. All he could remember is escaping into an alleyway, without his friend. He searched for her for months, but to no avail. He slowly gathered his things and set out to the next city, praying that they might be reunited again.
What is your character’s main goal?: Survive? Just get by with an existence of some kind. (That was a lot less dark in my head...)
Strengths: Long distance shooting and working alone in particular. "What can I say, I prefer to keep to myself."
Weaknesses: "Give me a bow and I'll hit anything. Give me a sword and I'll be dead faster than you can say 'that was fast.'" His right eye sustained a wound after he got in a knife fight with a wolf. He also has an unnatural attraction to getting drunk with what little friends he has. Most happenings he regrets after waking up with the the massive hangover he acquires.
Does your character have any connections to currently-existing characters or characters yet to be accepted? If so, which?: Since this is my first application, I would have to say no.
In-Character-Responses
Walking down the streets of the Capitol, you encounter a pair of heavily armed and armored men harassing a young girl.
Daniel takes notice of the scene and recognizes the girl as a close friend of his. He approaches the two guards asking them why they are harassing the girl. "Now that's where it gets slightly tricky, mate. If I could solve the situation in a diplomatic way like my family taught me to, I would have probably lost a few coins. If they refused? Well lets just say I wouldn't be sitting here in prison with a few a few broken ribs and a black eye after beating the living crap out of them if the diplomatic way worked out."
A man approaches you with a proposition - Go to Bloodstone and retrieve something for him, and you will be well rewarded.
Daniel would stare at him for a few moments, trying to see if he is serious or not about the proposition. Then he would instantly start laughing uncontrollably, kindly give the man the finger and ask the next insane sap that he comes across.
You pass an old man lying on the side of the street, begging for food.
"I am a helper, mate." Daniel said as he takes aim at a wild buck. "But I offer them to earn their reward by giving me directions to various places in the town. Such as where the tavern is, or where the market is, or where the- Oh dammit the buck got away."
In a tavern, a slightly inebriated fellow insults your mother.
Daniel glances at the man with a cold stare. Then grabs the bottle in-front of him and smashes it over the man's head, giving him the finger and walking out of the tavern after paying for the drink and bottle.
You take a liking to a beautiful necklace a passing woman wears.
Daniel takes a liking to it, as stated above. However he would usually forget anything about it a few moments later. "Necklace? What necklace? Am I drunk again?"
Do you have any questions about the server or our lore? None at this time.
Other notes: N/A
"If at first you don't succeed, reload."
Xtronify- Thanks for fixing those few things up. Welcome to TAC! Here's the link to our enjin forum http://aneria.enjin.com/ , Stay updated on news concerning the server and just hang out. I look forward to meeting your character IC.
I'm so sorry, man. I went through the process of accepting you.. Then forgot to add you to the Whitelist on the server. Heh. Sorry, should be good now. Look forward to seeing you online!
Mrice881- Thanks for cleaning those few things up. Your eyesight weakness is good enough, so you can scrap the arthritis one, as it wouldn't really make much sense for someone so young to have that disease. Here's the link to our enjin forum and I hope to see you server side! http://aneria.enjin.com/
Rejected:
lorddavid- I'm sorry, but you didn't make the cut. There were many reasons. Mainly spelling and grammar, a poor bio, a few wrong answers in your OOC section, and some really bad ICRs. It was a good attempt, and I don't mean to offend you. Please do not post another application or message myself or any other staff members about being rejected. I and the rest of the Whitelisting team wish you luck in finding another server.
IGN: Doomfall
Real-Life Age: 15
Do you have a Skype? If so, what is your Skype Name? (This is by no means required and holds no weight on your acceptance. We just use Skype a lot): DoctorProfessorEsquireChairthingOfEternityStrongLikeBull Polaris XII (No it isn't a lie, that is really my Skype name).
Have you read all of the rules, agree to abide by them, and by the decisions of our staff?: Yes
What is the definition of “Powergaming”?: Doing actions no other player has a chance to react to because they are incredibly powerful. (i.e Billy uses King Leonidas as an arrow shield, and then dashes forward, and chops off the heads of all of the archers that fired arrows at him.)
What is the definition of “Metagaming”?: Using out-of-character information for a character.
What is the definition of “Roleplay”?: To take on the role of a character you have created to live in the environment of the game.
Who can use flymod, X-ray and other such clientsided mods?: No one living human being.
When are you allowed to cause the death of another character?: When it is okay with the admins, the character owner, and every one human being who is to be affected.
When are you allowed to speak out of character?: When you place double brackets around the words, or in out-of0charcer chat. i.e. ((Lolol Mullraugh is Stupd! Hecriesevertim!))
Have you read the primary server lore of our server and agree to roleplay in accordance with it?: Yes.
Who is allowed to use magic?: Anyone with a secondary degree is magery.
Who are the Fallen?: People who lived on a separate island for many years, with no contact with the outside world.
When and how did our current government come to be?: 196 A.R. after the fall of the previous government in 197 A.R. at the Plains of Raun.
Who are the Order of Aradin?: An order brought about in 37 A.R. to protect the people.
What are the Net and Essence?: Essence is the sort of energy that people get from surmounting obstacles. The Net is the barrier that prevents people from falling to their death, and holds up the island.
What previous roleplay experience have you had, if any?: No real experience.
If you have played on other RP servers, please say which and why you left:
Character Information
Name: Patricia Fist (Likes to be called Patsy)
Age: 22 Y/O
Class: Bladeswoman
Citizen of the Chancellory or a member of the Medori?: Chancellory
Physical description: Patsy Fist is 5' 7" tall, rather small framed, and has shoulder length blonde hair, and soft blue eyes.
Screen capture of your skin: Mullraugh is currently making me one.
Biography (Minimum 400 words. Cannot include loved ones being killed, kidnapped, tortured, or the like, unless you can do it in a non-cliche manner.):
Patricia Fist was raised by bandits, always being taught to follow the family's trade. Her parents raised her to use a sword against guards and travelers alike. However, having seen the things her parents did to innocent people made her question the purpose of violence, and she vowed never to harm a person or animal in her life. During her mid teens, the band of bandits raising her wanted to see how well they had trained her. They had her rob a small caravan, or they would kill her. Nervously, she approached the caravan master, made puppy-dog eyes, and politely asked for all his gold. Based on the state of her ratty clothes, and the sadness in her eyes, he assumed she was a beggar, and he gave her half of his gold from his caravan. The bandits, unfortunately for them, were not watching, so they did not see the display, and when Patricia returned with the gold, the bandits thought that she had killed them all, and taken all their gold, and were most impressed with her. The bandits continued to train her to become a ruthless killing machine with machetes and axes alike. Of course, she never killed a living thing, and instead secretly befriended a little bunny she named Angel. She had found Angel one day in the forest while he was sick, and cared for him until he was better. When she tried to return Angle to the forest, he would not leave, and stayed with Patricia, quickly becoming her bestest fwiend. He often liked to explore the bandit's camp, which was dangerous, because the bandits quite preferred rabbit meat, and might eat him. However, as much as she tried, Patricia found it hard to hide Angel from the bandits, and when they found out about it, the bandits killed, skinned, and ate Angel. They even force fed some of Angel to Patricia. Infuriated, Patsy gathered all of her inner strength, raised her axe to her mother, breathed deep, and smashed the axe with all her strength into her mother's cutting board for vegetables, chopping into two pieces. She then informed her parents that she was leaving. After that, for many years, Patsy wandered the islands, doing odd jobs, and politely robbing people (Also known as begging). Sometimes she would spread her message of quiet pacifism, hoping to make the people of the land more peaceful. Eventually, she moved on to the Capital hoping for a quiet, non-violent life. Patsy quickly became much too scared to leave her home, learning how much violence there is in the Capital, between guards arresting people, and random fights in the streets.
What is your character’s main goal? (Motivation): Make everyone in the Capital pacifist.
Strengths (Both physical and personality): Patsy Fist is strong physically, and is very friendly.
Weaknesses (Both physical and personality. Not knowing how to do something that is outside of your class is not a weakness. IE not knowing how to use bows and magic, if you are a swordsman.): Patsy wholeheartedly refuses to harm any living thing, essentially negating any purpose of being armed, besides blocking attacks.
Does your character have any connections to currently-existing characters or characters yet to be accepted? If so, which? (See “Character Linking Aid”. Please post a link to the topic.): No connections.
In-Character-Responses (ICRs. For each scenario, write at least a paragraph describing entirely in-character how your character would respond to the situation.Your ICRs will be used to see how well you can RP. Please post them as if in IC chat. An example can be found after this form.)
Walking down the streets of the Capitol, you encounter a pair of heavily armed and armoured men harassing a young girl.
Patricia slowly approaches the armed men, quietly threatening to get the guards. When the armed men turn to threaten Patsy, she squeals and runs away shouting "I was just kidding!". Later, she informs one of the guards that something happened.
A man approaches you with a proposition - Go to Bloodstone and retrieve something for him, and you will be well rewarded.
Patricia asks the man if there is a way to go to Bloodstone with no violence. When she is informed that it is impossible, she politely states that she will not go under any circumstances.
You pass an old man lying on the side of the street, begging for food.
Patsy Fist gives him all of her food that she currently has. Not feeling she has done enough, she asks if anything else can be done for the man, and before he says anything, she goes and gets him a fishing rod, so he can feed himself in the future.
In a tavern, a slightly inebriated fellow insults your mother.
Patsy Fist, remembering her bunny, slowly stands up, turns around, and hugs the man with a huge grin, agreeing how her mother was a terrible creature. Patsy would buy the man another drink, feeling he deserves it for being so intelligent.
You take a liking to a beautiful necklace a passing woman wears.
Patsy Fist compliments the woman on her necklace, and states that she thinks it looks good on her.
Do you have any questions about the server or our lore?
Why is Mullraugh so mean?
Other notes:
Doomfall - It's an alright start, but there are a few things you could improve upon. First, the way that Patsy reacts to the situations she's in don't seem very realistic; I mean, if she was raised around violence and nothing but,I don't think she'd see anything wrong with it. Also, while being so unwilling to hurt anything that she just won't is a good weakness, you could probably add another one or two mental weaknesses. Lastly, the ICRs could use a lot more detail and length. Thank you, and good luck in trying again.
I'm a man of few words and many voices.
My IGN is Slime_Warrior_
IGN: Doomfall
Real-Life Age: 15
Do you have a Skype? If so, what is your Skype Name? (This is by no means required and holds no weight on your acceptance. We just use Skype a lot): DoctorProfessorEsquireChairthingOfEternityStrongLikeBull Polaris XII (No it isn't a lie, that is really my Skype name).
Have you read all of the rules, agree to abide by them, and by the decisions of our staff?: Yes
What is the definition of “Powergaming”?: Doing actions no other player has a chance to react to because they are incredibly powerful. (i.e Billy uses King Leonidas as an arrow shield, and then dashes forward, and chops off the heads of all of the archers that fired arrows at him.)
What is the definition of “Metagaming”?: Using out-of-character information for a character.
What is the definition of “Roleplay”?: To take on the role of a character you have created to live in the environment of the game.
Who can use flymod, X-ray and other such clientsided mods?: No one living human being.
When are you allowed to cause the death of another character?: When it is okay with the admins, the character owner, and every one human being who is to be affected.
When are you allowed to speak out of character?: When you place double brackets around the words, or in out-of-character chat. i.e. ((Lolol Mullraugh is Stupd! Hecriesevertim!))
Have you read the primary server lore of our server and agree to roleplay in accordance with it?: Yes.
Who is allowed to use magic?: Anyone with a secondary degree is magery.
Who are the Fallen?: People who lived on a separate island for many years, with no contact with the outside world.
When and how did our current government come to be?: 196 A.R. after the fall of the previous government in 197 A.R. at the Plains of Raun.
Who are the Order of Aradin?: An order brought about in 37 A.R. to protect the people.
What are the Net and Essence?: Essence is the sort of energy that people get from surmounting obstacles. The Net is the barrier that prevents people from falling to their death, and holds up the island.
What previous roleplay experience have you had, if any?: No real experience.
If you have played on other RP servers, please say which and why you left:
Character Information
Name: Patricia Fist (Likes to be called Patsy)
Age: 22 Y/O
Class: Bladeswoman
Citizen of the Chancellory or a member of the Medori?: Chancellory
Physical description: Patsy Fist is 5' 7" tall, rather small framed, and has shoulder length blonde hair, and soft blue eyes.
Screen capture of your skin: Mullraugh is currently making me one.
Biography (Minimum 400 words. Cannot include loved ones being killed, kidnapped, tortured, or the like, unless you can do it in a non-cliche manner.):
Patricia Fist was raised by bandits, always being taught to follow the family's trade. Her parents raised her to use a sword against guards and travelers alike. However, having seen the things her parents did to innocent people, how they robbed and threatened them so ruthlessly, made her question the purpose of violence, and she vowed never to harm a person or animal in her life. During her mid teens, the band of bandits raising her wanted to see how well they had trained her. They had her rob a small caravan, or they would abandon her. Nervously, she approached the caravan master, made puppy-dog eyes, and politely asked for all his gold. Based on the state of her ratty clothes, and the sadness in her eyes, he assumed she was a beggar, and he gave her half of his gold from his caravan. The bandits, unfortunately for them, were not watching, so they did not see the display, and when Patricia returned with the gold, the bandits thought that she had killed them all, and taken all their gold, and were most impressed with her. The bandits continued to train her to become a true master with machetes and axes alike. Of course, she never killed a living thing, and instead secretly befriended a little bunny she named Angel. She had found Angel one day in the forest while he was sick, and cared for him until he was better. When she tried to return Angle to the forest, he would not leave, and stayed with Patricia, quickly becoming her bestest fwiend. He often liked to explore the bandit's camp, which was dangerous, because the bandits quite preferred rabbit meat, and might eat him. However, as much as she tried, Patricia found it hard to hide Angel from the bandits, and when they found out about it, the bandits killed, skinned, and ate Angel. They even force fed some of Angel to Patricia. Infuriated, Patsy gathered all of her inner strength, raised her axe to her mother, breathed deep, and smashed the axe with all her strength into her mother's cutting board for vegetables, chopping into two pieces. She then informed her parents that she was leaving. After that, for many years, Patsy wandered the islands, doing odd jobs, and politely robbing people (Also known as begging). Sometimes she would spread her message of quiet pacifism, hoping to make the people of the land more peaceful. Eventually, she moved on to the Capital hoping for a quiet, non-violent life. Patsy quickly became much too scared to leave her home, learning how much violence there is in the Capital, between guards arresting people, and random fights in the streets.
What is your character’s main goal? (Motivation): Make everyone in the Capital pacifist.
Strengths (Both physical and personality): Patsy Fist is strong, physically, and is very friendly.
Weaknesses (Both physical and personality. Not knowing how to do something that is outside of your class is not a weakness. IE not knowing how to use bows and magic, if you are a swordsman.): Patsy, being a pacifist, wholeheartedly refuses to harm any living thing, essentially negating any purpose of being armed, besides blocking attacks. She is incredibly shy, and has a lot of fears, most of which irrational, such as ghosts, and broken glass. Having no real education outside of theft, Patsy isn't very intelligent.
Does your character have any connections to currently-existing characters or characters yet to be accepted? If so, which? (See “Character Linking Aid”. Please post a link to the topic.): No connections.
In-Character-Responses (ICRs. For each scenario, write at least a paragraph describing entirely in-character how your character would respond to the situation.Your ICRs will be used to see how well you can RP. Please post them as if in IC chat. An example can be found after this form.)
Walking down the streets of the Capitol, you encounter a pair of heavily armed and armoured men harassing a young girl.
Patsy draws her sword, slowly approaching the armed men and telling them they better leave the young lady alone, or they'll be in a lot of trouble. The armed men turn to her, and she stops, saying slightly quieter, "you better leave her alone, or I'll... I'll call the guard." The armed men draw their weapons, and approach her slowly, grinning darkly, clearly intending to intimidate Patricia. Patricia backs up slowly, still threatening to call the guards, her hands shaking rapidly. The pace of the armed men increases and Patrica replaces her sword in its sheath and runs out of the alley as fast as she can, intent on finding the nearest guard. As soon as she finds one, she hurriedly informs the guard what had just happened, and desperately pleads that the guard come with her to the alley.
A man approaches you with a proposition - Go to Bloodstone and retrieve something for him, and you will be well rewarded.
Patricia asks the man if there is a way to go to Bloodstone with no violence. She is informed that it is not possible, and that the risk there would be great. Patricia, not desiring danger, or to risk harming anything, denies the offer, hoping the man to end it there. The man, clearly desperate for the item from Bloodstone, presses on. He offer Patricia many more rewards than before, going so far as to offer all of the gold he has. Patricia , still not interested, tries to refer him to a mercenary that might be able to help, or perhaps the item he needs can be found in the market.
You pass an old man lying on the side of the street, begging for food.
Patricia, feeling incredibly sorry for the poor man, gives him much of the food in her pack. Feeling she hasn't done enough, she goes to the market, buys a fishing rod, and gives it to the old man. Unfortunately, the old man tells Patsy he doesn't know how to fish, which leads her to find a person willing to teach the old man what he needs to know to fish, as she too has no idea how to fish. Finding the person willing to teach the old man, Patricia pays him and leaves them to it, hoping that the old man may live a better life later on.
In a tavern, a slightly inebriated fellow insults your mother.
Patsy Fist, remembering the experiences her parents forced her into, stands up slowly, turns to the man, and thanks him. She tells the man that her parents were horrible, evil people, and that they deserve as many insults as can be given. She then tells the man to help her come up with insults, laughing alongside the man. The rest of the evening is spent that way; Patricia and the inebriated man laughing and insulting Patricia's parents with incredibly mean things to say. However, later at her home, Patricia feels a little bad for her actions, that she should have been saying those things about all the bandits.
You take a liking to a beautiful necklace a passing woman wears.
Patrica, remembering her training, becomes greatly tempted to steal the necklace, thinking of how pretty she would look with it. She begins to follow the woman, formulating a plan to use her puppy-dog eyes to obtain them. As does so, however, she thinks about what she was about to do, how that wold make her no better than the bandits she escaped from, and hated. The woman stops as Patricia is thinking, and Patricia blunders straight into her. Apologising, Patricia compliments the lady on her necklace and moves on, feeling bad.
Do you have any questions about the server or our lore?
Why is Mullraugh so mean?
Other notes: Thanks for the second chance, here's hoping I don't disappoint.
Out of Character Information
IGN: Yamamoshi
Real-Life Age:18
Do you have a Skype? If so, what is your Skype Name? (This is by no means required and holds no weight on your acceptance. We just use Skype a lot):No
Have you read all of the rules, agree to abide by them, and by the decisions of our staff?: Yes
What is the definition of “Powergaming”?:When you enforce your Rp on another role-player. ex (*Kills Bob*, but Bob did not want to die)
What is the definition of “Metagaming”?: Metagaming is using OOC Information IC-ly.
What is the definition of “Roleplay”?: Playing The Role of a Character in a created world.
Who can use flymod, X-ray and other such clientsided mods?: No one.
When are you allowed to cause the death of another character?: Only when they agree to it, or if you've put them in an extreme condition where it only makes sense for them to die.
When are you allowed to speak out of character?: Never,unless using brackets or the OOC chat.
Have you read the primary server lore of our server and agree to roleplay in accordance with it?:Yes
Who is allowed to use magic?: Mages, Priests and Paladins (only the beginner spells of the priests.)
Who are the Fallen?:The Medori who are a peaceful people who live in seclusion. They are not human but posses an uncanny strength for magic.
When and how did our current government come to be?: After the fall of the Linyera Monarchy in 167 A.R
Who are the Order of Aradin?: A group that had sworn to defend the capitol. Once known for ridding the land of monsters, but have now been reduced to a shadow of their former self.
What are the Net and Essence? Net- The barrier that saves people from falling for eternity. It teleports the person who fell to the nearest island.
Essence- (XP) is what saves your items from the net.
What previous role-play experience have you had, if any?: I've been role-playing since the start of minecraft. I've role-played on about 8+ minecraft rp servers, as well as server on other games like Garry's Mod and Grand Theft Auto. One of the more notable servers that I've role-played on is "lord of the craft". The rest you may or may not have heard of.
If you have played on other RP servers, please say which and why you left.
-Lord of The Craft - I wasn't enjoying myself. It turned into a game of realestate tycoon.
-Lord of The Rings - Closed
-Lord of the Rings (Revamped) -Closed
-Lands of Navia -Closed
-Road to ages -Closed
-Star wars Galaxies -Closed
-When Darkness Falls -Closed
-Terrarenatus -Closed
-Frequency- Closed
-etc( I can't remember them all)
Character Information
Name: Stringer Bell
Age:23
Class: Laborer
Citizen of the Chancellory or a member of the Medori?: Citizen of Chancellory
Physical description: Stringer stands at 5' 11". He has dark skin and white hair. He keeps his face clean shaven. His body is of a an average build. He often wears a straw hat covering his eyes along with very common clothing.
Screen capture of your skin:
Biography (Minimum 400 words. Cannot include loved ones being killed, kidnapped, tortured, or the like, unless you can do it in a non-cliche manner.):
Growing up in a family of 10 people to support wasn't hard, but demanded of Stringer at a young age. By the age of 7 he could work an entire farm by himself. By the age of 9 it was mining and wood cutting. And finally by the age of 12 He had learned all the necessary work skills to run a household. Stringer was a grown man at the age of 12, and so he often acted as such until he got home. Every night he came home to a loving mother and a meal. Then he would head to his room where he would be ambushed by his drunk of a stepfather. Robert was abusive and would beat Stringers tired body on almost an everyday basis. This went on until the age of 14 where he finally decided to leave his home and try his luck on the streets of Chancellory. He spent most of his time rummaging through trash cans, begging for coin, and taking up the many small jobs that were offered to him. The winters were brutal and from the ages of 14 to 16 many took pity on him and let him inside their homes. This continued until the age of 18. The locals were no longer generous as they felt Stringer was a grown man now, and that him being lazy was the cause of his homelessness. Eventually he fell ill that winter. He continued to work and gradually became worse. One day on his way back from a small job he collapsed. As his vision faded to black he saw people passing him, laughing at him and staring at him from the inside of their homes like a dying dog in the street. He blacked out. He came to from time to time. He began to notice that each time he came back he was able to make out the person dragging him. By the fifth time he realized that it was the homeless man that he shared a little wooden shelter with along with another homeless person who lived on the corner a couple streets down. When he came to he was inside of a strange shop. He started to recognize it as he laid there in bed. It was a shop of a local alchemist that he had delivered to. The alchemist entered the room and asked “How are you feeling”. Stringer responded saying” How much?” .The alchemist grinned and said “No worries, I’ll make it back by tomorrow”. He then left Stringer to his thoughts. By the next day the bed was empty. Stringer Bell was on the streets the next day, planning on how he would take the merchant world by storm.
What is your character’s main goal? (Motivation): My character's motivation is both selfish and selfless. He wants to become one of the most powerful merchants that holds great power in the capitol, but he wants to help and be loved by the people who can't help themselves. He doesn't believe in helping other businessmen or women, and when he does its usually for self gain.He hopes to also one day attend the academy and become an Alchemist.
Strengths (Both physical and personality):Physically Bell is well built with good stamina. If his goal was to join and climb the ranks of the royal army,it wouldn't be a difficult task for him. He also has a sharp mind often thinking his next business move out like the next move on a chess board. Personality wise, Bell is ambitious, kind hearted and has a good sense of humor.
Weaknesses (Both physical and personality. Not knowing how to do something that is outside of your class is not a weakness. IE not knowing how to use bows and magic, if you are a swordsman.): Physically Bells weakness would be his strength. He is agile but in terms of lifting extremely heavy things he falls short.Personality wise his weakness would be his pride. Sometimes his pride gets him into a lot of trouble, and the only thing that can stop his arrogance is loss of his money.
Does your character have any connections to currently-existing characters or characters yet to be accepted? If so, which? (See “Character Linking Aid”. Please post a link to the topic.):No
In-Character-Responses (ICRs. For each scenario, write at least a paragraph describing entirely in-character how your character would respond to the situation.Your ICRs will be used to see how well you can RP. Please post them as if in IC chat. An example can be found after this form.)
Walking down the streets of the Capitol, you encounter a pair of heavily armed and armored men harassing a young girl.
(Stringer): *Slips the majority of his coin into his boot.*
(Stringer): *Walks carefully but confidently up to the group of men* Gentlemen I'm sure we could find something more productive to do with our time, yes? *Cracks a fake grin*
(Armed man): Why don't you mind your own business, before this becomes your problem!
(Stringer): Alright, Alright. You look like a kind and compromising gentlemen. How about a trade?
(Armed man) A trade you say? What ya trade'n
(Stringer): *Pulls out a sack of coins and jingles it* This nice sum of coins for the girl. Hows about a trade yes?
(Armed man)*Looks to his partner and nods in agreement* Fine toss em here.
(Stringer) Ah, Ah. The young lady first.
(Armed man) *Pushes the young lady towards Stringer* Now pay up.
(Stringer)*tosses the small sack of coins*
(Armed man) *inspects the sack of coins* Lovely. You have a nice day Mr. Hero *Evil grin*
(Stringer) *Whispers under breath* Mud swallowing... Dirt spawned...
(Woman) Ah... Thanks...
(Stringer) *Grins* It was nothing, Ill make that back by tomorrow.*Hands her two coins from his boot* Have a nice day!
A man approaches you with a proposition - Go to Bloodstone and retrieve something for him, and you will be well rewarded.
(Stringer): May I see the reward?
(Man): What For?
(Stringer): Doing a job before seeing the pay is bad business. No, doing the job before receiving pay is bad business, but I'm feeling generous today.Lets see it!
(Man): *Shows him the sack of Essence charged Emeralds*
(Stringer): *Grins* Bloodstone huh? Meet me at the tavern in an hour and we'll discuss details. *pats him on the shoulder then walks away*
You pass an old man lying on the side of the street, begging for food.
(Stringer): *Sees the man is freezing and asks him to wait there*
*Comes back with a blanket, a bowl of tavern soup and some coins to hold the man up for the night*
(Old Man): Thank you good sir! How could I ever repay you?
(Stringer): No need old man,ill make that back by tomorrow *Grins*
In a tavern, a slightly inebriated fellow insults your mother.
(Stringer)*Feels very insulted and begins to form a devilish grin while scratching his chin
*points to the man next to him* 10 Coins and a free drink if you beat the whisky out of him. Sound fair?
No. A free drink to anyone who gets at least ten punches in!
(Fellow) *Starts to feel scared with all the men closing in on him*
(Stringer)*Laughs and takes a sip of his mug*
You take a liking to a beautiful necklace a passing woman wears.
(Stringer) Excuse me miss but is that a pure emerald necklace.
(Woman) *Smiles*Yes.
(Stringer) How much?
(Woman) *giggles* It was from my mother. I couldn't possibly sell it.
(Stringer) * Gives a devilish grin* How much?
Do you have any questions about the server or our lore?
Are their actual characters from the order of Aradin to talk too?
(Im looking to do business with everyone...for the right price. Unless their order has fallen so far that they no longer have funds. But I guess that is for me to find out in character.)
Other notes:
Doomfall - Very good for a beginner. Hope to see you on the server! Check out our forums at http://aneria.enjin.com/ and get to know everyone!
I'm a man of few words and many voices.
My IGN is Slime_Warrior_
I just added you to the whitelist. Sorry for the wait!
I'm sorry, so, so sorrry! I knew I forget something. Heh. I apologize for the inconvenience. Completely my fault. I took a break from Whitelisting and now I'm a little scatterbrained. Should be fixed now.
Yamamoshi- Welcome to TAC, here's the link to our enjin forum: http://aneria.enjin.com/
To answer your question, I believe there are still members of the Order of Aradin, but the Actual organization has been disbanded by the Chancellery. As to why, I'll allow you to find out IC. Anyway, I look forward to seeing you server side!
I don't want to get in trouble so I got right out of the server after that happened