IGN: pepis3
Desired Nation: Earth Kingdom
Appearance: The green Earth Kingdom Dai Li uniform.
Brief History: Shu discovered he would be part of the Dia Li when he was a young age. After a few years he started his training to become the elite police of Ba Sign Se and help protect this great city. Shu became an expert Dai Li agent.
Desired Name: Shu
Desired Profession: Dai Li
Desired City: Ba Sing Se
Drozzbear-It's good, a new name is required though, but no need to rewrite. Also, if you're from the Foggy Swamp, then wouldn't that be where you live?
dryadyamato-Needs a rewrite. Appearance has to fit your role in RP, needs a new name, and definitely a history rewrite.
ECAaxel-Looks good, no need to rewrite, but a new name will be required.
nittany1019-Earth King, no. Accepted under the second one. In the future you may possibly become the Earth King.
TheMegaWhopper-You will probably never be the avatar. I would advise against asking again, that being said, a new name, and perhaps a more in-depth story. Rewrite.
Albino_Yeti-First of all, it needs a new name. Second of all it goes us wondering why you said 'Wolf Skin uniform (SWT), and the warriors in Siege of the North (NWT Warriors), two completely different appearances. An expansion on history is also required. Rewrite.
charlie2411-It makes no sense how you were born during the war, even though they took out air benders first. You would be over a hundred years old. Rewrite.
DKWON-Great application! Whitelisted.
sammysalter-Finally a sand bender! Anyways, the name is good, we aren't using canon names anyways. Your history also needs to be expanded a little.
NEDST3R-Complete rewrite. You need a new name, also, only females lives at the WAT. A new skin that is not Tenzin also.
Vojdan-Looks good. Whitelisted.
Aronto-Suddenly air bender in fire capital? The history needs a really good rewrite. The rest looks good. For the record, only women live at the WAT and EAT.
Zeekco-Everything is good, but the history needs expanding.
dark78660-Looks good, whitelisted.
Survivorboy2001-You need a skin that fits your RP character. Also, the history needs to be redone, as well as the city. Rewrite.
DinosaurCat-Looks good, but it got me when you said you practiced at the forbidden spirit oasis, and also teaching yourself bending is near to impossible. Whitelisted.
lightblockman365-Whitelisted, on the terms you redo your appearance. It has to fit your RP character.
REWRITE with changed name and history- IGN: Frooz Desired Nation: Air Nomad Appearance: Traditional air nomad garb with tattoos and blonde stubble facial hair Brief History: Born and raised in the Southern Air Temple, Matsumoto was a mischievous young air nomad who had a knack for running around and having fun, although he never let any of those things supersede his love for the art of bending. Now a 25-year-old man and master airbender, he is looking to find his place in the world by travelling across it, making friends and having fun along the way. Drawing inspiration from his friend Gyatso, Matsumoto is wise for his age, but also quite the wise cracker. He is one that all love to be around, although he can also be serious when the occasion calls for seriousness. Desired Name: Matsumoto Desired Profession: Monk/Traveling Nomad/Messenger Desired City: Southern Air Temple (wanted to do Western, but I read above that only women live at WAT and EAT)
IGN: Azielio_Tor
Desired Nation: Air Nomads
Appearance: Black Monk attire with diamond and gold armor.
Brief History: As a child he used to marvel at the stars and wondered what the rest of the world was like. After his intensive training and becoming one of the worlds youngest Air Bending masters at the age of 18, he went to go explore the rest of the world hoping to find lives answers for him. Upon his explorations he realized how corrupt the world really was and decided to try and cleanse the world. After numerous failings at stopping crime he realized he couldn't get rid of the worlds corruption and in trying to help get rid of the corruption, he corrupted himself and is now a traveling mercenary, out to help the weak and punish the wicked and do whatever the job requires.
Desired Name: Azielio
Desired Profession: Air bending Mercenary
Desired City: Ba Sing Se
IGN: TheMegaWhopper
Desired Nation: Water Tribe
Appearance: Tan skin, Traditional water tribe blue/white coat and outfit
Brief History: Silas was born and raised in the Southern Water Tribe, but always dreamed of travelling the world once he was older and visiting all of the 4 Nations and mastering waterbending. He always lived a rather normal life and always got along with others. He has a great personality and was always charming with the ladies. He had a water ending tutor in the southern water tribe, but he was never really able to fully grasp waterbending and hopes to find a new master during his travels. Silas is also a bit of a romantic and hopes to meet his future wife during his travels
Desired Name: Silas
Desired Profession: Traveler/Amateur Waterbender
Desired City: Southern Water
Appearance: (both literally, as a skin, and in RP context) I have the apperence of an old earth kingdom man with a Fu Manchu mustache wearing a earth kingdom tunic. I am 63 years old with white/gray hair.
Brief History: I have worked my way up from the crime infested streets of the lower ring of BSS where I was born, to the high rise of the Upper Ring where I work. When I was a boy my parents were extorted and executed by a duelist. This occurrence made me want to bring down crime within the walls. From the age of 14 to my humble year of 30 I made my living making writable books for authors and adventurists. I then had enough money to live in the middle ring and to join the BSS Government. By 50 I was a Minor Government Official trying to maintain the economy and crime fluctuations for BSS. I am currently 63 years old still trying to maintain order.
Desired Name: Pong LaoKoh
Desired Profession: Politician/Minor Government Official for Ba Sing Se. To be more specific about how the job works, it would focus on the Taxes for the city and seeing to the cites needs.
Desired City: Ba Sing Se. I already have a house made in Middle ring.
Appearance: Entire body tattooed so that body is pink and there are faces on every side of my head (RP and skin)
History: My parents were two non-benders who ran a small cult several miles outside the southern water tribe in a cave. Their cult believed that benders were inherently evil and were the cause of all problems. My parents punished me every time I firebent by burning me with a red-hot-Iron bar. By the time I was eight, my entire body had been deformed with burns and scars. I had had enough, I ran away the day after my eighth birthday and lived day by day hoping to find my next meal. That's when I found Jeong Jeong. Jeong Jeong treated me like a son, He loved me and taught me to harness my anger, making me into one of the most dangerous men in the world. I finished my training a hard eight years later. As a fully trained firebender, I returned to the southern water tribe and found my parents. When I returned, the cult had grown to about 100 members. I killed every man and woman in that cave in cold blood, almost everybody. There was a 7 year old boy there who I couldn't bear to kill, he was only 7, there was no way he would continue the anti-bending movement. I never saw him again. I then tattooed every inch of my body to hide the burns, and tattooed my face onto every side of my head to make sure my enemies knew I was always watching
Desired name: Pyrosis
Desired profession: either teacher or merchant at times of peace. At times of war, special ops soldier
IGN: NEBST3R
Desired Nation:AIR NOMADS
Appearance: http://www.minecraftskins.com/skin/82076/young-air-nomad-3/
Brief History: Mang grew up like most other young air benders, training as well as having fun around the temple. Mang was exceptionally gifted at air bending and earned his tattoos early on and earning the title of master air bender. Now that he has achieved this title, he has gained the right to travel the world and find out what life is like outside the air temples.
Desired Name:Mang
Desired Profession: Traveler
Desired City:Northern Air Temple
Aronto-Suddenly air bender in fire capital? The history needs a really good rewrite. The rest looks good. For the record, only women live at the WAT and EAT.
Hey man, I did specify that it was an air nomad ambassador. I mean there has got to be some of those in existence right? And wouldn't it be possible for said ambassador to settle down in a respective city to ease further communication between the two nations? I don't plan on being a revenge seeking air ninja assassin or something like that. I'm just a simple guy good with politics wanting to follow in his father's footsteps. I don't think my brief history of having one the son of an air nomad ambassador in the fire nation has been broken that much out of the context of such an complex and lively world that is the four nations. If absolutely necessarily I can create a more vanilla air nomad history, but I would personally like a more interesting story to my RP character. On the matter of the air temple, i do agree, and I would be happy to settle down in the NAT. I would like to hear your thoughts about the brief history part. Thank you!
IGN: Aronto
Nation: Air Nomads
Appearance. Airbender skin with the orange robes, and gray pants. Similair to what Aang was wearing in the end of the ATLA series.
Just in case you dont agree, here is a more normal air nomad story:
Reworked Brief History: Aronto was born to two loving parents at the Northern Air Temple. Ever since he was young Aronto showed a knack of easily making friends from all walks of life. As he grew older Aronto's dreams grew with him. He longed to travel to the other 3 nations, to create more harmony between the nations. Once he gained his tattoos Aronto started to enter the field of politics to become a correspondent to the other nations on behalf of the Air Nomads.
posting this on behalf of wahoni, he says he has forum isues
My IGN: Wahoni Desired Nation: Earth Kingdom Appearance: Normal Earth Kingdom peasant Attire (green on yellow/brown on green) Dark hair and blue eyes (if this is going by skin, I have no idea what my ingame skin is since Wahoni is a joint account between me and my best friend, who doesn't play on the TLA server) I think my skin is of an old man with white hair, and brownish clothing.
History: Battered by a life of poverty under the fire nation, I traveled the world being protected only by my quick wit and earth bending. I'd like to say I got off scot-free but alas there were many casualties involved with my endeavors. Through a trail of darkness and blood and loss, I have made it to the lower ring of Ba Sing Se. I don't know what I hope to do yet, but maybe I can get a job as a salesperson.
Desired Name: Tojen li
Desired Profession: Store clerk or a farmer/farmhand in the lower ring.
Desired City: Ba Sing Se (or Omashu..Omashu needs some love)
IGN: _Sunburn_ Desired Nation: Fire Appearance: Fire nation soldier uniform Brief History: After finding out his bending ability, he joined the Fire Nation army and excelled due to his predisposition towards destruction. After an incident involving a bar, an Air Nomad, and expired tea, he was placed on leave for the time being. Desired Name: Zai Desired Profession: Soldier Desired City: Any in the Fire Nation
IGN: Ederek_Cole
Desired Nation: Air
Appearance: (both literally, as a skin, and in RP context) Eatzi has white hair which he has allowed to grow over his tattoos. His eyes are golden.
Brief History: Eatzi was born at the Eastern Air Temple and earned his tattoos at the exceptionally young age of thirteen. However, he rejected many beliefs of the Air Nomads, believing that their pacifistic nature would lead to their doom. To show his refusal of their ways, he allowed his hair to grow out over the tattoo on his forehead. He has as of yet refused to leave the temple, though, believing that if it were to ever come under attack, he would have to be the one to protect it.
Desired Name: Eatzi
Desired Profession: Air Monk
Desired City: Eastern Air Temple
the EAT is for women, and that's a very weak story. Try to come up with a real airbender persona.
IGN: lil_Azn905 DesiredNation: Water Appearance:A Northern Water Bending warrior (as seen in Siege of the North part 2) BriefHistory: ever since the fire nation invaded our base, Rice had more hatred for them, ever since the invasion he is force to travel around the world to seek who killed his parents. DesiredName: Rice DesiredProfession: Water bending warrior DesiredCity: North water tribe
IGN:Snipper303 DesiredNation:earth Appearance: [url="http://i.imgur.com/3B86E.png"]http://i.imgur.com/3B86E.png[/url] DesiredName:Colonel Kyrimoto Satchuka BriefHistory:Born into a middle class family, in the middle ring, Kyrimoto lived a relatively normal life, until he was drafted into the Earth nation reserve forces. Kyrimoto soon applied for an OC (officer canidate) training school, where he could rise to true greatness. It took him many long years of work, and months of subtle political maneuverings, but finally he was put in charge of a company operating as a final defensive force in the unlikely event that Ba Sing Se was attacked. It was a cushy job and it came with a nice boost in rank, but everything changed when the fire nation attacked. The Regimental royal guard commander was killed in the military coup that followed the defeat of the Avatar, in the crystal catacombs beneath the palace. Kyrimoto was promoted to Regimental commander of the Earth Kingdom royal guard. In the months following the expulsion of the fire nation from the earth kingdom, kyrimoto has found that his life has become much easier. And the col.'s pay and following pension aren't bad either. DesiredProfession: Regimental commander of the Earth kingdom royal guard (Note regimental commander's aren't too high up. i will be in hypothetical command of like 200 troops. DesiredCity: Ba Sing Se
IGN: fluffibunnii
Desired Nation: FIre Nation
Appearance: Skin: girl in a firebending toga
Brief History: Katye was abandoned at the water tribe by her parents as an infant. Fortunately a native to the water tribe found her and took her in to take care of her. Because she was a firebender and she was left inside of a water tribe, she had to hide her bending skills or she would be exiled. Katye secretly taught herself most of her firebending techniques, but she also learned from watching competitors in the ultimate bending tournaments. Katye and her foster parent were soon exiled from the Water Tribe because the tribe found out Katye's bending abilities were not waterbending. Currently she works as a deliverer/protector of the fire nation and lives off of food leftover from people.
Desired Name: Katye
Desired Profession: Protector/Deliverer of the Fire Nation
Desired City: Fire Nation Capitol
your story makes no sense, neither does your profession. suggesting rewrite.
IGN: heysteve112
Desired Nation: Earth
Appearance: Lighter skinned, Dark green tunic and pants with light brown hair. Bright white belt, a gift from his grandfather, a former soldier and farmer. Dark brown boots.
Brief History: A native resident of Omashu, he worked with the shipping lanes from an early age until he was 19. He moved to Ba Sing Se to help a childhood friend set up a farm, then, accustomed to farm life he has
stayed in that trade, hoping to expand his farm to help anyone who was affected by the war as a philanthropist. He enjoys tea, having visited Iroh's shop while he was in the city, and improving his bending as hobbies.
Desired Name: Jaiden
Desired Profession: Farmer
Desired City: Ba Sing Se
Appearance: athletic body(like a **** Grayson) short brown hair spiked to the
Side 6"2 big strong jaw like Matt Smith. Green eyes.
Brief History: Bao grew up on a farm. He had an obsession with fire from
A young age. At age 7 he accidentally burned down a portion of the farm,
obtaining him the nickname flint. He also acquired a burn on his leg from this event
He grew up just him and his dad, his mother felt like she could not raise a
Child because she was irresponsible. He ran away from home at age 15, he traveled all around
The world after he ran away. He joined a circus at
Age 17(2 years after he ran away) and he was a
Acrobatic(walked tightrope, jumped through flaming hoops etc.).
He settled in Mommas with interests from learning
From the great King Bumi. A year later he found out his dad died.
When he found out, he became Stricken with a desire for vengeance,
and became a vigilante type trying to rid the world of all scum, King Bumi found out
And declared that he would teach him only if he would stop and let the police handle crime. Bao stopped and learned many new techniques from Bumi. He took this knowledge and
Decided it would be best to share it, so he is now a earth bending teacher in
Omashu, where he has taught many. He is a bold, hot headed, and strict earth bending teacher
Desired Name: Boo-Zhi/Flint (often called Flint because of his obsession with fire)
Desired Profession: Earth bending teacher in Omashu
Desired City: Omashu can I please have that same house
reccomending a rewrite due to Bumi being in the story and it just jumping around a lot. Also fire obsessed earthbender? wut?
Appearance: (both literally, as a skin, and in RP context) 21 years old, Medium length brown hair and blue eyes, wearing clothes like Bolins
Brief History: Born from a family of Earth and Waterbenders in Ba Sing Se, Bachu showed great promise as an Earthbender from a young age and was soon noticed by the Long Feng and his Dai Li.
When Bachu was 14 Long Feng came to recruit the young Earthbender but his parents refused to hand Bachu to the Dai li. During the night Dai Li agents returned to house to capture the family and bring them to Lake Laoga and brainwash them. Bachu manged to escape while his family are captured. He manages to avoid the Dai Li for weeks and when he eventually returns home he finds his family have no memory of who he is. He decides its best for his and his familys safety to leave Ba Sing Se once and for all. Years have past, he is now 21 and living in Omashu. Though he misses his former life he is still a happy person who always tries to look on the bright side of things.
Desired Name: Bachu Wulong
Desired Profession: Miner/Merchant, selling anything he can scavenge
IGN:SwiftWolf4
Desired Nation: Water
Appearance: In real life? I'm kind of short with brown hair and green eyes. My skin is Amon's outfit. If needed I shall change my skin.
Brief History:Both parents killed by the Dai Li in an invasion on the village in which they took residence at the time. Managed to escape with a small group of his tribe, where he soon discovered he was a waterbender. Other members of his tribe taught him the art and helped him become a novice.
Desired Name:Nilak
Desired Profession:Waterbending Master/ Mercenary
Desired City:Southern Water Tribe
no amon skin, and the dai li stayed in BSS, they werent like the miltary.
IGN: therealkaddy
Desired Nation: water tribe
Appearance: (standered water bender, white, blue water tribe coat)
Brief History: Kadak was a strong water bender. Though he did not learn water bending as quickly as others, he mastered it
far greater than anyone in his age group and showed his true potential at only age 15
Desired Name: Kadak
Desired Profession: Political figure
Desired City: Northern Water tribe
story is very weak, needs rewrite or major expansion. How did he come into politics?
IGN: CreeperNight54 DesiredNation: Fire Kingdom Appearance: Jake the dog from adventure time, i look the same way in RP except for some ragged clothes (leather armor). BriefHistory: Once in the royal fire naval army he now works as a blacksmith for the fire kingdom military secretly learning how to put his bending to work under the alert of the guards that roam the streets he has lived a life of violence, betrayal and secrecy. And now works as the personal assassin for the firelord himself. DesiredName:Lee DesiredProfession:Assassin DesiredCity: Fire nation capitol
we were with you right up until you started talking about being the firelords assassin. if you'd stopped at blacksmith, you'd have been fine.
IGN:themayorofdogs Desired Nation: FireNation
Appearance: Charismatic Teen girl, fit but not muscular. Clever, skilled, and tall.Wears a red suit.
Brief History: Mai, born in fire nation, was born in a very rich family. She always wanted to explore the world, but never had the chance to. She has been trained by Uncle Zuko and Aunt May.After one of her training sessions, it seemed that her family was killed by the Kayin Clan (assassins). She grew mad, she ran off and never returned to Fire City and vowed that she would never come back until she has avenged her family. She grew stronger and stronger, learned every single skill a firebender could ever know and avenged her family. Desired Name: Mai Desired profession: Skilled Firebender and Fire Nations Sister Princess Desired City: Travels but homettown is Fire Nation
no series chars, and mai wasnt a firebender anyway.
IGN:totushek
Desired Nation:Earth
Appearance: Wears A leather tunic and green cloth trousers with belted boots and has brown hair
Brief History:Darius Was born into a rich family, he went to school in Ba sing sei. His father was a Warrior But Darius did not want to do that as he grew he noticed that he was a great barter, when he was trading he noticed he became very welthy later Darius opened a shop and sold items at low prices.
Desired Name:Darius
Desired Profession:merchant
Desired City:Ba sing sei
If I did somthing wrong tell me and Ill fix it and hope to see you soon!
story is a bit weak, rich people arent normally warriors.
Appearance: An Earth Kingdom teenager who wears formal/modern Earth Kingdom attire. He is around 16/17 yrs old and has light brown spiked hair and an athletic build.
History: Raiko is was just a small boy when the underground Fire Nation society murdered his father and left him and his mother alone. His father was a well renowned and wealthy merchant from Ba Sing Se and his mother was and earthbender immigrant from the village of Makapu. They fell in love after they met at a banquet at the Earth King's Palace and soon Raiko was born.
Raiko inherited his mother's earthbending abilities and trained with her long and hard as a boy. Then his father was killed, his mother tried to support them by getting work wherever she could but because the Earth Kingdom army wouldn't recruit a woman they soon grew more poor and Raiko grew up in poverty. When Raiko was 15 he started again to train in earthbending and used his bending to support him and his mother in anyway he can. (Which wasn't always honest) His one goal was to find the man who killed his father and avenge him.
Now after becoming a somewhat experienced bender and duelist he has gotten a reputation and moved his mother and him out of the slums into a decent house in the middle ring. But Raiko still has not dealt with his demons and has a burning rage for the Fire Nation. He might one day become a high ranking soldier in the Earth Kingdom Army. (Sorry I know it's long but I think it's cool to have a detailed back story)
Desired Name: (Raiko) Street Name/Nickname : Solid
Desired Profession: High ranking military leader in Ba Sing Se
Desired City: Ba Sing Se
it's a good story, but fire nation secret society?
IGN: ThePIlotGuy
------------------------------------ Desired Nation: Air Nomads
------------------------------------ Appearance:(both literally, as a skin, and in RP context): A picture is better than text, no? [url="http://www.minecraft...356/aang/"]http://www.minecraft...356/aang/[/url][/url] | Beard, lighter skin, typical air nomad/air monk clothes.
------------------------------------ Brief History: He was born in the Southern air temple. He spent many years there, learning to connect with his spiritual self. He hadn't mastered airbending during that time, but had become very knowledgeable in things pertaining to spirits and spirituality. He even entered the spirit world once. . However, he does know basic forms of airbending. When he was 16, he left the southern air temple to travel the world. He visited many places and learned much about the world's people and cultures. Now, he is about to start his training to become an airbending master...
------------------------------------ Desired Name: Jingi
------------------------------------ Desired Profession: Air Bending , Traveling Monk
------------------------------------ Desired City: Southern Air Temple
IGN: 43433
Nation: Earth Kingdom
Appearance: My character wears a black robe kind of like Sifu Piandao's
History: Piandao is a hardworking miner who's goal in life is to make money from mining and one day teach people the wonderful art of earthbending in his very own school.
Name: Piandao
Profession: Miner/teacher
City: Any Earth kingdom City or Republic city
IGN: ConradRasque
Desired Nation: Earth
Appearance: Average middle class Earth Bending clothes with a green headband.
Brief History: From a very early age, I have been able to bend Earth. I have excelled very quickly in my training always giving my max. I have hoped to join the military like my father, who gloriously gave his life to protect the sanctity of the great Ba Sing Sae. I wish the avenge his death from those awful and putrid firebender warriors. They will rue the day they opened siege, long ago, agaisnt the Earth Kingdom.
Desired Name: Sa Yom
Desired Profession: Training to be an amazing soldier
Desired City: Ba Sing Sae
Appearance: athletic body(like a **** Grayson) short brown hair spiked to the
Side 6"2 big strong jaw like Matt Smith. Green eyes. 33 years old. Skin looks like Bolin with many additions to it.
Brief History: Bao grew up on a farm.
He grew up just him and his dad, He had a lonesome childhood being an only child with no kids in his area to befriend. At age 15, he decided to embark on a adventure to meet people and see the world, so he ran away from home. Bao traveled all around
the world after he ran away, He even joined a circus at
Age 17(2 years after he ran away) and there he became an
Acrobatic(walked tightrope, jumped through flaming hoops etc.
A year later he left the circus with much experience and a desire
for a place to settle and start a life, after traveling all around the earth kingdom,
he settled in Omashu. There Bao met a earth bending master and decided he
would learn to harness his skills. A year later he found out his dad was killed by bandits.
When he found out, he became Stricken with a desire for vengeance,
and became a vigilante type trying to rid the world of all scum,
his earth bending master found out
And declared that he would stop teaching him unless he stopped
and let the police handle crime. Bao immediately accepted and learned
many new techniques and skills. He took this knowledge and
Decided it would be best to share it, so he became an earth bending teacher in
Omashu, where he has taught many. He is a bold, hot headed, and strict earth bending teacher.
Desired Name: Bao-Zhi
Desired Profession: Earth bending teacher in Omashu
Desired City: Omashu can I please have that same house
IGN: ne_L
Desired Nation: water
Appearance: (both literally, as a skin, and in RP context) I am sexy. My skin is very bad
Brief History: I had the time of my life when I was a young fire bender but then amon took my bending then korra poked in a new one for me
Desired Name: Prince_Vegeta
Desired Profession: pro bender
Desired City:ba sing se
IGN:SwiftWolf4
Desired Nation: Water
Appearance: In real life? I'm kind of short with brown hair and green eyes. My skin is a Southern Water Tribe citizen in a Water Tribe Robe.
Brief History:Both parents killed by a bloodbender, who turned on the entire tribe and managed to wipe out 98% of them. Managed to escape with a small group of his tribe, where he soon discovered he was a waterbender. Other members of his tribe taught him the art and helped him become a novice.
Desired Name:Nilak
Desired Profession:Waterbending Master/ Mercenary
Desired City:Southern Water Tribe
IGN: Nectar_Ooktok
Desired Nation: Air west
Appearance: brown hair blue eyes, Air nomad attire
Brief History: Mother of fire nation, Father of Earth Kingdom. Mother has Ancestors from all 4 nations. siblings of Fire, Earth, and Water decent. sent to train with Jinora's son.
Desired Name: Nectar Ooktok (just call me Nectar)
Desired Profession: Builder (when needed)/ Nomad/ Explorer
Desired City: Western or Northern Air temple
very short, and jinora isnt alive, nor is any of her family.
IGN: golieman46
Desired Nation: fire
Appearance: That of an earth nation store owner. Mid 40's. Beard and no hat. blonde hair. Green aparel
Brief History: A fire nation man who didn't like what Sozen was doing and who wanted to settle somewhere else, he owns a successful business and has a house in the middle ring, he sold luxury furniture. He now has intentions of traveling the world and his son now manages his shop. Still knows fire bending and practices it in secret for fear of being imprisoned or killed by the Dia Li from the rising tensions between the nations.
Desired Name: Mansu
Desired Profession: Traveler/ store owner
Desired City: Ba sing Se
Appearance: Firebender knight armor, silverish-grey, red stripes and eyes.
Brief History: Manto was born in the Fire Nation Capitol many years after the hundred year war ended. He greq up with a very proficent skill of firebending unlike his family, but he does not wish to hurt people with it and attempts to make it more liked even though fire is considered a destructive element. He was raised by a very caring family but does not wish to stay at his home as he seeks the thrills of adventure and battle. At the age of 22, He sets off on a journey around the world to the many great nations learning new ways and making many friends along the way.
Desired Name: Manto
Desired Profession: Explorer/mercenary
Desired City: Fire Nation Capitol
dont quite see where mercenary mixes with guy wanting to spread how firebending isnt all bad, but approved
IGN: BriarMcfly Desired Nation: Fire Nation Appearance: He has a scar on his left arm and wears the red fire nation robes with a headband. he also has a necklace from his mother. Brief History: He was taking care of by his mother. His father never liked him, he always hit him and said he was useless then one day his dad saw him training, he could bend! his dad took him in and trained him for one reason to kill the fire lord and take over but he found out a night before he, didn't agree to it and tried to run back home but his dad shot him and he gave him a scar one his left arm he fought his dad and beat him but when he returned home he saw his mother dead on the floor the fire lord found out about the boys dads plan and killed his wife the boy cried and left the fire nation and now he has returned at the age of 23 to strike revenge on the fire lord and join the fire nation again but to meet the fire lord he has a task to hunt down a water bender and bring him back to the fire nation alive for the fire lord. Desired Name: Kako Desired Profession: fire nation solider (for now) Desired City: Fire Nation capital There is my new one.
history is unoriginal at best, and downright bad at other times. needs a rewrite. a fire nation assassin revenge plot family abuse set up? it just doesnt make sense.
Been following this server on Reddit, glad it's getting a Whitelist to encourage RP.
IGN: mechadude
Desired Nation: Air Nomads
Appearance: Working on finding an in-game skin, but in character: White skin, shaven hair with no arrow tattoo yet, wearing wearing a robe of traditional colors. No facial hair.
Brief History: Trevor was raised in the Southern Air Temple. At the age of 16, he became fascinated by the world outside the temple and it's nearby mountains, and Airbending other than what he'd be taught. He soon stowed away in a vessel bound for the Earth Kingdom. He's not a master of bending, and never finished his training, but now he travels the world, primarily the Earth Kingdom. He soon began to understand the true reason he left: Trevor wanted to discover and learn Airbending on his own. He's now 18, and continues to travel, slowly discovering what it truly means to be an Airbender.
Desired Name: Trevor
Desired Profession: Apprentice and traveler, helping out with work when he stops in towns and needs money.
Desired City: Nomadic, if possible. Resting and Inns or his camp.. (If necessary: Southern Air Temple.)
If I get whitelisted, I might need to have my Bending changed, last time I was on when it was public I set it to Water to test it out. I just need to speak to a mod getting that sorted out, right?
IGN:BRUTUSandBALZACK
Desired Nation: Air
Appearance: Quiet monk with vivid blue eyes. Very solitary and travels the world. Does not speak much but attempts to help as many people possible.
Brief History: Abandoned as a child by his nomadic airbending parents. He moved into the northern air temple and trained to be a hero. He fights cunningly and swiftly, not afraid to hold anything back. He will show restraint when killing but will not run away from a fight.
Desired Name: Zellus
Desired Profession: Nomadic Monk
Desired City: Northern air temple
airbenders would never abandon a child, and dont seek glory.
IGN: Master_Bolin
Desired Nation: Water tribe
Appearence: (both literally, as a skin, and in rp context) Normal water tribe outfit. Wears a light blue parka with navy blue gloves and pants and gray boots.
Brief History: After watching both his parents be killed by fire benders, Naartok ran away from his home at the southern water tribe to start a new life at the northern tribe. He wants to find a water bending master to teach him so that he can protect himself and the ones he loves if the fire nation were to attack again.
Desired Name: Naartok
Desired Profession: Water bender in training/ soldier for NWT
Desired city: Northern water tribe
IGN: AnthoManeR Desired Nation: Water Tribe Appearance: A water tribe member in generic blue wardrobe, fitting for cold weather. Also, has somewhat long brown hair, darker skin, and blue eyes. In short, your average waterbending citizen. Brief History: Growing up in the Northern Water Tribe, like any other Water Tribe boy, Ralikk was taught how to waterbend. His mom, Kanta, and dad Akkota, were both Waterbending teachers, and they wanted Ralikk to carry on their legacy after their time had come. His mom passed away when Ralikk was 12, and dad when Ralikk was 15. Ralikk grew up, a respectable man, teaching other children how to Waterbend. Ralikk is now 29, and is still going strong. Desired Name: Ralikk Desired Profession: Waterbending instructor Desired City: Northern Water Tribe
IGN: Alansine
Desired Nation: Earth
Appearance: Light brown hair, brown eyes, average height and build, though earth bending has bulked him up a bit.
Brief History: Father wanted him (me), a 17 year old male earth bender, to go into the family business, but neglected his (my) passion for earth bending and disapproved, as the father thought bending was too dangerous. He (I) trained in secret while the fire nation raided the father's workplace, taking him,hopefully, as a prisoner. He (I) now is sharpening his bending skills by travelling the world before retaliating against the fire nation, if not only for blind vengeance.
Desired Name: Moku Fong
Desired Profession: Earthbending student
Desired City: Wandering/nomadic, though home is in Omashu
the fire nation isnt at war with anyone, so they wouldnt steal his dad.
IGN: GreyWolfie
Desired Nation: Air Nation
Appearance: Green mask with a green outfit
Brief History: Always being the guru type, Jayce forsaw the demise of the air nomads. Attempting to push his leaders at the western air temple to move into hiding, Jayce was surprisingly rejected regardless of his past success in predicting the future. Sadly, Jayce was right, but although his people were destroyed, he survived to see another day. He continues to travel, adopting an earthern style of clothing to hide his true airbending talents. He always seeks out and researchs herbal medicines hoping one day he'll become a great herbal healer. He envies the Avatar for having all 4 bending elements as they can unlock the fullest potential of all bending.
Desired Name: Jayce
Desired Profession: Master/Mentor/Healer
Desired City: Nomadic
there are no males at the WAT. also, the nomads were never killed of. suggesting rewrite.
IGN:chasenitram DesiredNation:Fire nation Appearance:Skin and rp description match (Made the skin myself). Short brown hair, gray eyes with a tinge of blue, slightly disheveled red fire-nation coat over brown pants/boots BriefHistory: Bohai Liu was born 18 years ago in the fire nation. With no male heirs in their family, Bohai's mother and father made the decision to raise her as a man, and not a woman, to get her a better firebending education, and to have an heir for their small family business (book vendors). She still hides this fact, though difficult, and runs the family business of their bookstore. Because of her high responsibilities, Bohai has never practiced her bending and is very clumsy with it, almost always setting herself on fire. In order to make a name for her small family bookstore, and learn more about her abilities, Bohai sets off to various big cities (Fire nation capital, Ba sing se, North water tribe) in search of knowledge and fortune. DesiredName: Bohai Liú DesiredProfession: Roaming Student/bookkeeper DesiredCity: Fire nation capital
is the female as male thing reall neccessary? it adds nothing to the story.
IGN:Witchitaw
Desired Nation:Water
Appearance: (both literally, as a skin, and in RP context)Earthbender Girl With mud-colored hair and moss-green eyes, Yal has adopted the simple dress of the female Earth Kingdom villagers close to the swamp (until I can find a female swampbender skin...).
Brief History: It takes a village to raise a child, and that child was Yal. Everyone in Foggy Swamp was her relative in some way or another, whether through blood or just tribal bond, and young Yal grew up as one of the unique waterbenders that her tribe produced. As an adult, Yal was relatively happy with her slice of life in the swamp, wandering its roots to find useful herbs and building materials so her family could survive. It was only after the Avatar rediscovered her tribe and recruited her cousins to fight in a far-off war that she realized that there was much more out there than what she had known. Yal has resolved to wander abroad when she can (which is quite often, considering how lax her tribe is), curious to see if it's really possible there are places that the swamps roots don't reach.
Desired Name: Yal
Desired Profession: Herbalist/Gardener/Student
Desired City: Foggy Swamp / Jang Hui
IGN:manason
Desired Nation:Water
Appearance: a tan handsome young man, with a more modern water bending robe. Black hair is covered by my hood most of the time however it falls over one eye.
Brief History: Born to the northern water tribe, Kalen had a highly skilled father, who was one of the best water benders in the tribe. Kalen grew up with high expectations placed upon him, everything had to be done exactly right. Because of this Kalen became disciplined and patient. When his father deemed Kalen skilled enough in water bending, he sent him on his own to find his own path. Kalen currently travels the world, seeking to become the greatest Water Bender ever known.
Desired Name: Kalen
Desired Profession: Student/Advernturer
Desired City: Northern water tribe
IGN: panicoj
Desired Nation: Water
Appearance: A tan, tall man who enjoys wearing his father's robe, Blonde slightly long hair, scar across left eye.
Brief History: As a child, my father tried to teach me Bloodbending, but I refused and ran away. I renamed myself Karren. I taught myself the basics of waterbending, but with still very much to learn. Though skilled in the art of waterbending, he lacks patience- the key to waterbending. And at night, he tried not to admit to himself that... he was a master of Bloodbending.
Desired Name: Karren
Desired Profession: Adventurer
Desired City: Republic City
there is no bloodbending, and no republic city. needs a rewrite.
IGN: manix_champ1on DesiredNation: Earth Kingdom Appearance: normal earth kingdom outfit. dark green coat, a large belt, light green pants, and a pony tail BriefHistory: I was a guard in my home town. When my village was overrun by Fire Nation troops, I was able to escape with a few survivors. I now live in Omashu as a hired body guard or soldier. DesiredName:Sung Tai DesiredProfession: mercenary DesiredCity: Omashu
history is a bit weak, try expanding it or something.
IGN: Reflax355 DesiredNation: Fire nation Appearance:Dark skin but is coverd i a hood and does not show his face to anyone, brown eyes and black hair. Wears simple leather armor. BriefHistory: I am a man in my young years, i have left home to look to somewhere new to live and im also looking for a job. Im trying to get in the fire nation army so the capital would be a good place to look, but a soldier i knew said i need more disipline to get in there. starting with actually showing my face. I am a self trained fire bender that is not afraid to use my bending for self defense or offense. DesiredName: Wyrus DesiredProfession: Looking for a job, hopefuly soldier or mercenary. DesiredCity: Fire nation capital
Okay...so a rewrite. I've changed quite a bit of it, but if there's still an issue, let me know.
IGN: Ederek_Cole
Desired Nation: Air Nomads
Appearance, RP context: Eatzi is young--only in his mid-twenties--but his face is scarred by the stress of his history. His eyes seem to wander beyond what he is looking at, and he almost never smiles. His hair has grown out over his tattoos. Skin:
Brief History: Eatzi was born at the Southern Air Temple, and raised there as a normal Air Nomad child. As a child, he was constantly asking questions about the natural world--how fish breathed underwater, how the Sky Bison flew, how mountains were formed--and through his curiosity, came to care deeply for the land and its children. Eatzi also excelled at airbending, earning his tattoos at the exceptionally young age of thirteen. His eagerness to learn so much whilst being so talented concerned the monks for a time, but they did not see reason to take action.
Then, on a trip with his family to the city of Omashu to visit friends of his parents, the caravan was accosted by firebending raiders, and his parents were killed. Eatzi went to the monks of the Southern Air Temple and begged them to take action, but they refused, noting that they were not a people of violence and would not seek retribution. Eatzi, distraught and confused, fled to Kyoshi Island and hid there, wanting nothing more than to seek out those raiders and get vengeance.
However, while on the island, he studied the native Kyoshi Warriors, and from them decided that when one has strength, one must use that strength to help others. He stayed on the island, and has made it his duty to help wayward Airbenders learn airbending.
IGN: pepis3
Desired Nation: Earth Kingdom
Appearance: The green Earth Kingdom Dai Li uniform.
Brief History: Shu discovered he would be part of the Dia Li when he was a young age. After a few years he started his training to become the elite police of Ba Sign Se and help protect this great city. Shu became an expert Dai Li agent.
Desired Name: Shu
Desired Profession: Dai Li
Desired City: Ba Sing Se
I'm also on page 4 I checked and they got up to page 3 so hopefully we will be reviewed today or tomorrow
Drozzbear-It's good, a new name is required though, but no need to rewrite. Also, if you're from the Foggy Swamp, then wouldn't that be where you live?
dryadyamato-Needs a rewrite. Appearance has to fit your role in RP, needs a new name, and definitely a history rewrite.
ECAaxel-Looks good, no need to rewrite, but a new name will be required.
nittany1019-Earth King, no. Accepted under the second one. In the future you may possibly become the Earth King.
TheMegaWhopper-You will probably never be the avatar. I would advise against asking again, that being said, a new name, and perhaps a more in-depth story. Rewrite.
Albino_Yeti-First of all, it needs a new name. Second of all it goes us wondering why you said 'Wolf Skin uniform (SWT), and the warriors in Siege of the North (NWT Warriors), two completely different appearances. An expansion on history is also required. Rewrite.
charlie2411-It makes no sense how you were born during the war, even though they took out air benders first. You would be over a hundred years old. Rewrite.
DKWON-Great application! Whitelisted.
sammysalter-Finally a sand bender! Anyways, the name is good, we aren't using canon names anyways. Your history also needs to be expanded a little.
NEDST3R-Complete rewrite. You need a new name, also, only females lives at the WAT. A new skin that is not Tenzin also.
Vojdan-Looks good. Whitelisted.
Aronto-Suddenly air bender in fire capital? The history needs a really good rewrite. The rest looks good. For the record, only women live at the WAT and EAT.
Zeekco-Everything is good, but the history needs expanding.
dark78660-Looks good, whitelisted.
Survivorboy2001-You need a skin that fits your RP character. Also, the history needs to be redone, as well as the city. Rewrite.
DinosaurCat-Looks good, but it got me when you said you practiced at the forbidden spirit oasis, and also teaching yourself bending is near to impossible. Whitelisted.
lightblockman365-Whitelisted, on the terms you redo your appearance. It has to fit your RP character.
Sumarry, Accepted:
ECAaxel
nittany1019
DKWON
Vojdan
dark78660
DinosaurCat
lightblockman365
IGN: Frooz
Desired Nation: Air Nomad
Appearance: Traditional air nomad garb with tattoos and blonde stubble facial hair
Brief History: Born and raised in the Southern Air Temple, Matsumoto was a mischievous young air nomad who had a knack for running around and having fun, although he never let any of those things supersede his love for the art of bending. Now a 25-year-old man and master airbender, he is looking to find his place in the world by travelling across it, making friends and having fun along the way. Drawing inspiration from his friend Gyatso, Matsumoto is wise for his age, but also quite the wise cracker. He is one that all love to be around, although he can also be serious when the occasion calls for seriousness.
Desired Name: Matsumoto
Desired Profession: Monk/Traveling Nomad/Messenger
Desired City: Southern Air Temple (wanted to do Western, but I read above that only women live at WAT and EAT)
Desired Nation: Air Nomads
Appearance: Black Monk attire with diamond and gold armor.
Brief History: As a child he used to marvel at the stars and wondered what the rest of the world was like. After his intensive training and becoming one of the worlds youngest Air Bending masters at the age of 18, he went to go explore the rest of the world hoping to find lives answers for him. Upon his explorations he realized how corrupt the world really was and decided to try and cleanse the world. After numerous failings at stopping crime he realized he couldn't get rid of the worlds corruption and in trying to help get rid of the corruption, he corrupted himself and is now a traveling mercenary, out to help the weak and punish the wicked and do whatever the job requires.
Desired Name: Azielio
Desired Profession: Air bending Mercenary
Desired City: Ba Sing Se
Desired Nation: Water Tribe
Appearance: Tan skin, Traditional water tribe blue/white coat and outfit
Brief History: Silas was born and raised in the Southern Water Tribe, but always dreamed of travelling the world once he was older and visiting all of the 4 Nations and mastering waterbending. He always lived a rather normal life and always got along with others. He has a great personality and was always charming with the ladies. He had a water ending tutor in the southern water tribe, but he was never really able to fully grasp waterbending and hopes to find a new master during his travels. Silas is also a bit of a romantic and hopes to meet his future wife during his travels
Desired Name: Silas
Desired Profession: Traveler/Amateur Waterbender
Desired City: Southern Water
Fixed
Desired Nation: Earth Kingdom
Appearance: (both literally, as a skin, and in RP context)
I have the apperence of an old earth kingdom man with a Fu Manchu mustache wearing a earth kingdom tunic. I am 63 years old with white/gray hair.
Brief History: I have worked my way up from the crime infested streets of the lower ring of BSS where I was born, to the high rise of the Upper Ring where I work. When I was a boy my parents were extorted and executed by a duelist. This occurrence made me want to bring down crime within the walls. From the age of 14 to my humble year of 30 I made my living making writable books for authors and adventurists. I then had enough money to live in the middle ring and to join the BSS Government. By 50 I was a Minor Government Official trying to maintain the economy and crime fluctuations for BSS. I am currently 63 years old still trying to maintain order.
Desired Name: Pong LaoKoh
Desired Profession: Politician/Minor Government Official for Ba Sing Se. To be more specific about how the job works, it would focus on the Taxes for the city and seeing to the cites needs.
Desired City: Ba Sing Se. I already have a house made in Middle ring.
Nation: Fire
Appearance: Entire body tattooed so that body is pink and there are faces on every side of my head (RP and skin)
History: My parents were two non-benders who ran a small cult several miles outside the southern water tribe in a cave. Their cult believed that benders were inherently evil and were the cause of all problems. My parents punished me every time I firebent by burning me with a red-hot-Iron bar. By the time I was eight, my entire body had been deformed with burns and scars. I had had enough, I ran away the day after my eighth birthday and lived day by day hoping to find my next meal. That's when I found Jeong Jeong. Jeong Jeong treated me like a son, He loved me and taught me to harness my anger, making me into one of the most dangerous men in the world. I finished my training a hard eight years later. As a fully trained firebender, I returned to the southern water tribe and found my parents. When I returned, the cult had grown to about 100 members. I killed every man and woman in that cave in cold blood, almost everybody. There was a 7 year old boy there who I couldn't bear to kill, he was only 7, there was no way he would continue the anti-bending movement. I never saw him again. I then tattooed every inch of my body to hide the burns, and tattooed my face onto every side of my head to make sure my enemies knew I was always watching
Desired name: Pyrosis
Desired profession: either teacher or merchant at times of peace. At times of war, special ops soldier
Desired city: Fire nation capital
Desired Nation:AIR NOMADS
Appearance: http://www.minecraftskins.com/skin/82076/young-air-nomad-3/
Brief History: Mang grew up like most other young air benders, training as well as having fun around the temple. Mang was exceptionally gifted at air bending and earned his tattoos early on and earning the title of master air bender. Now that he has achieved this title, he has gained the right to travel the world and find out what life is like outside the air temples.
Desired Name:Mang
Desired Profession: Traveler
Desired City:Northern Air Temple
Hey man, I did specify that it was an air nomad ambassador. I mean there has got to be some of those in existence right? And wouldn't it be possible for said ambassador to settle down in a respective city to ease further communication between the two nations? I don't plan on being a revenge seeking air ninja assassin or something like that. I'm just a simple guy good with politics wanting to follow in his father's footsteps. I don't think my brief history of having one the son of an air nomad ambassador in the fire nation has been broken that much out of the context of such an complex and lively world that is the four nations. If absolutely necessarily I can create a more vanilla air nomad history, but I would personally like a more interesting story to my RP character. On the matter of the air temple, i do agree, and I would be happy to settle down in the NAT. I would like to hear your thoughts about the brief history part. Thank you!
IGN: Aronto
Nation: Air Nomads
Appearance. Airbender skin with the orange robes, and gray pants. Similair to what Aang was wearing in the end of the ATLA series.
Just in case you dont agree, here is a more normal air nomad story:
Reworked Brief History: Aronto was born to two loving parents at the Northern Air Temple. Ever since he was young Aronto showed a knack of easily making friends from all walks of life. As he grew older Aronto's dreams grew with him. He longed to travel to the other 3 nations, to create more harmony between the nations. Once he gained his tattoos Aronto started to enter the field of politics to become a correspondent to the other nations on behalf of the Air Nomads.
Desired Name: Aronto
Profession: Ambassador/Politician and/or Councilman
Desired City: Northern Air Temple
My IGN: Wahoni Desired Nation: Earth Kingdom Appearance: Normal Earth Kingdom peasant Attire (green on yellow/brown on green) Dark hair and blue eyes (if this is going by skin, I have no idea what my ingame skin is since Wahoni is a joint account between me and my best friend, who doesn't play on the TLA server) I think my skin is of an old man with white hair, and brownish clothing.
History: Battered by a life of poverty under the fire nation, I traveled the world being protected only by my quick wit and earth bending. I'd like to say I got off scot-free but alas there were many casualties involved with my endeavors. Through a trail of darkness and blood and loss, I have made it to the lower ring of Ba Sing Se. I don't know what I hope to do yet, but maybe I can get a job as a salesperson.
Desired Name: Tojen li
Desired Profession: Store clerk or a farmer/farmhand in the lower ring.
Desired City: Ba Sing Se (or Omashu..Omashu needs some love)
Desired Nation: Fire
Appearance: Fire nation soldier uniform
Brief History: After finding out his bending ability, he joined the Fire Nation army and excelled due to his predisposition towards destruction. After an incident involving a bar, an Air Nomad, and expired tea, he was placed on leave for the time being.
Desired Name: Zai
Desired Profession: Soldier
Desired City: Any in the Fire Nation
the EAT is for women, and that's a very weak story. Try to come up with a real airbender persona.
weak story, please expand on it.
accepted, hop on
your story makes no sense, neither does your profession. suggesting rewrite.
looks good to me, you're in
reccomending a rewrite due to Bumi being in the story and it just jumping around a lot. Also fire obsessed earthbender? wut?
k, accepted
no amon skin, and the dai li stayed in BSS, they werent like the miltary.
story is very weak, needs rewrite or major expansion. How did he come into politics?
we were with you right up until you started talking about being the firelords assassin. if you'd stopped at blacksmith, you'd have been fine.
no series chars, and mai wasnt a firebender anyway.
story is a bit weak, rich people arent normally warriors.
it's a good story, but fire nation secret society?
SAT is good
Nation: Earth Kingdom
Appearance: My character wears a black robe kind of like Sifu Piandao's
History: Piandao is a hardworking miner who's goal in life is to make money from mining and one day teach people the wonderful art of earthbending in his very own school.
Name: Piandao
Profession: Miner/teacher
City: Any Earth kingdom City or Republic city
Desired Nation: Earth
Appearance: Average middle class Earth Bending clothes with a green headband.
Brief History: From a very early age, I have been able to bend Earth. I have excelled very quickly in my training always giving my max. I have hoped to join the military like my father, who gloriously gave his life to protect the sanctity of the great Ba Sing Sae. I wish the avenge his death from those awful and putrid firebender warriors. They will rue the day they opened siege, long ago, agaisnt the Earth Kingdom.
Desired Name: Sa Yom
Desired Profession: Training to be an amazing soldier
Desired City: Ba Sing Sae
Desired Nation: Earth
Appearance: athletic body(like a **** Grayson) short brown hair spiked to the
Side 6"2 big strong jaw like Matt Smith. Green eyes. 33 years old. Skin looks like Bolin with many additions to it.
Brief History: Bao grew up on a farm.
He grew up just him and his dad, He had a lonesome childhood being an only child with no kids in his area to befriend. At age 15, he decided to embark on a adventure to meet people and see the world, so he ran away from home. Bao traveled all around
the world after he ran away, He even joined a circus at
Age 17(2 years after he ran away) and there he became an
Acrobatic(walked tightrope, jumped through flaming hoops etc.
A year later he left the circus with much experience and a desire
for a place to settle and start a life, after traveling all around the earth kingdom,
he settled in Omashu. There Bao met a earth bending master and decided he
would learn to harness his skills. A year later he found out his dad was killed by bandits.
When he found out, he became Stricken with a desire for vengeance,
and became a vigilante type trying to rid the world of all scum,
his earth bending master found out
And declared that he would stop teaching him unless he stopped
and let the police handle crime. Bao immediately accepted and learned
many new techniques and skills. He took this knowledge and
Decided it would be best to share it, so he became an earth bending teacher in
Omashu, where he has taught many. He is a bold, hot headed, and strict earth bending teacher.
Desired Name: Bao-Zhi
Desired Profession: Earth bending teacher in Omashu
Desired City: Omashu can I please have that same house
Desired Nation: water
Appearance: (both literally, as a skin, and in RP context) I am sexy. My skin is very bad
Brief History: I had the time of my life when I was a young fire bender but then amon took my bending then korra poked in a new one for me
Desired Name: Prince_Vegeta
Desired Profession: pro bender
Desired City:ba sing se
I fixed it
very short, and jinora isnt alive, nor is any of her family.
whitelisted
dont quite see where mercenary mixes with guy wanting to spread how firebending isnt all bad, but approved
history is unoriginal at best, and downright bad at other times. needs a rewrite. a fire nation assassin revenge plot family abuse set up? it just doesnt make sense.
whitelisted, but htink up a more "airbender" name
airbenders would never abandon a child, and dont seek glory.
whitelisted
whitelisted
the fire nation isnt at war with anyone, so they wouldnt steal his dad.
there are no males at the WAT. also, the nomads were never killed of. suggesting rewrite.
is the female as male thing reall neccessary? it adds nothing to the story.
whitwlisted
whitelisted
there is no bloodbending, and no republic city. needs a rewrite.
history is a bit weak, try expanding it or something.
whitelisted
IGN: Ederek_Cole
Desired Nation: Air Nomads
Appearance, RP context: Eatzi is young--only in his mid-twenties--but his face is scarred by the stress of his history. His eyes seem to wander beyond what he is looking at, and he almost never smiles. His hair has grown out over his tattoos. Skin:
Brief History: Eatzi was born at the Southern Air Temple, and raised there as a normal Air Nomad child. As a child, he was constantly asking questions about the natural world--how fish breathed underwater, how the Sky Bison flew, how mountains were formed--and through his curiosity, came to care deeply for the land and its children. Eatzi also excelled at airbending, earning his tattoos at the exceptionally young age of thirteen. His eagerness to learn so much whilst being so talented concerned the monks for a time, but they did not see reason to take action.
Then, on a trip with his family to the city of Omashu to visit friends of his parents, the caravan was accosted by firebending raiders, and his parents were killed. Eatzi went to the monks of the Southern Air Temple and begged them to take action, but they refused, noting that they were not a people of violence and would not seek retribution. Eatzi, distraught and confused, fled to Kyoshi Island and hid there, wanting nothing more than to seek out those raiders and get vengeance.
However, while on the island, he studied the native Kyoshi Warriors, and from them decided that when one has strength, one must use that strength to help others. He stayed on the island, and has made it his duty to help wayward Airbenders learn airbending.
Desired Name: Eatzi
Desired Profession: Airbending Tutor
Desired Location: Kyoshi Island